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So, the third Heaven's Feel IDs Angra Mainyu's hypothetical Beast form as the Beast of Retribution, and I was wondering if anyone would be interested in a Singularity idea based around that.
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Sure.
Yes.
The Fate SeriesWhere people die when they're killed, the Archer class really is made up of archers, and just because you're correct doesn't mean you're right.
Also, there are 12 different versions of King Arthur.
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Quick question. Does anyone know how to collapse an image into a new one?
Take this post as an example:
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The Fate SeriesWhere people die when they're killed, the Archer class really is made up of archers, and just because you're correct doesn't mean you're right.
Also, there are 12 different versions of King Arthur.
If you reply with quote on your example, you can copy and paste the code. You use the collapse function and in it ="[img]link[/img]"
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Hey thanks! It works!
The Fate SeriesWhere people die when they're killed, the Archer class really is made up of archers, and just because you're correct doesn't mean you're right.
Also, there are 12 different versions of King Arthur.
Symbol Table:
■■■■■ - Black Spoiler Box. Click to reveal.Your song recommendations for this Singularity include "London Calling" by The Clash or the British National Anthem. Or, if you want to get into the uneasiness and suspense of this Singularity, choose to listen to the creepiest version of "London Bridge is Falling Down," like the Dezzaired version.
Don't forget your magnifying glasses and steam pipes my fellow fledgling detectives, because we're going to catch a killer! Just be sure to watch your back in this fog...City of Muder Beneath the Deceitful Fog
London – 1888 A.D.
“Ripper of the Misty Night”
Nights like these make for a killing.
Name: City of Murder Beneath the Deceitful Fog – London
Subtitle: Ripper of the Misty Night
Human Foundation Value: A-
Location: London
Year: 1888 A.D.
Grail Holder: Lev Lainur ■■■■■■■
Demon God Pillar: ■■■■■■■
Factions: Chaldea Security Organization, Project Demonic Fog
Description of Events:
19th-century London was a bustling era for the British. With the beginning of the Industrial Revolution and the population growing, London was a hub of commerce and industry. Unfortunately, this also brought many struggles to the people of London. Poverty, social classes, diseases, and many more troubles were produced in the Victorian era.
But, there was one thing most people in the modern age remember most about this era. In 1888, a series of murders took place in London's sector of Whitechapel. What was left of the victims were mutilations so horrible people believed it to be the work of the demon. Worst, the murderer was never identified or even caught. These haunting acts of manslaughter earned the anonymous killer a name. This name would go down as one of the greatest serial killers and humanity's longest unsolved enigmas in history:
Jack the Ripper...
…It should have stopped at five deaths.
Instead, things turned from bad to worse.
In this Singularity, what should have been five murders turned into ten, then twenty, then fifty, until the number began to go over hundreds, maybe even thousands. All of them had one thing in common: they matched the modus operandi of Jack the Ripper. At this point, it was impossible to deduce if the murders were committed by the real Jack the Ripper, a copycat killer, or other people entirely. All people began pointing fingers at each other, desperate to find a scapegoat to end this surreal nightmare.
To make matters worse, a mysterious fog has swept over the entire city of London and has only grown thicker ever since. Anyone who disappears into the fog is either dead or never seen again. With how fast the now-named Demonic Fog is growing, it may expand across Europe.
There is only one thing the citizens of London know in this city of faceless murder: Once you are lost in the fog, Jack the Ripper has already claimed you as his victim...
Spoiler:
Key Characters:
Chaldea Security Organization
Project Demonic Fog
Unaffiliated
Key Noble Phantasms:
:Ritual from Hell「Star of Goetia」
One of Helena Blavatsky (Jack the Ripper)’s Noble Phantasms. This powerful source of black magic is the crystallization of the theory that the Whitechapel Murders were part of a large magical ritual. Helena can perform magical spells rivaling that of high thaumaturgy. However, Helena refuses to use this power due to being powered by the murders.
If Helena did use this Noble Phantasm, it would automatically prove the rumors of her being Jack true. The Demonic Fog would succeed in corrupting her, and would have another Ripper Suspect running around. Under the orders of Lev Lainur, Mephistopheles attempts to goad her into giving into the Fog and use the Noble Phantasm.
:The Hell Hotel「Murder Castle」
The Noble Phantasm of H.H. Holmes. This is the infamous hotel in which H.H. Holmes operated as a serial killer. In every room, every stair, every nook and cranny of this hotel hides deadly traps that can catch even the fastest Servants off guard. The longer a person stays in the hotel, the more likely a trap will succeed in killing them. Worst, it’s almost impossible to find an exit. The only way to dispel this Noble Phantasm is to find Holmes and kill him.
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:Invisible Armor Against Mystery「Mystic Breaker」
One of Assassin of the Seance’s Noble Phantasms. This Noble Phantasm is the personification of her career exposing psychic frauds. When used, Assassin is completely immune to magical attacks and thaumaturgy. Even mental magecraft like illusions is completely nullified by this Noble Phantasm. The only flaws this Noble Phantasm has is that it needs to be consciously activated, requiring magical energy to keep it functioning. While it is very effective against magecraft of modern times, it is okay against magic from the Age of Gods.
Because of the Noble Phantasm’s effects, Assassin exploits it multiple times to nullify the Fog’s effects. It is possible without this Noble Phantasm, it would have been impossible to resolve the Singularity.
:That Which is Unworthy of a Tragic Demise「Natural Born Killers」
One of the Berserker-class Jack the Ripper’s Noble Phantasms. Based on the theory that Jack the Ripper was a group of people, this allows Jack to create multiple bodies depending on the Master’s magical energy. With Lev as his Master and the Grail supplying him, Berserker could create thousands of bodies indefinitely.
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Notable Enemies:
Homunculi & Proto Homunculi - Lancer- & Assassin-class:
Artificial familiars created by Paracelsus. These homunculi helped finish the creation of Angrboda. The stray homunculi running around makes Chaldea think that they originally came from the ruins of the Clock Tower.
Automata, Killing Dolls, & Old Gears - Assassin-class:
Autonomous puppets created by H. H. Holmes. They are found in Holmes’ hotel, killing any intruders trapped.
Helter Skelter - Saber-class:
Robotic familiars created by Babbage’s Noble Phantasm. The Helter Skelter originally acted as guards in Angrboda’s chamber. They would later be released onto London to collect magical energy after Chaldea discovers Project Demonic Fog. ■■■■■.Gorgeous World of Ashes「Dimension of Steam」
Spellbook, Thunder Book, Wind Book, Ice Book, Fire Book, and Grimoire - Caster-class:
Floating spell books used by Helena. They guard Helena’s estate, refusing entry to anyone who comes near.
Steam Ghosts and Massive Steam Ghosts - Rider-class:
The lost spirits who were killed by the Ripper Suspects and Project Demonic Fog. These agonized souls wander inside the Fog, searching to drain people of magical energy in an attempt to feel alive again. They disappear once the Demonic Fog dissipates.
Ripper Wraith - Berserker- & Assassin-class:
Lesser Ripper Suspects summoned by the Demonic Fog. They are similar to Shadow Servants, faceless and degraded copies of a proper Servant. They prey upon humans lost in the Fog, although they could actually be easily defeated in a one-on-one fight. ■■■■■■.
Time Era Destabilization Theory:
London was the centerpoint of the Industrial Revolution, laying the foundations for modern business and new innovations. No business means no money nor power. There would also be a lack of new inventions and ideas, with improvements to healthcare, machinery, human ethics, and important changes that humanity needed to sustain itself. Jack the Ripper and his Demonic Fog had completely halted the Revolution, with the citizens of London trapped inside their homes and completely isolated.
More than the Revolution, people have become too afraid of Jack. Lev was right in exploiting humanity’s fear in the unexplainable. Fear stunts development, turns people against each other. With Jack the Ripper’s identity completely unknown, nobody would be able to trust each other. Superstition and blame would divide humanity– constantly watching their back.
Humanity would be so desperate for the truth, they would make on their own in an attempt to conquer their fear. But people would be making their own truths and completely disregard what the world considers real. The Demonic Fog makes this even worse. With its ability to cause illusions, reality and fact only gets farther away. Lies become truth and truth becomes lies. In this deceitful fog, humanity loses their way to fear and lies.
As a result of the Singularity, humanity’s progress in business and industry has been halted by the icon of terror and obscurity, and has brought man closer to incineration.
Singularity Corrective Force Resolution:
Spoiler:
Mystic Code:
Mage's Association Uniform
Author’s Note:
Spoiler:
Credits:
Spoiler:
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The Fate SeriesWhere people die when they're killed, the Archer class really is made up of archers, and just because you're correct doesn't mean you're right.
Also, there are 12 different versions of King Arthur.
i really enjoyed reading this. I vaguely remember the singularity, but i found it mostly boring, you made it something interesting. The only thing that really stuck to me how weird the ending was, somehow Tesla went bonkers and kintoki and fox girl appear and it wasnt clear to me WHY. it all felt more like a character dumb than a fully coherent story.
The idea of using suspects is smart and every character had a purpose, so that is a strong rank up from the original. Using Holmes, the first US serial killer, instead of Holmes, the detective is a nice touch. We recently had two variants of Holmes in the CaS thread, but i get the appeal of using the reddit version, when it comes with sprites and all and that GLORIOUS beard. Tho i dont really get why Hohenheim planned on killing Assassin Jack and why her, because Assassin seems stronger than Avenger to me. And how Avenger became so dangerous to Chaldea to begin with.
still great work JD! Keep up the quality, looking forward to France and remember, quality over quantity, dont work under time pressure, it is ready when it is ready.
And when u have time, enlighten us what is going on inside your head when you create this singularities. Perhaps take notes how you worked on ur next project. One day I wanna do my own events and wanna learn from the likes of you.
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Indulge with me in the accomplishments of our abode.
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Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
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Alright, so I got a few updates.
I am currently formulating plans for a Summer Event Singularity. This is probably gonna be my largest-scale project thus far, since I'll be making at least six Servants for this Singularity. The release of the Singularity proper will be the finale of this plan.
I also hope to release a Halloween Singularity this October. I have a premise for it, but I haven't built on it much.
In any case, if anyone is willing to collaborate with me on these ideas, feel free to shoot me a message.
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I'd be way ahead of you -- I had the general idea of an alternate Fate/Zero Fuyuki where male!Ritsuka (with ■■■■■■■) and Mash would be dropped into after rayshifting for the first time, where their ultimate enemy's Beast Mango and their only allies are fem!Ritsuka as a Servant and... a shellshocked but not dead Kayneth, if I recall rightly... to start out -- if not for this pandemic hitting me right in the kokoro. (So dumb, but allow me the flourish.)
So, belated as this is, yes.
Noob here. Sorry about that.
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Thing is, I haven't even started it. Partly because I was working out the kinks inside my head, which was fine till this pandemic made its presence known inside my body, and partly because I couldn't complete the Servant (and Demon Pillar) sheets of the Servants (and Demon Pillar) I did want to sneak in.
That said, I do want to see it through, so collaboration... that sounds good. Where do we start?
Noob here. Sorry about that.
Sorry if i screw up, this is my first time posting here. I'm gonna copy something i once posted somewhere else.
MAJOR EDIT 1: It now has a better story with the events leading up to this Lostbelt being more understandable.
Name: Fifth Empire: The Global Country Ruled By The Dual Messiah
Subtitle: Singular Refracted Light
Lost Depth: C
Origin: 1640 A.D
Location: Portugal
King: King John/Sebastian
Crypter: Unknown
Fantasy Tree: Cigar
Backstory
Servants: Similar to the Chinese Lostbelt, this Lostbelt has almost no concept of heroes, since their only hero is the King. However, because of that, only heroes similar to him got summoned. In this case, only heroes with King asleep in mountain attribute got summoned, who would oppose King Sebastians return and meddling with the affairs of the living. Example of "Kings asleep in mountain" are King Arthur, Charlemagne, Fionn mac Cumhaill, King David, Frederick I, etc...
Servants summoned in the Lostbelt:
Caster - Fernando Pessoa: First and Main Lostbelt Servant of this Lostbelts Crypter. Famous portuguese writer known for its Heteronyms, his main form of combat in this Lostbelt is creating an Heteronym of his Master and using Magick to invoke spirits and deities on to said Heteronym, creating a High Servant with conceptual advantage towards its King.
Caster - Aleister Crowley: Second and Secondary Lostbelt Servant of this Lostbelts Crypter. Occultist and founder of the religion Thelema, he was summoned because of its affinity with Fernando Pessoa and to boost his Heteronyms even further through Magick, invoking even stronger spirits and/or deities than what Fernando Pessoa is capable. Has ties with King Arthur.
???: A mysterious person, neither Servant nor Human, who aids the Crypter.
Saber - King Arthur (Prototype): A servant summoned by itself due to the possibility of a Beast appearing in this Lostbet.
Saber - King Sebastian: The historical King Sebastian, summoned by the World who ends up aiding Chaldea as a catalyst to summon other Servants.
King asleep in mountain Servants: Possible servants summoned by Chaldea, like Francis Drake, Fionn, William Tell, Vlad III.
Saver- King John/Sebastian: Lostbelt King, a composite character of John IV, the Restorer and King Sebastian, the two messiahs destined to bring forth the Fifth Empire. The last "person" on this Lostbelt aside from Crypter and Chaldea. Trough the power of the Fifth Empire, Saver summons representatives of the 4 past Empires to aid against Chaldea, a group called "The Four Pillars".
Four Pillars Who Hold the World: Kings Asleep in the Mountain Servants that represent each past empire. Although not all of them are the face of each Empire, Saver could only summon them due to the peculiar state in which the Throne of Heroes is in this Lostbelt:
Constantinus: He who represents the 4th Empire, Rome;
Theseus: He who represents the 3rd Empire, Greece;
Kay Khosrow: He who represents the 2nd Empire, Persia;
Nebuchadnezzar II: He who represents the 1st Empire, Assyria. A rather peculiar case, in which the servant is neither a King Asleep in the Mountain, nor truly Assyrian, but rather Babylonian. However, as the dreamer of the Fifth Empire, Nebuchadnezzar II fits as the foundation of it.
Additional notes: I would imagine that this Lostbelts theme of stagnation would be a world without differences. After the 5th empire is founded, the world becomes Portugal. However, by doing that, that means all culture becomes Portugal. Without differences, everything leads to stagnation. That's not all. Over time, concepts of different culture gets substituted by only Portuguese culture, other people would be substituted by Portuguese people. Eventually, it would go so far that it would destroy individualism, in which every Portuguese would be substituted by the truest Portuguese, their king, as a result of his "Quinto Imperio" Noble Phantasm being continuously active for centuries, going haywaire. A world that is Portugal, a Portugal that is only King John Sebastian. Furthermore, with his ascension to the throne, the world became slowly covered with mist, as if the world had been covered by King Sebastian. In this world , there is no truth, only the King.
In this Lostbelt, Chaldea, the Lostbelt King and Crypter are fighting on a 3-way war, due to the Crypter not being satisfied with how the Lostbelt turned into, seeking to use his First Casters Heteronym propriety to bring forth individuality towards the people of the Lostbelt, by being the Orthonym that controls the Heteronyms. If King John/Sebastian is a glass that brings forth a Singular Refracted Light, First Caster will be the prism that will bring forth a Rainbow.
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Interesting. You're right it does come off as a bit of a riff on SIN, but there's some cool ideas here and the Refracted Light/Prism metaphor makes for some clever imagery. I guess my Ladislaus could be summoned in this Lostbelt too since he also has a "came back from death to defend his people" legend.
Thanks, after having done this i also decided to create my first servant, Caster Fernando Pessoa.
EDIT: I screwed up, tried to reply directly to a message but just replied to the whole tread LOL
EDIT 2: Nevermind i fixed it.
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