Hey newbaguette here and I just want to know if anyone has a list of the criticism against GB for In flight and HoS? A cursory google search doesn't turn up much and I don't wanna read through pages of reviews on the fanfiction website. If not I'd like to hear about some common things that are flaws in his stories. Please don't just say "he sucks" or "he writes Shirou wrong"; I'd like concrete and specific examples. For example, something like "GB's Shirou in HoS and In flight jokes about killing too much, something that original Shirou doesn't do."