Avery: Does her NP just not have a name?
Avery: Does her NP just not have a name?
Feels weird to be making Servants again
Really now? Can’t you people just leave me alone?
First
Class: Caster
Other Classes: Saber
True Name: Ōtakemaru
Alignment: Lawful Evil
Place of Origin: Japan
Height: 212 cm.
Weight: 85 kilo.
Likes: Isolation. Studying. Quiet people.
Dislikes: Uninvited visitors. Incessant interruptions. Noisy people.
Natural Enemy: Suzuka Gozen
Parameters:
STR: A
END: EX
AGI: C
MGI: A+
LCK: C
NP: A
Class Skills:
Item Construction (-):
Caster does not possess this Skill.
Territory Creation (A):
Can transform any structure into his Noble Phantasm Akujiō. Even if it is a small hut, Caster can transform it into his imposing fortress.
Independent Action (A+):
While in possession of the sword Kenmyouren, Caster studied and learned of its true nature. He tied his own soul into the blade, effectively making it his vessel should his body ever be destroyed. So long as Kenmyouren continues to exist, Caster can reconstitute his own form.
Personal Skills:
Bad Road King (A):
A Skill declaring both Caster’s authority and his power. A master of unknown magics with strength and durability that surpassed all others, Caster claimed dominion over a small portion of Japan and remained unchallenged until the princess of Suzuka.
Shapeshift (A+):
An oni of many shapes, Caster was known to take on human forms from children to the elderly, most of which were told of in is fictional courting of Suzuka. Still, it was in their battle that he changed to tower of his opponents and even split himself into one thousand smaller demons to overwhelm them.
Oni-kind Demon (A):
Skill that represents the superpower as well as the demonic nature of an Oni. Only Oni and mixed-race beings with Oni blood can acquire this Skill. A mixed Skill of Natural Demon, Monstrous Strength, Charisma, Mana Burst, etc.
Oni's Head (EX):
Both times he was decapitated, he still lived, attempting to kill the ones who did it both times by biting their heads only to fail like another Great Yōkai.
Noble Phantasm:
Kenmyouren: Three Thousand Million Great Worlds (EX)
Anti-Fortress
A sword that reflects the Trichiliocosm, the infinite parallel worlds that existence at the same time as the present of the current world. However, this is merely an effect of its true power of being connected to and drawing power from those infinite realities.
Drawing upon its power, Caster is able to perform even greater magical feats, unleash incredibly destructive attacks from the sword, and view the different possibilities of any given moment to adjust his strategies. Using this final function inflicts a high amount of mental stress on Caster, making it nearly unviable in a combat scenario. Though, were he desperate, he may risk it anyway.
Akujiō: Dark Cloud Over Mount Suzuka (A)
Bounded Field
The magical fortress Caster constructed in Takkoku-no-Iwaya Temple and later on Mt. Suzuka, Akujiō is a bounded field that enforces the concept of “the fortress of Ōtakemaru” on a designated building and surrounding area.
Upon entering the bounded field, the space within is expanded to reveal a stormy landscape dominated by a dark stone fortress. Within the field, Caster can control the environment in its entirety, stirring up the ever-present storm or even calling in hallucinatory fog to send enemies into disarray.
However, this Noble Phantasms greatest strength is its ability to go completely undetected. Manifesting from Caster’s adamant desire to be left alone, This powerful concealing effect allows people to enter the area of the field without passing into it. It is only with Caster’s permission that one may enter it, otherwise needing knowledge of its existence to force entry
Lore
Personality
Relationships
[Homesick Dark - Fire Emblem Fates]Craft Essence
Last edited by Morg van Destro; February 27th, 2023 at 07:00 AM.
Morg's delightful Servant comp.
IN COLOR
Berserker of the Crumbling Throne
-- Scourge of the West, Bane of the Romans --
Class: Berserker
Other Classes: Rider, Assassin, Avenger
True Name: Flavius Ricimer
Alignment: Lawful Evil (closer to chaotic evil in truth)
Origin: Western Roman Empire (5th century CE)
Parameters:
STR: A
END: C
AGI: B
MGI: D
LCK: A
NP: B
Likes: Masterminding conspiracies, gullible people, discovering new cultures, tearing down empires, "sophisticated" hobbies
Dislikes: Being seen as a mindless brute, betrayal, disobedience, hypocrisy
Talent: Manipulation, suppressing his "barbaric" side, "disposing" uncooperative allies
Natural Enemy: Majorian, Aurelian, Romulus
Armament: Sword, armor, "familiars" from his Noble Phantasm
Catalyst: A seal bearing his figure, might also be summoned through any catalyst meant for Avitus, Majorian, Libius Severus, Anthemius, or Olybrius
Class Skills
Personal Skills
Noble Phantasm(s)
Lore
Description
Relationships
Bond CE
Creator's notes
Last edited by BnEl15; September 9th, 2022 at 08:35 AM.
It was all thanks to your blog though, I frequently visit this site even before I made my account, and the BB code is actually quite interesting to dive into. I think my only problem with my formatting is that when a text is inside a [COLLAPSE] box, it just won't follow any other command for some reason. I can't even change the font and/or making it into center, do you have any idea why is this? Are there any tricks on noparsing command?
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Thank You! This Servant is actually a part of my fanfiction in a HGW with similar system like that of FSF. I really liked the concept of having a bunch of jacked servant on each other throat with each having quite OP Skills and NP like that. I'll work on my other fanservants here in the future
Caster of YearsTrue Name: Carlos Gardel
(By Tsurukame. Source)
“Maestro, you may find Servants with more brute force or ancient pedigree than I. But I can assure you, you will never find a Servant as passionate or talented as I. Allons-y!”
Aliases: The King of Tango, The Wizard, the Song-Thrush, Carlitos, Frenchie
Source: History
Region: Argentina, Uruguay, France, gets complicated past that
Catalyst: A burning cigarette affectionally left at his tomb.
Armament: Mic stand, discus hat, gaucho knife
Character: Carlos Gardel isn’t a tango singer, he’s the tango singer. He may not be its inventor or the one who pushed its boundaries furthest, but when anyone thinks of tango, Gardel will most likely be the first name that comes to mind.
He did not have an easy start in life, having immigrated to Argentina when very young after his parents’ messy divorce. He did not have an easy end in life, having died young in a plane crash at the peak of his popularity. The details beyond that can get hazy and complicated, given he himself went back and forth on his true origins and counted con artistry among his vices. He’ll say perhaps it’s better to have a foggy past to make it harder for any painful past to come back and haunt you, a statement that at least makes some sense within a Grail War.
Caster being tango’s biggest star, he feels the need to embody everything tango stands for beyond just the music (though of course he’ll still say that the music comes above all else). He believes that passion is paramount in life, and finds himself prone to vices like smoking, gambling, and lustfulness, all of which he seems aware of the issues with but finds he simply can’t help himself. This raises the question of whether he really is a natural roguish hedonist, or other he calculatingly conditioned himself to be one to fit tango’s image.
On romance, he was also quite secretive about his actual love life, keeping any knowledge of his one true love, Isabel del Valle, out of the public sphere. His reason for this was to give the public the illusion he was available to any woman, afraid his popularity would suffer if his female fans found out he was taken. But given the strain of keeping hidden what should’ve been true love, he can’t help but think it might’ve been easier just to reveal the relationship straight up… or not, given that could’ve caused riots and led to Isabel being targeted.
As for the Grail War, while he’ll openly say he’ll of course get involved to not look like a coward, in truth he has little to no interest in even fighting it. Afterall, the reason he lied about his homeland all those years ago was to dodge France’s WWI draft, why just end up in another war? This begs the question of why he’d let himself be summoned at all, the answer to that probably similar in nature to his vices. For all his concerns about the Grail War, his easily tempted soul couldn’t bring himself to turn down being a part of this thrilling, once-in-a-lifetime event.
Also, as for the question of whether he truly was a mage in life as well as a Servant... don't expect a clear answer. He'll say something like that of course he was a magus, how could one who moved the hearts of so many through song be anything else?
Attribute: Man
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Likes: The adoring public, Buenos Aires, cigarettes and other vices
Dislikes: The ‘adoring’ public, having to hide his love life, planes
Relationships:
- Alfonso X: “It’s a romantic idea, life as but a game, though I have to wonder how much pleasure you really take in that thought?”
- Chopin: “Ah, music for the soul, not mere noise and bombast. But while I agree the human voice is the best instrument, why not simply write for it then?”
- Marie Curie: “You moved to France, I away from France. But given our lifespans, perhaps I should’ve returned, to have the pleasure of meeting such a… ‘glowing’ and ‘luminous’ beauty such as you.”
- Zaroff: “Hmm, the only human life I ever risked for a game of pleasure was my own…”
- Rosencrantz & Guildenstern: “That’s the thing about tango, two working together can outside any lone figure. Advice I sometimes struggle to remember myself…”
- Black Dahlia: “Hmm, never thought I’d see a Servant from after my time. Anyway, I’ve seen young ladies have the misfortune to fall prey to regrettable dance partners, and well, it does not get more unfortunate than an Outer God.”
Master: Preferably an adult woman, which from canon Masters mostly just leaves Bazett. Also, anyone caught up in having to uphold being the ‘face’ of their field, or one prone to vices they know are wrong but just can’t tear themselves away from.
Natural Enemy: Any emotionless Servant, like a Berserker with A-Rank Mad Enhancement. Also, pilot Servants in general, like the Red Baron or Amelia Earhart.
Wish: Though he wouldn’t say it, he honestly doesn’t think he has a chance of winning the War, seeing it more as an opportunity for one last round of performances. In the unlikely event he won though,
Rarity: 2/5
Parameters
- Strength: ***** D
- Endurance: ***** E
- Agility: ***** D
- Magic: ***** C
- Luck: ***** D
- Noble Phantasm: ***** B
Class Skills
Item Construction
Skill to manufacture items
- Rank C+: Caster’s expertise doesn’t go beyond songwriting, and even then his talent is in composition over lyrics. However, he can increase his Rank in this skill by pairing himself with a lyricist through Pas de Deux.
Territory Creation
Creation of an environment befitting a magus.
- Rank B: Creation of a Performance Venue equivalent to a Workshop is possible. As one who performed for all walks of life as his career grew, paralleling tango’s own class ascendancy, Caster is able of manifesting a variety of venues ranging from back-alley bars, quaint and intimate cafes, and larger, swankier ballrooms.
Personal Skills
Child of the Sun
Ability for the Servant’s parameters to ascend like the sun, only to subsequently crash down.
- Rank E-A: Caster started as a school dropout from a broken family, rose to become the Voice of Tango, then died tragically young in a plane crash. A common saying in Argentina (whose flag incidentally features the sun god Inti) is ‘Gardel sings better every day’, referring to the enduring mark he left on the country.
Pas de Deux
Ability to work well with a musical partner, typically in dance.
- Rank A: Though this Skill’s origin is in ballet, it can apply just as easily to tango, which of course takes two. He can also use this ability to find a suitable lyricist, needed to power up his Item Construction and Protection of the Music God Skills.
Protection of the Music God (Fake)
A recognition of supreme musical skill, gained through personal accomplishment instead of divine favour. Makes possible to distinguish all kinds of sounds, empower musical Magecraft, and play a masterful performance.
- Rank B→A: Caster is the most iconic name in tango (though with Astor Piazzolla a close second) and credited as inventing the vocal ‘tango-cancion’. That said, he is no lone genius like Mozart nor could be, as tango is inherently a two-man genre. Only with a partner’s assistance can he take full advantage of this skill.
Unknown Homeland
Debate and uncertainly around where a Servant was born.
- Rank B: While largely agreed to have been born in France nowadays, for a long while there was debate as to whether he really was French or Uruguayan, not helped by Caster spreading false information himself. This becomes the ability to designate any country as his ‘homeland’ and receive a Fame boost from there, on the condition that he can produce a convincing argument to how he was born there and got to Argentina (which may… cause issues in a Moon Cell War). Of course, he gets the Fame boost in Argentina anyway, regardless of not being born there.
Noble Phantasm
Veinte años no es nada
One Always Returns
Rank: B
Type: Anti-Unit
Among the Argentine sayings that originate with Gardel, ‘Gardel sings better every day, ‘Like Gardel and Pera’, one that stands out is ‘Twenty years is nothing’, a lyric from the song ‘Volver’ (Return). The song describes a man returning to his hometown only to realise just how much time has passed since he left, and how he’s aged while the town barely seems to have changed.
Performing this Noble Phantasm through song, Caster has his Territory Creation skill recreate the terrain and architecture of the enemy Servant’s homeland (or Servants’ homelands if enough are gathered) as it was in their time. On its own this does little to do the average Servant except maybe confuse them a little, but then the true effect of this Phantasm comes into play.
The Servant will then begin to rapidly weaken and deteriorate at a speed comparable to the length of time between the Servant’s original era and the present. As the true purpose of this Phantasm is to make one all too aware just how much time has passed, it is able to do greater, faster damage to Servant from earlier Ages than newer. The purpose of recreating the enemy homeland, other than tying into the original song, is to get them reflecting so much that they don’t try to attack Caster and interrupt the song.
Notes: The historical figure I won Guess-A-Servant with
Did forget that Child of the Sun was specifically a Noble Phantasm and not a Skill when I wrote this sheet, but it wouldn't be the first time a NP has been made into a Skill. Also, the first Servant sheet I've posted since I made my Compilation Blog
Last edited by NailsInYourFeet; September 10th, 2022 at 08:12 AM. Reason: Argentina flag bit, Servant links
Source: LeoFoxArt
Class: Berserker
Other Classes: N/A
True Name: Princess Amelia of the United Kingdom
Alignment: Chaotic Evil
Place of Origin: England (18th Century)
Parameters:
STR: D
END: D
AGI: D
MGI: A
LCK: B
NP: C
Height: 161cm
Weight: 100lbs
Likes: Peaceful (?) resolutions
Dislikes: Battling
Talent: Bringing hope (?)
Natural Enemy: George III, George Washington
Attribute: Man
Traits: Female, Humanoid, Weak to Enuma Elish
Armament: N/A
Catalyst: Her death ring
Class Skills:
Madness Enhancement D: Not normally a generally mad person, this low rank merely causes her to be a bit more wild.
Personal Skills:
Formless Potential B: She died far before her potential was fulfilled, making her parameters fluctuate randomly and her skills to have their names and ranks both obscured and fluctuating, granting her full control over who actually knows her actual facts.
Dignified Act A: The ability to immediately clear negative mental effects and put on a dignified act. A skill she honed from a very young age, it even allows her to seal her own Madness Enhancement for the duration of her dignified act, though it cannot last for very long.
Weak Constitution C: She was ailing throughout her life due to tuberculosis, gaining her a small chance to gain a sudden stat drop.
Noble Phantasm(s):
Hope Pouring In
From Birth The Joy Appeared
Type: Support
Rank: D
Range: 15 meters
Max Targets: 1000
The sublimation of the fact that she was immediately heralded as a symbol of hope upon her birth, combined with how she was capable of charming even people like the Princess Caroline, who notoriously hated her in-laws. This manifests in a constant aura that "sooths all troubles", reducing things such as Madness Enhancement in all other people nearby, while causing them to be endeared by her and believe that she is trustable and fits their most positive qualities.
The Madness Of King George
Grief Which Shattered The Kingdom
Type: Anti-Army
Rank: C
Range: Nigh-infinite
Max Targets: 1000
The flip side of her First Noble Phantasm, which is in truth addictive, causing others exposed to it to become obsessed with her and never want to leave, following her commands weakly. The sublimation of the madness and grief caused by her death, with the most famous examples being her father George III, who went utterly insane at her death, and George IV, who would never again sleep in a room that was no longer lit and wouldn't be able to hear her name without crying for more then three years. This manifests passively as a mourning ring she wears, made of crystal, diamonds, and a lock of her hair. This activates whenever she dies or leaves anyone's presence for more then three days. They begin hallucinating ghostly versions of her, feeling that shadows are trying to murder them, and become obsessed with returning to her side. In addition, their statistics are all ranked down and Mental associated skills are sealed, for they can no longer keep the concentration.
Lore: Princess Amelia of the United Kingdom was Princess of the United Kingdom and daughter of King George III. Her birth was seen as the beginning of a period of hope. She was noted for her elegant manners when needed at a young age, but also for how wild she was. She caught illness throughout her life, which eventually killed her, and drove both her father and her brother George VI Mad.
Personality: A rambunctious and chaotic person. She is constantly in motion, disliking sitting still. She dislikes fighting, though, preferring to resolve any conflict peacefully. However, this leads her towards more unsavory things, such as utilizing the addiction stoked by her first noble phantasm to control everyone as much as she can, playing them like a fiddle, in her efforts to mainatin peace and help everyone causing them more harm. Her wish for the Grail is to have perfect universal peace and harmony by bleaching the world's emotions.
Relationships:
George III: "Father! No attacking the Americans."
George Washington: "No rebelling! Rejoin England!"
Jeanne D'Arc: "Your war just lead to more."
Teresa Teng: "A truly peaceful person... feels like a dream."
Namazu: "Do not move at all. Hey, stop it."
Atkor Kamuy: "Your vengeance is not worth lives."
Cipactli: "Eating? Go ahead."
Mother Leeds: "Can I speak to the Mother? She might be able to help me."
Therese of Lisieux: "Fire? Get rid of it."
Eva Peron: "Your aid wasn't enough, Evita."
Eleanor Roosevelt: "Impressive humanitarian rights, but put down that bow."
Lady Carcas: "Just because you're a Shielder doesn't mean you can have your shield/crown/bell... what is that thing?"
La Candileja: "Fire is absolutely prohibited."
Beatrice Rappacini: "Out! Get rid of all your poison. Just because you can't survive without it doesn't mean you should have it."
Ronald Knox: "Detective stories always lead to actual detective cases, so I'm banning them."
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Name: Shen Kuo
Servant Class: Caster
Alternate Classes: N/A
Gender: Male
Height: 6’2”
Weight: 166 lbs
Source: History
Country of Origin: China
Alignment: True Neutral
PARAMETERS
Strength: E
Endurance: E
Agility: C
Mana: A++
Luck: B
NP: A+
CLASS SKILLS
Item Construction [A]
Being responsible for improving and crafting many tools within his fields of study, Caster is able to utilize Item Construction to a high degree, particularly when it comes to recreating tools he had used in his studies.
Territory Creation [B]
Having a great deal of knowledge in the study of both Geology and Astronomy, Caster is able to utilize multiple factors, in addition to his Noble Phantasms, to find an ideal environment to create a Territory he can operate within.
PERSONAL SKILLS
Concept Discernment [B+]
Being the author of the Dream Pool Essays who had come to understand many concepts, Caster is able to discern varying concepts and phenomena on an instinctual level, enabling him to understand how certain concepts work and how to best utilize them in his favor.
Versatile Scholar [A+]
In life, Caster’s scholarly exploits were well-rounded and expanded, having studied numerous subjects, he retains the vast knowledge he built for himself in his previous life. In addition to this, any new subject he learns he will quickly become adept in, adding it to his repertoire of wisdom.
Inherent Wisdom [A]
As he was considered a Scholar of many achievements and great praise, Caster’s wisdom is such that he is able to utilize this skill adeptly.
NOBLE PHANTASMS
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LORE
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PERSONALITY
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Notes
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Source: Elmsart
Class: Caster
Other Classes: N/A
True Name: Nana Asma'u
Alignment: Neutral Good
Place of Origin: Sotoko Caliphate (19th Century)
Parameters:
STR: D
END: D
AGI: B
MGI: C
LCK: C
NP: C
Height: 171cm
Weight: 120lbs
Likes: Education
Dislikes: Illiteracy
Talent: Teaching
Natural Enemy: Nightingale, Columbus
Attribute: Man
Traits: Female, Humanoid, Weak to Enuma Elish
Armament: Jaji
Catalyst: A malfa with a red turban
Class Skills:
Territory Creation C: She is able to create a "Shrine" to enhance her Vodun and to call forth Vodun, but it is not very powerful due to her lifestyle where she constantly went around the kingdom.
Item Construction C: She is able to create low-level talismans by herself through this skill, but not higher-level ones.
Personal Skills:
Wakar Gewaye C: The sublimation of her "Song of Wandering", a large poem she wrote about the Fulani wars. This allows her to manifest the thing she hated most about it, the destruction of the University of Dan Fodio, a central area for Islamic knowledge and learning, being able to destroy small amounts of knowledge from areas, though she tends to refuse to use this.
Vodun C: The capacity to utilize West African magecraft, which focuses on utilizing objects inhabited by spirits for magical powers or to build shrines. This enables her to bring spirits into items, collecting the accumulated low-level spirits of an area to bring into an object to use as a talisman, destroy in a burst of Mana, or call forth Vodun in a shrine.
Teaching B: She was an incredibly gifted teacher who brought knowledge to all around her. This enables her to teach people how to write poems, how to teach, or how to cast low-ranked Vodun. She can also teach any knowledge she knows, but she prefers not to, finding it simpler to utilize her Jajis.
Noble Phantasm(s):
Jaji
Bestow Knowledge Upon Them
Type: Anti-Unit
Rank: C
Range: 10 meters
Max Targets: 10 Targets
The sublimation of her Jajis, a group of teachers who she taught who roved around the entire caliphate to teach anyone who she met. This manifests as her Noble Phantasm, which allows her to manifest her Jajis in the form of floating turbans around her. She can choose to bestow information on anyone whom the turban attaches to, though it cannot be information that Asma'u does not know. She can also use this as a weapon, overloading minds with knowledge.
Lore: Nana Asma'u was a princess, poet, and teacher from the Sokoto caliphate. She was the daughter of the founder. She was noted for her creation of a group called Jaji, roving female teachers who taught anyone they saw, her advocation for women's rights, and her poems.
Personality: A cheerful and extremely bouncy person. She utterly adores learning, and wants to help anyone and everyone she can learn. She hates people who like to keep people in the dark in terms of knowledge. Her wish for the holy grail is to be able to educate the world.
Relationships:
Nightingale: "Nursing is wonderful, but you are harming, not helping."
Wu Zetian: "Your majesty, such a pleasure to meet you."
Asterios: "Oh, poor thing, how could he lock you up?"
Blavatsky: "What is a 'Mahatma'?"
Columbus: "Out, foul beast!"
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Ricitus: His NP reminds me of that Naruto ressurection technique, but you made more engaging than Naruto ever did. His avenger anti-rome coalition of tribes form sounds like an amazing concept. Are you going to make it?
Shen Kuo and Nana Asma'u both seem like interesting figures I'll have to read more up on. For Amelia, guess this was who that Evergarden faceclaim you talked about was for, and the idea of a 'flipped Berserker' who causes Madness is interesting.
Anyway, this... may be the most uncomfortable Servant sheet I've ever written, like it could rival my Faker Patrick Hamilton one in bleak subject matter. Thought to write her up after being assigned Beloved in college, which can particularly be seen in the 'NP growing with guilt and trauma' concept:
True Name: Margaret Garner
Alias: The ‘Modern Medea’, Peggy Garner
Source: History
Region: USA
Catalyst: Transcript from her trial, one of the few ever held for someone enslaved.
Armament: Butcher’s knife
Character: A black woman of mixed ancestry who with her family attempted to escape her slave-master in 1856, wanting anything for her children than to grow up facing the same abuse and inhumanity she did. Upon being holed up and surrounded by police and slavecatchers, she tried to murder her own children with a knife, successfully killing her two-year-old daughter Mary, to spare them enslavement.
“Knew you’d be shocked. Probably be even more shocked to hear that I was far from the only black mother who did such a thing, yet the world singled me out…”
Her family’s subsequent trial lasted surprisingly longer than usual for enslaved fugitives, in that it lasted at all. However, in the meantime her story of killing her children subsequently became a media circus, with her being dubbed ‘the Modern Medea’, amplified by the inherent scandal of her being mixed-race. The trial still ended up not in her favour, with her and her surviving family being sent back to slavery. While being transported on a riverboat, she and her baby were either knocked over or jumped over, depending on the account. Either way, she was happy a second child of hers would not live to be a slave.
The Holy Grail War now presents her with a time long after Emancipation, though not one without prison labour, death from overwork, or abuse of non-mages. Assassin remains on edge, thinking the modern world suspicious and too good to be true. At the same time would still rather her family have been born now than back then, guilty that she’s the only one of them here when they deserve this time more. At least being constantly cautious is a more than fitting mindset for a Grail War.
“I see some of these folks are known as legendary lords, warriors, wizards… meanwhile my ‘calling card’ is the most personal event of my life. But how your history books love to gawk at me.”
Assassin maintains that she wouldn’t take back her decision to kill her child, given the cruel fate that awaited them if she hadn’t. But saying is one thing, thinking is another, and even seeing mothers with their children on the street makes her riddled with guilt. As for being expected to kill Masters given her Class container, it's an odd feeling for her as killing actual combatants is new to her. Yet the inherent connotation of the word ‘Master’, even if she does know a Servant’s Master and a slave-master are technically different, does help remove her hesitancy.
Attribute: Beast/Star
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Likes: Family, fair trials or any trial, the modern world (relatively)
Dislikes: Slavery, media exposure, ghosts
Relationships:
- Egdon Heath: “Even after ‘your’ people die, ‘you’ claim ownership of their souls.”
- Catherine Morland: “Hey kid, wasn’t your author an abolitionist? Or did she forget to write about that in your story?”
- Kafka: “Chained for no reason? No storybook for my people.”
- Black Dahlia: "Human slave-master, eldritch 'pact' master, slave's a slave either way."
- Ngunaitponi: “Don’t ‘tut-tut’ me for setting a bad example. I guarantee, you’d have done the same thing in my place.”
- Hamilton/’Gaslight’: “’Course you’ll do anything for control, now you can’t just chain people up.”
Master: While the comparison between a Master-Servant pair and slavery is dubious, entrance into the war being largely by the Spirit’s consent… any Master who tries to use a Command Seal on Assassin likely won’t be her Master for long, especially with Independent Action backing her up.
Natural Enemy: Thomas Jefferson, Robert E. Lee.
Wish: For her family to have lived without bondage.
Rarity: 2/5
Parameters
- Strength: ***** E
- Endurance: ***** C
- Agility: ***** C
- Magic: ***** E
- Luck: ***** E
- Noble Phantasm: ***** E-A
Class Skills
Independent Action
Capacity to remain independent even without a Mana supply from a Master.
- Rank A: Can manifest in the world for up to a week without a fixed source of Mana. Achieved through sheer willpower to escape slavery and see others escape.
Presence Concealment
The ability to mask one's presence and remain undetected.
- Rank C: Suitable for spying. Knowing how to hide and disappear were necessities for escapees from enslavement.
Personal Skills
Crossing Arcadia
Quick movement over the field of battle.
- Rank C: Able to traverse plains, forests, mountains, and frozen rivers, the areas she and her family fled through heading from Kentucky to Ohio, without too much loss of speed.
Disengage
Withdrawal from the battlefield.
- Rank C: One whose legend revolves around escape till the end. Able to restart battle conditions and cancel binding statuses upon fleeing.
Single-Mindedness (Love)
Ability to super-focus on a goal when the main motivator is affection and yearning.
- Rank B: While this Skill is normally linked with romantic love, in Assassin’s case it is familial love for her children, albeit a love warped and deformed by the world she lived in. Attack and agility are increased thinking of her family and the threat of renewed slavery.
Noble Phantasm
Sorrowful Mother
All Chains Must Be Broken
Rank: E-A++
Type: Anti-Unit
The knife she used to murder her child, and to try to murder her other children, all to spare them from a life of slavery. Upon summoning it doesn’t look any different than your usual butcher’s knife, but every time Assassin is reminded of the deaths of her two children, the knife extends and gains in power till it ranks up.
In a way, you could say it grows stronger and sharper the more the past wounds Assassin, with the possibility even that the knife may be possessed by her slain daughter Mary. As for why Assassin just doesn’t constantly remind herself of the daughter, it’s partly because this Phantasm works by emotional reaction, and partly because, well, killing your own daughter is obviously not easy to think of.
As a side effect spawning from her ironclad belief in death before slavery, the Phantasm can also gain a Plus when used against a Servant who a Command Seal has already been used on, or against a Master who’s already used a Command Seal, and another if two have been used. Theoretically another Rank would be gained if a third Seal was used on her Target, but any Servant who that happens to is (with notable exceptions) unlikely to be around for long.
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Thanks! I'm considering it, but it probably won't be anytime soon, if ever. Mostly I'm just not sure on what to write Avenger!Ricimer's character without treading too much on what's already been said on his Berserker counterpart (Rome oppressing "lesser" tribes, Rome being a hypocrite, the world being a hypocrite for praising Rome and forgetting all the other tribes, the flawed dichotomy of the "civilized" vs. the "savages", etc.). Even if their core motivations may differ (maliciously proving a point while indulging in the act of causing destruction vs. an arguably more justified "vengeance" held by the numerous spirits in his body), I feel like this hyothetical Avenger form would just end up talking about the same things, for the most part.
In other news, man this thread is moving fast these days. I'm hardly the best at giving deep, in-depth criticisms, so I'll keep my comments short.
Carlos Gardel:
Congrats for being the first Servant to win Guess-a-Servant. I think I was partially thrown off by him being from America, but not the USA. Idk much about Argentina's music scene, but I also didn't expect him being a pioneer of an entire genre. A nice adaptation of a relatively obscure (at least where I'm from) modern figure. A minor thing, I think Child of the Sun is an exclusive epithet for Hideyoshi, so idk if it can fit as a "generic" Skill without you renaming it to something else that better fits Gardel. Everything else is cool tho. Reminds me of a Servantverse(?) Ella Fitzgerald sheet with jazz-based improv magecraft I had buried in my garden of lost ideas.
Princess Amelia:
Hmm, for some reason she doesn't feel... Berserker-y enough for me. I get what you're going for, but the execution didn't really sell her as a Berserker, at least for me. She could just as easily be a Caster or Rider (or Binder, if you wanna be experimental, for "chaining" others to her with that second NP, and "chaining" the world through her idea of peace) who just happens to be a little nuts with her peace obsession (wouldn't be the first time we have a non-Berserker Servant with some warped ideas). Also, I think her alignment is a better fit for chaotic good rather than evil, having a noble goal while resorting through some unsavory means and all that.
Shen Kuo:
Ooh, this is something. A pretty good sheet all around. Skill descriptions feel a bit bare-bones, but maybe that's just your style, and you conveyed what it does well enough, so it works out. That first NP is a little bit OP, being a budget GoB and all, but from what little I read about this figure, I think it's sort of justified considering the scope of his works (also him summoning a giant UFO and yeeting it at the enemy is a hilarious imagery). That second NP is amazing though. I love the whole magnet and homing projectile effects (you can arguably write an Archer Shen Kuo with that NP alone).
Nana Asma'u:
Hmm, another figure I've never heard of. Not much I can say about her, but she seems pretty straightforward, not that it's a bad thing. Also, do you think her teaching Skill may be a little too high-ranked? I don't think I have a canon skill to compare it to, but compared to legendary teachers like, say... Chiron or Pythagoras, that A-rank teaching doesn't feel warranted, especially since the scope of her teachings (writing poems, teaching, vodun) is pretty small. I might be able to buy it better if you replace it with a more personalized teaching variant telling us that while the scope of what she can teach is small, she's really good at teaching what she does know.
Margaret Garner:
Well... that's dark. Her story is pretty small in comparison to all the world-renowned scientists, artists, and warriors, but you still did a fine job of making her feel compelling. That NP is a really good representation of her one most famous feat.
Margaret Garner: Damn this is dark asf. She'd be seamlessly blend in to the world of Fate/Zero knowing her past and her passion of destroying the bind of slavery. Also that's a neat point on her being particularly sensitive with the word "master" even though Servant-Master dynamics is different than Slave-Master dynamics
Thanks for your commentsyea I get your point on Amelia. In terms of alignment I chose evil because her methods sink her basically to the bottom of what was going on. In terms of Asma'u, I've bumped her Teaching skill down to B and expanded the effects.
Also:
Flavius Ricimer: That tomb idea is incredible, and I love how you utilized the five in unique ways.
Carlos Gardel: Ah, so that's who he was! I love that NP.
Margaret Garner: A dark and really intriguing servant, especially that NP.
Loki (Shinji Matou)
Extra Ascension Stuff
Class: Caster
True Name: Loki
Alternate True Names:
- Loptr
- Hveðrungr
Gender: Genderfluid (Since Loki is usually in male form, they will usually be referred to as He/Him)
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Place of Origin: Norse mythology
Region: Europe
Height: 170 cm
Weight: 60 kg
Armament:Wand of DeceptionLævateinn
Catalyst:
A bloodied feather from Víðópnir
Parameters:
STR: E
END: D
AGI: C
MGI: B
LCK: C
NP: A+
Class Skills:
- Territory Creation D: Despite being a summoned Caster, Loki has no need for a workshop as he never stays in the same place.
- Divine Core of the Snake God B: Due to being summoned in a human vessel, Loki's Divine Core has lowered from it's usual status of EX.
Personal Skills:
- Primordial Rune —: Loki possesses the Primordial Rune of Bjarkan through an ancient nursery rhyme passed down through the ages which connects him to his murder of Balder. The rune allows for the manipulation of Birch trees. It is rumoured that it became connected to Loki due to the tree not producing any fruit, yet it branches reaches towards the sky.
- Shapeshift EX: One of the pioneers of shapeshifting during the Age of Gods, Loki possesses the highest degree of this magical skill. He is able to change his physiology into anything, including their gender, into another animal or an inanimate object. Apparently, he has attempted to seduce
whilst as a girl. He managed to go as far as them both being undressed until Caster revealed the trick, causing him to be chased out of the room, narrowly missing aFreyrShirouthrown at him.Freyr's Swordplastic knife- Illusion Arts A-: Posessing the ability to make Illusions, Caster typically uses this skill to creates doppelgangers of himself to distract the opponent.
Noble Phantasm(s):
NaglfarShip of Corpses死体の船
Type: Anti-Fortress/Anti-Army
Rank: EX
Max Targets: 100 Kilometres
A ship made entirely from fingernails and toenails of the dead that was grown and built in the realm of Muspelheim. Captained by Loki's fellow jotunn Hyrmr, this ship is unleased when the circumstances that created Ragnarok occur. Loki (as a Caster) only possesses this during a Broken Ragnarok.
Loki HrygnirChildren of Fire and Ice火と氷の子供たち
Type: Anti-Unit
Rank: B
Max Targets: 100 Kilometres
By cutting his forearm with, Caster can summon one of his children to attack in his heed, fitting his personality of never taking direct combat. The children he is able to summon are:Lævateinnhis wand
- Fenrir: Also known as Vánagandr, a wolf that possesses the Authority over Ice. Through his skill Wind of Niflheim, his roar can send out a devesating frost breath that freezes the enemy.
- Hel: Summoned as a girl dressed in 2000's era gothic lolita attire. She sends out a blight of cold icy mist, causing the opponent to freeze to death.
- Jörmungandr: The World Serpent. Unable to let go of it's tail, it rams itself into the opponent, sending them flying. During times of Ragnarok, Jörmungandr will either swallow up the opponent or spit out its venom instead.
- Sleipnir: Odin's steed and Loki's son. Sleipnir's eight-limbs means that he is able to go at light-speed acceleration. Sleipnir mainly attacks the opponents by spinning around them in a circle multiple times before kicking them with his steel horseshoes.
Outside of combat, he can summon them (minus Hel) as cat-like creatures.
Lore:
Loki
The Trickster God. The Spinner of Tricks, Knots and Nets. Helsman of Naglfar.
The son of the jotunn Fárbauti and the goddess Laufey, married to Sigyn and the father of Narfi and Nari or Vali. Due to his early relationship with the jötunn Angrboða, Loki is the father of Hel, the wolf Fenrir, and the world serpent Jormungandr. In the form of a mare, Loki was impregnated by the stallion Svaðilfari and gave birth to the eight-legged horse Sleipnir.
Loki is a member of the council of Aesir and Nordic realm's resident shapeshifter. He was frequently sent out by the council for various errands, such as reclaiming Mjölnir, stopping the Wall-Builder and is said to be one of the three people to have.shaped Scandinaviacreated Midgard
Despite being a member of the high council, due to his jötunn heritage, he faced extreme resentment from the rest of the council. One day, he found out from a völva that he would be the one to end the world and that the council knew, deliberately keeping his fate from him. In retaliation, he became more and more sinister, instigating the death of Odin's son Baldr.
It is here that his knowledge of his past end. He has no knowledge of events that happened afterwards, such as his, his subsequent imprisonment by Skadi and him starting Ragnarök.diss rapflyting
Maybe it was due to the Throne of Heroes recording him at this point before becoming more villainous. Maybe it was because Odin felt pity on him and erased his memory. Maybe it's because his host does not want to see the world end but to live and play in it.
Whatever it may be, he has been summoned.
Personality:
Caster's personality is maintained when he possesses Shinji's body. His personality reflects the circumstances of the situation and at what period of time Caster is summoned into Shinji's body. If summoned during Shinji's time as a participant of the Holy Grail War, he takes on Shinji's arrogant and impulsive methodologies. If summoned after the Holy Grail War has ended, Caster is more relaxed and friendly, although he now possesses a limitless amount of leisure time that he uses to prank the people around him.
Caster is very averse to participating in actual combat, preferring to use illusions and tricks to fight the opponent or to distract them. His field in magic is his shapeshifting and illusion-casting. Caster also possesses the ability to control fire and is able to use frost magic due to his jötunn heritage.
During times of peace, Caster will usually be found taking care ofor making up plans to prank someone. If not, he'll be hanging out with his host's fellow friends and classmates, mainly with his adoptive sister Sakura.his childrenvarious small cat-like animals.
Since he has been summoned before his imprisonment, Caster does not desire the end of all things nor is he truly evil in this state. It is only due to his upbringing and the circumstances around his pre-determined destiny that makes him nervous and lets out his frustrations through tormenting others for temporary humour.
When interacting with servants from his point of time, he reacts to them with a sense of nostalgia and kindness. Unfortunately for him, most of his first meetings with them usually occur with intense rage and anger towards him due to their knowledge of what occurred Ragnarök has been maintained while his hasn't. After a while though, they become less antagonistic towards him.
If he were to win the Holy Grail, his wish would be to change his past so that he was respected as a member of the Aesir as his life-long resentment for being a jötunn is what caused him to go down the path he went on.
Relationships:
Fenrir: "A Holy Grail War...on the moon? Sorry, I don't think I was there."
Hel: Hel lays her head down on Caster's lap, the sounds of My Chemical Romance can be heard from her earphones.
Sigyn: "My wife, my love, my eternal friend~"
: muffled sounds of violence, crying and subsequent kissingAyakoAngrboda
: "Hey, hey~ It's everyone's favourite dream team, United as one~"ShirouFreyr
Scáthach-Skadi: "No, you're not better than me, Shut up."
Creators Notes:
- I kinda fucked up the face claim thing. I had all the ascension tags working but once I moved it around, the First Ascension tag made the first image unloadable. DelRey's guide doesn't directly show the code to be able to do it so this is as far I could do it.
- The reasoning for the Asc pics btw is literally only because of the hair colour lol
- Source for the Capsule Servant pics
- All in all for a 2nd servant sheet that I made in about a week, I'd say it's pretty decent.
Ya-ho~ I'm still new here so this box ain't filled out as it should be.
The Bucket
This Permutations and Combinatronics shit is verily bussing yo~
Thank you for the review! And yeah, I try to keep skills limited to avoid accidentally making them out as Noble Phantasms. And as for said Noble Phantasms, I really did want an excuse to use the UFO, but figured just making that a Noble Phantasm and leaving out the Dream Pool Essays would be a waste. Glad you like the second one, though! I really did want to incorporate the concept of a compass in a meaningful way beyond just divination. Figured doing this would make him annoying to deal with, especially in group fights.
“This War only brought a vain illusion of glory, that the warriors of old successfully strive through. But this is the true face of the world, those old telltales only serve as lies. No such hope exist in the flame of destruction.”
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The world was full of tyranny. So, I gave them what they wanted. So, to you, Master of Chaldeas, I’ll tell you the same thing I told the rest of the world…
Author’s Notes
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Ruler Robespierre: the formatting around COLLAPSE function might need to be fixed there bro, it's duplicated. The reason for this is that the COLLAPSE function is mixed with CENTER function, or any function that shouldn't be there
For example, it might be because there's another code between the first COLLAPSE and the last COLLAPSE function that made them tangled
Example: the order might be CENTER, COLLAPSE (your first collapse that reveals the sheet), /CENTER
(the rest of the sheet)
/COLLAPSE (your last collapse that closes the sheet)
If your code looks like this, there will be some errors on the sheet, because I wrote like this too when I wrote my Sunan Gunung Jati sheet (I already fixed it)
Where it should've been something like this
CENTER, COLLAPSE (your first collapse that reveals the sheet)
(the rest of the sheet)
/COLLAPSE (your last collapse that closes the sheet), /CENTER
This way, is how I code my Flavius Stilicho sheet
Hope this helps
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