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    This time it's a Singularity, but...

    Also,
    WARNING: Contains 'Matthew Kyrielight' as the name of that Shielder kouhai girl instead of Mashu or Mash, and I won't apologize. Fuck romanization, fuck localization.





    Name: Proto-Lostbelt Camelot
    Subtitle: The Fantastic Island where History is Lost in the Tumult of Absolute War
    Human Foundation Value: EX
    Lost Depth: EX

    Location: British Isles
    Year: 227AD? (within the last vestiges of the Age of Gods, so time is convoluted in a manner of ways)
    Grail Holders: Beast VI/L, Beast VI/R

    Kings: Arthur Pendragon (Alter), Beast VI/L
    Crypter: abandoned by Beryl Gut
    Fantasy Tree: tricked into being felled by the hands of the realm's own inhabitants, yet the damned world continues to persist


    History:
    The point of divergence begins not in the distant past, but from within yesteryear of the modern era--specifically, the year 1999AD of a world where the Holy Grail War ritual is held in Tokyo, Japan, and had occurred twice. Like all alternate worlds, it possessed a myriad of small differences that distinguished it from other worlds. Of the most relevant is that in this world King Arthur was born and treated as the male that legend remembered him being. This King Arthur participated in both of this world's Holy Grail Wars as a Saber-Class Servant, and in both occurrences his fate was tied to the daughters of the Sayjou family.

    The first time, where he was the Servant of the older sister--Manaka--he betrayed her for the sake of the greater good.

    The second time, he was the Servant of the younger sister--Ayaka--a form of atonement, and an opportunity to prevent further evil from happening.

    Though the older sister had died in the First War, she was the strongest magus of the era. At the climax of the 1999 Second Holy Grail War, once there was enough magical energy in the Grail for it to function, she resurrected herself and took control of the Beast that was incubated within. At this point, it was up to the winners of the 1999 Second Holy Grail War, Ayaka and Saber, and what few allies they had, to defeat Manaka and save the world from grand disaster.

    The divergence happens upon Manaka's victory. She killed her Ayaka, and her sister's allies, and corrupted Saber with the
    Chaos Tide
    accursed black mud
    that spewed from the Grail and the Beast; pushed his personality ao that it no eschewed all chivalry and goodness that wasn't for Manaka. They belonged to each other, body, soul, and heart. Crowned the true victor of the Holy Grail War, as well as having absolute control over the Grail now, Manaka used it to grant a wish that she made for her beloved Saber's sake: Travel to his past to right all wrongs done to him, and to stay at his side forever.

    Upon her victory, Manaka became Beast VI/L, and Manaka, her Servants, and the Beast that was an extension of herself/she was an extension of, brought catastrophe and chaos to Arthurian Britain. Countless die. Innumerable cities are destroyed. The land itself is ruptured. Manaka warps the texture of the world. Phantasmals are called forth, and many kowtowed by her and utilized in further destruction. Reality was damaged so much that the destroyed Camelot became a nexus for other Camelots to appear, in an effort to return to normalcy. They fall and bury the land beneath their rubble, for Manaka will suffer no one who'd stand in the way of her and her Arthur's happiness. Reality becomes damaged beyond repair, to the point that the islands are entrapped within a Singularity.

    Manaka wouldn't let some World stop her. She forced the Singularity to grow and continue on, and the World took further measures. Containment wouldn't be enough. The World cut off energy from her world, forcing it into becoming a Lostbelt.

    Manaka wouldn't let some World stop her. Even without the support of The World, she forced it to continue, keeping the place going for hundreds of years, and somewhere between a Singularity and a Lostbelt: she didn't care, so long as Proto-Lostbelt Camelot continued to be a home for her and the altered Arthur Pendragon.

    Meanwhile, the prevalence and success of Beast VI/L drew the presence of the other half, Beast VI/R, and its own attachments.

    Such is the state this world is in when Chaldea arrives. It was once selected by the God of the Foreign Star as a Lostbelt Candidate for a Crypter, but as was the case will of them except for Kirschtaria Wodime and his, it was set up for failure. Beryl Gut was saddled with this awful world, only good for pillaging and destruction.



    BEAST VI/L'S FACTION ~ CAMELOT AND THE KNIGHTS OF THE NEO-DARK ROUND TABLE


    Saber - Arthur Pendragon (Alter):
    The Lostbelt King of Camelot. The male King of Knights is been blackened by Manaka, and his personality has been twisted accordingly. While he still retains the bearings of a king, he's far less concerned with noble actions and impartiality. Everything he does now is for Manaka's, and his own, happiness.

    Among being her king and husband, Beast VI/L plans to use him and his fully unrestrained Excalibur to eliminate the God of the Foreign Star should it ever come to Proto-Lostbelt Camelot, as well as any other extra-terrestrial threats to her lasting lovey-dovey kingdom with Arthur.



    Lancer - Brynhildr (Alter):
    An agent of Beast VI/L, and thus considered an extension of her body and will.
    Initially content to burn in the fire of love for Arthur vicariously through her Master, Manaka, when she learns of the presence of the uncorrupted Arthur within the Proto-Lostbelt the thought of having a King of Knights all to herself causes her amorous flames to become a peerless inferno.

    She wears a choker that contains six vials at a time of the emotion-altering drug that her former Master of the 1991 First Holy Grail War used on her. She uses them to drug herself for a massive power boost. Should she run out, Manaka will replenish her stock for her. Bryhildr (Alter) has never used all six at once before until her battle with the Foreigner of the Seven Hills of Rome, when it came down to a battle between flames. She wins that fight, but is burned so badly in the process that even her Saint Graph is charred. She doesn't let that stop her from engaging in one last fight with Arthur, although it's a contributing factor to her defeat. Brynhildr (Alter) dies, embraced by Arthur.

    The sight of a former ally in such a woeful state brings Chaldea distraught.



    Archer - Arash (Alter):
    An agent of Beast VI/L, and thus considered an extension of her body and will. He has fought a thousand battles, and has died a thousand times. His contract with Manaka forces him to resurrect again and again, and of Manaka's Servants/Knights he has died the most of them. So many deaths have twisted his mind, yet, via the contract, his soul remains bound together; bound, yet broken nonetheless.

    He functions as a different super-weapon from the role that Arthur (Alter) has. He is used to unleash Stella after Stella on the countryside and enemy alike, from afar and en masse.

    The sight of a former ally in such a woeful state brings Chaldea distraught

    Arash (Alter) is kept busy during the final battle by the Wild Hunt.



    Rider - Ozymandias (Alter):

    An agent of Beast VI/L, and thus considered an extension of her body and will. He is Manaka's second-in command, and acts as a governor who answers only to Beast VI/L and Arthur. He also provides a large number of beasts and soldiers for the army of Manaka's Camelot, and his sun boat is a portent of destruction.

    The sight of a former ally in such a woeful state brings Chaldea distraught.



    Caster - Paracelsus (Alter):
    An agent of Beast VI/L, and thus considered an extension of her body and will. He continues his research and observations, witnessing how far Manaka's love will take them all and the world.

    With the assistance of Morgan le Fay, he is in charge of production of an army of homunculi clones of Mordred. Also played a role in the development of ???, who plays a role in the final battles of the Proto-Lostbelt.



    Berserker - Hyde (Alter):

    An agent of Beast VI/L, and thus considered an extension of her body and will. He spends nearly all of his time within the form of Hyde, a bestial, werewolf-esque hulk that breathes poison gas and ravages wildly about. His poison is distinct from that which The Hassan of Serenity wields, as it operates on a smaller scale and is used to bring about suffering instead of mere death.

    The sight of a former ally in such a woeful state brings Chaldea distraught.



    Assassin - The Hassan of Serenity (Alter):

    An agent of Beast VI/L, and thus considered an extension of her body and will. Has a harem of undead that she uses as a family, and is the one of Manaka's Servants who has some authority over the
    Chaos Tide
    black mud
    , as well as her usual poisonous techniques. Her role is primarily corruption, consumption, and assassination, so hardly anything has changed for her in that regard.

    The sight of a former ally in such a woeful state brings Chaldea distraught.



    "Caster" - Morgan le Fay:
    Arthur's sorcerous, and half-fairy sister, who acts as an adviser, researcher, and bureaucrat to Beast VI/L's Camelot.

    Of course, she's still shady and treacherous. However, she is continued to be kept on board with the group because any betrayals she'd act upon would be immediately negated and punished capitally.



    Beast VI/L - Beast 666 (Manaka Sayjou):
    The title of Beast VI/L is shared between two co-existing bodies:
    The red dragon that bears many heads, many crowns.
    The magus girl, greatest in centuries.
    Child and mother; one cannot be killed unless both are killed at once.


    "L," for "Lies" -- as in, not a true Beast of her own, but someone who has willfully forced their way into becoming a Beast, although she's still only one half of the true Evil of Humanity. Still, a Beast is a Beast, and thus a walking calamity meant to overwhelm all and to be overcome. The L can also stand for "Love," of which Manaka bears narrowly an abundantly, like a precision laser able to carve all the way through the Earth.

    Manaka Sayjou possesses the Skill Nega-Messiah/L.


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    BEAST VI/R'S FACTION ~ THE APOCALPYTIC SEVEN HILLS OF ROME


    "Saber" - Lucius Tiberius:
    When Chaldea initially hears upon the "presence of a Lucius" within Proto-Lostbelt Camelot, one of their first reactions is to hope against hope such a person would essentially be a form of the Bedivere encountered within the Sixth Singularity.

    Like in legend, the Florent-wielding Sword Emperor has his sights set on the conquest of England. This time, he doesn't have just his military might at his disposal, but also the mobile fortress city The Seven Hills of Rome--a Rome that slides over the land on a substrate of perpetually oozing
    Chaos Tide
    black filth
    . He burns with fiery passion and ambition, convinced that his actions will lead to a judgment day that will destroy the world as it known and allow a new Roman empire to rise from the ashes and flourish eternally and endlessly.

    At some point in the chapter, he 'conquers' Chaldea and forces them to work for him against Camelot.

    Unfortunately, he's Chaldea's best bet at victory.



    Caster - Simon Magus:
    Summoned by Beast VI/R, the "Great Power of God" acts a religious figure, adviser, and custodian to the Seven Hills faction. Collaborations between him and and Beast VI/R's abilities are responsible for the various systems in place responsible for running the capital. The primary faith of the Seven Hills is hybridized faith between Roman paganism and Simonianism, with Beast VI/R, Lucius Tiberius, and Simon Magus as the trinity of figures at the head of said system.



    Beast VI/R - Whore of Babylon (Nero Claudius Caesar Augustus Germanicus (Alter)):

    A Beast with Avenger aspects, she was drawn to Proto-Lostbelt Camelot by the strong presence of Beast VI/L. Her goal is to make contact with VI/R, unite their Saint Graphs, and draw forth the true Beast VI. However, the war between Beast VIs has drawn to more or less a stalemate of sorts, with neither side being able to retain lasting change in the theater. Chaldea's arrival will act as some sort of tipping point, of that there is no doubt.

    Nero (Alter) acts as the consort to Lucius Tiberius, in contrast to the lovesick marital relationship that Manaka and Arthur Alter have. An manipulator and puppet ruler of Lucius, although their objectives align so, so no one is displeased with the truth of their situation.

    "R," for "Right" -- as in, the proper Beast VI, although she's still only one half of the true Evil of Humanity. Still, a Beast is a Beast, and thus a walking calamity meant to be overwhelm all and to be overcome. The R can also stand for "Rider," that role which Nero has been selected for; that of a sacrifice/scapegoat put upon the highest and darkest pedestal, meant to herald in judgment day.

    She still possesses Aestus Estus: The Original Flame, her meteorite-metal forged sword, though as Beast VI/R it has a sleek black version of its usual design. However, there is a certain truth related to its stellar body of origin -- that it is a fragment derived from the same source as the entity referred to as Cthugha.

    Nero Claudius (Alter) possesses the Skill Nega-Messiah/R.



    "Foreigner" - Yang Guifei:
    The Cthugha-contracted Foreigner, and still as mysterious as ever, always ready to deliver an amusing but cryptic anecdote or piece of advice to her royals and Chaldea alike. A member of Lucius and Beast VI/R's court who functions as both a musician and a sometimes-mistress/bedbuddy to Lucius and Nero (Alter) both. Arrived due to her associations with Nero's sword, though there's more to it than that. Friendly, flirty, ditzy and keen on the surface, in actuality she hates Lucius Tiberius with a vindictively-searing passion, and smolders deeply, biding her time. Her true goal seems is to, once Lucius rules over the new eternal Rome, murder him and use his corpse as a catalyst to summon her true emperor love and put him on the throne and her at his side.

    ...Probably(?)

    Her role in the final battle becomes diminished on account of, unbeknownst to Chaldea, the Abigail Williams and Randolph Carter from Sub-Singularity Salem showing up to divert her away until she's intercepted by Brynhildr (Alter). Heavily wounded and forced to retreat, she loses the battle of flames with the love-struck blackened valkyrie, Through her flute of purple jade, she possesses a connection to Change'e, who is also, inexplicably, a Foreigner. In the epilogue of the story, the wounded-but-recovering Yang Guifei and Chang'e are having a discussion together as they observe the fading of the Proto-Lostbelt from the bleached Earth from a palace on the surface of the moon.


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    CHALDEA SECURITY ORGANIZATION AND MISC.


    Saber - Arthur Pendragon:
    He is the same Servant that Chaldea has encountered in the past--a "walking Singularity" who is able to Leyshift from timeline to timeline in pursuit of his target, Beast VI. Making contact with Chaldea once more, he has finally reached the end of his journey, and with that, his hunt can truly begin.

    He comes from another timeline extremely similar to the one that Beast VI/L comes from. The difference is that he, Ayaka, and their allies managed to defeat that Manaka. After the goodbyes were had, the successful Arthur was contracted by The World to pursue the successful Manaka from the alternate timeline. With his contract, he is obligated to destroy Beast VI in all of its forms. Then and only then can he know freedom and peace.



    Saber - Arturia Pendragon (Lily):
    A stray Servant who has been in Proto-Lostbelt Camelot for an indeterminate amount of time prior to Chaldea's arrival. She joins up with them fairly soon, although after fate brought Chaldea and Arthur together again. Arturia (Lily) is a steadfast ally and a source of encouragement to them, and builds a strong and close relationship with the older, male King Arthur, akin to that between a brother and sister.

    Her true Class is Assassin, and she not only wields Carwennan as a
    true
    secondary
    Noble Phantasm, she is also the former Servant of Beryl Gut.

    The story ends with her dying from her wounds and her prana depleted with a victorious smile on her face, as she's seated on the throne of Camelot, the act helping to restore Pan-Humanity-approved normalcy to the world.



    Lancer - Gareth:
    "The Rampaging Wolf", a Servant summoned by Chaldea. Her never-say-never fighting style and knack for subterfugeous activities make her a valued ally. Her spirit is tested by the corps of Mordred clones, for she has a tough time dealing with family members and trusted friends.



    Assassin - Agravain:

    A Servant summoned by Chaldea, to their initial wariness, on account of memories of the Sixth Singularity. Secretly happy to be summoned alongside Gareth, though he wishes that the circumstances behind such a reunion were better. Uses his Noble Phantasm, the Servant-sealing chains known as the Iron Commandments, to aid Chaldea.

    Aside from Gareth, still hates women.

    Prob an R-rarity.



    "Caster" - Magi☆Mari (Lily):
    A fashionable and radiant little sorcerer girl who lives a double-life of living on the down-low and wandering the ruined land and serving as a traveling musician/entertainer (re: idol) to the isolated pockets of survivors. Resembles a more 'compact version' of the Magi☆Mari that Dr. Romani Archiman used to fawn over during Chaldea's pre-Lostbelt days.

    In reality, the secret persona and reduced form of the Fate/Prototype world's Merlin, who is female. Ever since she failed at freeing Arthur from Manaka's malevolent influence, she's been a fugitive and pariah, forever wanted by the powers that be, whether Manaka's Camelot or Lucius' Rome.

    Will also appear in her adult form when she goes all out, practically begging for a unique Stage 3 art.



    Lancer - Elizabeth Bathory:
    The "fellow idol" of Magi☆Mari (Lily). The designated "bad girl" of the unit, in all senses of the phrase. Her torturous voice is mellowed out my Magi☆Mari's own, and elevated through duets and group songs. Her singles are still as deadly as ever.

    Really wants to bring the smackdown to Nero (Alter).



    Archer - Robin Hood:
    His ability to communicate with even the most weakly mainifested of fae ends up being useful to Chaldea and their interactions with the non-Manaka loyalist Phantasmals. Due to being summoned by Vivian, thus, acting on behalf of Gaia, his aspect as the May King/Green Man are increased. He, Gareth, Agravain, and the Perseus-es (Persei?) engage in a heist/jailbreak subplot during an idol concert at some point, in order to free Chaldea from Roman servitude.



    Assassin - Stheno:
    Summoned by Vivian, she acts as a form of support, as well as a means to offer a word of wisdom or two. Eventually becomes a "fellow idol" to the Chaldean sub-unit of Magi☆Mari (Lily) and Elizabeth Bathory, boosting the strength of their little group.

    Incidentally, Arturia (Lily) is also a member.



    Archer - Ko-Gil:
    Summoned sympathetically alongside False Avenger,
    Because the older Archer version of himself (Gilgamesh [Fate/Prototype]) died in the 1999 Second Holy Grail War and remained dead longer, and thus processed further by the Grail and Manaka, the fated ties between him and False Avenger are weakened/corrupted (in the style of corrupted data, not the blackening of Altered Servants), a younger version of Gilgamesh was summoned. He does, however, possess an antidote to the herb of immortality that enables him to take on older form, that of Gilgamesh (Fate/Prototype). The transformation to his Saint Graph is lasting, and he'd unlikely want to revert back to the younger form. One way or another, he's crucial when it comes to fighting Ozymandias (Alter).

    He has come to an answer regarding the truth of the very conflicts at the foundation of the entire Fate/Grand Order storyline, yet continues to aid False Avenger--and Chaldea--in turn. The Boy-King of Heroes is silent as to what this is, but it influences every action that he takes.



    Lancer - Cu Chulain (Fate/Prototype)
    :
    Summoned sympathetically alongside False Avenger. Although he lacks distinct memories of the 1999 Second Holy Grail War, he considers his relationship with her "a continuation." The slightly-more-youthful-than-usual Hound of Ulster is integral to the fight against Hyde (Alter).



    False Avenger - Red Riding Hood:
    "The Witch in Red" -- a Servant formed from Red Riding Hood, Aife, and Guinevere, with the former as the dominant aspect of the Saint Graph. Her various Heroic Spirit components were chosen by the World for their conceptual strengths and potential to collapse Proto-Lostbelt Camelot by utilizing her as a sacrificial being.

    --With Red Riding Hood, she is cursed by wolves, and has the means to rip her way from out from within those who would consume her. The technique utilizes consumption, rebirth, and death anew. The damage done to her Saint Graph is substantial, destabilizes her existence all the moreso. But, as long as she remains an Avenger, that hell will be hers to bear.
    ----With Aife, she has the means to birth forth an entity that can bring the fate of a celebrated hero to pass.
    ------Guinevere is similarly tied to fated ends. In this case, the conceptual ideal of the collapse of Camelot.

    A Pseudo-Servant of Ayaka Sayjou, Manaka's little sister. She originates from the same world that Beast VI/L and Arthur (Alter) come from, and was killed by Manaka during the climax of the 1999 Second Holy Grail War. Her soul was consumed, burned as fuel, burned away into nothing. This utter defeat of herself is what allowed her to be reborn so, broken as she is, tasked by the world to end Manaka's and Arthur (Alter)'s reign at all costs. Unfortunately, her memories of said Grail War are fragmented, and she is unable to recognize Arthur on site. Later on, as the story progresses, though...

    She, and her associated Servants, are the subject of a story arc wherein they're hunted by Chaldea on the Seven Hills' orders, to add their power to the Rome.



    Lancer - Perseus:
    A Servant summoned by Chaldea, albeit one whose summoning was influenced by the presence of Stheno and the existence of False Avenger within the Proto-Lostbelt. He uses his wry cunning, inherent cowardice, multitude of Noble Phantasms, and immortal-slaying Harpe to aid Chaldea in a number of espionage tactics.

    Often seen flicking his orange wakame hair.



    Rider - Perseus(?) (Fate/Prototype)
    :
    A Servant summoned by Chaldea, albeit one whose summoning was influenced by the presence of Stheno and the existence of False Avenger within the Proto-Lostbelt. His Saint Graph is almost identical to that of the other Perseus', but slightly different--an indicator that he's a version of the Heroic Spirit that originates from the same Fate/Prototype world's presence that dominates the Proto-Lostbelt?

    His true identity is a Phantom Servant, Chrysaor, the son of Medusa. Due to the circumstances of his birth, him being born from the blood spilled from Medusa's neck by Perseus, he considers the monster-slaying hero to be his "father." The significance of this is that he, despite his Divinity from both Perseus's Saint Graph (by means of being a son of Zeus) and being the biological son of Medusa, is a "half-human, half-gorgon" who initially, secretly wants to betray humanity and overthrow the Beast VIs so as to usher in a world where Phantasmals are the dominant species on Earth as a form of revenge for his mother's death. Eventually, due to interactions he has with Chaldea, his aunt Stheno, and Perseus that he eventually has a change of heart and fully devotes himself to them. His true Noble Phantasm is "Sword of the Chrysaor," which enables him to materialize the golden blade that is his namesake, as well as the crystallization of his soul. Despite being a half-divine, half-monstrous weapon, the sword in question lacks a notable legend of its own, but due to Chrysaor's role in mythology, can be used as a basis to be reforged into new and powerful Noble Phantasms. Sword of the Chrysaor is eventually used by the Lady of the Lake to create a new and special Excalibur for Arturia (Lily) to wield. He and Perseus die in battle, fighting alongside each other, having come to an understanding.

    Has a "divorced family" vibe with Perseus and Medusa. He also has a form where his hair is violet, longer, more gorgon-like.



    "Berserker" - Melion:
    The werewolf knight of Arthurian lore is a native to this realm and has managed to survive his years in the Singularity/Lostbelt by fully embracing his bestial side. Though he lives a largely nomadic lifestyle, what he has claimed as his home territory is Cadair Idris within the Snowdonia Mountains, where he lives alongside a pack of Phantasmal hounds, the Cŵn Annwn, for not all the Phantasmals within Proto-Lostbelt Camelot are loyal to Beast VI/L's faction. Few, small groups exist, their lifestyle at constant risk, for they know that mere contact with the Beast will be enough to sway them forevermore to its evil cause.

    Initially neutral, he reminds Chaldea of Patxi, for better or for worse, and eventually is convinced to put his lot in with Chaldea and their King Arthur Servants as he renews his oath to the true and uncorrupted Camelot.

    Through his connections to the Phantasmals, and boons and rituals performed by Vivian and the other supports, he unlocks his full potential: a means to call forth the Wild Hunt to aid Chaldea in the extended final battle, albeit at cost to the stability of his own existence, where he is subsumed within the phenomenon and is doomed to vanish from the world with it, to return only the next time it does so.

    Due to aspects of syncretism involving the Wild Hunt, in the final battle, encounters and works alongside versions of Drake and vanilla Arturia Pendragon, as well as a brief cameo from Last Episode Shirou because of the pathway/summoning being tied to Avalon.

    Prob the coveted storylocked R.



    Shielder - Galahad:
    Galahad reverse-summoned himself from Matthew Kyrielight's body and into the Proto-Lostbelt. Lord Camelot not only protects with the absoluteness of Camelot's walls, but also seals the kingdom of Camelot within.

    The reality of the situation is as such: through the combined strengths of the Round Table that he pilfered, and of Rhongomyniad, he serves as the keystone that keeps the wall of light up around the entirety of the region, keeping it isolated from the rest of the world. He intends to maintain his position until the false world fades out for good. However long that takes cannot be said, nor can it be said that his plan will succeed as he intends for it to.



    Vivian
    The Lady of the Lake has hidden herself away in a secretive semi-otherworld, living in exile separated and away from Beast VI/L's world.

    Her true identity is not Vivian, but Morgan. The Morgan le Fay who works for Beast VI/L's Camelot is a remote-controlled avatar--a soul-empty homunculus linked with her that she can control with a partitioned-off section of her mind. The true Vivian was murdered by Morgan, who took her place. Morgan, who had been tortured and punished extensively by Manaka, did this to secure a means to enable the fall of the dark Camelot.



    Add:
    Like in Pan-Human History, he was made by Morgan le Fay, his design based around the Logos React of Atlas Academy. Unlike in Pan-Human History, production on him was pushed forward, so he exists and in a working state while Arthur still lives. The question remains -- how did Morgan acquire knowledge of an Atlas project?

    Not only a seal for Rhongomyniad, but also bearing an artificial personality based off of that of Sir Kay's--and a few choice words for his 'brother,' he's an essential tool in the confrontation with Arthur Pendragon (Alter). Serves as a Rhongomyniad-upgrade for the pile bunker in Matthew's shield, a compliment to her Black Barrel-oriented long-distance shooting module. For better or for worse, he's still as chatty as ever.



    Crypter - Beryl Gut:
    The Fantasy Tree that used to be there as a lynchpin suited Manaka fine--it enabled her to focus her efforts on more important things; loving Saber, and other important matters. The absence of the tree increases her workload, but it's nothing unmanageable.

    The story goes that Beryl tricked them into destroying their Fantasy Tree themselves. The story goes that the residents of the Proto-Lostbelt hate him for this, for ensuring the destruction of their twisted home. That's not true. They hate him because their fates now all lie in Manaka's hands. A neutral entity that keeps the layer pinned indefinitely is far more preferable to a whimsical being who cares for nothing save for one narrow fixation.

    Beryl, hoping that that wouldn't be the case, that his actions ensured the Proto-Lostbelt's destruction, isn't particularly thrilled to be back. What does thrill him, though, is being able to see Matthew Kyrielight again...



    Beast VI - Beast of Revelations
    :
    The true Beast VI--Beasts VI/L and VI/R fused together, to form a new and singular entity. The worst-case scenario comes to pass. With its assemblage, Judgment Day will arrive.

    She/It/They possess(es) the Skill Nega-Messiah (True).



    Grand Saber - Excalibur

    Proto-Lostbelt Camelot is a location where other instances of Camelot would be summoned to, and eventually destroyed in countless conflicts with Beast VI/L's own Camelot. Part of this has to do with the warping of Pan-Human History and the very Texture of Man held in place by The Lance, and another part of this has to do with Grand Saber's Noble Phantasm. Because Manaka unlocked Arthur (Alter)'s Excalibur so that it could be used at full potential any time, without being hindered by any of the Thirteen Seals, this helped to free the seal on the consciousness of the nameless fairy princess who served as the body for the sword to be forged. She lacked true freedom, and the means to manifest herself, but she used her Noble Phantasm to call forth the wielders of Excalibur throughout history to help her defeat the Beast as a Grand Servant, and the fragility of reality enabled the very Camelots, the realms of the wielders, to likewise be called forth.

    The plan was partly in vain, but ultimately a success. Though nearly all the wielders of Excalibur were killed, their Excaliburs/aspects of Excalibur were collected by Manaka, used to reverse-engineer Arthur (Alter)'s Excalibur, break past its limits. This collection of Excaliburs/Excalibur aspects is used and combined together by Chaldea and its allies, forged and reforged by
    Morgan
    Vivian
    to form a new Excalibur, and the vessel for Grand Saber - Excalibur to manifest a human form.



    Beast IV - Cath Palug/Beast of Comparison/Primate Murder/White Beast of Gaia/Four-san:
    The combination of the various dog aspects within Proto-Lostbelt Camelot and the handiwork of Chaldea's supports coupled with his former status as the Fourth Beast enabled Chaldea's mascot character to once again take upon the mantle of Beast IV. This time, he uses it not to threaten humanity, but to again protect humanity

    The climax zeniths forth with an ought-to-be impossible union between Beast and Grand, enemies to a fault that are now bound together through their goal. Beast IV wields the sword form of Grand Saber within his mouth, which he uses to kill Beast VI, the beam of the Noble Phantasm cutting through the sky and wall of light surrounding Britain, blasting the disintegrating Beast VI into orbit.

    He possesses the Skill Nega-Hunger.





    notes

    This stemmed from a desire to solidify and archive my headcanon re:LB6, so I wanted to get it out before that story chapter became an actual thing. However, this being fanfiction, and an opportunity to lay some pipe (pipe dreams, that is ), it kind of ran from me a little bit. Part of me really wanted to incorporate a version of the Holy Roman Empire that's being patronized by the God of the Foreign Star with Charlemagne--Karl, specifically--and a surviving number of the Twelve Paladins, mostly as a means to stretch the Merlin connection and to increase the clusterfucky nature of the chapter. Ashiya Douman would also appear, and be affiliated with them, as would Kotaro and Danzo. I might patch this faction and these characters into v2.0, but I probably never will fully concept that version, so oh well. I'll admit, part of me would like to see a full, city-sized Carolus Patricius Auctoritas that uses a Fantasy Tree gifted from the big bad of Cosmos in the Lostbelt itself like a Rhongomyniad-esque lance named Giga Longinus engage in a kaiju battle with the Beasts.

    Another thing I thought about adding, but decided against, was a Helena Blavatsky Pseudo(?)-Servant where Simon Magus' wife--who was also named Helena, and a supposed avatar of the angel Ennoia--has taken control over her body/Saint Graph, but that seemed too IRUn on-brand for an already IRUn on-brand project so I decided to cut it.

    Also, (one of?) Nasu's tributes to all things Souls and Fromsoft. Also also, a reference to Evangelion and how the Angels wanna make contact with Lilith to Impact the world. Also also ALSO, a bit of idol anime.



    Wait...this means I have to now work on my Grand Saber sheet. Dammit.
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    Also are the mass produced Mordreds Mordreds or Proto-Mordreds?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Zork Knight View Post
    Have mercy on us mortals.

    Also are the mass produced Mordreds Mordreds or Proto-Mordreds?
    I didn't think about that until now, but logically probably Proto-Mordreds, since Arthur (Alter) is there and present to have provided the initial material.

    However, logically speaking, no reason for Para and Morgan to not culture vulture and re-purpose any other Mordreds from any of the other alternate Camelots that Beast VI/L's faction defeated, so maybe there're also clones of vanilla Mordred there as well.
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    Name: Spiritual Heart of Native Lands: America
    Subtitle: A Prank That Erased Civilization
    Lost Depth: B

    Origin: 1776 AD
    Location: America
    King: Coyote
    Crypter: ???
    Phantasy Tree: Deneb

    History:
    History has its winners and losers. When it comes to America, there is no shortage of tragedies, pain, and loss. The first major one being the mass cleansing of Native Americans so the then-travelers would have land to make towns and homes in. It is a dark, but necessary part of the nation's history that led to greater and bigger successes later down the line. This was not the case in the American Lostbelt.

    In pan-human history, during the American Revolution, several tribes gathered together to prepare a ritual. One that would open a gateway to their spirits and unleash them upon the British and Americans. Killing them and making them leave the lands while also turning the would-be nation into a "domain of the Other Side." It was because of Mages learning of it via word of mouth from several tribes did the Clocktower come down on them very hard. Destroying any resources needed to perform that ritual. As such, any attempts to end the Revolution abruptly were ended...

    In the Lostbelt, that never came as the Natives caught said mage and killed him. Using his items for support, they commenced the ritual which opened a gateway to the Other Side. From it, Coyote emerged, a trickster well-known for his many identities and tales from across the tribes. The tribes agreed to let him lead the army under the condition he would not harm the land nor damage the forests. Any towns and "Outsider" buildings were under his judgment to either destroy or keep as trophies.

    With his word, Coyote agreed as he leads the army of spirits into the Revolution and crushed all "outsiders" with his army. With wits and skill, he sunk all the ships and shipwrecked several to prevent any form of escape. While many died, some managed to escape or hide in the forests as the ritual spread all over America. Turning it into a land where spirits roam freely and mystery is kept on Earth via the ritual, now a door that connects the land to the Other Side.

    Those who lived survive in forts and other non-advanced villages. Learning to hunt and survive among the spirit-filled lands as Coyote uses clones of himself to watch over the land. Striking down anyone who would dare raise a weapon against the Native Americans. Meanwhile, the Clocktower tries to figure out a plan to stop the ritual before it spreads outwards. However, a part of the Clocktower's group survived in America forming a secret army that plans to bring down the tribes. Chaldea enters the world into the Clocktower army, now called the "American Resistance." After some long discussions, they were allowed to join if it means that they can help stop the tribes.

    Servants in the Lostbelt:

    Geronimo (Caster): A living variant found in the Lostbelt. Living with his tribe, the Apaches, he is their shame and mediator between them and the spirits. He is also a key member of the "Circle of Spirits." A group of shaman who come together yearly to discuss the lands and other matters concerning the spirits and the remaining "outsiders."

    While he is confident in his tribe, he bears no hate for the "Outsiders" and their attempts to kill them. He feels that while justified in their anger, it should be the tribes on the East Coast that should be more to blame than his tribe. But only fights so he can keep his tribe's pride alive.

    George Washington (Rider): The first president of the US summoned as a Servant. He helps lead the resistance and ignite a light of hope with the remaining Americans stuck on the now converted land. As he was among those who died in the "Great Wave," he instead claims God summoned him back to the Earth to help bring people hope and a fighting chance against the spirits.

    Also a supporter of Chaldea who helps them do ground assaults on tribes defending the original ritual grounds once it is found.

    Davy Crockett (Archer): The Lostbelt version of the man whose tall-tales outlived the real man. He is a man who became the same person plays and literature told as a member of the resistance to take back America from the spirits. Now in a robotic vessel housing his soul, he is among the longest-lasting members before the Counter Force arrived.

    He was a leader who did amazing feats no thanks to mystic codes provided to him by the magi side of things. After a battle with Geronimo left him nearly dead, a magi transferred his soul into an experimental robotic body which now acts as the "reborn" Davy Crockett. Same in the mind, but adjusting to his new body.

    He is the first major ally of Chaldea in the Lostbelt.

    Thomas Edison (Caster): Tesla's rival and a Servant who played a big role in E Pluribus Unum, the fifth original singularity. He was summoned to help improve the weapons of the American resistance and develop anti-mystery weaponry. While he feels the pain Ritsuka is going through, he tells him of a time one of his factory was burned down and he got back up. Feeling that while Coyote is technically, well, really right for his actions. The mass genocide on Americans isn't the right answer for helping preserve the culture of the Native Americans.

    So he continues to be an ally like he would be in E Pluribus Unum. This time is a big help throughout the story instead of being an enemy for most of it.

    Tecumseh (Caster): A member of the "Circle of Spirits." Coyote blessed him with a long-life so he would act as a spiritual guide to both old and new members of the group. Often acting as either the top religious head or leading rituals to please the spirits.

    He is among the largest threats to Chaldea due to being one to reject non-native ideals like his pan-human self. And often is accompanied by Native soldiers and spirits.

    Sherlock Holmes (Ruler): One of Chaldea's smartest members. He decides to accompany Chaldea in their exploration of the American Lostbelt in hopes of seeing this spirits for himself. Curious as to how the "Domain" stabilizes the spirits' ability to stay on Earth. He becomes the head investigator in figuring out what the tribes used for the original ritual.

    Robin Hood (Archer): Among the servants summoned in the Lostbelt. He is a trap expert and archer who helps scout out the territory for others to look for spirits and other Native Americans soldiers on patrol. Rather chill among the people, he has earned some respect among the former criminals for his fame and help in keeping people alive.

    Helps Chaldea out on scouting missions and eventually getting to the tribe that started the history of the Lostbelt. But not before dying taking out Tecumseh with a poison arrow to the head.

    Boudica (Rider): A Servant summoned by the Counter Force. She was convinced to defect by Coyote's words saying that what the Native Americans went through is similar to what Nero did to her tribe. Now a member of the tribes, she works to help preserve them and teach the Natives stuff from her own lands. A period long before Britain had grown into the nation it was and safe enough to teach natives about.

    Treated as kin by the tribes for her history, she helps guard the main ritual grounds with Geronimo. The man developed a bond with her over their history and feelings about their respective tribes. She died alongside Geronimo when the Resistance launched an assault to capture the ritual grounds at the end of the Lostbelt. Hoping to use the gate to instead curse it to weaken the spirits enough so facing Coyote was possible.

    Sitting Bull (Archer): The servant of the Crypter. A man whose greatest feat was defeating General Custer at the Battle of Little Bighorn thanks to a premonition he had. While glad to see a world where his people thrive across the land without the intrusion of the Americans. He is unsure if what they did was right. And especially with Coyote as he tries to tell his Crypter to take everything he says with a grain of salt. Coyote is a well-known trickster and he might have plans against him too if he proves to be a threat to the spirit.

    He is a patient man, often using his premonitions to help guide the tribes. With his experience against the Whites and winning against an army of them, Sitting Bull was a natural fit in Coyote's army.

    Iktomi (Assassin): Coyote's apprentice, the cultural hero of the Lakota and a fallen god/trickster in the shape of a spider. It is a spirit said to have taught humans language and communication. As Coyote's right hand man, it does hand out technology only if the tribes are seriously threatened and often helps with establishing all sorts of traps. He has made a mana network in the shape of a web that allows Iktomi to communicate with Coyote anywhere in the nation.

    Using his Noble Phantasm, "Dreamcatcher," Iktomi can use the aforementioned items to capture good dreams to send over to various tribes in their sleep. The Dreamcatchers granting boosts and blessings to everyone to prepare them for the next day. Although Iktomi is working on a variant which can let "Outsiders" receive bad dreams which demoralize them. So far, not a lot of attempts have worked like a lot of pranks the Spider-shaped trickster does.

    During the halfway point, Chaldea is caught in a trap by Iktomi who uses his web-network to inform Coyote he caught the "Invaders." In a last ditch effort, George uses his rifle to shoot down the spider. After a long-grueling fight, George and Iktomi both kill each other with the web vanishing. With a single blow, George brought a great victory via disabling the network Coyote used to easily track down the "Outsiders." Giving the Resistance a fighting chance and a path to Coyote's fort.

    Coyote (Assassin): The King of the Lostbelt. The first spirit summoned by the ritual and leader of the initial wave of spirits. Coyote established a fort for his spirits where the White House would be. Covering the place with totem poles and other relics from all the tribes in the nation.

    Well known for his smarts, he is also known as a person whose jobs and morality change between tribes. This is because Coyote liked humans in general and found messing with them and other divine entities amusing. So to establish himself in Pan-Human History, he made up a bunch of clones that he sent out to have the tribes make tales of him. The general idea being that he would be ingrained into the human mind, letting him be summoned as a "Servant" to have more fun in a future era.

    This Coyote is the original spirit. Able to create said clones and send them after his foes, he used his wits to make sure no one left the nation and that tons of people were killed. Sure, mass genocide isn't exactly his cup of tea, but if it allows him to stay a bit longer, why not take it? Now he rules over the nation with charms that prevent any "outsiders" from entering his fort.

    And only thanks to Edison's genius was that barrier broken. But only after many tries and loses did finally Chaldea reach him. His tricks and traps kept resetting their progress and the clones made fights a lot harder than normal.

    He is the last opponent to fall before taking on the Fantasy Tree Deneb. With the combined efforts of Davy Crockett, George Washington, and Chaldea, the trickster was finally defeated as he fell and faded away.
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    >no Thunder Bird
    >no Underwater Panther
    >no Horned Serpent
    >not even a single Wendigo

    Missed opp, IMO
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    Quote Originally Posted by ItsaRandomUsername View Post
    >no Thunder Bird
    >no Underwater Panther
    >no Horned Serpent
    >not even a single Wendigo

    Missed opp, IMO
    Huh, I was more focusedd on the Servants or those who would play a big part...

    If I come back to this idea, I might have to focus on bringing in this beasts as well. Like how Wendigos stalks the woods or hold there's a goddamn Thunder Bird flying around swooping and crushing ships like its a small fish.

    As my idea itself, I edited it with information from a version of it on Spacebattles that I copied over since it had more stuff in it.

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    Egyptian Losbelt of the Sole Sun

    Subtitle: Queen of the true Light an Shadow
    Lost Depth:Rank C~*
    *(but the measurements are indcating that the Lost Depth may increase.or is incorrect)
    Origin: c. 1300 BC
    Location: Egypt
    Queen/King: Neferuaton/Seth
    Crypter:
    The Misterious Phantom
    Fantasy Tree: "Kegare"


    Events: The Starting Point of this Lostbelt were as Neefertiti plead for help against the Rebelions of her and Akhenatons Aton worshipp and they faced an Revolt of the Priest caste and the of them ignited regbbelion of the citizens,and that the two beings that helped the royal pair demanded that he make a choice but unlike in the Greater History where Akhenaton had the inner emotional strenght and self preservation instinct to discard his initially Morale ,but in this timeline did Akhenaton not had the mental strenght to overcome his hesitations which angered Nefertiti so that her affection for him vanished and she replaced Akhenaton as Pharao aswell received from Seth (in contrast to the greater history where Seth didnt atempt to interven) help aswell became he her new Husband and Pharaoh King to the Queen Nefertiti.

    Flashback

    After she received from Seth and Aton their power as she made an pact with them ,approached she him again he was as he saw her initially surprised and his jaw has touched the Floor out of her sight she was even more beautifull as she normally was ,and he then after he regained his composure asked he if she made the contract with Seth-Aton which she affirmed ,

    "Look what they offered me they awakened my trus self ! you should also give them an Chance Akhenaton so could you even exceed the expectations of your Father !"

    It were already Night and they were Standing on the terrace and he turned towards the Balustrade where he leaned his arms on and answered,

    "Maybe you are Right Nefertiti ,i should think more on my Family and then on the wellbeing of my subjects ...
    ...i am sorry i had to trust you like i deed it always ."

    Nefertiti walked towards him and placed her Hand softly on his shoulders as she said,

    " That is good to hear Akhenaton that you came to senses but its to late !!" said she as she stabbed him with an Dagger .

    "Wrakhe , What hav … you...why ?" was he asking her .

    "your were not determined enough to preserve you Reign and to protect your Family so have i to take it in my Hands " does she answer in n slighly gleefull voice tone.


    Then did she with Seth plundered the tombs of the former Pharaon to create an "Symbol of Worship of Aton " and then did she used it to capture the other Egyptian deities and used their powers to enhance the might of Aton and also to elevate Nefertiti to the Rank of an Divine Spirit so that she can becoming an immortal Founder similar like Hrus once was.

    Then after she used the power of Atonion to etablish her total conquer of Ta-meri* and then was she shortly after that victory approached by an Masked Man who told her that their are other Pantheons like those of the Hitites or those of the Phoenician example wise ,so noticed she that they are more deities that could be offered Atons aswell a greater world to rule which piqued her interest.

    *Ta-meri=means beloved land nd where the nam old egypt People specially the pharaoh called their Country.

    So did she succed with assistence of the Masked Individual which as he was reluctant to Name himself did she gave him the Name "Akhet"(old egyptic for horizon) found out that "Atonion" had the might to summon the old pharaoh so did she used it to summon three older Rulers.

    Then did "Akhet" told her of the exitence of an "Device" that belongs to an Being of an other world similar to Aton self that enables her to reshape the world´,which made Seth and Neferuaton more then interested so helped Akhet them to connect with "Kegare" and after that to break through the vail of the Culturspehres to attack other countries and capture their respective Deities with focused Attention on their Solar deities .

    After their preparation launched Neferuaton attacks on Europe ,North America,the old kingdoms of Mesopotamia,Persia,India and the africa souther of egypt.

    She succeded in that she was able to conquer the iberic Peninsula and capture the majorit of their deities ,she was able to defeat the Hitities and capture their deities aswell was able to capture some Near east Region deities ,they were though unable to directly defeat the Greek/Roman Pantheon though they were able to capture Serene,Apollo and some minor deities.

    Also did they succed in to conquer the african continent and capture the majority of the African deities.

    Aswell were they able to capture several deities of south america until Poseidon with some other Storm Gods of other pantheons where able to create a the Sun Blocking Storm-Barrier that protect the South American continent .

    This caused that several thousand humans fleed out from europe into the (today) Rusian and central asiatic regions respectively to the far north from Neferuatons Draconoid,demonic Armies until they reached the spehre of the Slavic ,Scandinavian,Celtic or asiatic deities .

    on the other side has Seth with powers of Aton otained the rule over the underworld of Egypt by defeating Osiris and with "Arkhat"s Expertise did he ripped apart the Realm borders to the other culturspehre underworlds so that he invades the other underworld like Kur or Hades example wise moved by this threat has build all remaining Underworld /Afteflife world deities an Alliances with Hades as their Leader.



    Now is Neferuaton returned to Egypt and Focus her effort to reshape Africa thus are the majority of her hords in Africa ...

    Involved Parties:


    Neferuaton/Seth/Aton


    Neferuaton

    Is the Queen of the Lostbelt ,she spend the majority of her time with Governing Nefer-Achet-Aton and with to coordinating between Seths underworld and her Kingdom.



    Seth


    Is the known old egypt deities of Chaos,War,Disorder aswel some other Domains. He is the Lostbelt King beside his wife Nefertiti, and the Father of Neferuseth/Neferusobek Alters Childrenn.
    HE spend the majority of his time either with his wiges or in the underworld realm .


    Nefertitis Childrenn
    value


    Neferuseth

    She is Neferutons Twin Queen and first General which provide with her Dragon and Draconoid Army one Main Force of her Army aswell is she mainly apointed to Control the Areals outside of Neferuatons privileged Areals aswell the of her conquered Regions .

    Unlike the two other servants that were summoned through Atonion is he incarnated in flesh and sirred with Seth some powerfull childs.

    She is an Avenger/Rider class servants


    Neferuseths Childs

    Are the Childrenn ofNeferuseth and Seth ,they are five siblings and the most of them are possessing important positions in Neferuatons Kingdom or Army,after the first report are their strenght comparable to servants.

    currently known Children:

    Rashida ,she is an commander in Neferuseths Forces.




    Nitocris Alter

    Was summoned before by Chaldea but shortly after discovering this Lostbelts existence did she vanish …




    Apepi I

    Was actually not an whole Heroic spirit more an Wraith that normaly isnt able to manifest as servant on his own .

    One of his skills is Magic Resistence .


    Aton

    ???


    Minions


    Draconoid ,a Dragonlike Lizardmen which are Building an third of Neferuatons Army and serve there as Footsoldiers ,they are similar inteligent like humen (Maybe a bit quick to angeretc).
    They possess physical powers beyond normal Humans and are havng like Dragons an sort of breath attack but in comparison to real Dragon Roar are theirs comparable with pistol of Rifle shoots.they are armed with Spear or Swords.


    Sphinx-like Golems which are used in Nefer-Achet-Aton as Security and Patrol Units.




    Resistence Movements


    There are existing at the Moment 7 resistence Groups withhin egypt and outside across Africa respectively the conquered Areas seven greater Groups of Survivors out of the areas outside Ta-meris,



    Horus Child Guardians
    Are four Servants that saved the lst Sun deity of Egypt the Horus Child from Neferuseths Units and are currently hiding themselves somewhere in the east egypt...

    They are :


    ---

    ---

    ---

    Gunner Saint Barbara,



    European Pantheon States
    value


    Underworld Alliances


    Hades Chosen leader of the Alliance due to that he is an master tactical aswell due that in his underworl an other threat lies (the chained Chronos) aswell due that it is the nearest world to the egypt underworld .

    Ereschkigal

    It is the original pure form but she has still somehow all memories of the Mesopotamian Singularity and has still an fondness for Chaldea out of reminence for that time (as pseudo servant)

    Mot

    The Canaanitic death deity one that were an surviving deity ,they opened the the Canaanitic underworld to give the Living an Refuge from Neferuaton/Neferuseths Forces ,but is currently several weakened due to this has Mot contacted Hades and asked for help which HAdes answered in that he did send Three Hekatonkheire, 5000 Underworld Warriors,aswell several Dragon carriers to Transport the Living humen to Hades and then to Hand over them to the Authority Spehre of the Mesopotamian deities.

    Does at the Moment act as Outpost for the Alliance.



    Cypter:The Misterious Phantom


    "Arkhat"
    A Mystrious Person which voice is sounding slightly mechanicaly.He approached Neferuaton shortly after her conquer of Ta-meri and provided her and Seth many Thaumaturgic Wares and world Knowledge,he is an distanced individual ,as he doesnt involve himself much outside his Services towards Neferuaton.

    Towards Neferuaton does he act like an Advisor so is he allowed to walk in her Dominion unhindered and has an sort of Authorithy over her Units.Though

    he seem to possess atleast knowledge About the usage of True Magic... as he seems to be able of
    Teleportation
    instantious Movement




    Chaldea + allies

    Ritsuka/Gudako Fujimaru

    Mashu


    ---
    ?




    please note:is still in working.
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    At least you said it's a WIP

    The concept has potential, certainly, but please, PLEASE, get yourself a beta or something to go over your fanfiction content. This is nigh unreadable.
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    Hey everyone new here but hope to be posting frequently. Here’s a list belt idea I had.

    Name: Pandemic in the Glimmering Theocracy: Mali
    Subtitle: Golden Nation of Statues
    Lost Depth: B+
    Origin: ? AD 1325
    Location: Mali, Africa
    King: Musa I
    Crypter: Kirin Zepel
    Fantasy Tree: Midas

    History: TBD

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    It's a good foundation. However, it has a few formatting issues and could definitely use more work.

    Quote Originally Posted by Perry Ellis. View Post
    Origin: ? AD 1325
    Should be 1320? AD

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    Location: Mali, Africa
    It just needs to be Mali.

    Quote Originally Posted by Perry Ellis. View Post
    servants: Musa I (Ruler), Aristotle (Caster), Ophiuchus (Lancer), False Rider/ Pale Horse (Rider),
    Capitalize "servants", also you don't need to refer to the Pale Rider as False Rider.

    Other than those nitpicks, I'm interested in seeing what you have in store for the finished version of this. Seeing an African Lostbelt that isn't Egypt should be interesting.

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    Now, with that out of the way, is there anyone here with at least decent knowledge of Tsukihime. I watched the April Fools F/GO X Tsukihime collab CV earlier today and it got me wondering what an actual Tsukihime event would look like. However, my knowledge of Tsukihime only really covers the basics and I would like assistance from someone who knows it better than I do. Will be sure to credit you when I publish the finished version of the Singularity.


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    Who would be the most likely candidate for the King of a Trojan Lostbelt? I feel like it might be either Priam or Hektor but I'm not entirely sure.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Lambda-Nu View Post
    Who would be the most likely candidate for the King of a Trojan Lostbelt? I feel like it might be either Priam or Hektor but I'm not entirely sure.
    Oh, if you're thinking of a Trojan Lostbelt an interesting possibility would be one where Troia survives to come of age instead of being killed by Achilles. Since the prophecy was that Troy would never fall if he reached adulthood and he'd become a super strong warrior who surpassed even Hector. Seems like a natural choice for a "what if" scenario, which is what Lostbelts are all about.

    Sorry if that doesn't directly address what you asked. I just thought it seemed interesting.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    Oh, if you're thinking of a Trojan Lostbelt an interesting possibility would be one where Troia survives to come of age instead of being killed by Achilles. Since the prophecy was that Troy would never fall if he reached adulthood and he'd become a super strong warrior who surpassed even Hector. Seems like a natural choice for a "what if" scenario, which is what Lostbelts are all about.

    Sorry if that doesn't directly address what you asked. I just thought it seemed interesting.
    It actually does directly address the question. Though, could you send me a link to...whatever articles you found about Troia? I'm trying to find something but it's only giving me articles on the city and not the person you're talking about.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Lambda-Nu View Post
    It actually does directly address the question. Though, could you send me a link to...whatever articles you found about Troia? I'm trying to find something but it's only giving me articles on the city and not the person you're talking about.
    My bad, I meant "Troilus" but mispelled it. Sorry if that wasted your time searching for a name that doesn't exist.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    My bad, I meant "Troilus" but mispelled it. Sorry if that wasted your time searching for a name that doesn't exist.
    Ah, I see. Thanks!


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    Name: Blessed Isle Amidst the Ocean of Cinder: Elysium
    Subtitle: Eternal War of Divine Inheritance
    Lost Depth: A

    Origin: 1260 B.C
    Location: Greece
    King: Hekate
    Crypter: ???
    Fantasy Tree: Sauron



    [History]



    “Troia will not fall without Achilles.”

    Such was the prophecy given to the Greeks when they questioned a seer upon at the start of their campaign to retrieve King Menelaus’ wife, Helen, at the behest of his older brother Agamemnon in a war that would shake the ancient greek world and plummet into ten years of war, pitting its most talented warriors and most cunning generals against one another into what would become the greatest conflict of millennia to come.

    In proper human history, the prophecy came to pass when the Greeks successfully sacked the walled city, scattering its people to the winds and butchering its proudest heroes. Closing the curtain on what would be the greatest conflict of its time.

    Yet, in this timeline, it did not come to pass.

    For Achilles could not be found.

    Searching high and low, the Greeks sought the young man who would become the key to their victory everywhere, but could not find him. The man who’d once been offered eternal glory had chosen to live as a simple man, vanishing from history. Yet, his peers would not be denied. Fleets sailed and armies marched and, because Fate decreed that the Greeks could not lose, but nor could they win, the war… continued.

    For a year. Then ten. Then a hundred. Then a thousand.

    On and on and on thE war spiralled further and further out of control. Empires rose and fell, a million Persians dying beneath Troia’s walls, their curses bound to the very foundation stones themselves, seepign into the land and sea. A million barbarians, from Germania to Scythia, came to stand on those walls! And they too died, their curses bound to the air and the heavens, their anguished cries and hateful roars carried by the winds to the four corners of the world.

    Troia became a City of Curses and Death.

    The God War lasting for eternity.

    Even the gods, foreign and familiar alike, came to fight this war. Champions, avatars, and even the Divine Spirits themselves marching to battle. And, brought low in defeat, each and every one cursed the very world, swearing vengeance. That they would end the war by destroying Troia

    In the end, three thousand years of unending, unceasing, all consuming war has passed. Every nation, every race, every people in all the world exists to fight in this conflict or in the thousand, thousand smaller proxy wars waged across the surface of the planet. And only the appearance of the Divine Beasts and True Daemons, walking disasters like Jormungandr, Surtur, Apophis, the Rakshasa, the Yaoguai, the returned Titans, and even worse who brought about temporary islands of unity.

    But not peace. Never peace.

    For humanity is now a War Breed, a race of warriors cultivated by the gods to be their soldiers and engines of destruction. Their blood thick with golden ichor, their bodies warped by procreating with phantasmal species, faeries, and demons of all kinds. Hardened by countless centuries of unending slaughter and violence, all they know is to march beneath the banners of warring, twisted deities bearing the names of the original Olympians, who have passed on their Authority and Grudge onto new bodies, their original forms ravaged by the conflict.

    In this World, humanity is united. There are no Greeks. No Trojans. No Persians. No Men of Indus. No Men of Chin. No Men of Nippon. No Men of the Maya.

    Only an army maintained by Immortal Generals and uncaring Gods.



    [City States]



    The last remnants of civilization, the city states are more akin to strongholds ruled by the gods, where they maintain order through power, allowing humans to flourish underneath them as soldiers and weapons of war. Of the few cities that remain, twelve are ruled by those who'd come to obtain the Authorities and power of the original Olympian gods, while Troia became seeped in so much death and destruction that the god of the abyss, Hades took residence and claimed it for himself, only to later pass on his own Authority. In this world, humans live to fight and there is no other aspect their lives more important than combat. They breath it, live for it, marry for it, train their children since early age in order to one day become warriors just as they were. Those few who were exceptionally talented or possessed special talents were granted the ranks of General, as well as immortality by their respective gods.

    This world has no dead heroes to mourn. For heroes live in the present. Not the past.


    List of City States:


    - Troia Elysium
    King: Hades III (Hekate
    )

    - Sparta
    King: Ares VII (Quetzalcoatl)


    - Colchis

    King: Aphrodite X (Ishtar
    )

    - Argos
    King: Hermes IV (Lu Bu Fengxian
    )

    - Athens
    King: Athena III (Scathach
    )

    - Olympia
    King: Zeus II (Alexander the Great
    )

    - Samos
    King: Hera IX (Saint Martha
    )

    - Rhodes
    King: Demeter VI (Ereshkigal
    )

    - Delphi
    King Apollo II (Karna
    )

    - Ephesus

    King: Artemis V (Orion
    )

    - Thebes

    King: Dionysus I


    - Lemnos
    King: Hephaestus III (Sigurd
    )

    - Atlantis
    King: Poseidon II (Triton
    )

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