Create-A-Servant 3

[Shezum3]

Lancer of Kulikovo battle

Well... I'm Lancer. And to start with, my legend is a little... well... exaggerated.

Class: Lancer
True Name: Dmitry Donskoy
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Place of Origin: Grand duchy of Moscow
Armament: Heavy spear, berdysh-axe

STRENGE — C
ENDURANCE — C
AGILITY — B
MANA — C
LUCK — B
NP — B

Class skills:

Magic Resistance(C+)

Provides protection from magical effects. Unlike the resistance effect, which simply rejects magical energy, this ability completely cancels spells. Lancer lived in an era when magic was beginning to fade. However, he is resistant to spells of Mongolian origin.

Personal skills:

Stone Kremlin B

The fortified core of the historical Russian city, its central and most ancient part. The most famous Kremlin was built in the city of Lancer a long time ago. However, Lancer was the one who strengthened the Kremlin, replacing the flimsy and flammable wood with durable white stone.

In Lancer's class, this skill allows him to cover his skin with a white veil, similar in strength to the walls of the Kremlin. Lancer can also build up 20 layers of such armor, according to the number of Kremlin towers

Ah, the Kremlin. With these walls, a funny incident came out. In my country, houses were built of wood, and fortresses were also made of wood. They were often burned by all sorts of freaks. And then I say - guys, maybe we should at least put the Kremlin out of stone, we are already tired of extinguishing it. Well... so we started making the Kremlin out of stone.

Saint A

This is indicates being acknowledged as a saint. When summoned as a Servant, the ability of Saint is selected one among "raising the effectiveness of sacraments", "automatic HP recovery", "1 Rank-Up to Charisma" and "production of a holy shroud is possible.

Saint... well, now I can't screw up


Demonic Defender of State(Fake) B

This the capacity of a Servant to mark a region as his personal dominion by securing the surrounding leylines prior to an engagement

Lancer, despite his victory, was never able to defend his country. In his case, his power over the leylines will begin to wane over time and he will have to use this skill again.

Even though I didn't achieve my goal... but that doesn't mean I'll give up so easily.

Noble Phantasm:

Пересвет и Ослабя
Saints Warriors
B

Crystallization of the legend about Peresvet and Oslyabya, warrior monks who took the battle in the Battle of the Don. Let the existence of such characters is now being questioned, but now this is the weapon of Lancer himself.

Relight is a heavy spear, Lancer's primary weapon. It has a rather nasty property - Lancer can sacrifice it to destroy the enemy's tangible NP. When activated, the spear will be covered with light and upon contact with another NP - necessarily in the form of a weapon - will be destroyed along with it. After that, Lancer will be armed with Oslyabya's axe. This ax has no mods, but grants Lancer access to his second NP

Куликово поле
Cavalry has arrived
C

Lancer's most famous battle, which gave him the nickname Donskoy. Kulikovo or Don battle, which showed the weakening of the influence of the Golden Horde on the Russian principalities.

This NP Lancer cannot be activated immediately. There are conditions. Firstly, he must use Peresvet and fight already Oslyabya. Secondly, NP can only be applied before the battle and its effect affects the entire battlefield.

Since the sudden attack of the cavalry played a decisive role in this battle, Lancer is able to summon phantom riders to attack. He always tries to use this ability at the most inconvenient moment for the enemy

Description:

Likes: Pretend to be stupid, unusual decisions
Dislikes: narcissistic idiots, Exaggerated legend
Natural Enemy: Mamai, Oleg Ryazansky, Jagiello

Lancer’s True name is Dmitry Donskoy, Prince of Moscow, Grand Duke of Vladimir and Prince of Novgorod. Nicknamed "Donskoy" for the victory in the Battle of Kulikovo.

However, when you first meet him, you will be struck by his behavior. Dmitry shows himself to be an openly foolish and frivolous person who talks about the events of the past as if he were telling a joke. He has a verbal tic in the form of the word Well ... and is generally rustic, which is even surprising how such a person could become a prince and still a saint

However, in a fight or other serious situation, he will quickly stop fooling around and become much more serious. He is cunning in combat and picks out the enemy's most dangerous NP first. It should be remembered that in battle Dmitry will always be cunning and deceiving. He always fights only to win and sees no pleasure in combat.

As for the modern era, Lancer genuinely likes it. His life has been difficult and he sees modern life as an opportunity to relax, hence his tomfoolery. For this reason, he tries to end the fight as soon as possible - he is already tired of fighting

[Levin]

Shezum, it's my personal nitpick but I feel like your NP's don't feel unique to their servants?

Also, you should separate your servants into different posts for easier comp

[Shezum3]

Undefeated warlord




Servant Saber is ready to fight. I wonder who will be my opponent in this war?

Class: Saber
True Name: Alexander Suvorov
Alignment: Lawful Good
Place of Origin: Russian Empire
Armament: his Noble Phantasm

STRENGE — B
ENDURANCE — A
AGILITY — B
MANA — B
LUCK — A
NP — A

Class skills:

Riding(B)

The skill of the Saber and Rider classes. Saber has enough rank to ride any military vehicle

Magic Resistance(C)

Provides protection from magical effects. Unlike the resistance effect, which simply rejects magical energy, this ability completely cancels spells.


Personal skills:

Divinity(D)

Measure of whether one has Divine Spirit aptitude or not. At high levels, one is treated as a mixed race of a Divine Spirit - a demi-god. Those who have A Rank Divinity or above have reached the Throne of Gods, although they are still just short of being a true god due to lacking a Divine Core. The level declines when the Heroic Spirit's own rank as a Monster or Demonic Beast rises; it can also decrease due to one's dislike for the gods. This Skill has an effect which reduces special defensive values called "purge defense" in proportion to the Divinity's Rank. It can break through Skills such as Protection of the Faith and Enlightenment of the Sacred Fig.

Saber has no kinship with the gods, however, after his death, a monument was erected to him depicting him in the form of the Roman god of war Mars, which gives Saber a bit of divinity

I declare right away that no god helped me in my victories. But my soldiers - how they helped.

Expert in many specializations(B)

During his lifetime, Saber had many talents. In his spare time, he paid attention to many disciplines and fought his laziness. Among his skills are Charisma, Military tactics, Eye for art, Mentoring, Swordsmanship, Presence Concealment (Saber often dressed up as a simple soldier so that even his own people did not recognize him) and so on.

Never waste time. No teacher can teach you what you yourself can master, you need to show perseverance and diligence

Golden rule(Body)(A)

Saber can temporarily rank up his STR. Furthermore, even without training, he's still beyond brawny. No matter how many calories he ingests, his body shape will not change. Also this skill allows him to remove negative effects from himself after a while, such as debuffs, downgrades, mental curses, etc. below A rank.

At the beginning of his life, Saber was a weak and sickly person. However, since childhood, he began to temper himself with Spartan methods, thanks to which he acquired a good physical shape and lived longer than he could live.

That was my very first victory, heh. I wonder if I can become the most successful doctor? After all, they also fight against diseases, and in this case I ate a dog. What? It is Russian idiom, I have never eaten dogs in my life

Eye of Mind(True) A

This is a heightened capacity for observation, refined through training, discipline and experience. A danger-avoidance ability that utilizes the intelligence collected up to the current time as the basis in order to predict the opponent’s activity and change the current situation. This is not a result of talent, but an overwhelming amount of combat experience. A weapon wielded by none other than a mortal, gained through tenacious training. So long there is even a 1% chance of a comeback, this ability greatly improves the chances of winning.

Saber did not lose a single battle due to the fact that he knew how to sense danger and tried to protect the soldiers. He is very cautious and is difficult to take by surprise.


Noble Phantasm:

Фанагорийский полководец
Undefeated regiment of the god of war and victory
B

Sublimating all of Saber's victories and recognizing him as the incarnation of the God of War, as reflected in the monument erected to him.

This is a sword with a red blade. The sealed saber can give Saber the ability to win in combat. This NP does not have specific properties - it all depends on the opponent fighting Saber. The sword will acquire those properties that are needed to defeat the enemy. Against God, the sword will acquire anti-divine properties. Against the demon, the sword will become an anti-demonic weapon. If the servant has a weakness to fire or poison, then the sword will become fiery or poisonous.

When Saber says NP's real name, the sword disappears, becoming Saber's Roman armor. Now Saber can create any weapon of war, from a sword to a rocket launcher, but there are conditions.

1) Saber cannot create fictional weapons, only those that exist and have been used in wars.

2) Weapons must be created by human hands

3)Weapons can be held in hands, for this reason Saber will not be able to create tanks and planes

4) It cannot be a unique weapon like Excalibur and others

Saber can also summon the ghostly soldiers he commanded in life from his armor. These soldiers can also use the weapons summoned by Saber.

Description:

Likes: Battles, worthy opponents, his soldiers, Russia, play the fool
Dislikes: Turks, Austrians, Prussians, scoundrels, luxury, lazy people
Natural enemy: Emelyan Pugachev, Napoleon Bonaparte, Tadeusz Kosciuszko

Saber’s True name is Alexander Suvorov, Russian commander, founder of Russian military theory. Field Marshal General, Generalissimo, Field Marshal of the Holy Roman Empire, Grand Marshal of the Piedmontese troops, holder of all Russian orders of his time, awarded to men, as well as seven foreign. He is also known as a commander who didn’t lose a single battle.

Suvorov, which may come as a surprise to many, is not a serious person in everyday life. He can talk some nonsense, and at times inappropriate and bad jokes. He is very ascetic and does not like luxury - in any weather he walks in light clothes, and even with a bare torso.

However, this is all a sham. Suvorov pretends to be a fool, but in battle he shows himself to be a dangerous opponent. He has his own code of honor as a commander and really dislikes dastardly tactics, such as using civilians as human shields. Many modern wars disappoint him.

Even in battle, Suvorov retains his childishness and gaiety. He is unflappable, and is quite capable of having a polite conversation with his opponent during a fight, even explaining to him where he made a mistake. Alexander will be very happy to cross swords with famous generals whom he respects.

True, Suvorov is somewhat boastful. He doesn’t mind exaggerating the number of enemies with whom he fought, adding something from himself, attributing an extra reward to himself. Nevertheless, he does not underestimate the merits of the allies, however, if they also distinguished themselves.

Relations

Iskander — My dear namesake, it is a great honor for me to meet you. You can consider my victories as yours too. By the way, I have one request for you - can you show me how to play this Admirable Great Tactics?

Napoleon Bonaparte - Your imperial majesty, and so you lost to my student, but still you want to challenge me to battle? I love this kind of perseverance.

Jack Churchill - What a dashing soldier. And you play the bagpipes, and you know how to swing a sword, and you shoot from a bow. I regret now that I never visited Scotland during my lifetime.

Notes: I remade Suvorov, I will upload his image later - it is very inconvenient from the phone

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Shezum, it's my personal nitpick but I feel like your NP's don't feel unique to their servants?

Also, you should separate your servants into different posts for easier comp

Can't comment on uniqueness. At times there are the following troubles:
Skills are invented, but creating NP is problematic, I have to rack my brains.
Or vice versa, there is NP, but skills have to be pulled almost with pliers

[falseCeilings]

I am cheating a bit, as this Servant Sheet started off as a 'let's see if ChatGPT could do this well', but I worked with it a bit until I was somewhat satisfied.

Šćepan Mali is a really interesting historical figure, yet he's obscure enough that I don't think he'll be on people's radar for creating character sheets like this. Here's a very modest attempt at creating a fun Servant sheet for him. I take some liberties with the legend, of course.


Servant Class: Caster
True Name: Šćepan Mali
Alternate Names: False Peter III
Origin: Montenegro, 18th Century

Parameters:

Strength: E
Endurance: D
Agility: C
Mana: B
Luck: A
Noble Phantasm: EX


Class Skills:

Territory Creation (B): As a Caster, Šćepan Mali can create a "Workshop" territory that is advantageous to him. For Šćepan, this skill manifests through the ability to create a garden of magical herbs. Within this territory, creation of healing or poisonous salves is possible.

Item Construction (C+): Šćepan Mali has the ability to create magical items, with a focus on items that aid in fabricating a false identity, such as documents, clothing, and accessories. This skill helps enhance his ability to deceive others when assuming a new identity.


Personal Skills:

Master of Deception (A): Šćepan Mali's skill in deception and persuasion is unparalleled. During his life, he convinced a whole nation that he was a deceased emperor from a far away land. His deception extended even to those who had personally known the person he impersonated. He can take on the appearance, voice, and mannerisms of any person he chooses.

Charisma (B): Šćepan Mali possesses a natural talent to command and inspire others. At this rank, it is of a level sufficient to lead a nation as its ruler. As a result, he can form alliances and lead people to fight alongside him with great efficiency, even if they may not initially share his goals.

Herbalist's Expertise (B): As a skilled herbalist, Šćepan Mali has extensive knowledge of herbs and their properties. He can use this knowledge to create powerful healing concoctions for his allies, as well as craft potent poisons and debilitating agents to use against his enemies.

Noble Phantasms:

The False Crown of Peter III (EX, Anti-Unit): Šćepan Mali's Noble Phantasm allows him to take on the Skills, Class, Attributes, and Noble Phantasms of a Servant who has died. This powerful ability enables him to adapt to various situations and exploit the abilities of fallen Servants. However, there are limitations to this power. When emulating a Servant, he cannot perfectly reproduce their abilities, resulting in most Attributes and Noble Phantasms being ranked down. Additionally, he cannot copy abilities that are unique to a specific bloodline or a divine origin. The potency of this Noble Phantasm is at its highest when assuming the identity of a king or an emperor.

This power comes with a time limit. Over the course of 8 days, the potency of his copied abilities gradually decreases, representing the 8 years of his rule before his true identity was revealed. After 8 days, the power of The False Crown of Peter III expires, and under normal circumstances, he cannot use it again.


Profile:

The true name of Caster is Šćepan Mali, a cunning herbalist who masterfully deceived an entire nation into believing he was a deceased emperor for 8 years. While not an exceptionally potent magus, his skills in herbalism can be quite useful. His true prowess lies in his ability to impersonate others, rallying support and gathering followers under false pretenses.

His legend has been crystallized into his Noble Phantasm, an extraordinary ability that grants him the power to assume an almost perfect false guise of fallen Servants, turning their strengths into his own and making him a formidable force in the Holy Grail War.



Comments:

His NP is rightfully a bit broken, but it is so situational that he likely wouldn't make too great of a Servant to summon. Before donning the guise of another Servant, he's functionally another Master - a magus with some skills in herbal stuff and infiltration/deception.

In case he does hit the jackpot, and a powerful servant dies, he would need to convert his advantage quickly. Even then.. if that Servant died, who's to say he'll fare any better, with all the rank-downs and constraints?

A quirky ability for sure.

I realized today that in F/GO there's a 'Pretender' class, but I don't really wanna unpack whether he'd fit that better or how it would work.

[jishara]

Source: Stablediffusion

Class: Caster
Other Classes: N/A
True Name: John Keats
Alignment: Neutral Good
Place of Origin: England (18th Century)
Stars: 3/5

Parameters:

STR: D
END: D
AGI: C
MGI: B
LCK: B
NP: C

Height: 169cm
Weight: 110lbs
Likes: Poetry, nature
Dislikes: Hatred
Talent: Writing poetry
Natural Enemy: Caroline Lamb
Attribute: Man
Traits: Humanoid, Male, Weak to Enuma Elish
Armament: A quill pen
Catalyst: Ode To A Nightingale

Class Skills:

Territory Creation C+: The capacity to create a writing workshop, that becomes more effective the more natural the surrounding area is.

Item Construction C: The capacity to write into existence items through his contract with the Leanan Sidhe.

Personal Skills:

On First Looking Into Homer B: The sublimation of one of Caster's more famous writings, his poem called On First Looking Into Chapman's Homer, where he described the feeling as being akin to a discovery of a glorious new world before his eyes. An ability akin to Pure Eyes of Inspiration, the capacity to draw on all that around him, from writings to physical things, and pull that idea into his quill pen, "inspiring" his next spell with the effects of that item added on, or simply using that without thinking a poem.

Ode To A Grecian Urn C: This ability is the manifestation of his poem, Ode To A Grecian Urn, wherein Caster discussed the nature of art and how it is built to be expressed by the observer. The most famous part about it is its final lines: Beauty is Truth, and Truth Beauty. This permits him to dispell "ugly" illusions, or make "beautiful" ones that he creates from his pen and that are viewed as the truth by other humans, though not by the world.

Affection of the Leanan Sidhe A: The sublimation of the affections of a Leanan Sidhe which blessed Caster's talent, which was a main reason of his writing of works such as La Belle Dame Sans Merci. This Leanan Sidhe enables him to cast magic through his poems, sending the magic through his quill pen based on the ideas of his writings. However, this requires him to recite his poems. In addition, as he does this, the Leanan Sidhe saps his mana and life force, so this cannot be consistantly used.


Noble Phantasm(s):

Ode To A Nightingale
On The Sublime Nature Of All

Type: Anti-Army
Rank: C
Range: 30 meters
Max Targets: 100 targets

The sublimation of his most famous poem, his Ode To A Nightingale. When the true name is called out, his quill pen begins glowing, manifesting numerous duplicates of itself which form into wings on Caster's back. Then, as he soars upwards, he begins reciting his poem of the same name. All those within earshot begin to sink into a trance, gradually losing themselves, their sight, and hearing, and senses, as they get sucked within the trancelike poem. This is absorbed by Caster as mana, but the senses are returned after the poem finishes unless they reach a certain high level of the trance, in which case they would fully sacrifice themselves to the poem.

Lore: John Keats (1795-1821) was a English Romantic poet, noted for his impressive poems and his very short life, with his death happening at the age of 25. His most famous works included the Ode To A Nightingale, his Ode to a Grecian Urn, and his sonnet written after first reading Chapman's Homer.

Personality: A gentle and kind person. He loves poetry and writing. He dislikes his illness, but feels that, even if he had knew about it, he would have still taken the fairy's deal, due to his deep love of the way it changed the way he viewed the world around him. His wish for the Grail is to take away the negative effects of his deal with the Fairy while keeping the positive effects.

Relationships:

Caroline Lamb: "Well, you're certainly an.... interesting... contemporary. You remind me a lot of the Leanan Sidhe."

Wallada Bint Al Mustakfi: "Your poetry is quite nice!"

Yeongsangsun: "...I'd say the Leanan would really dislike you."

[Shezum3]

Guys, I've had an idea about Putin Foreigner for a long time. However, due to recent events... well, I don't know if you would like to see this sheet. It's related to an old meme and not related to the fucking thing that's going on right now.

[NittyGritty]

do not do this cool thing

[Shezum3]

There is a term as a dangerous nonentity. That idea is based on this concept. But if you don't want to, then I'll keep the sheet for now

[Levin]

Guys, I've had an idea about Putin Foreigner for a long time. However, due to recent events... well, I don't know if you would like to see this sheet. It's related to an old meme and not related to the fucking thing that's going on right now.

Please don't make servants from recent history (first half of the 20th century not withstanding).

[Shezum3]

Even Bill Gates?

[Levin]

Even Bill Gates?

Especially Bill Gates. It opens a dangerous precedent. Sure, I too would like to write a sheet about rider Servantverse Donal Trump that flies using his own solid gold ship sculpted to resemble his face but I won't. I think spacebattles thread is more accepting to such ideas.

[Skull]

Please don't make servants from recent history (first half of the 20th century not withstanding).

Spoiler:

[Levin]

Spoiler:

Uhhh...2/3 of 20th century not withstanding*

[BnEl15]

You never know, it could always be some ancient moon-related figure who decided to modernize their appearance as a Servant. Wouldn't be the first bait-and-switch they pull.

[Comun]

It's Arcueid.

[DelRey]

armstrong is the dude that put his feet on the moon.
His historical and legendary feat is more significant than powerhungry dictator that wants to bring his country back to the glorydays #6546155
we already have enough slavic no name military dudes in the thread lately

[BnEl15]

It's always Semiramis Muramasa Arcueid Proto Merlin Rasputin Tiamat whichever NPC jail inhabitant is currently in-season until proven otherwise.

[Random]

And therein lies the aforementioned skill issue, right? A lot of the time, the level of thought one puts into writing influences why they pick the figures they do. Why would anyone pick Jesus in the first place? Figures that big and influential generally tend to have ulterior motives behind their depiction, or to put it another way, it reeks of someone who has either very little to say or far too much. That's generally why it's considered good form to leave people in the ground for about 200 years or so before trying your hand at making them a Servant.




*looks directly into the camera*

I think I'm just going to copypaste this from now on whenever the topic comes up.

[Anju Addams]

I think spacebattles thread is more accepting to such ideas.

It pretty much is anything goes on there as long as it fits the thread topic and isn't like super offensive. Especially considering the person whose considered the gold standard for sheet writing wrote a Hitler sheet. The standard is more skewed towards 'write narratively interesting sheets' than anything. Admittedly, this is the one of the reasons I am way more active on there than here.

Even then, I know I have some sheets around that I would NEVER post on there or here.

[NittyGritty]

yeah were way more problematic and therefore based here