Create-A-Servant 3

**DelRey** · May 21st, 2022, 04:16 PM

according to my online tool, i at least did not accidentally reuse the same link twice. This is the mistake i expect from me usually. I doubt there are any mistakes now outside perhaps wrong regions. Another argument for an Iberia category is that it was under muslim control for a while, so this category could check out this time properly.
Lambda, how do you even sort all this? by hand? or with the sort tool from Word?

Originally Posted by Random

Personally, I feel like I'm about to Watcher Travesty Unfold.

Please clap, then bring popcorn.

**NittyGritty** · May 21st, 2022, 04:23 PM

watcher discourse is a bunch of mids fighting for fourth place

all hail the 7 class orthodoxy

**pinetree** · May 21st, 2022, 04:52 PM

I pity the person attempting to make the most of any regular class.
May Emperor Royd the Prolific be merciful to them.

**DelRey** · May 21st, 2022, 05:14 PM

Royd is, no questions asked, the king of the core classes. Eternal legend

**WhiteFrenzy** · May 21st, 2022, 05:19 PM

Go full Danielle Steel.
Pump out the same sheet but with different historical characters to not make it obvious and call it a day.
Who cares everything is fair game for the Crown.

Be your own Faker.

**jishara** · May 21st, 2022, 05:29 PM

Originally Posted by Lambda-Nu

Will do! If anyone else has any new compilations that still need to be added, let me know and I will get to it when I can.

Hi, I'm not sure if I qualify, but here is my compilation list. Thank you so much! https://blogs.nrvnqsr.com/entry.php/4406-Servant-List

**DelRey** · May 21st, 2022, 05:37 PM

now that i took a look at your comp again (and of course you qualify, you are a creator here like anyone else) you should not use collapse for your servant links. use the URL tag and color them within the bracket. That reduces it to one click instead of two

**DesReploid** · May 21st, 2022, 05:49 PM

Originally Posted by Lambda-Nu

Will do! If anyone else has any new compilations that still need to be added, let me know and I will get to it when I can.

I believe I am also missing from the creators list. I'll put the link here for your copying ease: https://blogs.nrvnqsr.com/entry.php/...ant-Compendium

Also, thank you very much for using your time to keep that OP post up-to-date!

**Lambda-Nu** · May 21st, 2022, 07:43 PM

Originally Posted by DesReploid

I believe I am also missing from the creators list. I'll put the link here for your copying ease: https://blogs.nrvnqsr.com/entry.php/...ant-Compendium

Also, thank you very much for using your time to keep that OP post up-to-date!

Thanks! I really do try my best.

Also, I might just update the creators section now while I’m on break. It takes much less effort than update the much more complex Servant list.

Also, I’m honestly thinking that Rey’s idea to merge Spain and Portugal into an Iberian Peninsula section might be a good idea. They’re both pretty small sections individually, especially Portugal.

- - - Updated - - -

Okay, Creators list has been updated. If there’s anyone I missed, please speak up.

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But heads-up; break’s almost over, so I won’t be able to update the Creators list until after my shift ends.

**NittyGritty** · May 21st, 2022, 10:52 PM

i see now

i have to kill royd to claim the throne

**Ismail2002** · May 21st, 2022, 11:08 PM

Hey, no murders here alright or you will go to jail

**RoydGolden** · May 21st, 2022, 11:14 PM

Originally Posted by NittyGritty

i see now

i have to kill royd to claim the throne

Unfortunately for you, killing me is an impossible task.

**jishara** · May 22nd, 2022, 12:40 AM

Source: Daamn on Pixiv

Class: Caster
Other Classes: N/A
True Name: Andre le Notre
Alignment: Lawful Good
Place of Origin: France (17th Century)

Parameters:

STR: C
END: D
AGI: D
MGI: C
LCK: C
NP: B

Height: 170cm
Weight: 150lbs
Likes: Order, Gardening
Dislikes: Chaos, Untamed Nature
Talent: Gardening
Natural Enemy: Koyanskaya of Light, Koyanskaya of Darkness
Attribute: Man
Traits: Male, Humanoid, Weak to Enuma Elish
Armament: Champs-Elysses
Catalyst: A leaf from the Versailles Garden

Class Skills:

Item Construction C+: The ability to create items. As Andre is not a mage in and of himself, he is not able to create items naturally. However, he is able to create a plant copy of any item that is associated with gardening, as well as, theoretically, any item that he associates with gardening.

Territory Creation C: The ability to construct a bounded field. As Andre isn't a mage, he can't create it naturally, but due to his skill at gardening, he can create a bounded field by removing nature pver leylines, which he did in life by accident, qualifying him for this class. This bounded field is more effective at blocking beings belonging to Nature.

Personal Skills:

Jardin a la Francaise A++: The style known as French Formal Gardening. As he was the greatest of them all in this style, he has it at its maximal rank, A++. This is the ultimate gardening technique, causing his very existence and powers to be antithetical to the concept of Nature, further harming Nature Spirits and beings heavily connected to the natural world. In addition, this grants him a rank-up to his Strength, Endurance, and Agility. Lastly, this also grants him proficiency in all gardening techniques.

Broderie B: Andre's brilliant colors in his gardening and his painting skills have been sublimated into this skill. The plants that he grow can be converted into colors, which he can apply to anything. If he colors himself with his own plants, he gains Prescence Concealment at the same rank within his Territory.

Gardener of Versailles D+: The ability to grow plants in his footsteps. This has been granted to him by his status as Gardener of Versailles. However, due to his mentality, this has dropped down in rank, only allowing him to grow small plants. However, if he is using existing seeds, this shoots up to B rank, allowing him to quickly and easily cultivate almost any plant, no matter whether it should be able to live in its environment.

Noble Phantasm(s):

Champs-Elysees
The Avenue Of Paris

Type: Anti-Unit
Rank: C
Range: 5 meters
Max Targets: 1

The sublimation of the designs he created for Paris that created the Avenue des Champs-Elysees, it manifests as a pair of pruning shears. It is a fairly innocuous noble phantasm, with one single property, the ability to "crush with the force of an entire avenue". In essence, while he is using it, his strength parameter is ranked up and armor below rank C is ignored.

Versailles
Garden of Order

Type: Bounded Field
Rank: B
Range: 100 meters
Max Targets: 100

This noble phantasm manifests the gardens of Versailles as a bounded field expanding from his Territory Creation. However, due to his mentality, these have been reshaped into a bounded field that enforces order on existence there. Phantasmal beasts made of topiary roam an endless maze of plants, wherein it is almost impossible to find the center. In addition, the area, with the exception of the center, is antethetical to Chaotic or Neutral servants, only being dealable with easily by Lawful servants. Andre, on the other hand, maintains in the center, a fountain which restores Mana to anyone who reaches it passively.

Lore: Andre Le Notre was a French gardener, born into a family of gardeners. He studied mathematics, painting, and architecture, and worked with Charles le Brun. He then rose in fame, from working with the king's brother, to the Tuileries, to all of the King's gardens, to becoming the Controller of all royal buildings. He completed many gardens, but his most famous are the Gardens at Versailles.

Personality: A stern and strict man obsessed with order and neatness. He despises untamed nature, and adores cultivated gardens. He finds most systems of government chaotic, with only a Monarchy being orderly enough. He also finds any Chaotic servants absolutely horrendous, and even Neutral servants will also be disliked by him. So if he ever meets a Lawful Monarch who also loves order, he will feel as if he made an ally. His wish for the holy grail is for all of nature to be chopped away, transformed into perfect order.

Relationships:
Koyanskaya: "A nature spirit makes the world more chaotic. You must be cleansed! Versailles!"
Lawful Monarchs: "Oh, my Lord. A pleasure to meet a kindred spirit. Do you have any gardens that need a gardener?"
Chaotic Monarchs: "False king, you have fallen out of your way. Do not worry, I shall cleanse you of your chaos! Versailles!"
Marie Antoinette: "A member of the house of Bourbon. A pleasure to meet you, queen of France."
Clytie: "Intriguing, a fellow artist. But you are far too chaotic. I shall cleanse you of your madness. Versailles!"

**DelRey** · May 22nd, 2022, 03:31 AM

That was educational. I deduced him in GaS but i didnt read into his craft. I feel like one could have done more and less with him.
The epithets for the class skills seem unneeded and the ranks too high. Item Construction (not creation btw) can be used to make items he needs like scissors or fertilizer and perhaps whatever can be made out of the plants and flowers he uses. When provided with some seeds he can cultivate them too. Stuff like that. Topiary too of course but mentioning that outside his NP they dont do much except look good.
For Territory Creation, looking up the forms he uses i think a gimmick that he can build gardens on top of leylines is neat and the bushes follow their pattern. Here one can say he gained access to this class because, even by accident, he used this to make the most out of his art.
I would structure jardin differently. First two sentences stay, then you tell us it is the ultimate gardening technique. As the greatest gardener, as a skill this grants him control over "nature itself" in that he, like human anatomy understanding, he can deal extra damage against nature spirits and servants that use plants as weapon. For example he would be a natural counter to my Orcus. It flows better than "here a really powerful skill and here some minor useless quirk".
Broderie is another case where you can do more with actually himself. He studied painting, then let him see himself a painter that uses actual plants as his color and reapply that to himself. Here item construction could add that with the materials he uses to color his gardens, he can make actual paint from them. Applying "making something of nature a canvas" he can color himself with it and gain something like presence concealment while inside a garden of his. Like Morg's The Artist did. In a limited way he could apply this to allied as well.
Np are fine but i would remove the Reality Marble and make it his garden that he makes with territory creation. RMs are actually pretty rare and an outright stated non-magus if his standing shouldnt have one. He is a niche servant that fits the style of first setting up his trump card. This flows better with his kit. He can use the leylines to empower the topiary golems and his Broderie makes him stealthy inside his garden to attack with his scissors. Now he is a threat you can sell.

**jishara** · May 22nd, 2022, 03:58 AM

Originally Posted by DelRey

That was educational. I deduced him in GaS but i didnt read into his craft. I feel like one could have done more and less with him.
The epithets for the class skills seem unneeded and the ranks too high. Item Construction (not creation btw) can be used to make items he needs like scissors or fertilizer and perhaps whatever can be made out of the plants and flowers he uses. When provided with some seeds he can cultivate them too. Stuff like that. Topiary too of course but mentioning that outside his NP they dont do much except look good.
For Territory Creation, looking up the forms he uses i think a gimmick that he can build gardens on top of leylines is neat and the bushes follow their pattern. Here one can say he gained access to this class because, even by accident, he used this to make the most out of his art.
I would structure jardin differently. First two sentences stay, then you tell us it is the ultimate gardening technique. As the greatest gardener, as a skill this grants him control over "nature itself" in that he, like human anatomy understanding, he can deal extra damage against nature spirits and servants that use plants as weapon. For example he would be a natural counter to my Orcus. It flows better than "here a really powerful skill and here some minor useless quirk".
Broderie is another case where you can do more with actually himself. He studied painting, then let him see himself a painter that uses actual plants as his color and reapply that to himself. Here item construction could add that with the materials he uses to color his gardens, he can make actual paint from them. Applying "making something of nature a canvas" he can color himself with it and gain something like presence concealment while inside a garden of his. Like Morg's The Artist did. In a limited way he could apply this to allied as well.
Np are fine but i would remove the Reality Marble and make it his garden that he makes with territory creation. RMs are actually pretty rare and an outright stated non-magus if his standing shouldnt have one. He is a niche servant that fits the style of first setting up his trump card. This flows better with his kit. He can use the leylines to empower the topiary golems and his Broderie makes him stealthy inside his garden to attack with his scissors. Now he is a threat you can sell.

Hi, thank you so much! I have updated him.

**DelRey** · May 22nd, 2022, 08:52 AM

This is a quick project to make our lives as compilers easier in the future. I post it here to prevent accidental mess-ups from my site.
~~Step 1: reformatting the links~~
~~Step 2: adding latest milestone~~
Step 3: merging of Spain & Portugal to Iberian Peninsula
~~Step 4: adding sections for the contests~~
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Welcome to the third edition of Create-A-Servant, where you copy-paste information from Wikipedia to turn historical figures into cute waifus with sword beams.

Some other relevant threads
Create-A-Servant 1, the first Servant thread.
Create-A-Servant 2, the second Servant thread.
Create your own Modern Fiction Servants, for Servants from fictious works after 1900.
Monthly Create-A-Servant Contest, an extension of this thread where quality > quantity. See here for DelRey's compilation of sheets posted to this forum.
Create-A-Mage, for Nasuverse original characters, Masters or not.
Monthly Create-A-Mage Contest, an extension of Create-A-Mage where quality > quantity.
Beast lair forumites, servant style! post your own!, where you turn yourself or other users into a Servant.
Create A Singularity / Lostbelt, for FGO-based scenarios.
Servant/Project Idea Thread, "The Womb", for projects that haven't been fully realized yet.
Create our own Mythological / Historical Reconstructions, for ideas on how specific pantheons fit into the lore of the Nasuverse.
The Throne of Snippets, for short stories featuring fan-made Servants.

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Creators

Mythology and History

The Nasuverse

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**Nuclear** · May 22nd, 2022, 09:46 AM

Saber of Good News

Source: Alchemy Stars official art
"Greetings, Master. Servant Saber, Maria Kyogoku, has arrived to answer the summons. Whether it be preaching or fighting, please leave these worrisome details to me."

Class: Saber
True Name: Maria Kyogoku
Gender: Female
Height and Weight: 166 cm / 58 kg

Source: Historical fact
Region: Japan
Alignment: Lawful Good
Attribute: Man

Parameters
Strength: C
Constitution: E
Agility: B+
Magical Energy: C
Luck: B
Noble Phantasm: C

Biography

Class Skills
Magic Resistance: D
Grants protection against magical effects. Cancels Single-Action spells. Magic Resistance of the same degree of an amulet that rejects magical energy. The skill's performance against the Church's sacraments is weaker than usual, in exchange for being stronger against magecraft rooted in the thaumaturgical traditions of Japan.

Riding: D
The ability to ride mounts and vehicles. Common mounts and vehicles can be ridden with above average proficiency if they have been properly prepared. As there are no anecdotes of Maria Kyogoku being active in riding a horse, she is compensated with this Skill only due to her Class container. Even so, she still does not go out of the way to procure a mount, perhaps due to her subconsciously emulating the Christian missionaries of old.

Personal Skills
Subversive Activities: C
The ability to prune the opponent's military strength in the preparation phase before conducting combat. At this rank, it becomes possible to disable 10% of the enemy's total military force before they advance. Incidentally, the means by which Maria accomplishes this is simply by preaching the Gospel, an act that was considered anathema by the religious and secular authorities of feudal Japan.

Sengen-ryu Kyoshoku-jutsu: A
Sengen-style Catechesis (泉源流教職術) --a blanket term for the techniques developed and utilized by Maria Kyogoku during her time as a catechist. Founded on Maria's principle of "meeting people where they are", these techniques involve extensive use of induction, metaphor, and references to current events. As a result, those who received her missionary endeavors often found themselves ready for conversion without even realizing they were being proselytized by her.

As a Saber-class Servant, Maria simply adapted this philosophy to fencing, resulting in a sword style whose attacks force enemies to perform a Luck check in order to be perceived as a hostile action.

Saint of the Waterside (False): C
A Skill representing the holy woman's deep connections to water. Raises attack power upon perceiving a terrain that qualifies as "a waterside". Although she is not officially recognized by the Holy Church as a Saint, Maria obtained this Skill due to having attained the zenith of her spiritual progress and missionary activity at the town of Sengenji (which translates literally to "Spring's Source Temple").

Incidentally, the name "Maria" is deeply connected with the element of water; examples of this connection include the name's most famous bearer, the Virgin Mary, who was given the title "Star of the Sea", as well as its original bearer, Moses' sister Miriam, a prophetess who was said to have been followed around by a small spring of water.

Noble Phantasms
Kyogoku Ichimonji: Kyogoku Straight-Line Sword
Rank: C
Type: Anti-Unit Noble Phantasm
Range: 1-7
Max targets: 1 person

Kyogoku Maria's personal defense weapon that was received as a gift from one of her missionary colleagues. A replica of the Azai Ichimonji gifted to Maria's younger brother Azai Nagamasa on the occasion of his marriage to Oda Nobunaga's sister, this copy was forged with traditional Japanese swordsmithing techniques while using the Holy Scriptures as its base. Despite the sword's production process and nature as a Scriptural Weapon being similar to those of Black Keys, its usage as a melee weapon technically makes it a closer relative to blade-type Ash Locks.

Sengen-ryu Kyoshoku-jutsu - Kaishin: Sengen-style Catechesis - Open Heart
Rank: C+++
Type: Anti-Unit, Anti-Evil Esoterica
Range: 1-13
Max targets: 1 person

The "finishing move" of Maria Kyogoku's catechetical technique-slash-sword style. Gripping Kyogoku Ichimonji close to the hilt, she delivers a single thrust by letting go of the sword's handle and catching it again, all in the span of a split-second. When executed perfectly, this esoterica bypasses all forms of protection to pierce the opponent's heart. Because this technique requires the use of a Scriptural Weapon, it is impossible to replicate using knowledge of the form alone.

A masterstroke that fully captures Maria Kyogoku's philosophy as a catechist. The sword that is the Good News is that which cuts through evil and pierces the hearts of men. All she has to do is hold on to it.

Author's Notes

**NittyGritty** · May 22nd, 2022, 09:53 AM

good news, everyone

**DelRey** · May 22nd, 2022, 10:07 AM

i think thats a pretty creative take on her skills and abilities. cool job imo

**RoydGolden** · May 22nd, 2022, 12:35 PM

Maria Kyogoku: Pretty good sheet. I like that you took the effort of explaining what drew her to Christianity rather than just going "oh she's really pious". I tried to do something similar with my Quiteria Servant. I will say though I have trouble visualizing her second NP in action. She grips her sword "close to" the hilt (meaning on the blade then?) and then lets go of it to catch it again, which somehow thrusts the blade into the enemy's heart? I feel like you had a very specific imagery for that in mind that didn't really translate well to description, at least not in my case.

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