Create-A-Servant 3

[Anju Addams]

Somebody hacked a chat meeting at the Italian Senate to broadcast a porn video of Tifa from FF7. Now it's memed across the internet.

Pah, they clearly have no taste. Tifa isn't even the best FFVII girl anyways.
It was funny though.

[Alexcoene]

Pah, they clearly have no taste. Tifa isn't even the best FFVII girl anyways.
It was funny though.

I can't believe such bad taste exist on this forum :P

And sounds like you've been struck by inspiration, Tabris.

[Vance]

My main thoughts while making this sheet were basically "lets not do anything too crazy here" so yeah, I can agree that there were some missed opportunities. Like recently, I just had the thought for Rahab's NP actually closing her off in a building and turning said building into the metaphorical eye of a Perfect Storm that just acts a Anti-City noble phantasm. :v

[Kabalisto Koga]

Somebody hacked a chat meeting at the Italian Senate to broadcast a porn video of Tifa from FF7. Now it's memed across the internet.

hold up you mean really ?!

[Stillinneverland]

So, this is my first post in this forum, and, as such. I'm still not very experienced with the interface. Besides that, this is a character from a fanfic I'm planning to write, the main concept being "a HGW made out of only Kings". Also, a sort of disclaimer: yes, I know he's OP, but he also requires a lot more mana than even Karna, and the other characters are similarly broken. I'd appreciate any criticism, specially as it's the first Servant I've made.

Class: Lancer

True Name: Alulim

Attribute: Star

Strength: D+
Endurance: E
Agility: E
Mana: C
Luck: B
NP: EX

Class Skills:

Magic Resistance: A

Cancel spells of A-Rank or below, no matter what greater magecraft it is. In practice, the Servant is untouchable to modern magi, so it would not be an exaggeration to title the Servant a "Magus Killer".

Personal Skills:

Imperial Privilege: ★ (A+++)

In truth, Lancer shouldn't be on the Throne of Heroes. He is a hero from even before the White Titan, before the "heroes of humanity" existed. However, as the first king of humanity, Lancer has received the highest possible rank of Imperial Privilege, unmatched even by the king of Rome, and, as such, he was capable of using it as a way to be summoned, his catalyst simply being the concept of "only kings may be summoned". However, due to the effort necessary to retain what should be an impossible existence, Lancer not only is extremely mana-consuming, but has also lowered the effective rank of Imperial Privilege, to "only" A+++.

Even then, he's able to acquire almost any skill, even those that burden the body, for a long period of time. He is also able to heighten his physical abilities, for example, making his strength A+ for a limited period of time, or raising his endurance for a split second to A++, to tank a powerful blow.

This is, in truth, Lancer's main form of combat, as, due to being what should be an impossible existence, his physical parameters are very low, and, as a king, his fighting isn't the best.

Able to acquire temporarily NPs from other Kings, as he sees himself as their precursor, but has to "untether" the Imperial Privilege that makes him stay summoned, so his Mana cost rises drastically, all of his Parameters drop to E-, his NPs are sealed and he becomes incorporeal for a good while after use.

Affection of the Gods: C

The First King, he was chosen by the Sumerian Gods to rule the humans, and, as such, has received their blessing. In truth, in Lancer's vision, he wasn't that special as a human, only being chosen because the Gods didn't see any worthier candidate, leading to the lower rank than this skill would normally have.

Lancer's STR, END and AGL are ranked up by one.

Information Erasure: B-

Lancer was once the most important human on Earth, but, tens of thousands of years after his death, the only thing that is remembered of him is his name, and the idea that he was once the king of Sumeria. As such, this skill has been manifested, and it makes Lancer's enemies forget everything about him, from his appearance to his fighting style, with the exception of his True Name and Class. It's still possible to deduce Lancer's abilities from the aftermath of the fight, but, as Lancer is an extremely versatile Servant, this isn't a significant amount discovery.

Lancer himself dislikes the existence of this skill, and sees it as an erasure of his deeds, and will try to remember his enemies of what he did on a second encounter.

Natural Body: A

A King who reigned for millennia, Lancer stayed young for all that time, receiving a high rank in this skill. It ranks up Lancer's STR and makes him always stay in his "golden age", never losing his physical form.

Noble Phantasms:

Sons of Earth; The First Human: A

Anti-Army

Alulim is frequently conflated with Adam, the First Human, a Man created from clay, and, in fact, sometimes wonders if he really is the original person that became Adam, and, as such, he's able to replicate the original miracle.

Lancer is able to create golem-like creatures using any kind of earth, and, once they're created and infused with mana, they become self-sufficient, having the Perfect Form A skill.

This, however, takes a while, at 12 hours per "son", but is able to speed it to only 2 hours if he uses Imperial Privilege to acquire Item Construction, though this will skyrocket the mana cost to over 20 times the original cost.

Each "son" has all of their parameters ranked at E-, but have the skill of a typical trained warrior, higher than even Lancer himself, and will remain even after he is defeated, due to their Perfect Form skill.

The Spear of the King: All Things One Day Led to My Spear: EX

Anti-World

When summoned, Lancer carries a mundane spear, without any magical energy emanating from it. It is, however, an extremely ancient and powerful Noble Phantasm, and the proof of Lancer's Kingship.

When Alulim was chosen by the Sumerian Gods, he was also blessed with the greatest gift possible: a piece of their Authority, an Authority of Ruling. It was a symbol made as a way to proof that this human was superior to every other human, and that he should be obeyed.

When Lancer proclaims a something, starting with the sentence "I now decree", he creates a thing similar to a Bounded Field of variable area, in which the laws that Lancer set absolutely cannot be broken by a "human", with not even the highest level of Magic Resistance being able to ignore it.

This Noble Phantasm costs no mana, as above "magic" or "magecraft", but an Authority that comes from the Babylonian Gods, and, as such, they're the ones who support it. However, Lancer, in his belief of being a "fair ruler", will never set laws that wouldn't apply equally to him, barring him from creating laws like "I now decree, the Archer class shall die".

[NINE-lives]

Pretty good for a first sheet.

[Lambda-Nu]

Somebody hacked a chat meeting at the Italian Senate to broadcast a porn video of Tifa from FF7. Now it's memed across the internet.

And it is freaking hilarious!

[NINE-lives]

I give it a month or two until we all forget about it.

[Vance]

Somebody hacked a chat meeting at the Italian Senate to broadcast a porn video of Tifa from FF7. Now it's memed across the internet.

I frankly had no idea about this event. I don't even watch news or tv anymore

[Ismail2002]

Yeah, so this situation with your sheet FC is one big coincidence, huh

[Alexcoene]

It's a rather funny timing, especially since Vance happened to use it for a prostitute of all people.

Also, welcome, Still! As for Alulim, the 'first king' is a rather cool concept, tough I dunno why you gave him two skills who practically do the same thing with Natural Body and Affection of the Gods, especially since the later can have very different effect. And the kind of OP that's just 'he can do whatever he want' is not very interesting in my opinion. Plus, from what I see from quick search, Adam is conflated with another completely different person, so I don't get why he has that first NP, even if it's a cool concept. But it's a good first sheet.

[VitaVitaAR]

Heeey, thinking of working on another sheet soon. Just need to settle on who to do it for, another Foreigner, another Caster, a Berserker, or an Assassin. I think I have some others I could write up too but off the top of my head those are the ones I've got most prepared.

[DelRey]

well if you ask: go for Foreigner

[Ismail2002]

Class: Caster
True Name: Banu Musa Brothers
Origin: Umayyad Dynasty
Alignment: True Neutral

Parameters
Strength: E
Agility: D
Endurance: D
Mana: A
Luck: C
NP: A

Summoning Line:

Muhammad: Hello, Caster My name is Muhammad ibn Musa. Nice to meet you

Ahmad: Hey, I am obviously the one in charge, hello my name is Ahmad ibn Musa

Al Hasan: No, I am the one in charge, hello my name is Al Hasan ibn Musa

Muhammad: Uhm, I think we scare Master

All of three of them: Oops, sorry for that.

Ahmad: Our summoning kind of fuse us on to the same spirit core and body

Al-Hasan: Okay, I got it why don't you call us Banu Musa Instead.

(Intense nodding)

Lore/Background:

The Banū Mūsā brothers ("Sons of Moses"), namely Abū Jaʿfar, Muḥammad ibn Mūsā ibn Shākir (before 803–February 873); Abū al‐Qāsim, Aḥmad ibn Mūsā ibn Shākir (d. 9th century); and Al-Ḥasan ibn Mūsā ibn Shākir (d. 9th century), were three ninth-century Persian scholars who lived and worked in Baghdad. They are known for their Book of Ingenious Devices on automata (automatic machines) and mechanical devices. Another important work of theirs is the Book on the Measurement of Plane and Spherical Figures, a foundational work on geometry that was frequently quoted by both Islamic and European mathematicians.

The Banu Musa worked in astronomical observatories established in Baghdad by the Abbasid Caliph al-Ma'mun as well as doing research in the House of Wisdom. They also participated in a 9th-century expedition to make geodesic measurements to determine the length of a degree.

Banu Musa Brothers are credited with inventing the first music sequencer which was the earliest type of programmable machine
Due to how the Brothers all co pen their discoveries their spirit cores all merge into a single one in the records of the Throne of Heroes and it is a source of never ending headaches for them.

Class Skills:

Territory Creation (B+ Rank): Creation of a "Workshop" becomes possible to specialize in many things. Though the function of the workshop changes depending which brother is in charge of it at the moment. If Muhammad is in charge the workshop becomes an observatory that specialize in astromancy magecraft. If it's Ahmad it's becomes a personal workshop that specialize in small machineries and toys and if it's Al Hasan it's becomes a library of imaginary shapes. Many different books and drawings so different complicated shapes.

Item Construction (B+ Rank): The three brothers have each own type of items that they specialize in. Muhammad specialize in making items that are based in astronomy and astromancy type such as telescope, astrolabe, a star map, etc. Ahmad can create the most items consistently create illusionary or trick items and machines and If Al-Hasan has it becomes sort of projection. That he visualizes a shape in his mind and he can construct it but he can only make things that has one continuous shape.

Personal Skills:

Kitāb al‐Hayʾa (B Rank): The basis of modern Astromancy. This skill allows Caster to cast a recite any type of astromancy magecraft past the 1st century AD with relatively ease. It comes out as a memory compendium that is installed within their sprit core. Though all of the brothers can use this its rank rises by one if it's Muhammad that is in charge of the main body.

This skill is based on the eldest brother Muhammad contribution in Astronomy and paved the way for the earliest models of heliocentrism. That would be later be discovered by Copernicus and the skill represented his most famous book on the subject matter.

Familiar Creation {Drones} (B Rank): This skill allows caster to make early drones and automata that for surveillance. They have little combat capabilities except a few self defense mechanisms. That caster can install such as a one use magecraft attack and such. If Ahmad was in charge of the main body. It's rank increase by one and the drones would have for better combat capabilities.

This skill come from their main thesis book of 100 igneous devices and some early versions of the automata but theirs is more like small trinkets and toys that they can mess around.

Imaginary Geometry (A Rank): This Skill allows Caster to compute his surroundings and calculate everything that is around him. Such as the size of the building he is in to the trajectory of an incoming attack. He uses this as a sort of precognition in battle and as a sort of semi clairvoyance but rather than a clear picture that caster can visualize. It's representing itself as a set of formulas that must be decipher first to understand it's meaning. This skill increases rank if Al-Hasan was in charge of the main body.

This skill comes from their contribution into mathematic theorems. Such as their development in calculating volumes that is the foundation of many of today's geometry and the practice of mathematics of using hard arithmetic calculations for determining geometrical values.

Noble Phantasm:

Marvelous Hollow Sounds, Al-Hiyal
Rank: C+
Type: Anti-Mind

This NP shows up in a form a flute, this noble phantasm can create many visual and auditory illusions but it's having another benefit of recording and playing back any type of magecraft into an illusory attack. But people with high mana or strong magic circuits could see through the bluff and went off unscathed. It uses can also function as a video recorder as it can record and project any memory and things that the user intends to a full 3D model of it. Caster edit out what it records to create new types of spells to varying degrees of success or doctored the data that it has been recorded in the NP.

Misc Lines:

Likes: We like to create many new things, though it's hard to know what each of us like personally since our memories kind of fused into each other.

Dislike: Our predicament with this summoning, it's a hassle to share one body like this. It's hard to even coordinate our movements.

Holy Grail: we would like it if we can be separated from each other into individual servants.

Event: A festival, we love to join. What sort of attraction should me make how about this or that? (Intense Yelling)

Bond Lines:

Bond Line 1: Hello, Master. We made something; would you like to test it out.

Bond Line 2: Hey, Master which one of us do you is the smartest me or the other two. Sorry let me rephrase that again. Muhammad, Ahmad, or Al-Hasan (Minor Note: Depending on which spirit is controlling the body right now. Their name is change to me).

Bond Line 3: After many trials and errors. Master, let us present to you, our inventions. Now which one of them do you think is the best one.

Bond Line 4: We consider your criticism and present you with our newly upgraded inventions. What do you think of them? Did we improve on the previous model?

Bond Line 5: Since we been together long enough, I want to ask you something. Who I am right now? You guess correctly, I see that our bond really came through.

Relationship:

Robotic Servants: Hey, would you mind letting us inspect you a bit. Hey why are you running get back here.

Sitonai: Hey, how did you able to control the other sprits in your head. Serious any tips would be great since I am kind of a mess right. So, did you manage to control them. I wish I could control my brothers to the same extent as you.

Edison: Hey, Sir. We got many design ideas that store up in files. Do you think they could make in the market?

Da Vinci (Rider): You say that big you made that body of yours. Do you think you can manage it for us please?

[Serra]

There are a bunch of typoes in the Banu Musa sheet: most of them are still easy to understand, but I don't really understand what they're saying to Da Vinci. I like the sheet overall though: the brothers' different specialisation are all represented pretty well via the fact that the class skills change what they can create depending on who's in control, and that each brother is associated with a personal skill which raises in rank if he's in control, and then the Noble Phantasm helps them bring together as a Servant, since you've got a shared invention; the effects of the skills and of the Noble Phantasm are all pretty fun, too.

Unrelated, but after much deliberation I've decided to repost my old Bayajidda sheet unchanged. It's the second sheet I ever made, and initially took it down due to factors discussed on pages 141 and 143. However, while I do think there are aspects that could be reworked and/or expanded in other takes on the same character that focus more on a specific version rather than being more general ('Man on the Donkey' connection, Cain connection, etc. etc.), I honestly still like the version I ended up with at first well enough to keep it up.

Of note - due to how I'm choosing to release sheets for now, this does make it so the Saber from Southeast Asia that I had been planning to work on next will be slotted into the next batch of seven Servants instead; though it's not 100% certain, I'll probably work on an Archer next instead, to round out the three Knight classes for the current batch.

[Byegod]

I wanna make a servant sheet or two, is there a template I can borrow?

[RoydGolden]

I wanna make a servant sheet or two, is there a template I can borrow?

Most everyone develops their own style but there is a template in the old contest thread OP you can use.

[pinetree]

I though there was one on the OP but there isn't, huh.

You can copy one of mine if you want. My older ones don't have collapse tag bullshit to deal with.

[mathieu]

Why everything is all white ?

[DelRey]

Cant go wrong with the classics and then develop where you like it.
You could also use my older formatting like my Watcher Ra or Shielder Nekhbet