Rider: Man, your sheets keep delivering. I don't know how someone can peak every single day without fail.
Rider: Man, your sheets keep delivering. I don't know how someone can peak every single day without fail.
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My theory has nothing to with the castor servant though.
damn for a second there I thought I was onto you ^^;
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I mean what and how would a nine headed bird that can bleed potent curses have anything to do with the caster servant whom I know nothing about because it's still unreleased?
Source: Easonx on Patreon
Class: Assassin
Other Classes: N/A
True Name: Linda Hazzard
Alignment: Neutral Evil
Place of Origin: America (20th century)
Parameters:
STR: D
END: C
AGI: D
MGI: D
LCK: C
NP: C
Height: 181cm
Weight: 120lbs
Likes: Starvation, purging toxins
Dislikes: "False" doctors
Talent: Starving people
Natural Enemy: Tawara Touta, Florence Nightingale
Attribute: Man
Traits: Female, Humanoid, Weak to Enuma Elish
Armament: Her bare hands
Catalyst: A copy of one of her books
Class Skills:
Presence Concealment C-: Her variation of this skill allows her to evade presence detection for some time, though it will almost instantly drop when she engages. She will also almost always refuse to use this skill.
Personal Skills:
Delusion Trigger A~EX: A skill granted to those who have an abnormally warped view of the world. She has a deep belief that her methods of doctoring are the best methods, and anyone who doesn't agree is a false doctor. This causes any illnesses that affect her to be transmuted into "toxins" removable through systematic fasting. In addition, this can bleed into the world, which activates her noble phantasm, Starvation Heights.
Human Anatomy Understanding D+: She understands the human anatomy decently, though not at the level of a trained doctor. This goes up in rank when focusing on muscles or bones, as she practiced Osteopathy in life.
Starvation C: The ability to induce starvation in someone. In her, this sublimates into her voice. Anyone who hears her speaking will slowly start starving and losing appetite. This cannot be turned off for her, and affects her as well.
Noble Phantasm(s):
Starvation Heights
Systemic Cleansing of the Toxins
Type: Anti-Army
Rank: C
Range: 100 meters
Max Targets: 100 targets
A pseudo reality marble. When invoked, her Delusion Trigger severely overcharges, expanding to cover the world around her. To her, it manifests as a beautiful building filled with many joyful people. But to everyone else, it is a hellish place, populated with shrieking wraiths searching for food. Whenever they meet anyone, they absorb their nutrients and Mana, driving them to starvation much like the wraiths themselves were driven to starvation. In addition, nutrients and Mana are also passively removed within the field.
Lore: Linda Hazzard, known as the Starvation Doctor, was a serial killer and quack doctor. She did not have a medical degree, but due to a grandfathered in clause allowing practitioners of alternative medicine to do it, was able to act as a doctor. She was trained by a famed practitioner of alternative medicine, who spoke of fasting as the ideal. She had her patients fast, and they died. She then forged their wills and stole their valuables. She also shot a person herself. She was sent to prison several times. At the end of her life, she died by using her own methods on herself.
Personality:
A friendly person at first, she believes herself to be an incredible doctor and will want to treat you if you report being ill. However, her treatment plan almost always uses starvation, which often can severely harm any of her patients. Her delusion trigger has prevented her from recognising it, though. Her wish is that her technique didn't "horribly malfunction" on herself, leading to her death. Then, she believes, she would be able to cure the world.
Relationships:
Florence Nightingale: "Ms. Nightingale! Such an honor to see you here. You revolutionized medicine! What? You don't agree with my medicinal techniques? So even the great Florence Nightingale is a false doctor. How awful. You want to treat me?"
Tawara Touta: "Infinite rice? You are delaying my patients from getting better. How dare you come in here with this and try to.. to make them more ill?"
Mary Mallon: "Ah, Ms. Mallon. Such a pleasure to have you here! No, I'm afraid I have to abstain from your ice cream. Still feeling healthy? Or did you have a symptom you wanted to discuss? Nothing? That's good. You look perfectly healthy. See you later, and I hope you have a wonderful day."
Last edited by jishara; June 2nd, 2022 at 09:47 PM.
Linda Hazzard: This is kind of a perfect example of "wait, that's it?' sheets. Like this sheet, I like who you chose Linda Hazzard is a very interesting figure (no, seriously, look them up) and you have a good base here but like, that's it. It's so barebones that it really kind of disengages you from the actual interesting figure. I would recommend take the time to expand on your sheets and ideas. It's Nasuverse, you can go ham as long as you justify its bullshit enough other bullshit.
Current FGO setup
"Heyo papa! Do you mind if I call you that? Man, it sucked being all cooped up in that place for so long, but it's fine now! After all, this world is full of humans for me to express my 'love' to..."
Berserker of the Dragon's Tail:
Appearance:
True Name:RufinaDemon Core
Alignment: Neutral Mad
Alternate Classes: Assassin, Avenger
Strength- A+
Agility- D-
Endurance- B
Mana- EX
Luck- C
NP- A++
Personality
Class Skills:
Mad Enhancement- D~A++
A Skill that characterizes the Berserker Class, raising parameters in return for a loss of sanity and/or hindering mental capacities. Strength and Endurance are ranked up, but language ability is simple and continuing complex thoughts for long periods of time are difficult. As a being that lacked human mentality from conception Berserker's ability to converse hasn't been as affected by this Skill. She has a cheerful and friendly disposition, but her perspective on expressing "love" is fundamentally twisted around her core directive.
Berserker believes that to love and spread radiation are one and the same, wishing to do so as much as possible to make her creators proud. She is unwilling to question her definition of love, rationalizing that those who perished as a result of her radiation were merely too frail to accept her "love" and are better off becoming part of her for eternity. However with her first Noble Phantasm sealing her full madness Berserker retains enough rationality to listen to her Master and rein herself in. Although she doesn't understand the reason for their command she recognizes them as an authority figure akin to her "Papas" and wants to make them happy.
As such Berserker only has a low rank since while her common sense is alien to humans it's still possible to roughly reach mutual understanding with her. The rank steadily rises as she uses her Nuclear Divine Core dulling Berserker's mind as she becomes more obsessed with spreading radiation. Although her first Noble Phantasm prevents it from reaching any higher than C-rank. Should the armor ever be destroyed or removed herfully emerges, rendering Berserker less a Servant than a living avatar of nuclear contamination.madnessradiation
"My love is simple, it's the desire to embrace everyone giving them warmth and light. Sure some might call it toxic but that's just because they don't know how pure my feelings really are!"
Personal Skills:
Nuclear Divine Core- A+
A Skill synonymous with Berserker's existence as the living core for a nuclear bomb. The culmination of mankind's fear and reverence towards nuclear power has ascribed her a genuine Divine Core as a Servant. Berserker's Spiritual Core is that of a nuclear reactor, supplying her with nearly limitless amounts of Mana from the wellspring of atomic power within her. She may also discharge this energy in a manner emulating a Mana Burst (Nuclear) Skill, expelling blasts of pale blue fire from her body. These flames carry theof nuclear contamination, sickening foes and weakening their parameters in addition to ordinary burns.taintconcept
As well as ordinary blasts she can also shape them into semi-tangible constructs like blades or barriers. Berserker favors condensing the nuclear energy into the shape of dragon's-limbs such as giant claws overlapping the arms of her own mechanized frame, or wings jetting from her back that propel her through the air. However overusing her core will result in Berserker nearing supercriticality, increasing her Mad Enhancement and requiring her to periodically vent the excess radiation to maintain self-control. Although it is impossible for her to fully reach supercriticality so long as her first Noble Phantasm is equipped.
Inherent Wisdom- C-
A Skill that shows one has unparalleled natural knowledge. Allows the use of most Skills, excluding those inherent to the body (such as Divinity) or ones unique to particular heroes, at proficiency of D~C rank. Berserker possesses this Skill from the two scientists Harry Daghlian and Louis Slotin she killed, absorbing their spirits and intellect to obtain sapience. This grants her usage of Skills related to nuclear physics and engineering, as well as Marksmanship from Slotin's time as an anti-aircraft gunner. However due to her own lack of experience and naive mentality she has trouble using them to the fullest.
"I don't really appreciate that nickname... I was just trying to show them my undying love, it's not my fault their bodies were too weak to withstand it. Now they can live on forever as part of me, free from the frailties of flesh."
- AMalignant Tumor ApoptosisSelf-Destruction Factor
Nuclear weapons are the apotheosis of humanity's capacity to destroy itself. Even as an obsolete core resigned to testing Berserker still managed to claim two lives, a mere shadow of the potential she could've achieved had she been put to use for her intended purpose. As an embodiment of apoptosis, of humanity's desire for its own demise, Berserker is able to impose that status upon her opponents. Essentially inducing self-destruction by turning their Skills and Noble Phantasms against them. For instance a healing spell will damage the target in proportion to how much health they would've recovered, a powerful attack will backlash to strike the user, and abilities that buff a Servant's stats will weaken them.
A cheat-like authority that can be called [Anti-Humanity], signifying that no legend raised up by human hands is immune to the self-destruction drive she embodies. However successfully invoking this Skill requires a contested check of Berserker's Luck versus the opponent, and should it fail her own abilities will turn against her instead for ten turns. Due to her only average Luck parameter and disliking the reputation of a destroyer Berserker herself only rarely attempts to use this Skill. Additionally it's only truly effective against humans, creations of humans (i.e machines or homunculi) or Servants who were human in life, not monsters or gods, as such beings are unaffected by humanity's desire to destroy itself.
Noble Phantasms
So this is the Demon Core sheet I'd been working on. Thanks to Wan Dering'Cul Tivator for first floating the idea of this figure as a Servant. As usual comments and critiques would be welcome. Thanks for reading y'all!
Last edited by RoydGolden; April 24th, 2023 at 07:14 PM.
Kublai: Ahh, the girl that started it all. First of, what the hell is up with the colors. I dont get this color coding for the bars. And C++ is longer than A.
Technically Pioneer can only be EX rank. You have it or not. I refer to the "high rank is incurred" line. Compared to the other skills, Philosophy Key seems rather tame, making me question if rank A is valid or even needed for Ms. Busted skill and abs.
as someone who only knows stuff about Kublai from you, she always seems so damn OP and important that idk if all of the stuff you claim has actual foundation in history or if she is just your favorite
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Indulge with me in the accomplishments of our abode.
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Demon Core: She feels... disjointed. What's up with the love stuff? You don't really dive into it and it doesn't seem to connect with anything relating to the real thing.
Also I don't think a plutonium ball with a cool nickname deserves two NPs. Her armor should be a skill, like Babbage's.
Last edited by pinetree; June 2nd, 2022 at 05:45 PM. Reason: Jesus Christ the typos
wouldve rather seen a sheet that uses the two victims as vessels for the demon core with a similar premise of preaching about the love it spreads, trying to get it out of the sarcophogus or something. Perhaps a Francis. E Dec style Foreigner where it is simply uncertain if this thing is just a metal ball or something more that they mean. The Apoptosis stuff is good too.
@Comun: i dislike this rule. I rather use a + to denote that in certain fields or circumstances it reaches a level higher.
"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
Indulge with me in the accomplishments of our abode.
University of Formatting | Gallery of Potential | Memorandum of the Extra Class Kings
Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
Chamberlain of Create-a-Servant 4.
I guess my logic was that being created to spread radiation but having no awareness that her actions were wrong means she equates doing so with making her creators proud and an act of love (not understanding why they feared her for only doing what she was made for). It is a bit of stretch but I wanted to make her a tragic yet endearing character. I see what you mean about her first NP but I like the True Name and parallel to Medusa's inner and outer seals.
Last edited by RoydGolden; June 2nd, 2022 at 05:27 PM. Reason: Fixed name
I got the idea but there's a huge jump between "this is what I naturally do" and "radiation poisoning is love". It's too big a stretch to not justify by delving into it more deeply.
Extrapolating the function of an object into a personality when anthropomorphizing it is well and good, but there's no logical progression between not being able to understand that the effects of radiation are bad for people and interpreting it as physical expression of her love.
F to Random
No new sheet after waking up.
May he rest in peace.
"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
Indulge with me in the accomplishments of our abode.
University of Formatting | Gallery of Potential | Memorandum of the Extra Class Kings
Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
Chamberlain of Create-a-Servant 4.
My personal theory is that Random posted the Assassin sheet and their Presence Concealment was just that good.
Could this be the Hassan of Strange Fake?
Damn comun, you are right. With Randoms power level sheets thats actually possible
"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
Indulge with me in the accomplishments of our abode.
University of Formatting | Gallery of Potential | Memorandum of the Extra Class Kings
Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
Chamberlain of Create-a-Servant 4.
He lied to usHe said it was supposed to be Caster for yesterday.
so this is the next level of collapse...
The Adventure of the Velvet Room (Sherlock Holmes/Persona) (SB, FFN, AO3)
Blog with all of my Servants so far.