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    Original Sin (OOC)



    The planet has been destroyed. The world is now a lifeless shell barring a single location.

    Eden. Silver City. City of Glass.

    A final sanctuary created for this very purpose. A paradise that has been isolated from the devastation of the outside world. A place where the last remnants of humanity can live and thrive and dream of one day perhaps setting out once more to the Earth and repairing the damages that had been done.

    At least, that’s how it was supposed to go.

    Centuries have since passed and Eden has become completely divided amongst itself. Everyday people in the upper levels of Eden feast and live lavish lives. Those in residing in the middle sections live normal, ordinary lives from day to day. But for those in the lower levels, everyday is a fresh hell. The streets are in a constant state of unrest as far too many people fight over paltry scraps. And as the situation worsens, they are forced into increasingly desperate measures. Until at last they are forced to break the final taboo. Eden’s most ironclad restriction. The initial cause of ruin.

    Devil Summoning.

    For the sake of a wish. For the chance at a miracle.

    At a price.

    And now… for reasons that only you alone know, you have performed this forbidden ritual and now a creature straight out of your nightmares is staring at you, patiently waiting.

    “What is it you desire?”




    Original Sin is an urban fantasy rp where you take the role of a contractor, somebody who has made a deal with a Devil in order to achieve some dream. Your journey begins in Inferno, the lowest levels of Eden, and must slowly carve out a place for yourself as you deal with the consequences of the sin you have just committed. For more in-depth information, you can consult the rulebook here.

    For deadlines, with the holiday season coming up soon and what not, I'll put a tentative date at January 6th. Slot wise, I'm hoping for around 5 spots.

    Thanks to Leftovers, I3uster, and Katie for helping me bounce some thoughts, and an extra thanks to Satehi for the assistance he provided.

    Other Questions:
    Q. Do I have to pick a Devil from the list or can I create my own?
    A. You can create your own if you want.

    Q. What's the difference between I Will Survive and Unbreakable?
    A. One helps you survive extreme amounts of damage, the other lets you continue to act despite taking extreme amounts of damage. To give an example, if you were to be thrown off a cliff, if you had I Will Survive, you would live through the fall. On the other hand, if you had Unbreakable, you would be capable of acting for a brief amount of time after you landed before you went down.
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    And its tang out of nowhere with the steel rulebook.

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    Hmmm, time to take a look at the thing.
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    Interesting premise. Is demon summoning something that anyone can do with the proper knowledge, or is it possible that some people could have an innate bloodline affinity for it?

    Just asking because it concerns the backstory for a character I might submit.

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    This looks rad

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    Anybody may summon a Devil so long as they possess the will and the knowledge. Some people may have a higher affinity than others for this, but this trait is not passed down via blood. On the other hand, knowledge can be passed down.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Tangerang View Post
    Anybody may summon a Devil so long as they possess the will and the knowledge. Some people may have a higher affinity than others for this, but this trait is not passed down via blood. On the other hand, knowledge can be passed down.
    Thanks for the clarification Tang.

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    That makes me think of Rin as a loan shark.
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    Admittedly, she'd probably be the hottest loan shark you'll ever meet. She'd probably make you smile as she sucked you dry.


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    Gonna give this a shot
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    I’ve got a good FC for this. Like, a really good FC.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Hymn of Ragnarok View Post
    That makes me think of Rin as a loan shark.
    Quote Originally Posted by Hymn of Ragnarok View Post
    Admittedly, she'd probably be the hottest loan shark you'll ever meet. She'd probably make you smile as she sucked you dry.


    Oh dear, that doesn't sound like yuri at all.
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    Not with that attitude.

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    I got into Crownless but wasn't able to make a single post so I'm gonna give this a shot.

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    I am actually so sorry about that.

    (I've been busy irl so i wasn't really to start it up back again until things settle down for me)
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    Quote Originally Posted by Bird of Hermes View Post
    I got into Crownless but wasn't able to make a single post so I'm gonna give this a shot.
    Wanna be in 2 RPs together?

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    [18:23] <frantic> 'frantic', he'd say, his eyes wild and his lips smug
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    Quote Originally Posted by Hymn of Ragnarok View Post
    That makes me think of Rin as a loan shark.
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    Admittedly, she'd probably be the hottest loan shark you'll ever meet. She'd probably make you smile as she sucked you dry.


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    Not with that attitude.

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    Giving this a try. Gotta start somewhere with online RP.

    That said, a question: if our Devil doesn't give us a familiar, then do we just include the three spells then?
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    Coffee would be nice, though.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kirby View Post
    I am actually so sorry about that.

    (I've been busy irl so i wasn't really to start it up back again until things settle down for me)
    That's ok dude, I figured that was the case and that it was best not to pester.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mooncake View Post
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    Are there any traces of pre-devastation cultures in Eden? For instance, is there the equivalent of a Little Chinatown, a Little Russia, things like that?
    How about ethnicities? How mixed is Eden's population?
    My fanfics:
    The Gift (F/SN): The last duel between Cú Chulainn and Scáthach.
    Passion Acknowledged (F/SN): Shinji X Shirou lemon
    He Was a Good King (F/SN): Was Beowulf a good king?
    A Fairy Tale of Love and Death (F/SN): A meeting between Scáthach and King Hassan.
    Palingenetic Descension (Tsukihime): The origin of the Tohno family's hybrid nature.

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    Not really considering to join, but anything that reminds me of Ron Edwards' brilliant RPG, Sorcerer, is a win in my book.

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    Quote Originally Posted by SpoonyViking View Post
    Are there any traces of pre-devastation cultures in Eden? For instance, is there the equivalent of a Little Chinatown, a Little Russia, things like that?
    How about ethnicities? How mixed is Eden's population?
    Hmmm. I think there's a decent variety of ethnicities throughout Eden. On the other hand, most pre-eden culture is prob gone. There might be small communities here and there but for the most part its pretty mixed.
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    Cool, cool. So how does this work? Should I write up a sheet and PM it to you?
    My fanfics:
    The Gift (F/SN): The last duel between Cú Chulainn and Scáthach.
    Passion Acknowledged (F/SN): Shinji X Shirou lemon
    He Was a Good King (F/SN): Was Beowulf a good king?
    A Fairy Tale of Love and Death (F/SN): A meeting between Scáthach and King Hassan.
    Palingenetic Descension (Tsukihime): The origin of the Tohno family's hybrid nature.

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