The only reason I ruled out Atilla is because Rider seemed to be a devoted Servant of the Church, unless Atli is a different character entirely from Altera...
I wonder why you gave Herc the Stymphalian Bird he already has a lot of NP for an archer servant like he has what four (five if the bow of hydra counts) NP.
Also good fic 10/10
That's a good question. Herk's NPs are something that I had a lot of back and forth with myself on the number and if it was too excessive, but decided I needed all five + alpha and as long as they each had a strict narrative purpose that necessitated him having them it would be fine.
Here, you see that he has God Hand, the Pelt, Bow of the Hydra, Nine Lives, and Boomelancer -> Bommexecutor.
I wanted to include the MAWS because:
1) They're used as arrows in Strange Fake
2) They're /only/ used as arrows in Strange Fake. I thought I could put an additional spin on them.
3) They're related to Ares which ties in with Lancer.
Originally Posted by FSF 5, Chapter 14: Gold and Lions IThough abandoned, forgotten, and scorned as out-of-date dolls, they continue to carry out their mission, unchanged from the time they were designed.
Machines do not lose their worth when a newer model appears.
Their worth (life) ends when humans can no longer bear that purity.