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    Here's a rework of a contest entry I once did.



    General Information
    True Name: Bran the Blessed
    Class: Saber
    Origin: Mabinogi, Second Branch
    Alignment: Lawful Good
    Likes: His Family, His People, and Protecting Them
    Dislikes: Evil
    Natural Talents: Helping Others and Protecting his Peoples
    Natural Enemy: Matholwych
    Alternative Classes: Ruler

    Parameters
    Strength: A
    Endurance: A
    Agility: D
    Mana: A
    Luck: D
    Noble Phantasm: EX

    History
    Warning: Long
    Bran the Blessed is a figure from the isle of Britannia’s ancient past. Before the rule of King Arthur and even before most recorded history. A statue and folk tales are all that remains of this mysterious figure the natives call ‘Bran the Blessed’. One whose history is complicated and mysterious if stories are to be believed.

    His story begins with a tale older than him. That of Rapunzel and the Prince. A terrible and wicked goddess feared the world's retribution for her sins and so hid her daughter within a great tower that went beyond the heavens. Yet the world retaliated by making their hair long and of gold.

    Fearing outsiders she made the top inaccessible except by using magic. As the goddess grew old and forgotten she needed to rely on her daughter more and more. Yet she still feared the world and so warned her daughter against trusting others. Her daughter took the advice seriously and refused all who came.

    All except one. A demi-god of unknown origins came to the tower and saw its state. He then spied the girl's golden locks and asked to be let in. When refused he did not leave. However, he did not ask again. Instead, he offered conversation. After a while, she let her hair down to let him in.

    That night, after the man inspected and disapproved of her living conditions, they spirited her away in the dead of night. The goddess, fearing the worst, pursued them. However, it was for naught as the man was a prince and the men were loyal to him. While he let her in out of kindness he did not permit her to take the daughter unless she wished to go.

    From this union, he was born. A demi-god within whom flowed the blood of giants. Immediately after birth, he began to grow bigger and bigger. Yet to everyone's shock his mother would grow to accommodate, eventually leaving the safety of the castle. Once he was old enough he returned as his size was not quite the issue.

    At age 5 his mother taught him the means needed to control his size. Able to mingle with normal humans now he had a proper childhood as said power required not concentration, merely thought to switch sizes. As he grew he grew stronger, braver, and kinder. He would often do things for people for nothing in return.

    Eventually, he was given the throne by his father, who retired to the countryside with his mother. His rule reflected his actions in his childhood. He was exceedingly kind to all and asked for nothing in return. He only taxed others to feed those in his castle and never more. During his reign, he ruled with caution and kindness.

    Often he would not tax people as his hunters gathered enough food for the castle and he would regularly journey through the isle to check on others and ensure invasion wasn’t occurring. He was taught how nations would often invade others for resources. He took great measures to ensure his people didn’t need to invade others while also patrolling to ensure they weren’t invaded without notice.

    Eventually, however, an emissary from a foreign nation named ‘Ireland’ arrived by a great many boats to his isle. He greeted them and accepted a request for an audience with their leader, a man calling themselves Mathlwch. He and his small band guided the foreigners to his castle. He was curious and fearful of why they had come to his peaceful isle.

    Their leader, to his relief, was straightforward in their desire. They wished for a pact of peace to ensure there would be no war between them. He was amicable to the idea though wondered why such a thing was of concern to the man calling themselves Mathlwch. The man simply shared a desire to protect his people and found having defense pacts to be a viable method.

    Suddenly Mathlwch made a strange offer. To marry one of his family to cement the relationship and ensure the continuation of their lineage even in the event of total disaster. He found the idea amicable and eventually agreed to it. He would not force his sisters to marry but if they accepted he would give his blessings.

    Eventually, his sister Branwen agreed to the arrangement. As preparations were made to celebrate the union the next day his half-brother heard of the arrangement and went on a rampage. He slaughtered all the horses of their guests and sank 3 boats. Mathlwch showed anger at the event and demanded recompense.

    He offered his best horses as replacements and treasures. A silver magic rod to exert her authority and a cauldron to return to life her subjects. Mathlwch accepted these gifts as recompense and swiftly left. That was the last Bran heard of her before his eventual war with Ireland.

    Rather he eventually heard from Branwen. She was an accomplished druid and used it to send a plea for rescue. He was enraged. His family, whom he loved dearly, had been not only injured but also killed. His nephew who was only a child had been murdered by a rowdy Irishman. For the first time, he did something incredibly selfish. He decided to march on Ireland, alone if needed, and raze Mathlwch’s realm to the ground.

    He was not alone. Many men and women from around the isle gathered together and vowed to aid him in his rescue of Branwen. Yet he had a single obstacle between him and Ireland. The strait that prevented him from crossing. Due to a curse by the wicked goddess, his father could never step foot on anything that would aid in crossing water.

    It, evidently, was hereditary.

    Only he suffered it, however. He had used a ritual to concentrate the curse within him. However, it rendered him unable to even attempt swimming as he’d simply sink. However, one man, named Taliesin, gave some wise advice. He suggested a visit to the White Witch, Ceridwen. He accepted the idea and ventured out with only a few retainers.

    Their realm was harsh. A forest that was forgotten by a man completely. All things that had a name did not exist there save them and her. She however was only named as master of the forest. Yet she welcomed them in. He laid out his request plainly; aid in crossing the Strait to the Irish Nation. Ceridwen, while amused, refused at first.

    Then he simply asked what she wished for and he’d grant it. She named her price; the forest's protection for all time. He, with Taliesin and Pwyll as witnesses, named the forest sacred and reserved solely for royalty. He then named Ceridwen the yeoman of the forest, beginning a tradition that would protect the forest even to the modern day.

    Ceridwen, satisfied, then granted Bran a blessing of the forest of equal power. She could not stop his feet from cursing objects meant to aid him across waters but she could bless him so the waters themselves were his footholds. It was the best she could do. He was grateful and left after thanking her.

    Once they returned they set out for Ireland. He walked and his allies sailed. It took three days and nights to do so but eventually, they made it. Once ashore he found Matholwch waiting personally. They revealed that they were a sorcerer using deceit and trickery to lull foreign leaders into defense pacts.

    Matholwch however had yet to invoke one with an ally nation. She confessed to him her crimes and asked for an opportunity to pay recompense. As angry as he was he did not wish for bloodshed. He wanted things settled properly. He agreed if she showed proper hospitality and paid enough tribute to satisfy him and his sister. Matholwch agreed.

    She revealed a small village she had erected for him and his army to stay in as she collected payment. He initially accepted but his half-brother, who had instigated the beginning events, suspected foul play. He went into a cabin meant for Bran and his family, checking sacks of various foodstuffs left behind.

    He revealed treachery that had been prepared. An ambush meant to kill them. Bran immediately declared that negotiations had broken down and that war was the only response. He then warned Matholwch personally that if Branwen was harmed her nation would suffer a fate worse than death itself.

    Yet the war was not so one-sided. For all the fame Bran had brought, Matholwch made up for it in cleverness, wit, and strategy. She utilized the very treasures he gifted her against him and it made for an even fight at first. Then it became clear their forces could not last against the reinvigorating properties of Crochan yr Adgyfodiad.

    Yet he did not despair. Rather he consulted Taliesin about an idea and upon confirmation that it was not impossible went with it. He disguised himself as a mere soldier and played at being fatally injured. As Irish soldiers collected him and threw him into the cauldron he called upon his giant's blood and divine strength.

    He expanded seemingly without end within the cauldron and eventually broke it. In the process, he took heavy injuries all over his body, to the point of appearing to have been carved up by a mad slasher. Yet he proved his bravery as he, sword in hand, turned and lashed out at Matholwch.

    If he hadn’t been injured that might have been her end. Yet it was not. His sword fell short of her retreat and merely injured her. Her soldiers then rained blows seeking to finish him. Initially, Matholwch showed a brave face to him, standing against him. Yet when he ignored his injuries and moved towards her she faltered and eventually fled.

    Thus ended Bran’s one and only war.

    At his request, Pwyll beheaded him and Taliesin enchanted it so it’d be preserved. They also returned to Ceridwen so that it would at least be partially revived as Bran had a final request. To be made Britain's eternal protector so long as they’d allow it. He would use his gaze to ward off enemies of the isles. This protection lasted for years until a prideful king came upon his head and after a brief argument on ideals tossed it into the sea, ending his protection and life once and for all.



    Class Skills
    Magic Resistance: EX
    A class skill that is the staple of Saber class servants and their greatest asset. It allows them to weave through the spells of enemy masters and caster servants without consequence. Bran the Blessed fought the Sorcerer King and while not able to slay her he forced her to retreat despite her magical might. This combined with his lineage and class lead him to have an extremely high Magic Resistance. However, a single curse renders this skill incapable of proper evaluation. The curse renders him incapable of utilizing any form of vessel or animal to cross water.

    He must, by his own power, cross water. Anything he boards or rides on while crossing water in any way will immediately sink to the riverbed due to the curse. This creates an opening in his Magic Resistance against water-elemental magecraft. While he is not weak to water magecraft it is simply that his Magic Resistance alone cannot defend against it.

    Otherwise, his Magic Resistance cancels out the effects of any magecraft targeting him specifically. Even magecraft from the Age of Gods or high thaumaturgy utilized by a great magus will do nothing to him.

    Riding: -
    A skill sealed due to his curse. As he cannot cross the water on anything other than his own power, he cannot ride a vehicle or ride an animal over rivers, ponds, or other kinds of water bodies. Bridges are exempt from this as he was able to walk over them in life without issue.

    Personal Skills
    Body of Divine Iron: A+
    A skill denoting his unique lineage and their unique benefits. He is the son of a demi-goddess and a giant, making him part human, part god, and part giant. He has divinity from the worship of his people as their king and his demigoddess mother, he has an enhanced body and large size from his father's giant bloodline, and his humanity was inherited from his mother's human side.

    These all bring benefits to this singular skill. In addition to naturally enhancing all of his parameters by 1 rank at all times, grants him a high amount of divinity, and hardens his body to be akin to divine steel. Attacks below B-rank will fail regardless of the cause. His giant's blood offers a low-level healing effect when he is injured, healing most minor injuries in seconds and preventing harsh injuries from impeding him.

    The only downside is a much larger upkeep than normal saber servants. Normally a top-tier Saber servant would be capable of being sustained by an average master even if at the cost of losing a rank in some parameters. In his case he can face not only two rank downs in all parameters, but this skill can rank down to compensate and he can only deploy each of his noble phantasms once a day.

    In other words, only a top-tier mana battery or magus could hope to keep up with his upkeep requirements.

    Crossing of the Strait: B
    A skill sublimating a part of his legend. When he utilized a blessing from the White Witch to cross the strait to join his army and invade Ireland. This skill has two functions that are constantly active. The first function turns water itself into footholds for him, letting him walk upon it at his whim as though they were solid objects. At the lowest, he can descend waist-deep into the water before the water below is simply a flat surface for him.

    The other function is to replicate his march towards Ireland, bringing the mists of Britain with him. Each step he takes marks the environment around him as Britain. While this alone cannot provide homeland bonuses but it is enough to allow him, if he successfully does so, to steal control of territory from another.

    Charisma of the Good King: A
    A variant of the Charisma skill representing the natural charm they have and how they command respect not through status or fear but through simply good works. His morality was so impeccable that when he decided, perhaps for the first time in his life, to act selfishly others banded together naturally without a call from him in order to aid him in his selfishness.

    It carries the normal benefits of Charisma. It enables him to have a dialogue with others, garner their respect easily, and raise or lower morale. However, with his variant, he raises the morale of any Good-aligned allies and always lowers the morale of any Evil-aligned enemies. Further, his charisma can inspire people and draw out their latent talent and potential, even making them somewhat superhuman.

    Personality
    In life, Bran was a very kind man. Even in death, he retains his kind, gentle, selfless nature. Yet it is ever so slightly tempered. When he sees a new face, his smile hardens. He examines the one before him for the briefest of moments. Then, as if whatever happened had passed, his smile would soften and become genuine.

    Bran the Blessed was very altruistic. He always put others' needs before his own and protected his people bitterly. So much so that it borders on a complex. He desires nothing for himself to the point that only once in his life was he ever selfish. This trait, back then, garnered him a lot of respect and praise. However, now he is often seen as simply naive.

    Yet he is not. Despite his good nature, he does not flinch when he slays an enemy nor does his heart seem to move when exposed to horror. Having been a king he had to commit violence to defend his people and so his heart was not that of a naive, pure-hearted altruist but of a king that felt indebted to the people who accepted him and did all he felt he could to repay that kindness; Even killing that which threatened them rather than risk a dialogue.

    Due to this past, there is precisely one servant he will always target first in a grail war should they be in the same one; Mathlwych. He views her as someone who must not be allowed to live for what they did to his family and he takes offense to them being a heroic spirit. To him, there can never be peace unless there is something bigger than her at stake. Even then he will seek her death if possible thinking she will complicate or exploit the matter for her own gain at the expense of all others.

    It is his only act of prejudice against another living being.

    Interactions
    Master, Bond Level 0: Hello, master! The servant saber has answered your call! I am Bran the Blessed and with my divine might, we will claim victory!

    Master, Bond Level 5: Hello, master. I hope I've been what you expected. I know I'm more strenuous to use than most of your other servants, but I'm glad you make it work. That said... you should take more care of yourself! Seriously, we should find some hot springs to relax in. Nothing like a hot bath after a good fight...

    Master, Bond Level 10: Hmmm. A bit of advice, master. Never assume the worst. All people, even villains, have some good in them. I, an inhuman, was accepted by my people the brits to lead them. They did so without asking for anything. So I served them as their king. It was an honor. Had they rejected me... I would not be here. So, master, do the same. Look not for what to reject, but for what to accept and use that to begin a dialogue.

    Artoria Pendragon: Tsk. That brat again...? What a mistake she made. While my gaze lay on the horizon, the south was protected. Yet, inevitably... what a prideful brat. It'd have been acceptable if she took me for another use but... throwing me in the ocean... how petty can you get!?

    Mathlwych: ... Begone witch. I shan't tolerate thine presence. Leave now or I shall sunder you where you stand. Only this chance do I proffer. Leave mine sight at once!!!

    Constantine XII: A valiant effort. Truly, those walls are truly wonderful and beautiful. Indeed, they are so very splendid and strong... it is a shame they fell. I understand the pain, of not being able to protect your fellows. My condolences.

    Mordred: ... Hmmm. What a foolish child you were. However, you've grown. Keep walking, then. Someday, perhaps, you will outgrow that shameful title. I'd love to meet the Mordred that is not the knight of treachery, but perhaps a truly heroic knight.

    Noble Phantasm

    Cleddyf Gwyn

    the Sword of Destiny

    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: A

    A sword that existed throughout the middle ages of Europe. A pristine marble white sword that was the sharpest sword to ever exist. It changed hands throughout history. Bran to a Taliesin, Taliesin to Pelles, Pelles to Percival. A weapon not meant for light hands. It is a sword that will unerringly guide its wielder to their destiny.

    Bran was always destined to die to the armies of Ireland. Taliesin was always destined to become king of Prison Island. Pelles was always destined to become cursed by his own sins. Percival was always destined to become a grail knight. It guided each down their path and ensured their end. Yet only two knew of the truth regarding it. This sword, while their guide, did not set their path in stone.

    Passively, this sword prevents alterations to Bran's end. It accomplishes this by obscuring what Bran's fate specifically is. Any skill that would peer into his fate or tactics will completely fail even if they normally cannot. Revelations, for example, will be unable to give any advice or visions regarding him unless he explicitly permits it. Likewise, any Luck check he makes cannot be altered by other skills than his own, even if he would rather wish it so.

    This protection is so prolific that even skills that can alter the results of checks, such as Clown's Laughter, simply fail to function against him thanks to the sword. Its protection is very, very potent and granted these benefits to each of its wielders, Bran being no exception.

    When he unleashes its true name however he unleashes its full legend. Mana condenses along the edge and travels faster than the naked eye can track, allowing it to cut much better than a mere sword could. Yet by unleashing this noble phantasm he sets in stone that before he can sheathe it again the sword will be irreparably broken. This is due to a combination of two legends granting him both a blessing and a curse.

    The first legend, of his destruction of the Cauldron of Resurrection, makes it so that Bran's secondary noble phantasm can destroy noble phantasms but at the cost of limbs. The second legend regards the blade breaking in Percival's hands when he needed it the most. However, with this noble phantasm in Bran's hands Bran can, in a way, subvert destiny. Instead of sacrificing a limb to destroy a noble phantasm, he can choose to destroy this noble phantasm instead. When he does, he cannot call upon it for the rest of his summon but he retains the limb he channeled his second noble phantasm through.

    In a sense, the true power of this noble phantasm, beyond Protection from Fate, is to become a broken noble phantasm to prevent the backlash of his true noble phantasm.


    Distrywiwr Chwedl

    O' Limb Given for Salvation

    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: EX

    Bran's true noble phantasm. The legend that earned him a spot on the throne of heroes. How he fought the armies of the Sorceror King Mathlwych and succeeded in defeating them and avenging his nephew and protecting his sister. Disguising himself as a soldier so he would be dumped into the cauldron and then used his very nature in order to shatter it irreversibly. This noble phantasm represents this legend completely.

    This noble phantasms passive effect is not a reduction in noticeability, lacking the proper class for this effect. However, he gains something incredible. This noble phantasm spreads its legend-destroying properties throughout his body and infuses it with them, turning it into a weapon that destroys legends. 'Body of Divine Iron' prevents this aspect of the noble phantasm from affecting himself outright, allowing him to freely utilize this aspect.

    This does not mean a mere touch will destroy noble phantasms. Rather it can be stated that all attacks done by him inflict extra damage against legends and through this disrupts them. Even the mighty Excalibur's brilliance can be dimmed for a time if he were to touch it carelessly. To hide this he normally fights with
    Cleddyf Gwyn
    the Sword of Destiny
    , of which he cannot properly channel this noble phantasm through.

    However, when he is prepared to completely destroy a noble phantasm he can invoke this noble phantasm's true name. When he does, if he lacks
    Cleddyf Gwyn
    the Sword of Destiny
    , he channels all of his legend-destroying properties into a single limb and then grasps either a servant or noble phantasm. Then he unleashes this noble phantasm fully into the enemy and ruptures their noble phantasm. If it is a metaphysical noble phantasm then the servant is instead heavily injured as the part of their Spirit Origin or Saint Graph that held it is completely obliterated, sealing the noble phantasm more or less permanently.

    Physical noble phantasms, barring those legendary for their invulnerability to damage, will be unharmed. However, the legend within is sealed away preventing the enemy servant from properly utilizing it. This ranks it down to E-rank regardless of the original strength of the noble phantasm. In exchange however, the limb he channels this power through also explodes unless he channels this noble phantasm through his first noble phantasm
    Cleddyf Gwyn
    the Sword of Destiny
    . Either way, he too is weakened by utilizing his legend in this way.

    If he sacrifices a limb for this noble phantasm, it can never be healed again. Even a powerful healing ability like a curse of resurrection would fail to restore the limb. This is because he has obliterated his limb and his natural state is to lack that limb completely.
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    Great sheet, kamera.
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    Quote Originally Posted by DelRey View Post
    Great sheet, kamera.
    I echo this sentiment.
    Honestly, I always liked the way you write such succint sheets and yet they always speak so much. I could never. This is a gift.
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    Apollo 11

    “I’ll do my best master… to reach the moon and to keep on going. It’ll be one small step for man and one giant leap for mankind.”

    PARAMETERS

    STR
    D

    END
    C

    AGI
    A

    MNA
    C

    LCK
    A

    NP
    B

    PERSONAL TRAITS

    Class: Rider
    Aliases: The Space Child of America
    Alignment: Neutral Good
    Traits: Female, Servant, Humanoid, Mechanical, Weak to Enuma Elish
    Attribute: Star
    Gender: Female
    H/W: Varies
    Source: Historical Fact
    Region: America

    CLASS SKILLS

    Magic Resistance (E)

    Due to being in a modern era in which mystery was borderline non-existent, she has this skill at a very low rank.

    “I don’t need any kind of sup-er-nat-ural powers. I just have all of the machines that made me.”

    Riding (-)

    This skill has been replaced by Perfect Body of the Cosmos, as she herself is the mount and not any type of horse.

    “I don’t need any kind of animal, I can fly! Although it would be nice to have a horsey. Can we get a horsey master? Please? Please?”

    Independent Navigation (C)

    A skill describing a servant’s power to navigate dangerous areas beyond the protection of the earth. Although she was capable of reaching the moon, due to still needing pilots, she has this skill at a low rank.

    “Time for another mission.”

    PERSONAL SKILLS

    Pioneer of the Stars (EX)

    A skill denoting one who shaped mankind’s history. As the first spaceship that went to the moon, winning the Space Race and getting the first man on the moon, Rider is an emblem of history changing to the will of mankind’s ingenuity.

    “Once I managed to get to that big white ball, I knew everything would be different.

    On Wings of Dreams (EX)

    Rider carries the will of a nation within her. That of the hopes and dreams of all the scientists who worked to create her stored within her memory files. She sees these people are her “parents” and frequently replays old memories for herself. She draws powers from these shadows, these faceless men who sweat and bled to make her, their dreams empowering her and allowing her to fly.

    “Thank you mama and papa. Thank you for being with me at that moment.”

    Perfect Body of the Cosmos (EX)

    Rider’s body is not that of a normal human girl, but a complex piece of machinery built by many scientists in a lab. This body grants her access to high power thrusters, scanning technology, weapons, a navigational system, and passive self improves as new technology is developed. In a way, her body is a testament to the complex mechanisms humanity is able to make. Her favorite part of this skill is that it gives her access to Itunes.

    “You better run! Or I’ll shoot you with my laz-er blashters.”

    NOBLE PHANTASMS

    One Small Step for Man
    Type
    Anti-Obstacle
    Rank
    B
    Range
    1-1000m
    Max. Targets
    1
    A Noble Phantasm representing the exact moment that Neil Armstrong and the astronauts set foot on the Moon. No longer would humanity be trapped in the high gravity world they were born to. By accelerating at high speeds, Rider can punch through natural limitations of the world, such as faster than light travel and other seeming impossibilities. All she needs is determination, happy thoughts, and enough time and humanity will find a way to overcome any obstacle.

    “Ready? Accelerating. All systems go.”

    BIOGRAPHY

    During the Space Race, there were considerable economic and political implications to being the first country to put a man on the moon. American scientists spent years and years trying to create a ship that would do it. The Apollo missions 1 through 10 failed, but she succeeded, crushing the Soviets and demonstrating the ingenuity of America.

    PERSONALITY

    An extremely immature, childish, and excitable girl. She is dedicated to the cause of humanity. Rider frequently mispronounced words, messes up social situations, and acts generally adorable. Additionally, she loves the idea of “missions” and thinks they are a very cool thing.

    DIALOGUE AND RELATIONSHIPS

    Wish: “I hope that we can keep on going. To Mars, the Milky Way,
    Likes: Peanuts, Success, that feeling of being in a Zero G environment
    Dislikes: Carrots, Russians, Mean people
    When she talks to Voyager: “You’re like my big brother! You went even farther than me.”
    When she talks to Tesla: “Thank you for inventing electricity. That was a big help for me going into Space. What do you mean you didn’t invent electricity? Huh?”
    When she talks to Abigail Williams: poke. Poke. “Hi! Wanna play tag?”
    Bond 10 CE: Success

    We did it.
    After ten of my sisters failed.
    After all of the brave astronauts who risked their lives.
    After all the money and time and effort we put into it.
    We touched the moon.
    It’s so big and white.
    It’s beautiful.
    I’m happy I was able to get us there.



    “And cut! We got a scene!”


    < - ⪻ - ⪡ - ⫷⫸ - ⪢ - ⪼ - >???:


    Stanley Kubrick??

    “I don’t know if it was perfect though. Let’s do another take and get it right.”

    PARAMETERS

    STR
    D

    END
    A

    AGI
    C

    MNA
    B

    LCK
    C

    NP
    EX

    PERSONAL TRAITS

    Class: Pretender
    Aliases: King of Directors
    Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
    Traits: Male, Servant, Humanoid, Weak to Enuma Elish
    Attribute: Man
    Gender: Male
    H/W: Varies due to shapeshifting
    Source: Historical Fact
    Region: America


    CLASS SKILLS

    Territory Creation (EX)

    He doesn’t create a territory so much as a set to film on, micromanaging every single aspect of the area to find the best area for a fun set of events. This lets him easily gather mana and manipulate his surroundings.

    “That’s the wrong shade of blue! Are you an idiot?"

    Camouflage (B)

    A skill allowing a servant to disguise themselves as others and change their appearance. He used this skill to pretend to be Apollo 11. What is unique in Kubrick’s variant of this skill is that he can give it to allies as support. After all, it's the actors who dress up, not the director.

    “It’s annoying that I need to use this skill on myself. That’s not my job.”

    Universal Bird’s Eye View (A)

    He wouldn’t be much of a director if he couldn’t see everything, everywhere, at once. Kubrick, through micromanaging and watching dailies (video screens that let him replay and watch every single scene in the war) is way too informed about everything, always knowing which scene works and which needs to get spiced up by his intervention. However, he can only do this when in his territory and when devoting the majority of his attention to his camera screens.

    “Saber! Those tears don’t look genuine. Another take. What do you mean you don’t work for me?”

    PERSONAL SKILLS

    Battle Continuation (B)

    A man who would go through hundreds and hundreds of takes to find the perfect scene. He is capable of ignoring injuries, exhaustion, any sort of obstacle (including complaints from the actors) in order to keep on fighting and make his perfect movie. However, he dislikes the term “asshole workaholic” and prefers “dedicated director”

    “What do you mean it's been three days since we started? Do I look like I care? Take your places!"

    Satirist (A)

    A Skill in which the user's mere presence causes other Noble Phantasms within their vicinity to rapidly lose power and transform into a mocking, sarcastic, even comedic imitations of themselves. In maximum effect, legendary sacred swords would turn into flabby rubber swords, unbreakable spears would have the durability of a wooden chopstick, and powerful laser beams would become harmless light shows.

    Pretender created several movies that satirized and parodied society, the government, and politics in general. Through usage of humorous movies and clever tricks, Kubrick can degrade even the greatest of heroes.

    “I don’t care how good of a hero you are. All I need is to make a movie and your legends in the garbage. Remember that.”

    Directing (A+)

    While Kubrick is in the chair, he becomes more than just a silly man who gets way too into movies. This skill grants him all of the powers of the director, letting him push people into dramatic situations with words, manipulating them through sheet enthusiasm and preparation. This is his primary offensive skill and effectively gives him a loyal set of assistants to work with, helping him move the plot along by being his film crew. It also grants him a large amount of money and mana in the form of a budget.

    “Everything set up? Lights! Camera! Action!”

    NOBLE PHANTASMS

    Moon Landing Conspiracy: World Narrative Domination
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    A Noble Phantasm that represents Kubrick’s moon landing fake. This skill creates a fiction that people will believe, shaping their culture and history. Effectively, by spending time creating an excellent movie, he can pull people in and make his truth the objective one. It is essentially a form of historical revisionism, letting him alter a servant’s legend or an area’s past. This phantasm gets stronger the more people have viewed his movie and the more time and effort he put into using this phantasm. He can sway the masses to his wills with this. When not using its true name release, this phantasm just makes his works more convincing, easier to spread around, and letting him manipulate a populace.

    “You’ve got an hour and a half to kill right? Just watch this! Don’t worry if it's not true. It’s better than true.

    BIOGRAPHY

    Stanley Kubrick, one of the greatest directors of all time, spent his life creating classics such as Spartacus, the Shining, Lolita, and Dr. Strangelove. However, a theory popped up in light of the moon landing skepticism. What if Kubrick, with his skill at creating films that seemed more real than reality, was enlisted by the US Government to fake the Moon Landing and Apollo 11 mission. Thus, Pretender Kubrick was born. A cheerful liar who thinks that movies are the greatest fiction and that lies are love. He is dedicated to making his movies as well as being arguably the greatest con artist ever, fooling the history books and the entire world.

    PERSONALITY

    A lying workaholic shit heel. He sees himself as God in a way, controlling the story and forcing the actors (servants) to make the most entertaining, thought provoking movie possible. Killing himself and refusing to take breaks. He considers lies to be gifts as fiction is more fun than reality, an easily malleable and ridiculed thing. Hiding behind masks to be an infuriating man, he will manipulate his master too. In a way, being formed by lies (movies), he is the ideal pretender. He will also call you out if you’re a shit head though, or he’ll make a movie about it.
    DIALOGUE AND RELATIONSHIPS

    Wish: “What do I need a wish for? All I want to do is film the greatest heroes dying and going through trauma for the purposes of a wish. Although, snatching it out of their hands at the last second and making them cry would be a fantastic ending…”
    Likes: Making a perfect movie,
    Dislikes: People who don’t understand movies, People who criticize movies, Untalented actors
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    What did I do? Is the sheet any good? It’s my first pretender
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    I don't really care much for Apollo, and even had some questions myself (like why is Apollo itself a Servant when you can use the astronauts boarding it instead?), but the reveal that it's actually Kubrick does give you extra points. Still some weirdly op conceptual stuff for a 20th-century filmmaker, but the sheet overall just went from a 3 to a... 6, in my opinion.

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    Quote Originally Posted by BnEl15 View Post
    I don't really care much for Apollo, and even had some questions myself (like why is Apollo itself a Servant when you can use the astronauts boarding it instead?), but the reveal that it's actually Kubrick does give you extra points. Still some weirdly op conceptual stuff for a 20th-century filmmaker, but the sheet overall just went from a 3 to a... 6, in my opinion.
    Thanks. Do you think I did the pretender reveal well? I was trying to do something similar to your own Reynard and Isengrim. As for Apollo being the ship and not the astronauts, that was more of a personal choice as well as me liking that idea more. Is Kubrick wanked? I was just trying to give him an phantasm that was strong with a theme of revisionism as that's the whole point of the sheet.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Serra View Post
    bruh
    I still don't understand this bruh.
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    Yeah, nothing really wrong with your Apollo choice either. Just a personal nitpick of mine. Reveal is fine, though now that I think about it... wouldn't he fit Faker better than Pretender? I'm not the guy to ask about the usual Faker vs. Pretender discourse tho, so whatever.

    Edit:
    As for wanked... yeah, he is. His territory creation rank, universal bird's eye, director's privilege... becoming an omniscient god with little to no drawbacks is just not the way to go for such a modern Servant. I'd probably have tried the revisionism angle as well if I were to write my own Kubrick, but there has to be a balancing flaw to his kit somewhere, such as his abilities significantly weakening the moment his audience (other Servants) realizing that his movies are ultimately fictional.
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    Quote Originally Posted by BnEl15 View Post
    Yeah, nothing really wrong with your Apollo choice either. Just a personal nitpick of mine. Reveal is fine, though now that I think about it... wouldn't he fit Faker better than Pretender? I'm not the guy to ask about the usual Faker vs. Pretender discourse tho, so whatever.
    Well, I see Faker as pretending to be a specific lie, while Pretender is more made of lies. He's Pretender since he spread the falsehood of the Apollo mission. If he pretended to be the mission, he'd be Faker.

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    Sometimes I wonder how the Faker/Pretender ecosystem would have turned out if we didn't have collapse tags.

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    the moon landing is fake you can tell because there were no vampires in the """footage"""

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    Quote Originally Posted by Random View Post
    Sometimes I wonder how the Faker/Pretender ecosystem would have turned out if we didn't have collapse tags.

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    the moon landing is fake you can tell because there were no vampires in the """footage"""
    If Kubrick actually went to the moon, we would have problems.

    As for the faker/pretender economy, I'm not sure. It would be less fun.


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    Quote Originally Posted by BnEl15 View Post
    Yeah, nothing really wrong with your Apollo choice either. Just a personal nitpick of mine. Reveal is fine, though now that I think about it... wouldn't he fit Faker better than Pretender? I'm not the guy to ask about the usual Faker vs. Pretender discourse tho, so whatever.

    Edit:
    As for wanked... yeah, he is. His territory creation rank, universal bird's eye, director's privilege... becoming an omniscient god with little to no drawbacks is just not the way to go for such a modern Servant. I'd probably have tried the revisionism angle as well if I were to write my own Kubrick, but there has to be a balancing flaw to his kit somewhere, such as his abilities significantly weakening the moment his audience (other Servants) realizing that his movies are ultimately fictional.
    I took the TC rank from Holmes (probably a dumb idea), but that weakening of phantasm once they see through the lie is a great idea. As for Director's Privilege, all it really does is give him some weak arms and legs to work with. Universal Bird's Eye, you're right there. Maybe a lower rank?

    I made a bit of changes and added a thing on how he's only op on set.


    Oh hey, Nine-Lives, king of the extra classes. Did I mess anything up?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Random View Post
    Sometimes I wonder how the Faker/Pretender ecosystem would have turned out if we didn't have collapse tags.
    Monthly contests would have looked very different.
    I know I voted for stuff just for the cool reveal.

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    Quote Originally Posted by pinetree View Post
    Monthly contests would have looked very different.
    I know I voted for stuff just for the cool reveal.
    Did my reveal surprise you?

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    I dunno, "authority second only to god, invisible shadows, manipulation of sound and illusions" sound like more than "a few weak arms and legs to work with". Maybe I'm not understanding the description right. I agree that he could use those Skills (stage illusionism, basically), but I'm still not sold on the EX rank.

    Come to think of it, there is a canon Skill that could work for directors like him while not being as op as director's privilege. SFX, as demonstrated by our canon Riyo Rider, aka George Melies.

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    Also, there is a Skill literally called Directing that could work for him too. You're free to write a more serious description on the Skill if you'd like, tho. I've done several edits on the explanation of canon Skills myself.
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    Quote Originally Posted by BnEl15 View Post
    I dunno, "authority second only to god, invisible shadows, manipulation of sound and illusions" sound like more than "a few weak arms and legs to work with". Maybe I'm not understanding the description right. I agree that he could use those Skills (stage illusionism, basically), but I'm still not sold on the EX rank.

    Come to think of it, there is a canon Skills that could work for directors like him while not being as op as director's privilege. SFX, as demonstrated by our canon Riyo Rider, aka George Melies.
    The authority second to god thing was me trying to make a joke on how Kubrick views himself. Sorry if it didn't work. I suppose I could just give him high ranked Directing as his skill.

    Does this edit work?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Dreamerless View Post
    Oh hey, Nine-Lives, king of the extra classes. Did I mess anything up?
    DEL-9, Alter Ego of conceptually intricate, yet simultaneously nonexistent sheets. The Schrodinger's Cat of Beast's Lair.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dreamerless View Post
    I still don't understand this bruh.
    It's just another wanked uber evil fan Servant that's too recent to be a Servant in the first place. There are so so many sheets that fit that specific combination and they keep coming all the time. Bit tiresome. Those traits aren't necessarily death sentences for a sheet, but, yeah.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Serra View Post
    It's just another wanked uber evil fan Servant that's too recent to be a Servant in the first place. There are so so many sheets that fit that specific combination and they keep coming all the time. Bit tiresome. Those traits aren't necessarily death sentences for a sheet, but, yeah.
    Ah, didn't mean to fit the cliches and I am trying to fix the wanking. I don't think that Kubrick qualifies for an evil servant though. More of an uncaring one. What do you mean by a "fan servant"?

    Oh, I meant DelRey as the king of extra classes, not Ninelives. Sorry.

    I'm still wondering if they count as Rider for the purposes of making one of each class. What are y'alls opinion on that?
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