Create-A-Servant 3

[Kabalisto Koga]

Nitty read kogas recent servant

Also i dont know what you all are having as it is not difficult to understand , my writhing also have i admitely used google docs for the abbillity sections so that there should be the problems fewer really also when i read your sheets (of the others i mean) i dont really perceive a other wording outside or perhaps individuel play style but okay can you not only ridicule my profile of their grammar but for once the ideas i have weaved in ,creativity the actuall content as it is seriously depressing the continous playing on my bad grammer but no really evaluation of the remaining other aspects really .

[NittyGritty]

yeah lets not go too hard on koga

lets just lightly roast them

koga your words are certainly visible

[NittyGritty]

The fuck is going on?

picks up and pets

shhhhhhh

[NINE-lives]

Koga’s sheets would still be absurdly wanked and with zero understanding of nasuverse lore/metaphysics even if we ignored the shit tier spelling.

Best I can saw is that koga has some decent to mildly good ideas and is fairly creative and willing to do servants nobody else has ever done but all those ideas could have been done better in the hands of literally anyone else.

[BnEl15]

Honestly I don't really mind wanked Servants ignoring Nasuverse lore so long as he can justify his decisions when others asked as to why they're built the way they are. Even if he can't, I'm still largely indifferent about the whole power level issue. Maybe it's just his writing style, idk.

The spelling is a much larger issue, though. Even if you have good ideas, not all of them could be conveyed due to your grammatical mistakes. Isn't there an autocorrect function in google docs?

[NittyGritty]

Koga’s sheets would still be absurdly wanked and with zero understanding of nasuverse lore/metaphysics even if we ignored the shit tier spelling.

Best I can saw is that koga has some decent to mildly good ideas and is fairly creative and willing to do servants nobody else has ever done but all those ideas could have been done better in the hands of literally anyone else.

[Kabalisto Koga]

Koga’s sheets would still be absurdly wanked and with zero understanding of nasuverse lore/metaphysics even if we ignored the shit tier spelling.

Best I can saw is that koga has some decent to mildly good ideas and is fairly creative and willing to do servants nobody else has ever done before that could have been done better in the hands of literally anyone else.

then can you please explain me where i have not a understanding of the nasuverse please ?

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Honestly I don't really mind wanked Servants ignoring Nasuverse lore so long as he can justify his decisions when others asked as to why they're built the way they are. Even if he can't, I'm still largely indifferent about the whole power level issue. Maybe it's just his writing style, idk.

The spelling is a much larger issue, though. Even if you have good ideas, not all of them could be conveyed due to your grammatical mistakes. Isn't there an autocorrect function in google docs?

I really like to know where i have a misunderstanding or ignoring of nasuverse lore at this point seriously ?

[NINE-lives]

I like to say what’s on my mind.

[BnEl15]

then can you please explain me where i have not a understanding of the nasuverse please ?

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I really like to know where i have a misunderstanding or ignoring of nasuverse lore at this point seriously ?

I don't really get it either as I'm not an expert in Nasuverse lore myself. I'm saying the spelling is a bigger issue here, as other people might not comprehend your ideas, or even get turned off from reading them in the first place due to the grammatical mistakes.

[Lambda-Nu]

Koga’s sheets would still be absurdly wanked and with zero understanding of nasuverse lore/metaphysics even if we ignored the shit tier spelling.

Best I can saw is that koga has some decent to mildly good ideas and is fairly creative and willing to do servants nobody else has ever done but all those ideas could have been done better in the hands of literally anyone else.

I smell a challenge.

[Kabalisto Koga]

I don't really get it either as I'm not an expert in Nasuverse lore myself. I'm saying the spelling is a bigger issue here, as other people might not comprehend your ideas, or even get turned off from reading them in the first place due to the grammatical mistakes.

i think i hae a good grasp on nasu verse lore atleast decent enough but for me is the powerlevel aspect after the etablishment of the powerhouses of the Lostbelt stories the average niveau what is average powerlevel of servants raised considerably its just that other servant createsrs have hesitations in power levels . About the spelling well its better as my first servant profiles and i am to be honest rather clueless about the grammer mistakes i might have made . but i admit sometimes one of the steps is to think about how i describe what i have in mind and try to explain my imagination.

[Lambda-Nu]

NINE Lives the type of person to randomly walk up to you while on the job and go, "Nice weather we're having" as its literally storming outside and then be awkwardly silent for the minute following. Its adorable really

Okay, now I want to see what your opinions on the other forumites are. This was pretty funny.

[Kabalisto Koga]

I smell a challenge.

what challenge ?

[Lambda-Nu]

what challenge ?

NINE-Lives has literally said that literally anyone can do your own ideas better than you, Koga.

[BnEl15]

i think i hae a good grasp on nasu verse lore atleast decent enough but for me is the powerlevel aspect after the etablishment of the powerhouses of the Lostbelt stories the average niveau what is average powerlevel of servants raised considerably its just that other servant createsrs have hesitations in power levels . About the spelling well its better as my first servant profiles and i am to be honest rather clueless about the grammer mistakes i might have made . but i admit sometimes one of the steps is to think about how i describe what i have in mind and try to explain my imagination.

It's one thing to be clueless, but it's another thing to be clueless and not try to improve yourself by reading or learning to better your grammar. As for your sheets being better than your initial ones... idk about that. The quality still varies. Some of them are tolerable and understandable enough with the grammar, others are very difficult to read.

[Kabalisto Koga]

NINE-Lives has literally said that literally anyone can do your own ideas better than you, Koga.

I understand ,well to be honest i would be interested if anyone would d that when i tell my ideas if others can execute them better.

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It's one thing to be clueless, but it's another thing to be clueless and not try to improve yourself by reading or learning to better your grammar. As for your sheets being better than your initial ones... idk about that. The quality still varies. Some of them are tolerable and understandable enough with the grammar, others are very difficult to read.

i want to improve myself in that regard but every timwe i try it seems to not be succesfull ,as in that regard seems it really that i vary depending on my current day form perhaps . that i on some days by chance are doing it better and on some not .

[NittyGritty]

i assume ESL

[NINE-lives]

I love how this thread has devolved into a koga bully thread.

[Kabalisto Koga]

i assume ESL

What should that word shortcut mean ?

[BnEl15]

I love how this thread has devolved into a koga bully thread.

Hey, I'm trying to give honest criticism here. Whether he'll actually take it and improve himself remains to be seen.