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I suppose you're right. Sorry if I bruised any feelings with my last post.
Never heard of Striker. There's also Beast and Gatekeeper, although we technically never seen a Gunner, Funny Vamp or Gakeeper Servant for full reference.
Striker is Karna in CCC
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Let it not burden your soul, nor numb your strides.
Mostly I agree with this, but there's something to be said for how having to work within an established framework can encourage creativity. I mean, presumably that's the reason we're here writing Servant sheets at all, rather than gravitating to any of the million other franchises that let you write up mythical figures as OCs (like Highschool DxD for example) with far less restrictions.
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Wasn't that Launcher?
Oh make no mistake, just because something can be rationalised doesn't make it exempt from criticism on the creative side. I just feel like what qualifies as a Servant is hardly contentious on principle when the definition has by official sources been greatly expanded, to put it diplomatically. The execution - how convincing that rationalisation is - is a separate matter.
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Striker is something Vagrant or whoever it was made up to contend with all those wrestlers who couldn't be sane Berserkers.
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Class: Berserker
True Name: Mordred (Alter)
Gender: Female
Alignment: Chaotic Evil
Origin: Britain (Arthurian Mythology)
Strength: A+
Endurance: A+
Agility: D
Mana: A++
Luck: E
Noble Phantasm: A+
Class Skills
Mad Enhancement EX
The Class Skill that characterizes a Berserker, raising basic parameters and strengthens one's physical abilities in exchange for hindering mental capacities and/or in exchange for their sense of reason. In some cases, it also affects and/or seals away some techniques, Personal Skills and Noble Phantasms.
Parameters are Ranked-Up but is deprived of most reason. Communication with Mordred Alter is possible, but her “programming” causes her to have an almost single-minded obsession with killing King Arthur. However, the fact that part of King Arthur’s Saint Graph was used to create Mordred Alter caused a glitch in which she took her identity after killing her, resulting in a paradox that never went away.
Magic Resistance A
Grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether.
Cancel spells of A-Rank or below, no matter what High-Thaumaturgy it is. In practice, the Servant is untouchable to modern magi, so it would not be an exaggeration to title the Servant a "Magus Killer". Mordred normally wouldn’t have this Skill at this Rank, but Morgan’s modifications enhancing the Element of the Red Dragon inherited from her “father” allows Mordred Alter to possess Magic Resistance at this Rank.
Personal Skills
Battle Continuation A
A Skill that allows for the continuation of combat after sustaining mortal wounds. It will also reduce mortality rate from injury. This Skill represents the ability to survive and/or the mentality of one who doesn't know when to give up, consisting of one's strength of vitality in predicaments. It is also one of the powers of a vampire. The best result is achieved when a resilient body is combined with this Skill.
Did not give up even when pierced with a Holy Spear and ended up giving the King of Knights a mortal wound. Morgan used the Grail’s power to increase the Rank of this Skill while creating Mordred Alter.
Puppet King B
A variant of Charisma denoting one possessing the ability to lead an army but not the ambition to do so for their own personal goals. Rather, they lead their troops to carry out the goals of another party. This Skill has the effects of Charisma of the equivalent Rank.
Anti-Knight A
A Skill denoting one’s very existence as being in opposition to knights. The power of attacks targeting knights receive a ‘plus’ modifier.
This Skill was created by Morgan during the process of Mordred Alter’s creation, seeking to make her a better counter to Artoria.
Chimera Knight EX
A Skill denoting how the process of Mordred Alter’s creation granted her the abilities of various members of the Knights of the Round Table and other Heroic Spirits, even those that she would not possess normally.
Mordred Alter possesses the Skills possessed by King Arthur, Sir Lancelot, Sir Gawain, Sir Kay, Sir Bedivere, Sir Tristan, Sir Gareth, Sir Bors, Sir Ywain, and Sir Agravian, among others. In addition, it also grants her the effects of Dragonkind Modification.
Noble Phantasms
Rhongomynaid MorganThe Lance That Shines At the End of the World
Rank: A+
Type: Anti-Fortress
Range: 1~99
Maximum Number of Targets: 900
Holy spear. An anchor of storm that fasten together the planet.
It has been said that its real form is that of a tower that fasten together the skin of the world. When releasing the True Name, both Rank and classification change. Its original power is being limited by thirteen restraints, but nevertheless this is the pillar in the far away that shines to extol the brilliance of the planet.
After killing King Arthur and taking the Holy Lance, it was sublimated into her Saint Graph. Additionally, Morgan’s influence has caused the Holy Lance to become blackened and tainted by darkness. Nevertheless, its power has only been slightly diminished.
However, Mordred Alter’s programming causes this Noble Phantasm’s power when targeted against those who she recognizes as King Arthur.
Round Table AlterBlackened Knights of the Round Table
Rank: A
Type: Anti-Army
Range: 1~90
Maximum Number of Targets: 500
A Noble Phantasm that allows Mordred Alter to summon and use the weapons of the Knights of the Round Table used to create her composite Saint Graph.
Due to her nature as being a composite of the Saint Graphs of the various Knights of the Round Table, Mordred Alter possesses the knowledge of how to properly use the weapons she can summon using this Noble Phantasm. However, it is also because of her nature that she is unable to unleash the full power of the Knights of the Round Table’s Noble Phantasms.
Another weakness in this Noble Phantasm is that Round Table Alter is incapable of summoning Caliburn, Avalon, and Excalibur.
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There's never been anything wrong with them here I don't think, Koga's only sparked the discussion because his Servant pretty far from what one would consider a Servant.
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I agree with Leftovers though, the concept of Servants is so loose that there's basically no point in excluding purely monstrous Servants like that. Though I personally don't care at all for them.
Re: Mordred Alter
Nothing too crazy, not much to write home about, but the simplicity of her abilities and profile reflects how she herself is a puppet; manipulated muscle by means of Morgan.
I want for little else. Not because it's a perfect, engrossingly detailed sheet--but because it serves well-enough in the role you've set for Mordred Alter to assume.
My Fanfics. Read 'em. Or not.McJon01: We all know that the real reason Archer would lose to Rider is because the events of his own Holy Grail War left him with a particular weakness toward "older sister" types.
Again, does anyone has a image of a golden mech that I can use as FC, please? I exhausted all my FC finding tricks by now so all I can do is ask.
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Alternate Classes: Caster, Berserker
True Name: Peter the Great
Alignment: Lawful Good
Origin: Russia (17th century)
Armament: Sword
Parameters:
STR: B
END: C
AGI: A
MANA: D
LUCK: A
NP: B++
Skills
Noble Phantasms
Description
Lore
"We don't need martyrs right now. We need heroes. A hero would die for his country, but he'd much rather live for it." -Josiah Bartlet
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Your consent is irrelevant, your dreams are irrelevant, your world is irrelevant. Personal attachment is but an unecessary burden to be disposed of in search of improvement. I need not your acknowledgement, only unquestionable obedience.
Class: Shielder
Lost Depth: A++
True Name: Athena III (Artoria Pendragon)
Epithet: Empress of Athens, Goddess Palladion.
Alternative Class: Alter Ego, Lancer, Rider, Caster, Launcher.
Allignment: Lawful Good
Height / Weight: ???
Region: Greece
Source: Apocryphal Band α
Likes: Perfection.
Dislikes: Disobedience, anarchy.
[Parameters]
Strength - [B+]
Endurance - [A]
Agility -[A]
Mana -[EX]
Luck -[E]
Noble Phantasm - [A++]
[Background]
In another timeline, this woman would have been a righteous King. Fair and chivalrous, she would have most certainly saved her homeland and had her name become synonymous with tragedy.
However, such a story never came to pass.
In this world where gods battle eternally for dominion over the world, those who fled their conflict eventually found themselves hiding amongst the ruins of civilization in an increasingly hostile world where humans were no longer welcome. It was to this world that a young girl bearing the fate of a King was born.
In proper history, this girl would have been concealed from the enemies of her family and raised to one day ascend to the throne as King. In this timeline, however, no such kingdoms exist and the girl has lived a life secluded away from the world, her people afraid to venture out and be dragged into the conflict.
This enforced hermitage did not sit right with the girl, something deep within herself urging her to take action against the status quo. The front going so far as gifting her with visions and dreams of an Everdistant Utopia where her people would no longer cower in caves and valleys before the whims of the gods.
It was that hope for the future that drove her to seek out the Holy Spear.
A weapon she would use to drive back the beasts from her homeland and deliver her people from the shadows. And for a time all was well. Unfortunately, power such as this cannot remain hidden for long, and the girl turned King saw herself faced with envoys and would be conquerors seeking to bring her into the fold; another batch of pawns for the gods to use and abuse as they saw fit.
She rebuked them most vehemently.
Standing up against monster and god alike, the young girl grew into a mighty warrior, the ruler and protector her people needed in their hour of desperation. Their combined effort building the first and last human civilization of its time as the Holy Lance gifted them all with its light.
However, such blessings cannot last forever.
Nor could a human body hope to contain the power of a Divine Construct.
So when the Goddess of War finally appeared to claim their Kingdom, the girl who’d dreamed of a better future, now a fully grown woman, rose to challenge her. The resulting battle scarred the land, turning earth to glass and mountains to craters as their conflict rose to a crescendo.
A human body cannot contain so much divinity and hope to remain unchanged.
And change she did. A form befitting that of a goddess, power and authority flowing from every inch of her body. On the cusp of ascending as an equal amongst the evil gods of her world.
And that was when Athena struck.
For while powerful, a human mind cannot fully utilize or understand the realm of the gods. And she was many times the girl’s senior, having training, fought and bled for thousands of years. No matter how powerful the Holy Spear made her, she was nonetheless a flawed being. And those very same imperfections are what the Goddess of Wisdom targeted.
A perfect gap on her opponent’s defense which was used to subsume her mind into Athena’s own. They were, after all, so compatible to the point that it could be said that the girl was pushed down her path for that very reason.
And thus became the perfect vessel for Athena.
Their battle was merely the final nail on the coffin. Heralding the birth of Athena III, the Goddess Palladion.
[Personality]
A perfectionist through and through, Athena always seeks the most pragmatic solution yielding the most profitable results. So long as the numbers and statistics fight within her calculations, she will stoically make the required sacrifices.
Styling herself as an all-knowing God Empress, Athena III leaves command on the battlefield to her generals and instead occupies her time with administration duties. She controls every aspect of society at Athens, driving her people to perform the actions and roles expected of them to drive their civilization forward. Every single individual is accounted for. Their needs quantified as just another statistic to account for. Athena maintains a perfectly homogenous society where humans function as cogs in a machine.
Different parts, different roles, serving the greater good.
Technological advanced, military performance, even every day roles such as production, farming and religious worship. Every function necessary for the continued prosperity of Athens is properly measured within the Goddess’ calculations.
She does not see humans as individuals, or a civilization. But as a project.
The same way one sees a colony of ants, with dispassionate pragmatism.
Her goal is simple, to create a society far outstripping all others within the Elysium Lostbelt and then expand Athens outwards into a perfect World-Spanning Utopia. A perfect society where humans live perfect lives under a flawless God.
The desire for salvation remains. Only it has become an equation, a problem to be solved out of hubris than the heartfelt wish to protect one’s people. The synchronicity between Goddess and Vessel has most certainly caused the end result to become a God of Men whose sole interest is arriving at the correct answer through the least costly method.
Her answer may be correct, but it is not right.
But to Athena III, such concepts are meaningless.
[Class Skills]
Magic Resistance -[A]
Riding -[C]
[Personal Skills]
High Speed Calculation - [A+]
The ability to accurately predict an outcome through calculations. Similar to a psychic’s ability to foretell the future based on probability and data gathered from their surroundings. Athena III’s ability to gather and process data is beyond the ability of human, however, being able to foretell years if not decades in advance so long as she possesses an accurate model. It is not an ability based on Magecraft or a Divine Gift, but an ability that the Goddess herself has developed.
Wisdom of the Olive Tree - [A]
A collection of skills pertaining to the many domains consigned to the Goddess Athena. From military tactics, to charisma and all forms of craftsmanship. Crystalized in the form of her authority as a goddess of Wisdom, this Skill is akin to a vast repository of knowledge which can be accessed by Athena III at all times.
Essence of the Holy Lance - [B+]
The power accumulated by Athena III’s vessel, a surplus of energy tied to the Spear at the End of the World. In practice, it functions as a secondary magic reactor within Athena’s body, which can be used to command and control the fragments of the spear wielded by the Goddess. As well as accurately control and aim the Holy Lance itself.
Invisible Air - [C]
A skill which has been reverse engineered by Athena after gaining access to her vessel’s dreams and visions. It is not an ability that the woman possessed in life, but one that belongs to a future which never came to pass. It remains nonetheless a useful ability used by the goddess to conceal the fragments of the Holy Lance wielded by Athena III.
[Noble Phantasms]
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Re: Athena III / Arturia Pendragon
This is a rather novel way to think up a Shielder-Class. Given how the character differs from the one proposed in the original draft, I suppose I should prepare myself to be further surprised in the future!
There's an interesting similarity, and marked differences, between her and Hera IX. Hera IX manages the love lives of her society, while Athena III manages the whole of her society. Furthermore, stability is Hera IX's goal, while stability in Athena III's society is a condition for her to take her society further.
I am reminded of LB3's Chinadad Mothman, but with the appropriate remixed content.
My Fanfics. Read 'em. Or not.McJon01: We all know that the real reason Archer would lose to Rider is because the events of his own Holy Grail War left him with a particular weakness toward "older sister" types.
I noticed halways through making Athena III that I was basically rehashing Scathach=Skadi, so I decided to make a surprise this time. It actually ended up being a better idea than the original, though I wouldn't expect that many more changes. Aphrodite and Ishtar, perhaps, due to them being Goddesses that shouldn't have been around at the same times as the Olympians. So them being posessed by them is paradoxical.