Create-A-Servant 3

[comeaux]

LMFAO, this dude's lines are hilarious.



Damn, what a great way to sort of tie it all together... I really love this guy's personality, and basing his personality on Joseph was a pretty nice idea. This sheet was great.

Thank you so much. I definitely think using Joseph as an FC worked out well, as I think that there's a similar arc they go through of developing "maturity".

And, of course, Jacob unfortunately predicting his own wife's death at the hands of Benjamin was a drop of irony I couldn't resist.

[TrueMrMultiverse]

An amazingly well done Servant comeaux-a great take on Jacob

[Shezum3]

Witch's apprentice





Hello, Master. You see before you a witch's apprentice, a king and a god all rolled into one.

He was a carpenter, he remains a carpenter

Be quiet, bird. This time everything will be different


Class: Caster
True Name: Oorfene Deuce
Alignment: Neutral evil
Place of Origin: unknown
Armament: Carpentry tools, lighter, revitalizing powder

STRENGE — D
ENDURANCE — D
AGILITY — C
MANA — C
LUCK — B
NP — EX

Class skills:

Item Construction A

Being a carpenter, Caster is able to create wooden toys and life-size puppets. They do not have any special properties, but they are necessary for the work of his noble phantasm

Territory Creation C

Opportunity to create a carpentry workshop to produce wooden soldiers

Personal skills:

Divinity(False) A

In his attempts to seize power in one country, Caster was able to impersonate the god of fire for one wild tribe who called themselves the Marrans, also known as the Jumpers. The Marrans did not know fire and were afraid of it, playing on this fear Caster was able to gather an army for himself. This skill grants Caster divinity and allows him to use one of his noble phantasms. However, this skill is unreliable - if Caster’s opponents realize that he is not a god of fire, then his divinity will be sealed until the end of the Grail War

Yes, the rise was triumphant. I remember the show I put on then.

And the fall was very painful. Even that skin has left you

I won't make the same mistakes, owl. This time for sure

Unyielding Will B

This skill represents one's extremely firm will that never yields to any sort of agony, despair or circumstances. No one was ever able to impose their will on Custer. He did all the important events in his life himself. Even his enemies noted his incredible willpower

I was Gingema's apprentice, not a slave. So, for your information, Master

Familiar(Eagle owl) B

Caster’s familiar is a large eagle owl named Guamocolatocinth. It can be shortened to Guamoco, but the bird only allows Caster to do this. Guamoco can speak, he knows a lot about magic, but he has an extremely proud and quarrelsome disposition, which causes difficulties. Nevertheless, a better scout cannot be
found

A quarrelsome bird. Sometimes I think about letting him in for soup

Well, well, Oorfene, I have claws. And the beak too

I'm not going to do anything with you

Noble Phantasm:

Зажигалка Чарли Блэка
Gift of a giant from beyond the mountains
C

A simple lighter that Caster stole from the Giant from beyond the mountains. This thing allowed Caster to pass himself off as a fire god. This NP is dependent on Caster's Divinity, and will be sealed if Caster loses Divinity. This item allows Caster to control fire

Оживляющий порошок
Inanimate Army
B

A special powder obtained from a sun-dried plant that multiplies so quickly that it can germinate from one drop of its juice. Plus they are prickly. However, the powder made from them has special properties - it can revive any dead organic object. Animal skin, nailed deer antlers, wooden soldiers - all this can be brought to life. Caster's first body will probably revive the skin of a bear, which she will call Stomper, and a doll of an evil biting clown named Eoth Ling. And then he will start creating wooden soldiers, which he calls blockheads. These are not particularly smart, but infinitely resilient and strong warriors. It is possible to train them, but it is difficult and somewhat tedious, since blockheads are similar in behavior to children. There are three types of blockheads - stupid soldiers made of oak and pine, differing from each other in uniform color and numbers - this can be done using paint. The mahogany corporals, there are 19 of them in total, are much smarter and have names. And General Lan Pirot of rosewood, much smarter than all the other soldiers. Blockheads have a flaw - they are terribly afraid of fire

Волшебная страна Гуррикапа
The paradox of a non-existent country
EX

The paradox of Coster’s existence, a country that did not exist and did not exist. Caster knows that she is near Kansas, surrounded by desert and mountain plateau.

This fantasy solves this paradox. Without realizing it, Caster is slowly assimilating the country in which he is located, turning it into his homeland. A desert and mountains will appear, and black stones of Gingema will appear in the desert, acting as magnets for everyone who is not born in this country, condemning the unfortunate to death from heat, hunger and thirst. In the country itself, animals will begin to speak, humanoid objects may come to life. The population itself will become one of the seven nations - Munchkins, Wingers, Chatterers, Jumpers or Marrans, Underground Miners, residents of the Yellow Country and residents of the Emerald Isle, a city surrounded by a moat of water. Saber-toothed tigers will live in the country, dragons and six-legged animals will live underground, flying monkeys and other creatures will live. The country itself will not disappear with Caster’s death, it will become a new state on the world map

Description:

Likes: Be the center of attention
Dislikes: Loneliness, fools, when they try to manipulate him,
Natural enemy: Dorothy Gale, Ellie and Annie Smith, Alexander Volkov, Frank Baum

Caster’s True name is Oorfene Deuce, character from Volkov's series The Wizard of the Emerald City. He was a student of the sorceress Gingema until she was crushed by Ellie's house; later he created an army of wooden soldiers and with her help was able to seize power in the Emerald City. He was overthrown, but he tried again, this time declaring himself a fire god for the Marrans tribe. He was overthrown again, but he, having reconsidered his views, abandoned fruitless attempts, realizing that for love and attention it is not worth becoming a dictator surrounded by a bunch of sycophants. He spent the rest of his life as a respected farmer.

Oorfene is a man of great will and great intelligence, ready to go towards his goal. Deuce will never grovel before the Master, he has self-esteem and some standards. He is gloomy and unsociable, but he wants to receive everyone’s adoration, although he doesn’t understand that you won’t be nice by force. He will grumble at the Master or at his eagle owl Guamoco, but will not leave them in trouble, hiding the fact that deep down he is attached to them. He can ask the Master to teach him magic.


Relations:

Dorothy Gale — Oz? What? I don't know this one. You say your name is Dorothy and you're from Kansas? Do you know the killing house fairy named Ellie?

[Skull]

^ Shouldn't this go in the Modern Fiction thread?

[Shezum3]

Don't think. Volkov wrote his books in the 20th century, retelling Baum; for post-Soviet readers, the book Oorfene Deuce and His Wooden Soldiers is recognized as a classic

[pinetree]

Letter to his father 19 August 1497 I undertook to do a figure for Piero de' Medici and bought marble, and then never began it, because he hasn't done as he promised me. So I'm working on my own and doing a figure for my own pleasure. I bought a piece of marble for five ducats, but it wasn't a good piece and the money was thrown away; then I bought another piece for another five ducats, and this I'm working for my own pleasure. So you must realize that I, too, have expenses and troubles...

Letter to his father, never sent 23 August 1497 It happens that the first piece of marble I bought is even stranger than I thought. Just the previous night, I woke up to a strange sound, only to find the piece, which I hadn’t thrown away yet, was expelling a cascade of oily, rainbow-colored, phosphorent liquid. It must have began a long time before I awoke, because the study was drenched in the substance, and I was sure many of my tools and materials were ruined by that point. In my stupor I rushed to move the rock, forgetting how heavy a piece it was. To my surprise, the thing slid through the floor with little effort, leaving behind a trail of the same substance, now colored black. The piece has been discarded now. A strong sense of paranoia took over me, and I hurriedly took the piece out of the city and buried it in a hole deeper than I thought it was possible to dig. I did the same with most of the items in my study. I only returned home by lunch, which I’m sure will only further fuel the rumors about my person. So I ask you once again to acknowledge my own expenses, which have now tripled due to this strange incident.

Letter to no one, burned afterwards 28 August 1497 I have not known peace and rest over the last days, as my nights are now tormented by nightmares. Strange dreams in which I walk through the ocean floor, surrounded by drowned dolphin corpses swimming upside down. Wherever they swim, they leave slug like trails that distort the sea around me, making colors brighter and raising bizarre pink structures from the ocean floor. For many nights, I seemed to walk a single road while listening to the sound of revelry and song, all twisted beyond recognition. Advancing further each night, approaching the doors of a roman temple. When I finally reached it, I found my own Bachus sculpture walking out of it, as if alive. It sported all the beauty I had bequeathed it and more; and beckoned me to join its underwater bacchanal. To my surprise, despite being my greatest work yet, I found his visage most repulsive and promptly refused, begging to be returned to the waking world so that I might continue to pursue my art.

Letter to no one, never written 28 August 1497 All around me, the scenery was positively overwhelming, but it was all thrown together without any care for an artist’s touch. I have no doubt the aesthetics present there could have meaning and life if created by anyone other than █████. He and his accompanying satyr seemed very upset by my choice to refuse their invitation, and just as I moved to apologize, I noticed the two living statues were in fact the eye stalks of a massive slug! It seemed to crawl on all walls of the temple at once — up and back and down and forward — and I realized in horror that the deep ocean I was submerged in was in fact the disgusting secretions left behind by the creature as it crawled endlessly through this cacophony of aesthetics of its own making. Its servant dolphins surrounded me in a frenzy and as the sludge invaded my lungs, their song invaded my ears: Hv’mgha, ‘sh Ghluun hv’mgha. L’ghow ght’ye vhk’r! Hv’mgha, ‘sh Ghluun hv’mgha. L’ghow ght’ye vhk’r! Y’ai, l’ghow ght’ye! Y’ai, l’ghow ght’ye! The perfection to which I am able to reproduce their horrible language is terrifying, but since I awoke amid their prayers, no other dreams have tormented me. I can only hope that stays true for ever more.

All he ever cared about was his art, yet continuous misfortune and the recognition of his talents forced him to sustain his family in place of his parents. Working without passion, he still managed to create impressive sculptures and — once his name became more well known — to dedicate more time and effort to these works of art so that they might reach the idea he set for himself.

That’s all he wanted, to dedicate himself fully to his art.

Of course, even a talented artist like him had his equals and his superiors. Others shared his passion for human anatomy and the male beauty, one of them even embodied the very beauty he admired to such an extent that it could only be called…
Even then, love was a triviality. He didn’t need or desire to experience it. Even when he was with his beloved, he was more interested in talking about their works and ideas than to pursue the feelings that welled up inside both of them. In truth, one might say he was already pursuing it, the pure glee in their artwork was their expression of love.

That’s all he wanted, to dedicate himself fully to his art.

But time is cruel, and the human heart was not built to endure the weight talent. It is particularly ill-suited to endure the realization that only one person in the world in your equal in the fields you so adore… and that they’re now gone.
He had dedicated himself fully to his art, but with his fellow uomo universale gone, was there any meaning in continuing? None could appreciate his works on the same level, none could produce works on the same level, none could capture his passion and love in the same way. It is painful having to continue to work even after being left all alone.

What a nuisance his genius turned out to be. What a nuisance his love turned out to be. What a nuisance his fame turned out to be. He never even had the chance of exploring whether or not his talents would survive this loss, forced into works he felt no passion towards for most of his remaining time.

Time is cruel and one cannot do what he loves forever. Stuck to a bed in his elderly years, he can do nothing but stew in his regrets, his desires, his memories. No peace would be afforded to him, worse than the nightmares he once had, these feelings would surely follow him to his death. No peace to the talented.
And so they did, and he was not afforded the reward of a seat among the greatest of humanity, too busy wallowing in his own feelings to ascend beyond them, wandering without thought or purpose.
Perhaps in a different world, miraculous circumstances would allow him to meet his beloved once again, to be released from this eternal haunting by them and finally be in peace.
But such a world is surely a rare miracle.

No, he just wandered.

There was no passion left for his own art. No passion left for art itself.

What use was it? Please his costumers he cared nothing for? Impress future generations he knew nothing about? The one they were made for had left this world long ago.
What a nuisance his love turned out to be. Twisting the pure pursuit of art into a practice meant for his one and only. Leonardo would surely laugh at what he had become.

There was no passion left for his own art. No passion left for art itself.

No, he just wandered.

Randomly.
Over an empty plain.
Over a certain rock, buried deep beneath.
Over the monolith of Gloon, who awaited to pose his question again.
To join his Bacchanal of aesthetics. It doesn’t matter what is in, as long as it comes from him.
For that is what the Dark Youth Image is, a sludge that drenches everything. A being that manifests from aesthetic.

Nostalgia. Strangeness. Beauty. Rebellion.

One may think those are being depicted, but to him those are like bodyparts. Biological processes. Uncounscious reflexes. A creature that sequesters other’s art to live, to corrupt. And yet…

Nostalgia. Strangeness. Beauty. Rebellion.

That he could bring it all into the world once again, is that not what he so wanted? There was no meaning — no passion — in it, but would there ever be, with Leonardo gone?

“I see I’m your chisel, with which to shape the world.”

The creature doesn’t understand. It doesn’t know — cannot know — of anything material or purposeful in art.
It only hears the answer he so awaited. He asked if Michelangelo would bring about his bacchanal.
And the artist said yes.

Aliases: Michelangelo di Lodovico Buonarroti Simoni. Class: Foreigner. Height: 170cm Likes: —— Dislikes: —— Attribute: Earth. Alignment: Chaotic Evil. Origin: Italy. Natural Enemy: Leonardo da Vinci, Camille Monet. Sources: Mineo, NIRA.

	Aesthetic Appreciation (Lost) A An infatuation with works of art that allows one to recognize the Noble Phantasms related to artistic anecdotes. Michelangelo lost this skill twice, in life and in death, and now only appreciates the superficial aesthetic brought about by the Slug of the Ivory Image. It has purpose: the existence of a being, the doorway between the temple of his master and the world of the living, the birth of a creature that cannot be called living. It manifests as the ivory head of false Bacchus, encasing his head so that he might experience everything through the filter of the dark youth even before he brings it about in reality.
	Obsolete Star-Seeker EX A unique skill granted to heroes that failed to become turning points in human history. All simple voyages and challenges which are considered “likely to be overcome” turn into “events that are nearly impossible”. Having abandoned the values and passion that he had in life and having failed to be recorded as a Heroic Spirit, he was awarded this skill at an exceptional rank. He didn’t fail, he became a turning point, and yet it was all for naught. Drowning in his own grief and lack of purpose, he now works for an evil god that should be an enemy to all artists.

Uomo Annegato: The Drowned Man. The leftover feelings of Michelangelo given shape, unable to reach the surface, drowned in meaningless sludge mistaken as purpose. It instantly analyzes any three-dimensional structure and reproduces it at will. No longer willing to create his own art, Michelangelo has inadvertently returned to his young apprentice days when he was forced to recreate other’s work. The only difference is that now, he has no desire to change them. Under another name, it’d be the ultimate projection ability, capable of reproducing even Divine Constructs and conceptual weapons as long as Michelangelo considered them beautiful, and receiving any changes that would bring them closer to his ideal aesthetics. As it is, the objects are superficial copies that don’t carry any conceptual weight, and simply replicate function before being thrown into the junk pit of imagery that is the body of the Slug of the Ivory Image. The true danger of this Noble Phantasm comes from another unique feature: as a rule, this lesser copy always lasts longer than the superior original. Be it by being broken, dematerialized, or else; the original will be gone long before the copy disappears. How regretful.

[comeaux]

Michelangelo

Un-fucking-hinged, but in an incredibly good way. I applaud the effort it must've taken to construct the .gif based stuff and all the image based aspects of the Sheet. Without it, I think I'd probably not like it nearly as much - granted, it does seem to be a critical element to explaining and really selling the concept.

As a Servant, it's an interesting way to get around Nasu hard deconfirming Michelangelo as a Heroic Spirit, and I think you've done well in also using that fact to your advantage in constructing the concept for the sheet.

My only complaint is that the Noble Phantasm, while very appropriate to the concept, feels ... slightly underwhelming. If such a copy were to denigrate or reduce the value of the original, I think it'd be a little stronger - but maybe I'm turning a blind eye to some of the finer implications of making a functional but conceptually void recreation of things like Divine Constructs that lasts longer than the original.

Overall rating: 9/10, the sheer effort sells this incredibly well for me.

[pinetree]

My only complaint is that the Noble Phantasm, while very appropriate to the concept, feels ... slightly underwhelming. If such a copy were to denigrate or reduce the value of the original, I think it'd be a little stronger - but maybe I'm turning a blind eye to some of the finer implications of making a functional but conceptually void recreation of things like Divine Constructs that lasts longer than the original.

Overall rating: 9/10, the sheer effort sells this incredibly well for me.

Thanks for the praise!
I agree that the NP isn't crazy strong, but in regards to how useful it is... just think of how quickly Shirou's projections of stronger weapons last before crumbling apart. Having a guaranteed way to take away what might be the trump card of an oponent relatively quickly feels pretty strong. The fact that this fairly weak Servant get's a better weapon in the meantime is just a bonus. I didn't make it so that the NP corrupts the original because that's already what Idea Imposition does, and since he's just an artist, I like the massive hurdle of having to physically interact with the object to affect it.

[comeaux]

Thanks for the praise!
I agree that the NP isn't crazy strong, but in regards to how useful it is... just think of how quickly Shirou's projections of stronger weapons last before crumbling apart. Having a guaranteed way to take away what might be the trump card of an oponent relatively quickly feels pretty strong. The fact that this fairly weak Servant get's a better weapon in the meantime is just a bonus. I didn't make it so that the NP corrupts the original because that's already what Idea Imposition does, and since he's just an artist, I like the massive hurdle of having to physically interact with the object to affect it.

Ahhh, yeah, putting it that way, it makes a lot more sense to me. Still, incredible sheet, well done!

[Shezum3]

Sheriff of Socorro




Servant of the Law Archer has arrived. It's time to put things in order

Class: Archer
True Name: Elfego Baca
Alignment: Lawful Good
Place of Origin: Socorro, USA
Armament: gun

STRENGE — C
ENDURANCE — C
AGILITY — B
MANA — C
LUCK — A
NP — B

Class skills:

Independent Action B(A)

The ability to survive independent of a Master's mana supply. As a sheriff, Archer still rarely had to catch criminals, since in most cases they preferred to surrender to him themselves. However, due to one event, he has a good rank of this skill, he can stay in the world for a long time. When activating NP, the skill rank increases to A

Magic Resistance D

Provides protection from magical effects. Unlike the resistance effect, which simply rejects magical energy, this ability completely cancels spells. Archer lived in a time when magic was already leaving this world

Personal skills:

Dispensing Justice (A)

This skill acts as a representation of his feared prowess as a Lawman, as many criminals surrendered out of fear alone. Enemies will be afflicted with a compulsion to law down their arms if they have committed evil acts, requiring mental resistance to overcome. Archer, as a sheriff, terrified criminals so much that he often sent them a message telling them to surrender or he would shoot them. Worked in most cases. Any letter written by Archer has the effect of this skill

If they don’t understand who is going over their heads, it means they are either too confident in their abilities or simply don’t know how to read

Bravery A

This is the ability to negate mental interference such as pressure, confusion and fascination. It also has the bonus effect of increasing melee damage. Not usable under the effects of Mad Enhancement. Archer has always been ready to defend the law; he is not afraid of any difficulties. Even the angry crowd could not cool his ardor

I made a promise to myself and I can’t break it. Especially cowardice

Lawman’s Eye A

This skill allows for quickly discerning the past actions of a target, instantly knowing what crimes they have committed. At this Rank, it reaches the point of nigh-supernatural detection, instantly registering any crimes or injustices that occur within a radius around him. Furthermore, within his sight, intent to perform injustice can also be detected, and his sight range to do so is greatly enhanced. Aside from allowing detection of injustice, it acts as Eye of the Mind[True] at B-Rank, owing to his extensive experience in apprehending criminals. This skill also acts as if it is Mental Pollution at D-rank, due to the extreme rank held.

Be law abiding or I'll come for you

Noble Phantasm:

Frisco massacre
My home is my castle
B


A reenactment of the event that made Archer famous and gave him a formidable reputation as a lawman.

This NP represents an Archer house, of which there were many in New Mexico. It's not particularly durable, but it has two concepts that can make life miserable for Archer's enemies:

1) When Archer is inside the house, he can neither be killed nor injured. Even if the house is destroyed by a powerful attack, Archer will not have a scratch
2) Archer inflicts enormous damage on anyone who tries to enter his home. His bullets will always overtake a target who has penetrated this fortress, to the point that they will change their flight path in order to overtake enemies

Description:

Likes: Law and order, cold beer
Dislikes: Fucking cowboys

Archer’s true name is Elfego Baca, American lawyer and gunfighter who became famous after the Frisco massacre. In October 1884, in the town of Lower San Francisco Plaza (now Risev, New Mexico), Elfego Baca arrested a drunken cowboy named Charlie McCarthy. He showed McCarthy his badge, identifying himself as a deputy sheriff, and took the gun from Charlie. After Bill Milligan, the bar's owner, refused to intervene, Baca took Charlie hostage.

McCarthy's cowboy friends attempted to begin peace negotiations for his release, but Baca refused and opened fire on the negotiator, a carpenter from John Slater's ranch, and killed him. Baca then took refuge with McCarthy in the house of Geronimo Armijo. After bringing in deputies and judges from neighboring towns, Baca was forced to hand Charlie back over to justice for trial, in exchange for Baca's own safety.

Magistrate Ted White granted Charlie his freedom. After the verdict was announced, Baca ran out of the courtroom, still holding McCarthy's gun.

Bert Hearn, a farmer from the Spur Lake ranch, was sent to Baca to bring him back to court for questioning in the murder of ranch carpenter John Slater. After Baca refused to leave the house, Hearn broke down the door and ordered Baca to come out with his hands up. But soon after, shots rang out: a bullet hit Hearn in the stomach, killing him.

Baca's confrontation with the cowboys continued. The number of cowboys who gathered with him for battle is still a matter of debate: together with the villagers who joined them, it is believed that there were about forty in total, while Baca himself later claimed that there were at least eighty. It is alleged that the cowboys fired more than 4,000 shots at the house where Baca was holed up, literally riddling its adobe walls with holes. By an incredible coincidence, none of the bullets wounded Baca (it is alleged that the room in which he was hiding was below floor level, which allowed him to avoid wounds).

During the siege of the house, Baca shot and killed four and wounded eight of his attackers. After approximately 33 hours and 1,000 rounds of open fire, the battle ended as Francisquito Naranjo convinced Baca to surrender. As they were leaving, Baca emerged from the house unharmed.

In May 1885, Baca was accused of murdering ranch carpenter John Slater and Ben Hearn. He was jailed awaiting trial. In August 1885, Baca was acquitted after a broken door in Armijo's house was introduced as evidence. It had more than 400 bullet holes. The incident was called the Frisco Massacre. It is rumored that Elfego Baca's lawyer had forged documents confirming Baca's legal status as a deputy sheriff, because Baca's biographers suggest that he actually served as a deputy sheriff for a short time before the arrest of Charlie McCarthy

Elfego is a straightforward and stubborn person who honors the law above all else. He is stern, never accepts compromise and knows how to use his formidable reputation. Baca is not a coward and is generally calm in any situation. He will follow any criminal, relentlessly pursuing him until he arrests or shoots him.

Notes: I'll upload the art later

[DelRey]

pinetree: stepping into my realm huh? Maniac, truly unhinged. How high were you thinking, "i make michelangelo in a synth wave style"?
You are aware that future generations might think you are one of the steps that transcend the BBCode meta and enter the photoshop meta? (First notable entry was Leftover btw his distorted sheet)
I recently talked to Morg how I have ideas how to break down the idea of what a book physically is with formatting on here. You had to visually one up me before I even got the chance.
Anyway, the road to discovering the two was interesting to me. I went from another Color, to Dagon, to Gloon and quickly to Michelangelo before the reveal. Your skill in setting the uncanny mood is great. I also like it that you take Outer Gods I would never consider. What I also noticed is that I believe I create certain aesthetics not directly related to the source material to get my imagery across, while you take the one given and run with it per excellence. You also added a nice twist on what the slug represents. I thought it will be just some crazy orgy related stuff with bacchus and whatnot, but you made it a degradation of art itself, which is an inspired take for a statue in the sea.

[pinetree]

Thank you, thank you.

I also like it that you take Outer Gods I would never consider. What I also noticed is that I believe I create certain aesthetics not directly related to the source material to get my imagery across, while you take the one given and run with it per excellence.

That's a funny comment to make on vaperwave Gloon but I get what you mean lol
I think my favorite part of writing Foreginers is trying to match what's established about them with the Heroic Spirit, and aesthetics is a big part of it.

You also added a nice twist on what the slug represents. I thought it will be just some crazy orgy related stuff with bacchus and whatnot, but you made it a degradation of art itself, which is an inspired take for a statue in the sea.

I ended up with the degradation angle after quite a bit of back and forth on what kind of conflict he could bring to Michelangelo. I had already decided on the encroaching living aesthetic angle but it was hard differentiating him from Monet. I'm glad it made a good impression.

[WhiteFrenzy]

I'm sorry I'm kinda struggling here forgive my brevity.


Jacob: There’s so much to like here: a strong character, a great kit, a gut wrenching story about a man that hardly has a saying in his own destiny but still struggles nevertheless, and all the pathos in between. Building Jacob as a version of him before wrestling God and giving birth to Israel was a great move since it made him such a failwife (or husband in this case) and the personality is so… So Joseph. That was another strength of the sheet – tying Joseph to Jacob in a way that capitalized their journeys. I don’t know, I just found a lot I liked in this sheet the more I read it. I don’t know, I even felt sad when I was done because I just wanted to read more about him, his charisma is off the charts.
What an honor it was to be able to help, as small as it was that spark.

Michelangelo: Pine WHAT THE FUCK.
And I say that with the utmost admiration for this work.
I want to be like you one day, and tell a complete story with so few words – and what a story it was. A complete character without a single quote, his personality and his anguish unveiled at only his letters, the story you weaved. Simply unhinged. This is definitely one of my favorite Foreigners.
P.S.: I LOVE YOUR FORMATTING I REALLY DO.

[comeaux]

I'm sorry I'm kinda struggling here forgive my brevity.


Jacob: There’s so much to like here: a strong character, a great kit, a gut wrenching story about a man that hardly has a saying in his own destiny but still struggles nevertheless, and all the pathos in between. Building Jacob as a version of him before wrestling God and giving birth to Israel was a great move since it made him such a failwife (or husband in this case) and the personality is so… So Joseph. That was another strength of the sheet – tying Joseph to Jacob in a way that capitalized their journeys. I don’t know, I just found a lot I liked in this sheet the more I read it. I don’t know, I even felt sad when I was done because I just wanted to read more about him, his charisma is off the charts.
What an honor it was to be able to help, as small as it was that spark.

Reading this made me tear up a lil, not gonna lie.

Thank you so much for everything, from letting me use your formatting to inspiring me and giving me the confidence to do this sheet with your take on Leah and Zilpah. Genuinely, from working with everyone on the Discord to check my thinking, and to get second opinions on things - making Jacob as good as it is was undoubtedly a community effort. To mince a quote from the late Terry Funk:
"I appreciate everything you've done for me out there in the ring. Thank you."

[Shezum3]

Unfortunate beauty




Hello Master. I am Servant Berserker. Do you think a fragile young lady like me can qualify for this class? But don't care. I won't be taken seriously...

Class: Berserker
True Name: Norma Jean Mortenson
Alignment: Lawful Good
Place of Origin: USA
Armament: none

STRENGE — C
ENDURANCE — B
AGILITY — B
MANA — C
LUCK — C
NP — B

Class skills:

Mad Enhancement (C)

The Class Skill that characterizes a Berserker, raising basic parameters and strengthens one's physical abilities in exchange of hindering mental capacities and/or in exchange for their sense of reason. Rank up for all parameters, but most of one's reason is robbed. Berserker is a hostage to her roles, she fell into despondency, believing that they see her not as a person, but as a pretty face. She has low self-esteem, which is why the Master will have to reassure her repeatedly

Personal skills:

Blonde fool A

of the Berserker, the role of narrow-minded but cute blonde fools. Berserker became a hostage to this image, and all her life she wanted to play more serious roles.
This skill is akin to an innocent monster, the curse of her role. No one except the Master can take Berserker seriously. Even if she warns people about the danger, her words will not be perceived, unless she hears a tone as if they see her as an unintelligent child

I can't... I'm afraid to leave the house. I know what awaits me there...

Sex Symbol EX

Berserker's status as a sex symbol of America. All men will feel sympathy for her, they may well help her, but all their desires will be aimed at only one thing - they want to spend the night with her. For women, this skill works exactly the opposite - they want to destroy Berserker, realizing that they will never become as beautiful as her. Berserker can easily cause chaos

Do you only want the same from me? Why? Why?!

Tears of compassion C

Although Berserker was never taken seriously, she understood the suffering of people. She fought for equality and peace. She even unsuccessfully asked the reporter who interviewed her last time to end an article about her with her saying: “What the world really needs is a real sense of kinship. Everyone: stars, workers, blacks, Jews, Arabs - we are all brothers. Please don't make me look unserious. End the interview with what I believe.” The Berserker is always in tears and these tears have a calming effect. He who sees these tears will want to fight

Do you think this is funny? Maybe yes... it's such a funny desire. Just peace... and happiness...

Noble Phantasm:

The Seven Year Itch
Fluttering Sorrow
B

A legendary scene from the film where Berserker was filmed, or rather her famous dress. According to the plot of the film, the heroine Berserker leaves the cinema and goes for a walk around the evening city. Walking down the street, she stops on a sidewalk grate and when a stream of air bursts through the grate from the movement of a subway train, her dress flies up.

When NP is activated, this scene will repeat. This dress will appear on Berserker again, and gusts of wind will blow, the dress will fly away. But she won't have that usual smile. The look will become empty and detached. All the people around her will experience a strong feeling of sadness, turning into a severe form of depression, reaching the point of existential horror, when existence seems meaningless. You realize that you are a puppet, over which there are higher powers that decide whether you will live... or not. This NP is a sign of humility with your role, a sign that you will not change anything in your life

Description:

Likes: When she is listened to, there is peace in the world
Dislikes: When they see her as frivolous

Berserker’s True name is Norma Jean Mortenson, aka know as Marylyn Monroe. Результаты перевода
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American film actress, sex symbol of the 1950s, singer and model. She has become one of the most iconic images of American cinema and the entire world culture. For many years, Monroe tried to get rid of the image of a stupid blonde, the oppression of the Fox film studio and become a dramatic actress, but she failed to fully achieve this. She had three failed marriages and three unsuccessful pregnancies. She suffered from addiction to narcotic drugs - barbiturates and sleeping pills. Monroe, being a Berserker class servant, never smiles. She is immersed in her sorrows, her past glory is unbearable for her. She regrets that she could not break out of the shackles of the image of a dim-witted blonde. Her Grail wish is to finally play a real dramatic role.

Notes: I will upload art later

[TrueMrMultiverse]

Michelangelo: A very well done Foreigner! Like the gif’s that show up across his sheet and the degrading of the original before the copy as his NP is thematically great.

[jishara]

"Ah. How wonderful, this world. Now, where is my wine?"

Class: Saber
Other Classes: N/A
True Name: Zhang Xu
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Place of Origin: China (8th Century)
Stars: 3/5

Parameters:

STR: B
END: D
AGI: C
MGI: C
LCK: D
NP: B

Height: 173cm
Weight: 140lbs
Likes: Calligraphy, wine, watching fights
Dislikes: Social expectations
Talent: Calligraphy
Natural Enemy: Yang Guifei
Attribute: Man
Traits: Humanoid, Male, Artist, Weak to Enuma Elish
Armament: Sharp hair-ink tendrils
Catalyst: Zhang Xu's calligraphy

Class Skills:

Magic Resistance C: One who rarely saw magic, still Saber gains an average rank due to the era in which he lived, one where immortals were constantly born.

"Raise a glass, relax. Oh come now, why are you so shocked I survived?"

Riding E: A consolation rank, Saber was never known to ride any mounts in life. The capacity to ride ordinary mounts with poor proficiency.

"Why would I ride? Much better to sit."


Personal Skills:

Lady Gongsun's Sword Dance B: Saber was notably a lover of watching fights, drinking freely as he watched dramatic duels. It was said his technique was developed by watching fights and sword dances. And as such, as a skill it continues to grow as he watches fights from a distance, or from up close. A dance of blades which Saber channels into his hair.

"Ah, fights. How lovely! Come, sit. Tell me all about it."

Eight Immortals of the Wine Cup C: Saber's status as one of the Eight Immortals of the Wine Cup, famous artists and poets who adored wine. In the form of a skill, any physical contact with any substance containing Alcohol places Saber into an enhanced state which improves his dexterity and elegance, capable of effortlessly balancing on one toe on top of a wobbly platform or smoothly creating uncopiable calligraphy.

"It brings me to serenity, you know."

The Divine Cursivewriter B: Saber was known as the divine cursivewriter, his writing so impressive he was worshipped for a brief period as a deity. His calligraphy becomes a powerful tool for him, the elegance of his writing transforming into a technique that becomes far harder to counter. Also incorporates Divinity of rank E-.

"Divine? No. Just drunk."

Noble Phantasm(s):

Mo Maobi
Hair Is The Best Brush

Type: Anti-Army
Rank: B
Range: 15 meters
Max Targets: 100 targets

Saber was said to use his hair as a brush and a tool to create his most elegant writings. In the form of a Noble Phantasm, his hair can be controlled akin to limbs, and grows endlessly. He can usually be found reclining on his hair while drinking. But offensively this is also useful, the hair proving to be startlingly sharp to enemies akin to a whip sword. When the true name is called, he floats off of the ground before the hair surrounding him lashes out, slashing a string of quick, elegant slashes into all surrounding enemies.

Lore: Zhang Xu, Zhang the Madman, was a famous calligrapher in 8th century china noted for his incredibly good calligraphy. His signature style was getting drunk on wine, and then creating absolutely incredible and precise calligraphy that no one could copy no matter how hard they tried to.

Personality: A calm and serene person. He can constantly be found sipping wine while watching the battles that happen, even sometimes doing that while battling. But if he decides to take the battle seriously, he has a tendency of using his hair as a whirlwind of blades to attack enemies. His wish for the grail is to watch the ultimate fight, and thus perfect his calligraphy.

Relationships:

Nero: "Bread and gladiators? I'm interested."

Yosano Akiko: "Your hair is beautiful. Perhaps another brush."

Pei Min: "Oh. You. Hey. Come, sit with me."

Dongfang Shuo: "Indeed, the root to all happiness."

[Morg van Destro]

Updated CaS alignment chart

Lawful Good	Neutral Good	Chaotic Good
BnEl15 RoydGolden realcasual	WhiteFrenzy SimpleScribe Vance	DelRey NittyGritty DracoScribe Serra Random
Lawful Neutral	True Neutral	Chaotic Neutral
Morg van Destro Skull Nuclear Ismail2002	Justiciar Hux asterism42 Comun pinetree jishara TQG Imaginatorious Frigix sutaa	Lambda-Nu Baron Magnus Vididii Salt Pillar
Lawful Evil	Neutral Evil	Chaotic Evil
Cursed by Fortuna Kamera Anju Addams	Lady Vanatos BoktaiMoon	NINE-Lives Kabalisto Koga Dreamerless

[DelRey]

you unearthed the cursed scripture

[Anju Addams]

Put me in Lawful Evil.