not enough whining about feminism
i thought this was supposed to be the gatekeeper of video games
not enough whining about feminism
i thought this was supposed to be the gatekeeper of video games
Foreigner of Yellow Wallpaper:
Appearance:
Source
True Name: Charlotte Perkins Gilman
Alignment: Neutral Good
Armaments: A revolver (that she's able to channel the concept of the Hounds through making her shots bend space to chase targets) and her transformed limbs.
Strength- D
Agility- B
Endurance- C+
Mana- B
Luck- C
NP- B
Personality
Class Skills:
Existence Beyond The Domain- EX
A Skill inherent to the Foreigner Class, asserting one's existence outside of time and reality. Foreigner is partially resistant to physical and mental damage, as her true self exists far beyond the reality perceivable by humans. This defense can be bypassed if the attacker themselves is connected to "something beyond man", like by possessing the Divinity Skill. Foreigner is connected to a world that only intersects with ours through angles, thereby obtaining a high rank in this Skill. Her metaphorical role in bringing women outside the "domain" of domesticity can also contribute to this.
As an "ambassador" of Tindalos Foreigner is able to tap into traits from the realm's other servitors, the Hounds. This allows her to ascribe more monstrous features such as unhinging her jaw, sharpened senses (particularly smell) and warping her hands into serrated shardlike claws. These are Foreigner's primary means of close combat, allowing an author who never displayed feats of arms to hold her own against legendary heroes. However drawing too much on this aspect erodes Foreigner's mind with ravening hunger, making her start to view humans as beings to be preyed upon and as such she dislikes doing so.
Divinity- C
Qualifies one's aptitude as a Divine Spirit. Foreigner possesses a lower rank as her eldritch patron was never known for being divine. However it's been bolstered somewhat by her belief in the sacred feminine principle within women.
Insanity- B
A Mental Pollution-like skill gained from contacting an evil god that can easily erode the fragile common sense and morals of humans. However, the main qualification for the Foreigner class is to defy this erosion, either by maintaining their integrity as they descend into madness, or instead of being consumed by madness, they consume the madness itself. In her lowest moment Foreigner witnessed a realm that most humans never escape, but turned away from it with mind and body unbroken, her commitment to remaking the world into one of equality outweighing the siren-song of escapism it offered her.
Personal Skills:
Feminist- B
A Skill awarded to those who were influential in championing the empowerment of women. Foreigner was a noted feminist who advocated women's greater participation in society and working outside the home. Serves as a variant of Independent Action, allowing Foreigner to draw on a small amount of Mana from every woman who shares her struggle for freedom. This isn't enough to incur the harmful effects of Mana deprivation on any individual but collectively can support Foreigner to remain in the World for half a week in the absence of a Master. This Skill is stronger in eras where women's rights are a universal concept and would be weakened if she were summoned in time-periods where the Feminist movement didn't exist yet.
Activity Is The Best Medicine- B
Foreigner fiercely opposed the so-called "rest cure" where women were advised to recover their minds by avoiding strenuous thought or activity, decrying it for actually inducing madness rather than curing it by denying natural forms of self-expression. Her crusade against the treatment was such that she even claimed the leading physician who promoted it Silas Mitchell actually stopped on account of her writing, although this was unfortunately untrue. Through this Skill Foreigner passively regains a small amount of health while moving. Furthermore it renders immunity to effects that would hinder her mobility at rank C or lower.
Walker Within The Walls- A
A boon deriving from Foreigner's connection to the Hounds of Tindalos that stalk between the "walls" of space-time and the narrator in her short story who believed she was "trapped within the wallpaper" desiring freedom. This allows her to tear open yellowish rifts in any flat surface and enter them. While inside she enters a pocket dimension overlapping the volume of the surface in question, resembling a yellow wallpaper swirling with psychedelic shapes.
Foreigner can move freely within this pseudo-space and exit anywhere along the original surface, or even pull others inside, although the rift won't close as long as someone is still there preventing her from stranding opponents. She constantly expends Mana to maintain this state and if the surface is destroyed will be forcibly expelled.
The texture of the boundary between realities is "hideous" in a way that instills obsession in those who attempt to describe it, dealing sanity damage for every turn one spends crossing there. Prolonged exposure results in one hallucinating the pattern elsewhere and hearing the barking of unearthly dogs following them, potentially driving the victim to madness or even death. Foreigner herself is no exemption to this effect but can resist through her Insanity Skill, so she mainly weaponizes it as a mental attack by dragging foes through there. Even so she would rather avoid using this Skill if she could help it, claiming it "brings back bad memories".
Noble Phantasm
So here's the Charlotte Perkins Gilman Foreigner I'd been talking about. Decided to go for Tindalos as her patron as I couldn't find enough to make the fungus idea work (though it is cool and I imagine might be emphasized in one of her other Classes). As usual comments and critiques would be welcome. Thanks for reading y'all!
Last edited by RoydGolden; May 14th, 2023 at 11:54 PM. Reason: Added closing paragraph to NP
Charlotte Perkins-Gillman: As always, absolutely incredible sheet Royd, and I love the wallpaper gimmick. Out of curiosity, how do you think she would get along with my Namazu?
I like how you made the hounds into information sucking things and using the unexplored realm of tindalos (or perhaps being, who knows?). Its simple yet great
But i feel like she and the idea of her being a foreigner is still a bit disconnected. She feels like a feminist writer and a hound mashed together without proper reasoning why she of all people was chosen. I wrote more than i submit as a message here now, but the tldr is that it didnt go far enough for me.
I suggested a Gilman foreigner to jishara as their 100th sheet as a sort of collab (which he refused btw), so i have my own thoughts how i would do her and perhaps will do her, thats why i withhold my ideas for now.
"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
Indulge with me in the accomplishments of our abode.
University of Formatting | Gallery of Potential | Memorandum of the Extra Class Kings
Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
Chamberlain of Create-a-Servant 4.
I might be a little late in asking this, but I was wondering what jishara thought about my Emilie du Chatelet sheet? Reason I ask this they said they were also going to do a sheet for Emilie du Chatelet, and they figured her out in the Guessing thread
I absolutely love her, especially your creative sword justifications and that Color Out Of Space npand thanks for doig a Goddard relationship line.
This is the most 'not a parody but you can hardly tell the difference' Servant I have ever made.
Ah. Well, you may think you summoned me, but that would be a clear misconception you have. The idea of being able to summon something that, in essence, shouldn't exist is...
And that's why it is in fact I who have summoned you.
Creator Notes
[Persona 4 Ultimax - A Fool or a Clown]
Last edited by Morg van Destro; December 16th, 2024 at 05:40 AM.
Morg's delightful Servant comp.
IN COLOR
10/10 cool guy, would definitely vibe with him and lose my mind in the process. I love that NP. Literally allows him to "well ackshually" his way out of any problem.
Last edited by BnEl15; August 28th, 2022 at 12:25 AM.
What a ridiculous guy. His whole concept and abilities are so outrageous that you're waiting while reading the sheet for some kind of twist on how it could make sense or he's not what he's appearing to be, only for the "reveal" to be just as gleefully unceremonious and nonsensical as the rest of him. I could critique that his Skills are ridiculously wanked (his NP on the other hand, is an unironically cool idea and I could see a lot of mileage coming out of that from a weaker Servant having to use it strategically, a la my Ea-nasir) and there's no way the Servant system would be able to support that, but that ignores the whole point of the sheet to be as absurd as possible. Overall I can just say "Well that sure was a thing" (or perhaps, as he would say, nothing).
"You were imprisoned by a god? How unfair, I sympathize with you. Everyone deserves to freely explore the world with their whole mind and body. By the way I'd be welcome to try some of those competitive exercises you've been talking about."
(I added this and another one of my sheets to her Relationships section.)
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Of course I expected feedback from you as this forum's resident King of Foreigners. The weird book-monster take on the Hounds was one of the parts I'm proudest of so I'm glad you liked it. Admittedly her Skills and personality do feel more like what she would possess in a "normal" Class, although I tried to mix the aspects together with her third Personal Skill. Curious what your ideas for her would've been.
Last edited by RoydGolden; August 28th, 2022 at 12:50 AM.
Source: DragonPrincess
Class: Berserker
Other Classes: N/A
True Name: Empress Elizabeth of Austria
Alignment: Neutral Good
Place of Origin: Austria (19th Century)
Parameters:
STR: D
END: C
AGI: D
MGI: B
LCK: B
NP: C
Height: 199cm
Weight: 110lbs
Likes: Being "beautiful", giving to charity
Dislikes: Not being "beautiful enough"
Talent: Self-doubt
Natural Enemy: Yang Guifei, Yu Meiren, Marie Antoinette
Attribute: Man
Traits: Humanoid, Female, Weak to Enuma Elish
Armament: A copy of Achilles's spear
Catalyst: Summoning at Achilleion
Class Skills:
Madness Enhancement D: She is not normally very mad, but she has gained an utter obsession with "beauty", doing whatever she can to make herself more "beautiful".
Personal Skills:
Grace of God A-: Denotes the beauty of a sovereigm. As she was notably extremely beautiful, she gains an extremely high rank of this skill. At this rank, seeing her integralizes a powerful charm spell, although it is weakened if you see her indirectly, such as through a mirror or glasses. However, this drops in rank as she utilizes more and more of her regimens for "beauty", replacing itself slowly with Face Of Fear/
Philanthropist B: She was noted for her extreme charity. As a skill, this acts as a type of inverse Golden Rule where money constantly flows out but positive things constantly happen to her.
Ruler Incognito C: She constantly went incognito disguised as a random person. As a skill, this allows her to hide all of her royal and servantly presence, appearing as merely a generic and random person walking by with a mask. However, this can be seen through and can sometimes fail, especially if someone is notified about her disguises.
Noble Phantasm(s):
Achilleion Aphrodite
My Palace Of Beauty
Type: Bounded Field
Rank: C
Range: 100 meters
Max Targets: 1000 targets
The sublimation of the palace, Acheilleion, she built based on mythological motifs. When its true name is called, the idea of the palace itself spills out around her in the form of a Bounded Field. A palace guarded from all prying eyes, no form of sight can see through the bounds, and she can choose who can enter. In addition, as a palace of myth and legend, it actively rejects those based in historical fact besides Elizabeth.
Lore: Empress Elizabeth of Austria was Empress of Austria and Queen of Hungary during the late 19th century, holding the longest tenure of all Empresses of Austria. She began as a member of a wealthy family from Hungary, but with relaxed protocol, so she was shocked when in the courtly scene and utterly disliked it.
Personality: A cheery and friendly person, she often does whatever she can to help, literally tossing money and whatever she has to anyone who she thinks needs it. However, she is a bit obsessed with "beauty" and maintaining her beauty, so will sometimes try horrific beauty regimens to try and make herself "more beautiful". Her wish for the grail is to be perpetually perfectly beautiful.
Relationships:
Marie Antoinette: "Oh, come on, Grace of God? Seriously?"
Yu Meiren: "...So you're a vampire? Right, right, sorry, Ancestor. What's it like?"
Yang Guifei: "...One of the four great beauties. Of course you're here. But why are you.... oh. Oh. My goodness, what has happened to you?"
Gao Changgong: "..What? Why on earth are you hiding yourself behind that mask?"
Florence Nightingale: "No, I do not need medical care. No, I am well. ....Fine. I'm not well."
Asclepius: "Can you help me become more.... no, I don't need to, can you help me get rid of these... voices in my head telling me I'm not beautiful enough?"
Sessyoin Kiara: "Thank you for your advise, Ms. Kiara. I will take it to heart. See you next week."
Source: Wallpaperflare
Class: Rider
Other Classes: N/A
True Name: Jiutian Xuannu
Alignment: Lawful Good
Place of Origin: Chinese Mythology
Parameters:
STR: B
END: B
AGI: C
MGI: B
LCK: C
NP: A
Height: 181cm
Weight: 120lbs
Likes: Serenity, dignity, peace
Dislikes: Chaos, spirits
Talent: Controlling longevity
Natural Enemy: Chiyou, Huangdi
Attribute: Sky
Traits: Female, Humanoid, Divine Spirit
Armament: A Dao sword
Catalyst: Her seal
Class Skills:
Riding A+: At this rank, she is even capable of riding Divine Beasts, fitting for a physical goddess noted for riding a Phoenix. However, she still cannot ride dragons.
Magic Resistance A: As a physical divinity incarnated, she gains an extremely high rank of this skill, making her, in essence, a Magus Killer.
Personal Skills:
Coat Of Many Feathers A: The sublimation of her authority over War as a goddess of it. As a skill, this is a composite granting her Divinity at rank B, for in this state she has lost her Divine Core due to using Yuenu's saint graph, and Military tactics at rank A, as a patron who controlled war.
Six Jade Maidens A: The "Six Jade Maidens" who supported her in magecraft, manifested as a skill. They materialize as six orbs floating around her, which she can command to cast spells of many different varieties, though her favorite for them to cast is an "absolute invisibility", though it also costs extremely high amounts of mana and as such can only be supported for about two seconds by even an extremely competent magi.
Breath Of Life B: She was considered in charge of breath and longevity. As a skill, this permits her very breath to gain life, controlling it to her will, whether that be as a weapon or as a tool to heal. In addition, this causes her to glow brightly when used, which blinds enemies unprepared for her radiance.
Noble Phantasm(s):
Hong Fenghuang
Bird Of Fire, Reins Of Clouds
Type: Anti-Fortress
Rank: A
Range: 100 meters
Max Targets: 10000 targets
The sublimation of her mount, a cinnabar Fenghuang, which she held with reins of clouds. This Noble Phantasm allows her to summon the Fenghuang, which is an extremely fast mount and easily capable of carrying her. But it has several other uses. Firstly, as a Fenghuang is king of all other birds, this Fenghuang can exert dominion over creatures of flight. Secondly, it also gains the benefits of her Coat of Many Feathers skill. And lastly, as it is a unison of Yin and Yang, the Fenghuang can exert that unison into a single strike, creating a bombardment of light and shadow.
Wan Qian Shengli
Guide To Defeating Chiyou
Type: Anti-Army
Rank: A
Range: 10 meters
Max Targets: 100 targets
The sublimation of the items she gave to Huangdi to bind and defeat Chiyou, a set of seals and grimoires, formulas and charts by which Huangdi gained the power. As a noble phantasm, this manifests passively as a composite ability including Master of All Weapons and Divining. When its true name is called, silken ropes materialize in front of her and bind spirits, chaining them in place, growing in power the more spiritual a being is.
Lore: Jiutian Xuannu was a chinese goddess of war and longevity who was noted for her aiding warfare and sides, granting them the powers they needed, such as when she granted Huangdi the weapons and tools he needed to defeat Chiyou. She was also noted for her domain over longevity and long life. Of course, as a physical goddess, she could not normally materialize as a servant, so she has borrowed the saint graph of her incarnation, Yuenu.
Personality: Calm, elegant, and serene. She sees battle as a necessity, not something to be hated but not something to be loved. She despises those who relish in battle, seeing them as twisting a noble cause into a horrendous frenzy. Her wish for the grail is merely to allow herself to truly no longer have to intervene.
Relationships:
Yuenu: "You have my sincere gratitude for allowing me to borrow your Saint Graph."
Ishtar: "Firing the Planet Venus? How uncouth."
Ereshrigal: "You must be more confident. You control the realm of the dead."
Quetzalcoatl: "I must admit, your 'lucha' does seem intriguing."
Astraea: "Hmm.. you are indeed elegant, and your judging is impressive. Would you like to duel?"
Artemis: "Hijacking a saint graph unwillingly? How... peculiar. And what is that bear next to you?"
Chiyou: "You were raging.. and destroying... and razing... why?"
Huangdi: "My student! It has been so long, it is wonderful to see how you have grown."
Jeez, it feels like I've hit my head and blacked out. How long was I out? Over a month?
Eh, I've been out for longer.
For the first time in his life, mankind's mightiest hero knew what it was like to feel true terror.
Monstrous Guardian of the Golden Treasure
Ladon the Hundred-Headed
Aliases: Guardian of the Golden Apples, Ward of the Hesperides, Hera's Ire, the Mightiest Son of Typhon, the Most Fearsome Phantasmal of Greece, The Nightfall
Class: Ruler
Alternate Classes: N/A, only summoned under special circumstances
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Source: Greek Mythology
Region: Greece
Attribute: Heaven
Parameters
Strength: A
Endurance: A
Agility: C
Mana: A
Luck: D
Background
Skills
Noble Phantasms
Lore
The Essence of our Bonds
Final notes
Well then, someone has a bone to pick with Ritsuka...
You know? This probably would have been perfect for this monthly contest TBH
For sure.
I really, really like Guardian of the Golden Apples. Usually I wouldn't care for turning a monster into a Servant like this, but having him be a Ruler that guards the Grail as he guarded the apples in life is an inspired idea.
Honestly, I like it more than him being chosen for the 7 Heracles War. Also you really overdid the Master relationship, I don't even know how to react to that lol
Last edited by pinetree; August 28th, 2022 at 09:37 PM.
Ah, the contests. I keep forgetting about those.
For how many Rulers have shown up in Fate, I've rarely seen one summoned to do their actual job.
I also tend to stray away from making monsters into Servants, usually because I have this unconscious expectation to pick some random hot anime character to be their faceclaim instead of letting them just stay a monster. But Ladon's design from HF just stuck with me so much I couldn't not let him stay an eldritch abomination that would make Herc shit himself. I think Humbaba's original form was like that for Gilgamesh.
Top Level Notes
"In another world, where Beast III was able to grow...
Only one mortal would have been able to save the world."
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"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
Indulge with me in the accomplishments of our abode.
University of Formatting | Gallery of Potential | Memorandum of the Extra Class Kings
Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
Chamberlain of Create-a-Servant 4.