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    i don't know if mine fits the prompt but I guess I'll give it a go (Even though I have exams tomorrow)

    But let's do it anyways
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    Damn three whole page emerged out of thin air and a sheet already been made simply because Aster commented on something being a good idea
    My Servants and plans to make

    Also You wanna see my budget Servant formatting?

    thanks for the Visit!

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    Quote Originally Posted by NailsInYourFeet View Post
    Little disappointed that you didn't mention his connection with HRE generalissimo Albrecht von Wallenstein, since personally that was always something I found interesting about Kepler (admittedly I'm biased since I've been wanting to do a Wallenstein sheet myself, not sure if it'll be a Contest submission though).

    Really like that you referenced Somnium though, at least I think what's what the thing with the Moon Cell is alluding too
    Admittedly, I didn't actually know about the connection with von Wallenstein, or who Albrecht von Wallenstein is.

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    MoonCancer Kepler: I think the sheet needed more time for you to flesh it out. I have some idea of what the three laws probably entail, but you dedicate very little time to fleshing out a concept that seems essential to explain his absurd Noble Phantasm. The justification for his class is also a bit convoluted. I don't get how the Mystic Eyes came to be since you don't really delve into what Brahe's magecraft is and I don't see how observing the MoonCell allowed him to download stuff, or how it killed him, or how all of that translates into him being a MoonCancer.
    Also, basing 90% of the sheet on TM concepts unrelated to his historical self as your entry to the Historical Fact contest is a peculiar choice lol

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    Quote Originally Posted by pinetree View Post
    MoonCancer Kepler: I think the sheet needed more time for you to flesh it out. I have some idea of what the three laws probably entail, but you dedicate very little time to fleshing out a concept that seems essential to explain his absurd Noble Phantasm. The justification for his class is also a bit convoluted. I don't get how the Mystic Eyes came to be since you don't really delve into what Brahe's magecraft is and I don't see how observing the MoonCell allowed him to download stuff, or how it killed him, or how all of that translates into him being a MoonCancer.
    Also, basing 90% of the sheet on TM concepts unrelated to his historical self as your entry to the Historical Fact contest is a peculiar choice lol
    Makes sense. Since there still is time, I might adjust his lore to make it more understandable. Then, I'll post the updated and hopefully more understandable sheet.
    Last edited by MuramasaMachII; October 2nd, 2022 at 12:00 AM. Reason: Made response more detailed.

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    I'm awake, what's the--

    NOOOOOO HISTORICAL ACCURACY

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    Source: Bungou Stray Dogs

    Class: Caster
    Other Classes: N/A
    True Name: Yosano Akiko
    Alignment: True Neutral
    Place of Origin: Japan (19th Century)

    Parameters:

    STR: D
    END: D
    AGI: C
    MGI: B
    LCK: C
    NP: B

    Height: 191cm
    Weight: 120lbs
    Likes: Peace, equality, self-sufficiency
    Dislikes: Reliance, misogyny
    Talent: Writing poetry
    Natural Enemy: Oda Nobunaga, Altera
    Attribute: Man
    Traits: Female, Weak to Enuma Elish, Humanoid
    Armament: Midaregami
    Catalyst: A copy of Midaregami

    Class Skills:

    Territory Creation E: She is nigh-incapable of creating territories, so has a minimal rank.

    Item Creation E: She cannot create many items, so has a minimal rank.


    Personal Skills:

    Myojo B: "Morningstar". A magazine which became one of the guiding lights in her life, which she wrote a lot for. It manifests as a skill, permitting her to create bursts of light which trace a path for her to follow, and accentuate all of her attacks.

    The Day the Mountains Move B: The sublimation of one of her most famous poems. This permits her to reshape the earth, controlling it to send boulders rolling, create tripping hazards, sticking targets on top of hills or herself on top of them. Howeverm she can't reshape too much of it.

    High-Speed Poetry Writing C: She was an extremely prolific writer so gains this skill permitting her to cast her stuff far faster, regenerating her mana to remove her boundaries in casting.

    Noble Phantasm(s):

    Kimi Shinitamou Koto Nakare
    Thou Shall Not Die


    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: C
    Range: 1000 meters
    Max Targets: 1

    The sublimation of her most famous poem, Thou Shall Not Die, a plead to her brother to stop fighting and keep himself safe. When its true name is activated, a single target of her choice is safeguarded, appearing to be enwrapped in hair, for a short time from all dangers that it can. A noble phantasm born of a sister's wish to keep her brother alive.


    Midaregami
    Tangled Hair

    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: B
    Range: 10 meters
    Max Targets: 1

    The sublimation of her first poem anthology, Midaregami, a book consisting of telling the story of a woman whose hair is tangled in sin, but who manages to move forward without needing to untangle it. It manifests as her hair, which appears to grow endlessly with many tangles in it. When its true name is called, it enwraps a target, pulling it in to become merely a tangle in her hair.

    Lore: Yosano Akiko (1879-1942) was a Japanese poet, author, and notable feminist who is one of the most noted Japanese poets from that era. In her early life, she was locked in her house. When she began writing, she wrote extremely quickly, writing many poems in a single day. She is most noted for "Thou Shall Not Die", Midaregami, and The Day The Mountains Move.

    Personality: An elegant and serene person normally. She loves seeing figures from history to join her, though she dislikes those who were actively extremely warlike. She abhors those who want others to fight or die for them, which puts her at odds with most masters with the exception of those who fight in the front lines themselves or who joined the war by mistake.

    Relationships:

    Altera: "...Sword of the War God? What on earth?"

    Oda Nobunaga: "Your wars killed so many people, and yet you merely ignore that? How dare you?"

    Francis Drake: "Pirates? Interesting."

    Queen Himiko: "A queen who led her people into an enlightened age. How wonderful to meet you."

    Wu Zetian: "Your tactics may have been... cruel, but you built up an era of peace. How truly impressive."

    Okita Souji: "The shinsegumi were a truly interesting force."

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    This is the better version, I hope.(If this is even allowed)

    Since we astronomers are priests of the highest God in regards to the book of nature, it befits us to be thoughtful, not of the glory of our minds, but rather, above all else, the glory of God.

    Well then, Master, allow me to show you the music of the spheres.
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    ◂MoonCancer▸
    Of Astronomical Laws
    Johannes Kepler


    Class: MoonCancer
    Other Classes: -
    Alignment: Chaotic Good
    Origin: Germany, Historical Facts and Rumours
    Height/Weight: 192cm/79kg
    Attribute: Star
    ~~~~~~~~~
    Strength: D
    Endurance: B
    Agility: A+
    Mana: A++
    Luck: B+
    NP: EX
    ~~~~~~~~
    ~◂Extra Info▸~
    Likes: Astronomy, geometry, God
    Dislikes: Illness, political troubles, religious conflicts
    Natural Enemy: Tycho Brahe, Aristotle
    Catalyst: A sheet from the Epitome Astronomiae Copernicanae

    ~~~~~~~~

    Class Skills

    Territory Creation A

    MoonCancer can create both a workshop and an “Observatory”, which is superior to a basic workshop. It allows MoonCancer to also have more accurate astromancy Magecraft as well.

    Magic Resistance C

    A Skill common to many Classes. Although MoonCancer was alive after the Age of the Gods, his rank in this Skill was augmented by the Moon Cell after he observed it in his lifetime. Cancels spells with a chant below two verses.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    ~◂Personal Skills▸~Magecraft(Astromancy) A

    A Skill representing the capability of using Magecraft, in this case, Astromancy. MoonCancer mainly uses the heliocentric model, believing that the geocentric model is “utter nonsense.” He specialises in orbit-based spells, the application of music to Astromancy and the connection between souls and planets. MoonCancer’s effectiveness also increases while using a tuning fork to synchronise harmonies with specific planets and their orbits. His most common use is connecting his soul with one of the seven planets, and then creating a pseudo-celestial body in his hand as a projectile. Connecting to Mercury specifically increases the projectile’s speed, and MoonCancer’s agility drastically. MoonCancer likes to call this skill, and his personal brand of Astromancy “Harmonice Mundi” after one of his literary works.

    Mystic Eyes of Celestial Calculation EX

    The pinnacle of MoonCancer’s Magecraft, merged with his tutor’s Magecraft. This combination awakened MoonCancer’s personal magecraft with a designation of Mystic Eyes of Celestial Calculation. It allows MoonCancer to visualise astrophysical equations, and manipulate them on objects, specifically projectiles. This Magecraft is what allowed MoonCancer to develop his three laws of planetary motion. Furthermore, MoonCancer uses his Mystic Eyes often in combination with his Magecraft to decrease the “orbit period" and therefore, increase the “acceleration” of the projectiles he uses as weapons. This skill has also been significantly enhanced after MoonCancer accidentally observed the Moon Cell. MoonCancer’s most powerful technique, Musica Universalisis a result of combining this Skill and the concepts of all seven planets, therefore attaining the “music of the spheres.”

    Mysterium Cosmographicum B+

    The “Cosmographic Mystery.” MoonCancer’s first major astronomical work, which details God’s supposed geometric plan of the universe, and the conjunction of Jupiter and Saturn. As a Skill, this includes the Mystery-Slayer Skill and the Protection of Faith Skill at one rank lower, plus a conceptual advantage against Divine Spirits associated with the stars and space as a whole. Furthermore, while this Skill is active, MoonCancer’s magic resistance increases if he is facing an Astromancy-using enemy or an enemy who originates from the Moon Cell.

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    Lore
    MoonCancer’s True Name is Johannes Kepler, a German 17th century astronomer, mathematician, astrologer, natural philosopher and writer on music. One of the main figures of the Scientific, and creator of Kepler’s three laws of planetary motion. Yet, there is more to Kepler than just that. So much more. Kepler was not only all of those, but a magus as well, to be specific, a disciple of the magus Tycho Brahe. Tycho Brahe himself, being the last astronomer to observe the sky with the naked eye, had an Origin of 「Observing」, and thus he utilised magecraft focusing on the concept of “turning one’s eyes into observation mechanisms”, or as known in the modern day, “Telescopes.” He also had a similar type of magecraft to Kepler, but it focused on his personal magecraft foundation, the Tychonic system, instead. Therefore, when Tycho Brahe died, Kepler removed part of his Magic Crest, and transplanted it into himself, eventually awakening his Mystic Eyes. The whole entire reason why Kepler’s Mystic Eyes were awakened was the sheer compatibility between his Magecraft and Brahe’s. The only reason why Kepler could not perfectly use Brahe’s Magecraft is because of their disagreement on whether the Tychonic system or the heliocentric system was correct. But, the greatest event of his life is not even detailed in history books: his accidental observation of the Moon Cell. This event happened during the supernova of 1604. During this time, Kepler used a prototype of Musica Universalis combined with his Mystic Eyes and used it on the supernova. There, he saw something that could only be considered as “alien” and a “technological masterpiece”, not unlike looking upon the face of God: The Moon Cell. But Kepler went further than just seeing the Moon Cell, he observed it. And by observing the Moon Cell, for a singular moment, the light emitted from the photonic crystals hit his eyes. The light caused a fraction of data to synchronise with Kepler’s Mystic Eyes, which then got absorbed into him. There was only one truth Kepler learnt, though it was incredibly important: His laws of planetary motion were accurate. Although Kepler died in the year 1630, his soul was acknowledged by the Throne of Heroes, and he became a MoonCancer, specifically “one who threatens the Mystics of the planets and the stars.”

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    Noble Phantasm(s)
    "Now is the conjunction of the seven planets; the music of the spheres. My three laws are absolute. God is on my side───Epitome Astronomiae Keplerianae!"
    ~♬~


    Epitome Astronomiae Keplerianae
    Astronomical Laws of Planetary Motion


    Rank:EX
    Type:Anti-Planet/Anti-Mystery



    Johannes Kepler’s most well known achievement: his discovery of his three laws of planetary motion, and their associated equations. A Noble Phantasm which has been further evolved with the addition of Kepler’s magecraft and his knowledge gained from the Moon Cell. As a Noble Phantasm, it allows him, for a short period of time, to cause a conjunction of all seven planets, and use his laws to their fullest. On release of this Noble Phantasm’s True Name, the sky turns starry, and seven glowing orbs appear rotating around MoonCancer, before lining up into a straight line and merging into MoonCancer. As long as Epitome Astronomiae Keplerianae is active, MoonCancer has conceptually been designated as the “Sun”. Therefore, since Kepler’s second law states that “{t}he orbit of a planet is an ellipse with the Sun at one of the two foci”, everything around Kepler can rotate in an elliptical orbit, including a seven metre spherical range from where MoonCancer is standing. Inside the range, MoonCancer can either quicken or slow down the area’s “orbital period”, either making the area rotate extremely fast to the point where time passes by 0.5x faster, or doing the opposite and making everything in the area move 0.5x slower. Furthermore, since MoonCancer has become the “Sun”, he may summon one metal sphere at a time, each representing one of the other six planets with their own abilities. Though, like all Noble Phantasms, this one has its downsides, in this case, being four of them: 1. Only those in Kepler’s 7 metre range are affected. 2. The Noble Phantasm only lasts for five minutes, maximum. And, 3. If MoonCancer is damaged in the Heart, where the “Sun” is located, his Noble Phantasm automatically is cancelled and is no longer usable. Finally, if MoonCancer uses this skill too often, the Counter Force recognizes that his skills defy the laws of physics in place, instantly destroying both MoonCancer’s Spirit Origin and Spiritual Core.

    ~Abilities of the Six Planets~Mercury, when summoned, does little to no damage as a projectile but rather attacks rapidly with barely any cooldown. Venus is a debuff projectile which has a percentage of charming Male enemies, Earth allows for minor geokinesis and for healing capabilities, and Mars, while a slower projectile, does heavier damage. Jupiter is a one-time use which causes lightning bolts, and other weather phenomena to be used, and Saturn is a defensive ability which causes rings of dust to rotate around MoonCancer as a shield. Uranus and Neptune are used for short-term flight and healing magecraft, by summoning healing water, respectively. Finally, Pluto, while small, slow and not very strong, always aims for the vital organs since its connection to the Greco-Roman God of the Dead of the same name.


    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    ~Quotes and Relationships~

    ”Servant MoonCancer, Johannes Kepler. I hope that I may show you the music of the spheres.”

    ”What do you mean, ‘hippity hoppity, your planet is now my property’? That is not going to be what you call my Noble Phantasm…”
    *Indeed, the Master did end up saying “MoonCancer, use hippity hoppity, your planet is now my property!” every time they wanted MoonCancer to release his Noble Phantasm.*

    MoonCancer- Johannes Hewelius and Gustav Holst:
    ”Another MoonCancer… who is also two astronomers? I am saddened that I did not know either of you during my lifetime. May we be friends, or work together?”

    Tycho Brahe:
    ”Ah, it is you, my tutor. I am sorry that you and I didn’t get along the best… I will, however, say that your golden nose is still quite hilarious. Hm? Why are you so angry at me?”

    Saver- Ludwig van Beethoven:
    ”Truly, you are playing the music of the spheres! One worthy of being called the Saviour of Europe’s Will!”

    Albrecht von Wallenstein:
    ”Ah, Sir Generalissimo. I see that you are still obsessed with horoscopes. I see that my prediction was correct.


    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    ~Craft Essence~Craft Essence

    The stars are God’s greatest artwork



    ” ‘I used to measure the skies, now I measure the shadows of Earth.
    Although my mind was sky-bound, the shadow of my body lies here…’ Those are the words I wrote for myself before I died. Even as I drew my last breaths, my eyes stared always upwards at the skies. If I could stay alive until the stars came out, then I would’ve had no regrets . Still… my life was amazing. Oh Heavenly Father, surely the stars are your greatest masterpieces….”
    Author’s Notes version 2
    This is the second, more fleshed out(hopefully) version of my entry. I guess you could almost call this a “redux”. Anyways, this is definitely a better version in my opinion.

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    Could've just edited the original post. As is you should probably delete the original since otherwise it'll be unclear for compiling purposes.

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    Got it.

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    I just figured out my first entry, and realized I really like making Berserkers, apparently.
    Do you like jazz short stories? Do you want something to distract from making Servants? Do you wish the idea of Shirou Kotomine didn't immediately bring edgelords to mind? Well, I can't promise it's good, but some would disagree with me.
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    Jesus, we already have sheets. The devil works fast but the peeps from Beast's Lair works even faster.


    Quote Originally Posted by Random View Post
    NOOOOOO HISTORICAL ACCURACY

    MY ONLY WEAKNESS
    LMAO I'M SO SORRY but anyway, I know it's a joke but Imma use this opportunity to clarify stuff.

    It's fine if you want to do something more subdued, respecting the accuracy of a person's tale. That's totally fine. But in the end, the only thing I'm asking in this prompt is basically this

    Can you fuse your historical character with a mythological figure, as long as the main deal is historical? Yes. Can you make a sheet so out of pocket with crazy concepts and executions that it barely reminds one of the person they were in life? Absolutely. As long as the character is a historical™ verified™ person/animal/unknown thingy that existed and wasn't invented by anyone, go ham.
    Last edited by WhiteFrenzy; October 2nd, 2022 at 01:49 AM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Morg van Destro View Post
    I just figured out my first entry, and realized I really like making Berserkers, apparently.
    Berserkers tend to be prime angst™/edge™ material, which makes them so appealing, at least for me.

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    "oh this looks interesting," I say to myself as I spot something that sticks out while researching. "perhaps I should do a little bit of reading, just for context OH JESUS CHRIST"
    I may make mistakes, but at least I don't learn from them.
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    Quote Originally Posted by DrStein View Post
    Don't worry, Draco. This part of the forum is a very welcoming community now a days.

    Aside from Nine, but he's literally a kid.
    That's nice to hear for a newbie like me. I'm hoping to stick around then.

    Quote Originally Posted by Morg van Destro View Post
    You can always ask others. Most people here are open to it.
    Ah oh good okay okay...really, the only thing stopping me is my shyness making me unsure who to ask this from...

    Oh, speaking of questions though. If I have questions on things like "how does this skill work?" or "is there already a skill like this?" or "is there an NP that works like this?", should I ask it here or in the Create-A-Servant thread? inb4 the answer is obvious but im dense and dont realize it

    Quote Originally Posted by Vididii View Post
    Eyyy, you too mate, best of luck with your first!
    Quote Originally Posted by Spammin Spiff View Post
    Welcome, new people making sheets are always a good thing. It's always so interesting to see different styles and imaginations at work. I can't wait for you to drop your first servant.
    Hey, thanks you two! I'm looking forward to showing off what I'm working on. I'm laughing my ass off writing it. XD
    Um, though, maybe that might be just me.
    Uh, well, at least it's something I do know no one has made a Servant before, so there's at least that!
    Assuming my search results for this sub forum were correct and didn't miss anything...

    Quote Originally Posted by Spammin Spiff View Post
    It's fine, really. I honestly was just surprised because it blindsided me. You do you, I've got no problem with it.
    Okay okay. Cool cool. I just felt the need to explain myself because I didn't consciously realize I was roleplaying until you pointed it out.

    Quote Originally Posted by Random View Post
    I'm awake, what's the--

    NOOOOOO HISTORICAL ACCURACY

    MY ONLY WEAKNESS
    Lol same...

    ...except then I ended up with theee Servant ideas because I went "okay is there any historical figure i already like/is related to a topic I like already that i just don't know a lot about".

    Quote Originally Posted by WhiteFrenzy View Post
    LMAO I'M SO SORRY but anyway, I know it's a joke but Imma use this opportunity to clarify stuff.

    It's fine if you want to do something more subdued, respecting the accuracy of a person's tale. That's totally fine. But in the end, the only thing I'm asking in this prompt is basically this

    Can you fuse your historical character with a mythological figure, as long as the main deal is historical? Yes. Can you make a sheet so out of pocket with crazy concepts and executions that it barely reminds one of the person they were in life? Absolutely. As long as the character is a historical™ verified™ person/animal/unknown thingy that existed and wasn't invented by anyone, go ham.
    Aaaaahhhhhhh I was wondering if that would count but now I wanna try but...

    ...atm the idea that made me wonder that is Lolong with mythological buwaya, aka crocodile, which is a reaper. Sooo...Lolong would be too soon to count. And even then he doesn't really have a "legend". So he'd still not count.

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    Quote Originally Posted by DracoScribe View Post
    Oh, speaking of questions though. If I have questions on things like "how does this skill work?" or "is there already a skill like this?" or "is there an NP that works like this?", should I ask it here or in the Create-A-Servant thread?
    There isn't really a "The Place", but I would personally recommend asking that kind of thing here.
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    I second that
    Everything related to before a sheet goes live can be asked there. If you need formatting help, Im ur guy too.
    Behold! The works of a maniac!
    Servants!

    And my other contribution to this community!
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    Ah okay! Thanks for that! I'll go use it right now.

    As for the formatting offer...I'll keep that in mind! So far I'm doing fine with the knowledge I already have of BB code and following your guide from your sig. But I'll ask ya if anything comes up.

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    First sheet lesgooooo



    "A drop of ink and water falls onto a fresh piece of parchment, heralding the start of the night parades..."
    That would make a good preface.



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    "Now, let us march forth. "


    First Ascension

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    Class Rider
    Eligible Classes Caster
    True Name Toriyama Sekien
    Aliases
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    Origin Japan
    Height/Weight 155cm/65kg without equipment, 100kg with equipment.
    Alignment True Neutral
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    D+ D- B- B+ A+


    Likes Osakabehime's room, Soft Fluffy Things!, The Supernatural, A little bit of Analog Horror
    Dislikes Places with a lot of humans, Extroverts. People dragging her out of her room to do something she doesn't enjoy.
    Talent Painting, Lazing Around.
    Natural Enemy Reality, people who trample on dreams.
    Armaments The large scroll she carries on her back
    Catalysts Any fragment of the Gazu Hyakki Yaygo


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    Class Skills
    Territory Creation(Monster) A-:
    A skill given to people, with the power to cause the creation of a Bounded Field that puts them in a more advantageous position.
    In this case, Sekien can freely place any of her monsters at any point of the Bounded Field with Sekien at the centre. It can be said that the monsters are stronger when they are closer to Sekien, and weaker when closer to the circumference of the Bounded Field. The Bounded Field can grow to up to a radius of 50km provided that a steady and sufficient source of mana is provided.

    Riding C-:
    A skill granted to mainly Rider and Saber class servants.
    Since Sekien can freely manipulate her creations, that goes without saying that she is able to mount or assimilate into any of her creations.
    However, this really only applies to anything she creates. She's helpless if it's anything else.



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    Personal Skills

    What I See A-:
    A skill, or rather, a "drive" granted to a person with a burning passion to what they do.
    A maiden that's still drawing on her deathbed-no, a maiden with a dream.
    She envelopes her dream in her records, with brush and pen, and solidifies their existence with sheer willpower alone.

    Miasmic Hexing B+++:
    The scroll she carries on her back emits a miasmic aura, which can ward of danger and detect killing intent around a 25m radius around it.
    It may land a curse on anyone who touches it, purposefully or accidentally, as a safety mechanism.
    When used in conjunction with Territory Creation, cursing of long-distance enemies can be possible.
    From what a passer-by kitsunebi said, the curse can alter common sense, which means that all bodily functions completely goes haywire.
    The supposed way to lift and recover from this curse is for Sekien, and only Sekien to tell the scroll to lift it.

    Closing the Curtains to Reality EX:
    Within her small room, Reality does not exist.
    Time remains still, and the ages silently seep past her.
    There is only a girl and her brush, no matter how many years have escaped through her grasp.

    Visage of the Furious Hundred Demons A++:
    There is a reason why the large scroll behind her back is bound and sealed, despite looking like a harmless roll of tatami.
    Even Sanzang advises you to not casually approach it. It has to be handled using equipment purified by either ascended servants or saints themselves.
    For the Hundred Demons are fiercely loyal to their mother.
    Even of they know what she's doing is wrong, they will still move ahead.

    Assimilation A+:
    A skill evolved from her Riding Skill.
    It allows her to literally put her own soul into her creations.
    It can be used to cause mass damage, or espionage.
    It is also noted that most monsters have unique abilities, so each individual monster would be a force to be reckoned with.



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    Noble Phantasm

    Tonight, We Shall March On Into The Horizon
    Konjaku Gazu Zoku Hyakki

    "As long as my breath lingers... my soul hasn't crumbled yet... The Parade shall continue!"

    Rank: A+
    Type: Anti-Reality

    The sequel of Gazu Hyakki Yagyō, as well as the predecessor of two others. However, it was Gazu Hyakki Yagyō and Konjaku Gazu Zoku Hyakki that left some of the most memorable monsters and supernaturals, like the Tengu, the Kappa, the Yurei, and the most basic of them all: the Oni.
    Despite being a proper Ukiyo-e Artist of the Kano school, as the teacher to the founder of Utagawa School, she was never officially recognized as a "Kano School Artist", which meant her peers in the art world had enjoyed more fame and recognition for drawing and painting more proper things.
    However, this shut-in didn't mind.
    She never wanted fame anyways.
    She just wanted to draw monsters.
    The society never thought monsters where "proper', hence she replied by thinking that society wasn't "proper".
    Even to her last breath, she worked to produce more monsters to this world.
    Her iron will was finally realized when the Gazu Hyakki Yagyō e-hon tetralogy was recognized as "proper" and used as references and to be admired.
    Satisfied with her hands, and knowing that the legacy of her monsters where realized by the greater people, she had left with a peace of mind.
    She has finally achieved her dream, a dream that she's had ever since she was only a young maiden.

    When this Noble Phantasm is deployed, Sekien unravels her scroll and turns it into a sort-of Red Carpet for her monsters to materialize. It is worth noting that when more mana is supplied, Sekien can either produce more monsters or ensure the monsters do not dematerialize easily, ensuring that her army is more sturdy.
    Then monsters rush towards the enemies in a Banzai Charge.
    When proper instructions are given from someone with Sekien's permission, usage of formations is allowed. Basically a little army of unkillable monsters.
    Like a Spartan king's 300 Soldiers, or a little girl's deck of cards.
    Due to special considerations, A few monsters will not show up during the Parade, like a Certain Good-Wife type Fox servant, a Certain Banana Oni servant, or a Certain Firebreathing Yandere-type Dragon servant.
    The Sessho-seki will show up, though.
    Normally, this Noble Phantasm is classified as Anti-Army, but a certain Storyteller has extensively remodelled her Spirit Origin such that all reality distorts, and all truths made false after these monsters are near its vicinity.
    Hence, it now has been classified as "Anti-Reality"

    Apparently Physics or Common Sense are made ineffective around these monsters, hence, they can survive high falls or breathe normally underwater.
    However, it is unknown whether Chemical and Biological changes can be applied to things or people that are in the vicinity of the Parade.


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    Lore and Background

    Toriyama Sekien is a Ukiyo-e Painter, known for her bestiary tetralogy, as well as creating the fuki-bokashi method, which allowed for painters to add colour gradations. She was also known as the teacher for Kitagawa Utamaro and Utagawa Toyoharu. However, little is known about her private life, and her teachers and students had lived more social lives as compared to herself.
    Tis' the life of a shut-in.
    Little did she know, in her years of drawing and painting in complete solitude, she had already activated her mental trigger, that is to "Draw What She Likes."
    For the first time, magical energy, albeit weak, flowed through her magical circuits, and she had awakened her own "Origin".
    "Obsession".
    Perhaps this is why whenever you try to call her while she's drawing, she won't be able to hear you.
    Even though these new Magical Circuits have not seen battle or combat, they have been battered by years of incessant usages, by transporting magical energy to Sekien's illustrations.
    Which is why the Scroll, or rather, the Contents of the Scroll she carries with her can only identify Sekien as an "Ally".
    But, all in all, Sekien was a loner. She believes to not have done anything praiseworthy, or deserving to be recorded down the Throne of Heroes.
    But she is still there. The will of the Throne itself is stronger than a loner's inferiority complex.
    Hence, she thinks of herself as merely a stain mark that the Throne of Heroes refuse to get rid of.


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    [REDACTED]
    Sekien, under the orders of a Certain Storyteller, created and modelled a part of the singularity to recreate the scenery of mythical places during the Age of Gods.
    Later, using excess magical energy from all the leylines in [redacted] to summon Bo Yi, the author of the Records of Mountains and Seas.
    It was the servant she needed, as the beasts recorded in his Records had actually existed some time in the past, allowing them to be easier to summon.
    She immediately got to work pumping out great quantities of beasts from the Records using external mana sources provided by the Storyteller, and scattered them around the [redacted].
    Little did she know, Bo Yi's Magical Resistance was rather strong due to him being a person from the Age of Gods, allowing him to escape from Sekien's control.

    Later, Sekien would be fought as the third final, as well as the final boss for this portion of the [redacted]

    At the end of the entire singularity, where the protagnist defeats the Storyteller, she is one of the people who revisits his castle, and laments about how they were wrong, and should return to reality one day.


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    Personality and Interactions
    Sekien can come off as shy to strangers due to her lack of social experience, so she would show up as a shadow behind Bo Yi's back most of the time. However, as you get to know her better, she can be very stubborn and haughty. Only in a few situations will she humbly ask someone for help. Having butt tons of idols probably didn't help her grow as both a person and a Servant, as she tends to foam at the mouth when she meets her idols in person or as a Servant.

    Dialogues with Master:
    -Rider, answering your summons. I want a heavily fortified room and you can do what you want.
    -Can't you go bug others servants instead?
    -You can come in, but don't make a sound, or you'll never see the light of day again.
    -Kotatsu... Very warm.
    -We should.. hang out with Osakabehime from time... to time.
    -My wish for the grail? If only they realised earlier, that a girl can dream as well.

    Osakabehime: Teach me your ways.
    Osakabehime 2: Uhhh.. Put that drawing away. Put tHAT DRAWING AWAYYY!!
    *Osakabehime proceeds to attempt to chase after an escaping Sekien, but they both find out sooner or later that they can't run.*
    Tamamo-No Mae, Koyan, Kiyohime, Kiara Sessyoin(Summer), Hiroari (coming soon), Ibaraki, The Little Mermaid,: Why are you chasing after meeee-ahhhhhhhhh!
    Ashiya Douman: Ah, the weird guy that asked me for a portrait of himself!
    Kiyjo Kojo, Shuten, the Mary Celeste: Aren't you going to chase after me?
    Bo Yi: I'm... sorry.
    Anastasia(more specifically, Viy.), Tres Viajeras(from u/OroJuice): I am going to die.
    Kitagawa Utamaro: Perv.
    Utagawa Toyoharu: A successful child.
    Katsushika Hokusai: Another Perv.
    Van Gogh: Nice.
    Cope and Marsh: Run. I can only hold them off for a short while. Both of you, Run.
    Schliemann: Boom boom. Noisy. You irritate me. Go away.
    Yosano Akiko: A skill that moves mountains? Go! Away! Shoo!
    Kepler, Hevelius, Copernicus: Stars... Not my forte.
    Comte de Saint-Germaine: *Toriyama_Sekien.exe. has stopped working*
    Ismail al-Jazari (When Abeno Seimei is present): Get a load of this guy's mom, then.
    Ismail al-Jazari (When Ismail al-Jazari is revealed to be the Basilisk): I'm sorry a robot cannot dream.
    Sir Christopher Lee: You. You can stay. I enjoy your presence.
    Sir John Franklin, Tallemaja, The Ghost and the Darkness, Mr. Zombie, The Horned Skeleton, Apega, : A new specimen.
    Petrus and Catherine Gonsalvus: Here you go.

    Ernest Shackleton: Octopus... I don't particularly enjoy. Only if takoyaki is there.
    Kuzunoha: I'm sorry. (Refers to the one time she told Ismail to get a load of Abeno Seimei's mother)
    Altera: Weird.


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    Bond Craft Essense

    Demons Dancing on My Tabletop



    A horde of weird beings came to my dreams tonight.
    A weird feeling came to me. It wasn't fear. It wasn't surprise. It wasn't terror either.
    I felt awestruck. Weird for a girl in her teens.
    Instantly, I had a dream, to bring these beings to life, for people to admire.
    "Toriyama! What is this that you have brought to me! This is not proper at all. Why can't you be like your peers who paint for the government? Where is your pride as a Kano School artist? Take your degenerate artwork and leave until you come back with something decent and proper. "
    Degenerate Art?
    Proper Art?
    Uh.
    Haha.
    Hahaha.
    Hahahahahahahahahahahaha!
    You're the degenerate one, you old fossil!
    You all are the degenerates here.
    I will show you what true art is.
    I close the door to my room.
    I turn my head, to see my little creations dance across my small table.
    It would be great if I could wake up and my demo- no. My friends could greet me with a smile.
    Perhaps that would be the world I truly envision.




    Creator Notes

    I'm done with the remake.
    I tried to revamp it a little now that there is a buffer time between two of my national exam papers.
    I excluded Shuten and Momiji from the entire chasing thing mainly because Shuten would most likely not give a fuck, and Momiji is a freakin dino. I also took out Gawain because he needs to go farming with me.
    Also, I tend to associate Osakabehime with being a chad artist, so I may or may not write an Interlude about Sekien going to learn how to draw waifus (Like that one time in Luluhawa with Hokusai)
    You should really see their illustrations in the bestiaries. Sekien really went all out on them. Jeez.
    Lally-ho.


    Teaser for Upcoming Servant

    "So, you must have heard from Sekien."
    "I'm actually very glad that she opened up to you. It's been a long while since she's ever talked to anyone, after all."
    "..."
    "Is she trying to apologize...to me?"
    "Well, you know, she was forced to do it for her own survival. I can't blame me for it."
    "For she was in the same shoes as you are now."
    "Welp, I've got to go now. Good Day."
    "By the way, if you see Yu, tell him I say hi."





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    Quote Originally Posted by WhiteFrenzy View Post
    Jesus, we already have sheets. The devil works fast but the peeps from Beast's Lair works even faster.



    LMAO I'M SO SORRY but anyway, I know it's a joke but Imma use this opportunity to clarify stuff.

    It's fine if you want to do something more subdued, respecting the accuracy of a person's tale. That's totally fine. But in the end, the only thing I'm asking in this prompt is basically this

    Can you fuse your historical character with a mythological figure, as long as the main deal is historical? Yes. Can you make a sheet so out of pocket with crazy concepts and executions that it barely reminds one of the person they were in life? Absolutely. As long as the character is a historical™ verified™ person/animal/unknown thingy that existed and wasn't invented by anyone, go ham.
    tl;dr you still can and should do the Morbius prompt, but the name you have to use is Bram Stoker.

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