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    Quote Originally Posted by Lambda-Nu View Post
    I have to forfeit. I’m sorry. I tried. I truly, honestly tried to come up with something but between work and finals, I just can’t figure out the Skills!
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    Yeah, Santa Jack. I have the Noble Phantasm and a small backstory done, but it’s just the thrice-damned Skills.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Lambda-Nu View Post
    Yeah, Santa Jack. I have the Noble Phantasm and a small backstory done, but it’s just the thrice-damned Skills.
    would you think that one day more time would help you Lambda if so we could make it tomorow ?
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    You still have time, finish it in an hour or so!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Lambda-Nu View Post
    I have to forfeit. I’m sorry. I tried. I truly, honestly tried to come up with something but between work and finals, I just can’t figure out the Skills!
    Well, that would just be anti climatic. Perhaps we can make a provision. I leave the choice to you, Anju.

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    As promised, my entry for the Jack contest. For something written in my very limited one week, I think its quite decent but not up to snuff with my usual ones. That's mostly because I have more time to write more, so a more completed Sheet would probably look very different. I also decided to focus more on the tragic side of being accused of Jack the Ripper rather than the killer themselves for an interesting comparison to Salieri - the main inspiration for this Sheet.

    EDIT: Oh, I guess it's not going on then? Not sure now.

    AVENGER JACK



    [Consulting Detective?]


    PROFILE
    Class: Avenger Alternative Class: Caster True Name: Jack the Ripper [?]
    Alignment: Chaotic Evil Region: England Source: Historical [Nineteenth Century]
    Setting Creation: Anju Addams Main Works Appearance: Fate/Grand Order
    Titles: [Consulting Detective?] [Sir Conan Doyle] [Sherlock Holmes]
    Gender: Male Height: 183cm Weight: 65kg

    Manifestation Cost: Low Armament: Knives Attribute: Earth
    Compatible Master: Run Ru Natural Enemy: Sherlock Holmes
    Character Design: Majamari CV: Mizushima Takahiro

    PARAMETERS
    STR: D END: D AGI: D
    MAN: B LUK: A PHA: B

    CLASS SKILLS
    Avenger A
    The gathering of hostile grudges from amongst the populace.
    Sir Arthur Conan Doyle’s rumoured existence as Jack the Ripper manifested.
    The hatred and spite poured onto him without proof nor evidence through the people.
    No matter what happens, vile curses arrive from that status and accumulate as strength.

    Oblivion Correction A
    The remembrance of every painful thought or feeling possible.
    It represents Sherlock Holmes and his most famously perfected memories.
    A mind palace filled with the detailed names of those who previously accused him.
    Revenge shall be awaited from deep within. Naught remains of his lost desire for justice.

    Self Replenishment [Mana] C
    An existence which is living to collect magical energy stores.
    The burning vengeance come to those who insulted Sherlock Holmes embodied.
    Magical energy is manifested through vile thoughts. Tainted evil swirls around him.
    Nothing changes until equivalent pain is given to those needing an appropriate punishment.

    PERSONAL SKILLS
    Innocent Monster B
    One tainted appearance distorted through monstrous reputation.
    This originates from the rumours of murdering surrounding Sir Conan Doyle.
    His mentality warped and twisted into obsessing about committing perfect crimes.
    Broken as the Avenger class, functional composition with Mental Pollution is included.

    Inherent Insight A Plus Plus
    The unparalleled wisdom that grasps all available information.
    Sherlock Holmes’s genius deduction techniques put on complete display.
    It divulges everyone’s history, weaknesses, emotional state and criminal ability.
    He utilizes this for framing others of his crimes using bonus modifiers for investigating.

    Human Anatomy Research B
    An understanding of humanoid bodies developed from studies.
    The medical degree in various subjects once possessed by Sir Conan Doyle.
    Knowing where to strike the killing blow becomes exceedingly useful as the Jack.
    He became good enough that making their death look different is entirely possible.

    NOBLE PHANTASM
    ELEMENTARY MY DEAR - MYSTERY AT WHITECHAPEL
    [RANK: B][TYPE: ANTI WORLD] [RANGE: ONE] [MAXIMUM NO. OF TARGETS: ONE PERSONS]


    The ultimate technique belonging to murderer Sherlock Holmes.
    It manifests into multiple solutions to his crimes of killing someone else.
    Random evidence becomes existent. Witness statements become contradicting etc.
    Everything surrounding his misdeeds turns to scrambled nonsense with no real proof.
    Without discernment nor human observation, finding the proper answer is nearly impossible.
    Sherlock Holmes’s Noble Phantasm [Elementary My Dear] creating solutions completely inverted.

    PERSONAGE
    FIRST PRONOUN:
    私 [WATASHI]
    SECOND PRONOUN: 貴方[ANATA]
    THIRD PRONOUN: あの方 [ANOKATA] 彼奴 [AITSU]

    NATURE
    He acts rather strange around various people as the Avenger.
    Inside his dark eyes is hidden the gaze of someone with wicked thoughts.
    His usually pleasant smile has itself become monstrously twisted in appearance.
    Becoming corrupted through Mental Pollution, Sherlock Holmes’s old personality was lost.
    Nothing remains of that previous person. No longer shall his dynamic nor fantastic quirks exist.

    His desire is the crafting of the most perfect crime possible.
    For that reason alone, he creates his own murders and blames others.
    The famed detective never becomes the suspect. All suspicions are cleared away.
    Emboldened by such feats, Sherlock Holmes continues to kill people and bring them pain.
    A murderous monstrosity. One single innocent monster. Human lives twisted him so he twists back.

    DIALOGUE EXAMPLES
    [Summoned] Servant Avenger has been summoned. Jack the Ripper makes your pleasurable acquaintance. Let’s commit the perfect crime. Together.

    [Likes] I want to create the most absolute crime possible. Afterwards, I shall deduce the culprit with my own hands. There is nothing better than watching others despair.

    [Dislikes] Those who made me like this. Before - I was not Jack the Ripper. I was someone else instead. My name has been dragged through the mud. Who am I?

    [Holy Grail] Oh Holy Grail. Let us craft the greatest murder in the world. Jack the Ripper will sing a song of death for you. Oh Holy Grail. Hear my wish.

    [Helena Petrovna Blavatsky] I remember you but only barely. Someplace, somewhere, our hearts were once connected. Isn’t that right? My dearest Jack the Ripper. Shall we dance together?

    [Sherlock Holmes] I am who I am. You resemble me in this manner. Are we the same? Is it possible that I am you? Perhaps I even created you. If so, then I am sorry. My name is Jack the Ripper. A single innocent monster.

    [Jack the Ripper] My other self. My different persona. Jack the Ripper existed as a proper person except no one ever captured them. Similar to me, your existence is merely the fabrication of the people. Perhaps. Possibly.

    LEGEND
    Another version of Jack the Ripper. Another side to that person.
    Embodying every bizarre theory regarding his identity; one horrid killer.
    Nothing more than that. Nothing but that. Jack the Ripper turned into exactly this.
    Feared and hated by the populace, they became a living nightmare made of endless faces.
    Prince Albert. Charles Lutwidge Dodgson. Helena Petrovna Blavatsky. Florence Nightingale. Sir Arthur Conan Doyle.

    Each name represented those accused of being Jack the Ripper.
    Avenger appears as Sir Conan Doyle [Sherlock Holmes] whenever summoned.
    An impossibility borne from scorn received by that great author generations ago.
    In other words, Sir Conan Doyle’s malice towards being accused completely manifested.
    Such painful memories of dark times which keep surrounding him. Something never escaped.
    Materialized around the existence known as the detective writer, [false] Jack the Ripper was born.

    His manifestation hijacked the saint graph of Sherlock Holmes.
    This great detective who had previously lived [probably] in proper history.
    Someone like that should have easily captured Jack the Ripper without question.
    Both lived during that same time. Both worked in that same area. Why did it not occur?
    Accordingly, Sherlock Holmes stated ordinary people would not be involved in magi affairs.
    Yet - was that really honestly his only answer? No matter the current investigation or criminal case, this consulting mastermind interfered before.

    Whispers of Sherlock Holmes as Jack the Ripper then spread.
    Incidentally, there are several fictional stories detailing such events.
    Merging themselves with the rumours about Sir Conan Doyle, Avenger was born.
    A single innocent monster who committed no crimes. Mass murdering serial killer Jack.
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    Quote Originally Posted by DelRey View Post
    You still have time, finish it in an hour or so!
    Another option as well.

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    Actually, nevermind. If you would just give me an extra six to seven hours, I might be able to get something together.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Lambda-Nu View Post
    Actually, nevermind. If you would just give me an extra six to seven hours, I might be able to get something together.
    No worries with me, my Sheet is just above so I will await the results peacefully. Take as much time as you need.


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    Well, too late now. If you can't make her up by midnight, Anju wins because she posted.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lambda-Nu View Post
    Actually, nevermind. If you would just give me an extra six to seven hours, I might be able to get something together.
    Seems fair

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    Midnight in what time zone?

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    It’s 2:57 pm where I am.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Lambda-Nu View Post
    Midnight in what time zone?

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    It’s 2:57 pm where I am.
    It's 1 for me. So let's say... I guess you with Central Time? Also, judging goes until the 11th because some judges may be working on different time frames just like how Lambda is central and I'm pacific.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Morg van Destro View Post
    It's 1 for me. So let's say... I guess you with Central Time? Also, judging goes until the 11th because some judges may be working on different time frames just like how Lambda is central and I'm pacific.
    That's long enough I think. It's nearly midnight here and I just managed to post.


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    @Anju:

    Aces. Just aces. Never would have considered making Holmes the manifestation of Jack, but it does make perfect sense. It's a really good alternate Jack, and the quotes are appropriately done.

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    I guess Anju’s going to win with no contest in all likelihood because I am currently unable to access my laptop for the next six and a half hours. ‘Cause work.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Morg van Destro View Post
    It's 1 for me. So let's say... I guess you with Central Time? Also, judging goes until the 11th because some judges may be working on different time frames just like how Lambda is central and I'm pacific.
    Quote Originally Posted by Cursed by Fortuna View Post
    I suppose on the judge's end I don't know about the other judges but I'm NY time zone so you have about 6.5 to 7 hours, however if time zones differ between judges or you and Anju than I would say we would then go to UTC (for the sake of fairness) which would mean you have around 3 or 4 hours from now.
    Quote Originally Posted by Anju Addams View Post
    That's long enough I think. It's nearly midnight here and I just managed to post.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Lambda-Nu View Post
    I guess Anju’s going to win with no contest in all likelihood because I am currently unable to access my laptop for the next six and a half hours. ‘Cause work.
    Me waiting for the Xmas Jacky



    Edit: I offer myself to become your pen. Formatting on mobile is a pain in the Ass. If you can send the necessary things (as in skills, NP, backstory and stuff) I can do it for you if that helps to safe time. But I hope you have access to them besides ur laptop. I write mine on OneNote and can work on stuff even on mobile
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    Quote Originally Posted by TheTruthWhale View Post
    @Anju:

    Aces. Just aces. Never would have considered making Holmes the manifestation of Jack, but it does make perfect sense. It's a really good alternate Jack, and the quotes are appropriately done.
    Thanks, I thought it would be an interesting difference from the usual alternate Jack the Ripper Sheets I've seen since not many people use the more absurd theories out there. It was partially inspired by the Helena one from the Contest Thread and (as mentioned) that canon Salieri one since I really like the idea.

    Quote Originally Posted by Lambda-Nu View Post
    I guess Anju’s going to win with no contest in all likelihood because I am currently unable to access my laptop for the next six and a half hours. ‘Cause work.
    Well...if that is how it has to be then, I suppose. Not the greatest win which is a bit unfair but I'll just go with it. I even had a cool new avatar for winner's usage but I guess I'll just use it now...

    Can you at least post the Sheet at some point when done? I'd really like to see it.


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