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    Quote Originally Posted by jishara View Post
    Catherine Monvoisin

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    Class: Assassin
    Other Classes: N/A
    True Name: Catherine Monvoisin
    Alignment: Neutral Evil
    Place of Origin: France (17th century)

    Parameters:

    STR: D
    END: C
    AGI: C
    MGI: C
    LCK: B
    NP: C

    Height: 180cm
    Weight: 160lbs
    Likes: Customers, wealth
    Dislikes: Monarchy, cruel people
    Talent: Creating potions
    Natural Enemy: Marie Antoinette
    Attribute: Man
    Traits: Female, Humanoid, Weak to Enuma Elish
    Armament: La Voisin
    Catalyst: Her portrait, a copy of it

    Class Skills:
    Presence Concealment E: She never hid in life and so has almost no ranking in this.

    Personal Skills:
    Poisoner Head B: This skill encompasses both her skills with poisoning and her ability to teach them. Passively, any poisons she makes or distributes will be much more effective. Actively, she can transform a human, giving them Poisoner rank D, allowing them to make poisons and be more effective with them, and Spying B, allowing them to carry information back to her. They also become under her control.
    Black Mass C+: This skill is the embodiment of her rituals. This allows her to cast several magic spells through them. Low-ranked rituals only require her power, but higher ranked ones require a suspension of mummy dust, human blood, or assorted other compounds. However, this cost is negligible as long as her Noble Phantasm is still available. However, her very highest ranked feats of magic require a human sacrifice, which she cannot create through her Noble Phantasm.
    Fortune Telling C: A fusion of Human Anatomy Understanding at the same rank and Clairvoyance at a rank above. She used her knowledge of physiology to become a successful fortune teller in her own right.
    Noble Phantasm(s):

    The Affair of the Poisons
    La Voisin

    Type: Support
    Rank: C
    Range: 0m
    Max Targets: 0

    This is the sublimation of the aphrodisiacs and poisons that she specialised in. It is embodied in a single floating bottle. At her will, it can fill up with any liquid at all. This includes potions and poisons, but also blood, juice, and any liquid you could possibly ever think of. Of course, if this bottle is destroyed, this noble phantasm becomes sealed.

    Lore:
    Catherine Monvoisin was a fortune teller who supported her family by gradually branching out into being a midwife, then an abortion provider, and then a sorcerer, and finally a poisoner and potioneer. She was known for the Affair of the Poisons, when she was commissioned by the Madame de Montespan to murder king Louis XIV. She chose to try to murder him by poisoning a petition to be delivered to him. But that day the king did not take her petitions, so she planned to discuss a new plan after mass on Sunday. But she was arrested before then. She was then tried and executed for witchcraft.

    Personality:
    A cold and cruel person, she becomes more peppy for customers. She highly distrusts anyone who claims to be genuinely kind entirely, believing such a thing is impossible. However, if her Master is someone who acknowledges their flaws and their sins, whether or not they wish to repeat them, the two would get along very well, especially if they successfully assassinated someone. Her wish for the Grail would be to gain more customers.

    Relationships:
    Marie Antoinette: "Hello. Would you like a reading? No? Oh, why are you so mad? My assassination attempt? Well then, as my apologies here's a cup of tea. Oh? You don't want it? Oh, that's too bad. (I had hoped to serve you this lovely poison.)"
    Abigail Williams: "Meh. You think that will drive me insane? Little girl, I'm already utterly mad."
    Charlotte Corday: "Honestly, I'm impressed. That assassination was difficult, but you succeeded and went out on your own terms."
    Great Servant!!!! Although the low Presence Concealment Skill would make her a risky choice of an Assassin in a Holy Grail War (although removing others ability to access an Assassin might make up for the loss in spawn kill potential).
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    hi, thanks so much yeah, she would be a bit risky, though she would often instead used controlled humans that she gets through Poisoner Head.

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    "I believe that if you think about disaster, you will get it. Brood about death and you will hasten your demise.
    Think positively and masterfully with confidence and faith, and life becomes more secure,
    more fraught with action, richer in achievement and experience.
    This is the sure way to win victories over inner defeat. It is the way a humble person meets life or death."

    "Aviation is proof that given, the will, we have the capacity to achieve the impossible."



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    A R C H E R
    Of Blue Skies

    《- Max Immelmann -》




    Class Archer
    True Name Max Immelmann
    Alias Der Adler von Lille (engl.: The Eagle of Lille)
    Alternate Classes Rider, Gunner, Watcher
    Origin WW1, Germany
    Alignment Neutral Good
    Armaments WW1-era pistol
    Fokker Eindecker (Fokker E.1)
    Catalyst A piece of his plane,
    A "Pour le Mérite" or a replica of it.
    Attribute Human
    Height/Weight 177 cm, 82 kg

    STR END AGI
    D D C
    MAN LCK NP
    E C C

    "Ah! A good day to you. You must be my Master, yes?"

    "Very well. My name is Max, and I am a Servant of the Archer Class and I am very happy to be in your service. I hope that this will be the beginning to what will be, at the least, a good working relationship."

    《 ~~ ✈ ~~ Class Skills ~~ ✈ ~~ 》《 ~~ ✈ ~~ Class Skills ~~ ✈ ~~ 》
    Independant Action D+++
    Archer’s particular Independent Action is an odd one as it seems almost entirely dormant normally. The ‘+++’ is assigned because once Archer is traversing the sky, his Independent Action begins to kick into overdrive becoming strong enough to outclass an Independent Action of Rank A and even self-replenishing some mana for Archer.

    "It is well expected, but no less disappointing that I do not particularly excel in this area. I am a soldier, I would like to think I was a good one as well. Sadly, being a soldier means that I am at my best when I follow orders and that leaves very few independent actions being taken by me. Pardon the pun."
    Riding B
    Denotes the ability of a Servant to ride mounts, typically the chief skill of Rider Class Servants. Mechanically, it causes the parameters of mounts, living or not, that Archer uses to be increased while he uses them and also gives him the required knowledge to operate them to a proficient level.

    Archer was one of the first greats in the field of aerial combat and developed manoeuvres that are still known to this very day, warranting the relatively high ranking.

    "I am very glad that the Grail still recognises my capability, even though I was not summoned as a Rider. I spent a lot of time training and perfecting my craft, so it would have been a shame to know my effort had been in vain. But, my effort is rewarded in the end."


    《 ~~ ✈ ~~ Personal Skills ~~ ✈ ~~ 》《 ~~ ✈ ~~ Personal Skills ~~ ✈ ~~ 》
    Charisma of the Aerial Ace B
    A particular kind of Charisma given to pilots, particularly those of the first World War, for their ability to inspire entire armies simply by passing overhead in their planes and even earning admiration from the enemies for their fighting prowess. Simply seeing Archer in his plane is enough to inspire his allies into fighting on.

    Archer was one of the most well-known Aces of the first world war and was one of the first German fighter pilots in general. He shares the honour of being the first combat ace with his peer Oswald Boelcke and was well respected enough by his enemies that, when he fell behind their lines, they gave him a funeral with all the honours they could and, once possible, retrieved his remains to be returned to Germany. His death shook both his allies and his enemies, to the point that Boelcke was not allowed to fly for a long time afterwards, for fear of demoralising the entire German army with a second death.

    "It is, oddly, very humbling and gratifying to hear that my death made waves that reached this far. What can a man wish for more than to be mourned and missed after he is gone, after all? I work tirelessly to be remembered as a great pilot, and knowing that I succeeded is very rewarding in its own, admittedly somewhat twisted, way."
    Honour of the Sky Knights C
    A skill granted to those who truly embodied the modern chivalry of early combat aces and a mark of a true honourable knight. It unites some of the key values held by those early combat aces and grants access to low ranking versions of the Instincts, Tactics and Valour skills.

    Immelmann was one of the first of the new group of knights of the sky and was very well respected for all the work he invested into driving forward the progress in this field. He took his position as a new-age knight in stride and did his best to honour the expectations this put on him, granting him this skill.

    "This is a bit much isn’t it? I assure you, Master, I am no knight in shining armour. I am merely a soldier doing his duty. Part of my duty was to keep my brother’s spirits up. I saw and heard them cheer when they saw me and my aerial brethren. I knew they leaned on us somewhat, so if I could keep their spirits up this way, I felt it was my duty to work towards keeping their spirits as high as I could."
    Mind's Eye (True) C
    A sort of sixth sense or particularly strong intuition that can keep the user from harm and help them predict their opponent’s actions and change their own strategy accordingly. This skill in particular can only be obtained through extensive training and is refined by experience.

    Unlike a particular contemporary of his, Archer had no particular talent in his field and wasn’t naturally gifted in the pilot’s seat. Instead, he obtained all of his skills through incredibly hard work. Many who knew Archer often commended him on his insistence on maintaining rigorous physical exercise and he tried his best to keep his own mind as sharp as possible at all times.


    "For this, however, I will take some credit. I did work very hard indeed to keep up with some of my more gifted peers. I believe that one should always take pride in their own hard work, regardless of what it is exactly that one is working on. Taking some small pride in one’s own work goes a long way in ensuring one keeps a healthy mind. On that note, I do hope that you have been taking a step back to be proud of your own work from time to time, Master."
    Proof of Friendship D
    A skill that allows a Servant to suppress another’s fighting spirit, to a certain point at which conversation can begin, giving a Servant advantages for constructing alliances.

    Archer was widely known as an incredibly polite, courteous individual and all-out gentleman. Not only for this but also for his immense skill and discipline he was a highly respected man. So much so that when he shot pilots down, he would land nearby and pull the pilot from the wreckage - In some instances that enemy pilot was armed, while Archer was not - and escorted them behind his lines without further fighting.

    "I remember in particular the story of one Lieutenant William Reid, a splendid pilot, whom I had managed to shoot down from the skies. I landed nearby to see whether he was still alive and when I found he was, I freed him from what was left of his plane, administered first aid and shook hands with him before bringing him back to my lines. He was rather badly wounded, but he was also armed. The exchange could easily have ended with me being shot. I appealed to him to hand me his gun so that I could escort him and he could be treated properly. Well, he did not hand me his weapon, but he did throw it aside and came along with me."


    《 ~~ ✈ ~~ Noble Phantasm ~~ ✈ ~~ 》《 ~~ ✈ ~~ Noble Phantasm ~~ ✈ ~~ 》
    Twist and turn, cut through the sky
    Immelmann Turn

    Anti-Unit | E

    The Immelmann Turn is a manoeuvre named after and supposedly thought up and employed in battle by Archer. An ascending half-loop followed by a half-roll, resulting in level flight in the opposite direction at a higher altitude, which, in historical context, was most likely used after a diving attack to regain altitude. As a Noble Phantasm, it allows Archer to force any projectile he fires, or mount that he controls to complete the motion of an Immelmann Turn.

    "In theory, if I rode an elephant, I could force the World to make the elephant do an Immelmann Turn. But I don’t think that this would be in any way beneficial, for the elephant or me"

    Though he can use it while piloting a plane, similar to how he used to use it in real life. Now he much prefers to use it on projectiles fired by him, using this Skill essentially allows his projectiles to do U-turns and catch opponents off guard, in theory, he can use this Skill on a singular projectile as often as he like, though, since doing an Immelmann also means gaining altitude, the projectile would eventually be too high to hit its intended target.

    Due to its rather weak nature, activating it, Archer does not have to call the Noble Phantasm's true name allowing him to safely use it as a reliable weapon. It is very likely that, if Archer is summoned in any other class but Archer the lacking strength of this Noble Phantasm would prevent it from manifesting as one causing it to instead be sublimated into a Skill.

    "An odd bit of history, to have a particular flying manoeuvre named after me. Especially since it is not all that impressive, honestly. Regardless, it is a valuable asset to have on my side which I shall use at every opportunity."
    Pour le Mérite
    Blauer Max
    Blue Max

    Anti-Unti (Self) | Rank C

    The Pour le Mérite was one of the most highly regarded orders of merit one could receive in Prussia. Archer and Oswald Boelcke were the first Aces to be awarded this honour and thanks to Archer’s country-wide fame, it was eventually nicknamed “Blauer Max” in his honour.

    Through this Noble Phantasm Archer gains the ability to converse with other recipients of the Pour le Mérite. They manifest as voices in his head, usually only when Archer calls on them, but may also speak with him on their own accord should they, for some reason, will themselves into speaking to him. This aspect of the Noble Phantasm is passive and to speak with another recipient of the award Archer needs no more than to say their name with the intention of speaking with them. Though Archer can use this to gain counsel from many other heroes, he also often uses it to have conversations with old friends when he feels lonely.

    When the True Name of this Noble Phantasm is recited alongside the name of another recipient the knowledge and abilities of that particular recipient are briefly accessible to Archer. During this time, their voice will also manifest in his head and, if Archer allows them to, they can very briefly possess his body as well.

    "I was very much against others naming one of the highest honours to be given after me. But, you know how these things go, when you tell others to stop with things like these, it only causes them to keep going and so I find myself forever immortalised as the namesake for an alias of the Pour le Mérite. Although I do have to admit, there are much worse ways to be immortalised, honestly. It is occasionally a bit odd to have this Noble Phantasm, have a conversation with a recipient and then later meet them walking around here. Especially because they cannot remember any of the conversations we hold through this."
    Bond 5:

    Standing shoulder to shoulder, united in pride
    Blauer Max
    Blue Max

    Anti-Unti (Self) | Rank C+

    When making the abilities of another accessible to himself through this Noble Phantasm, Archer’s memories become slightly blurred with the memories of another Spirit. Causing him to occasionally misremember information about himself, or inexplicably know of another Servant's history without actually having met them in life.

    While the Noble Phantasm is in use Archer can also gain access to a lesser version of that Spirit’s Noble Phantasm, should they possess one. However, using another spirit’s Noble Phantasm through this one is likely to consume so much mana that the effects of this Noble Phantasm immediately end.



    《 ~~ ✈ ~~ Background ~~ ✈ ~~ 》《 ~~ ✈ ~~ Background ~~ ✈ ~~ 》
    Max Immelmann was a publicly known fighter pilot who was the first aviator to be awarded the prestigious Order Pour-le-Mérite for his successes in aerial combat. He received a variety of orders and decorations for his bravery, including the Iron Cross First Class, the Iron Cross Second Class, and the Knight's Cross with Swords of the House of Hohenzollern.

    Max Immelmann was born in Dresden on 21 September 1890. From 1905 to 1911 he received training in the cadet corps in Dresden and then decided to study engineering at the technical college in Dresden, which he completed between 1912 and 1914. With the start of the First World War, he enlisted in the Army Air Forces.

    His first experiences as a pilot were anything but glamorous. He was deployed as a reconnaissance pilot near Lille in France. Within a short time, however, Immelmann earned a reputation as an effective fighter pilot. As a result, the "Eagle of Lille", as German newspapers called him, was promoted to lieutenant in September 1915. He developed the air combat manoeuvre named after him - the "Immelmann" - consisting of a simultaneous executed roll and sweep that allowed the pilot to quickly change direction and thus get behind the enemy. It became a standard air combat manoeuvre that is still practised today.

    After his eighth aerial victory in January 1916, he received the Order Pour-le-Mérite. In May of the same year, he became commander of the "Combat Single-Seater Command 3" (Kampf-Einsitzer-Kommando 3 (KEK)). He was shot down in aerial combat over Sallaumines in northern France on 18 June 1916. During the war, Immelmann wrote a large number of letters to his mother, which were then published for propaganda reasons in the autobiography "Meine Kampfflüge".



    《 ~~ ✈ ~~ Description ~~ ✈ ~~ 》《 ~~ ✈ ~~ Description ~~ ✈ ~~ 》
    Likes
    "Well, obviously, I enjoy flying. I hadn’t chosen to do it if I didn’t like it. Something else I like, oddly, seems to be to work. Especially if I can work hard to get or learn something. Putting effort into something and finally seeing your results is something, I think, rather magical. Sometimes finding the motivation is hard, yes, but the result is usually worth it in the end. If you ever find yourself needing someone to motivate you, I’d be happy to help out Master."

    Dislikes
    "I very much dislike people without discipline. I’m actually rather fast to cast judgement on this matter. If someone interrupts others while they speak, doesn’t treat people that are their senior with respect or holds the door for a lady, I will most likely have a hard time getting along with them. To me, these are the most basic things one must learn as a child to function during adulthood, they are the bare minimum I expect of a person."

    Wish for the Grail
    "Well, there are so many grandiose things to wish for aren’t there? I am sure you have met many soldiers who, without much hesitation, answered that they would wish for world peace. Surely many have also wished for things such as the end of starvation, creating enough resources for everyone and so on and so forth. But, while I try my best to be an optimist, I am also a pragmatic and I hardly believe that such a wish could be granted. Instead, I’d wish that people would naturally treat each other with a little more respect and kindness. Not everyone can be friends with everyone, that’s impossible. But, everyone can treat everyone else with common decency and respect. It at least seems a little more reasonable. I think that would also go a long way in solving problems like war, no?"
    Bond 5

    Likes
    "I actually quite like teaching others. Had I not gone to the military, I would most likely have pursued a career in that direction. In a way, my appearance as a Heroic Spirit is some odd kind of wish fulfilment. There are other Servants here, much older than me, who are very curious about our more modern times and modern sciences, and it is always a delight to converse with them and teach them not only what I know, but also all that the others with whom I correspond know."

    Dislikes
    "I have a rather selfish fear, one I would most often rather not admit. In life, I was very afraid that I would be forgotten, that I would become another soldier who was so disfigured in death that he could not be identified anymore. I realise that the fear of being forgotten is a common one, but that makes it no less arrogant to me. Although, I suppose there is little more immortalisation to be achieved than being placed on the Throne of Heroes."

    Wish for the Grail
    "If I only had to use a wish for myself? Well… I don’t really know. I suppose reincarnation would be nice. There are a lot of things I’d still like to do and see and learn but given the way my existence works if I disappear as a Servant and am summoned again all those experiences and memories won’t be there. I suppose I’d just wish not to be forgotten as well. It’s nice to know I at least left a little footnote in the annals of history, that is something to be proud of too."


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    Relationship with his Master
    "My relationship with you? Why, aren’t you a better judge of this than I am? But, if you want my honest opinion then I feel I should answer you honestly. You are, above all, my superior, the person in charge. You are my commanding officer and your command is my law. I am also happy to help you with anything not pertaining to my regular duties as a Servant, I am a rather good trainer and thanks to my Noble Phantasm, I’d imagine I would make quite the good teacher. Beyond that, why, I believe we can make quite good friends, no?"
    Servants with the Mad Enhancement Skill
    "What a shame this is... Great heroes and heroines, so many of them. They should be regarded with the utmost respect and held with the highest esteem and yet the Grail deranges them so. I can only be happy that not all of them are as affected by their madness as others, but it is a shame none the less."
    Any Servant that received the Pour le Mérite
    "Conversing with them here truly is the strangest feeling imaginable. I can have conversations with, say, Oswald Boelcke in my head and then I go to speak with the Oswald you summoned and he remembers none of it. It’s almost as though they are two separate beings. I do enjoy their company a lot. Not everyone who got the Pour le Mérite was a soldier. Some were philosophers and scientists, so hearing them has taught me many things. It’s almost as though I carry a miniature school in my own head. Strangely perhaps, I find it rather pleasant. Comforting, even, I’m never really alone after all."
    Manfred von Richthofen, the Red Baron
    "To be quite frank. I very much dislike his… intense… demeanour. Having said that his skills and legend are unparalleled, of that there is no question! He is possibly the most splendid pilot that there will ever be and, despite my dislike for him, I must admit that he has certainly earned it."
    Oswald Boelcke
    "Oswald is an old and a rather good friend of mine. Flying came quite naturally to him. He is a bit cocky, vain and arrogant at the worst of times, but he is otherwise certainly a very pleasant soul to be around. I wish he would spend some more time training rather than resting on his natural abilities. Now, if you’ll excuse me, I have some catching up to do with the man in question."
    Werner Voß
    "What a reckless idiot… I say this with the most fondness I can. I do enjoy his company, he can just be a lot sometimes. He’s a child at heart, really. If only he wasn’t so hell-bent on having his own heroic last stand, he could’ve done many more great things in his time. He somewhat idolises me, both this one and the version of him I speak to through my Noble Phantasm. Says I’m like a perfect knight of the sky. If he ever gets too much to handle, don’t hesitate to call for help. I’ve gotten pretty good at dealing with him."
    Nachthexen
    "Dear, oh dear. This one is quite a handful, isn’t she? Very boisterous, very jumpy. She and Werner would probably get along great… or they’d hate each other.'s guts Should my pride be a little hurt at her being so set on competing with von Richthofen and ignoring the rest of us? Most likely, but being upset about these things really is Werner’s job. I was never much of a fan of decorating planes, but I do like what she has done with hers. Perhaps I can talk her into giving mine a similar makeover?"


    Author's Note
    On today's episode of "I can't believe it's not Rider": Oswald Boelcke Alter, I mean Max Immelmann.

    Back to doing what I, hopefully, do best.

    He was actually a little more difficult to make than the others. Typically these pilots all have a defining moment or work to make into their Noble Phantasm. Voß had his last battle, Boelcke the Dicta Boelcke, von Richthofen has loads of things to turn into Phantasms. Meanwhile, Immelmann was more defined by a lot of small achievements that make up a much larger legend. I went back and forth on making Immelmann Turn a Noble Phantasm or skill, probably a dozen times and ultimately decided it with a coin toss. I do think his second Noble Phantasm fits nicely.

    Three pilots down, two more to go.


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    ah a new servant from Des? Time to shred it to pieces like last time:

    Good.

    Thank you for coming to my ted talk.

    Jokes aside, a good servant but reading it there were three things that came to mind:
    1) independent from him, I feel like an Archer Pilot that has his comrades as 'miniatures' with him would be pretty fun. Imagine them like toy planes acting like drones for Archer. Oh or a mix of the stands from JoJo Golden Wind, the boy with the plane and the guy with the bullets.
    2) Thematically I think it would have been cool to make the 'gentleman' in him a bigger focus in the design of the sheet. The Sky Knight was explored with Boelcke, but a Sky Gentleman sounds badass and honorable af if you ask me. Especially useful when the servnt in question has not much going for them, using a quirk can elevate the sheet.
    3) Building on one, I actually feel like this guy could pull of a Watcher Class. Reconaissance and his 2nd NP has these shadow vibes that makes the class appealing. The award is 'a blue max' so everone who gained it is one too. Therefore he can summon parts of himself. Stuff along those lines. You can pull that one off if you like.
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    Ooh, a WWI/WWII-era pilot in an extra Class would actually make for a fun challenge.

    I imagine Avenger would be the easiest, considering the nature of war and all that. I'm drawing a blank on everything else though.

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    Quote Originally Posted by jishara View Post
    True Name: Catherine Monvoisin
    interesting servant. i like the overall concept, but honestly that NP feels so lazy.


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    He really could fit the Watcher class. If ever I find some explanation to give him an Alter I'll definitely put him in that class.

    I usually just tend to avoid the Extra classes where I can, I don't even fully know myself why I do that. I just don't like writing them that much. Plus, like here, I tend not to think of them when I do some reading to write a Servant.
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    Nothing wrong with that.
    Doesnt even need to be an Alter.
    Alternative Class fits just fine.
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    Your wish is my command, great DelRey of the Extra Classes
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    I wouldn't dream of it.

    My task, for now, is to make sheets for five very obscure historical figures that nobody outside their own country, and even within, knows about with the exception of one who's arguably been overdone by now. And I'll be damned if I don't finish that before I start another "big" project!
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    "So, you are my summoner, I see. Good, let's get down to business! This’ll be a piece of cake."
    ...

    (The sword is much smaller than what is shown.)
    True Name: Sir Balin
    Class: Saber
    Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
    Source: Le Morte d'Arthur
    Region: Britain
    Armament: Sword

    Parameters:
    Strength: A
    Endurance: A
    Agility: B
    Mana: D
    Luck: E

    Class Skills:

    Magic Resistance B
    Grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether. Cancel spells with a chant below three verses. Even if targeted by greater magecraft and Greater Rituals, it is difficult for them to be affected.

    Riding B
    A Class Skill of Rider and Saber class Servants, denoting the ability to ride mounts and vehicles. Rider-class Servants will typically possess a high rank. It is said that dragon type mounts are an exception, requiring a different ability other than Riding. Most vehicles and animals can be handled with above average skill, even vehicles that did not exist in the time period one was alive in, for they are no exception. However, they cannot ride the likes of Phantasmal Species such as Monstrous Beasts.

    Personal Skills:

    Le Savage A
    A skill representing Lancer's inherent propensity for brutality and conflict. Similar to Berserk, this skill instead combines Bravery with Mental Pollution, intensifying her both damage and brutality whilst on the battlefield. Le Savage was a name picked up in her childhood, meaning The Savage. Given to her for her inclinations, she wore the name with pride until the end. Feral brutality powers her every strike, and the opportunistic mind of a beast holds her thoughts in combat; this skill is fully possessed unlike in the "other one."
    ...
    "Hah! I am who I am, and I wouldn't change that for the world."

    Formless Potential C
    A Skill denoting one whose potentials remained unfulfilled before the world. It was said that the Magus of Flowers, Merlin, had told King Arthur that Saber would have become the bravest knight of the round table, overshadowing the likes of Lancelot and Gawain. While she had held the proper qualifications, it was her own folly and the intervention of a third party that caused her potential to remain unrealized.

    "Tsk, It'll be different this time, ya know! I'll be worthy of being a Knight of the Round! After all…"

    Knight With Two Swords A
    A skill representing the alternate moniker of Saber. Differing from the one that she had taken up as part of her identity in a bid of prideful fervor, it is a gifted title. Using two swords in masterful concordance with one another, she was given this title by her brother. A personalized variant of Eternal Arms Mastery that heightens in effect when handling two items at the same time.

    "...I'm doing it for the both of us, right, Balan?"

    Noble Phantasm

    Arondight Balin: The Sword with the Red Hilt
    Rank: A
    Type: Anti-Unit
    The primary noble phantasm of Saber. A cursed sword inscribed with Fairy letters that Balin had received from a maiden that hailed from the land of Avalon. Imbued with the same concept of being fit to only be wielded by only the greatest of knights, unmatched in bravery, strength, and conduct, it bears a near identical appearance to the Arondight wielded by the Knight of the Lake though they are, in fact, separate swords.

    The sword had originally gone unnamed but was titled Arondight due to Balin feeling that "identical blades turned upon your brethren may as well have the same name" though it may have been due to it being something both Balin and Lancelot wielded. Wielding this sword grants a full rank up to all parameters, increasing Saber's already impressive parameters. However, there is something deeper that exists within the sword.
    Arondight Ruina: Reborn Sword of Destined Ruin
    Rank: A
    Type: Anti-Self

    The true primary noble phantasm of Saber. A sword modeled after the legendary cursed sword Tyrfing. Something to be used to by the best knight and drive them to ruin. While appearing much different when carried by the "Perfect Knight", it takes a similar appearance to Arondight due to the trait of being wielded by Balin and Lancelot as well as synchronizing with the true Arondight's concept of being wielded by the "Strongest Knight".

    Like the original Arondight, it also increases Saber's parameters except luck and mana by one. However, contrasting that, it implants two malefactors within her mind. To forever be in possession of this blade and to disregard the idea of consequences. The two malefactors, while strong, can be resisted to some extent by a strong mind. Alternatively, they can be suppressed by a strong holy weapon like the Lance of Longinus that was briefly within Sir Balin's possession.


    For No One's Glory: My Dear Brother's Armor
    Rank: C
    Type: Anti-Self

    The second noble phantasm of Saber. The red armor worn by her brother whilst he defended a castle. In legend, it is said that the armor rendered Balan unrecognizable to Balin while the shield she used caused the same. It was in that ignorance that both slew each other, and were subsequently buried within the same tomb. Such an occurrence that allows her to don the very same armor albeit she does so reluctantly.

    Behaving differently in Balin's possession, the armor acts as an alter ego that no one but her master can identify. No conclusions can be immediately drawn as to the identity of who is under the armor as it conceals Saber's true name and skills but not her parameters so a skilled analyst may be able to make an educated guess.


    Personality

    Different from the more considerate Lancer incarnation, this Balin is much less in line with the idea that one would have of a knight. Boisterous and crude, she carries an impetuous temperament more in common among thugs and other ruffians. She does, however, mean well and tries to be the knight worthy of the Round Table but unlike another crude knight of a similar thought process, she has no attachment and affection to the system of which such individuals operate under.

    Such things are only amplified by a, surprisingly, small margin by the malefactors of her noble phantasm due to unique synergy that has her both resist and follow the path of ruin set out for her. Cutting her off from the effect takes an extreme shock to her psyche or the overpowering presence of a holy item.


    Bond CE

    Dream, Wake, and Dream Again

    The moment I took the sword,
    All felt like a dream.
    I could do anything no matter what.
    The moment I took the lance,
    I had woken up.
    Everything mattered again.
    When I took the sword up once again,
    It started feeling like a dream again.
    Yet I was aware.
    Nothing mattered yet they did.
    How do I wake up again?



    Creator's Note: Royd, I blame you for accelerating the development of this sheet with your Garlon. Also, I consider the noble phantasm section the weakest part of this sheet only due to lack of originality for the names.
    Last edited by Vance; April 30th, 2022 at 07:43 PM.

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    Balin: Pretty good. I like how you tied her title Knight With Two Swords to her brother. Adds a nice heartwarming/bittersweet touch. The NPs are fairly simple but they do fit her legend. I actually almost missed the collapse on her first one until getting to Personality. I could see her having a surprising amount to talk about with my Garlon over how they both struggled against a "curse"...

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    When I checked the personality of your Garlon, I found I accidently had Balin have the personality of Red's favored target. Basically a someone who believe they can't die. Balin basically had that attitude with her whole no idea of consequences thing. They probably would get along, well actually Lancer Balin would do it better, provided Red doesn't take over at an inconvenient time.

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    Very nice job Vance! Incidentally will you be doing a Balan sheet as well in the near future?

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    War has left his mark
    The people are aimless
    Scarcity will set in
    When the Black Rider weighs wheat upon his scale



    Base Form
    1st Ascension
    2nd Ascension

    Final Ascension

    Spiritron Dress: Lap of Luxury


    Lancer of the Third Seal

    Class: Lancer
    Alignment: Lawful Evil
    Origin: Christian MythEnd of the World


    Height:
    5’6
    Weight: 110 lbs


    Natural Enemy: Tawara Touta
    Attribute: Earth
    Traits: Servant, Human, Harbinger
    Armament: Firearms, Advanced Weapons Systems, Cutthroat Market Savviness


    Parameters


    STR: E

    END: E

    AGI: B

    MANA: D

    LUCK: A+

    NP: D


    Class Skills

    Magic Resistance (B):
    Invalidates magic three verses or less. During her time she was considered ‘untouchable’ to most maguses.



    Bond Level 1

    A person prophesied to appear at the End of the Word. Their identity has been speculated upon for centuries, yet no one has been able to divine exactly who they might end up being.

    Emperor Caracalla of Rome has been suggested as a potential candidate for this entity, an emperor who raised the taxes of the people in order to fund his excessive lifestyle. He sat, surrounded by marble walls while his people starved outside.



    Bond Level 2

    Source:
    New Testament
    Region: The WorldMiddle East
    Gender: Female
    Likes: Cigars, Expensive Liquor, Tailored Suits
    Dislikes: Lower class people
    Talent: Betting on horses
    Catalyst: One of the first antoninianus ever minted.

    Lancer hates getting dirt on her suit.



    Bond Level 3

    Another historical candidate was Emperor Maximin, who stripped the temples of Rome of all of their gold and melted it all down to mint coins.

    Whoever Lancer is, their identity will be revealed unto the world following the opening of the Third Seal where they will declare the necessities of life to be unreachable to the unwashed masses.



    Bond Level 4

    Personal Skills

    Golden Rule (Markets) (A+):
    The measurement of one’s fortune to acquire wealth. This variant requires extant markets for Lancer to speculate on and invest in, she cannot simply acquire wealth on her own. However, her skills as an investor are so potent that available funds can effectively be octupled by the end of any work day.

    “Buy. Sell. Profit. It’s that simple.”

    Appreciation for the Wealthy (B): Infatuation with those who have acquired vast wealth. Has a high chance to identify the True Name of Noble Phantasms tied to wealthy heroes.

    “Game recognize game.”

    Price of Wheat (B):
    The skill to control the price of ‘resources’, derived from an anecdote where the price of basic foodstuffs was solely dictated by her will. However, the price of luxuries were left alone. Using the bad karma generated by the bad investments of her market competitors she can draw mana through their collective anguish, ‘taxing’ life.

    “They say there’s two constants in life; death and taxes. Few realize that one can be used to facilitate the other. “



    Bond Level 5

    Noble Phantasm




    Bull Market Neo Calydon
    ~Phantasmal Beast of Rising Prices~



    Type:
    Anti-Fortress
    Rank: E~A+
    Range: 0-100
    Max. Targets: 1~???


    The Bull Market is an economic phenomenon where prices rise or are expected to rise. While it is not an actual bull it nonetheless constitutes a ‘monster’ that can devastate livelihoods. However, those with resources and business sense can tame the beast and create new economic opportunities, flourishing where others struggle to make ends meet. It is a contrary animal so while it can be tamed its disposition can change on a dime and it may turn on its would-be master.

    This Noble Phantasm requires investment to fully realize and power, economic investment that is. How well Lancer manipulates markets through her Golden Rule (Markets) skill determines how much bad market karma she can generate through Price of Wheat, the accumulated mana and financial loss making Bull Market Neo Calydon inflate, growing bigger and stronger everyday, piercing upwards through new stock price thresholds. Economic devastation directly translates to physical devastation upon the World; the Great Depression Final Form.

    Possessing this Noble Phantasm is what qualifies Lancer for the Lancer-class.



    Bond Level 6

    Lancer’s True Identity is Famine, the Black Horseman of the Apocalypse. She is to arrive after the Lion/Lamb breaks the Third Seal and carries with her weighing scales, an instrument related to both food distribution and price setting.

    Although she is not the entity witnessed by John of Patmos in his revelation she is the person whose existence comes closest to. Born to wealthy parents in the Middle East, she watched the world beneath her slowly collapse in on itself from her family’s perch. Living an affluent lifestyle, and sheltered from meaningful human contact, she saw the World as a place to be exploited. Having studied from the greatest economic minds of her generation, she took a small loan of a million dollars from her parents and set off to carve up a corner of paradise in a world gone mad. Her steed was the volatile market which she tamed into a mighty ‘bull’ that crushed the working class under hoof.

    With wars being waged, sanctions being dealt left and right, and necessities becoming scarce, she used her privileged position to live a life of leisure and luxury while the ‘peasantry’ fought each other for food.

    The world is now ready to receive its final horseman…



    Bond Level 7

    Lancer is a cutthroat businesswoman first and a human being second. She is always focused on the financial grind and is out looking for the next “cool mil” to be made. She’ll work for days on end without rest. When she does take time off work she is generally polite and sometimes even…warm. However this warmth does not come from a place of genuine human kindness; it comes from years of studying the art of the deal and how to socially maneuver people into vulnerable positions. It’s entirely performative, and yet no one would ever get a sense that she means ill-will towards anyone. Her callous actions are derived from a lack of understanding basic human needs.



    Bond Level 8

    Quotes

    (upon Summoning)
    “Hello Master. I am Lancer. Black Horseman of Famine. Hey, you wanna make some money or what?”

    (while working)
    “Damn, those Wall Street Bets guys are crazy.”

    (to Asterios)
    “Aaaaw, so cute! I could market the shit out of you. Think about it. Plushies. T-shirts. Ceramic mugs.”

    (to Gilgamesh)
    “That’s a scary Noble Phantasm. I can’t imagine what it’s doing to inflation.”

    (to Tawara Touta)
    “That Bale is going to ruin me!”

    (to Conquest)
    “-seductive smirk- A kindred spirit, I see. Wanna go out sometime?”

    (to War)
    “Hey, thanks for all those sanctions. I made a killing off of the price of orange soda alone.



    Bond Level 9

    Craft Essence



    Century Year-Old Bull


    “The scars of my deeds never faded.

    Even long after I was dead.

    A Depression to end all other Depressions.

    The global economy never bounced back.

    Humanity regressed to less robust economic systems.

    I…would never have been able to spend a quarter of the money I made before I died.

    Those green stacks? Never got to take them to the grave.

    I sometimes wonder whether it was all worth it in the end.”



    Author’s Notes

    money



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    Hello, There I am a humble scholar in search for more knowledge, I hope we can learn a lot from each other. May this partnership be a fruitful one






    Class: Archer
    True Name: Avicenna/ Ibn Sina
    Origin: Transoxiana
    Alignment: Lawful Good

    Parameters
    Strength: D
    Agility: C
    Endurance: B
    Mana: A
    Luck: C


    Class SkillsIndependent Action (Rank D): The Skill befitting of an archer class servant, thought there isn’t much tale of Ibn Sina in regards towards his independence nor survival skills. Thus, his low rank of this skill

    Magic Resistance (Rank B): Due this many efforts in gaining many types of knowledge of magecraft from many different sources throughout the world at the time. To such an extent that gain some mild resistances through some small scale magecraft.


    Personal SkillsGuidelines of the Metaphysical (Rank A): A type of Clairvoyance that allows Ibn Sina to senses the imaginary space around him and be able to navigate himself no matter where is. A type of clairvoyance that more akin to a map than a straight up vison. That Ibn uses to traverse his surroundings.

    Said to birth by his ideals of his theology and beliefs. That he is consider to be a key part in the developing philosophy of the metaphysics. He proposes many suggestions theories and thesis about the metaphysical stuff such as the truth of God and the nature of the self.

    Book of Healing (Rank B++): This skill grants excess and boost Ibn Sina to a wide range of magecraft that he reflects the subjects of his research though it primarily focuses on healing magecraft.

    This comes from Ibn Sina other great work of the same name in which he complied many works most of them are about healing as per the name but the are some weird passages that applies more odd areas such as astronomy, palaeontology, logic, and philosophy.

    Rapid Type Calligraphy (Rank B+): This skill allows Ibn Sina to wrote down most of his spells into a single use scroll. They have an increase in potency for types of magecraft that Ibn Sina is proficient with such as healing magecraft

    This skill was granted towards Ibn Sina for typing many works in a lot of different subjects and most of them being the basis of many future studies.


    Noble Phantasm
    Qanun Dâr Tebb
    Rank: C+ - B
    Type: Varied Between Canons

    A set of 5 canons that have each unique property based on each volume of his greatest and most know work, The Canon of Medicine. The first canon is a simple homing canon that Ibn Sina target specific parts of your anatomy. The second canon is a canon of concentrated healing mana. The Third Canon is one that is charge with different types of magical ailments. The Fourth and Fifth can is similar with the Second and Third one but these ones are Anti-Army instead of Anti Unit and cost more mana.

    Based on his greatest works of the same name though originally signified as a five-volume compilation of the ins and outs of medical knowledge at the time. And one has been frequently used up till the 18th century



    Misc LinesLikes: I have a great interest in many different types of sciences. I say it’s never to late to learn something new.

    Dislikes: I rather hate ignorant people that blame knowledge for their follies. Those hypocrites that commend other without looking towards themselves and to far deluded in their self-righteousness.

    Holy Grail: My wish is a simple one, I would like to learn more about our universe and our place in this vast cosmos.

    Event: Ah, something exciting is going on right now. What a fascinating chance to learn new things.


    Bond LinesBond Line 1: Chaldea, huh this place reminds me of the house of wisdom. I am sure you learn a lot from the people that gathered here throughout time and space. That means, I have to step up and learn more now than ever.

    Bond Line 2: These Singularities, disruption in the timeline. Huh, I sometimes wonder what kind of future they have. I know they are disruptive holes in time but it never hurts to wonder.

    Bond Line 3: Worrying about the future like that wouldn’t help you much, Master. Just take a deep breath and try to ground yourself in moment.

    Bond Line 4 (After Prologue, Part 2): A Sea of white lies before us. Leaving us few alone again in this barren new world. But we are going to survive as long as we remain true to ourselves in these struggles.

    Bond Line 5 (After Olympus): Those poor souls shackled by the eyes of those “gods”. Living out their lives in a gilded cage. I wonder do they still have their sense of self. Amidst all of that.



    Relationship
    Florence Nightingale: Let me help with these treatments, I think you rushed a bit with there, just take it slow a bit. This is just a small check up not a surgery.

    Asclepius: I see, curiosity and advancement guides you in your study. I see that we could learn more from each other.

    Qin Shi Huang: Never ever I met such a man with this much arrogance smeared in their voice. I heard and met narcissist before but he took it to the next level.

    Rufaida Al-Aslamia : Thank you for helping me with the medical care of Chaldea, It’s kind of wrong to say this but I am glad that there is at least one sane medical personnel here after Romani left.


    Craft EssenceThe Beginnings of Knowledge



    The knowledge of anything, since all things have causes, is not acquired or complete unless it is known by its causes. Therefore is our duty as ambassadors of humanity acquired save through studies of its causes and beginnings more than through the sword, if it has had causes and beginnings; nor completed except by knowledge of its accidents and accompanying essentials. With that fact remember there is always a way to save humanity.




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    Ismail returning not only with a style upgrade but also a beautifully written servant that also conforms to type moon's tradition of 'oh he uses books? well then he must be an archer class servant!'.

    Wonderful servant. It was a joy to read.
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