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    I posted this sheet over on the Monthly Servant Sheet challenge and I don't think there's any rules about cross-posting your own sheet so here it is. If there is a rule, let me know and I'll delete it from here.
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    Foreigner

    “Gangster Computer God worldwide SECRET CONTAINMENT POLICY, made possible SOLELY by worldwide Computer God Frankenstein Controls, especially LIFELONG CONSTANT THRESHOLD BRAINWASH RADIO ( quiet and motionless, I can slightly hear it; repeatedly this has saved my life on the streets ). FOUR BILLION worldwide population ALL living have a Computer God CONTAINMENT POLICY BRAIN BANK BRAIN, A REAL BRAIN, in the Brain Bank Cities on the far side of the Moon, we never see”


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    Master --- Description
    True Name Francis E. Dec
    Sex Male
    Alignment Chaotic Mad
    Attribute Human
    Alias The ‘Last Human’”
    Parameters
    STR E MAG E (A)
    END E LUK D-
    AGL E NP EX


    Skills


    Class Skills
    Existence Outside the Domain E- (???) Class skill associated with Foreigners. Denotes a being that descended from the void of outer space or exists stringently outside of the human order. However, due to the unique existence of Dec’s history and insanity, the very nature of this skill is brought into question.
    Madness Enhancement A A class skill usually attributed to Berserker’s. However, due to Foreigner’s innate insanity, he has earned this skill. Yet, he lacks the typical attribute boosts seen of this class skill. While one is generally still able to communicate with him, his ability to seemingly conclude or understand anything not in relation to his “delusion” is rendered obsolete.


    Personal Skills
    Mind of the Tethered C This skill allows Foreigner to get brief insights into the thoughts of individuals (or rather briefly skim the outer layer of the consciousness of those around him) but this requires him to be “perfectly still”, allowing him to avoid any potential danger with enough forewarning but makes it so that he is at risk all the same.
    Innocent Monster B A skill possessed by Servants whose true history and existence have been distorted by the monstrous reputations and gossips they accrued across the course of their life and thereafter, without concern for the actual person's will or appearance. Francis E. Dec’s life both during and after has been attributed to his persecutory and paranoid rants over the nature of the world around him and history has deemed him as someone who’s insanity is “something to be made fun of and not taken seriously” and exploitation of Dec that came about as a result of his life. An image society only tends to remember him as without taking heed to his message hidden with the madness and only as the insanity-riddled man as he seemed to be.
    Delusions of the Last Human E~A++ A skill unique to Foreigner and yet a unique subset of the skill held by Abigail Williams' Mass Hysteria. A passive and always active skill that allows Foreigner to actively degrade the insanity of “non-humans” in his general vicinity. This effect starts off small in the beginning. Perhaps the feeling of being watched or feeling followed by unknowable forces. Then the voices began to whisper inside your head, as you become increasingly paranoid of both your surroundings and those around you. The voices get louder, you begin to see things that aren’t there, you begin to distrust those around you. Fear grips you as you realize that being outside simply isn’t safe in more. You isolate yourself as your mind begins to break down from the constant exposure and the auditory and visual hallucinations worsen as visions of a bleak future haunts you, taunts you…

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    One’s mind, unable to handle the fierce assault of madness, begins to falter under the oppressive weight of this “reality”.

    Until the mind itself becomes nothing more.


    Only those deemed as a “true human” or rather, one not under the control of the “Computer God” seemed to be immune to this skill. In the eyes of Foreigner, he is the only human left free of the sinister Computer God's control and all others are merely a puppet for said ‘evil god’ to make use of. Therefore, all humans and even Servants are in direct danger from this skill, given long enough exposure. This skills directly attacks and corrodes the minds of those associated with the “Human Order” or, in short, it makes it so that those exposed to this skill not only develop a psyche that goes against the standard human mentality and propels them into a “abnormal way of thinking” but those exposed and not able to endure corrosion are left in a vegetable state.

    A human shaped puppet with no thoughts or will of their own. In Dec’s mind, this is him simply freeing the masses from their tether to the Computer God, that it had maliciously planted within every human and was sending the thoughts and

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    sensations experienced by humans to the ‘Brain Bank’ on the Moon controlled by the Computer God, and their paranoid and eventual comatose state simply them “getting used to be being free once more”. An innocent and benevolent thought one could say, if not for the fact this act resulted in the exact opposite result.

    Servants with high levels of Magic Resistance can withstand this mental assault but even they will too begin to come under the effects of this skill given enough time. In conjunction with his Noble Phantasm, this skill becomes even more disturbing as it is able to spread to those outside of his general vicinity with those “infected” with this thought virus able to pass it on to the unsuspecting masses.


    Noble Phantasms

    Delusionary War with the Malicious God
    Secret Containment Policy


    Noble Phantasm
    Foreigner’s Noble Phantasm, which is a true crystallization of Francis E. Dec’s crusade to combat the Computer God and its influence on reality. This allows Foreigner to “cancel out” the influences, blessing, technologies or even curses of the malicious deity. Or rather, it allows Dec to neutralize Servants or individuals that have a divine, supernatural or technological background. After all, all foreign deities seen in myths and technologies used predominantly by the masses are merely “aspects or Avatars” of the Computer God itself, therefore giving him the ability to affect them as a crusader in the war to free humanity and “contain” them. Servants with the ‘evil’ attribute have their parameters further decreased.

    However, this Noble Phantasm can not be used with the significant use of magical energy or without Command Seal as it is likely that Foreigner wouldn't be able to be sent into a battlefield to use it in the first place without very convincing persuasion on the part of a Master. Another weakness of this Noble Phantasm is that it’s duration is extremely short and is not long lasting like his passive skill, meaning that a very physically abled servant with an innate high magic resistance able to resist both his NP and passive skill for a time or one from long distance can put an end to Foreigner with relative ease.
    Rank A+
    Type Anti-Conceptual
    Range 30 - 60 meters
    Max Targets 0~99
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    Your Only Hope for a Future
    The 26 Manuscripts of the Madman


    Noble Phantasm

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    Foreigner’s Noble Phantasm represents his final plans in freeing humanity and saving the ‘universe’ from the evil of the so-called “Gangster communist Computer God”. This represents his 26 manuscripts pinned by Dec in life. To awaken the mind of the masses and for them to observe the grand conspiracy taking place right before their very eyes.

    This Noble Phantasm can only be used in congruence with his passive skill, which allows for him to expand its range and allows for it to become “contagious”, passing outside of his initial limited range, affecting person to person. A thought virus in every sense of the word. And by its nature it spreads at the same efficacy and virility of any contagious virus. Spreading by distance, contact, communication, through technological means, all unknowingly by those who are infected. In Dec’s eyes, this is him finally freeing humanity and fighting back against the Computer God. But from an outsider’s perspective, this can only be seen as a wide scale attack on humanity and the Human Order itself. Turning humanity into a similar mental state as that of Foreigner in life before succumbing to a vegetative state, free of all thoughts.

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    A salvation in the sense of the word and the perfect state to allow all of humanity become 'free'.

    However, this is perhaps not even Dec’s true Noble Phantasm but has been “hijacked” in some way to further the goals of a malicious force. Whether it is born of his own mind or an outside force used to perpetuate its own agendas is unknown.
    Rank EX (?)
    Type Anti-World
    Range ---
    Max Targets 0~999



    Character




    Biography/History
    Francis E. Dec was an American lawyer and outsider writer who was best known for his typewritten diatribes that he independently mailed and published from the late 1960s onward. His works are characterized by highly accusatory and vulgar attacks against groups of people and conglomerates under the control of a vague force known as the "Mad Deadly Worldwide Communist Gangster Computer God" or Computer God for short, who had humanity under it’s complete control and only he was capable of combating it and it’s malicious assassins sent after him in an effort to silence and halt his mission from saving humanity. Henceforth living as recluse and mass-mailing wild, paranoid typewriter-keyed rants around the country and world, living in fear as a target “individual”.
    Indeed, Dec’s crusade against this malicious God is something truly worthy of being deemed as a cause worth fighting for.

    If the Computer God was real that is.

    In reality, the Computer God that Dec viewed as his enemy was nothing more than the delusions of a tragic figure struggling with extreme paranoid, delusionary schizophrenia. Unable to escape from this reality he had orchestrated for himself, and deemed himself as the “only human” left free of this illusion’s control when it was in fact he who wasn’t truly in control the entire time.

    A man afflicted by the disease of the mind, writing the experiences of his own reality he was trapped in.

    A mental illness so strongly manifested that it ravaged the mind to the point that Dec would slowly but surely become more and more isolated from the very humanity he wanted to save with his own mind. An illness so strong that it might as well, had become “reality”. Oftentimes, it is the most mundane horrors that afflict humans that often inspire fear the most.

    The loss of one’s mind.

    The fear of not knowing what is what.

    The fear of being trapped in one’s own mind can inspire true terror, especially when one doesn’t even realize it themselves.

    This is the sad and horrible existence that is Francis E. Dec, the Last Human.


    …However, several questions begin to surface.

    In particular, why has Francis E. Dec been summoned? A servant of Dec’s stature shouldn’t be capable of being summoned outside of being a Phantom and yet, he has manifested completely as a servant, albeit a physically weak one. For what purpose is he here?

    Dec would answer, “to save humanity” however his existence itself proves contrary to that very statement.

    For what reason would the Counter Force or Master manifest such a servant who’s very threat would serve as an existential threat to humanity, if left unchecked? Unless it wasn’t the Counter Force.
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    Perhaps, Dec’s mental state has truly created an enemy for him to battle against in the form of the “Computer God”?

    Or perhaps, there is a more sinister intent from an outside force behind his summoning. A possibility that this so-called Computer God is no mere delusion but is something far more malicious; set on bringing “salvation” to humanity by any means necessary. After all, while his rants were indeed insane, they held grains of truth to them relevant to the modern day as his writing speaks to a feature of technical delusions that became increasingly prominent in the second half of the twentieth century with the further advent of technology and his writings most certainly warned of this. Dec's screeds are emblematic in their careening, amplified panic over imperious yet chimerical powers that seemingly are everywhere all the time and yet can never be fully confronted or understood.

    If this is the case, who’s to say that the Computer God isn’t real?

    Perhaps merely hiding it’s true form…?

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    Personality/Character
    A man, full of potential lost to his madness. However, one can have a conversation with him to find him to be a rather intelligent, albeit paranoid individual who often goes on tangents, making his insanity all the more tragic and horrific in retrospect. Though the only way to have a conversation with him would prove dangerous to that person as coming into his range could prove costly in the long run. Especially if one were to “fall into his delusion”. Though a Master may very well be immune to this as Dec may view them as another ally who freed themselves of control of the Computer God, thus viewing the Master as a “true human” like himself

    However, in spite of his mental illness, Francis E. Dec, while he may have been seen as propaganda and plans from the Computer God that haunted his mind, he managed to inspire and entertain others by creating something worth reading, appreciating and worth remembering for decades to come while in battle with his mind itself. A feat worthy of praise and in of itself.




    Gameplay


    Gameplay


    HP: 6,789
    ATK: 5,667
    Deck: AAQQB
    NP: Arts
    Quick: 3
    Arts:4
    Buster:1
    Extra: 3
    NP: Arts


    Skills

    Mind of the Tethered C - Allows evade for 3 hits for 3 turns.
    Stuns for one turn.[Detriment]


    Innocent Monster B - Gains critical stars every turn for 3 turns.
    500% Chance to reduce own defense by 18% for 3 turns


    Delusions of the Last Human A++ --
    Skill seal 1 enemy for 2 turns
    Decrease defense by 20% at max for all enemies
    Decrease NP gauge of all enemies by 1
    Decrease defense for all allies by 10% [Detriment]
    Decrease NP gauge of all allies by 10% [Detriment]


    Noble Phantasm

    Delusionary War with the Malicious God: Secret Containment Policy
    Seals NP for 3 turns.
    Reduces defense for 3 turns(10% to 50% at max)
    Reduces attack for 3 turns (10% to 50% at max)

    Bond CE

    Bond CE

    The Potential of Man Succumbed in Madness
    Allows for Debuff Resistance for 3 turns, when equipped.


    Interactions


    Traits
    Earth, Weak to Enuma Elish, Threat to Humanity


    Voice Lines
    Character interactions

    Baggage: An obvious apostle of the Computer God. Avoid at all costs

    Frankenstein: Won’t be fooled. Won’t be taken in by the Frankenstein controls even if the Computer God put it into the form of a beautiful woman.

    Any Russian servants: Communists, therefore under the direct control of the Computer God. Avoid at all costs.

    Any other Foreigner servants: Direct ‘Avatars’ of the Computer God. Can feel it’s ‘evil’ taint on them the most. Especially avoids to make sure he isn’t assassinated.

    BB (Mooncancer): Absolutely terrified. Believes her to be the Computer God itself in a human, physical form. Dec's enemy is right before him and yet all he feel is abject terror.

    "She must be it! She must be! Just look at the way she--it's dressed?!" Dec says in relation to Mooncancer BB's second form, confusing "gyaru" for "gangster"

    Likes
    Writing, combating the Computer God in whatever way he can

    Hates
    His brother, the Computer God, anyone directly aligned with the Computer God

    About the Holy Grail
    An obvious trick by the Computer God to take a wish on the Grail so that the Frankenstein controls can enable the Computer God to take direct control of him. Has no interest as a result




    Authors Note on this Incredibly Mundane sheet

    This is my first time actually doing the Monthly servant sheet challenge so when I found out that the pretty broad theme was going to "horror" I wanted to do something the expressed what I like to call "mundane horrors" or horrors that we and those around us have to deal with eventually in our lives and ones that are common enough to be perceived as mundane but still terrifying in concept. In that regard, I chose to go with mental illness or the 'terror of the mind'. Now this sheet isn't a dig at those with mental illness mind you but personally find the idea of your mind wasting away and actively working against to be one of the most terrifying things a human can go through. The mind is what makes us who we are and for it not only go away but to actively hinder and destroy you? That's some existential dread if I ever heard it and things like Alzheimer's and schizophrenia signify that for me and yet I still wanted to show that people can still be brilliant in their own way despite that. The 2nd form of horror is in relation to how the servant itself functions and expands on the first.

    If you read the sheet, I used the term "thought virus" or i.e a "logic virus" and if you every played Halo or know any of it's lore you can realize how terrifying that is in concept and one that I hopefully managed to get across in the sheet. Mr. Dec here is basically a walking talking "thought virus" and he doesn't even realize it and actively believes he's doing good in some capacity, which is scary in of itself and that is on top of the man being trapped within his own mind. As for the Foreigner class selection, I personally always liked the class but it being limited to merely being connected to an Outer God to be rather limiting ( I know we got servants like MHXX and Voyager but still) and my definition of Foreigner has always been something that is inherently antithetical or outside the 'Human Order' itself not merely in relation to an Outer God even if that counts under that definition. So I made Francis condition is rather vague. Is the 'Computer God' merely a self constructed delusion on Francis's part or is it actually some Outer entity manipulating him behind the scenes in some respect or hell maybe a bit of both? Who knows. I'm a bit self conscious posting this given all the high quality sheets already here but screw it.

    As to why I chose Francis E. Dec? Well, he was different for one thing and I had saw a documentary on him this week actually and as I was watching I was like, "I can make a servant based on that". And I'll admit Dec and his rant is admittedly hilarious and yet poetic and very sad as well when you learn the deeper context and really illustrates how scary mental illness in my eyes can be. And while I generally had this idea knocking around in my head for the past week, I basically did this sheet in one sitting. No beta, we die like (wo)man.
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    should be fine. there is just the restriction that you cant post stuff you already made here before into a new contest, except you reworked it.

    The problem with the contest threat is that all sheets are kinda lost there, except they make top3, because there is no compilation like we do here.

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    That's the reason I put them in a blog like I've seen others do. I don't really want to flood this thread with Servants people have already seen.

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    Radiant Sun, even if it burns me to ashes.
    The eternal cage of the stars cannot compare to this freedom, this happiness.


    I cannot say anything… Even if I wanted to.
    I keep seeing everything... Even If I did not want to.




    I am not… your servant. There is… nothing I could tell about myself. This soul, this body... belongs solely to the Radiant Sun. He... will not tolerate this contract. Surely he… knows, surely he hears, surely he is watching… as always.

    Please… just give it up. Forget… that you ever summoned me… let me return… to him.



    Ah… how… cruel. To use two of your command spells to... force a contract. I am… devastated. To be my Master... you will have to bear... the pain that this... accursed body brings. I will only bring… hardship to you.

    You still have a chance... to step back... for your own good.



    If that is what you wish... then bear witness... to my... hideous form. The eyes… may it never be closed. The ears… may it never be blocked. The mouth… let it be eternally shut. The feathers… let it be eternally burned. I am… the Eyes of the Sun, the Crow of the Stars.

    I am... the Watcher-class Servant. My vision… is yours… Master.



    The cage has been destroyed. It seems like Lord Apollo kept his promise in the end. My speech feels lighter now. However, I must apologize that I am pretty much a useless Servant now. I have much to thank you, Master, for everything.

    In this temporary freedom, with the little time I have left, I have but one more selfish wish--



    Class: Watcher
    True Name: Coronis
    Gender: Female
    Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
    Origin: Greek Mythology
    Attribute: Sky

    Coronis, also known as Aegle (the shining one), was the princess of Thessaly, daughter of the Lapith King Phlegyas. Her beauty attracted the attention of Apollo, who impregnated her. A crow was placed by Apollo in surveillance of Coronis at all times, to guard her from other men. However, against Apollo’s will, Coronis had an affair with a mortal man. Made known to this affair through the crow's vision, the enraged Apollo ordered Artemis to kill the pregnant Coronis and her lover. Apollo also cursed the crow, turning its white feathers to black. After the deed was done, Apollo regretted his impulsive rage, and managed to rescue the surviving baby from Coronis’ womb on her funeral pyre. In the end, Apollo placed Coronis and the crow among the stars as the constellation Corvus.

    Parameters:
    STR: E
    END: E
    AGI: A
    MGI: D
    LCK: E
    NP: A

    Class Skills:
    Territory Infringement: B
    There are places where the sun’s light does not reach, and this skill allows Watcher to shed light even into these darkest places. In Watcher’s case this skill is not to physically infiltrate inside a bounded field, but to “perceive things as if physically inside”, in other words, only the mind is present.

    Personal Skills:
    Watcher: A
    The contract between Watcher and the Master, in this case mirroring the relation of the crow and Apollo. In essence, the Master is provided with the vision and hearing senses of an omnipotent god. However, when this augmentation is active Watcher cannot materialize a body, and vice versa.

    Eyes of the Sun: A
    The artificial Mystic Eyes which Apollo bestowed upon the crow which acted as the god’s own eyes and ears among the world of humans, a sliver of his omniscience, a portion of his Divine Authority. It is a sensory organ which brings to light the hidden and the secret, in other words, a vision that surveys everything under the sun. Essentially, by expanding and dispersing the mind in all directions, everything becomes observable. The radius is limited only to one’s magical energy. Unlike Clairvoyance, it can only observe the present, and it is embedded upon the mind, not the soul.

    Mournful Affection of the Sun God: EX
    The merging of Apollo’s crow aspect with Coronis, resulting in this Watcher Saint Graph. It is the tearful affection that resurfaced in Apollo after realizing the thoughtless action which caused the death of his beloved, provoked by a certain truth. If ever he heard of that truth again, he would certainly now rather cover his ears and close his eyes. So he said, as he dyed the crow’s feathers black, took their ability to speak on their will and put them into the cage of the stars -- can he really now once again restrain his anger?

    Divinity: A
    Blood of Ares though her father, the Lapith King, combined with the aspect of Apollo etched into her, Watcher’s Divinity has been significantly increased. It is said that she was also worshipped in the temples dedicated to her son, Asclepius.

    Noble Phantasms:
    Lapithai Korone
    Silence, My Charred Feathers
    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: B-
    The shining feather of vigilance was transformed into a dark feather carrying misfortune. The cursed feathers of the bird now associated with spreading misfortune. This Noble Phantasm is the combination of the curse Apollo used to kill Coronis, and the curse which turned the crow’s feathers black.

    Because it is a curse burned directly into Watcher’s body, whenever she materializes, this Noble Phantasm will also activate, affecting anyone in her surroundings, including her Master. The curse is applied in the form of a disease that slowly burns one’s skin and organs, spreading from one person to another, mirroring one of Apollo’s authority. The curse initially lowers their luck by two ranks, and will then slowly further develop into deadly physical afflictions and eventually death, becoming more severe as long as they are kept under Watcher’s vigilance.

    This curse can also be applied to a maximum effect by transforming the cursed feather, the charred soul of Apollo’s crow, as a weapon. However, as Watcher herself is not a fighter, this method cannot be practically used, at least not by herself. Of course, a Master skilled enough in melee combat might be able to wield and utilize it far more effectively, especially combined with Watcher’s sensory augmentation.

    Phoebus Corvus
    Message of Grief to the Sun
    Type: Anti-Army
    Rank: A+
    The shining maiden received the sun’s love, and was placed at all times under his vigilance. Even now, she remains trapped by the sun’s will in the cage of the stars. This Noble Phantasm is her lament and protest, the confession of the truth which Apollo denies--in other words, it is a rejection letter.

    Watcher sends away the accursed crow to deliver a message towards the sun, returning the Authority Apollo has given her with it. In response, a rain of arrows full of destructive rage and grief is unleashed to a large area around Watcher’s location, recreating the tragedy of the past. Even in the extremely unlikely chance that she somehow managed to survive, using this Noble Phantasm will result in Watcher losing her capacity as a Servant.

    --Perhaps it’s for the best, for she finally attains freedom at long last.
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    A great sheet that brings on the question I've always had about the Watcher Class: Can it also be used as a Servant in more typical ways, or is the Class specifically meant for observing their masters and maybe making them into heroes? I can see your answer, but I still wonder it myself. Still, a great Servant for a mysterious Class. Always love to learn a new story of myth, and the way she's implemented here is fun.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Morg van Destro View Post
    Can it also be used as a Servant in more typical ways, or is the Class specifically meant for observing their masters and maybe making them into heroes?
    From what I can guess in the only canon example we have, I think the requirement for the Watcher-class, the Heroic Spirit of Observation, the Servant must at least the have Territory Infringement Class Skill and the Watcher unique skill signifying the Servant's special contract with the Master. What this special contract is, I'd imagine, obviously varies from one Servant to another, of which strengthening the Master and communicating with shadows, etc are just a few examples. In conclusion, like other classes, there are specific theme, but I think other than that, there's no problem in using it in more typical ways. They are not as broad as Ruler or Avenger but not really as rare as Saver or Beast.

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    Coronis: Pretty gucci sheet, I don't see that many Watcher servants. I always digged the idea conceptually, even if we don't know that much about it in the grand scheme of things. People focus on Zeus a lot but I tend to forget how many of those Apollo and the other gods generally fuck over themselves. Literally and figuratively.
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    The most eyebrow-raising points of the canon Watcher are the "blank EX blank EX blank EX" stats and the "can't be manifested with mass" gimmick. That combined with the class name lead me to interpretation that Watcher is the class where Servants can't directly interact with the physical realm, at very least not offensively. They just exist and keep watch.

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    Francis E Dec: I have found a new addition to my favorite historical figures of all time. Seriously, even though mental illness is a very serious issue, the stuff this guy spewed out of his type writer is flat out funny. A communist gangster computer god, Communist-Catholic conspiracies, Jewish Nazis. Oh my God.

    But that aside, he's a pretty good example of a Lethal Joke Character. He might seem like something that exists purely for gags, but is actually very dangerous. It'd be very interesting to see this guy implemented in a story of some kind. Also, you should have added an interaction with BB. Y'know, the Moon Cancer.

    Coronis: Don't really have much to say about this that hasn't already been said. Um, it's a good sheet and I like it.
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    Potentially basic Nasuverse question here, if for example Anastasia was summoned with all of her imposters as wraiths/NP, would she qualify as an Alter Ego? My next sheet has a concept similar to that, and while I was going to make them an Alter Ego, they feel more like a "reverse Alter Ego" where instead of "multiple aspects of the same person", they're more like "multiple people playing one aspect" (or pretending to be one person).

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    Going by Lancer Benkei, Archer Robin, Avenger Kagekiyo, and arguably all the Hassans, impostors or multiple people taking the same identity fall into the Class you would expect the real deal to be.

    There’s also the Faker Class for body doubles, I guess.
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    Alright, some spoilers then, this sheet involves four different people shoved into one Saint Graph (with one "host"/main body) because the world deems them "close enough". One of them is actually the real deal (but we don't know that at first), one insists that he's the furthest away from the real one while three others vehemently insist and argued with each other that they're the real one.

    Guess I'll take the first advice and make him one of the standard classes befitting of the real deal, but both Alter Ego and Faker might work as well, to some extent.

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    Another single day Servant. I have never felt more dirty than when writing this Servant and, frankly, if a third Servant could be submitted to the current contest, he'd be it. He's been on my list to make for months now, and I just suddenly decided today I would.


    Class: Assassin
    Other Classes: Caster, Foreigner
    True Name: Jim Jones
    Alignment: Chaotic Evil
    Place of Origin: Crete, Indiana
    Height: 168 cm.
    Weight: 74 kilo.
    Likes: Control. Integration. Women. Communism. The Weak.
    Dislikes: Religion. Capitalism. Racists.
    Natural Enemy: Iskander
    Catalyst: The gun that killed him. Kool-aid or Flavor-aid, whether packaged or in liquid form.


    Parameters:
    STR: E
    END: D
    AGI: E
    MGI: B
    LCK: C
    NP: B


    Class Skills:
    Presence Concealment (D):
    Hides one's presence as a Servant. Suitable for spying. A low ranking of Presence Concealment unbecoming for an Assassin to the level that a Servant can infer one's presence at once.

    Personal Skills:
    Innocent Monster (Foreign) (C):
    Despite being a human, he proclaimed himself to be an existence equal to「God」

    Rather than affecting himself, this Skill works to mentally shift his classification in the eyes of others alongside Servant Skills and Noble Phantasms. While this gives off the perception that Assassin has Divinity, and therefore is immune to certain effects while vulnerable to others, he is completely human. The only purpose of this Skill is to further manipulate people as he did when he declared so in life.


    Human Observation (B):
    “What you need to believe in is what you can see.… If you see me as your friend, I'll be your friend. As you see me as your father, I'll be your father, for those of you that don't have a father.… If you see me as your savior, I'll be your savior. If you see me as your God, I'll be your God.”

    A man described as “being able to know you in an instant”, Assassin was a master of observing people and knowing what words and actions he would need to say and/or do in order to manipulate them. Through the use of this Skill, he is able to enhance the effectiveness of every other Skill he possesses, making him able to lead those who hear him toward the conclusions and ends he desires.


    White Night (A):
    A special form of Charisma exclusive to Assassin, this Skill represents his ability to instill the devotion of his followers named after the gatherings where Assassin prepared his cult for suicide, a few of which he initially claimed were genuine as a way to test them. A Skill that ensnares the mind and compels others to follow his orders, this Skill is most effective when used on large groups, as it preys on mob mentality.

    To Know Your Enemy (C):
    Despite what the name implies, this Skill is not meant to give information on an enemy. Rather, the purpose of this Skill is to obscure information and dull the senses. Having studied a monster in human form and spoken to another claiming to be God, Assassin learned one of the greatest ways to make people subservient to him was to create an enemy and “to make sure they know who the enemy is.”

    By using this Skill, Assassin actively dissuades opponents from attacking him by presenting them with another target, whether it is a person or something as nebulous as an event that is yet to come. The only condition is that the threat presented must be perceived as a greater danger than Assassin is, something that sounds simpler than it is when used on those who can resist the mental effects of his other Skills.


    Noble Phantasm

    The People's Temple: Sanctuary (C+)
    Anti-Mind
    A bounded field Assassin is able to create with only his words, this field forces a feeling of false calm over every in the area, making them feel less endangered and more relaxed around Assassin, therefore being more receptive to his words. This field disappears if Assassin is interrupted or when he has finished speaking.

    With the inclusion of more energy, Assassin is capable of erecting an illusory church within the boundaries of the field, one able to be physically manifested if given enough time and a large enough congregation (meaning those under the effects of his Skills). Once manifested, this People's Church is able to cut off all influence from outsider forces possessed by Servants, making weapons, Skills, and Servants that gain power from gods, nature, or even technology lose said influence.


    Jonestown Revolution: Stepping into Another Plane (B)
    Anti-Army/Mind
    The only means of true offense that Assassin possesses crystallized as a Noble Phantasm. This Noble Phantasm, however, has several conditions before it is capable of activating.

    1. Those affected must be able to hear his voice.
    2. A step only required for large groups: they must be under the effects of White Night.
    3. They must be under the effect of To Know Your Enemy, believing there is a far greater threat than Assassin that Assassin can direct their focus on.

    Once these prerequisites are fulfilled, Assassin will throw himself into a grand speech that captivates all who hear it, being unable to take any action due to being enthralled by a mental curse. If they are unable to break out of the curse before Assassin is finished, they will commit suicide as a sign of devotion to Assassin’s beliefs, knowing in their hearts that doing so will ensure the defeat of their greater enemy.

    Lore
    James Warren Jones, otherwise known as Jim Jones, was the founder of the Peoples Temple of the Disciples of Christ, a fiery preacher advocating for racial rights, a man who welcomed people from all walks of life, and, through this guise, became the man who led the most horrific mass suicide/murder in recorded history.

    Growing up in at the start of the Great Depression in a shack without plumbing, young Jim Jones was fascinated with power. Specifically power over others, studying people who gained power through the manipulation of others such as Joseph Stalin, Karl Marx, Mao Zedong, Mahatma Gandhi, and Adolf Hitler with zealotry, which is an aptly appropriate term given this led to him also taking a fervent interest in religion. However, given his upbringing in the more rural parts of Crete, Indiana, these influences also mixed with his perceptions of others, leading to his future advocation for racial integration.

    These factors all coalesced when, after the persecution of U.S. communists, a party he himself was beginning to be enamored by, he decided the greatest way to present and spread his beliefs of society was through the church, a decision that would change his and several other people’s lives.

    Becoming ordained and splitting off from the church, he founded his own called the Community Unity Church, an interracial mission that would eventually evolve into the group widely known as the People’s Temple, the vehicle to spread his message and beliefs through the guise of Christianity. This guise, however, slipped away over the years, even leading him to completely renounce the Bible and those who follow it, bringing his true desires to light.

    “If you're born in capitalist America, racist America, fascist America, then you're born in sin. But if you're born in socialism, you're not born in sin.”
    “You're gonna help yourself, or you'll get no help! There's only one hope of glory; that's within you! Nobody's gonna come out of the sky! There's no heaven up there! We'll have to make heaven down here!”

    Through lies, his overwhelming charisma, intelligence, and messages of peace and social reform, Jim Jones amassed a massive congregation, using it to give credence to his words and support his actions, many of which appeared altruistic in design. He continued, his influence spreading up the political chain to the point that governors and even the President were willing to defend him even when word came out about how members of his congregation were treated.

    However, it all began to fall apart at Jonestown where, in this enclosed space, he was unable to hide all his personal vices and the treatment of his congregation. However, it was only after congressman Leo Ryan came on a fact-finding mission to Jonestown that it was truly at an end. After one failed assassination followed by a successful shoot-up, Jim Jones gave one last speech before he and his congregation wiped themselves from the earth, whether by their own hand or by force.

    Thusly ended the life of Jim Jones, who, just as he himself predicted, went down as one of the most hated men in history.


    Personality
    A man bearing a terrifying charisma, Assassin is able to effortless speak to anyone he interacts with regardless of their personality or background, coming off as a gentle, kind, well-read man of wisdom, leaving all with a neutral, if not positive impression of him. He constantly searches for people willing to join his congregation, actively avoiding beings linked to, spawned from, or possessing traits of Divinity. While he began to gain a following, wiser heads prevailed in shutting him down, using a command spell to prevent any further attempts to do so.

    Assassin acts especially forward and charming to beautiful (meaning all) women and even some men in the Chaldea, his honeyed words even leading some away, though, after an encounter with Medb, these actions have lessened for an unknown reason.

    However, underneath the calm and suave demeanor lies the heart of a manipulative, abusive, power-hungry, domineering, predator of a mental, spiritual, and sexual nature. A man who wants nothing more than the praise and adoration of all to the point that he can fulfill his every sadistic, hedonistic desire. Known to not only abuse those under him, both publicly and privately, he also got his congregation involved in his desires, having them beat and berate those he believed needed punishment while he watched on, often being noted as giggling to himself as he did. By those who escaped his influence, he was described as "A satanic child hiding within the body of a holy man"

    Truly caring for nothing but himself and his wants, he will sacrifice anyone, even his master, to get what he believes he deserves, all the while expecting those around him to praise and glorify his actions.


    Relationships

    EMIYA (Archer): Such a poor soul, tormented by your actions for the greater good. This want for self-destruction leads nowhere. Please, come listen to my sermon, and I will show you a better way.

    Iskander (Rider): I completely agree. The beliefs of the leader are those of his people. So long as they put their faith in us, we will lead them to paradise. ...And how are we not the same?

    Any Servant he finds attractive: You are a beautiful creature. Please, you must come to my sermons. There is so much I have to teach you.

    Johann Adam Weishaupt: Though you may be my enemy through what those lording themselves over us would have you believe, I'm certain that, if we could only talk, you'd come to see we have much in common.

    Joseph Smith: Caster is one of the few who can see through Jim. After all, one recognizes his own kind. While there is no evidence, there are rumors of a shadow war between them in Chaldea.



    Any more interaction ideas? There are definitely more people he'd have something to say to.
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    Ah, Jonestown, definitely one of the worst non-conventional monsters in the last century or so. The man's no dictator or brutal murderer (at least not directly), yet his control over others is just as horrifying, in its own way. His character, skillset, and NP is straightforward enough to convey his legend (I feel like The People's Temple could just be another effect of White Night though, since it's basically another effect of his charisma/oratory skills).

    Aside from that, that line to Weishaupt is also on point; despite being extremely similar, they would absolutely hate each other's guts, each believing themselves as a savior and the other as a madman who built a religious cult to get what they want, completely blind to the irony.

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    "Huh, I thought this was a one time thing. Well whatever, what's done is done."

    Class: Assassin
    Alignment: Chaotic Good
    Region: Israel
    Source: Book of Judges
    Armaments: Mallet and Pegs

    Parameters:
    Strength: D++
    Endurance: E
    Agility: D
    Mana: D
    Luck: A

    Class Skills:

    Presence Concealment C+
    Hides one's presence as a Servant. Suitable for spying. The rank of Presence Concealment drops considerably when preparing to attack. However, due to her role in the legend she was part of, the rank does not drop when preparing to use her noble phantasm.

    Personal Skills:

    Determination of Steel D
    A composite Skill, combining the effects of Valor and Calm and Collected, that allows one to completely ignore pain and endure superhuman speeds. A spontaneous decision was made, not born from desperation but from the awareness of the threat the one she was serving posed. What he represented. She needed to end it.

    Protection From God C++
    A form of divine protection that gives the user the quick-wittedness and the brute strength needed to defeat beasts unaided. This goes in particular for the brute strength aspect as it was said that Assassin had asked the Lord to give her the power to end the enemy in one stroke which manifests as modifiers for her Strength parameter.

    Hypnotic Draught B
    A skill denoting the serving of a drink that produces a sleep inducing effect on those who ingest it. Assassin had given milk to the downed general instead of the water he asked for. In reality, she had no water to serve and hoped that wouldn't be the way she'd meet her end. Any time a liquid is served by Assassin, a luck check is made to see if the drink affects the consumer. Those who fall to the effects are put in a coma-like state where they cannot wake up until the drink is flushed out of their system.

    Noble Phantasm

    Nail of Deliverance: One Final Strike To Free Us From Turmoil
    Rank: B+
    Type: Anti-Unit

    The sole noble phantasm possessed by Assassin. It is the crystallisation of the moment where Assassin brought down her hammer upon the peg that lined up with the temple of the sleeping general, Sisera. While Assassin herself carries pegs and nails around, they aren't completely necessary for the activation of her noble phantasm as it embodies the idea of "a single strike to end it all", meaning that anything can be used as a "nail". However, the further the object is to the ideal image of a "nail" the longer it takes for her to use it as one. In terms of time needed, a regular nail only needs an instant while something like a building needs an upward of 10 minutes. The strike itself is near impossible to dodge and, due to the legend it is based from, always targets the head for a sure fire instant kill. While it is considered B rank, due to extreme boost to her Assassin's strength parameter, the power of the strike itself is comparable to an A rank attack.


    Personality

    "You're a strange one, having me fight, or rather end, your battles for you. Guest things haven't changed much."

    Assassin is the type of person who becomes dedicated to a task without much complaint. Her personality is as blunt as her hammer, not even hesitating to consider the effects of her words. She will praise who she likes; she will deride who she hates.

    "What can I do? Well, I have a hammer to bash heads in. Oh I can make people fall asleep too!"

    Assassin is a simple person. She has relatively little wants and needs. That isn't to say she is dumb as she can have her moments of wisdom, formed past experience and common sense.

    "I never really felt like a hero, ya know? Even when those two mentioned me in their little victory song. I was just someone who just happened to be in the wrong place at the right time. Now that I'm here, maybe just maybe I could be the hero I want to be."

    Assassin has an admiration for heroes, considering herself nothing more than a minor character. She holds a proper understanding of the relationship between Master and Servant but may go off on her own. Her wish for the grail, which she doubts to be the actual one, would be to have more stories about her and other minor characters.


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    Assassin is Jael, right?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dragolord09 View Post
    Assassin is Jael, right?
    Yeah, that's Jael.

    Edit: Also, is anyone else experiencing frequent server timeouts or is it just me?
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    Now we just need someone to do Shamgar.

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    Jael: You can probably guess from my avatar that I'd take a fancy for this sheet. Her NP is also ridiculously badass given she can apparently hammer entire freaking buildings on her foes given enough prep-time.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Morg van Destro View Post
    Now we just need someone to do Shamgar.
    Pretty sure someone did do one back on one of the old threads.

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    Quote Originally Posted by BnEl15 View Post
    Potentially basic Nasuverse question here, if for example Anastasia was summoned with all of her imposters as wraiths/NP, would she qualify as an Alter Ego? My next sheet has a concept similar to that, and while I was going to make them an Alter Ego, they feel more like a "reverse Alter Ego" where instead of "multiple aspects of the same person", they're more like "multiple people playing one aspect" (or pretending to be one person).
    I actually have an in-progress Anastasia/Anna Anderson Sheet where she is hinted to either be all the imposters combined or the real Anastasia trolling everyone. I made her an Assassin although either Alter Ego or Faker would work just as well.
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