Here is one of the servants that Shiki offered some Infos a while back , ihope that i have made something good out of it and a small hint beforehand :no compound skills.
Milon of Croton
(Berserker)
Jarhaha ! Servant Berserker Milon is annuncing himself before you Sorcerer,now either guide me to the Stage or banquet !
Ascensions
Height:215 cm
Weight:159~ kg
Alignment: Chaotic Evil/Lawful Good
Attribute:Man
Weapons:His Body as unit,a Thorny Sword
Other Qualifying Classes:Caster
Likes:Tasty dishes (especially meat based),victories in all senses,himself,wise People,People with insight
Dislikes:bad Cuisine,loses ,haughty People with no Spine,cowards,those who threats Sages
Talents/Hobbies:Body Training obtimation,to Keep ones Body in prime state,To think About the truth of the world
Compatible Masters:Bazet McFraga Remitz,Shirou Emiya
Parameter:
Strenght:A
Endurance:B+
Agility:C+
Luck:C
Mana:C
NP:B
Background and Personality
skills
Noblephantasm
notes
Feedback are welcomed especially i am curious About the from Shiki.
Last edited by Kabalisto Koga; May 22nd, 2020 at 03:12 PM.
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Milon: This is a quite good sheet. If not for the spelling/grammar issues (and even there you've improved somewhat) I really can't find any faults at all. Skills are creative and fit his legend well, and I like how you gave him a more intellectual personality (drawing from the stories where he was a friend of Pythagoras) than just the usual musclebound Berserker.
Out of curiosity, how do you think he'd get along (either in a fight or regular interaction) with my Commodus? Given they're both competitive fighters who modelled themselves after Heracles and had a bit of an ego problem (even though Commodus is far worse in that regard) and all.
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Last edited by Cursed by Fortuna; July 3rd, 2022 at 07:59 PM.
Im the oppinon as that both are having interestingly quite similar states would her Coloseo Pravis doesnt greatly increase her strenght and as Milon will directly waste no time to enage her in close Combat where i would say he holds more practical experience especially if put on the "Stage" so would she by activating /\ just give him more mental bost unconciously and although she could take Eye of Mind would i say that she couldnt steal Milons All Strenght lies in the Veins skill as he is tied towards him .I can imagine that their fight would be óne where Willpower is more important than other factors presumably are both fall tired to their backs and praise the other one .
I would think that he would quite like Lucia Commodia as he respect her oppinions and her oppinion from Herakless, i could even think that he may be the sort of Father - figure she would have wished to had in llife. though i would be curious what she would think of his philosophical intelectual side ?
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Class: Assassin
Other Classes: Lancer, Avenger
Alignment: Lawful Good
Place of Origin: America
Parameters:
STR: B
END: B
AGI: B
MGI: B
LCK: B
NP: B+
Height: 6'5
Weight: 235 lbs
Likes: Human women, sweets, jazz
Dislikes: Human men, magazines
Talent: Rhetoric
Natural Enemy: Humanity
Attribute: Star
Armament: Natural Stingers, Mandibles
Catalyst: A dollop of honey
Class Skills:
Personal Skills:
Noble Phantasm(s):
Lore:
Personality:
Creator Notes:
...wrong thread. This should go under the Create your own Modern Fiction Servants thread.
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Last edited by Cursed by Fortuna; July 3rd, 2022 at 07:59 PM.
"Hail, Master! I am Assassin, your Servant. Perhaps you are not that impressed? Well, I assure you, you will find then that your share is not so bad after all."
Class: Assassin
Alignment: True/Neutral
Region: France/japan
Height: 156cm
Weight: 55kg
Likes: Freedom, mice, Master
Dislikes: Small spaces, being in debt, unnecessary violence
Talent: Lying
Armaments: Claws, ghostly fire
Natural Enemy: Dogs, ogres
Stats
Str: E
End: D
Agi: A
Mna: C
Lck: A
NP: B
Skills
Noble Phantasm
Background
Personality
Last edited by the god of world-0; May 23rd, 2020 at 03:36 AM.
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An quite good servant Zero and the noblephantasm she have is a good idea i must say.
In return what do you think of my Milon ?
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He is somewhat interesting, can't really say much more than that.
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Servant, Rider. Consider this a formal contract"
Class: Rider
Alignment: True/neutral
Region: Scandinavia
Height: 145cm
Weight: 48kg
Likes: Money, practicing her craft, smart people
Dislikes: Liars, prideful kings, dumb people
Talent: Witchcraft
Armaments: Darkness
Natural Enemy: King Vanlandi
Stats
Str: C
End: C
Agi: C
Mna: A
Lck: B
NP: C
Skills
Noble Phantasm
Background
Personality
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A couple weeks ago, Yu Mei-ren's mats got released and translated, which lead me to complain about Urobuchi's bullshit in another website, and as you can tell, halfway through it I got a Servant idea that I could try to expand upon. I equal parts love and hate how canon-compliant the most ridiculous parts of this Servant are, but this was a very fun little challenge nonetheless.
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Momotarou
Class: Saber
Source: Japanese folk tales
Region: Japan
Gender: Male
Alignment: Lawful Good
Height: 178cm
Weight: 55kg
Strength: B+
Endurance: A++
Agility: C
Magic: A+
Luck: C
Noble Phantasm: B
Class Skills
Personal Skills
Noble Phantasm
Character
Lore
Author notes
Hey! I did the Voyager probe first!
Kinda, sorta, maybe... >_>
But 34 predicted the Voyager of the Stars Skill and got the canon personality completely right.
the unique Feeling when you made an Canon servant before the official creators did. And your Momotarou is lso quite good i must say i bet he could make a good servant for an fanstory.
and i asked this a while ago ,would you have Comun some suggestions for me for a Kashin Koji Caster
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Here is an Demonstration of the official Voyager 34 ! enjoy this Feeling !
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and as we are having the Topic of Requiem have we more info About Kundry as she sounded interesting in the wiki ?
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