Source: Sai Izumi
Class: Archer
Other Classes: N/A
True Name: Teresa Teng
Alignment: Neutral Good
Place of Origin: Taiwan (20th Century)
Parameters:
STR: D
END: D
AGI: D
MGI: D
LCK: D
NP: C
Height: 171cm
Weight: 140lbs
Likes: Singing, night
Dislikes: Dictators
Talent: Singing
Natural Enemy: Artemis
Attribute: Man
Traits: Female, Humanoid, Weak to Enuma Elish
Armament: A microphone
Catalyst: A copy of Yue Liang Dai Biao Wo De Xin
Class Skills:
Independent Action B+: This skill causes her to constantly be able to stay in reality for two days after her master passes. However, if anyone knows her True Name, and thus her idol status, mana will be leeched from them to continue to sustain her.
Magic Resistance E: She never encountered magic in life, but gets this bare minimum rank through her class container
Personal Skills:
Asia's Eternal Queen Of Pop A+: The sublimafion of her title as Asia's Eternal Queen Of Pop. This manifests as a passive enhancement to her singing, causing her to gain far more range and power in her voice and a stronger sense of hearing. This is her favorite skill, as it allows her to expand the range of her concerts.
Philanthropist C: The sublimation of her many philanthropic deeds. This manifests as a sort of Inverse golden rule. Constantly positive things happen to her, but money is constantly and rapidly drained.
The Music Of Teresa Teng B: It has been said that wherever there are chinese people, there is the music of Teresa Teng. Sublimated into a skill, this allows her to gain more and more power from her fans, people who have heard her music and enjoyed it. This tends to be useful for her concerrts, as this allows her to fill up larger and larger spaces the more people hear her.
Noble Phantasm(s):
Yuè Liàng Dài Biao Wo De Xīn
The Moon, Glowing Above
Type: Anti-Army
Rank: C
Range: 40 meters
Max Targets: 1000 targets
Her ultimate song, and the sublimation of her most popular song, The Moon Represents My Heart. When invoked, she begins singing it, as the moon glows above, causing everyone within to feel truly cared about and sapping them of their will to fight, while rejuvenating them. In other words, it creates a "rest zone" which acts as a safe place for people. However, this song can only last up to 13 minutes before the glow fades away. In addition, it is only usable when the moon is visible and high in the sky. Lastly, if someone there has Bravery or any "Delusion" skills (such as Madness Enhancement, Delusion Trigger, Insanity, Mental Pollution...) or noble phantasms associated with that type of skill above rank C, they are completely unaffected by the field.
Lore: Teresa Teng was a Taiwanese singer known as "Asia's Eternal Queen Of Pop". She was the first Asian pop superstar, and the artist who created modern Chinese popular music. She recorded over 1500 songs during her life, with the most famous being "The Moon Represents My Heart".
Personality: A friendly and helpful person, she wants to do anything she can to help people. She is quite confused by many of the shenanigans around Chaldea though. She loves meeting other idols, especially ones who are just starting out, for she feels that they have more fresh and new ideas then. Her wish for the grail would simply be to be able to continue singing and to continue bringing joy with her songs.
Relationships:
Artemis: "....The moon is... robotic? The moon goddess is... robotic? What..."
Orion: "Oh, you poor thing, trapped as a teddy bear. Maybe my performance will make you feel better."
Mozart: "I never was one for the opera."
Marie Antoinette: "Oh, a pleasure to meet another idol."
Salieri: "Poor dear. Naybe my song shall make you feel better."
Aillen: "...Rock? I... quite like this style. Could you teach me it?"
Elizabeth: "You call yourself an idol? You're not quite there yet. Would you like me to mentor you?"
Nero: "Impressive job!"
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Hassan of the White Snow
Identity: Simo Häyhä
Class:Assassin
Other Qualified Classes: Archer
Alignment: Balanced Neutral
Armament(s): Fused Rifle and SMG
Summoning Catalyst: A Rifle round, with the Finnish word "Salamurhaaja", assassin, etched into it
History:
Born in 1905 in southern Finland near the Russian Border to a pair of farmers, Simo experienced an ordinary childhood, with the notable exception of performing exceedingly well in local shooting competition awards. After a short stint in the Finnish militia civil guard starting at age 17, he would enter military service, attending an officer's academy, but would not receive sniper training until one year before WWII.
But once it began, Häyhä went on a metaphorical TEAR as a sniper- very notably using his smg, and a rifle without a scope- to secure over 200 confirmed kills, over 500 by the estimate of his fellow soldiers, and by his own records.
All of this was done in under 100 days.
For this prowess, he was awarded the moniker of "The White Death" for propaganda purposes by his government, and "The Magic Shooter" by his peers. However, he would eventually take an explosive round from an enemy Russian soldier. Which would destroy the left half of his jaw and cheek, though he would survive.
After the war, he would live peacefully for the remainder of his life, passing away in 2002.
Constitution as a servant:
Simo is, by technical classification in this form, a gestalt servant, his own spirit origin added to that of an unnamed Hassan, in a similar fashion to that of his summoning catalyst. For this reason, he manifests with his rifle physically fused to his arm (the bone itself making up a good part of the forestock) as he himself is not whole in this state. His master theorizes he would probably be linked to some Finnish natural or mythological phenomena if she had not done so.
Personality:
Similar to how he was reported to be in life, Assassin is a respectful, quiet man who tends to keep to himself. He never married, and lived alone, though despite this, reportedly had a circle of friends and associates that included generals and even the Finnish president. As his accomplishments in killing were lauded during the war, he saw it as simply a duty, one that was even regrettable, his personal accounts addressing his kills as his "sin list". He's modest to a T.
Height: 160 cm
Weight: 122 lbs
Appearance: It should be noted that his left arm is disproportionately large as compared to the relatively slim build he sports otherwise, as it has the function of absorbing the recoil of the rifle built with his forearm.
Servant Parameters:
Str: D
End: C
Agi: B
Mana: C
Luck: D
Class Skills:
Presence Concealment: A A skill that hides one's presence as a Servant. Suitable for spying. It is possible to disappear completely and become nearly impossible to be detected. The rank of Presence Concealment drops considerably when preparing to attack. Simo famously would put snow in his mouth to cool his breath and avoid the vapor from breathing, as well as heavily use camouflage, worn and otherwise
Independent Action: B- It is possible for a Servant to stay in the world for two days without a Master. However, this is the ideal value achieved by maximally conserving mana and avoiding battle and Noble Phantasm usage. Traditionally an archer skill, Simo possesses it, albeit as a lower rank due to it being his preferred class. As he still qualifies as a Hassan however, there is no way it could drop to C.
Personal Skills:
Battle Continuation D: A skill that allows for the continuation of combat after sustaining mortal wounds. It will also reduce mortality rate from injury. This Skill represents the ability to survive and/or the mentality of one who doesn't know when to give up, consisting of one's strength of vitality in predicaments. Simo receives this skill for the facial wound he endured, which had him originally put atop a pile of dead bodies by his comrades, before he moved enough to indicate life. However, this skill is not incredibly useful, due to his low Endurance parameter.
Marksmanship A: A skill representing all-round shooting techniques, which includes quick drawing and trick shooting by means of small arms. Simo's quality of skill shown even in his youth awards him an A rank in this ability, as well as his choice of not using a scope when sniping. According to Major Tapio Saarelainen—who met Häyhä several times and has written five books about him, including his biography Saarelainen notes that during his Civil Guard training, Häyhä once hit a target 16 times from 150 metres away in just one minute. "This was an unbelievable accomplishment with a bolt action rifle, considering that each cartridge had to be manually fed with a fixed magazine that held together five cartridges."
Hawkeye C+: A a visual ability that is also called Clairvoyance. This is generally a must-have ability of the Archer class. It is also frequently used during scouting. Simply looking from a high location is sufficient to fully survey a town and search for enemies. In addition, Clairvoyance will affect the accuracy of bows. It connotes superior visual perception and dynamic occipital capture, such as to supplement the long-range aiming of projectile weapons. Simo is rewarded a positive modifier to this skill through accounts (and showings) of near supernatural eyesight during his life. According to Saarelainen, "Häyhä was able to estimate distances with an accuracy of 1 metre (3.3 ft) up to 150 metres (500 ft)."
White Death A: A skill unique to Simo, a variant of disengage that lets him avoid most ordinary attacks by briefly dematerializing into a snowstorm, therefore dodging most physical attacks. This skill would not normally rank so high, but it is his classification as a Hassan that allows the offensive and transportation utilization of the skill. Normally, it would take a form more akin to Territory creation. He may also use this form to travel.
Noble Phantasm(s):
Vahvistamattomat Tapot A: When chambering a round, Simo expends mana to bestow upon the bullet raw, unadulterated mystery. Due to the fact that so many of his kills were unconfirmed, this mystery provides the unique effect of a split existence- it both does, and does not exist at the same time, much like his kills, and thus can go through objects and magical barriers. However, this ability is INCREDIBLY costly, and still requires his aim. It is also still detectable, as it still exists.
Design Notes:
- Of course, another one of my Fighting game fate servants, this time of the zoner/counter character gameplay archetype
- Because of the simplicity of his design, he's the first one I'm actually planning on implementing and doing spritework for, as it'll be good for solidifying overall visual style
- The idea of him being a technical gestalt hassan comes from a few places:
1. When deciding a roster, I wanted to use Gramps on the opposing side, since I admittedly didn't have a lot of popular servants, and thus needed a reason for him to manifest without there being a beast. Cue a servant who was falsely summoned under the method in which to summon a Hassan, uttering or inscribing the word "assassin", the master forcefully adding someone to the order. Hence, the man himself to see who's claiming.
2. Visually, the hassans are visually really distinct, and it provides design opportunities that are otherwise unavailable with the appearance he logically needs to have with his individual legend. Plus, it works as a wonderful inverse of the traditional hassan colors.
3. As told to me by other people in the thread when first pitching him as part of the list, he's apparently really overdone- so I wanted what would hopefully be at least a bit original with this choice.
4. I've long held the idea that the hassans are ripe for creative ideas in getting them out of their only normally possible class, through gestalt servantry- My future sheet of Lancer Cursed Arm, Lancer of the Blessed Hand, being one I'll do eventually. Simo is a reverse of the process.
- Additionally, in the war, he has an interesting dichotomy with Robin Hood who is an archer who works best as an assassin, while Simo is an assassin who works best as an archer.
- If I were to make an archer form, I'd actually make it as him as an older man, very similar to William Tell.
- Guns are just fucking cool man, idk what else to tell you.
Até o fim do mundo
"Until the end of the world... that's what we promised, right?"
Even if I were to lose myself and forget everything else...
I will never forget that day.
Until the end of the world...
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This is the edgiest servant sheet i have read so far. I love it.
Oh, as far as edge goes, my Watcher Jack is worse imo. This is like 50% angst and 50% edge. That one is 100% edge.
Sitting on the chairs that they had brought with them, Rider of Silver and Kong Jianyu watched as Archer of White and Lancer of Silver fought one another on the rooftops below. “Are you sure that the barrier will hold, Rider? We are not prepared to take on either one of them just yet.” Questioned Jianyu, taking a moment to note the design of Lancers spear. There may be a clue to the servants identity in that.
The black form of his armoured servant simply shook his head, wavy on of his arms as if to brush off the concern. “Whilst your concern is appreciated my student, it is unwarranted. Unless one of them has a master on the level of a Shenxian, my barrier will not be noticed. And no matter how acute their senses, Archer and Lancer cannot allow their concentration to slip in this battle. By the time they can risk such a distraction, we shall be gone.”
Whilst he spoke, Rider continued to note his own observations of their opponents. Both master and student agreed on one thing. Knowledge would be the key to victory. However, a third voice broke the silence. “While I admire your confidence, Old Master, and it is well founded, you should listen to your master, he has keen senses.”
Whipping around, Rider and Jianyu were faced by the smiling face of a man with longer silver hair standing on the top of a long metal pole that was connected to the side of the building. With speed beyond what Jianyu could comprehend, Rider had responded with a lance of heat cast towards the newcomer. Smile never dropping, and with similarly ridiculous speed, the man dodged around the attack. “Now, now dear Xian! That is quite rude! You don’t even know why I’m here.”
Jumping from his perch, the man extended wings of pure energy. Those wings both served to slow the silverets fall, and to launch beams of light at the two. Whilst Jianyu did not even have the time to respond before the light pinned him in place, Rider had a moment to try and act.
“Taiji Tu.”
Those words echoed through the roof as markings spread across the floor, and Rider's body. Ethereal light gathered together, forming together to make a scene straight from an anime.
With no effect.
With Rider now trapped like his master, and the figure landing on the ground, the man began to speak again. “Hmm, a good attempt, but this is not my Phantasm. I don’t want you dead, afterall! Now… I have an offer for you both, Kong Jianyu, Laozi.
Serpent in the Garden of Infinity:
Prologue: 6th Tokyo Great Grail War, Ultimatum
Crosser of the Vast Branches
Time: A.D. 2054
Lost Depth: E-
Developer Notes
Sheet Comments
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BnEl: WOW! His Noble Phantasms are cool, skills are awesome, and I love his personality. Amazing job!
*Looking at the final ascension*... That's gonna give some Taoists a heart attack. Thankfully most if not all of them are not a fate fan, let alone know about this site.
Edit: Of course, I forgot to add a smilie. Now everyone thinks I'm triggered now, just great.
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This isn’t even the most culturally insensitive servant posted on here. Remember when someone turned the daughter of the prophet of Islam into a waifu? Remember when royd turned Jesus into a loli?
I love that Laozi! Also, thanks so much for your comments. I updated that line to make it more clear, it's meant to be a mental corruption or bravery typed Noble Phantasm above Rank C.
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I love that Laozi! Also, thanks so much for your comments. I updated that line to make it more clear, it's meant to be a mental corruption or bravery typed Noble Phantasm above Rank C.
You know, I looked at this comment for a full minute before it hit me what you meant. Gonna be hones, it is meant to represent Dyeus/Velber-01, but yeah... I see it now. Problem is, I literally can't think of a better FC than Netero, and so it was a really fast decision to use his Hatsu for that.
And to echo Nine, I don't even think this is the most culturally insensitive sheet I've done. That award goes to JS(Alter) until I get around to doing Ruler. But that may get extra points because he's the founder of my religion. Eh, c'est la vie
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Source: Hinatoki
Class: Berserker
Other Classes: N/A
True Name: Carlo Gesualdo, Prince of Venosa
Alignment: Neutral Evil
Place of Origin: Italy (16th Century)
Parameters:
STR: C
END: D
AGI: D
MGI: B
LCK: B
NP: C
Height: 190cm
Weight: 130lbs
Likes: Music, temperance
Dislikes: Himself
Talent: Writing chromatic music
Natural Enemy: Himself, Antonio Salieri
Attribute: Man
Traits: Male, Humanoid, Weak to Enuma Elish
Armament: A simple sword, which appears to be somewhat made of bone
Catalyst: One of his compositions
Class Skills:
Madness Enhancement C: At this rank, he has lost much of his sanity, and his physical parameters receive a Rank-Up. In life, he went insane during and after his murdering of his wife, thus gaining this rank.
Personal Skills:
It Was Not A Crime B: The sublimation of his being judged to be innocent of the death of his wife, who he murdered. This manifests as a "Get out of Jail Free card", essentially causing his existence to be judged "Innocent" of any crimes he commited, making it hard for him to be pinned down.
Singers Of Chromatism C: The sublimation of the group of singers that sung his compositions, as well as the painting depicting him with a group of angelic figures. This skill manifests as a literal Angelic Chorus of weak familiars who float surrounding him. None of them are very powerful, with low ranked statistics, but they have effective singing to channel his music, which also deals damage.
Miserere B: The sublimation of his obsession with getting cleansed of his sin of killing his wife, trying to collect the skeletal remains of his sainted uncle. This manifests as a skeletal ossification effect, as he is dealt damage replacing it with bone slowly. However, this bone burns him, ranking down his Endurance parameter, for as long as it is on him. Coincidentally, the same effect will happen on any Evil enemies touched with the bone.
Noble Phantasm(s):
Disarmonico Rimpiangere
Chromatism For My Sadness
Type: Anti-Army
Rank: C
Range: 20 meters
Max Targets: 100 targets
The sublimation of his highly chromatic and mournful music. When invoked, this Noble Phantasm takes the form of an "Aura" of sorrow and music surrounding him. The music damages ears and deals damage, but also brings the target to their "worst moment" mentally, the time which they most regret. This effect can be resisted by any being which either doesn't hear the music or has a Magic Resistance at B or above.
Lore: Carlo Gesualdo was the Prince of Venosa and Count of Conza. He was also a composer who utilized chromatism in a way that wasn't seen again until the Late Romantic and Early Modern eras of music. He is also known for having killed his first wife and her lover. After this, he tried to be cleansed from his sins, trying to obtain the bones of his sainted uncle to purify him.
Personality: Wildly varying. Sometimes he is immensely self-critical and depressed, sometimes wildly cackling and insane, other times seemingly fairly calm, though something is always bubbling underneath the surface. He holds a massive regret for killing his wife, so his wish would be to have never done that.
Relationships:
Salieri: "That Innocent Monster seems awful, but it's so fun watching him try not to succumb."
Edmond Dantes: "Oh, the Count of Monte Christo. Perhaps you'd like to.. see your greatest regret. Well, let me show it to you once more."
Jeanne Alter: "What..... are..... you..?"
Hessian Lobo: "Running wild, running free, slaughtering... that seems so... wonderful."
Kriemhild: "Your vengeance wasn't good enogh, what a shame, neither is mine against myself."
Lancelot (Berserker): "Now... you and I are the same, aren't we? No, you have virtue in yourself."
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Sorry, that wasn't supposed to be a critique or anything serious. I saw the FA was themed around Buddhism despite the character being a Taoist and decided to make it a joke about it. The sheet was good, especially with how you merged nasuverse lore and real life. I'll be sure to make my jokes actually recognizable as a joke next time (how the fuck did I forget about the similies?)
Servant reactions because y'all are popping some cool ones-
Fitzgerald: EYYYY, the man himself- good shit, as others have said, I really like that NP, but I especially like As though they'd stepped out of the sun, that's a really cool place to source a skill from. Also, Jazz age fucks, makes me think of the Touch the Sky video from Kanye
Jieshehuai Assassin: That is a DEVIOUS first NP- it physically made me make a face like this while reading it- superb sheet
Jieshehuai Rider: Motherfucker, you are SPOILING me with an alt class version, I love seeing that shit- especially when you have the dichotomy between the two, with Rider's skills being a mirror to assassin's NP's, while still doing her own. Great way to keep the legend intact, exceedingly good job with the two.
Louis XI: FUCK YEAH, monster servants! I really enjoy how delightfully full of insidious charm you've made him. Plus, Order of Saint Michael? Really enjoy skills like that, good shit man.
Theresa Teng: RWBY faceclaim? Instant kino- that aside, I really enjoy the sort of simplicity she provides as a servant focused on raw support, which seems to line up quite well with the person she's based on.
Ya Boi Pedro I: Sheets this good make me hard, deadass. I don't think I can sing many more praises than have already been sung, because everything about the portrayal here is pretty much immaculate. Aside from that Faceclaim though, that means he's gotta watch out for people trying to box him~
Laozi: As I stated in the womb, the dude is fucking sick, I adore the Velberkino whenever I see it- that being said, I can't quite put my finger on it, but there's just a fantastic feeling of otherness to the sheet, a sort of untouchable whimsy that I can't help but grasp at. Superb energy to it, I like the wrong class/too early explanation for his (relative to his other forms) lower strength as well.
Carlo Gesualdo: Y'know, this is a really quality, low-parameter berserker that I'd love to see in something like case files. From a strikingly modern design that becomes more and more ghoulish via oscillation over time, to the superb excellence of that first skill? Man, i wanna see him in a murder mystery/crime thriller type setting. Cool shit mate
BnEl: glad that my comments inspired you. The first NP made good use of the FC. If you get a good FC, using it best as you can is just something that sells it even better. Capital E in your name stands for Edge and you deliver
"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
University of Formatting | Gallery of Potential | Memorandum of the Extra Class Kings
Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
Create-a-Servant 4 soon.
Source
Class: Moon Cancer
Other Classes: Beast
True Name: Y2K "Kay"
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Place of Origin: The Internet
Stars: 5/5
Parameters:
STR: E
END: C
AGI: C
MGI: C
LCK: E
NP: A
Height: 200 cm
Weight: 112 lbs
Likes: Helping others, effective technology
Dislikes: The destruction of technology
Talent: Destroying technology
Natural Enemy: Charles Babbage
Attribute: Earth
Traits: Humanoid, Weak to Enuma Elish
Armament: Bare hands, glitching technology
Catalyst: The idea of Y2K
Class Skills:
Magic Resistance A+: As an existence which exists to create the "Doom of Technology", akin to a gestalt nature spirit, Kay gains an extremely high rank in this, resisting magic below the rank of the Age of Gods with ease. More effective against mathematical or technological magic.
Item Creation C: Kay is capable of creating technological items, though they will be immediately destroyed by Tech Bane.
Personal Skills:
Tech Bane EX: As the embodiment of the idea of the Y2K catastrophe, where technology would collapse, Kay gains this at an extremely high rank. At this rank, any form of technology, no matter how advanced, around Kay would immediately start glitching heavily. Kay hates having this, because it does a lot to harm people.
System Expansion B: The fixing of the Y2K catastrophe forced systems to be expanded to bear the weight of four-number dates as opposed to two. This has manifested as a skill which allows Kay to forcibly expand systems, increasing the information they can hold, though this can cause major issues itself, as the system could grow too large to be supported.
2000 A: As an existence created out of the idea of the year 2000, Kay naturally gains this skill. This allows Kay to "be 2000". In other words, this allows them to view 2000 different locations, at the same time, manifesting as ghostly apparations. Kay can also share the view with others, which appears as cracked and glitching television screens showing the location.
Noble Phantasm(s):
The Millenium Bug
Computer Apocalypse
Type: Anti-City
Rank: A
Range: 355 Miles
Max Targets: 10000 people
The "Ultimate Y2K catastrophe" people envisioned. The Computer-produced Apocalypse which causes destruction around the world. When invoked, Kay's Tech Bane skill goes into overdrive, destroying all technology and causing the most destructive glitches possible: A banking computer would delete the entire stored money, a safe would unlock, a fire extinguisher would turn on, programs would crash, weapons would act on their own... Of course, Kay would usually avoid using this if possible.
Lore: The Y2K Problem was a scare caused by the formatting and storing of calendar dates, as they were stored in such a way that the last two digits only were stored, so people were panicked that 2000 would be thought to be 1900 and worldwide infrastructure would be brought down. But contrary to expectations, this never caused a major issue. This servant is the embodiment of the idea of "The Y2K Problem".
Personality: Outwardly cheery and friendly, Kay always wants to do anything he can to help people. However, he has a hard time actually doing it, because Tech Bane tends to cause more harm then he can actually help the person. This has resulted in him locking himself away, and broadcasting the view of the problem to someone who can help fix it through his 2000 skill. His wish is that Tech Bane was sealed, so that he could actually help people.
Relationships:
BB: "Onee-san, Master needs help. No, I can't do it. All I will do is cause more of a problem....."
BB (Summer): "Onee-san? What happened? Why are you... corrupted? ... Oh no, did I cause this? Did I glitch you? Master, help!"
Jinako: "Wait, you're a Moon Cancer? Does that mean you're also a code entity? ...Ah, it's just Onee-san's influence, that's good."
Passionlip: "Hello. Wait, why do you want me to come out? No. I won't. It will just destroy everything. So I'll keep myself locked here."
Kiara: "Don't come in....wait, you're offering me a therapy session? Why? I don't need...."
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