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    Here is one of the servants that Shiki offered some Infos a while back , ihope that i have made something good out of it and a small hint beforehand :no compound skills.

    Milon of Croton
    (Berserker)

    Jarhaha ! Servant Berserker Milon is annuncing himself before you Sorcerer,now either guide me to the Stage or banquet !



    Ascensions


    Level up: "The weights become lighter !"

    Ascension 1:he adds his attire an Wrestler belt and his braceletts are getting thicker

    "Now are you gaze upon the six times Periodonike ! Hahahharr! "

    Ascension 2 : He now wears a Lion themed cloak with an connected Lion-Mask

    "Fear not because i am here Master ,Milon of Croton stands in full Glory !"

    Last Ascension: He is seen sitting on a tree stump drinking from his bottle and Looking thoughtfull at the raising Moon with his Mask and cape put up the thorns on his Sword which lean on an Tree behind him.

    "Thanks for enduring the Hardships together Master i know that can be difficult to handle but the times are sometimes hard withhin the Circle or outside , sit down beside me and let our thoughs fly wth Stars"




    Height:215 cm
    Weight:159~ kg
    Alignment: Chaotic Evil/Lawful Good
    Attribute:Man
    Weapons:His Body as unit,a Thorny Sword
    Other Qualifying Classes:Caster
    Likes:Tasty dishes (especially meat based),victories in all senses,himself,wise People,People with insight
    Dislikes:bad Cuisine,loses ,haughty People with no Spine,cowards,those who threats Sages
    Talents/Hobbies:Body Training obtimation,to Keep ones Body in prime state,To think About the truth of the world
    Compatible Masters:Bazet McFraga Remitz,Shirou Emiya
    Parameter:
    Strenght:A
    Endurance:B+
    Agility:C+
    Luck:C
    Mana:C
    NP:B


    Background and Personality


    Milon was Born in the Standing of the noble circles evidenced by his participation in the games which were reserved for members of aristocratic families at that time.

    Milon is through his summoning as Berserker seemingly not great impede in his intellect nor in spech as he is in the full possesion of his Rhetoric though he still was already in life no man of inspiring great Speches or one that had the abbillity to fully dive beyond the veil of mundanity to the truth despite his present intelect which especially later was doubted.

    He is heavily confident in himself and his abbillities ,as he sees himself as the strongest Man after Herakless. He sees all other Warriors which doesnt posses blood of Gods as inferior to himself.Which result that he is rather enragged if he should be pressured but even then does he behave as if the fight would be a martial Show where he Plays a while the inferrior to not only give the Opponent (Servant) the Feeling of safety until he counter suddenly.


    He is despite his rather enhanced stubbornes and Fighting thirst still able to use certain strategies withhin on battle though as Berserker he is greatly inclined to Punch first look if its sufficient and if not again punch and then to try to evaluate it finer.Also is if he should Encounter other Greek Servants will he ask them if they have heard of Milon of Croton the most famous of Periodonike if not will he be enraged and eager to demonstrate his prowess but should they heard of him then will he ask them playfully if they want a sign (seriously).

    He is also outside of the fights mostly centered to wait for the next on by Training despite his beings as servant as he still follows his extreme Training Regime.and beside that to devour massive amounts of Food and Drinks ,besides he has Always a bottle of wine .Regardless where he is summoned oes he like to know if Sport and especially Fighting Sports are which he then would like to spectate and perhaps even participate so one should try to advise not to do it .(Maybe a Command seal could be neccesary.)

    He is normaly quite irritable and short tempered so is he at times difficult to handle so should one bump in him would it be neccesary that the one would be advised to bow and apologise correctly.Despite that he as B erserker has no hesitations to crush those that dare to provoke him has he still some Moral Points as he never would harm childrenn or clearly weak People like old People or women in that case would he shrugging pardon if they would Anger him and in the case those People would Need help like if the would be robbed or threatened will he immediatly jump to help and defend them with a line like,

    "you try to take from the helpless ,you Coward then Show me your guts against one that can fight for himself!"

    In that case is he determined to mutiliated(or heavily injury the aggresor if they should try to run away or if they not surrender.

    Despite that through Mad Enhancement his more intelectual side is inhibited is this side still emerging from time to time especially if he should witness beautifull scenery like a Waterfall or a nature Panorama will he calmly sit down on a Rock and ponder About the nature where he even Display an Deep intellect that noone would expect him to have here a excerpt of his thoughts,

    *sips a gulp from his bottle*"say Master have you thought why the River flows on this track or why at one side of the hills Trees are growing freely durinng mere meter away barely one can took root? the nature and world is truly a Thing of wonders ,sometimes did i envied Pythagoras for his abbillity to look at the truth behind but i also think that perhaps i couldnt handle this weight of insight…"

    In These rare Moments does he appear like one other Man and he Display an aura similar to the Fist Monks of the far east.in the case of that he should be summoned as Caster would this side be the more present one.

    This s also thie reason for his Respect towards Scholars which would also appear if he should ncounter especially Greek philosophers as other servants then would he he be curious to have a conversation and to hear their views on the truth of the world and he would even prefer to spare the philosopher servant despite the fact that in a Grailwar they would be opponents or enemies which is also founded that he in life was personally befriended Pythagoras and was his self Chosen Guardian as the Philosopher was some figures a thorn in their eyes but the the higher ups of Croton didnt dare to Approach Pythagoras directly as Milon holded Military Standing and they knew that in whole Greece no Mercenary would have the strenght to overcome Milon .Out of this Reason where his house the Meeting Point of the pythagorean as they there enjoyed his personal protection .

    Demeanor towards the Master:

    He is initially a difficult to handle servant as he fundamentally do what he wants aswell that he is rather ignorant for the commands of his Master atleast at the start as he sees that as Champion he doesnt need advise from a novice ,it would be different if his Master should happen to be a "Combat-Mage" especially if they are having Martial Art incorporated in their Repertoire hen would he out of curiousity lend them his ear and listen for their advise.

    During his Moments when his Intelectual side is appearing does he like to discuss About their each idealogies with his Master and would like to hear About their past and if they regret some deeds they did.If his Master does impress him enough will he trust him more and be more cooperative with them.

    After a while will he if he trust his Master will he treat him/her more like a friend and "from time to time" follow their lead .if he should perceive his Master as Evil will he he without hesitatitation kill them and accept that he will return where he was called from.

    As he had one Daughter is he towards Childrenn very protective so should his Master happen to be one will he act like a heartly Father who will be treated with great care and he could be in anime Terms called "a Martial art Father which will strive to pass his techniques to the next Generation".

    Relationships:



    Pythagoras: "Ah my old friend , have you found answers About the truth ?If so shall be the moon our listener?"

    Thales : "The first Man that opened us the door to the truth, know that you have Enlighted your fellow humen more then the Thunders of Zeus "

    Herakless:"

    Deianira:

    Quetzalcoatl:

    Astreae:

    Li Shuwen:



    skills
    Classkils:

    Mad Enhancement :C+

    All Parameter beside Luck or Mana are Ranked up ,at the cost of the most thoughts beside his side as "Wreslter" or better said is he through it rather "locked" in his Wrestler persona.

    Personal-skills:

    All Strenght lies in the Veins:A
    Is (seemingly) the Sublimation of the anecdote of how he bursted an intestinal string tied around his head by holding his breath and causing the forehead to swell,but in truth is it the mental art he developed out of the pythagorism that the Body is consisting of Units that are conected with each other.

    This enables Milon to execute his whole physical power through no neccesary mechanical movement as he is able to direct the flow of his Muscle-Force direct withhin his Body like example wise is he able to break Handcuffs or chains simply by concentrade his fully force into his veins to break them or attack his opponents only with a Punch through on finger which possess the force of his whole Body which turns in effect his finger in one piercing Arrow.

    Also s he able to use this principle of the physical force travel in armed Combat like can he use his Thorny club like Sword which would in the Hands of a normal Swordman be rather inefficient as ist actually Edge is not straight but Milon is able to concentrade and Focus the physical and kinetic Energy of the Momentum directly like example wise in the case he strike against the weapon of a other servant with his weapon or directly with his fist is he able to direct the Impact force through the weapon of the other Servant in an focused area in the Body of the Opponent .

    the Rank of this skill does corespond with the Rank of ones Strenght Parameter.

    Lifting from the Calf to the Bull:C

    Is the representation of the anedote in which Milon carried a newborn calf every day until it was a four year Bull respectively the on it based Muscle Training principle,in effect does this skill provide a Bonus in the case he fight the same Opponent again or is confronted with the same Task again does he recieve some pus on the neccesary checks respectively a Bonus in the Damage he causes on the Opponent in both cases is it from the second coming in contact only a small bost but one that accumulates until it is a nearly gureented succes against the Task/Opponent (in Theory atleast as the amount of neccesary Encounters would be during the timeframe of a normal standart Grailwar difficult to reach).

    Pankration:A
    Is the oldest European Martial art,which origin differ withhin the legends .Aswell whichs Focus lies in different strike and throwing techniques.

    At this Rank it can be said that Milon truly Mastered the style of Pankration in all techniques from the beginner upto the expert Level techniques,which execution he demonstrated during his olympic chalenges.

    Although would be the resourcefullness of martial arts decrease through Mad Enhancement is it a Special case as he is through instead locked in his Wrestler persona so are all aspects of his proweaa in Pankration untouched by Mad Enhancement.

    Eye of Mind(True):B
    is an insight fostered through training and discipline,in Milons case is it the experience he accumulated during the years in the Wrestle Tournaments aswell his Military fights.Normaly would through the effects of Mad Enhancements this skill be atleast weakened but due to that his skills and dexterity are ingrained in Body and mind does it keep its full capacity.

    Contradictory Mind:C

    Symbolize the mentality of Milon of Croton,namely at one side the Vctory centred Wrestler and fighter who sees only Victory as Option and loaths any other Outcomes but one the other he is a highly thoughtfull Person who seeks the truth of he world beyond the mundane Things. At the Afternoon he spectates the down going Sun and the appearing Stars full of Questions and Explanation ideas ,at the next morning does he Train with the only thoughts of crushing his next foe .In the brunch with his Friends and fellow pythagorian he discuss the maters of the nature but mere steps outside the Tavern he shift into a Fighting Maschine.

    Normaly would he have the Rank of A in this skill but due to the Influence of Mad Enhancement is his intelectual side greatly inhibited,thus did this skill lost some ranks.



    Noblephantasm

    Ta ypsilá pnévmata tou protathlití
    C+~B
    Anti-Causality
    Is the Sublimation of Berserkers anecdote where he found his demise as he was walking in a forest when he came upon a tree-trunk split with wedges. In what was probably intended as a display of strength, Milo inserted his hands into the cleft to rend the tree. The wedges fell from the cleft, and the tree closed upon his hands, trapping him and then attacked by predators and he was through his trapped stance unable to defend himself.

    As Noblephantassm does it possess an all out effect as upon the release of the Name of this Noblephantasm does it enable Milon to ensure one gurenteed succes of either one Task or the defeating of one Opponent by bost all neccesary Parameters to ensure the succes of the Task . But in return does as aftereffect beside that he lose all Bosts he received does it is conceptually ensure that the next checks etc are failing so is normaly Milon only able to use it once in each incarnation as he then will find likely his end ,due to this drawback is Milon unwilling to ever activate it willingly .



    notes
    i will later add an Relationship section


    Feedback are welcomed especially i am curious About the from Shiki.
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    Milon: This is a quite good sheet. If not for the spelling/grammar issues (and even there you've improved somewhat) I really can't find any faults at all. Skills are creative and fit his legend well, and I like how you gave him a more intellectual personality (drawing from the stories where he was a friend of Pythagoras) than just the usual musclebound Berserker.

    Out of curiosity, how do you think he'd get along (either in a fight or regular interaction) with my Commodus? Given they're both competitive fighters who modelled themselves after Heracles and had a bit of an ego problem (even though Commodus is far worse in that regard) and all.

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    So it's been a bit I guess, So a bit of an update on my end, I should probably maybe in all likelihood barring work related to school and such be able to get done with Rider's sheet that I have been working on. Also to Nandatou, nice work on the muses, all of them were really well made and I could see them even fitting into canon stuff with how well made they are. Yet again, major props my friend.

    Also side note, I don't know if anyone has done this before, but I did recall something as I was doing a little research in my free time into potential future servant ideas. So, I remembered something I read a while back and think that if anyone wants to use it feel free, Croesus. To put matters into context he is the Croesus in the phrase which I never even knew was a phrase before I read about it "as rich as Croesus". From what I can find the dude was the first person we know of to make a system of coinage, and when his rule fell at the hands of Cyrus the Great, the event literally was so important to the greeks that he became a frame of reference for their calendar after the fact (when his dynasty/kingdom fell (Lydia for those wondering)). Also of note is that his system of coin was based on gold coins, which gave me vibes of another greek dude associated with gold, Midas.

    Now I could be taking a huge leap of faith, but here is the facts, Croesus of Lydia was important to the greeks, he used the first system of coin based on gold. Two although there are at least 2 historically known of kings by the name of Midas, and the king Midas of legend, however neither of the king Midasi (Midases?) line up with the legends well. Midas of legend was said to live alongside his father Gordas before 2000 BC and the trojan war and ruled Phyrgia. However Homer never mentioned either of them as kings of Phyrgia and realistically this doesn't;t make much sense when you consider the facts. One, Gordas is known for the Gordian knot, which turns up in the legend of Alexander the great, who lived in 356 BC onward. Now it is claimed that the said knot and carriage which was stuck by it said in the balance until Alexander the great undid it ... over 1600 years later. Now given the Nasuverse loose idea of fact this could be the case, but I'm not confident in the huge time gap and the fact that I'm not even sure if Phyrgia would even really have fully existed as a united whole in 2000 BC.

    Here's another fact the king Midas, aka Mita to the Assyrians (who he is very likely to have been one and the same with) lived in the late 8th century and was at war with the assyrians and the Anatolians at the time. Now given context if, the Midas who lived in 2000 BC existed he may have been the inspiration behind the name, (as kings and royal families in Greece and elsewhere did sometimes reuse names and would be likely to do so if they though said leader was someone to model yourself off of in my opinion), but would the Phyrgians really have good records on events from 1200+ years ago, much less would the language necessarily be spoken the same way for that length of time?

    The last one however, is more interesting, he is the (king?) Midas spoken of by Herodotus who was said to have been forced to flee his throne in Phyrgira, to guess where else but Lydia, specifically Lydia under the reign of king Croesus. Here's another interesting fact that would place this Midas around at the mid 6th century BC. The two withers who spoke of Midas and his legend were Aristotle who lived 384 to 322 BC and Herodotus who lived from 484 to 425 BC. Now I get historians weren't common so records from 2000 BC wouldn't probably be all that sprawling, but if there was a Midas then, why only talk about him centuries later. Also it seem a little odd how Herodias draw parallels between two guys both associated with foolishness, gold, and greed being their downfall, one of which is said to have moved to the other's kingdom during the same time the other was alive? Personally, I think that if this is the case (which I think it may be) someone could make an interesting sheet based on an amalgamation of the mythical king Midas and quite possibly the historical person he may have been based on.

    IDK, could just be me overanalyzing stuff. If you do want to make a sheet of it feel free, just thought I'd throw it out there.




    Also I just realized, Croesus rule collapsed because Becasue he failed to understand or properly heed the words of an Oracle, who as prophets get their info from Apollo, the god of prophecyspoilers. Midas after he got his golden touch and became a follower of Pan, was used as ref on a performance comparing Apollo and Pan's skill Midas said Pan was better, and for his insult Apollo gave him donkey earsspoilers. Now we know that King Midas in the Late 8th century may have lived (the timeline of his death (and the fact that he died in possibly the same way the Midas of myth did, suggesting he may have at least had some influence on the myth of Midas) and the fall of Gordiam/Gordian (named for his father Gordias who built it) lines up well).
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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    Milon: This is a quite good sheet. If not for the spelling/grammar issues (and even there you've improved somewhat) I really can't find any faults at all. Skills are creative and fit his legend well, and I like how you gave him a more intellectual personality (drawing from the stories where he was a friend of Pythagoras) than just the usual musclebound Berserker.

    Out of curiosity, how do you think he'd get along (either in a fight or regular interaction) with my Commodus? Given they're both competitive fighters who modelled themselves after Heracles and had a bit of an ego problem (even though Commodus is far worse in that regard) and all.
    Im the oppinon as that both are having interestingly quite similar states would her Coloseo Pravis doesnt greatly increase her strenght and as Milon will directly waste no time to enage her in close Combat where i would say he holds more practical experience especially if put on the "Stage" so would she by activating /\ just give him more mental bost unconciously and although she could take Eye of Mind would i say that she couldnt steal Milons All Strenght lies in the Veins skill as he is tied towards him .I can imagine that their fight would be óne where Willpower is more important than other factors presumably are both fall tired to their backs and praise the other one .

    I would think that he would quite like Lucia Commodia as he respect her oppinions and her oppinion from Herakless, i could even think that he may be the sort of Father - figure she would have wished to had in llife. though i would be curious what she would think of his philosophical intelectual side ?
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    Assassin of New York

    Attachment 14252
    Class: Assassin
    Other Classes: Lancer, Avenger
    Alignment: Lawful Good
    Place of Origin: America


    Parameters:


    STR: B
    END: B
    AGI: B
    MGI: B
    LCK: B
    NP: B+


    Height: 6'5
    Weight: 235 lbs
    Likes: Human women, sweets, jazz
    Dislikes: Human men, magazines
    Talent: Rhetoric
    Natural Enemy: Humanity
    Attribute: Star
    Armament: Natural Stingers, Mandibles
    Catalyst: A dollop of honey




    Class Skills:
    Presence Concealment: (B) Capacity to hide one's presence as a Servant. The form Assassin is summoned in is not his true form but an enlarged body granted to him upon summon. He can reduce himself to his true form and become nearly imperceptible as a Servant. Most will dismiss him as just a common insect. He also gains the ability to hide himself amongst swarms of his own kind.



    Personal Skills:

    Defy Logic (Gravity): (B) A skill that denotes one as an entity whose existence contradicts known laws and theories about the universe. According to all known laws of aviation, Assassin should not be capable of flight, and yet at this rank he is able levitate and fly around at high speeds.


    Stinger: (B) A skill possessed by those who have natural stinging weapons. It is not a skill in the traditional sense but more a fact of Assassin's biology and a trait common to other members of his species. His stinger can either be an annoyance to some targets or incredibly deadly to others, depending on how susceptible they are to the venom stored within. Deploying the stinger comes with a catch; once used, even if the target has not been killed or incapacitated, Assassin's death is almost certainly inevitable. Surviving requires making an exceptionally high LCK check and even if he does survive this skill becomes sealed away. Assassin never actually used his stinger in life, but his close friend did and much of Assassin's life was full of anecdotes where others of his kind would foolishly waste their sting on an unworthy target. Assassin is unlikely to use his stinger without being ordered by a Command Seal.


    Human Dialogue: (B) A communication of intention with humans that speak a "language of words". It is not just the opposite of Animal Dialogue, it absolutely spits in the face of that skill. According to this skill, the intellect of animals not only improve but animals are able to convey complex ideas with nuance, like law, justice and ownership. Assassin was not the only member of his species to possess this skill but he became a great facilitator of dialogue between man and beast.


    Lawyer: (B) A skill that denotes one's status as one who is knowledgeable in law and can defend clients and argue points in an effective manner within a legal setting. At this rank, Assassin can effectively advocate for the personhood of non-human entities and prove that the things they produce are not owned by humans. Assassin was a revolutionary who won his peoples' rights to ownership not through show of force but through understanding the ruling class's own legal system and using it against them.



    Noble Phantasm(s):

    Plan Bee
    ~The Seizure of all Plant Species Under the Sun~


    Type: Anti-World
    Rank: B+
    Range: Unknown
    Max Targets: Uknown


    Upon finding out that the vast majority of products his people made were being consumed frivolously by an elite upper class, Assassin staged a revolution and seized the means of production, ensuring his people's prosperity. Unfortunately his actions upset the balance of nature and threatened all life on the planet. Undoing his previous mistake he reinstated the status quo, with some caveats, ultimatley creating a better life for all creatures under the sun.


    Through natural processes, Assassin exercises the use of his NP on a regular basis as he naturally drawn the the nectar contained in flowers, thus inducing pollination and ensuring the continuted existence of the necessary vegetation on Earth. However, upon invoking his NP's true name he can create an ever expanding "death field" around him, the outmost range of which is unknown. It is not a crystalization of Assassin's actions but rather a crystalization of the unforeseen consequences of those actions. Once inside the death field, all plant life withers away. As plants are symbolically the first step in the food chain this NP will target those first. Once all plant life has been eliminated the NP targets the creatures that eat the plants, followed by the creatures that eat other creatures and so on until it has eradicated all life in it's range. It is an NP that symbolizes a gross violation of the natural order. The NP itself moves slowly and its effects won't become apparent until a few days after activation. Assassin deeply fears the potential fallout of activating his NP as he made that mistake once before in his life and so will not use it willingly.



    Lore:

    Assassin's true name is Barry B. Benson from Bee Movie.
    https://sites.google.com/a/ausdg.us/...e-movie-script



    Personality:

    Assassin is laidback, outgoing and attempts to be funny. Most of his jokes never quite stick the landing. He also has a thing for human women and never dates within his own species.



    Creator Notes:

    I was too concerned with whether it could it be done when I should have asked myself should it be done.
    Made ya look :P

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    ...wrong thread. This should go under the Create your own Modern Fiction Servants thread.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dragolord09 View Post
    ...wrong thread. This should go under the Create your own Modern Fiction Servants thread.
    If you have seen my Milon Dragolord then please tell me your oppinion About him .

    unregarded that nice Train you have just besides !
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    Rider - Tutankhamen
    Other qualified classes: Archer & Caster


    (roughly what her physical appearance, minis the outfit looks like)

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    https://www.pinterest.ca/plasticdumplings/ Image Author

    attire




    Main outfit (looks slightly different, blue instead of red, minor slits near base of dress, ends above ankles instead of near feet, wearing male sandals and male headgear (Uraeus)):

    http://www.ancient-egyptian-facts.co...an-Royalty.jpg Image source
    http://www.ancient-egyptian-facts.co...ing-Facts.html Image Author


    Anklets & Bracelets (I know the source is a ring, but it looks that this ring, but big enough to go around the arm/leg):

    https://www.brilliance.com/sites/def...ow-gold-v1.jpg Image Source
    https://www.brilliance.com/wedding-r...nd-yellow-gold Image Author


    Scale armor:

    https://weaponsandwarfare.files.word...7956_large.jpg Image Source
    https://weaponsandwarfare.com/2016/0...ire-1551-1213/ Image Location
    https://japa2.cgsociety.org Image Author (Warning has some NSFW stuff on it)


    Kepresh:

    https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikiped..._crown.svg.png Image source
    https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Khepresh Image Location
    https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:J...User:Jeff_Dahl Image Author


    Nemes:

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    https://www.pinterest.co.uk/alexishistoryof/ Image Aut
    hor



    Weapons


    Bow:

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    https://www.pinterest.com/cmcolin/ Image Author


    War horn:

    https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikiped...ze_trumpet.jpg Image Source
    http://www.griffith.ox.ac.uk/gri/car.../gal-011.html# Image author


    Statue of Anubis:

    https://3docean.img.customer.envatou...000&max-w=590& Image source
    https://3docean.net/item/egyptian-an...hamun/20901244 Image Location
    https://3docean.net/user/maxegy/portfolio Image Author


    Ship of the Moon (looks a bit like this basic shape and form except far more futuristic, plated in bronze scales, with 9 iron cannons (4 on each side and 1 at the front (which fire energy blasts and can sap warmth and light from the area)), two shoots at the base of the vehicle (which when opened release a haze which spreads disease and kills foes) with two large wings on each side which let it fly):

    https://pixfeeds.com/images/world-hi...ship-of-ra.jpg Image source
    https://historyplex.com/the-cult-of-osiris Image Author


    Dagger:

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    Chalice:

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    Equipment
    A metal horn, A bow; If summoned as Caster he would have his dagger and a dog headed staff as his arms rather than his bow. Archer also is garbed in his traditional attire (modified due to how he has manifested) which consists of his Uraeus crown (a circlet with the serpent emerging from the front), a white shawl which goes over his shoulders and has slits cut into each side to allow him free movement of his arms, it is tied blue thread in the front, the rest of the outfit consists of a white dress with another blue knot tied just above the hips, which ends just above his ankles (so it doesn’t get caught) while walking.

    The attire actually does have a purpose, besides looks, it is enchanted to keep the wearer cool by controlling the warmth of the user’s body, so that even while in the sun He still wears normal male egyptian sandals (which are enchanted to soften shock from falls and running, so he can jump on and off his chariot and move about), on his legs (just above his ankles) and arms (just above his wrists) are gold bands patterned with lapis lazuli. However when he switches to his sun chariot, the Uraeus is swapped for a Kepresh and his shawl is switched to a set of enchanted bronze scale armor which wnet atop the dress. If ever forced to pull out his own ship of the moon, then he is adorned with his Nemes instead of his Kepresh.

    Aside from differing how he looked, the gear does serve some purpose. The anklets were enchanted to muffle shocks to his legs and feet as such he could run, stay on a chariot, and hop on and off a chariot or leap a distance of around 30 feet and be fine (if it were worn by someone without Rider’s leg problems in life it’s effect would be much greater, but it had to compensate for that).

    The armbands served the purpose of the right serving as a sort of key allowing him to use his mystic code bows safely and the left gave off a faint flow if brought near most poisons.The dress had no real purpose (nor did his normal attire in life), but the armor is enchanted to be much stronger than normal and is resilient to most magical attacks (roughly of rank B), and to a lesser degree physical ones (C rank normal attacks can damage it, and it could break under too many attacks (especially of B or A rank level, much less noble phantasms of greater than that strength)).

    Due to Rider already having magic resistance this also could be used by his master as a form of protection on them (although as caster he lacks this armor and instead has a staff which acts as a means of channeling spells and such). As for rider’s headdresses the Uraeus gives clear sight (sees past visual illusions like heat haze), the Kepresh does the same as the Uraeus, but also gives the user the ability to see far distances (like reinforcing one’s eyes), and the Nemes is an even stronger Kepresh, but also gives the user the ability to cancel out mental interference up to rank C.

    The drawback is that all of this gear is fueled by Rider’s own mana and as such while using more powerful gear gives him better boosts, it also takes more mana, and if you wanted to conserve it, then you would have to balance the raw benefits versus the energy it drains (for stronger mystic codes, the energy cost gets higher).


    Characteristics
    Gender: Male (historically, considers himself as such, at birth), Female (manifesting as a servant, due to his life and condition)
    Height / Weight: 162 cm, 57.6 kilograms
    Alignment: Neutral Good
    Home: Ancient Egypt
    Origin: Historical fact


    Personal Information
    Attribute: Heaven
    Likes: Living life to the fullest, Nefertiti, Hunting
    Dislikes: Wasted time, needless killing, ruining children’s futures
    Talents: Management, Wood Carving, Crafting/designing (aethstetics)
    Natural Enemy: Tokomi Tohasaka, Zouken Motau, Timur


    Lore
    In the 18th dynasty of Egypt there lived a man named Akhenaten who sought to make a religious reform in his kingdom, in doing so he shattered the trust between him, his advisors, and placed his kingdom at risk or possibly rebelling against him. After such his consort Nefertiti took control of his position in the interim, raising his son Tutankhaten as her own she nursed and taught the boy.

    However Tutankhaten was ill, gravely so, and those involved divined he was not long for this world, in spite of this he protested and still sought to have the throne, as such, his surrogate mother taught him magecraft to hide his condition (complete AIS), and healed what other conditions they could find (his twisted spine, his cleft palate, and took steps to fix his clubbed left foot, and his right foot missing a phalanges). To the end of fulfilling the young child’s wishes they also found a body double who would serve to hide his condition from the masses even in death. During his rule Tutankhaten changed his name to Tutankhamun, and did away with his father’s religious reform, for this and other acts he earned the love of the masses and was worshipped as a god. However, he was not long for life, the young pharaoh fell ill with malaria and later died in a chariot accident, however in doing so, he saved Egypt from ruin, redeemed the rule of the Pharaohs in the eyes of the gods who were angered by Akhenaten’s insolence and allowed Egypt to prosper even more than before.


    Personality
    Rider is one who firmly believes in following your dreams and making the most out of life, to him the idea of being able to do something, but not doing it, or having had a chance to experience something, but missing it is tantamount to literally hacking away at bits of you body, and butchering what your life could have been. To this end those who would actively do this either mangling the lives and futures of others or outright ending them by means of murder are not people Rider would see eye to eye with.

    In his eyes all manners of disciple be it fighting, invention, design, magecraft, and beyond are admirable pursuits, and as such all manner of heroic spirits would find him as an figure who would take time to appreciate the effort they have poured into mastering or learning their craft. As a person Rider is compassionate and sympathetic to the plight of others, and is not beyond breaking the law to help when he feels it right, it could be said to be a rare sort of thing to have him genuinely angry or hateful at someone, as even Anupt/Anubis who took part in his death doesn’t hold his ire. Also he prefers to be identified as a male in spite of his current form.


    Relationships

    Den: Great founder, I have restored thy kingdom, Now I will restore your honor, watch I will live, and may you be exalted by my acts.
    Meleager: A life tied to a thread then, well still, It's good to see that I wasn’t wrong then. If you achieved as such then maybe I wasn’t mad at all.
    Ozymandias: I see, then Egypt lives on. No, it’s fine I’m glad though, that I see it still holds such powerful leaders uyet, it makes me happy.
    Gilgamesh: The eyes that have seen through all, so is that what lies at life’s end? The fruit of enlightenment in all worldly affairs?
    Sigurd: That swordsmanship, that magecraft, such skill ... What kind of life would one walk to hold such power.

    Iskander: The King of Conquerors, was it you that my descendants looked towards and dreamed of, I cannot deny it, your life does hold great skill.
    Charles Babbage: (squells) Steam, Steam everywhere, a world brought forth by one’s determination. I think I’m getting faint.
    Thomas Edison: Inventor, ah, let me see, let me see! Hungh? Who are they and wait, this invention, all I see is a sheet of paper?!
    Oda Nobunaga: Innovation, the path of a warlord, I see. I cannot deny your success, but still that flame ... How many innocent people did it burn?


    Parameters:
    Strength – B
    Endurance – D
    Agility – D (B or A on mount)
    Mana – A
    Luck – B
    Noble Phantasm – A

    Class Skills
    Riding [A+]- At this Rank Rider is able to ride even the likes of phantasmal or divine beasts with this skill, only dragon kind is unable to be ridden.
    Magic Resistance [C]- Cancels spells with chants less than two verses and resists lesser rituals. Cannot protect against greater rituals and High-Thaumaturgy.


    Personal Skills
    Beloved by Anuput [EX]- In life despite being born with a twisted spine, a cleft palate, (both of which the former had their symptoms managed via magecraft), a flat right foot missing one of the phalanges, a clubbed left foot, a condition where he developed as a female rather than a male (Complete AIS) and doomed to be fated to die (as predicted by his associates) at a young age, most would have given up and lived in luxury of all their days or given in and perished, yet still Rider lived on and strove to live out life. Once his father died, Rider set out to fix his mistakes, hiding his condition for the masses as to not worry them, hunting and living each day as best he could and doing his best to rebuild the bridges his father had burned with powerful individuals and groups.

    In doing so it can be said Rider earned the love of Anubis/Anuput (technically according to them they are the same being, it’s just it can manifest as either gender) and in as a result she dragged the man towards his inevitable death by sending upon him her blessings (which the blessings of the dead and dark resting upon one who represents the authority of Horus upon the world who is of the light and sun, pretty much made his condition worse). With malaria infecting and weakening him, he later was run over by a chariot and died that day. Upon his death Anuput was waiting with a ship owned by Osiris himself to escort the young Pharaoh to his judgement.

    In function this skill denotes that Rider weakens slightly in sunlight (if manifested at the time his mana cost increases for all noble phantasms and the ship of the moon weakens, as well as his strength and endurance parameters decreasing) and he is technically more vulnerable to disease (he already has a conceptual weakness to them, and due to his curse they are drawn towards him). However there is a caveat to the ladder weakness to disease due to Anuput’s domain partly including disease he is immune to all disease and poison beneath the level of divine beasts or gods (A rank in strength). This also grants Rider the ability to call upon the Ship of the Moon owned by Osiris which holds immense power.

    Weak Constitution [C-]- Due to having had a large amount of conditions in life Rider still suffers from the effects of some of them in his rebirth primarily that his feet often hurt (due to arthritic conditions, despite being perfectly formed), that he gets a sore back (also due to his spine being bent in life), occasional fits of headaches and fits from a potential brain condition, and the fact that he is a girl (normally this was due to him having had complete AIS, however now he believes that although that may be partly the case, he also thinks it may be partly Anuput’s blessing effect how he has manifested).

    However due to his high luck and his battle continuation skill alongside imperial privilege he is able to mostly power though these events if is is able to focus, pushing past pain or waiting for the condition to subside (thankfully these conditions don’t interfere with him in battle much aside from him suffering severe headaches and fits). In this way it could be said that due to his will to live he is able to move past his condition through sheer force of will.

    Battle Continuation [B]- A skill which represents the will to not give up and keep moving forward. Despite having been sickly his entire life, Rider wished to make the most of his life, in doing so, he rebuilt his kingdom after his father’s mistakes, was loved for it, and even worshiped as a god in life, despite tradition to worship pharaohs only in death. This ability allows him to mostly power through his fits from his conditions with minor to moderate difficulty if he’s not distracted, grants him the ability to act for a time after a decisive or normally fatal blow (rather useful as caster with his healing chalice) and reduces the chance at which injuries are fatal to him.

    Divinity [A]- Due to having held high divinity due to his bloodline, this was even further increased due to his acts in life, which lead to him being worshipped even while alive. At this level he has reached the throne of the gods, holds incredibly high affinity with divine spirits, and can break through skills like enlightenment of the sacred fig or protection of faith.

    Imperial Privilege [C]- Perhaps due to his young age, his desires to not follow in his father’s footsteps, and his wishes to live his life to the fullest without trampling oil the lives of others needlessly, this skill is much weaker than it normally would be. Yet Rider still holds it, possibly due to his own desire to carve his own path and do as he believed was right or necessary, in spite of the law or beliefs otherwise. Specifically skills related to arts, clairvoyance, tactics, strategy, finance, accounting, magecraft, medicine (he researched the former two for seeing if he could find a cure for his condition) and rulership can all be gained by Rider.


    Noble Phantasms

    5 Bows of Tutankamun, the Deadly gaze of Horus - B
    Rider’s great skill in archery turned into a noble phantasm, normally this would take the form of a series of nine bows (as archer) and be stronger (by 1 rank), yet due to being summoned as Rider it is limited in strength. This noble phantasm forms up to 5 bows and lets loose a storm of up to a max of 1500 arrows (it it were all 9, it would be 2700 arrows), due to each arrow generally not being stronger than a B rank normal attack enough to maybe just take down a human (from his age).

    Now this can be lock onto one target to “drown” them in arrows and have them chased down by the machine gun like fire or used on a large area or group of foes. This skill exists not just due to the anecdotes of Tutankhamen’s nine bows of Egypt, but also his skill in hunting and archery (he was buried with a lot of bows and was depicted with a bow in a chariot), and the fact that (at least in this story) he made some of the bows he was buried with (which are by rights strong mystic codes with the power of weak noble phantasms) himself. Another way of viewing this power is that the Pharaoh’s were seen as the avatars or children of Horus, as such his gaze lies upon them, in this way the arrows he fires can be likened to the gaze of Horus which strikes fear and death into the foes of Egypt.
    Anti-Unit, Anti-Army
    1 person, 1500 people

    The Metal Trumpets, The war horns which announce The Pharaoh’s Arrival - B - A+
    The oldest war horns in the world owned by Rider and placed in his tomb, due to his great fame of riding chariots and the boast of the sun which his ancestor is famous for he is able to blow into one of the horns and a vessel will appear for him to ride, this can be a chariot (which may be able to ride perfectly across sand, propel itself without a horse, may have a minor defensive field on it which causes it to automatically steer out of the way of obstacles, and may even have an autopilot). Each of the vessels provide roughly a boost in his agility to B or A rank (only the “solar” ship can fly, and is the most capable in terms of actual weaponry (it has a sun cannon/laser/bow), but the highest cost of energy to maintain (although during the day it’s able to recharge on solar energy as well as mana)). If they are destroyed normally they don’t come back, however they could in theory be fixed by a caster class servant.

    Due to not having his own solar ship he can choose which solar ship he uses (most generally he uses the more recent solar ships (although he cannot use Ozymandias’ as that belongs to him due to his association with Ra). However if absolutely dived to the limit he can call upon his best ship, Khufu, for Khufu was more than just a normal boat, indeed it was a replication of the Barque of Osiris, yet it lack the divine power the original held (still due to it’s mystery and power it is absurdly strong), yet due to Rider holding the blessing on Anubis/Anuput, his ship can be granted her blessing thus making it the Osiris Khufu, which boasts power equal to the Mesektet, divine protection, flight, power over disease, souls, and the dead (plus the ability to regenerate energy from the moonlight and fire beams of “darkness and death which siphon the life from foes (essentially think a heat absorbing beam rather than heat ray).

    Perhaps because of this fact Rider refers to the ship as the boat of the moon, due to the fact that if Meseket is the ship of Ra, which shines with warmth, life, and light, then he holds the ship of the moon, that which delivers the dead, and steals warmth, takes life, and shines beneath the darkness of the night (it is literally able to spread disease and death and fire a cold beam which takes away light and warmth, can fire energy blasts, and it grows stronger during the moonlight (it allows it to use moonlight to reduce the cost of operating it).
    Anti-Unit, Anti Army
    1 to 400 people

    Anuput Ammit Tut, the judgement of jackal who bears the Pharaoh’s curse - A+
    It is said that a great many strange events happened when trying to search for and open Rider’s Tomb, first, a falcon, the symbol of Horus, protector of the pharaohs was spotted in the west, which was in old Egyptian times taken as a sign, for a bird to be in the west was a warning, a warning that in their case, they may be prying or tampering with matters or places that they have little right, and that the eyes of the gods were upon them. The next sign was that a canary was eaten by a cobra, which had snuck into Carter's own house and eaten the bird, the cobra was a symbol of the Egyptian monarchy and was worn upon the crowns which adorned pharaoh’s heads. Another warning was sent that their meddling was neither wanted nor unseen.

    After the tomb was finally opened, soon after in a spurt of bad luck, Lord Carnarvon accidentally cut a mosquito bite, which then caused his blood to become infected (paralleling how Rider may have died of Malaria in life or at least was very ill with it) later perishing as a result. However, before his death, supposedly Arthus Weigall gave Carnarvon 6 weeks to live, in 6 weeks he was dead. Sir Arthur Conan Doyle himself blamed beings of fantasy and myth for a role in Carnarvon’s death. After that Lord Carnavorn’s financial backer George Herbert also died within little more than 4 months after the tomb’s opening, of yet another infected mosquito bite. By the 16th of May 1923, George Jay Gourd the 1st, who toured the tomb developed a fever and died.

    In 1925, Bruce Ingram was supposedly given a mummified hand and bracelet from the tomb by Carver. This act was done in spite of a warning speaking of fire, water, and pestilence descending upon anyone who dared moved the Pharaoh’s body. Following this foolish act Ingram’s house was burned down, then flooded after he had rebuilt it. In 1926, Howard Carter saw Jackals, much like the Anubis statue for the first time in his 35 years of work in the desert and before 1940 he died of cancer. In 1928, A. C. Mace died from arsenic poisoning a few years after having helped excavate the tomb. Carter’s own secretary died on November 15 of 1929, after being smothered by an unknown assassin or group. However, in spite of this great debate still remains, and no proof ever emerged of the Pharaoh's curse being ever proven or disproven.
    In effect this allows Rider to call a statue of Anubis and forms a bounded field, then is able to set it so that any people of certain groups (traditionally 9 as that number holds the most mystery and significance in terms of defense against foes in Egyptian mystery (as in the 9 bows)). Much like the curses brought forth upon them by Moses by crossing this threshold or violating certain terms within it, the luck of those within is very badly affected, most normal humans or magi would die in mere hours of horrible accidents and coincidences, against beings like spirits or servants they would suffer a massive drop on luck (2 or 3 ranks if the don’t have divinity or divine protection) and a large variety of effects may occur.

    The variety of these effects include animals like may turn on them (particularly serpents, crocodiles, scorpions, hippos, birds of prey, wolves and blood sucking insects), being haunted by illusions or nightmares, spirits of animals and Egyptian warriors may manifest and attack them randomly, natural disasters may occur due to mystery suddenly surging in the local environment, and even they may be best by toxins (airborne or from wounds they sustain), mental interference, and such. This generally will last for around as long as Rider desires, until the energy burns itself out, or those targeted die or are forgiven of their crimes. This noble phantasm is particularly effective against those who have committed great crimes against Anubis (meddling with the dead, tampering with life, trying to avoid death, etc.) and have a villainous nature.
    Barrier, Anti-Army
    300 people


    Other Noble phantasms (what he would have in other classes)


    As an Archer his bow would get stronger and his war horn and chariots would become weaker.

    Meteoric Iron dagger, a call towards the stars - B+
    A ritual dagger, of ancient origins (going back to at least 2000 BCE according to Tutankhamun), used for a simple, yet ingenious purpose, by infusing and sacrificing the Ka of a person (to which purposes it was designed of like a dagger used in the opening of the mouth ceremony and made of a material from the stars and made of iron (also thought of as celestial), both of which may have been to allow for the mystery of the blade to be very powerful in the abilities it had (as the gods dwelled among the heavens alongside the stars, so by using materials from the heavens they like the gods may be able to manipulate the Ka of a person).

    The item was meant to be used to infuse their Ka into a phantasmal beast, literally creating a chimera of a beast with a human intellect, it is unknown if this actually worked or not, however when using it upon a sacrifice it summons a phantasmal beast, either a sphinx or perhaps even if the caster is powerful enough a Ammit. After doing this the summoner can give the creatures basic commands and have them follow his orders. These creatures become even more dangerous within the territory Caster establishes with them even gaining regeneration (but not true immortality) in his temple.
    Anti-Unit
    1 person

    Lotus Chalice, the renewal of the pact - A
    A noble phantasm which allows one to perform a sacrifice to it and doing so would restore one’s health and condition (with the more hurt one is the larger the sacrifice needed), and even restore one’s youth. It may have been used according to Rider by his ancestors to extend their lives, however he upon learning that to cure his conditions would have to sacrifice several humans, refused to do so, arguing that in doing so, not only may he condemn his Ka by staining it with such evil, he would also stoop to the level of stealing the lives of others merely so he himself could live.

    He would live life to its fullest, yet he would never deny that right upon others, even if it would grant him more time. Rider also speculates it may have been inspired by what was used in “a certain ritual in Fuyuki”, except instead of granting a wish, it “acted as a means of communing with the divine and reviving their aid/favor in exchange for a task or gift”. Doing so however, one could theoretically break even strong curses upon them, dispel powerful illusions, even cast powerful rituals on the scale of anti-army attacks (summoning fire, insects, floods, beasts, etc.). Thanks to his high divinity and relationship with Anuput this noble phantasm has boosted in strength.
    Anti-unit (self), covenant, Anti-Army, Anti-Thaumaturgy
    1 to 500 people


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    So, here he is, sorry on the wait, but here is Rider aka Tutankhamun himself. I initially came up with the idea after researching the guy and seeing that despite having a history almost as long as Mesopotamia if not longer than it, Egypt had little representation in Typemoon (at least the canon works) which I found weird given how good a lot of pharaohs would probably be as servants. Anyways I won't stay too long (post is long enough as is), send any feedback and I will try to get back to you.

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    Assassin of Two Tails

    "Hail, Master! I am Assassin, your Servant. Perhaps you are not that impressed? Well, I assure you, you will find then that your share is not so bad after all."


    Class: Assassin
    Alignment: True/Neutral
    Region: France/japan
    Height: 156cm
    Weight: 55kg
    Likes: Freedom, mice, Master
    Dislikes: Small spaces, being in debt, unnecessary violence
    Talent: Lying
    Armaments: Claws, ghostly fire
    Natural Enemy: Dogs, ogres

    Stats

    Str: E
    End: D
    Agi: A
    Mna: C
    Lck: A
    NP: B

    Skills


    Class Skills

    Presence Concealment(N/A): This is Skill is lost in favor of the Espionage Skill.

    Personal Skills

    Espionage(B): A Skill that does not conceal one’s presence, but rather makes one presence fail to register as hostile. This Skill causes others to misunderstand Assassin's status, including mistaking her for a kind neighbor, a harmless pebble, or as the most beloved person. The effect is lost once the user attacks.

    Golden Rule(Gratitude)(A+): A Skill representing Assassin's ability to gather money, not to herself, but to her master. The effect is boosted if she genuinely feels a need to repay her Master in some way.

    Animal Dialogue(C): Communication of intention with animals that do not speak The "language of words". However, even though Assassin herself was originally an animal, she rejected much of this part of her nature, leading to the skill being degraded. Complex nuances can not be conveyed, but usually, she is still able to reach a mutual understanding.

    Ghostly Fire(B): A Skill born from the supernatural abilities Assassin inherited from the Phantom she was fused with. It allows her to manipulate what is called Hitodama, a special blue flame that is not as hot as normal fire but carries with it a powerful curse, leaving burns that cannot be healed through magecraft and lowering the targets Luck stat. Assassin can use the flames to perform ranged attacks, in the form of fireballs, or coat her limbs with it, increasing the strength of her Physical attacks.



    Noble Phantasm


    Exaltation of My Master
    Marquis De Carabas

    Rank: Support, B

    A Noble Phantasm that represents Assassin as a Servant whose job is to help her Master go from a
    Lower Being
    peasent
    to a
    Higher Being
    Prince
    . An unusual Noble Phantasm, not design to be used by Assassin, but rather the one who summoned her.
    From the moment Assassin activates its effects, her current Master will cease being a normal human and be elevated to an existence similar in nature to a Servant. All of their Physical attributes will be increased to Servant level in accordance with their natural predisposition and previous abilities will be transformed to reach the Level of a Skill. This means that, for example, someone who casts Curses would receive the Skill Witchcraft, someone with a talent for gambling would receive the Skill Golden Rule, etc...
    Once it is in place, the process becomes irreversible and permanent. Because of that, Assassin will usually ask for expressed permission before using this Noble Phantasm, although that is not necessary.



    Background


    Assassin's identity is that of the titular character in the fairytale
    The Master Cat
    Le Maitre Chat
    , more commonly known as The Puss in Boots. She was originally a Phantom who could not be normally summoned a Servant, so to be able to manifest, her Spirit Origin combined with myths of the Japanese youkai
    Two-tailed Cat
    Nekomata
    which caused changes in her saint graph.
    Assassin's tale opens with the third and youngest son of a miller receiving his inheritance—a cat. At first, the youngest son laments, as the eldest brother gains the mill, and the middle brother gets the mules. The feline is no ordinary cat, however, but one who requests and receives a pair of boots. Determined to make her master's fortune, the cat bags a rabbit in the forest and presents it to the king as a gift from her master, the fictional Marquis of Carabas. The cat continues making gifts of game to the king for several months, for which she is rewarded.
    One day, the king decides to take a drive with his daughter. The cat persuades her master to remove his clothes and enter the river in which their carriage passes. The cat disposes of her master's clothing beneath a rock. As the royal coach nears, the cat begins calling for help in great distress. When the king stops to investigate, the cat tells him that her master the Marquis has been bathing in the river and robbed of his clothing. The king has the young man brought from the river, dressed in a splendid suit of clothes, and seated in the coach with his daughter, who falls in love with him at once.
    The cat hurries ahead of the coach, ordering the country folk along the road to tell the king that the land belongs to the "Marquis of Carabas", saying that if they do not he will cut them into mincemeat. The cat then happens upon a castle inhabited by an ogre who is capable of transforming himself into a number of creatures. The ogre displays his ability by changing into a lion, frightening the cat, who then tricks the ogre into changing into a mouse. The cat then pounces upon the mouse and devours it. The king arrives at the castle that formerly belonged to the ogre, and, impressed with the bogus Marquis and his estate, gives the lad the princess in marriage. Thereafter, the cat enjoys life as a great lord who runs after mice only for his own amusement.
    Although originally Assassin's appearance was that of a normal cat wearing boots, such form would make her identity very obvious. As such, she has made use of a specific trend in the current culture that apparently is connected to the legends of Nekomata and changed herself into the image of a "Catgirl" to better hide her identity.



    Personality


    Assassin always acts in a clumsy and ditzy way. She tries to give off the impression of being just a "cute and inoffensive cat". However, her true nature is that of a very smart and cunning trickster who rarely shows her true face.
    The only thing she does not fake is her loyalty to her Master. She values freedom and likes open space because she is still a wild animal at heart, but she is a loyal Servant and will never abandon her Master.
    She is not above tricking people, but cannot handle being in debt to others. Assassin will generally do her best to repay the kindness that is given to her, so long as it does not cause problems to her Master, that is.

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    An quite good servant Zero and the noblephantasm she have is a good idea i must say.

    In return what do you think of my Milon ?
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    He is somewhat interesting, can't really say much more than that.


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    Rider of Nightmare

    Servant, Rider. Consider this a formal contract"


    Class: Rider
    Alignment: True/neutral
    Region: Scandinavia
    Height: 145cm
    Weight: 48kg
    Likes: Money, practicing her craft, smart people
    Dislikes: Liars, prideful kings, dumb people
    Talent: Witchcraft
    Armaments: Darkness
    Natural Enemy: King Vanlandi

    Stats

    Str: C
    End: C
    Agi: C
    Mna: A
    Lck: B
    NP: C

    Skills


    Class Skills

    Magic Resistance(A): Cancel spells of A-Rank or below. In practice, the Servant is untouchable to modern magi, so it would not be an exaggeration to title the Servant a "Magus Killer". Caster's Natural rank is C, but she can artificially increase it through her own Magecraft.

    Riding(A): All creatures but those of Phantasmal Beast and Divine Beast-rank can be used as mounts. This rank is high enough to have an aptitude for the Rider Class.

    Item Construction(C): Class Skill of the Caster Class. The Servant is Capable of creating magical items, tools, and potions of up to a C rank. Gained through Double Summon.

    Territory Creation(B): Class Skill of the Caster Class. At this level, the creation of a Workshop becomes possible. Gained through Double Summon.

    Personal Skills

    Double summon(C): A skill that allows servants to have characteristics of two different Classes. Rider gains access to the Skills of the Caster class, but at a lower capacity.

    Affection of the Gods(C): A Skill that denotes one being loved by a male god. In Rider's case, it is the affection of Odin, the All-father, of whom she was a Mistress that bore two daughters. It grants a single rank-up to her Strength and Endurance stats, and increases the power of all spells she casts.

    Witchcraft(A): A Skill that signifies one as a practitioner of Witchcraft. This magecraft has roots in both the eastern and western worlds. Rider's Style of Magecraft is an old Shamanistic tradition from Scandinavia called Seidr. It allows one to peer into the future, Curse others to misfortune, disguise their own shape, and dispel other types of Magecraft.



    Noble Phantasm


    Night of the Mare
    Martrodth

    Rank: Anti-unit, C

    Caster's Noble Phantasm and Mount. A Horrific creature said to visit men in their sleep to trample over them, its name is the origin of the term Nightmare.
    Although called a "Mare", it's form doesn't need necessarily to be that of an equine, and they are not even an actual member of the Phantasmal Species. Their true nature is that of a "Curse in physical form", and their appearance is more easily described as a shapeless lump of darkness. Although they do assume the form of a horse while being ridden, they can also change into other forms depending on the situation, like chains for restraining purposes or blades to use in melee combat.
    Because they are a Curse in physical form, beings with a high degree of Magical Resistance have an innate advantage against this being. They also seem to be weak to Holy Sacraments and light-based attacks in general.



    Background


    Rider's name is Huld. She is a character of Scandinavian Mythology mentioned in the Ynglinga saga, Sturlunga saga, and in late medieval Icelandic tales. A völva or seiðkona, that is a woman who practiced the seiðr, Caster was a mistress of Odin, the All-father, and the mother of the demi-goddesses Thorgerthr and Irpa. She may be l the same being as the Huldra and the German Holda.
    In the Ynglinga saga it is related that she was first hired to kill the Swedish king Vanlandi, by his wife Drífa. Caster cast a curse on him, and he became drowsy and laid himself down to sleep, she then set a
    Nightgmare
    Mare
    on him fo trample him to death, first breaking his legs, them crushing his skull.
    Later, she was hired by Vanlandi's grandchildren to kill his son Visbur, but she refused on account of not wanting ill-fortune to befall her for helping in a murder between the same kin.



    Personality


    Rider is a serious and impersonal person. She sees her summoning as a contract to fulfill, and will usually treat her Master with the coldness of an impersonal business relationship.
    However, she is attracted to knowledge and intelligence. A smart Master has a decent chance of bonding with her, should they try. Users of unorthodox or unique Magecraft may also attract her attention.
    But, in the end, she still will always put her self interests at first. There is absolutely no occasion where Rider would sacrifice herself by free will, even if she has a strong bond with her Master.



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    A couple weeks ago, Yu Mei-ren's mats got released and translated, which lead me to complain about Urobuchi's bullshit in another website, and as you can tell, halfway through it I got a Servant idea that I could try to expand upon. I equal parts love and hate how canon-compliant the most ridiculous parts of this Servant are, but this was a very fun little challenge nonetheless.

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    Momotarou

    Class: Saber
    Source: Japanese folk tales
    Region: Japan
    Gender: Male
    Alignment: Lawful Good
    Height: 178cm
    Weight: 55kg

    Strength: B+
    Endurance: A++
    Agility: C
    Magic: A+
    Luck: C
    Noble Phantasm: B

    Class Skills
    Magic Resistance: A

    Negates all magecraft ranked A or lower.
    Modern mages are practically unable to harm him.

    Riding: E

    Momotarou is theoretically able to ride animals but prefers to have them as independent partners on the battlefield.


    Personal Skills
    Incarnated Elemental: A

    Due to the Elemental’s ability to share Mana with Nature, he’s able to draw from the world’s inexhaustible supply of magical energy instead of what’s stored in his body. However, as long as he’s limited by his humanoid form, his infinite supply is tied to a limited output. The actual amount of mana he can put into use remains within the limits of humanoid Heroic Spirits.

    Vampirism: C

    He’s able to to plunder a fixed amount of energy from any lifeform (be it animal, plant or whatever else). This is technically not bloodsucking, but this ability made his species be seen as vampires and persecuted by generations of Executors.

    Animal Dialogue: B


    He’s able to come to a mutual understanding with animals who don’t have language. This doesn’t make the animals any more intelligent, so complex nuances may be missed on them. Due to his nature as spirit of nature, Momotarou could develop strong bonds of companionship with his trio of animal followers.

    Natural Body (Xian): A

    A composite between Natural Body and Xian Yumin.
    Momotarou is described in his legends an unusually healthy and energetic young boy, born with strength beyond the human limit. The regenerative immortality of the Tianxian species is reinforced by this fame, giving a boost to his Strength and Endurance parameters.


    Noble Phantasm
    Sword of Second Chances
    Kaishintou


    Rank: C
    Type: Anti-Unit Noble Phantasm
    Range: 1
    Max. Targets: 1 person

    As he departed to exterminate the onis in Onigashima, Momotarou received two items from the couple who raised him. The old man gave him a weapon. The katana he used during his grand battle. Not a low-quality blade by any means but still just an ordinary sword until the story of Momotarou was attached to it.

    Momotarou’s legend has him overpowering the onis but ultimately choosing to settle issues peacefully and offering the onis a chance for redemption instead of slaying them. Imbued with this anecdote, the katana gained the ability to inflict mighty super effective damage against the Oni kind, while simultaneously making this damage never lethal.
    In other words, this sword has the power to keep onis hanging at 1HP.

    Three vassals fed kibidango
    Inusarukiji


    Rank: B
    Type: Anti-Army Noble Phantasm
    Range: 90
    Max. Targets: 30 people

    As he departed to exterminate the onis in Onigashima, Momotarou received two items from the couple who raised him. The old woman gave him a sachet containing 3 kibidangos. As an immortal with no real need for food, Momotarou decided the 3 hungry animals he found along the way should be eating the dangos in his stead. The dog, monkey and pheasant fed by him decided to repay his kindness by accompanying him in his dangerous journey. This Noble Phantasm takes the form of the 3 kibidangos that can be exchanged for summons of his legendary partners as familiars.

    In his raid of Onigashima, Momotarou made best use of his animal friends by using the pheasant for aerial surveillance, making the monkey climb the walls and unlock the gates from inside, then have the dog rushing inside as the leading attacking force. As the trio was upgraded from normal animals to Heroic Spirit familiars, they had their physical abilities vastly increased, fangs/peck sharpened and were equipped with high Rank skills to allow them to still perform their tasks in Servant-level battles.
    Namely, the monkey got Presence Concealment, the pheasant got Territory Infringement and the dog got Magic Resistance.


    Character
    Personality:

    A young-looking man with a strong conviction. He’s emphatic and diplomatic to a troublesome degree. Due he’s most famous experience with impulsiveness, he now only gets into action after he takes his time to decide what’s the best ending possible for everyone involved, and often overcomplicates problems that could easily be solved through defeating the enemy. He’s perfectly aware that he’s choosing to take the difficult path but he’s too confident in his beliefs that unconditional kindness can bring different people together to ever waver.

    In the down time, he acts a lot more like the clueless, lively, and fun-loving brat he’s usually portrayed as in his legends. Being raised in a humble lumberjack family in a rural family, Momotarou learned to find enjoyment in the most trivial things and finds more complex forms of entertainment often hard to understand, but he’s always willing to try.

    He’s a big fan of how modern media portrays onis as tragic villains, as he feels it’s making up for the bad reputation his own story brought them.

    Motivations and attitude towards the Master:

    Momotarou is very likely to cooperate with any Master’s objective, but has a fair chance of not cooperating with the Master’s intended methods. That is because he is determined to solve all conflicts in a way that benefits both sides, or at least doesn’t permanently damages either. He’s perfectly willing allow himself or his Master to take the “losing” side of deal if it means not destroying the opposing side. Of course, he’s not a Berserker, so he won’t be too unreasonable about it, but he still does what he can to stick to his convictions.

    He has no wish for the Grail. His dream is the eternally peaceful coexistence between Gaia and Alaya, but he knows that’s far beyond the Grail’s reach. Instead, he strives for this goal the slow and hard way, helping whoever is in need until a comfortable balance between the two sides is reached, no matter how many millenia it takes.

    Dialogue examples:

    “I really miss my human family. We live a simple life and felt like this was all we needed. Grandpa and Grandma could tell I was not like them and even then were kind enough to share the little they had with me. They are not in the Throne of Heroes, but I believe they represent best what a real hero should be. “

    “I’m now a guardian of Human Order but I can’t help empathizing with the other side. No matter what happens, I still want to believe we don’t need to hurt each other. ”

    “Yeah, I know very well how bothersome my conviction can be. But I assure it’s a lot better than pointlessly second-guessing who you’re supposed to protect. ”

    “You know, it’s sorta bothering me know that I never gave names to the dog, the monkey and the pheasant. Any suggestions, Master?”


    Lore
    Historical character and figure:

    Momotarou’s tale starts when an elderly lady is doing her regular laundry and happens to find what seemed to be a giant peach floating across the river. She took the unusual fruit home to share it with her husband, but for their surprise, it contained a human-looking boy instead of a seed. Despite their age and financial conditions, the elderly couple agreed to raise the boy as their grandson, naming him Momotarou after the fruit he came from.

    Unbeknownst to them, the peach that gave birth to Momotarou was a fruit of the legendary Fusang Tree of Chinese myth, a mechanism used by the Planet to spread its Counter Force. These incarnations of the Fusang Tree are called by many names: Tianxian, Zhenren, Yumin; but the world of magecraft refers to his kind as True Ancestor, the planet’s sense of touch. Since these Elementals are born without awareness of their nature, Momotarou was raised as a normal boy with some abnormal abilities.

    Momotarou lived a humble but happy and fulfilling life with his human grandparents for a few years, until his village started getting ravaged by onis. Furious with the situation, Momotarou decides to exterminate the onis at their own fortress in Onigashima. During his travel, he meets a monkey, a pheasant and dog, who choose to accompany him in his journey after being fed the kibidango given by Momotarou’s grandmother as a parting gift.
    Momotarou stormed Onigashima and succeeded in overpowering the ungodly beings, but ultimately decided to offer them a chance of redemption instead of exterminating them as he was determined to do in the beginning of his journey. By moving away from his human connections and reaching the land of the inhumans, Momotarou began to slowly realize his role in the planet’s nature. He was a being not made to protect humanity from its surroundings, but to protect his surroundings from humanity. The damage was mostly already done by the time his nature started conflicting with his nurture, so Momotarou settled the conflict by making the defeated oni give away some of their treasures as compensation for the village’s damages and agree to stay away from human territory.

    Momotarou stayed with his family until the end of their lifespans. Afterwards, he wandered away from the village and tried to contemplate alone how to reconciliate the love he felt for the humans in his life with his duties as an Elemental. The answer to his dilemma came as his karma caught up to him. The inhuman who once hunted inhumans pretending to be a protector of humanity was hunted by true protectors of humanity: the Holy Church’s Executors. Unlike the onis of Onigashima, Momotarou was far stronger than his pursuers and could easily defeat them if he wanted to, but having experienced the other side of this conflict before, he was incapable to bring himself to fight back.

    Reminded of his previous version of this conflict, Momotarou started seeing his hasty last-minute decision of settling things peacefully with the oni as the right thing to do and proposed as similar deal with the Executors. He was part of Gaia’s Counter Force and had attained a fair share of fame within the human realm, which made him easily capable of switching sides to Alaya’s Counter Force. With the Holy Church’s approval, Momotaro joined the Throne of Heroes.

    Related characters:

    Yu Mei-ren:
    “Oh, there’s another incarnated Elemental who chose to switch sides to Human Order? What a pleasant surprise. Humans are so nice, right? I’d love to hear about your experiences with… What? What’s that face? Did I do anything bad?”

    Qin Shi Huang:
    “Oh, another True Ancestor in the Throne of Heroes. I wonder how many of us switched sides?... Huh? You’re actually human? Oh, I see. (So this one switched to Alaya before they even grew their awareness as Gaia’s Counter Force... How does that even work?) ”

    Shutendouji:
    In his current position, he doesn’t know if he should apologize for his previous violence or feel retroactively justified about it.

    Spartacus:
    Momotarou's diametrical opposite. They both dream of the same peace and freedom, and have the conviction necessary to take the hardest path towards it, but they couldn't be more incompatible in their methods and beliefs. One is convinced that freedom is at the end of a spiral of conflict where oppressed are always become the next oppressors, while the other believes conflict should be foregone altogether. Momotarou sees him as the most complicated case he could ever handle.
    "Ugh... I didn't know my kind was able to get headaches."

    Cú Chullain, Toyotomi Hideyoshi and Beni-Enma:
    “Hello. I was told the three of you love kibidango. I can make some to share with you with want.
    …what, did I say something weird?”

    Yagyuu Munenori:
    Momotarou tried to approach him as a replacement for his old human grandfather but sadly found out they couldn’t be more different in personality.


    Author notes
    I’m glad Momotarou is such a kiddie tale that they don’t make Momotarou kill the oni. I don’t think I’d have a character without that.

    The personality section was the hardest to write because I sorta already covered mostly all of that everywhere else.

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    He's just putting the bone of his sword into other people until it explodes and lets out parts of him inside them.
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    Hey! I did the Voyager probe first!

    Kinda, sorta, maybe... >_>

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    But 34 predicted the Voyager of the Stars Skill and got the canon personality completely right.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Comun View Post
    But 34 predicted the Voyager of the Stars Skill and got the canon personality completely right.
    the unique Feeling when you made an Canon servant before the official creators did. And your Momotarou is lso quite good i must say i bet he could make a good servant for an fanstory.

    and i asked this a while ago ,would you have Comun some suggestions for me for a Kashin Koji Caster
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    Quote Originally Posted by asterism42 View Post
    i'm cryin so proud of my favorite space probe

    i think i got most things right, but i haven't read the profile yet (hasn't been afaik)

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    Quote Originally Posted by 34 View Post
    i'm cryin so proud of my favorite space probe

    i think i got most things right, but i haven't read the profile yet (hasn't been afaik)
    Here is an Demonstration of the official Voyager 34 ! enjoy this Feeling !

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    and as we are having the Topic of Requiem have we more info About Kundry as she sounded interesting in the wiki ?
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    Quote Originally Posted by 34 View Post
    i'm cryin so proud of my favorite space probe

    i think i got most things right, but i haven't read the profile yet (hasn't been afaik)
    https://www.reddit.com/r/grandorder/...agers_profile/ TLed by Comun

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