Create-A-Servant 3

[NINE-lives]

You should create a servant compendium.

[jishara]

I have one already. Under Blog Entries, next to my Singularities.

[NINE-lives]

Have you considered doing a beast or grand servant btw.

[jishara]

I have considered it, but I want to complete the reworks of my already posted ones, then the singularity servants, then my backlog of ideas, and then work on maybe doing a beast or a grand. What do you think of my Meleager?

[NINE-lives]

You should join us in the womb thread some more. We might help develope your ideas. You should give your sheets more time to develope.

[jishara]

Yep, I will be slowing down from now on, and will join you there. How's my meleager rework?

[RoydGolden]

Royd: Thanks for your comments. I'm updating those now. What do you think of my Meleager update?

Still not a fan of the mechanical effect (or the EX-rank for that matter). I'd rather it be more vague like just "claims sound much more persuasive coming from her" rather than seemingly outright mind-control. Meleager looks fine.

[BnEl15]

Shoot, I'm still short one Pretender to rival Del as King of Pretenders. Glad to see "Hanna-Barbera" still receiving some love though. Concept-wise, they're one of the most high-effort sheets I've come up with in a while.

For "Hanna-Barbera", keeping their origin as "fairytales" should be fine, as they have no clear origin point. They're famous all over Europe, including Britain, Germany, and France, but I think the second-best option here is France, since their stories were famous enough to change the French for "fox" from "goupil" to "renart".

For Celebi, he's... Turkish, I guess. From the Ottoman Empire, Constantinople specifically. Where does that fall again?

As for my faves... there's too many to mention tbh. Del is Del, Kamera's usual Demon God series, Pine's Daedalus trilogy + epilogue, the one-hit wonder that was Stormbringer's Thomas Paine, as well as Royd and Serra's more recent sheets.

Here's to another 50 pages and counting.

[Kamera]

I've suggested this before, but the Middle East section should really be renamed into the Levant.

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This would make it include Turkey too, since this is what the section has already been used for

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(also because it doesn't include the Arabian Peninsula and Iran (which has their own category), compared to the term Middle-East which implies it include those too)

[jishara]

Updated Prokokiev

[DelRey]

I would love it if someone with enough skills and knowledge would create a worldmap marked with the respective regions we categorize here.

Also shoutout to those that state their regions early on in their sheets. Helps tremendously

[kiwi]

Hm... upon reflection... should my Dodo sheet really be under Other? He's technically from Mauritius.

[DelRey]

Considering i put various other animals in their respective countries, you are right. But that is not in my hands anymore, forward your complains towards Lambda. But our man is a busy boy, so it may take a while before anything is changed.

I just noticed i might have a chance to change the compendium as I please...hehehe

[jishara]

Source: Niyocchin on Pinterest

Class: Caster
Other Classes: N/A
True Name: Penelope
Alignment: Lawful Good
Place of Origin: Greek Mythology

Parameters:

STR: E
END: B
AGI: C
MGI: B
LCK: D
NP: A

Height: 170cm
Weight: 60kg
Likes: Her husband and children, weaving
Dislikes: Suitors, Troy
Talent: Weaving, Waiting
Natural Enemy: Paris
Attribute: Earth
Traits: Female, Humanoid, Weak to Enuma Elish
Armament: A long string, Bridal Bed
Catalyst: Wood from an ancient oak tree

Class Skills:
Item Creation: Subsumed into Master Weaver
Territory Creation: Subsumed into Master Weaver

Personal Skills:
Master Weaver A+: The status as someone who is at the apex of weaving. As penelope is most well known for her constant weaving, she is capable of using this to create many things, such as bounded fields, magical items, and even E-ranked noble phantasms.
Princess Of Loveliness B-: The nature of a beauty who draws allies to herself. Ranked with a negative modifier due to her hatred of the suitors who came to woo her. She will try to seal this much of the time.
Familiar (Duck) C: The ability to summon ducks to aid her. She gains this skill due to, upon her birth, when her father tried to drown her, a flock of ducks carried her back up. Thus, this also provides nigh-immunity to drowning effects.

Noble Phantasm(s):

Penelope
The Shroud Of Mourning

Type: Support
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Max Targets: Self

Penelope is a noble phantasm comprised of a black shroud she is always holding. It is the sublimation of her constantly stalling the suitors by telling them that she could only marry them when the shroud was finished, but each night unweaving it so that it would never be finished. This allows her to unweave it and slow time. Every time she unweaves it, the next second will be stretched out so that from her perspective it is thirty seconds, symbolizing the three years she was able to keep it going. This allows her to easily get into an advantageous position. However, every time she unweaves it, she must reweave the thread before she can reuse it. In addition, this goes on a cooldown of seventeen minutes, symbolizing the seventeen years that she couldn't use this.

Bridal Bed
The Olive Branch

Type: Anti-Unit
Rank: B
Range: 2 meters
Max Targets: 1

The noble phantasm symbolizing Odysseus and Penelope reuniting, under the name of their olive bridal bed. It is sublimated into a small stick she carries, Bridal Bed. This stick bears the property of reconciliation, which causes the enemy hit to gain a vision towards their closest companion, and giving them a mental interference effect to immediately go to reconcile with them, ignoring everything else. However, this is a lot weaker on servants, as usually their closest friends are not summoned in the same Grail War.

Lore: Penelope was a queen of Ithaca and the wife of Odysseus. When she was born, she was hid from her father for a short time as her mother knew the father wanted a son. When the father found out, he tried to drown her, but a flock of ducks saved her. He saw this as an omen, raised her, and grew to care for her. She married Odysseus. Then the trojan war happened. Odysseus was away for twenty years, ten fighting and ten returning. And Penelope had suitors. So she delayed them by saying she wouldn't remarry until she finished weaving a mourning shroud for her father-in-law, Laertes. However, every night, she unwove the section she did that day, so that she would never finish. Three years later, a servant discovered it and told everyone about it, leading Penelope to have to stall them with several other tactics. Her final tactic was she would only marry someone who was able to shoot Odysseus's bow (A very hefty and hard to shoot bow) through 12 axe heads, an almost impossible feat. Odysseus, however, was there, under a spell so that he would not be recognised. He shot it through all the axe heads and killed the suitors. Penelope didn't believe it was him, though, but he knew something he couldn't have known otherwise: one of the posts of their bridal bed was a live olive tree. They reconciled.

Personality:
A kind and genuine person. She is incredibly in love with Odysseus. Her wish for the holy grail is for Odysseus to have never had to go through the Odyssey. She understands that he had to and wouldn't have not fought in the Trojan War, but she wishes he had been able to return sooner.
Natural Enemy: Circe

Relationships:
Odysseus: "My love! You're here! It's so nice to see you! How I've missed you!"
Hector/Paris: "How dare you keep my love away from me all this time?"
Achilles: "Oh, nice to see you."
Artemis: "Artemis is... wait, are you saying she's Artemis, master? Oh my goodness. She doesn't seem to match my image of her at all. Maybe that's good though."
Circe: "How dare you try to steal him? Why, you!"

Creator Notes: New servant, Penelope.

[DelRey]

okay fellas, its time for what you all have not been waiting for. Im here to once again tell you the Kings of Extra Classes.

Royd remains the Bulvark here. He bolstered his claim as Shielder King with 7 Servants on his back.

BnEl15 better watch out because he now shares his Watcher King seat with Vance and Kamera, each with 3 Servants.

Me, DelRey, still gatekeeps the Gatekeeper Crown with 4 Servants and 1 Redux. But I call out pinetree and Royd to challenge me! gimme more of your badass GKs.

A mysterious man named Morg van Destro wears the Mask of the Fakers with 4 Servants. But Royd pumped out 3 Fakers in a short period of time. Someone is going for it and stands with me beside the throne.

I still pretend that it matters because I hold the Pretender Crown! Do not fight me, Morg!

Wtf, there has been a lot of movement! I now share the Seat of Voyagers with Nuclear and Royd!

Somehow I still retain my Foreigner Kingdom but once again Royd marches forward 9 Servants against my 10 with 4 Reduxes!

Rey-Coin to the Moon! I gained the MoonCancer Title now that I have 2 sheets under my belt. But its more like 1.X because my first one is a bit weird.

No altercations yet, Wyvern retains the AlterEgo and Lover position with 5 and 6 Servants each.

Royd saves his Saver position and adds one more Servant to his lead. 5 Servants. He also holds a position on the Table of Beasts.

[Kamera]

I'm pretty sure I also have 3 Watchers

[DelRey]

you are right, your damokles, i have to add it
its actually funny how different all your watchers are

[BnEl15]

Oh my, I'm gradually getting closer to contending for the Alter Ego (4) and Pretender (2) seats. Let's see if I can keep my King of Watchers title and take two other crowns by the time the next milestone rolls around.

Still no plans for Gatekeeper, MoonCancer, or Shielder from me though.

[jishara]

Anyone happen to have any comments on my Penelope?

[kiwi]

hmmm
i think i'm going to steal the moon cancer seat for fun