What the hell is with your new pfp.
What the hell is with your new pfp.
A Copy of Verses
"Come all you brave Boys, whose Courage is bold,
Will you venture with me, I'll glut you with Gold?
Make haste unto Corona, a Ship you will find,
That's called the Fancy, will pleasure your mind.
Captain Every is in her, and calls her his own;
He will box her about, Boys, before he has done:
French, Spaniard and Portuguese, the Heathen likewise,
He has made a War with them until that he dies.
Her Model's like Wax, and she sails like the Wind,
She is rigged and fitted and curiously trimm'd,
And all things convenient has for his design;
God bless his poor Fancy, she's bound for the Mine.
These Northern Parts are not thrifty for me,
I'll rise the Anterhise, that some Men shall see
I am not afraid to let the World know,
That to the South-Seas and to Persia I'll go.
Our Names shall be blazed and spread in the Sky,
And many brave Places I hope to descry,
Where never a French man e'er yet has been,
Nor any proud Dutch man can say he has seen.
Now this I do say and solemnly swear,
Good Quarters I give, but no Nation I spare,
The World must assist me with what I do want,
I'll give them my Bill, when my Money is scant.
No Quarters to give, no Quarters to take,
We save nothing living, alas 'tis too late;
For we are now sworn by the Bread and the Wine,
More serious we are than any Divine.
Now this is the Course I intend for to steer;
My false-hearted Nation, to you I declare,
I have done thee no wrong, thou must me forgive,
The Sword shall maintain me as long as I live."
- a (shortened) poem believed to be written by...
< - ⪻ - ⋘ - ⪡ - ⫷ -- ◙ -- ⫸ - ⪢ - ⋙ - ⪼ - >
"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
University of Formatting | Gallery of Potential | Memorandum of the Extra Class Kings
Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
Create-a-Servant 4 soon.
Rufus Wilmot Griswold
― The Biographer of Edgar Allan Poe ―
Class: Faker
Alternate Classes: Assassin
Natural Enemy: Edgar Allan Poe
Attribute: Earth
STRENGTH: E
ENDURANCE: E
AGILITY: E
MANA: E
LUCK: E
NOBLE PHANTASM: C
Bond 1
Bond 2
Bond 3
Bond 4
Bond 5
Creator Notes:
This is a simple one I banged out in a few hours of occasional writing. The idea of the profile pic is that he starts off looking like Poe, hence the raven suit (because Poe = ravens, obviously) and the lack of a visible face. Having posted this I'll now proceed to remove myself from the thread until next month. Adios!
The Adventure of the Velvet Room (Sherlock Holmes/Persona) (SB, FFN, AO3)
Blog with all of my Servants so far.
indeed a simple one. But I like all skills you made for him. You conveyed well that he was an asshole. Could have needed more quotes. There is just one that barely does anything for the sheet itself.
You better be back for the next contest. I can see you placing high again with my prompt.
"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
University of Formatting | Gallery of Potential | Memorandum of the Extra Class Kings
Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
Create-a-Servant 4 soon.
Here is the new and hopefully improved Enoch. I reworked his Innocent Monster skill into something new to get the idea with it across at the suggestion of Delray. I also took into account that his Noble Phantasms really are just hypes for Metatron and reworked one into something that makes Enoch worthwhile on his own. Finally, I reworded a few skills to make it more clear why he has them at their particular rank. Enjoy!
https://static.wikia.nocookie.net/du...20190401081238
Source: Angelo Gabrini, Danmachi.Fandom.Com
Class: Caster
True Name: Enoch
Origin: Christian Mythology
Alignment: Lawful-Good
Other Classes: Ruler
Armament: Alchemy
Parameters
Spoiler:
Lore
Spoiler:
Class Skills
Spoiler:
Personal Skills
Spoiler:
Noble Phantasms
Spoiler:
Personality
Spoiler:
Quotes
Spoiler:
Also is it just me or can I not upload images anymore? Also hope this does the servant justice. If not... I'll simply correct the one on my blog and leave it at that.
Note: okay can't post the original pic for this so a link is there instead. Sorry I'll try to figure it out.
Last edited by Baron Magnus; September 17th, 2021 at 08:01 PM. Reason: Turns out corrections were in two different places.
Rookie Lorekeeper, Amateur Extraordinaire, and all around nasunoob.
Rufus Wilmot Griswold:
Oof, I was considering working on a Griswold sheet myself. I honestly really like your take on him though, the skills you've given him are fairly unique and still fit the character. The sheet isn't too outlandish with his abilities, and that is to the servants benefit. This is, all in all, a good example of a very well written modern servant.
Last edited by Spammin Spiff; September 18th, 2021 at 11:55 AM.
Avenger
“Whoever makes me unhappy for a day, I will make suffer for a lifetime”
Empress Dowager Cixi
True Name:
Xiaoqin Xianhuanghou,
T’zu-Hsi, or Cixi
Alternative titles:
Final Empress of the Qing
Jewel of the Yehe Nara
“The Dragon Lady of China”
Alignment:
Lawful Evil
Attribute:
Human
Alternative classes:
Ruler
Parameters
STR- D
END - D
AGL- C
MAG - A
LUK - E
NP- E~EX
Skills and Abilities
Noble Phantasms
Lore
Gameplay
Voice Lines and Interactions
Author's Note
Last edited by Lady Vanatos; September 18th, 2021 at 04:43 PM.
Current FGO setup
Cixi: Damn, I like this one. Her connection with Xi Wangmu is kind of unexpected, and that second NP is a bit convoluted, but it works. That interaction with Hong Xiuquan and Puyi adds even more life to the sheet. Makes me wonder if you'll be writing a full-fledged Puyi sheet anytime soon.
BnEl15: "Convoluted but it works" was exactly what I was going for. As for the Xi Wangmu, while researching for this sheet lets just say I went down a rabbit hole. So Manchu Shamanism has practices that can tie them to underworld/chthonic gods and then I cam across something know as the "Black Mother". So I was like, "huh" who is this referring to. So I used my school's databases for research and couldn't find anything but I came across the 'Queen Mother of the West" also know as Xi Wangmu but she is not only old (dating back to the 15 century BCE) but she is also a deity of slaughter, darkness and pure yin and she is considered a chthonic underworld god so while there wasn't anything explicitly tying the two given the circumstance evidence, her old she is and the region associated, I say that the Black Mother and Queen Mother of the West are the same entities, i.e Xi Wangmu.
As for a Puyi sheet: That is a definitive "maybe"
Current FGO setup
Name: Tamar
Class: Assassin
Origin: Biblical Record- Kingdom of Israel
Alignment: Lawful Good
STR:C
AGI: B
END: D
AGI: A
LCK: D
Daughter of King David and full blooded sister to Absalom, respectful and dutiful she was the ideal daughter, cherished by father and brothers. One of her siblings, Amnon, raped her for nothing but his amusement, kicking her distraught panicked self out after the assault she ran to Absalom who was taken by a dark rage. David unwilling to kill his own son and the two being the children of a defeated kingdom ended with Amnon suffering no punishment for such crime. As tale tells Absalom kill Amnon via assassination in a feast, hide for three years, regain David's favor and return only to plant the seeds of rebellion and attempt to take the throne via kin slaying by the urging of the Sage Ahithophel.
Such events alongside Adonijah's ploys for the throne could have been said to be David's 'ruin' and were what opened the pathway for Solomon to inherit the throne. Through her rape a domino effect took place the kingdom tore at it's seams and blood slayed blood not for justice but for vengeance and greed. Desolated, alone and made a scapegoat for Absalom's deeds Tamar could not find any solace and ended up taking her own life
One whose beauty caused a calamity as such she is elevated to the throne similar to other individuals. She was not given blessings in life but association with Solomon, the hatred of people and Absalom's deeds mutated her Saint Graph into that of a demonic temptress. Drowning in this power she takes the mask of a vile witch in an attempt to never feel fear ever again, but deep down she cannot let go of the heart that appealed for the Court's justice than Absalom's hatred even if that attempt only ended in failure and made outcasts for their blood
Skills
Noble Phantasm
Shalalan Miss Sheba's Truth-Seeing Activate!
Last edited by BoktaiMoon; September 19th, 2021 at 08:15 PM.
Tamar: These are one of those sheets where there is just enough there where it makes me go, "That's it? I was kind of getting into it"
Current FGO setup
Tamar has so little story that's just kind of it all things considered
And I am kinda bad at interactions/lines stuff
Cixi: you outdid yourself with this one Vany. You made a great servant, great enough for China to censor it in FGO and name jer Avenger 043 or something.
It surely was a long ride, but I enjoyed it. Storytelling and concepts for her are great. Using the pictures elevated the sheet further. Kino.
"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
University of Formatting | Gallery of Potential | Memorandum of the Extra Class Kings
Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
Create-a-Servant 4 soon.
Thanks, KINO Sheet Daddy
Current FGO setup
It's interesting. So I take it the initial sheet pre-spoiler tags is just a "mask" she puts on to hide her true self thanks to her last Personal Skill? I had to reread that one a few times to work my head around the mechanics of how she summons "herself". In any case I definitely feel bad for the poor girl. Makes me wonder if it'd be possible for her to be "saved"/reach some kind of epiphany in a Grail War or she's already too far-gone for that now...
Yes. Attempting to summon David's children will end up with protests/warnings, wariness from Sheba and Martha getting ready to punch a bunch of fools.
She's like Kiara in a way (except she doesn't care about fucking over the planet and being the only human and other people being insects used for her pleasure alone), she will tempt the master and him constantly refusing her causes her to slowly escalate until that mask gets so battered she starts to show her real self because at the end of the day she is forcing herself to act like a succubus to run away from her own emotions so if you corner her....course by then she'd start throwing Bael Storms everywhere
Like how Caenis became a tyrant rapist to deal with stuff Tamar became a seducing trickster that ruins people to have a feel of power and control over her life while fully hating everything and everyone and herself
Serve. Give order. Master.
Want learn world. Want know human.
Can learn all. Can do all.
…
A most peculiar existence indeed.
“He” is the most feral person I’ve ever seen. A beast utterly incompatible with civilization.
“He” is also the most sentient creature I’ve ever known. An intellectual on par with the greatest of scientists, philosophers, and theologians.
“He” is not a mere beast that possesses only ego, but not intellect.
“He” is not an angel either, who possesses only intellect, but not ego.
“He” is without doubt, the very pinnacle of a human being.
…
“His” origin and upbringing is quite unbelievable, to say the least.
“He” originates from a deserted island, somewhere at the equator far south.
There, “he” was formed spontaneously, spawning out of clay and water in a one-in-a-trillion chance of natural occurrence.
Then, “he” was adopted by an antelope, raised among the wildlife, and imitated the manners and instinct of beasts.
Through sheer curiosity, “he” independently studied and analyzed the natural world, and gained understanding on par with the finest scientists.
“He” observed the stars, investigated the laws of physics, and learned the biologies of plants and animals.
“His” intellectual endeavors did not stop in the material world, and “he” eventually discovered the truths of the philosophical and theological realm, all by “his” own.
…
“He” first made contact with human beings when a ship was stranded at the island. “He” showed no hostility to these strangers, only curiosity, and even hospitality.
Among the surviving passengers was a great doctor, who managed to teach “him” human language.
The doctor and “him” quickly gained mutual understanding, and “he” was convinced to help them repair the ship and come with them back to civilization.
The doctor continued to teach “him” of humanity; of science, culture, religion, history. “He” surprised the doctor when it was shown that “he” had already understood more than half of it.
The doctor and “him” became close friends, they shared their ideals and goals, and together they determined to enlighten humanity with their esoteric truth.
However, human civilization and society proved to be much too imperfect for “him”. Only few were able to fully understand “his” perfect truth, while most rather prefered ignorance.
Nonetheless, “he” tried to teach humanity, “he” warned them against harming the Earth, “he” advised them against war, and “he” guided them towards God.
Thus, after a few years of preaching, “he” gave up, and decided to return to “his” island, accompanied by the doctor.
And they were never heard of again since.
…
How did I know this story, you ask?
Ahaha... That reminds me... it’s almost a thousand year now...
That person… I hope “he” is doing fine wherever “he” is now...
Ah, no, nothing, I said nothing!
Let's just say "it's an old story" and leave it at that, shall we?
…
Class: Assassin
True Name: Hayy ibn Yaqzan
Gender: Male (?)
Alignment: True Neutral
Origin: Islamic Literature
Attribute: Earth
A person first mentioned as a thought experiment in the works of the medieval Muslim polymath Avicenna. Hayy ibn Yaqzan (Living, son of Consciousness) was the main character of Ibn Tufail’s novel known as “Philosophus Autodidactus” in the west, and its pseudo-remake by Ibn Nafis, “Theologus Autodidactus” where Hayy ibn Yaqzan is instead called Kamil (Perfection).
Parameters:
STR: C
END: C
AGI: B
MGI: C
LCK: A
NP: C
Class Skills:
Presence Concealment: A
Hides one’s presence as a Servant, allows one to be undetectable even by Servants as long as one does not engage in battle. It is a skill Assassin displays by imitating and combining the sneaking methods of animals, from snakes to chameleons.
Personal Skills:
Self-Taught: EX
The aptitude of being an autodidact, a heightened capacity for learning that allows one to learn skills and abilities just by observing it. It is an absolute empirical insight that even allows Assassin to predict past and future events. The rank of the learned skills Assassin can display is limited to B-rank. In addition, the scope of the skills he can acquire is limited to that of humans and animals; skills exclusive to demonic entities and divine spirits cannot be learned this way.
Self-Creation: A+
A skill emphasizes one’s characteristic as a spontaneously generated lifeform, a freak of nature born from extremely unlikely coincidental circumstances. It allows Assassin to regenerate and reassemble any part of his body from the earth. In addition, it also allows the Assassin to perform healing surgeries on others by transplanting his organs to them and regrowing it back.
Although virtually identical to a normal human, Assassin ‘s true nature is closer to a golem.
Self-Annihilation: B
The ultimate goal of the Sufi mystics. It refers to the stages of the spiritual journey a Sufi initiate undergoes to become closer to God, in every sense of the word. It is a process of gradual elimination of the self, leading up the state of permanent subsistence “with God, through God and for God” and ultimately becoming the instrument of God's will on Earth.
In essence, it is a skill allowing one to “die before dying” and to “live after death” by dedicating one’s entire existence to God. In a way, it is identical to a high-ranking Battle Continuation and Protection of the Faith. This technique, modified for the purpose of killing, is employed by the Assassins of Alamut.
Although Assassin had independently discovered many paths to the root, Assassin has chosen this specific path because of the influence of the first human “he” ever met.
Noble Phantasms:
Insan al-Kamil
O Humans, Let us Reflect the God Above
Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
Rank: E ~ A++
The Perfect Human Being. A concept in Islam which refers to the status of Prophets, Saints, Imams, and especially, the Apostle of God (PBUH).In Islamic teachings, just as Adam was made in God’s image, humans were born with an inherent essence reflecting the infinite names of God. Therefore, the Perfect Human is an existence whose essence reflects the highest quantity and quality of God’s names than any other human being.
It is a Noble Phantasm which crystallizes Assassin’s true nature as “the second Adam” born of Gaia’s attempt to understand Humanity. In other words, it is the power of a True Ancestor. When activated, this Noble Phantasm causes Assassin’s body to emit a burst of light that rapidly expands in size. In this Luminous State, the wisdom and experiences of human beings Assassin had accumulated is converted into a Texture and wielded as a weapon that increases in power the more knowledge Assassin had learned. Because it is a power that draws from the Counter Force, it also receives a boost when facing threats against Humanity and the Earth.
Last edited by Kamera; September 20th, 2021 at 01:22 AM.
Yaqzan: When I saw the FC and intro quote I thought this'd be a Berserker Enkidu, but you went with it in a much more creative direction. Servants based on thought-experiments are always interesting (I recall two Descartes' Demon and one Zhuangzi based off his dream of the butterfly) so this is nice to see. Good job working some of that new Tsukihime lore in for his NP.
Got inspired
Name: Morgause
Origin: Arthurian Mythology
Class: Saber
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
STR: B
END: C
AGI: B
MAG: A
LCK: C
The infamous sister of Arthur Pendragon. The Witch Queen/Lady of the Lake known as Morgan Le Fay. At times she was described as possessing three personalities, the innocence of a fairy, the magnificence of a warrior maiden and the brutality of a witch, delivering harm and good upon Britannia and it's knights in equal measure, despite such chaotic personality and obvious vehemence towards the King, she was never reprimanded or punished and in the end it can be said that Camelot fell to itself than due to her schemes, nothing but a pebble in the king's path.
Uther sought to maintain the fading mysteries of Britain at all costs, for the sake of this he plotted with the mage Merlin and captured Igraine. From this two children were born, Morgause, deemed a failure for not showing the traits wanted and Artoria born with the core of the red dragon, while the latter would be raised by Ector and become the Once and Future King, Morgause was used as a political ploy only to show the traits Uther desired, but as it was long after his death and such thing would get in the way of Merlin's ploy it was all for naught
Acknowledging Artoria as a puppet and her similar fate Morgause could not help but come to hate the King while entranced by her inherited power. Such mixed traits in equal intensity made her the ideal vessel for the Fairy of Paradise and the Darkness of Britannia that desired the destruction of it's people before it died alongside the mystery within the islands. Such existences cannot be controlled by a single human, due to this Morgause became a puppet to both powers, but with a stubborn soul unwilling to surrender both were affected by her emotions, Vivian the Fairy inherited her virtues and love while Morgan Le Fay, the darkness, inherited her hatred and envy. Thus the innocence of a fairy and the brutality of the vilest of witches, creating a three-faced female sovereign commonly seen in many mythologies.
From there many stories surge, the most common end is Morgause atoning and delivering Artoria to Avalon, in others she is killed by Gaheris in a fit of rage. Perhaps another fairy simply inherited the memories and role of Vivian, perhaps she faked her death, whatever it is the servant does not speak about it. In the Saber manifestation the Fairy and Witch traits were excised and Morgause appears alone, carrying the Soul-Splitting Sword Erosion she is a distant authoritative figure, enemies are to be crushed, allies are to be saved, and the neutral to be won over be it with force or pleasantries, but different from the others she seeks to use no one, a need to do everything by herself to confirm that Morgause is Morgause, that Morgause is human and just not another ploy from the other two. To maintain the magnificence of a warrior-maiden is to maintain her identity and self as such relying on others, seducing others, abusing others, is a weakness not to be tolerated at any level
Skills
Noble Phantasm
Last edited by BoktaiMoon; September 21st, 2021 at 02:17 PM.