Me too.
Me too.
Servant Sheet: The holy son.
Stats:
Strength: EX
Mana: EX
Endurance: EX
Agility: EX
Luck: EX
NP: EX
Class: EX
True Name: Jesus Cristo, also known as Jesus Christ, IESVS, the holy son, ישוע, Ἰησοῦ, χριστός, MC JC, Jayzus Christus, He Who Died For All Our Sins, and He Who Has Rebirthed.
Catalysts: one of the coins bestowed unto his disciple Judas for aiding in his capture, a plank of the cross he was killed in, a piece of the tomb he rebirthed in, a strand of hay from the shack he was born in, scriptures from any of his disciples, or an immense amount of faith.
Noble Phantasms:
He Who Died For All Our Sins: possesses 7 forms, each a different class, each a different sin, and can change them at will.
He Who Has Rebirthed: his power and his connection with the Lord are far too powerful to be hidden, and too holy to be ignored. As such, any creature up to 100km away knows of his presence, and upon knowing of his presence, knows his true name.
The Holy Son: his connection with the Lord bestow him with power above any human and most servants. As such, his skills are too many, too vast, and too incomprehensible to be catalogued. This comes however, at a cost. He can only be his true self if his Master is of sufficient faith. Therefore, if those that command him are not believers, are not just, are not pure of heart, or are deemed too sinful, his powers will be gradually drained as a result.
//That's about it, I've never really done this servant business. Anybody that wants to just copy the sheet and add their own spin or make it better is free to do so, I'm not gonna annoy anyone about it.
//I'll also add that I only pulled the 'skills are too vast' bit because I have no idea how to go at that. I'd actually like it if the rest of the community filled this in, I don't think a servant this big should be a single person's doing.
Last edited by Ideofago; November 19th, 2021 at 10:17 PM.
Call me 想φαγω.
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If he was summoned and people knew his true name wouldn't they just assume this was the second coming, as opposed to a grail war?
That is something that is up to the scenario writer to decide. Baron's remark on his summoning being great fanfic material is not wrong in the slightest. I might try my hand at it, too.
Call me 想φαγω.
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I'd read it.
I still don't really get the turning into seven sins idea. I think that if you really wanted to make this work it'd make more sense if he were a Watcher and the seven sins were "shadows" that followed him. So he'd be guiding his Master to overcome the same trials of temptation he did in life. Or something.
Nah, I still want him to want to win the holy grail. The turning into seven sins started as a joke, but the more I think about it, the cooler the concept is. But I have no practice in fleshing out servants, so I dished it out quickly to iterate on it until there's an actually decent servant.
Call me 想φαγω.
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...huh that is something. but why would Jesus even would want to win a holy grail war when he can just make infinite amount of holy grails himself lol.
Also welcome to Create-a-Servant, I guess.
I'll try my hand. Worst case, it's bad. I'm eschewing Lore, Personality, and Interactions so writers can add their own to their personal sheets. As a note this is an expanded form of TemFlakes403's sheet. Oh and as mentioned, I added a collapse to the parameters to switch between TemFlakes parameters and my own.
Sources: Crowladee, Devianart.com. Phantasm-of-grey-34, Deviantart.com. HeavenlySage, Character-and-stats-profiles.fandom.com. DowamiV16, Reddit.com.
Class: Saber, Archer, Lancer, Rider, Caster, Assassin, and Berserker.
True Name: Jesus Christo of Nazereth
Origin: Biblical Myth, Historical Fact.
Likes: Christianity, Saving People, Cleansing Souls, Healing others, and the Lord.
Mild Annoyances: Hell, Demons, and Sin.
Talents: Cleansing and Helping
Natural Enemies: the Antichrist.
Other Classes: Ruler, Saver, Avenger, Shielder, and Foreigner
Catalyst: One of the coins bestowed unto his disciple Judas for aiding in his capture, a plank of the cross he was killed in, a piece of the tomb he rebirthed in, a strand of hay from the shack he was born in, scriptures from any of his disciples, and an immense amount of faith.
Armaments: the True Cross (B)
Parameters
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Class Skills
Magic Resistance (Saber, Archer, Lancer, and Rider): A+
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Riding (Saber and Rider): C*
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Independent Action (Archer): EX
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Territory Creation (Caster): EX
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Item Creation (Caster): EX
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Presence Concealment (Assassin): E--
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Mad Enhancement (Berserker): EX
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Personal Skills
He Died For All Mankind's Sins: EX
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He Who Has Rebirthed: EX
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Son of God: EX
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Noble Phantasms
Peccatum Tuum Pro Tua Salute PortoThe True Cross of Jesus of Nazareth
Type: Anti-Unit
Rank: EX
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There you go. run wild with it. I've got something else to work on atm but thanks TemFlakes for the fun prompt to work with.
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In lore, I don't think that's necessarily the case. Not only that, I was imagining a situation of 'Jesus is getting sent down by his father because the pesky humans are up to some shit and naming it with his stuff, which they shouldn't be so now he has to sort it out.' God was on some weed so he sent Jesus instead of some angel.
Call me 想φαγω.
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is this the international create-a-jesus day or something, why would someone go to such length to blaspheme? (i definitely have never made a jesus sheet myself)
Very interesting, though deviates from my original objective a bit, which was to make something that surpassed the usual servant definition. I like the way you framed the skills, gives me some insight into how I could do it. I do think his NP was a bit over the top, but then again so is the entire servant. I liked this a lot, and I'll try to make a second version, more fleshed out with the help of some of what's been presented.
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The prompt is interesting, and anybody can bitch as much as they want, but it's just undeniable. Jesus Christ is the biggest mythical figure. No ifs and buts. The cultural imperialism brought on by the church has made this the case, more so than god himself. So using the biggest mythical figure to try and deconstruct and extrapolate the servant system, to me, is inherently poetic.
Call me 想φαγω.
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He does already. It is literally unheard of that any servant is summoned with fully access to all classes and most servants with multiple classes, bar a few, are kinda gimped. The main man of course is not. As for deviating... I mean that was inevitable. I have a personal style and it was gonna bleed through. That said, good luck.
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valiant attempt, but at least try to make it less cringe and reddit thanks
Servant Sheet v2: The holy son.
Conjured forth by the faith of a follower, he seeks the Holy Grail in the name of a follower. He seeks to repay their faith with the Grail.
Stats:
Strength: EX
Mana: EX
Endurance: EX
Agility: EX
Luck: EX
NP: EX
Class: EX
True Name: Jesus Cristo, also known as Jesus Christ, IESVS, the holy son, ישוע, Ἰησοῦ, χριστός, He Who Died For All Our Sins, and He Who Has Rebirthed.
Catalysts: one of the coins bestowed unto his disciple Judas for aiding in his capture, a plank of the cross he was killed in, a piece of the tomb he rebirthed in, a strand of hay from the shack he was born in, scriptures from any of his disciples, or an immense amount of faith.
Skills:
Holy Carpentry: EX
A skill best defined by its power to leave the bounds of a servant. Allows the production of holy Mystic Codes, which act as any singular skill he wishes to reproduce. Takes 5 minutes and a wooden stick.
The Holy Son: EX
His power and his connection with the Lord are far too powerful to be hidden, and too holy to be ignored. As such, any creature up to 100km away knows of his presence, and upon knowing of his presence, knows his true name.
Sacred Riding: EX
Allows him to walk on surfaces most should not, such as liquids. Possible under Rider class.
Sacred Wielding: EX
In Lancer class, will wield a wooden cross, produced with his Holy Carpentry skill, to deflect and defend any attacks directed at him. Never retaliates.
Only Sins Remain: EX
In Saber class, his magical resistance comes to near impossible levels. Only EX magics may affect him.
In the name of God: EX
In Archer class, has complete and utter independance and perception, as long as he operates under faith and the name of his Father.
The Lord speaks through him: EX
In Berserker class, loses his free will and acts under the command of 'the Lord'. Attains higher durability and holy power.
Water to Wine, Bread and Fish: EX
In Caster class, can perform miraculous deeds such as: generating substances the likes of Philosopher's stones, multiplicating matter out of nothing, and many more yet unknown.
The Teachings of the Father: EX
In Assassin class, targets the opponent Master, attempting to convince them with the holy word.
Noble Phantasms:
He Who Was Born From A Virgin And The Lord: can be summoned through sheer faith. His magical energy can be recharged with sheer faith.
He Who Died For All Our Sins: possesses 7 forms, each a different class, each a different sin, and can change them at will.
He Who Lived Again: if killed, can revive in 3 days. With enough faith.
//Updated it, fleshed out the skill section, made the NP into a cooler 3 parter. I think it can still be much improved, but this is a much better structure. Thanks Baron for your version of the sheet.
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I mean, it's unreasonable to expect anybody to not seep their style into something they create. It was a pointless observation in the grand scheme of things. Whilst he does surpass the usual servant though, it still feels like more on a power level kind of way than a concept kind of way. I'll flesh him out further and try to push him in the other direction. Yours was pretty good to give me some guidance though, so I do sincerely thank you for it.
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Eurystheus
― Keeper of the Twelve Labours ―
Class: Watcher
Alternate Classes: Assassin
Natural Enemy: Herakles, Alcides
Attribute: Sky
Traits:
STRENGTH: C
ENDURANCE: C
AGILITY: C
MANA: C
LUCK: A
NOBLE PHANTASM: A+++
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Creator Notes:
Bit of an odd duck, I realize, but honestly, I think he'd be a really fun character to have in a less than serious war. A Narita thing, maybe, if I had to put a writer on it.
Last edited by NMR-3; November 20th, 2021 at 01:36 PM.
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Temflakes403: I'm glad it could provide help. I wish you luck in your sheet. I will give one small bit of advice; go with your gut. If you stare at a particular fact for too long but have a gut feeling, go with it. If you can't decide, walk away and do something for a while to distract yourself.
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Eurystheus: Fun sheet but does he not have any Class Skills? Also are they any benefits he'd gain if he did somehow get a Labor and complete it himself?
I genuinely forgot to give him Class Skills. Whoops. I decided to just give him a Class Skill named Watcher in the end that lets him 'watch' the Grail War in a way that doesn't step on the Ruler Class' toes too much.
Anyway, the bit about him somehow getting a Labour and completing it himself - that's just a plot hook, pure and simple. I'm not planning on actually using him in a story, but I do like to add that kind of thing in because it adds a little extra.
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