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    Servant Lancer:

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    True Name: Phineas P. Gage
    Alignment: True Neutral
    Alternate Class: None (Only Lancer)
    Origin: The United States (North & Central America)
    Armament: Spear (Tamping Iron)
    Summoning Catalysts: A tamping iron with the following inscription
    This is the bar that was shot through the head of Mr Phinehas P. Gage at Cavendish Vermont Sept 14, 1848. He fully recovered from the injury & deposited this bar in the Museum of the Medical College of Harvard University. •   Phinehas P. Gage •   Lebanon Grafton Cy N–H •   Jan 6 1850
    Hidden Attribute: Human
    Likes: Honest work, Horses
    Dislikes: Psychoanalysis, Fungus

    Parameters:
    Strength: D
    Agility: D
    Endurance: E+
    Mana: D
    Luck: E+
    NP: C+


    Personality (Under Construction)
    Phineas Gage after the accident was so notably strange after his accident that he was unable to maintain his job directing a work gang blasting rock. However, from his time as a Chilean Carriage driver he was still recognized as hard working diligent man.

    In truth, as much as Mr. Gage has truly become a strange individual in the wake of his accident, the mythos of him becoming a crazed lunatic instead stems from phrenologists seeking to utilize Mr. Gage's unique circumstances to boost their pseudoscience's credibility. This was further exacerbated by the gradual accretion of sensationalist journalists not double checking their sources in favor of a more engaging story.

    In actuality, Mr. is kind and hardworking...but his actions and responses have a discordant tempo to them. While it is true that there are no known mental illnesses that could accurately be ascribed to Mr. Gage, even a Stranger would be able to pick up on something being off about him.

    Although his legend has enough appropriate anecdotes for Mr. Gage to be summoned as a Berserker, the Medical Marvel residing in his head leaves not enough room for the needed rage and the strange twistings of American Crowbar Case have rendered the consolation of madness inaccessible to him.


    Lore (Under Construction)
    Phineas Gage was a normal human except for his astonishing survival. On September 13, 1848, Gage was directing a work gang blasting rock.

    As Gage was doing this around 4:30 p.m., his attention was attracted by his men working behind him. Looking over his right shoulder, and inadvertently bringing his head into line with the blast hole and tamping iron, Gage opened his mouth to speak; in that same instant the tamping iron sparked against the rock and (possibly because the sand had been omitted) the powder exploded. Rocketed from the hole, the tamping iron entered the left side of Gage's face in an upward direction. Continuing upward outside the upper jaw it passed behind the left eye, through the left side of the brain, then completely out the top of the skull.​​

    Thankfully through the tireless efforts of Dr. John Martyn Harlow, Mr. Gage was able to survive the head injury and recover a semblance of normal life. Although the phrenological studies of Harlow, did play a major part in the misremembrance of Mr. Gage's personality.

    Normally Phineas Gage's life even with such a miraculous recovery would be unworthy of being noticed by the throne of heroes; however, humanity has collectively acknowledged Gage's survival and recovery (as a third of his life was after the accident) to be a marvel of modern medicine and all further miraculous surgeries were compared against Dr. Harlow's accomplishment and Gage's fortitude (which often found these other miracles wanting in comparison).



    Skills (Under Construction)

    Class Skills:
    Magic Resistance: E+
    Phineas Gage was a normal human except for his astonishing survival. Having survived a miraculous event Mr. Gage is ever so slightly more resistant to magecraft then a normal human. As per Medical Marvel Mr. Gage is immune to any mental-based mage craft and has great resistances to piercing mage craft solely targeting his head.

    Personal Skills:
    Medical Marvel: A
    Phineas Gage was a normal human except for his astonishing survival. Thanks to the miraculous efforts of Doctor John Martyn Harlow, Mr. Gage was able to not only successfully recover from his massive head trauma but become resistant to future head trauma. While rather frail in his post injury condition, his head is capable of both surviving and recovering from severe injuries. Mr. Gage's Endurance and Luck could be considered A rank when it comes to surviving and healing from head wounds.

    American Crowbar Case: B

    Phineas Gage was a normal human except for his astonishing survival. Unfortunately, regardless of how miraculous Mr. Gage's survival, he still suffered massive brain damage. Thus Mr. Gage is extremely limited in his independent actions and he requires 1.25 times more mana for his Master to support him than an equivalent Servant otherwise would. A silver lining to this skill is that Mr. Gage is immune to Mental Interference and can call upon his numerous recollections of the accident to reenact the incident, with a foe as the target, as long as he is wielding the Tamping Iron, The Constant Companion and Narrating his story.
    Medicine:-
    Phineas Gage was a normal human except for his astonishing survival. Mr. Gage possess no great medical knowledge, yet his head is filled with its secrets and he spent a third of life retelling the story of a Medical Marvel. The potential of this skill and what eventual form it will take has yet to be decided.


    Noble Phantasm
    Tamping Iron, The Constant Companion
    Rank: C+
    Type: Anti-Unit

    This is the tamping iron that passed through Phineas Gage's skull. It bears the following inscription
    This is the bar that was shot through the head of Mr Phinehas P. Gage at Cavendish Vermont Sept 14, 1848. He fully recovered from the injury & deposited this bar in the Museum of the Medical College of Harvard University. •   Phinehas P. Gage •   Lebanon Grafton Cy N–H •   Jan 6 1850
    . This tamping iron is extremely sharp and when targeting the head of a foe it is capable of piercing any skull regardless of magical or physical barriers. However, it is relatively unwieldy for a human to use and the head wounds it inflicts are surprisingly a lot less lethal then one would expect.

    The rank of Tamping Iron, The Constant Companion is boosted when Phineas Gage both Narrates his first encounter with it and utilizes his American Crowbar Case skill. The three combine to manifest a copy of the noble phantasm with a primed blasting charge underneath the target (as long as Gage can see the target and the target can hear Gage's Narration). This copy of the Noble Phantasm is obscured from the target's perception and is blasted from the ground towards their skull when the target opens their mouth (thus reenacting the story as narrated). This use of Noble Phantasm is best for use on stationary grounded targets (as a sufficiently speedy target could exit the effective range of the blast charge before triggering its detonation). This is a rather exhausting use and repeated activations in a short time period becoming harder and harder (think of him as having 5 charges and he regains charges at a rate of ((his current number of charges)+1)/5 per hour).



    Meta Explanation
    I was trying to create a Servant who was primarily American, primarily a Lancer, who was in the public domain, and hadn't already been used. Phineas Gage was the first to fit all of these criteria.

    I think Mr. Gage is a rather low tier servant, but has the potential to hard counter a Caster with purely mental offensive spells or an Assassin/Archer which specializes in head-shots. I was trying to accurately depict a normal human who was strong enough to survive the partial destruction of their head yet is still recovering from said injury.

    Currently reworking to include the advice of RoydGolden. I think I have a good idea, but it is going to take some research to get everything to properly come together.
    Last edited by Wan Dering'cul Tivator; March 24th, 2022 at 02:49 AM. Reason: RoydGolden's advice

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    A great Athena concept, I think it would be interesting to see how Chiron would interact with her. Might also have some fun interactions with Evel Knievel or Phaeton (son of Helios) if they ever end up in the Throne of Heroes
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    Gage: Pretty neat take on a figure I've never seen written up as a Servant before. His NP is interesting with the concept of "narrating" his story to reenact it. He's rather one-note but I suppose that's a little inevitable given he really is famous for just one thing. I feel like you could've tried to flesh him out a bit more with a personality section though. If you wanted to stretch things a little you could've even given him some ability attacking the concept of a soul as separate from the body based on how his case was sometimes used to disprove such things (as his psyche changed following accident).

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    Great advice!!! As I'm new to this thread and website I just want to confirm it is okay for me to continue to tinker and flesh out my servant posts until the inevitable creation of Create-A-Servant-4 (and not that I have to repost a new version each time I make a major alteration)

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    Quote Originally Posted by Wan Dering'cul Tivator View Post
    Great advice!!! As I'm new to this thread and website I just want to confirm it is okay for me to continue to tinker and flesh out my servant posts until the inevitable creation of Create-A-Servant-4 (and not that I have to repost a new version each time I make a major alteration)
    Editing is fine, I and others have certainly done so in the past. I definitely wouldn't recommend posting a new version each time you want to change something.

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    Phineas Gage: Oho, a guy I actually studied about. You got the basics down, though I agree with Royd that he feels a little one-note. On that note, I feel like you could spice up the sheet more with what happened to him following the incident: His personality changed significantly, he became more temperamental and less mentally stable all around. The world (well, mainly psychologists and neurologists) considered him as an example on how brain damage could really change people. You can reflect this through a personality section, or maybe you can give him a Berserker qualification, or at least give that NP an ability that turns others into Berserkers after getting hit by the rod (just something on top of my head).

    Anyway, don't mind me, just slightly nerding out over the guy. Not a bad first sheet, all in all.

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    I guess everybody is tacking a hiatus due to March break and will be back for the contest but I seriously wonder what happened to cursed, wyvern and kamera. Those three have been MIA for quite a while

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    Kamera talked a few pages back. Cursed and Wyvern are probs doing contest stuff or just doing life things. This thread has slow weeks, you should know this by now.

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    "Heh, you've got some audacity summoning the greatest archer in Greece to be your Servant. I can appreciate that. Now then, if you're really my 'Master' then I hope you're ready to accompany me on this journey until the very end. We're gonna' surpass the gods themselves!"

    Archer of the Spurned Sun:

    Appearance:

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    True Name: Eurytus

    Alignment: Chaotic Neutral

    Alternate Class: Rider

    Armament: A thick and heavy greatbow later passed down to his son's friend Odysseus, which can only be drawn by one with an at least B-rank in Strength.

    Strength- B
    Agility- C
    Endurance- C
    Mana- C
    Luck- D
    NP- A+

    Personality
    Cocky and gregarious. Archer acts unlike a typical king being rather open and friendly around common people. Rather than royal blood or titles he takes incredible pride in his talents as a bowman, openly proclaiming that he will someday surpass the god Apollo and become the greatest archer ever. He's willing to back this up however and will cheerfully challenge anyone to a test of skill. Even if he loses Archer surprisingly won't rage or throw a tantrum but just take it as an opportunity to practice even harder so he can win next time.

    Archer does not dislike nor revere the gods. Rather, he appreciates them as a milestone motivating humanity towards ever greater feats. Archer believes happiness is having an unreachable goal to perpetually struggle towards, so he's grateful to the gods for providing that. "Humans don't exist to serve the gods, gods exist so that humans might surpass them." is a statement that would easily leave his lips. While seemingly arrogant, he is actually humble recognizing there is always a higher summit to surmount.

    Archer enjoys teaching others wishing to guide them along the same philosophy of self-improvement as himself. Contrary to his usual hotblooded demeanor he is a caring and diligent instructor who greatly values his students' progress, tailoring the training regimen to their own unique abilities. Although he does have an unfortunate habit of taking credit for all their accomplishments even when they've long since surpassed him...

    Archer has severely mixed feelings of pride and resentment towards his greatest disciple Heracles. While he admires the hero for taking his bow techniques to new heights Archer can't forgive how he killed his beloved son Iphitus. Even knowing it was an act of madness Archer won't overlook the crime, and if summoned alongside Heracles he'll insist on extracting a proper penance from him personally. Archer also has a fondness for horses and upon encountering the steed of another Servant with a luxurious mane will enthusiastically ask to pet it.

    As a boisterous and flashy individual, he dislikes thieves and those who scurry in the shadows without showing their face, bellowing for them to reveal themselves and challenge him. For that reason he has natural worst compatibility with the Assassin Class, alongside Berserker as it reminds him of Heracles' state during the death of his son.

    For his wish on the Holy Grail, as becoming the greatest archer and surpassing Apollo is something he wishes to accomplish by his own strength, seeing no meaning if it were given to him by an omnipotent wishgranter, Archer's only desire would be to revive Iphitus alongside his other children and be together with them again.

    Likes: proving his skills, the gods (as stepping-stones for humanity's growth), his children, horses
    Dislikes: thieves, those who violate hospitality, the gods (as tyrants that oppress humanity)
    Talents: archery, teaching, showboating
    Natural Enemy: Heracles, Apollo, Autolycus


    Class Skills:

    Independent Action- B
    The ability to sustain oneself in existence without a supply of magical energy from one's Master. At this rank Archer can linger in the World for two days in the absence of an active contract. As a king and man of proud spirit who even exalted himself above Apollo Archer boasts a high affinity for this Skill.

    If summoned as Rider he'd have in place of this...
    Riding- A+
    The ability to ride animals and handle vehicles. At this rank all animals up to the level of Phantasmal and Divine Beasts can be mounted and ridden at a high degree of skill. An aficionado of horses who gathered many of them in life he qualifies highly for this Skill. Through his One Who Will Surpass Apollo Personal Skill Eurytus manifests as a Servant with an even higher rank to the point where he could handle his divine grandfather's sacred cattle or drive his solar chariot. Though after hearing of a certain other legend he's leery to try the latter...

    Magic Resistance- C+
    Confers protection against magical effects. At this rank spells with a chant below two verses are cancelled. Cannot cope against the likes of High Thaumaturgy or Greater Rituals. While a king from the Age of Gods he was never recorded as encountering Magecraft in life and hence sports only a moderate resistance. Through his One Who Will Surpass Apollo Personal Skill Archer obtains stronger protection against fire or light elemental Magecraft.


    Personal Skills:

    Instructor Of The Great Hero- A+
    A Skill that crystallizes Archer's acclaim in having taught bowmanship to the greatest hero of Greece, Heracles. While his student undoubtedly went on to far surpass him nevertheless his feats still indirectly attest to Archer's prowess. This Skill works backwards by granting Archer the collective accumulation of techniques he "must've had" to mentor a great hero like Heracles. Encompasses a bevy of archery related abilities like Clairvoyance, Eye Of The Mind (True), Instinct and Eternal Arms Mastery ​at B~A+ rank as well as more esoteric techniques like performing "trickshots" by ricocheting one's arrows off a surface other than the target or hiding a second arrow in the shadow of the first.

    Furthermore Archer may also impart his bowmanship to others provided they show willingness to learn. While limited solely to abilities involved in aiming, drawing and shooting a bow his proficiency as an educator is great enough to raise ordinary humans to the level of lesser Archer-Classed Servants. Those brimming with preexisting potential could reach levels beyond even Archer, much like his pupil Heracles did...

    One Who Will Surpass Apollo- B+
    A representation of Archer's unbridled audacity in declaring that he was a greater bowman than the sun god Apollo, an unwise challenge that got him summarily struck down for impiety. A narrowing of Imperial Privilege that allows Archer to claim Skills rightfully belonging to Apollo, merely by insisting that he has the right to do so. These include Mana Burst (Flames), Clairvoyance (Sun) and Natural Body at one rank lower. However using these abilities incurs self-damage to Archer's Saint Graph, a lingering curse from infringing on the domain of deities.

    Divinity- D-
    Qualifies one's aptitude as a Divine Spirit. Grandson of Apollo he inherits a modest level of divinity. It's been further weakened by being struck down by Apollo for his hubris.


    Noble Phantasm
    Nine Lives Ílios
    Hundred Shots That Cast Down The Primeval Serpent


    Rank: A+

    Type: Anti-Unit

    The famous Nine Lives technique devised by his greatest pupil Heracles for slaying the Lernean Hydra. A barrage of nine overlapping strikes performed at godspeed, created to exterminate an opponent who can grow back no matter how many times they're killed. While Archer never directly taught Heracles this technique, which was developed in the heat of battle, as his instructor in archery he can be considered the origin of it. Thus granting him a prototype of it as a Noble Phantasm.

    Based on Archer's ancestry and boast to have surpassed the sun god Apollo, this Noble Phantasm draws from an older iteration of the same mythic archetype; Apollo's slaying the chthonic serpent Python with a volley of one hundred arrows. Upon invocation Archer launches nine arrows from his bow that take the form of solar lasers automatically hunting down the enemy and eradicating them. From both Apollo's vanquishing Python and Heracles' slaying the Lernean Hydra this barrage has powerful Anti-Serpent, Anti-Regeneration attributes. Alongside dealing greater damage against serpentine/draconic beings the arrows' heat sears wounds to cauterize them, disrupting any form of unnatural regeneration the opponent possesses.

    As Heracles slaying the Lernean Hydra is a conceptual descendant of Apollo's defeat of Python, this is technically the "original" Nine Lives and in a direct clash with his disciple Archer's version would prevail. Despite Heracles being the one who actually invented the technique in the first place. Truly the kind of insufferable teacher who brags "he learned it all from me" even when their student has progressed far beyond them...


    If summoned as Rider he'd have...
    Iphitus
    King's Prided Stable


    Rank: C+

    Type: Anti-Unit~Army

    As king Eurytus took pride in his horses, having amassed a substantial stable of the finest breeds from across the land. That's what brought such great affront when he suspected Heracles of making off with twelve of them. A misunderstanding that culminated in the death of his beloved son Iphitus when the demigod once more succumbed to the throes of madness. Named after said son, as both him and his horses were Eurytus' greatest pride and joy as king, this Noble Phantasm allows Eurytus to open a gateway to his stable and call upon the twelve mares Heracles supposedly stole from him.

    Well-bred and exceptional equines of the highest quality, Eurytus can summon all twelve at once or a single one to use as his personal mount. However this Noble Phantasm's greatest potential lies in his connection to Apollo. By equalizing his steeds with the sacred cattle of Apollo that were pilfered by the trickster god Hermes (exploiting a confusion where the animals stolen were sometimes described as cattle rather than mares), Eurytus wreathes them in fiery bovine auras and sends them to trample the enemy, erupting in a great conflagration upon impact.
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    So any thoughts on my Eurytus?

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    So any thoughts on my Eurytus?
    I think He'd have some fun interactions with Quetzalcoatl if they ever got summoned into the same Holy Grail war. Would also be interesting to see what Master he got paired with. If he gets a Master with a god-complex there could be a really interesting back and forth between them as the Master either handles having his god-complex shattered in the competition or figuring out how not to go mad with power (as Eurytus guides his master between realistic humility and courageous ambition). On the other hand it would be interesting if he gets paired with a Master that is pessimistic and gloomy, as Eurytus helps build up his Master's confidence and self-assurance (and then later when Eurytus encounters a trauma the Master helps out Eurytus).

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    Quote Originally Posted by Wan Dering'cul Tivator View Post
    I think He'd have some fun interactions with Quetzalcoatl if they ever got summoned into the same Holy Grail war. Would also be interesting to see what Master he got paired with. If he gets a Master with a god-complex there could be a really interesting back and forth between them as the Master either handles having his god-complex shattered in the competition or figuring out how not to go mad with power (as Eurytus guides his master between realistic humility and courageous ambition). On the other hand it would be interesting if he gets paired with a Master that is pessimistic and gloomy, as Eurytus helps build up his Master's confidence and self-assurance (and then later when Eurytus encounters a trauma the Master helps out Eurytus).
    If he met Quetz maybe they'd bond where he teaches her archery and she teaches him luchador. I imagine he'd be partnered to a less self-confident Master he can act as an "older bro" to (a la Simon and Kamina, as parts of Eurytus' character were definitely inspired by Shonen protagonists). But being summoned by a god complex Master could be fun with them developing a goodnatured rivalry of trying to surpass each other.

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    “Ah, it seems like it's time for me to have a go at things. I’ll try not to disappoint. I am Eve, Born of Adam,...and the first consumer of the Fruit of Knowledge.”

    True Name: Eve
    Class: Assassin
    Alignment: Chaotic Good
    Source: The Bible
    Region: Israel

    Parameters:
    Strength: - (B)
    Endurance: - (B)
    Agility: - (B)
    Mana: - (B)
    Luck: - (B)

    Class Skills:

    Presence Concealment EX
    The capacity to hide one's presence as a Servant. It is a common Class Skill of the Assassin class. As a being born (albeit indirectly) from the World, she has the ability to temporarily return to her true origin and become one with it.

    Personal Skills:

    Natural Body A+
    The possession of a perfect body as a living being since birth. Created from the first human that God himself had created, she would naturally possess this skill at a high rank. Nonetheless, this skill should have been at EX rank but due to being inflicted with the original maladies that would plague future generations of humans, it was lowered.

    Of Adam A
    A skill signifying her existence as a piece of Adam's. Despite being side by side with him since the beginning, Eve is still an extension of Adam's body, and is therefore, lower than it in terms of standing. Fighting against any Servant that exists in the boundary of mankind (i.e. Hidden trait of Man) would have her parameters be made to be one rank lower than theirs.

    Fruit of Knowledge A
    The knowledge granted by the consumption of the Fruit of the Tree of Knowledge. A sin that was rewarded with banishment from paradise. A constant look into the root of all existence. A double edge skill that would allow her access to any and all types of skills that exist in the form of "knowledge" regardless of uniqueness. However, recklessly using this skill would put a deep pressure upon her Spirit Origin that would cause it to collapse the moment Eve overextends herself.

    Noble Phantasm

    Ousted Eve: Be Forced Out of Paradise, You Unfortunate Souls
    Rank: A++
    Type: Anti-Unit

    The noble phantasm of Eve. The punishment that was shared with Adam for disobeying the rule of God and eating the Fruit of Knowledge. Removal from the paradise known as the Garden of Eden and out into the World to fend for themselves.

    It is the nullification of the very concept of "Safety" that takes many forms; the unstoppable intrusion into an inaccessible area, an attack that unceasingly penetrate any sort of defense, or hit any kind of target no matter the speed. It is supremely effective in regards to "Barrier" type noble phantasms. A limit of this noble phantasm lies mostly in the range of its effect as she would have to get within a certain radius to have the nullification take effect. Another limit is Eve's nature preventing her from actively looking out for targets.


    Personality

    Assassin, at her core, is a passive and gentle person; the type of person who can innocently smile for no particular reason though that is not all of her character. Taking form of the short period where she had just after she had been banished from the Garden of Eden, she displays a wide, expansive comprehension of topic known to humanity going from the mundane like sciences, law, and languages to the mystical like Mystery, Thaumaturgical Foundations, and Phantasmal Species.

    It is not only comprehension of subjects she knows but comprehension of future or past events. The Fruit she had eaten bore a connection to the "root" that connects to all and as such, she was given this information. Knowing of the suffering that Humanity would go through causes her intense guilt at times but she will still manage to smile through it all. She saw Humanity's suffering but also its triumph, its ability to overcome. She is content to know that even if she was "wrong", she wasn't "incorrect".


    Creator's Note: Surprisingly, this sheet didn't take long to come up with. You just got plain -well not so plain- Eve. No temptation skills or outside assistance from the Serpent. Well I won't deny that there might be an Eve like that somewhere but for now, its just Eve as she is. As you can probably tell, I'm getting back into my Simple style of sheets.

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    Assassin Eve: an interesting take to ignore temptation, also that there isn't anything about motherhood (as the first mother with Cain, Abel, and Seth).

    Honestly she feels slightly more like a Caster than an Assassin, but she definitely still works (although I would question her getting B in all non-NP parameters as the version of her that is an Assassin)

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    Quote Originally Posted by Wan Dering'cul Tivator View Post
    Assassin Eve: an interesting take to ignore temptation, also that there isn't anything about motherhood (as the first mother with Cain, Abel, and Seth).

    Honestly she feels slightly more like a Caster than an Assassin, but she definitely still works (although I would question her getting B in all non-NP parameters as the version of her that is an Assassin)
    I did entertain a Caster Eve but I felt that "no, lets try something different." Her parameter situation is like Enkidu's, beimg that the standard is pretty much all B but due to Of Adam, they would probably switch around so much, she might as well have no officially visualized parameters. She does have knowledge of her children and loves them dearly but at the end of the day, due to her current form, it is a bit distant as she hasn't experienced motherhood yet.

    On the flipside, I do a Beast Eve in my noggin but she's part of a barely conceptualized Lostbelt.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Vance View Post
    I did entertain a Caster Eve but I felt that "no, lets try something different." Her parameter situation is like Enkidu's, beimg that the standard is pretty much all B but due to Of Adam, they would probably switch around so much, she might as well have no officially visualized parameters. She does have knowledge of her children and loves them dearly but at of the day, due to her current form, it is a bit distant as she hasn't experienced motherhood yet.

    On the flipside, I do a Beast Eve in my noggin but she's part of a barely conceptualized Lostbelt.
    ok that makes sense! I guess this is playing into the idea that Eve's curiosity being the main reason she ate the forbidden fruit (as the second human she was willing to take the path less travelled, to infringe upon the unknown, to skirt the edge of possibility. More of a scout/inquisitor Assassin then contracted/serial killer Assassin)

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    I make a lot of custom Servants between me and my friends, but this is the first time I'm posting one publicly, so... go easy on me?

    Appearance:

    True Name: Fujiwara no Chikata

    Servant Class: Caster

    Alignment: Chaotic Evil

    History:
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    A Heian-era sorcerer, little is known about Fujiwara no Chikata besides that they opposed the emperor. One legend that remains, however, details that Chikata summoned 4 oni to destroy the imperial army: Kin-Ki, Fuu-Ki, Sui-Ki, and Ongyo-Ki. Each of these oni possessed great powers. Kin-Ki was stronger than any man, and it was said that every weapon merely bounced off its skin. Fuu-Ki could control the wind, even being able to summon tornadoes to blow away entire castles. Sui-Ki controlled water and ice, and could freeze even men with a touch. And Ongyoki could suppress its aura, preventing anyone from detecting it and allowing it to strike without warning. Under Fujiwara no Chikata’s command, these 4 oni ravaged the imperial capital, until the poet Kinotomo recited a spell: “All things, whether grass or tree, are ruled by the Emperor, and not even an oni can turn his back to the Emperor and live in this land.” With this spell, the oni were banished and Chikata was finally subdued.

    As for why they are summoned as a female...

    “Isn’t it just so devilish?! I was recorded in history as a man, so nobody will suspect such a cute girl to be the great Fujiwara no Chikata!”

    Personality:
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    Pompous and arrogant, they possess an overinflated sense of their own importance. While they may come off as a simple braggart, they are indeed a highly skilled summoner, and are more than capable of backing up their boasts. For some, this makes their bragging even more unbearable. They enjoy introducing themselves to opponents, expecting them to quiver in fear when they realize who they are, but they react with outrage and indignation if the opponent does not recognize their name.

    They enjoy evil for the sake of evil. For them, they need no more justification for their actions than to know that they would be ruining the life of another, though even minor inconveniences are enough to satisfy them. They possess no true wish for the grail; rather, when they obtain it, they will simply wish for whatever they happen to desire at that moment. Most often, this leads to the death or ruination of any enemy Masters that still happen to be alive when the grail is activated.


    Parameters

    Strength: E

    Endurance: E

    Agility: D

    Mana: B++

    Luck: B+

    Noble Phantasm: A

    Class Skills

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    Territory Creation C++ - A class skill of Casters that allows for the construction of a customized space. For Fujiwara no Chikata, they are capable of constructing a Shrine, which is more efficient than a Workshop. This Shrine automatically funnels ambient mana into their summons, allowing Caster to fight without their Master’s support, though only to a degree.

    Item Creation C - A class skill of Casters that allows for the creation of magical items. Caster is capable of crafting a variety of oni-warding and luck-boosting charms.


    Personal Skills

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    High-Speed Summoning Rituals A+++ - The ability to perform summoning rituals at high speeds. Rather than the strength of the rituals, this skill augments how complex they must be. At this rank, by merely tracing a circle in the air, Caster is able to summon beings on the level of Demonic Beasts.

    Enchanting Enchantress EX - A unique skill marking Fujiwara no Chikata’s ability to command oni, even being able to control the four great onis Kin-Ki, Fuu-Ki, Sui-Ki, and Ongyo-Ki. A type of charisma that is especially powerful against magical beings. Even those possessing sentience, such as mages, can fall under her control if they do not possess sufficient strength of will. Conversely, if the target possesses little to no magic at all, the skill’s effect is greatly weakened.

    Information Erasure (False) C - A skill granted to those who, rather than merely being unknown, worked to actively suppress information about themselves. At higher ranks, this skill allows a Servant to even alter the effects of their own skills at will. However, for Caster, who only possesses this skill at C rank, it merely obscures their class and parameters and allows them to alter their appearance.


    Noble Phantasm

    Spoiler:
    Hyakki Yagyo
    Midnight Parade of 100 Demons

    Type: Anti-Army

    Rank: A

    The Hyakki Yagyo, a recurring theme in Japanese folklore, is a chaotic assembly consisting of both oni and yokai that is considered similar to the English concept of ‘pandemonium’. Though not specifically tied to any one Heroic Spirit, Caster has appropriated the name for their Noble Phantasm.

    Similar to a Reality Marble, this ability replaces the surrounding world with another; rather than Caster’s personal world, however, the world is replaced with the Demon Realm, a place where the sky burns red, the clouds drip blood, trees sprout and grow as withered husks, and the grass ignites into flames at the slightest touch. It is a place of death and chaos where proper life not only struggles, but is actively suppressed.

    While active, Caster draws upon the seemingly endless mana of the Demon Realm. Their already-impressive summoning abilities are boosted, allowing them to summon forth a seemingly endless stream of oni. Additionally, summoning rituals are no longer required; with mere thoughts and words, Caster draws the oni out of thin air.

    While immensely powerful on its own, this Noble Phantasm’s true strength lies somewhere else...


    Four Great Oni
    Fujiwara no Chikata’s Revenge

    Type: Anti-Dynasty

    Rank: EX

    Caster’s ultimate Noble Phantasm, only usable while Hyakki Yagyo: Midnight Parade of 100 Demons is active.

    With this skill, Caster calls forth their four great oni: Kin-Ki, Fuu-Ki, Sui-Ki, and Ongyo-Ki. The oni are summoned as mid-high ranking Servants of their own, possessing skills and parameters independent of Caster’s own.

    Kin-Ki (Berserker): STR: A, END: A, AGI: D, MANA: E, LUCK: B, Mad Enhancement: A, Unshakable as Gold: A (Unique skill: Attacks ranked lower than Kin-Ki’s Endurance are negated)

    Fuu-Ki (Saber): STR: B, END: B, AGI: B, MANA: C, LUCK: B, Magic Resistance: A, Swift as Wind: A (Unique skill: Allows for the manipulation of wind)

    Sui-Ki (Caster): STR: D, END: D, AGI: B, MANA: A, LUCK: C, Item Creation: A, Gentle as Water: A (Unique skill: allows for the manipulation of water and ice)

    Ongyo-Ki (Assassin): STR: C, END: C, AGI: A+, Mana: D, LUCK: D, Presence Concealment: A+, Unknowable as Night: A (Unique Skill: Allows for the usage of mystical arts known as ‘ninjutsu’)


    The four oni serve as a form of absolute advantage for Caster: individually powerful, and nearly insurmountable when together, as the oni display inhuman levels of cooperation and coordination. It is a sure-win technique, though it possesses two major weaknesses. First, though it can only be used while Hyakki Yagyo is active, it does not draw on the mana of the Demon Realm; though Caster can supplement some of the cost with their Shrine, the strain of maintaining four more Servant-level existences will kill their Master if sustained for longer than a few minutes, and even canceling the Noble Phantasm before that point will still prevent it from being activated again for a few days.

    The second weakness is the same one it possessed in life. If an opponent recites the same spell that Kinotomo did, the oni will be immediately banished and this Noble Phantasm sealed for the rest of the war.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Serefin99 View Post
    The second weakness is the same one it possessed in life. If an opponent recites the same spell that Kinotomo did, the oni will be immediately banished and this Noble Phantasm sealed for the rest of the war.
    That is a pretty great justification for a gender bend as most Masters are decently aware of Japanese lore and being able to delay the destruction of an EX rank Noble Phantasm is a worthy endeavor. Definitely a Servant where you want to make a quick push to wipe out all the other Masters before Four Great Oni Fujiwara no Chikata’s Revenge gets sealed.

    If this version of Fujiwara no Chikata ended up in an official Fate Holy Grail war then there is a lot of potential for storytelling. The obvious use would be as the early arc bad guy who tower rushes the other Masters, where they forward deploy Hyakki Yagyo Midnight Parade of 100 Demons and then assault with Four Great Oni Fujiwara no Chikata’s Revenge. After potentially wiping out one or two Masters, and forcing several of the others to relocate to their backup bases (or even their backup-backup bases), someone eventually figures out Fujiwara no Chikata and the Four Great Oni Fujiwara no Chikata’s Revenge is sealed. This pushes both Fujiwara no Chikata and their Master onto their backfoot, but not out of the game yet. Since there would no longer be a need to fear an ally figuring out Fujiwara no Chikata's weakness (and then backstabbing them with the chant), they are now more free to seek out other Masters who are willing to work together. However, they would need to deal with the fallout of their early game aggro souring their relationship with the other Masters and servants.

    Seems overall like a wonderful servant that while perhaps not top-tier waifu material would still be a fan favorite.
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    I’m curious. How many of you are willing to do lostbelt servants?

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    ^ To pre-existing Lostbelts or fanon ones?

    Not that it matters since my answer to both would still be "no".
    "Here's a bangin lil' tune about takin' on The Man!"

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