Page 369 of 461 FirstFirst ... 269319359364367368369370371374379419 ... LastLast
Results 7,361 to 7,380 of 9203

Thread: Create-A-Servant 3

  1. #7361
    後継者 Successor Bugs's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2018
    Age
    29
    Posts
    817
    The bombard/Dardanelles gun appears in my Baron Munchausen sheet where it's been suitably exaggerated in size to nearly blot out the sun (as per the Baron's source text), so the description of Mehmed's version seems...plain? Like I'm more interested in its Anti-Rome abilities at present when I should probably be equally interested in both aspects.

    You mention it being able to shoot down Babylon's walls potentially so I'm curious about any more anecdotes like that, I guess.

    Then again he does appear in Requiem I think, are any of his abilities based on his appearance there? I wouldn't know.
    Last edited by Bugs; January 12th, 2022 at 08:31 PM.

  2. #7362
    後継者 Successor
    Join Date
    Dec 2021
    Age
    20
    Posts
    815
    Blog Entries
    1
    No If I remember it correctly, Mehmed II was in briefly seen in fate/apocrypha and in the fan made Fate/Himuko World.

  3. #7363
    魔神ムルムル Kamera's Avatar
    Join Date
    Aug 2019
    Location
    Melbourne
    Gender
    Male
    Posts
    1,706
    Blog Entries
    1
    Quote Originally Posted by Bugs View Post
    The bombard/Dardanelles gun appears in my Baron Munchausen sheet where it's been suitably exaggerated in size to nearly blot out the sun (as per the Baron's source text), so the description of Mehmed's version seems...plain? Like I'm more interested in its Anti-Rome abilities at present when I should probably be equally interested in both aspects.

    You mention it being able to shoot down Babylon's walls potentially so I'm curious about any more anecdotes like that, I guess.

    Then again he does appear in Requiem I think, are any of his abilities based on his appearance there? I wouldn't know.
    The Dardanelles gun is actually a different cannon than the one that's actually used in the Siege of Constantinople (the Orban gun), this one is supposed to be significantly larger. About it being plain, fair point but honestly it's more meant for a BFG relying on sheer firepower than any fancy conceptual shenanigans, though maybe you could argue it's an Anti-Capital City weapon.

    Quote Originally Posted by Ismail2002 View Post
    No If I remember it correctly, Mehmed II was in briefly seen in fate/apocrypha and in the fan made Fate/Himuko World.
    Yeah, his Apocrypha cameo in Vlad's flashback is a bit misleading though, Mehmed was only 30 years old during his Wallachian campaign, yet the anime depicts him as an old man.
    Last edited by Kamera; January 12th, 2022 at 08:50 PM.

  4. #7364
    超高校級のゲーマーガール Anju Addams's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2018
    Location
    Present Day, Present Time
    Gender
    Female
    Posts
    432
    Blog Entries
    2
    Quote Originally Posted by Ismail2002 View Post
    No If I remember it correctly, Mehmed II was in briefly seen in fate/apocrypha and in the fan made Fate/Himuko World.
    It's Himuro's World. Since the magazine was published by TYPE-Moon, I would say it's an official source however non-canon. Also, Ufotable made an OVA of it too.
    Pronouns - She/Her
    Winner of the Legendary Jack-Off
    Nzambi Fanclub President

    Top Five Favourite Servants


  5. #7365
    魔神ムルムル Kamera's Avatar
    Join Date
    Aug 2019
    Location
    Melbourne
    Gender
    Male
    Posts
    1,706
    Blog Entries
    1
    Right, the faceclaim is from that OVA. Though, he doesn't get much action in there compared to others, only seen chilling with his Master and cats.


  6. #7366
    死徒二十七祖 The Twenty Seven Dead Apostle Ancestors Kabalisto Koga's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2018
    Location
    The H/eart/h of Europe
    Age
    26
    Gender
    Male
    Posts
    2,763
    Blog Entries
    4
    As Mehmed II is on my servant list do i like to say quite well done i would have went more a rider class variation of it .

    Also some interesting Osmanic facts : the OOsman Empire were founded near the Byzantine empire . and that due to that the Byzantine Ruler disbanded their own Army for one out of merceneries ,had they often had to hire the Osmans for their services and that as dept payment they gettheir first foothold in europe !

    - - - Updated - - -

    Quote Originally Posted by Kamera View Post
    Right, the faceclaim is from that OVA. Though, he doesn't get much action in there compared to others, only seen chilling with his Master and cats.

    thats honestly epic ! plus thats Platon sama the greaetest of European Sages !
    Your verified Chikara-production Studios !

    Dont ship me with anyone unless i say so !

    When you wake a Dragon in his Lair...





  7. #7367
    祖 Ancestor NMR-3's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2015
    Posts
    1,100
    Blog Entries
    1
    Honestly, I feel like I've been doing nothing but Extra Classes for a while. Gonna go back to the basics for my next Servant.
    The Adventure of the Velvet Room (Sherlock Holmes/Persona) (SB, FFN, AO3)

    Blog with all of my Servants so far.

  8. #7368
    後継者 Successor
    Join Date
    Dec 2021
    Age
    20
    Posts
    815
    Blog Entries
    1
    Class: Lancer
    True Name: Abd Al Raman ( Lily )
    Origins: Al Andalusia
    Alignment: Lawful Balance

    Parameters

    Strength: D
    Endurance: B
    Agility: B
    Mana: C
    Luck: EX
    NP: A

    Summoning Line:Lancer Class, Name Abd Al Raman. Uhm hey I got to ask what is the reason that you summon me. Gulp, thatís is the reason why, will you excuse me for a sec (Screams internally)

    Lore/Background:
    Abd al-Rahman I ibn Muíawiya was the founder of the Moorish Arab dynasty that ruled the greater part of Iberia for nearly three centuries (including the succeeding Caliphate of Cůrdoba). Abd al-Rahman was a member of the Umayyad dynasty in Damascus, and his establishment of a government in Iberia represented a break with the Abbasids, who had overthrown the Umayyads in Damascus in 750. When that happen just ran faraway into the east and getting to some wacky hijinks along the way.

    He was also known by the surnames al-Dakhil ("the Entrant"), Saqr Quraish ("the Falcon of Quraysh")and as ďthe Falcon of Andalusia".


    Class Skills:
    Magic Resistance (C Rank): Cancel spells with a chant below two verses. Cannot defend against magecraft on the level of greater magecraft and Greater Rituals.


    Personal Skills :
    Runaway Royal (A Rank): this skill allows Lancer to runaway unimpeded into a safe zone. In this skill his agility rose and Lancer can navigate himself through any terrain. While in this skill his trace as a servant is dimmish so itís hard to track him down. This skill came from escaped to Al Andalusia while being chased away by the Abbasids

    Al Dakhil (EX Rank): This skill allows lancer to breach into any bounded field that he came across and hide in it for a while but the catch once his been found out and kick out he canít use this skill again on the same bound flied or any of the same bounded field casted by the same magi or servant. This skill came form its name which means those who entered and the fact that Lancer is always welcome at first in a new place but for one reason or another he always needs to flee form it and can never go back.

    Familial Sanctuary (C+ Rank): This skill allows Lancer to ward of a building form any invasive divination magecraft. A perfect place to hide away, also Lancer can choose to leave a hidden trail for his allies to follow into his new base. This skill is based on how he reunited with his family after in Cordoba after being chase away into hiding and got separated from them.


    Noble Phantasm:
    Soaring Spear, Saqr Quraish.
    Type: Anti-Country
    Rank: A
    Chant: I will run away no more, this time I will take back what I lost. This is my retribution.

    This noble phantasm turns Lancer into a soaring falcon that targets what ever the last thing in Lancer mind when he cast this. This NP acts like a heat seeking missile tracking down the mana traces of the I intended target that lancer comes up with. The downside to this NP is that when hit Lancer had little chance to survive the impact and it can be outmanoeuvred causing Lancer to run out of his mana really quick. This NP came from his famous nicknamed by his arch nemesis Al Mansur of the Abbasids praising him here is the quote his cunning and quick witness. This also his last dream and wish, to take back the things that the Abbasids took away form him but he never really achieves it in life.


    Misc Lines :
    Likes: I place that I can relax safely without worrying about my life.

    Dislikes: Myself and how powerless I felt when the Abbasids took over. I just ran a lot of them died in front of my eyes and I just ran. Sorry, didnít mean to get emotional.

    Holy Grail: Maybe with this I can take back what I lost. But then again, I already seen what happen if I tried to wish for something like that. What I am supposed to do, I am going to cool my head off for a while.í

    Event: Master, what with all that commotion outside. Can you check it out for me? I will be guarding your back, probably


    Bond Lines:
    Bond Lines 1: Master, I am glad that you are save, well I know that you would be. Are you still made on what happen didnít you? Sorry, I just panic there for a moment. So, my apologies.

    Bond Line 2: Master, please hide me somewhere. What did I do well, I well I was doing my routine walk then I accidently ran into the womanís bath? Donít ask me on how it happen okay. Even I donít know, I must be cursed or something.

    Bond Line 3: Go away, I am not here. Even if I am here. What do you want with a coward like me anyway? I just held you back.

    Bond Line 4: I know that I canít keep running away forever there is a time where I have to make my stance. But I, No I have to face my fears in earnest or I will never get anywhere like this.

    Bond Line 5: I want to say thank you to you master, before this I was in all honesty a freaking mess. I couldn't even raise my spear to anyone. But my time with you given me my courage. So, thank you for being patience with me.


    Relationships:
    Hassanís: Excuse me, now is the time to use my secret technique. (Nigerundayo).

    Scheherazade: Trust me, I know how you the feeling of death becoming immanent. Struggling in the hands of a mad king that is going to end your life. We might deal with them in different ways but yeah, I know the feeling.

    The Paladins of Charlemagne : Your boss cause me lot problems back then. I don't supposed you can call him over so we have a nice long talk. On second thought maybe not.

    Charlemagne: You really cause a lot problems back than. Seriously, I thought It was over for when your army rush in to Zaragoza. But, let bygones be bygones right.

    Rashidun Caliphate: My great predecessor is here; this is so nerve racking. I am going to hide for a while.

    Rashidun Caliphate (Bond 5): Okay, this is it. This time I will try to talk to them. Ahem, Assalamualaikum, please it nice to meet you my predecessors


    Creators Notes :
    So, I finish this sheet this servant was an interesting one because I build him around his personality and growth that he had in his life. Also if your wondering why I put his luck at EX basically this guy has plot armor in his early life. I am not going to list them all but the amount of near death experience that this guy have is a bit absurd. So, anyway is there anything that I need to fix in his sheet also can somebody can suggest me a good faceclaim for the guy.
    Last edited by Ismail2002; January 23rd, 2022 at 10:03 PM.

  9. #7369
    The smell of the lukewarm ocean and the chorus of cicadas RoydGolden's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2015
    Location
    Hitogashima
    Age
    54
    Gender
    Male
    Posts
    12,280
    Blog Entries
    1
    Raman: Interesting sheet. This guy sounds like a less successful Gideon in his "coward who wants to stand and fight" deal. Given he's a Lancer does his NP involve his spear in any way?

  10. #7370
    後継者 Successor
    Join Date
    Dec 2021
    Age
    20
    Posts
    815
    Blog Entries
    1
    Yes, It basically does the marvel Thor thing where launches himself with it

  11. #7371
    魔神ムルムル Kamera's Avatar
    Join Date
    Aug 2019
    Location
    Melbourne
    Gender
    Male
    Posts
    1,706
    Blog Entries
    1
    I feel like you don't give the guy enough credit honestly. He should at least be Charlemagne tier (he technically did BTFO Charlemagne and Roland).

  12. #7372
    後継者 Successor
    Join Date
    Dec 2021
    Age
    20
    Posts
    815
    Blog Entries
    1
    I based this on more his early life when he ran away from Damascus. Also Distinctly remember that it was the city of Zaragoza that did most of the heavy work.

  13. #7373
    魔神ムルムル Kamera's Avatar
    Join Date
    Aug 2019
    Location
    Melbourne
    Gender
    Male
    Posts
    1,706
    Blog Entries
    1
    Ah I see. Kind of a shame though, his reign in Andalusia is just as interesting. Still, he's actually on my to-do list as Rider, and I would definitely go for full wank

    Also, yeah, the Zaragoza Incident made everyone involved seem so incompetent in comparison lol

  14. #7374
    Name: Coronus
    Class: Saber
    Origin: Greek Mythology
    Alignment: Chaotic Neutral

    "This is the only gift I possess. The only thing I can share"

    STR: C
    AGI: A
    END: C
    MAG: D
    LCK: B



    Caeneus the Argonaut, Caeneus the Tyrant, Caeneus the Slaughterer. Many were the title the infamous warrior blessed by Poseidon possessed, akin to the god's foul moods the warrior's desires swept over the land and broken many a people and atop those corpses the Lapitheans partook of blessings and wealth. Nomadic warriors who worshiped strength of arms and nothing else they were trade-friends of the centaurs and often invited such for celebrations and games, despite the danger, perhaps their attitudes were so similar an understanding was found. Disaster struck when the Centaur Eurytion attempted to kidnap the bride of Pirithous, a war ensued and the centaurs lost but Caeneus was driven into the depths of the underworld, literally as his blessing annulled all harm and the centaurs piled rocks upon rocks on top of him and from that wreckage a golden bird was born, without fanfare or words it left for the wider sky

    Coronus is the 'son' of Caeneus, born a woman, she was ignored by her father who despised weakness, nonetheless Coronus driven defeated her siblings and forced her father to acknowledge her. Caeneus was not kind, Caeneus was not understanding, he was a tyrant and warrior who only understood power and those lessons he drove into the bones of Coronus again and again irregardless of her age, stoically the child endured and soon blossomed into a great warrior, one who despite her young age was accepted into the Argonauts alongside Theseus, who was near of age.

    The 'mascot' of Argonauts like Theseus but infinitely more problematic, fully embracing her Lapitheans heritage, the lessons of Caeneus and the tales of Thessaly, Coronus was always on the frontlines alongside her father slaughtering any would would stand in the way of the Argonauts with an unsettling silence, the opposite of her loud father who roared mighty war-cries and insults, but nonetheless her eyes burned with desire and the arms were always ready to move and take another life, another corpse for her growing legend. Yet Caeneus was dissatisfied with his son, despite Coronus being the embodiment of his lessons and true heir.....He would not acknowledge it but as Poseidon took the freedom of Caenis and shattered her, Caeneus chained Coronus with his own desires and burdens leaving near nothing of the child that was born of herself alone. Words unspoken that came to mind when buried by rocks and the becoming of a divine spirit and even as of now Caenis/Caeneus does not speak of Coronus and during their only meeting she was sent away, perhaps a gift?

    Taking leadership of the Lapitheans, Coronus continued the path of Caeneus and entered in conflict against Aegimius who had the aid of Heracles. The result is obvious.

    "Better to die than be a coward"
    "Fight. Fight. Fight"
    "Swing swords. Break their legs. Bite their throats"

    Yet within Chaldea she interacts with those who are not warriors, yet such people became legends, possessing great courage and will surpassing the many warriors she once lead. Coronus does not think Caeneus was wrong, she has long learned in life that Caeneus taught her out of fear out of Coronus becoming another 'Caenis' and thus acted to supress anything that could be seen as a 'weakness'. Alas the words of the strong was not to be questioned and Coronus accepted all that was laid out as truth but within Chaldea where the 'weakest' leads the strong she has began to ponder

    Skills

    Class Skill
    Magic Resistance (C): Lapitheans. A race of warriors born from Lapithes. A Warrior Tribe as famed as the Myrmidons, they were wild and strong, a tribe who survived deep within phantasmal lands and were seen as equals by the Centaurs. Skill further polished by being taken to all corners of the world as an Argonaut and an ever presence in the frontlines. Learning from Asclepius and Medea healing Coronus learned to manipulate her own magical energy and grew leaps and bounds. Some within the ship regret that such potential was squandered away

    Riding (E): Downgraded by the curse of the centaurs. The slaughtering of the last of their blood makes it impossible for her to get close to horses and the wilderness loathes her

    Personal Skills
    Monstrous Strength (A): Unblessed, ungifted, of weak divine blood yet she stood shoulder to shoulder with Caeneus. Pride and disgust fills him at having created such 'monster'. The greatest King of Lapith when it comes to being a warrior, one who has long surpassed human logic by the sheer amount of phantasmal blood shed and if given a few more years a metamorphosis would have began but alas Coronus was cut down by Heracles

    Eye of Mind (True) (B-): Capable of calm analysis of battle conditions even when in danger and deduce an appropriate course of action after considering all possibilities to escape from a predicament. Any tactic is allowed and completely disregarding oaths, rules and mercy allows for an understanding of the battlefield that is inhumanly cruel but acknowledging utter defeat is impossible thus rank downs. Retreat to recover wounds and plan is allowed but the feeling of defeat will never 'settle in'. To be defeated is to die, as long as the body breathes Coronus will shoot for victory even as the world burns around her and sheathing the sword would be the optimal path

    Tempest's War Cry (A): The nature of Lapiths embodied in a war cry. Surpassing the centaurs they run, free, unbound, with the wind itself guiding them, all to sink their teeth into the neck of their enemies. The complete disregard of one's humanity and own life to take down the enemy, a form of self-hypnosis (curse) that spreads throughout the ranks and creates a howling army. This is not the result of the blood of the gods, a curse, possession or any mystery. It's Coronus declaration to the world


    Noble Phantasm

    Centaurmachia-Absolute Slaughter
    Anti-Army
    Rank B
    Coronus not taught of mercy or anything else but grasping the sword, set off to finish the war her father died in. The Lapitheans fearing the anger of the gods admonished, her father's closest companions telling her to sheathe the blade and reach to foreign lands for supplies and resources to heal their diminished numbers. Coronus slaughtered them for cowardice and set off. Soon enough news would spread of Centaur Chieftain after another being slaughtered and their children being run down. Coronus returned home with a collection of their heads and dropping in in front of a stunned audience the then king abandoned the crown and held it to Coronus in horrified silence.

    Her victims fear, despair, struggle, death and blood have all been gathered and formed into her weapon. A cursed blade born from the death of an entire race. Against phantasmal with similarities to centaurs it's nothing but utter death, even a minimal relation, like being a horse, allows it to deliver great damage. When activated all defenses are stripped away and the air becomes thick with the scent of blood and alcohol and slowly all within are converted into soldiers of slaughter, killing any within their field of vision to spread the noble phantasm further
    Last edited by BoktaiMoon; January 13th, 2022 at 09:13 PM.

  15. #7375
    後継者 Successor
    Join Date
    Dec 2021
    Age
    20
    Posts
    815
    Blog Entries
    1
    Quote Originally Posted by Kamera View Post
    Ah I see. Kind of a shame though, his reign in Andalusia is just as interesting. Still, he's actually on my to-do list as Rider, and I would definitely go for full wank

    Also, yeah, the Zaragoza Incident made everyone involved seem so incompetent in comparison lol
    Since your planning on doing that. I could make this a lily, so it could connect between the two sheets, How about it

  16. #7376
    魔神ムルムル Kamera's Avatar
    Join Date
    Aug 2019
    Location
    Melbourne
    Gender
    Male
    Posts
    1,706
    Blog Entries
    1
    Coronus: Cool angry bird. Yet another fantastic Greek mythology tragedy Servants from you, looking forward for more. Kinda reminds me of the Coronis sheet I made, wonder if they'll get along?


    Quote Originally Posted by Ismail2002 View Post
    Since your planning on doing that. I could make this a lily, so it could connect between the two sheets, How about it
    fine by me. character development let's goo

  17. #7377
    Quote Originally Posted by Kamera View Post
    Coronus: Cool angry bird. Yet another fantastic Greek mythology tragedy Servants from you, looking forward for more. Kinda reminds me of the Coronis sheet I made, wonder if they'll get along?
    Well Coronis was caged by Apollo but Coronus was born caged by Caeneus and doesn't even have much of a personality aside from slaughter machine, like she factually understands why Caeneus acts in certain ways but lacks the emotional capacity to connect it. So Coronis would just be sad that Coronus doesn't even understand freedom/doing things of her own wish and got 'cut down before her wings could grow'. I think Heracles would have complicated feelings as well because he saw Coronus grow and her personality made sure she wasn't afraid of him, probably even a scene where she asked him to teach some stuff, before Caeneus interrupted as usual. Jason totally mothers hers. Theseus will try to drag emotion. Asclepius is all 'number one patient, physically speaking'

    I just can't make happy servant sheets. I am a despair fetishist like Hans and Shakespeare at this point lol

  18. #7378
    後継者 Successor
    Join Date
    Dec 2021
    Age
    20
    Posts
    815
    Blog Entries
    1
    That okay some people have their niches like me, I been only making sheets for muslim heroes as of lately.

  19. #7379
    Hey looking at some Arthurian stuff and I think it was in this thread I saw a servant?

    A Pict Chieftain/King whose IRL legend is constantly badgering Arthur. Demanding Guinevere, giving Arthur a limp leg and then recognizing Arthur in disguise, ends with his death

    The servant take was a self-declared rival of Artoria whose last attack is a lucky shot, a fragment of his sword hits Artoria and he dies satisfied he managed to pierce through after so many fights? It used Todo from Jujutsu Kaisen as a faceclaim because of a skill and when he let loose it changed to Kenpachi? I am searching it on wikipedia but Picts and Arthurian Legend is getting me fucking nothing

  20. #7380
    The smell of the lukewarm ocean and the chorus of cicadas RoydGolden's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2015
    Location
    Hitogashima
    Age
    54
    Gender
    Male
    Posts
    12,280
    Blog Entries
    1
    Quote Originally Posted by BoktaiMoon View Post
    Hey looking at some Arthurian stuff and I think it was in this thread I saw a servant?

    A Pict Chieftain/King whose IRL legend is constantly badgering Arthur. Demanding Guinevere, giving Arthur a limp leg and then recognizing Arthur in disguise, ends with his death

    The servant take was a self-declared rival of Artoria whose last attack is a lucky shot, a fragment of his sword hits Artoria and he dies satisfied he managed to pierce through after so many fights? It used Todo from Jujutsu Kaisen as a faceclaim because of a skill and when he let loose it changed to Kenpachi? I am searching it on wikipedia but Picts and Arthurian Legend is getting me fucking nothing
    Sounds like Skull's Hueil mab Caw sheet here.

Tags for this Thread

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •