Guys, what can the Blessing of Fairies skill give? Now I’m working with a descendant of Thomas the Rhymer, who, according to legend, received this kind of blessing
Guys, what can the Blessing of Fairies skill give? Now I’m working with a descendant of Thomas the Rhymer, who, according to legend, received this kind of blessing
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Bellerophon
Class: Rider
True Name: Bellerophon
Gender: Male
Source: Greek Mythology
Region: Corinth
Alignment: Neutral Good
Height: 6’1
Weight: 177lbs
Voice Claim: Masakazu Morita
Parameters
Strength: C
Endurance: C
Agility: B
Mana: C
Noble Phantasm: A++
Luck: E
Class Skills
Riding EX
An interesting version of the Riding Skill. Whereas typically when Riding Skill rises in rank, it translates into the ability to ride more things, Bellerophon’s Riding skill represents the ability to ride a singular creature to absolute perfection.Pegasus is typically a kind creature, who typically needs to Noble Phantasm [Bellerophon: Brindle of Chivalry] to rouse its fighting spirit. The man who bears the Noble Phantasm’s name can rouse Pegasus’ fighting spirit entirely on his own, and instead uses the brindle to increase the sync between rider and mount from 95% to 100%.
Magic Resistance C
Bellerophon’s magic resistance makes him immune to magecraft with a chant of less than two verses. Any magecraft that is weaker than Greater Magecraft or Greater Rituals will not work on him.
Personal Skills
Divinity D
Bellerophon is the son of Poseidon, but the arrogance he shows in regards to the Gods forced the rank of Bellerophon’s Divinity into a paltry D Rank. If brought up to Bellerophon, he’ll laugh it off and make a wisecrack about if this is supposed to be punishment for his arrogance, “It’s a damn shitty one.”
Tactics B+ (Anti-Monster)
There were two critical factors in the defeat of the Greater Chimera; Pegasus and Bellerophon’s clever strategy to turn the beast's own fire breath against it. Bellerophon’s ability to create strategies suited to beat his opponents handily increases against beast-like or monstrous opponents.
Bravery B+
A skill representing Bellerophon’s unshakeable faith in he and Pegasus’ ability. They faced down multiple challenges without hesitating, and only failed once. It makes Bellerophon immune to mental interference, and increases his melee damage.
Charisma D-
Bellerophon was never a leader of people, fighting solely alongside Pegasus in most instances. However, Bellerophon always had an undeniable charm to him, his self-confidence and charming nature convincing people to admire him, to give him second chances, to place their faith in him. So while its rank may be low, it is nonetheless effective in its own way.
Noble Phantasms
[Bellerophon Kometes: May We Fly Ever Higher]
Rank: A+ -> A++
Classification: Anti-Self - Anti-Army
A Noble Phantasm that can be used in two ways. The basic use of Bellerophon Kometes is the “basic” use of the Noble Phantasm, mimicking the effects of [Bellerophon: Brindle of Chivalry] - a powerful attack wherein the user and Pegasus dives towards the opponent and deals massive damage.
The true form of Bellerophon Kometes, however, is an enhanced version of that dive. It transforms the concept of “Bellerophon’s Hubris” into an attack, weaponizing the very thing that ended the hero’s life. Rider and Mount turn into a shooting star of pure fire, crashing into the opponent with force far surpassing the original form of the dive, as it becomes an attack that damages not only the “form” of the target, but the “spirit” as well. However, this enhanced power comes at a cost, as Bellerophon will die once the Noble Phantasm is used, leaving behind only Pegasus, who is likely to choose to fade away with his master.
Personality
An arrogant hotshot who thinks he can handle any problem thrown his way and that he’ll always win. Bellerophon believes that the best solution to every problem is to face it head on and with gusto. Strategy is fine, but one should never allow themselves to be constrained by that.
Rather than being a “reliable” big brother type, Bellerophon could be described as an “admirable” big brother type, whose extreme confidence and daring causes those he takes under his wing to believe in him as strongly as he believes in himself, and to believe in themselves just as much.
Bellerophon has something of a dislike for the Gods, citing their distance in regards to the mortals they rule over.
Motive and Attitude towards Master
Bellerophon views his master as a follower or a little brother, depending on the Master. He views them as someone that should be able to rely on him, and that he should be able to live up to their expectations, and inspire them to reach ever greater heights. If his master is of an underhanded nature, Bellerophon won’t be able to respect them, and his loyalty and determination to meet their expectation and inspire them will falter.
Bellerophon seeks to claim the Holy Grail because he sees the chance to battle other heroes and face new challenges to drive himself to ever greater heights. He’s admittedly not sure what he would do with the Grail once he obtained it, but he fights with overwhelming determination to reach it.
Speech Examples
“Rider Class Servant, Bellerophon. And this is my best friend, Pegasus. With us at your side, there’s no height you can’t reach!”
“There’s no limit to the heights we can reach! And if we crash and burn, we’ll pick ourselves up and do it again!”
“Make sure that you believe in yourself just as much as you believe in me, got it Master?”
“Higher! Higher! Higher and Higher we go! Let’s soar as high as we can so that even if we crash, we’ll be the most spectacular of them all! BELLEROPHON KOMETES!”
Historical Depiction
A son of Poseidon in Greek Mythology, Bellerophon began his legend when he accidentally killed his own brother, and was sent to King Proteus in order to receive purification. While there, the king’s wife attempted to seduce Bellerophon, and when he rejected her, she told the king he had tried to seduce her instead. So, King Proteus sent Bellerophon to King Iobates of Lycia with secret orders to kill him. However, by the time King Iobates discovered the orders, he had already accepted Bellerophon as his guest. Given hospitality was one of the personal realms of Zeus himself, Iobates wished to avoid personally killing Bellerophon, instead resolving to get the young man killed through a quest. So, he sent the young man to kill the vicious Great Chimera.
Bellerophon rashly accepted this quest, in spite of lacking a method to fight the best. On his way to the location, Bellerophon slept next to a spring created by Pegasus, and Athena appeared to him in a dream, giving him the bit and brindle needed to control Pegasus.
So, Bellerophon approached Pegasus and tamed the great Phantasmal Beast, and in doing so, gained a lifelong companion.
Together, Bellerophon and Pegasus defeated the Great Chimera, the Amazons, and whatever other task King Iobates set before them. Eventually, King Iobates gave up in his attempts to slay Bellerophon, reasoning that someone with Bellerophon’s success had to have the gods on their side. He made Bellerophon his heir and married him to his daughter.
However, eventually Bellerophon grew disillusioned with the gods seeing the disparity between the blessings given to some, the curses given to others, and the world in between. Seeking answers for these questions, Bellerophon attempted to fly to Olympus to confront the Olympians personally. This act of hubris led to him being struck off Pegasus, falling to his death.
Relationships
Medusa (All of Them)
Bellerophon avoids Medusa. He claims it to only be natural.
“Come on. Medusa’s like, Pegasus’ mom, yeah? In all past and future, a universal constant has been that introducing your best friend your mom doesn’t approve of to her is the world’s most awkward experience. I’m not gonna put Pegasus through that!”
You wonder if Bellerophon is exaggerating, but then you notice that most of the Medusa tend to gaze at Bellerophon on a variation of suspicion to disgust, and wonder if the heroic spirit may actually be more observant than you.
Jason
The leader of the Argonauts and a hero from the generation following Bellerophon. Jason finds Bellerophon monstrously annoying, and way too loud. Bellerophon, for his part, seems to refuse to improve Jason’s opinion of him, going out of his way to be even louder around the captain.
William Shakespeare
They have a relationship that is not unlike two sitcom characters, trading barbs and getting on each other’s nerves with their mere presence, but constantly hanging out anyway.
Thus is the nature of a man who loves tragedy and a man who stubbornly denies it as his genre.
Final Thoughts
Servant Sheet Compilation
'Winner' of the Legendary Jack-Off
Owing to our extensive conversation recently in another thread about Arthurian Servants and characters who blur the lines between history and mythology, I was reminded of this figure and whipped him up post-haste. A little on the bland side perhaps, probably would work better fleshed out in a story than just as a Servant sheet but whatever.
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Saber
"I don’t really like to fight to be honest. But you hurt someone close to me, and for that I don’t want to fight you - I’m going to kill you…"
True Name: Rhydderch Hael (リデルフ・ハイル)
Epithet: "The Generous King of Strathclyde"
Region: Britain (6th Century)
Alignment: Lawful Good
Likes: Rome, Virtue
Dislikes: Barbarians, Murder
Talents: Chess, Vamping
Natural Enemy: Vortigern
Parameters
STR: (B) END: (C) AGI: (B) MGI: (C) LCK: (B) NP: (A)
Character
Skills
Noble Phantasm
Lore
Relationships
Creator's Notes
As usual, all comments and criticisms are duly welcome~![]()
"Here's a bangin lil' tune about takin' on The Man!"
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Poet of Caucas
Ah... I'm alive again. Tired, with unnecessary fame, an outcast... a hero of our time. Calm down, master, I'm not going to leave you. If my destiny is to go against everything, so be it.
Class: Avenger
True Name: Mikhail Lermontov
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Place of Origin: Russian Empire
Armament: sable
STR — C
END — B
AGL — B
MGI — C
LCK — C
NP — B
Class skills:
Avenger: None
This skill was replaced by his skill Prophet
Oblivion Correction: None
This skill was replaced by his skill Death of the Poet
Self Replenishment: C
One's Magical Energy endlessly surges until their revenge is accomplished. Recovers a minuscule amount of magical energy every turn.
Personal skills:
Death of the Poet EX
Avenger's poem, which brought him fame and exile to the Caucasus. It was written on the death of Pushkin in a duel with Dantes, in which Avenger blamed high society for the death of the poet.
This skill allows Avenger to take revenge on those he chooses as friends. This could be a master, another servant, or even a person unrelated to the Grail War. Their death activates this skill, people forget a lot, but the Avenger will not forget and will not forgive anyone for the death of people close to him, people he admires. He will know where the killers are hiding, his ridicule and attacks will inflict especially serious wounds on them. This skill allows the Avenger to activate his Noble Phantasm
And you, oh, vainglory decedents Of famous fathers, so mean and base, Who’ve trod with ushers’ feet the remnants Of clans, offended by the fortune’s plays! In greedy crowd standing by the throne, The foes of Freedom, Genius, and Repute — You’re hid in shadow of a law-stone, For you, and truth and justice must be mute! …
But there is Court of God, you, evil manifold! — The terrible court: it waits; It’s not reached by a ring of gold, It knows, in advance, all thoughts’ and actions’ weights. Then you, in vain, will try to bring your evil voice on: It will not help you to be right, And you will not wash of with all your bloody poison, The Poet’s righteous blood!
Prophet EX
Avenger's poem is a kind of polemic with Pushkin's poem of the same name and its direct continuation. The lyrical hero, having received the gift, became an outcast for society, which did not want to accept his words. Avenger himself felt this way throughout his life, and this poem is partly about him. This skill cements Avenger's existence as a person that can never be accepted by society, that he will always resist it.
"Look, there is an example for us!
He was expelled from life, like ours:
The fool was forcing us to trust
That God is speaking through his mouth!
So, see, my children: how grim,
Thin, pale he is -- with shaggy hair!
Look, how poor he is and bare,
How despise all people him!"
Mtsyri A
A skill based on Avenger's poem of the same name, about a mountain boy who was captured by the Russians during the Caucasian War and then grew up in a Georgian monastery. Already as a young man, he runs away from the monastery in the hope of getting to his homeland.
The main character spends three days in freedom - in the mountains, where he receives mortal wounds in a fight with a leopard. The young man is found and returned to the monastery. He dies, having managed to tell the old monk about his experiences and his feelings. This skill allows Avenger to escape from prisons, like some count of Monte-Cristo, at the cost of his life; he will be able to use the skill three times before his powers completely leave him
Life in exchange for freedom... a worthy price
Fairy blessing D
A weak skill, a sign that the user was marked by the fairy queen herself. Avenger is a descendant of Thomas the Rhymer, who received the gift of poetry from the fairy. Due to his kinship, he can claim this skill, which gives an increase in luck at critical moments, but his rank is very insignificant
Noble Phantasm:
Демон
I am the one nobody likes I'm the one whose eye destroys hope, I whip my earthly servants, I'm king of knowledge and freedom, I am an enemy of heaven, I evil nature
B
Avenger's poem is about the love of a demon for a Georgian princess named Tamara, who dies in the arms of a fallen angel.
This NP can only be activated with the skill Death of the Poet; after activation, Avenger's body turns black, he does not grow wings, but he can fly. In this form, Avenger spreads waves of destructive energy around him - in his presence, plants dry out, animals and people begin to get sick and rot, stones crack and collapse, this destructive aura also affects the master.
Description:
Likes: Beautiful ladies, nature of the Caucasus, Alexander Pushkin
Dislikes: High society, restrictions on his freedom, boredom
Natural enemy: Nikolay Martynov
Avenger’s True name is Mikhail Lermontov, Russian poet, prose writer, playwright, artist. Lieutenant of the Life Guards Hussar Regiment.
Lermontov's creativity, which combines civil, philosophical and personal motives, met the urgent needs of the spiritual life of Russian society. It marked a new flowering of Russian literature and had a great influence on the most prominent Russian writers and poets of the 19th and 20th centuries.
Lermontov is a sad man, tired of life, who prefers solitude. He does not like to be bored and, out of boredom, can begin to pester random people; he is one of those who will argue for the sake of arguing, openly provoking people.
Despite this, Lermontov will always be a loyal friend and gallant gentleman. He has problems with self-esteem, although he does not show it, but deep down he belittles himself, which is noticeable in his work.
Relations:
Alexander Pushkin — Alexander Sergeevich... what an honor for me. My name is Mikhail Yurievich, I have long dreamed of meeting you
Nikolay Martynov — You really shot it. Do you want to do it again? Try it, fool
Ada Lovelace — Wouldn't a fair lady like to enjoy an evening of poems from a true Byronic hero? What do you mean, your father is George Byron himself?
This sheet is a bit of a mess. I syncretized Ogier with Oriolz for the sake of better explaining why Ogier has Tristan's sword but then forgot to actually put that in the sheet. Not to mention that fiddling so much with the timeline is bound to annoy someone. *sigh*
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Saber
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True Name: Ogier
AKA: Ogier le Danois, Holger Danske
Epithet: “The Sleeping Paladin”
Region: Denmark (Carolingian Cycle)
Alignment: Neutral Good
Likes: Elsinore Beer, Milfs
Dislikes: Apples, Betrayal
Talents: Poker, Somnambulism
Natural Enemy: Morgan le Fay
Parameters
STR: (B) END: (B) AGI: (B) MGI: (C) LCK: (C) NP: (C)
Character
Skills
Noble Phantasm
Lore
Relationships
Creator's Notes
"Here's a bangin lil' tune about takin' on The Man!"
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Iphigenia
Class: Caster
True Name: Iphigenia
Gender: Female
Region: Greece
Source: Greek Mythology and Religion
Alignment: Neutral
Height: 160cm
Weight: 53kg
Voice Claim: Aoi Koga
Parameters
Strength: D-
Endurance: C-
Agility: C-
Mana: EX
Noble Phantasm: A
Luck: C+
Class Skills
Item Creation: Rank C
Possess the skill, although it is not her specialty. She can create torches with surprising efficiency, however.
Territory Creation: Rank EX (B+)
A skill that comes far more naturally to Iphigenia. As a result of her inherited divinity from Hekate, she is able to claim any territory considered a “crossroads” even if there was a Bounded Field previously in place. She is also able to create and claim territory; though not to the same ease as crossroads. Because of her legend as Iphigenia, altars (both sacrificial and wedding related) both fall under her “claim”.
Magic Resistance: Rank EX (B++)
As a result of being an aspect of the Goddess of Magic, Iphigenia’s magic resistance is extremely high, being practically impenetrable. However, as a result of her magic resistance being derived from being a posthumous divine spirit, her magic resistance is extremely variable. Against non-European magic, or magic from a divine spirit that outranks Hekate, it decreases to the equivalent of Magic Resistance B++.
Personal Skills
Divinity: Rank B
It is said that Iphigenia was turned into the Goddess Hekate, as such, she has a high rank of divinity. However, due to specifically manifesting as “Iphigenia” it is a lower rank than if she truly embraced “being Hekate”.
High Speed Divine Words: Rank D++~EX
The ability to chant magical spells at an accelerated rate, using the language of the Age of the Gods to reduce the amount of words required. Thanks to her inherited Divinity from the Goddess Hekate, Iphigenia has an inherent knowledge and connection to these words. However, as Iphigenia never touched magic in her life, she is inexperienced using them, and tends to mess up. The longer Iphigenia is summoned, the higher the rank of this skill gets.
Magecraft: Rank D~EX
As a result of receiving her powers from the Goddess of Magic, Iphigenia has an innate knowledge of Magecraft. Like with her divine words, Iphigenia needs time to hone this. While her ability may be limited at the moment, the longer she is summoned, the more incredible her spellcasting becomes, becoming nearly unmatched at the peak of her power.
Curse of the Tantalids: Rank E
A skill shared by all members of her family. It decreases the effective luck stat of any servant who possesses it by 2 ranks, and makes it so that the servant will either be drawn towards self-destructive choices (either in the moment, or choices that will lead to their destruction/make enemies), or other servants who did not possess a positive bond with them in life/are currently allies will view them as the most attractive target*. Iphigenia’s Curse is of the “target of aggression” variety rather than the “self-destruction” variety. Thanks to Iphigenia dying young and being slain by another bearer of the curse, her ranking in the curse is low, as it did not have as many chances to work against her.
*An example of a servant who would possess a more inhibiting form of the “self-destruction” flavor of the curse would be Iphigenia’s Grandfather, Atreus, while someone possessing a more extreme “target of aggression” flavor of the curse would be her younger sister, Elektra. Exceptionally cursed individuals, such as her father Agamemnon, would suffer both affects, while her younger brother Orestes - thanks to various factors surrounding his life and his nature as “The One Who Ended the Curse of the Tantalids” - would not possess the skill at all, but rather a Noble Phantasm related to it.
Noble Phantasms
Elpidofóros Ánemos: Blood Stained Sails
Rank: B+
Type: Anti-Obstacle
A Noble Phantasm with the core function of “Kill the Servant who uses it”. Recreating the legend of Iphigenia’s sacrifice, it trades the life of the servant in order for a [guaranteed effect] of making sure that her master reaches [their destination]. It could be described as an effect that affects causality in much the same way as [Gae Bolg: Barbed Spear that Pierces with Death] - locking the cause as “Iphigenia’s Death” and the effect as “The Destination Shall be Reached”. Once the deal has been made, its effects are immutable, with no injury or obstacle stopping the target from reaching their destination. An explosion that would vaporize them would only char them to near-death, a detached head will reattach itself, a hole punched through their torso shall not stop the target’s march to their destination. The “immortality” granted by this Noble Phantasm will linger for a small time after the target arrives at their destination, but, depending on level of injury, they may die soon after reaching their destination.
Personality
A cheerful, upbeat big sister type. Easily excitable and filled with thoughts of romance and adventure. The kind of servant to eagerly distract their master from the Grail War for a day on the town so she can enjoy what the modern world has to offer, and then babble about her crush to her master when she gets back. She gives the impression of a bubbly, excitable airhead, who believes that any problem can be solved with enough optimism.
This upbeat nature is not all there is to Iphigenia, however. Any mention or questions about her parents will be answered with detached, passive-aggressive responses - if not outright hostility. While passive-aggressive regarding the topic of her parents, Iphigenia will take an oppurtunity to talk about her younger siblings, often describing them with utmost praise and affection.
Motive and Attitude Towards Master
Iphigenia acts as a cheerful best friend towards her master in most cases, trying to keep their spirits up as often as her’s with regards to strategizing. There are few masters Iphigenia can’t get along with, however, she does have a preference for working with masters who are around her apparent age.
Iphigenia’s wish for the Holy Grail is to use it to summon a servant she has “a score to settle with”. She refuses to say anything further on the subject.
Historical Depiction
Iphigenia is the eldest daughter of Agamemnon, commander of the Greek Forces at Troy, and Clytemnestra, sister to the famous Helen of Troy. Her younger siblings include Elektra, Chrysothemis, and Orestes.
A member of the cursed House of Atreus, which began with Tantalus, all its members are doomed to misery. In spite of this, life for Iphigenia had happy beginnings, as the princess of the most powerful king in all of Greece at the time. She looked out for her siblings, was close to the princesses of other city states, and was fascinated by the rumors of the Prince of Phthia. Her life and good fortunes would change, however, with the kidnapping of her aunt Helen by Paris, a Trojan Prince.
As the armies of Greece marshaled, Agamemnon, Iphigenia’s beloved father, incurred the wrath of Artemis, and so the goddess halted the winds, stranding the Greeks on the beaches of Aulis. The seer Calchas revealed that the goddess would only allow the winds to blow again if Agamemnon sacrificed his greatest treasure; his daughter Iphigenia. Spurred on by his brother Menealus, eager to reclaim his wife, Agamemnon called his wife and daughter to Aulis, claiming that Iphigenia was to be married to Achilles, greatest warrior of the Greeks and Prince of Phthia.
Agamemnon’s will then broke, and he attempted to retract his decision, but Clytemnestra and Iphigenia, infant Orestes in tow, had arrived in Aulis, and the nature of the deception was revealed to Achilles. Worse, Odysseus - who had heard Calchas’ words - was soon interrogated by the army around the prophecy, and when he revealed the Goddess conditions, the Greeks pressed him into leading the mob to seize Iphigenia by force if Agamemnon refused to do the deed. Inflamed by both the deception and the mob mentality his fellow soldiers had fallen into, Achilles bravely declared that he would single-handedly fight the entire Greek Army if he had to in order to keep Iphigenia safe.
Iphigenia, however, had different plans, and agreed to undergo the sacrifice. No one truly knows why. Was it fear? Was it loyalty to the Greek cause? Was it out of love for her family, who she feared would die in the crossfire? No one but Iphigenia knows with 100% certainty, but after telling her mother to raise her siblings well, and try not to hold it against her father too much, she climbed to the altar, and was sacrificed by her own father.
By Artemis’ will, she was transformed into an aspect of the Goddess Hecate after death.
Relationships
Achilles
Iphigenia is Achilles’ self-proclaimed love interest. It's not necessarily a hard title to achieve (a princess from Scyros beat her to the title at least, as did a certain refugee from Opus depending on who you ask), but it's one Iphigenia will proudly boast about. That being said, her reactions with the hero when they are face to face are remarkably down to earth and natural. They give the impression of two old classmates who did not get many chances to interact personally, but are understand each other enough to instantly hit off upon reuniting.
Odysseus
Iphigenia treats Odysseus with the same passive-aggressiveness she responds to questions about her parents with. Odysseus seems understanding about this and doesn’t go out of his way to interact with the Princess where he can avoid it. No point in interacting with someone you don’t need to, after all.
Paris
Iphigenia should despise Paris for his role in the Trojan War, but her inner big sister won’t let her. She’ll sometimes take the time to thank Apollo for helping her brother.
Raikou
Iphigenia is awkward around Raikou, with Raikou’s obsession with motherhood causing Iphigenia to be uncomfortable around the mystic slayer. Raikou, for her part, seems unaware of the awkwardness, and keeps trying to get through to her after Kintoki blabbed about much fun he had hanging out with her and Achilles. Iphigenia’s continued avoidance of her has caused Raikou to come to the conclusion that Iphigenia is a delinquent.
Creator's Notes
Spoiler:
Oooooh ! I really like this one (tho maybe it's because I have a massive Helen bias). That NP is a pretty cool concept, it fits her well, and properly feels like the sublimation of her myth while also being a proper trump card. All in all, a nice sheet, as always !
Well, can't blame ya for having a Helen Bias, certainly an understandable one! Glad ya found her enjoyable. She's been cooking in the back of my head since way back when I first discovered Fate, so finally getting a sheet out for her that I'm as satisfied with as this one was definitely a good feeling.
Her Noble Phantasm was definitely something that came together pretty early in its concept, but the exact mechanics of it came together much slower. It didn't reach its final form until practically this draft.
I barely make sheets but I appreciate that the few I have made has ranked me in B. I'll take that completely arbitrary ranking and make it my whole personality for now on. I gratefully accept my reward:
Last edited by Lady Vanatos; November 11th, 2023 at 02:59 AM.
Current FGO setup
RIDER
"My liege and I have... had our differences. But there's one thing I'm sure of: he was the strongest ruler our age could've ever wished for.
"...Master. Please. If you mean to continue down this path and ignore every other word of mine, please let me ask just one thing of you..."
Class: Berserker
Other Classes: N/A
True Name: Al-Hajjaj ibn Yusuf
Alignment: True Neutral
Place of Origin: Umayyad (7th century)
Stars: 4/5
Parameters:
STR: B
END: C
AGI: D
MGI: C
LCK: C
NP: B
Height: 168cm
Weight: 150lbs
Likes: His caliph, religion
Dislikes: Pacifism, retreat
Talent: Serving as viceroy
Natural Enemy: Hassans
Attribute: Man
Traits: Humanoid, Male, Weak to Enuma Elish
Armament: Spear
Catalyst: One of the coins he minted
Class Skills:
Madness Enhancement C: An emphasis on moves he believes to be right, a single-minded focus on them neglecting to think of the others affected by it.
Personal Skills:
Sheikh's Disengagement B-: al-Hajjaj notably used disengagement in many of his fights, granting him this skill permitting him to disengage from a fight and recover from the damage. However, due to his own statements, he cannot withdraw from more than one fight with the same person, as he believed "A shiekh can leave merely once."
As Insignificant as Tabala B: Berserker's initial role was administrating the fortress of Tabala, but he found this far to insignificant and left, and that became a statement. If berserker views something as "absolutely insignificant", its power against him will weaken. However, naturally if he views it as significant the power will return to normal.
Charisma of Pacification B-: Berserker's pacification of his citizens and soldiers through brutal penalizations, up to and including execution. Empowers his surrounding allies with the help of his power, but also debuffs allies and enemies alike if they disobey his commands or attack him. One willing to stoop to any depth to purify.
Counting the Coins of Allah C: Berserker's effectiveness at calculating victory and his focus on his faith combined into a skill. A protection of the faith, a resilience to harmful mental effects, including his Madness Enhancement, which improves based on the amount of money he has. This extends into minor physical attacks, as well.
Noble Phantasm(s):
Al-Barq Fawz
Storm of Heralded Victory
Type: Anti-Army
Rank: B
Range: 20 meters
Max Targets: 100 targets
The thunderstorm that, several times through his career, Berserker utilized as a claimed "signal of promised victory". Passively, the ability for Berserker to produce "minted coins", embossed with a holy word, through sacrifice of his wealth. These holy coins are actively consumed to power blasts of lightning shot down from above at designated targets. These blasts empower themselves against non-Muslims.
Lore: Abu Muhammad al-Hajjaj ibn Yusuf ibn al-Hakam ibn Abi Aqil al-Thaqafi, more commonly known as al-Hajjaj ibn Yusuf, was an Umayyad governor who served the caliphate, and was one of the most notable of them. He controlled the region surrounding Medina. He was noted or his military prowess and currency updating.
Personality: A serious, stern person deeply loyal to whoever he selects as his "Caliph". However, he has a tendency to follow his own methods of dealing with problems such as rebellion and battle, which usually doesn't take into account other people. His wish for the Holy Grail would be for the Ummayads to never fall.
Relationships:
Hassan of the Serenity: "You must always be willing to sacrifice for the Caliph."
Shangguan Wan'er: "A masterful technique. Simply masterful."
Zubaidah bint Ja'far: "...An Abbasid? Here?"
holy shit it's the second best boy from my chinese mobage
Ogier: I like his dippy personality, he feels like a fun character to have in a Grail War while convincingly tragic when his past is revealed. His Skills are mostly canon ones as typical for you but Bergentruckung definitely adds some nice flavor. Reminds me of Nezuko sleeping to recharge health from Demon Slayer, with shades of Zenitsu's fighting while asleep. NP is a fairly standard "summon a familiar" deal but decently fleshed out. The imagery of Ogier just hanging up on Archangel Michael like a teenager on the phone with his dad is definitely an amusing one.
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Danke Royd, always nice to see the Paladins get some love.
Hopefully I might be able to do another one, one day~![]()
"Here's a bangin lil' tune about takin' on The Man!"
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Let’s go make a Player, shall we?
Once there was a soldier.
He was not a soldier by choice or by trade, merely by fate. He had gone to fight for his country. For justice. For glory. He had found none.
This is a great truth of war, that it is nothing like the songs. In war, you will not find camaraderie or love of one’s country. In war, you will find nothing but desperation and the stinking selfish desire to not be killed by the enemy.
So, the army was not what he had thought it was going to be, but if you’ll pardon the expression, he soldiered on. In the cold and the hunger and disease, he continued. He even managed to survive a few battles, shocking as it may be. He grew hard and even allowed himself to entertain the ridiculous hope that he would be coming home alive. Until one day.
The fog was hard and in the cold, he could barely see his own comrades, let alone the enemy. On that day, almost all of his friends died in a rush of red light, screaming, and gunshot. Hell was truly empty, and all the demons were on that battlefield. So, he ran.
He ran and he ran and he ran in that cold fog. He knew he was deserting, he didn't care. Deserting was uncertain death and war was certain death. He thought he had survived. Once again, despite everything he had seen, he actually still held on to that ridiculous hope. Until he saw Death and he knew.
Death was tall, and black, and spoke like a sound of rushing wind in forgotten and desecrated graveyards. Everytime it spoke, one felt the dust creep into them and wither away. It reached out a terrible, skeletal, inevitable hand towards the soldier, taking that which was its by right. And then the soldier even surprised himself.
"No. If you want my soul, you’ll have to play me for it.”
And from his pack, the soldier withdrew an old chess set. It was the only memento he had from his time before the war. All else had been lost. He had often been sorely tempted to sell the chess set for money to buy women or alcohol. Anything to take his mind off the fear.
Death withdrew its hand and the soldier established the board. For a moment, he was confused, as Death just seemed to sit there, doing nothing. Had it denied his desperate offer for a game? And then he understood.
Death cannot create. It only destroys. Therefore it cannot make the first move. It cannot establish a board. It can only dismantle the strategies of an enemy. He reached out, and touched his queen’s side pawn, moving it forward two spaces. Death responded in kind.
This was, without a doubt, the hardest game he had ever played in his life. Death played mechanically. Like a wall. Without hesitation. Without doubt or thought or mistakes. Against a human, desperate player, how could he compete? He blundered a knight early in and almost forfeited then and there. But he continued. In the dusty and horrible fog, he continued.
It is understandable that when the board ended in him checkmating Death using a clever stratagem involving two bishops, he counted it among one of the miracles of Christ. He laughed and laughed and prayed to all that was holy in the world. To all the good in the world. Death, for its part, was not a sore loser. It merely swept up the pieces and left into the fog, off to claim other victims. It would have no shortage of them, after the battle. What mattered if one got away? After all…
It would be back to take its due one day. Always.
But enough of dusty fairy tales. Within the summoning circle came a servant. A slim young man who in one hand cradled a chess set. He stopped, paused, and addressed his summoner.
"Pleased to meet you master. You can call me Hans, as no better name presents itself. I really hope we survive this.”
~⚔~
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"Hans": This is pretty interesting!
I kept on thinking of an April Fools scenario though, where "Hans" challenges First Hassan to a game of chess.
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