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    Quote Originally Posted by Master_Therion View Post
    Honestly, as much as I love all your servants Wyvern, what stands out the most is how well organized your LB is. Unlike me, who only makes servants and then plans on expanding the Lostbelt with them, you do it at the same time. Its wonderful to see how you indirectly develop your lostbelt without touching it, merely using your characters as a way to develop the lore.
    Well, my method is a bit weird.

    When I made my announcement about the start of my Lostbelt, I had a small list of Servants who I wanted present for the story. From that point on, I expanded on the lore through my posts on the mythology thread. Through my posts on the magus thread, and then even through my contest entries. Most of what I do somehow ties into the overall arc of the Amazonic Lostbelt and the adjacent lostbelts that exist in the same storyline.

    I do make my servants in batches. Like the four guardians of El Dorado. The four Kings summoned from Proper Human History. And then the four servants who are connected to the Sacred Trees.

    They usually come out in batches of four. And someone who reads the materials can tell there is significance to them number.

    I suppose the only characters I don't have planned are the other servants who are side characters or in someway connected to the other main characters but not part of the main cast.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Wyvern View Post
    Well, my method is a bit weird.

    When I made my announcement about the start of my Lostbelt, I had a small list of Servants who I wanted present for the story. From that point on, I expanded on the lore through my posts on the mythology thread. Through my posts on the magus thread, and then even through my contest entries. Most of what I do somehow ties into the overall arc of the Amazonic Lostbelt and the adjacent lostbelts that exist in the same storyline.

    I do make my servants in batches. Like the four guardians of El Dorado. The four Kings summoned from Proper Human History. And then the four servants who are connected to the Sacred Trees.

    They usually come out in batches of four. And someone who reads the materials can tell there is significance to them number.

    I suppose the only characters I don't have planned are the other servants who are side characters or in someway connected to the other main characters but not part of the main cast.
    Interesting my Lostbelt servants i will include in the Armenian Lostbelt will are a mix between old ideas and servant candidates i have since a while in the consideration to make them and others caught my interest during the modulating of the Lostbelt .

    I have understood your tipps wyvern and i try a approach where each figure has there point of spotlight for a moment .

    But its truly astonishing that after so many servant and other things you revealed so little story is showing i must say .

    One Question will you keep some servants in the quiver for we when you make the big story reveal Wyvern ? As i can already say i will .
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    Quote Originally Posted by Kabalisto Koga View Post
    One Question will you keep some servants in the quiver for we when you make the big story reveal Wyvern ? As i can already say i will .
    I do have some characters I have in mind that I haven't revealed yet. After all, I don't wanna reveal everything that that I have in mind for the story. Mostly side characters, auxiliaries of the main characters. And of course, I haven't revealed who the Lostbelt King is.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Wyvern View Post
    I do have some characters I have in mind that I haven't revealed yet. After all, I don't wanna reveal everything that that I have in mind for the story. Mostly side characters, auxiliaries of the main characters. And of course, I haven't revealed who the Lostbelt King is.
    Well i am curious who the Lostbelt King will be . but my interst in your Lostbelt is already theree .

    Also i say that there is wait no rresist not spoiler anything 8that was meant towards myself)

    besides you can my lostbelt board of your Lostbelt include in your signature ina spoiler window ?
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    Alright, I am proud to announce that the Servant and Creator indexes have been fully updated. I have plans to add the Contest index to the OP at some point in the future. If someone could please DM me a list of prompts and their respective Servants, that would be greatly appreciated.

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    Name: Otr
    Class: Lancer
    Alternate Classes: Caster, Rider, Saber, Berserker
    Origin: Norse Mythology/Volsung Saga
    Alignment: Chaotic Good


    STR: -
    END: -
    AGI: -
    MAG: A+
    LCK: B



    Otr, child of Hreidmar, brother to Regin and Fafnir. Possessing shape-shifting abilities surpassing all others in the nine realms he was accidentally killed by Loki on a hunting trip, confused for a common otter, given this was a deed of the trickster god there are doubts if this was truly an accident, his animosity towards the dvergar was known to all. As a royal dvergar, descendant of those who built Gungnir, Mjolnir and the diverse miraculous tool used by the Aesir such sin would not go punished. Odin and Hroenir were captured by Fafnir while Loki had to fill Otr's dead skin with gold, now transformed into a bag capable of containing excessive treasure, even by the view of the gods, done so by Hreidmar in his greed


    For payment Loki stole the ring of infinite gold, Andvaranaut, from Andvari, angered the dvergar cursed that any possessing his treasure would be destroyed by it. As tale would say Fafnir was consumed by greed and betrayed his family and people taking the treasure while Regin was driven away. Turning into a greedy poison-breathing serpent he plundered the lands of the dvergar and brought ruin upon them all. Such was the curse that even Regin would seek to kill his step-child (Sigurd) to obtain the gold


    As a servant he manifests with the desire to make his ancestors proud. Regin's folly, Fafnir's selfishness, Hreidmar's shortsightedness thinking they could get away with such brutality towards their ancient benefactors left a bad taste. Loki alone should have been the target of their hatred and surely Odin would have agreed to some form of payment for forgiveness. The grail reeks too much of an Andvaranaut plot so he is unlikely to ponder or even chase it, instead being grateful for another breath of air and the chance to go on further adventures. A dvergar that breaks tradition, preferring the open air to the underground, the bounties of nature to the forge, the sounds of birds to the rough housing and singing in bars and brawls, a wandering soul that loves traveling and learning new things akin to the one-eyed god


    Skills

    Magical Resistance (B): A Royal Dvergar crafters of grand miracles and curses. Such was their skill that the symbols of the norse religion were forged by their hands alone. As one breathes they cast magic, be to create wonderful artifacts or enchant with their breath alone. Granted a knight class vessel it was enhanced


    Shape-shifting (EX): The most extreme form of shape-shifting, an incredibly malleable saint graph that can absorb and reject with extreme ease to the point attributes can be taken and discarded as necessary in exchange of magical energy. A shape-shifting that fooled even the eyes of Loki, blood-brother to Odin, father to myriad monstrosities and greatest trickster of all realms. Normally a skill seen in villains....but Otr only uses it to engage in good fun and live with nature. Status fluctuate depending on the circumstance (what is needed at the moment+magical energy)


    Nidavellir Crown (A+): The attribute of one born to rule over the Dvegar. Andvaranaut's curse reduced the attribute within Regin and Hreidmar while Fafnir has completely lost the skill due to his transformation into a dragon. In Norse mythology the world of Dvegar is also known as the world of darkness/void as such they are the closest to the Ginnugagap capable of working its primeval energy into constructs or spells. A deep connection to the planet, the greatest of them could be said to be terminals of the planet. Otr who could pass as a simple animal even to the gaze of Loki is one with a deep connection to nature and is blessed by it granting all sorts of benefits


    Rune Magic (Yggdrasil) (C): Skill passed down from Dvalinn to the dvegar tribes. It is not the magic that exists under the purview of Odin but surges from the same source, by inscribing words and channeling magic energy staying effects can be summoned. Otr who had little interest in such things only learned the basics as expected of a prince



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    Gungnir- War God's Sorrow and Favor
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    Loki Odin and Hoenir proudly walked into the house of Hreidmar with the skin of the otter only to witness the despair and rage of the royal family, stunned by the accident Odin and Hoenir were captured while Loki ran away. Bound by the workings of the dvergar and his own emotions Odin attempted to negotiate and explain but Hreidmar would not listen and demanded treasure from Loki. From this event it could be said that Otr's life is of equal value to the King of Aesir....but such debt is long gone and the lineage is dead the War God has no need to answer for it and there is none that can force him to yet.....Otr manifests with a model of Gungnir surpassing the ones used by the Valkyries, Odin's 'daughters'.


    Incredibly wise, knowledgeable, cold, and possessing a greater paranoia Odin is still a god that recognized the bravery and wisdom of those around him. A god that forged the Norse texture with the services of the Dvergar as such he still watches over them to this day and Otr who still bears the brilliance that once shone within his people carries the god's favor and debt.

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    Quote Originally Posted by DelRey View Post
    just so you know we recently had a Chrysaor by Morg, just so you know what was already done
    I don't really see the point of

    Hey dude another member already made the servant so just stop and abandon the idea

    Feels....so limiting. We aren't type moon where other writers can never use the servants of others, even tho they would have neat interactions and shit

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    Doesn't feel like he was trying to limit him, but to offer an example of the same servant as inspiration. Nobody here has ever claimed their version of a servant is the only one that's allowed to exist.

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    Quote Originally Posted by BoktaiMoon View Post
    We aren't type moon where other writers can never use the servants of others, even tho they would have neat interactions and shit
    This couldn't be more false. There isn't a single chapter in FGO where the writer limited themselves to their own Servants.

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    Quote Originally Posted by BoktaiMoon View Post
    I don't really see the point of

    Hey dude another member already made the servant so just stop and abandon the idea

    Feels....so limiting. We aren't type moon where other writers can never use the servants of others, even tho they would have neat interactions and shit
    If you read a bit further you wouldve known what i meant.
    I just sent it so he doesnt do the same concept of Chrysaor. Feels yucky when you think you have an original take on something and then find out someone else did the same thing before, as if plagiarized.

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    Alright, I am proud to announce that the Servant and Creator indexes have been fully updated. I have plans to add the Contest index to the OP at some point in the future. If someone could please DM me a list of prompts and their respective Servants, that would be greatly appreciated.

    If there is anything else that you feel needs to be added to the OP, please let me know.
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    I don't care too much. Chrysaor could have been better. If he can do something interesting with them, more power to you.
    Do you like jazz short stories? Do you want something to distract from making Servants? Do you wish the idea of Shirou Kotomine didn't immediately bring edgelords to mind? Well, I can't promise it's good, but some would disagree with me.
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    I can't say I often read past attempts before making my own sheets.

    If there is overlap then it would likely have been inevitable anyways since some characters don't have as much wiggle room for differing interpretations.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Morg van Destro View Post
    I don't care too much. Chrysaor could have been better. If he can do something interesting with them, more power to you.
    A honest Question Morg as our Arthorian specialist here what is your oppinion about the British Lostbelt so far what they made out of it ?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Skull View Post
    I can't say I often read past attempts before making my own sheets.

    If there is overlap then it would likely have been inevitable anyways since some characters don't have as much wiggle room for differing interpretations.
    i say that the possibilities are after the etablishment of Lopstbelts near infinitively. to do a charackter .
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    Quote Originally Posted by Kabalisto Koga View Post
    A honest Question Morg as our Arthorian specialist here what is your oppinion about the British Lostnelt so far what they made out of it ?
    You know what, this is a question I’d like to see him answer.

    Also, what’s a “Lostnelt”?
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    yeah what is a Lorsgelt?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Lambda-Nu View Post
    You know what, this is a question I’d like to see him answer.

    Also, what’s a “Lostnelt”?
    Quote Originally Posted by DelRey View Post
    yeah what is a Lorsgelt?
    damn keyboard typo
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    Contest Compendium for Lambda

    Monthly Create-A-Servant Contest Index

    The top-3 from each prompt is marked as follows:

    • 1st place: gold.
    • 2nd place: silver.
    • 3rd place: bronze.


    Spoiler:
    1st Prompt: Sabers

    2nd Prompt: Phantoms
    Archer – Anna Ioannovna|The Snow Queen by Alexcoene
    Archer – Jack Fiddler|Gaasyenditha by Funderfullness
    Archer – Nathaniel Bumppo|Awi Usdi by SSW
    Archer – Wilhelm Tell|Appleshooters by Omida
    Archer – Xiāo Hé|Zhāng Fú Dé|7 Sages of the Bamboo Grove|Fú Bō Jiāngjūn by SleepMode
    Assassin – “Alcatraz” by Aridwolverine
    Assassin – Altera|Wells’ Martian by TresserT
    Assassin – “Arsène Lupin” by Bird of Hermes
    Assassin – Corpo-Seco by pinetree
    Assassin – Jean-Henri Fabre|Mothman by Hakuro
    Assassin – Kuntī|Kuntilanak by 34
    Assassin – La Llorona|German by Express
    Assassin – Sebastian Moran|The Tinderbox Soldier by Bylackbre
    Assassin – Tallemaja|Arsène Lupin by BearHero
    Assassin – The Abductor by kami-en
    Avenger – “El Cid” by NMR-3
    Berserker – Robert Johnson|27 Club|Naberius by JetKinen
    Berserker – Sasaki Kojirō|Muramasa Sword|Blue Oni|Crab’s Offspring
    by zikari8
    Berserker – Taira no Kiyomori|Jack-o’-Lantern by Toncas
    Caster – Abdul Alhazred|Spiral Text of R’lyeh by Arkanian
    Caster – Four Beauties|Becky Thatcher|June Cleaver|Betty Boop|Tillie the Toiler by sutaa
    Caster – Johnny|Giuseppe Tartini by Funderfullness
    Caster – Lamia by ItsaRandomUsername
    Caster – Ludwig van Beethoven by Skull
    Caster – Maximilien Robespierre|Dr. Moreau by Sunny
    Caster – Queen of Sheba|Pharaoh’s Daughter by Spartacus
    Caster – Shirō Ishii|Pestilence by Saron
    Caster – The Little Match Girl|Fire-Fairy by Express
    Lancer – Cowardly Lion|Androcles’ Lion by RoydGolden
    Rider – Dick Turpin|The Black Dog by Toncas
    Rider – Jesse James|James-Younger Gang by Bylackbre
    Rider – Mary Anning|Nessie by asterism42
    Rider – H.G. Wells|John Titor by Sunny
    Ruler – The Happy Prince|Bluebird of Happiness by sutaa
    Saber – Yagyū Jūbei Mitsuyoshi|Jūchi Yosamu by Bird of Hermes
    Saber – New Motive Power by Zork Knight
    Saver – Cthulhu|Vairocana by Aridwolverine


    4th Prompt: Explorers

    5th Prompt: Animals

    6th Prompt: 19th Century

    7th Prompt: Water

    8th Prompt: Monsters

    9th Prompt: Indigenous Americans

    10th Prompt: Females

    12th Prompt: Sidekicks
    Archer – Sübügätäi by Shiki-pon
    Assassin – Ankhesenamun by Wizard
    Assassin – Diāochán by Skull
    Berserker – Mary Todd Lincoln by Funderfullness
    Rider – Antonio Pigafetta by zikari8
    Rider – Shalya by ItsaRandomUsername
    Ruler – Sancho Panza by Sunny
    Saber – Olivier de Vienne by cooldownnow
    Saber – Peleus by LeadDemon
    Saber – Wiglaf by the god of World-0
    13th Prompt: Lostbelt
    Alter Ego – Elisábeth Báthory by Daneel Rush
    Alter Ego – Esfandiyār by cooldownnow
    Archer – Winston Churchil by RoydGolden
    Avenger – Abel by AppleAlias
    Beast – Emiya Shirō by Kabalisto Koga
    Berserker – Haraldr Hilditǫnn by ItsaRandomUsername
    Berserker – Vortigern by King of Padoru
    Caster – Yamato Takeru by GilgameshKingofMemes
    Lancer – Caesarion by Shiki-pon
    Rider – Ashurbanipel by Language Man
    Rider – Noah by BnEI15
    Ruler – Elisábeth Báthory by Daneel Rush
    Ruler – Elizabeth I by NMR-3
    Ruler – Phidias by RoydGolden
    Saber – Mordred Pendragon (Alter) by cooldownnow
    Saver – Cyrus the Great by Zork Knight

    14th Prompt: Villains
    Archer – Hera by Bugs
    Assassin – Kesagake by Kabalisto Koga
    Avenger – Judas Iscariot by RoydGolden
    Caster – Mahendradatta by BnEi15
    Berserker – Lamia by GilgameshKingofMemes
    Berserker – Þráinn by the god of world-0
    Gatekeeper – Phix by Shiki-pon
    Gatekeeper – Scylla by ItsaRandomUsername
    Lancer – Seth by Kabalisto Koga
    Lancer – Sethos I by AppleAlias
    Rider – Captain Ahab by LeadDemon
    Saber – Sir Breuse by PitViper
    15th Prompt: Archers
    Archer – Hermes by RoydGolden
    Archer – Hermes Trismegistus by Kabalisto Koga
    Archer – Hòu Yì by WhiteFrenzy
    Archer – Marco Polo by Master of Chaos
    Archer – Marzan the Brave by Blastedspider
    Archer – Omphale by zikari8
    Archer – Örvar-Oddr by cooldownnow
    Archer – Pierre Basile by the god of world-0
    Archer – Red Horn by Shiki-pon
    Archer – Robert Deyville by Skull
    Archer – Shikhand by BnEI15
    Archer – Tipu Sultan by BnEI15
    Archer – Wernher Von Braun by RoydGolden

    16th prompt: Love
    Archer – Baron Münchhausen by Bugs
    Archer – Deianira by Kabalisto Koga
    Archer – Mishima Yukio by sutaa
    Archer – Psyche by TheLordOfAwesome
    Avenger – Angéle de la Barthe by GilgameshKingOfMemes
    Beast – Elpis by Kamera
    Caster – Clíodhna by WhiteFrenzy
    Caster – Eric Bloodaxe (Alter) (Gunnhild) by pinetree
    Caster – Laimdota by RoydGolden
    Lancer – Britomart by cooldownnow
    Lancer – Brunhild by Zork Knight
    Rider – Tommelise by the god of world-0
    Ruler – Oedipus by Master of Chaos
    Saber – Helgi by NMR-3
    Saber – Julie d’Aubigny by AppleAlias
    Saver – Hòu Yì by Bird of Hermes
    Shielder – Sváfa by Shiki-pon

    18th prompt: Duos

    19th prompt: Non-fighters
    Archer – Akhenaten by GilgameshKingOfMemes
    Assassin – Alfred Hitchcock by BnEl15
    Assassin – La Malinche by WhiteFrenzy
    Avenger – Balaam by RoydGolden
    Berserker – Jeremy Bentham by BnEl15
    Caster – Hammurabi by Clyton
    Caster – Harry Houdini by TheLordOfAwesome
    Caster – Johnny Shiloh by Perry Elis.
    Caster – Lǐ Shǎojūn by the god of world-0
    Caster – Sen no Rikyū by Shiki-pon
    Caster – Thucydides by LeadDemon
    Caster – Victor Lustig by King of Padoru
    Caster – Viviane by NittyGritty
    Rider – Flidais by BoktaiMoon
    Rider – Naamah by Kamera
    Ruler – Sāvitrī by AAM1232
    Saver – Zarathustra by Kabalisto Koga
    Watcher – 1P/Halley by Wyvern

    20th prompt: Extra classes


    22nd prompt: Horror

    23rd prompt: Not Human
    Berserker - Behemoth by RoydGolden
    Caster - Penny Dreadful by Morg van Destro
    Berserker - Crystal Palace by Wyvern
    Watcher - Laplace's Demon by BnEl1
    Assassin - Kayano-hime by Frigix
    Rider - Unsinkable Sam by WhiteFrenzy
    Assassin - Kheimon by NittyGritty
    "Lancer" - "Narcissus" by NMR-3
    Saver - First Lady by Morg vn Destro
    Avenger - Lucifer by realcasually
    Grand Rider - Michael by Comun
    Alter-Ego - Hestia by Nuclear
    Lover - Iron Apega by Wyvern | Prickly Embrace
    Ancient Titan | Foreigner - Ymir | Velber 02 by Justiciar Hux
    Archer - White Rider by NittyGritty
    Faker - Surgeon's Photo by TheLordOfAwesome
    Alter-Ego - Boye by ScarfedDyedShadow
    Saber - Oberon by Enigmatic
    Foreigner - Namyaza by BnEl15
    Caster - Mammon by GilgameshKingOfMemes
    Ruler - Melek Taus by Lady Vanatos
    Lancer - Fundamental Interactions by Justiciar Hux
    Ruler - Bobby by JetKinen
    Avenger - Lucifer by Kabalisto Koga
    Berserker - Callisto by realcasually
    Caster - Descartes' Demon by Frigix
    Beast - Demiurge by Kamera
    Avenger - The Dodo by kiwi

    24th prompt: Rulers
    Saber - Josiah | by RoydGolden
    Ruler - Chandragupta I & Kumaradevi by TheTruthWhale
    Ruler - Augustus by doncosaco
    Archer - Memhed II by Perry Ellis.
    Ruler - Commodus by NittyGritty
    Watcher - 'BB' by Frigix
    Saber - Afonso I by Master_Therion
    Lover - Maria Leopoldina by Wyvern
    'Saver' - Hong Xiuquan by BnEl15
    Ruler - 'Marianne, the French Republic by Tacosarus
    Ruler - Morgan Pendragon (Lostbelt) by Morg van Destro
    Caster - Guinevere by realcasually
    Rider - Augustus by Kabalisto Koga
    'Rider' - 'Pedro II' by WhiteFrenzy
    Rider - Pedro II by Wyvern
    Caster - Pope Joan by doncosaco
    Shielder - John III Sobieski by DelRey
    Lancer - Zumbi dos Palmares by Morg van Destro
    MoonCancer - Temujin by realcasually
    Archer - Kublai Khan by Random
    Archer - Empress Jingu by Spammin Spiff
    Avenger - Miguel I of Portugal by Master_Therion
    Ruler | Gunner - Delahaye by TheTruthWhale
    'Rider' - Paul von Hindenburg by DelRey
    Rider - Tiberius by RoydGolden
    Avenger - Mt. Rushmore by Drangle
    Lancer - Constantinus by Master of Chaos
    Faker - Vlad Tepes by Kabalisto Koga
    Caster - 'King Solomon' by GilgameshKingofMemes
    Berserker - Henry Tudor VIII by Enigmatic
    Rider - Kim Il-sung by kiwi


    26th prompt: Art

    27th Prompt: Divinity

    28th Prompt: Legacy

    29th Prompt: Biblical
    Caster - Bezalel by Wan Dering'cul Tivator
    "Assassin" - Delilah by jishara
    Foreigner - Virgin Mary by pinetree
    Caster - Eglon by jishara
    "Assassin" - ""Delilah" by NittyGritty
    Watcher - Adam-Kadmon by Baron Magnus
    Watcher - (Curious) Lucifer by Nuclear
    Berserker - Tower of Babel by DesReploid
    Rider - Sisera & his Mother by Vance
    Caster - Rehoboam by NMR-3
    Archer - Joshua by BnEl15
    Great Beast - 「God」 by Random
    Lancer - Jashobeam by Serra
    "Caster" - "Paul of Tarsus" by Baron Magnus
    Berserker - Samson by SimpleScribe
    Assassin - Judas Iscariot by HumanComplex
    Assassin - Ehud by Spammin Spiff
    Saver/Beast - Lamb/Lion by NittyGritty
    Beast - Adam by Kamera
    Rider - Holy Queen Mary by Justiciar Hux
    Foreigner - Clement I by DelRey
    Assassin - Zipporah by RoydGolden
    Lover - Ruth by Morg van Destro
    Beast - Stella Maris Mary by Frigix
    Berserker - Aton/Malakh by RoydGolden
    Archer - Nacton H. Ashling by Justiciar Hux
    Archer - Uzziah by Spammin Spiff
    Rider - Zacchaeus by Wan Dering'cul Tivator
    Beast - Balaam by Morg van Destro
    Avenger - Lamech by Serra

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kabalisto Koga View Post
    i say that the possibilities are after the etablishment of Lopstbelts near infinitively. to do a charackter .
    I mean, sure. But at the same time if you stray too far away from the core of a character, is it really the same person anymore that you were trying to depict?
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    Look at my Voyager John VI for example. I used a character that's his own version from a different timeline, but had him react to memories of the 'proper course' of history and developed his personality and goals through that contrast. I think that you need some basis for similarity when using Lostbelt characters. So they won't feel like you are creating a whole sale new person out of another.

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    I know I swore off doing any more Arthurian characters just a few days ago, but while writing Óengus it struck me that this dude was also one of my sheets and so since it was pretty much done away I just polished it up a bit and...

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    "Kid, focus only on surviving through this war. Never admit defeat and ask for a quick death, die first then admit defeat! If you didn't die then just survive and keep thinking about how to defeat those that failed to kill you! What about me? Heh, a man with no future has nothing to lose. This war has gathered some of the strongest heroes in existence so if this is the last battle I ever take part in, I'm going to enjoy every last second."




    True Name: Hueil mab Caw
    Epithet: "Arthur's (Self-Proclaimed) #1 Rival"
    Region: Britain (Arthurian Mythos)
    Catalyst: The Maen Huail Stone
    Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
    Likes: Plundering, Women
    Dislikes: Christianity, Deceit
    Talents: Poetry, Sailing
    Natural Enemy: King Arthur

    Parameters
    STR: (A) END: (A) AGI: (B) MGI: (D) LCK: (E) NP: (A)

    Character
    Berserker takes the form of Hueil mab Caw, a prince and warrior of Pictland - but more importantly he is also King Arthur's (self proclaimed) number one rival. A large (typically shirtless) man that is a tower of muscles with his scraggily hair pulled back into a top ponytail and a diadem wrapped around his head.

    By his own admission, Hueil is a simple man who holds the core values of the Picts as gospel, that being might makes right and those with power should use it to climb the ranks and rule. It is for this reason that he cannot accept being ordered by anyone weaker than him and that includes his Master. Though he is not overtly a bad person, without someone to he acknowledges to rein him in his habit of doing whatever he feels like at the time can cause trouble, especially his lust for battle. Other than his father, the only person Hueil recognises as stronger than him would be Artoria but for whatever reason he chose not to submit to her but instead declare her as his rival that he must defeat. As a result, she occupies a lot of his thinking as he trains every day to get stronger and measures his opponents to how powerful Artoria was.

    Other things he has strong opinions about is being upfront about everything. Even those whose hated Hueil would recognise he was always (bluntly) honest about what he thought and he couldn't stand those who were deceitful. Hueil is also very critical of modernity, seeing the conveniences of technology encouraging weakness which in turn promotes vices. For this reason he also despises the Picts who came after him as he views them as having kowtowed to the Catholic Church in abandoning their culture, language and gods in exchange for building up their simple tribes into dense urban societies in order to compete with the Anglo-Saxons. In contrast Hueil prefers to live under his own power: hunting, farming and sailing - all living in harmony with the land.

    Despite his reputation as a battle loving brute, Hueil is actually surprisingly intelligent. He can grasp new concepts in a short amount of time and can pick up on even subtle social clues to understand what people are really thinking and has seen through attempts at disguises in the past. But he lived in a culture where strength was everything and so outside of rare moments where one would catch him discreetly waxing poetry, he would say he is "a stinker and not a thinker". Not to mention, the Picts' habit of engaging in Heterosis makes them victims of the Inversion Impulse of which Hueil is particularly vulnerable. Perhaps these two factors go a long way to explain his preference for a more solitary life outside of society.

    In a Holy Grail War, Hueil is a rather straightforward combatant that would seek out the nearest enemy Servant and engage them in battle. He has no tricks, just a regular sword to his name and his inhuman strength with his motto of "if hitting it isn't working, just hit harder". Naturally this makes tricky Servants like Caster and Assassin his worst nightmare as he has little in the way of counters to things like powerful magic and poor defences for it. When it comes to interacting with his Master, Hueil will listen if they have something useful to say but won't automatically obey them - especially if it's in the middle of combat as he is reticent to put his life in the hands of someone he doesn't trust. One of Hueil's other weaknesses is that he (perhaps naïvely) holds a lot of pride in being an honourable warrior and won't try tactics like targeting the Masters but also is exactly the kind of guy who would just sigh and walk straight into a trap because the enemy has innocent bystanders being used as hostages.

    His Wish upon the Grail? It would naturally be to go to where Artoria rests and confront her...but what then? Demand a rematch? Apologise to her? Even Hueil isn't exactly sure. But he does know time has stopped for him and to break through the stagnation of his soul he has to confront her one last time.


    Skills

    Class Skills

    Mad Enhancement - (N/A)
    The Class Skill that characterizes a Berserker, raising basic parameters and strengthens one's physical abilities in exchange of hindering mental capacities and/or in exchange for their sense of reason. In some cases, it also affects and/or seals away some techniques, Personal Skills and Noble Phantasms. Because of the fundamental nature of Hueil's Noble Phantasm, an inversion occurred and this Skill was sealed.

    Personal Skills

    Discerning Eye - (C)
    A technique to observe and understand people. Despite his reputation as a brute, Hueil was surprisingly insightful at times when interacting with other people such as sensing that Guinevere was unsatisfied with her marriage or even some stories tell of Hueil realising a certain blonde haired King was not the gender she publicly presented as. By observing a person for an extended amount of time, it is possible to recognise even subtle cues and make hypothesises about their livelihoods and preferences and can potentially see through disguises so long as no magic is involved. In battle it is also possible to observe the enemy Servant and discern potential weakpoints in their fighting style should they exist.

    Mixed Blood - (C)
    The nature of a human bloodline that sought "outbreeding enhancement" by incorporating inhuman creatures into their family lines to strengthen their offspring. The Picts were a mysterious tribe of people and upon seeing them, Lucius Tiberius was reminded of stories of how traces of the Age of Gods persisted in the British Isles, whereas according to Prelati the King of the Picts physically resembled the Mesopotamian giant Huwawa moreso than a human. Yet despite this, Hueil looks mostly normal aside from being very tall and stacked with muscles - he doesn't even have the painted tattoos the Picts were supposedly famous for. According to him this is part of his summoning as a Servant because the nature of his Noble Phantasm suppresses this Skill and warps his appearance as to hide his identity. If he were to unleash his Noble Phantasm, this Skill would rise to A Rank and he would assume his old appearance once again.

    Nature of a Rebellious Spirit - (B)
    The temperament to never remain at one location and never embrace a lord. A wandering star that does not have the capacity to be king nor is capable of finding his own king. Hueil was a solitary spirit that was loath to work with others let alone submit to a lord that he deemed weaker than him - which was a problem when the only king strong enough to beat him was Artoria. So why didn't he join the Round Table? Perhaps there was simply something he could not accept about her...As a Servant, Hueil has the ability to cancel out other Skills that induce Mental Interference of an equal or lower Rank, however this also works both ways as it will prevent him from gaining any positive benefits from Skills like "Charisma" that an ally might try to use on him.


    Noble Phantasm


    Coron y Frwydr
    The Bloodstained Diadem of Battle

    [Type - Anti Unit], [Noble Phantasm Rank - A], [Maximum Range - 0 Metres], [Maximum Number of Targets - Self]

    The power and Mystery behind the Picts lay chiefly in their blood, the mixing of human and inhuman for the quest of greater power. But naturally that came at a great price, the constant risk of an Inversion Impulse and so to counter that the Picts created a tool to protect their kinsmen from destroying themselves. For Hueil it was the diadem "Coron y Frwydr" he wore around his head which (not always successfully) served to curb his fighting instincts.

    Now incarnated as a Servant it has crystallized into a Noble Phantasm with a number of unexpected effects. Firstly to protect his True Name, Coron warps his appearance so that he looks as close to a normal human as possible with even his iconic painted tattoos being absent. This has the dual effect of lowering his "Mixed Blood" Skill by two Ranks in order to prevent any potential Inversions but also sealing his Mad Enhancement Class Skill allowing him to retain his sanity even mid-battle. But Coron can only handle so much as every time Hueil takes damage his rage continues to build and without an outlet it will eventually reach a threshold that Coron cannot contain and so as the diadem shatters an unholy fusion of Inversion Impulse and Mad Enhancement bursts forth. Hueil's body starts to swell up even larger than he already was with his skin darkening to a muddy red and black tribal tattoos spread across his body - making him look more like a demon now than a human.

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    It can take up to several hours for Coron to regenerate and so having completely lost his sanity, Hueil will attack anything in sight as he cannot distinguish between friend or foe, making him a danger to everyone. But even if the other Servants try to pacify him, it will not be easy as the Inversion brings forth Hueil's inhuman powers as his skin becomes as hard as steel reducing physical damage by 20%, an increase in Mystery giving him Magic Resistance of around Rank C compared to the Knight Class Servants and finally he becomes resistant to death with an equivalent of Battle Continuation allowing him to keep fighting for several minutes even after being fatally wounded. All of this added onto the Bonus Modifiers to his Parameters from Mad Enhancement makes Hueil a force of nature that few Servant could face alone. But once the time is up and Coron returns onto his head, Hueil becomes exhausted from the strain and collapses making him extremely vulnerable to enemy attacks and requiring a Command Seal to force him to withdraw and even if that happens he will be out of commission for a couple of days at least. Upon awakening, Hueil will be back to his normal sealed condition.



    Lore
    A warrior and prince of the mysterious Pictland, Hueil was always something of a thorn in Artoria's side. When Artoria went on her quest to unite the country under her leadership, the King of the Picts, Caw sensed the source of Caliburn's power and acknowledged her Kingship. But Hueil refused to accept this as his philosophy was "Might makes Right" and so he led a number of violent and sweeping raids into Artoria's territory. In response, Artoria marched into Pictland and fought his forces, chasing him down to the Isle of Mann where they had a one on one duel and Hueil was forced to admit defeat. However, though he acknowledged her strength Hueil refused to become a knight under Artoria and returned to Pictland.

    The next time they met was during Culhwch's great trials set by the Giant King Ysbaddaden. Artoria agreed to accompany him on the journey and during the hunt for the Demon Lord Boar Ysgithyrwyn, she enlisted the help of Pict King Caw who agreed and brought along his nineteen sons. Though he was loath to assist, Hueil was intrigued by the idea of hunting such a great beast. Artoria's favourite hunting dog Cavall managed to track the beast down and Hueil with the help of his brothers used their superhuman strength to hold it in place so that their father Caw, riding Artoria's steed Llamrei was able to cleave its head in two with a battleaxe. Despite the great teamwork between the knights of Camelot and the Pict warriors, Hueil didn't feel like sticking around and so headed back to Pictland.

    Any chance of friendship between Hueil and Artoria ended when one day Hueil stumbled across a convoy escorting Queen Guinevere back to Camelot. Taken with her beauty, Hueil pushed aside the knights and demanded that Guinevere leave the King and become his woman instead. In the midst of the confusion and facing this giant of a man, Guinevere simply froze up and so instead a voice rang out to back off and a sword swung at Hueil who jumped back. After a few seconds Hueil recognised the knight who stood before him as Gwydre, the son of Hueil's sister who had joined Artoria's service. Raising his sword, Gwydre said that he would strike down all who would dare insult the Queen even if they were family. Bemused, Hueil drew his own sword and the two clashed with Gwydre being cut down but not killed. Seeing the young knight in pain because of her hesitation, Guinevere walked right up to Hueil and slapped him square in the face. Time seemed to stop for a moment before Guinevere spoke up saying that Hueil wasn't half the man Artoria was and should leave now. Though angered, Hueil saw the other knights emboldened by the Queen's words were starting to draw their weapons and so he begrudgingly turned and left. When Artoria heard what had happened, she declared Hueil a criminal and should he ever step foot out of Pictland he would be captured and executed.

    For the next few years Hueil largely kept to himself within the bounds of his homeland, only really leaving his father's court to go hunt the occasional great beast that wandered too close to human villages. But at the end of each day he would sigh to himself as something vital was missing from his life. Then the fateful day came where whilst Artoria was away conquering Rome, Mordred declared an insurrection and naturally went to meet each person Artoria had alienated in turn to gain their support. Eventually Mordred stood before Hueil yet the man was unmoved by her words but at the same time wouldn't lift a finger to stop her. Then as news about Mordred's plans reached the continent, Artoria came racing back she saw Hueil standing alone on the cliffs of Britain waiting to greet her. Artoria accused Hueil of being a part of the rebellion but Hueil just silently gestured towards a nearby field and Artoria ordered her troops to go on ahead without her. The pair squared up against each other in the plains and drew their weapons, with the clash of their might echoing out for miles around. After what seemed like an eternity later Hueil dropped onto his knees having lost a lot of blood from wounds across his body while his sword was cracked in multiple places - whereas Artoria was unharmed if short of breath. Yet despite all this, childlike laughter escaped from Hueil's mouth which took Artoria aback. Upon being asked what was so funny, Hueil replied that it only took until the end of his life to finally realise what was missing from it. Rising to his feet, Hueil made one final charge at Artoria which she met head on and Excalibur finally smashed through Hueil's sword and cleaved open his chest making the giant of a man stagger past her and collapse onto a nearby rock. With haggard breath, Hueil asked Artoria to give him an honourable death and she sighed that it was a shame that things could not have turned out differently before putting Excalibur above Hueil's neck and then bringing it down.

    Afterwards Artoria turned to leave but noticed that blood was dripping from under her tunic. Lifting it up she saw that her knee was cut open and realised that when Hueil's sword shattered against hers, a chunk of shrapnel ricocheted off of the ground and struck her knee. Without Avalon anymore to heal her, Artoria chuckled and said that Hueil should be proud to be one of the only people to leave a scar on her.


    Relationships
    Artoria - "Outside of my father, you were the only other person to ever beat me. I will always acknowledge you as my rival and I'll continue trying to get stronger so you better do too, so our rematch will shake the heavens and earth themselves!"

    Bedivere - "That silver arm...could it be!?"

    David - "Hmph, I don't see what's so special about you that captured the hearts of so many of my kinsmen."

    Geórgios - "Just because my brother Gildas was a also a Saint doesn't mean I'll treat you with any respect."

    Heracles - "A demigod of such power!? Heh, this might finally be a fair fight."

    Mash - "Zehahaha! The so-called Holy Knight inserting himself into young women? How very indecent of him but the apple doesn't fall far I guess."

    Mordred - "Just so you know, had I survived my duel with Arthur, I would have taken it upon myself to crush your little rebellion and declare myself King instead."


    Creator's Notes
    I know it's a fools errand trying to make a Pict Servant when it almost certainly won't align with canon but I can no longer resist the temptation when the Picts are such a fascinating people.

    Man this sheet went through so many changes. It started out with Hueil being in the Avenger Class and basically being the Shan Yu to Artoria's Mulan in that he represents everything she isn't but must overcome. But as I wrote and rewrote, I tried to get more in his head and so I ended up trying to present him as a more rounded person, though still incredibly dissonant with our current values as a society.

    The Faceclaim this time around was Aoi Todo from Jujutsu Kaisen. Although I will say the idea for using the Diadem as a restraining bolt comes more from Broly from Dragonball with a dash of Kenpachi's Bankai mixed in.


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