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    Finally, second submission's here

    “This War only brought a vain illusion of glory, that the warriors of old successfully strive through. But this is the true face of the world, those old telltales only serve as lies. No such hope exist in the flame of destruction.”

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    We, the people of Rome

    --- S A B E R ---
    of the Dying Empire



    Class: Saber
    Alternate Classes: Rider, Lancer
    True Name: Flavius Stilicho
    Aliases: Savior of Rome, The Vandal, Artorius
    Alignment: True Neutral
    Origin: Rome, Italy, Germany, History (5th Century)
    Height/Weight: 190cm / 97kg
    Attribute: Man

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    Likes: Rome, "My Beloved Serena"
    Dislikes: Everyone Whose Oppose Rome
    Natural Enemy: Alaric
    Armament: Sword
    Catalyst: Shard of His Sarcophagus

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    PARAMETER
    PARAMETER
    STR : A
    AGI : B
    END : A++
    MGI : C
    LCK : C
    NP : B


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    SKILLSCLASS SKILLS
    CLASS SKILLS

    Riding --- (B)
    Being a Saber, it’s expected for him to posses a high-ranked riding skill. This allows him to tame any beast and the most complex of machine. His limit is divine or demonic entity.
    Magic Resistance --- (B)
    Culmination of his past life. He fought on all kinds of warfare and met countless of people, including Germanic druids and mages. Even vile mages of his political enemy that wanted to cast witchcraft upon him.

    PERSONAL SKILLS
    PERSONAL SKILLS

    Charisma --- (D)
    He was once the strongest man Western Europe ever see. He commanded armies, crushed rebels, crack down on corruptions, all the while still have to fight in an active Civil War. Thus gave him a conflicting face among the populace, on one hand he’s regarded as Rome’s greatest watchdog, but on the other hand his cruelty and the sheer amount of enemy he made himself created a figure that’s basically hated by everyone, even the Eastern Roman declared him as public enemy number one. Thus explain the low-ranked nature of this skill.
    Tactics --- (C)
    Saber known for being a formidable commander, fighting against numerous enemy from every corner of the empire. Fought against the Germans, Celts, Britons, even fellow Romans. He won many battles and gives chilling warning to those who dare to stand in front of the Empire.
    Mind’s Eye (True) --- (B)
    Saber spent almost half of his life on the battlefield. This amount of conflict he had to endure made him quite possible the master of battle. Every tactics, every strategies, every possible exploits, every way to win a proxy war, he had tried every single one of them against his enemies. In fact, it was never enough. This lifetime of turmoil and endless conflict crystallized into him being able to predict every single move of his enemies. Thus making him one of the greatest fighter amongst Heroic Spirit.
    Iron Will: Magister Militum --- (EX)
    A variation of eternal arms mastery. This allows him to negate any debuff given to him that would otherwise render his fighting capacity. Even with the strongest of spells casted to him, he seems as if he’s unbothered and still fight with greatest vigor. Culmination of his past struggle, that Saber would simply raise an army to fight incoming barbarians, he won't stop even if there's one hundred thousand men that tries to stop him.



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    NOBLE PHANTASM
    Hail Mary of a Dying Empire --- (EX)
    Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
    "I...shall keep fighting, for Rome."


    Saber's life is that of never-ending struggle to fight against all kind of enemies. He fought the invading Goths on the Rhine, crushing rebel in Britannia, usurper conflict in North Africa, and a civil war against the Eastern Roman Empire. Not only that, he receives all kind of backstab from his political rivals in Rome and Ravenna, had his ability to mobilize Roman citizen being hindered by the senate, and even had to deal with mutiny of his own soldiers. Yet, he pressed onward, and only stopped when the Emperor told him to do so.

    With such unwavering will in turbulent time, his determination and ambition crystallized itself into his Noble Phantasm. This is the ultimate where Saber could withstand any damage inflicted by his enemy, his Endurance and Strength stat increased to EX.

    Any attacks under the rank of A could be easily ignored, but attack with rank of A and above would inflict serious damage towards him, The same could be said with debuff and other restrictions. And if he's attacked with a lethal strike that causes his demise, he would continue to fight on and rise from the dead. This doesn't means Saber is invincible, he still feels the pain, even the most torturing and hellish experience, this Noble Phantasm allows him to push on and fight.

    A small ball of light would emerge itself in front of him, it does not recover him, it does not ease his pain, it does not gives him any buff, it does not nullify any debuff, it didn't protect him from any attacks, but the ball could sustain his life even on the brink of death. Just like a faint glint of hope, Stilicho will always move forward.

    History is Rewritten
    History is Rewritten
    E̵͍̐͝͠͝x̶̘̠̘͑c̸͓̀̓a̸͉̪͛̂̓͜͠l̸̰̜͇̬̝̈̔i̸̲̤̲͚͖͌̓́̑̔b̸ ̫̺̹̒ų̵̝̞̭̈́̔̀̋r̴̲̿̎ Victrix – ‘The True Wielder of the Holy Sword’ --- (B (False) (A))
    Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
    “From the edge of the world, banisher of evil, endings of malice, Lo and behold! E̴͎̮͍̓̑x̵̡̰̻͈̩̗̆̅͗c̴͍̲̟̋̔͊͜â̴̠̠̈́͋̈l̷̦̰͖̦̻̂̍ǐ̶̈́̆̚ ̧͈͔̼̰̀͌ḅ̴̝͕͑u̶̻͇͉̘̪̽̇̀r̸̩̞̯̫͎̰͐!”
    T̵͕͔̄̃ḧ̴̡̛̼̣̻͎͉̲́̿̈͆̒́̍̑̍̓e̷͓͙̳̊̊̎͒r̴̞̙͚̗̈́̒̄̾̋͊͋͐͘ ̜͜e̵̦͇̠̯̺̰̽̂͂͂̇͊̐́̕͘ ̴̡̲̣̞̺̺͔̱̃̀̀̋͐̈́̾͜ͅe̴̛̙̥̝̜̬̘̓͋̋̈́̽́͌̍̄̚͜x̷͓̩͙͋̀́̃͑̔̕ ͈̗̙i̵̢̧̠̭͇̪̠̳̠̺͉̍̎̐̊s̵̢̪̥͖̤͉͈̪̗̖̟̑͋̽́̑̆͌͗̈̍͗t̶̑̓̀̔ ̟̥̬͖̦̦̍̓̔ ̴̡̢̧̝͉̰̘̤̱̮̋͐̄́̒͋̀̓̋́̚n̶̡̨͇̥̠̩͍̱͚̂̃̃̎̓͝ơ̵̤͊͠ ̵͔͇͚̦̗̳̻̙̤̮̟͇̋̉͒̔̔͛̍͘͜s̵͖͇͔͈̬̮̱̬̪̥͕̖͍̬͊̂͐͝u̸͛̆̆̔̈́ ̛̪̀̂̒̈́̓͂c̴̡̖͚͖̺̩̦͙͕͖̿̐̅͆͊̒̅̈́͐͂͝͝ͅh̵̯͕̀̊͌͒̔̉̕ ̷͉̪̞̬͇̅̽̎̾̓̉̏͋̍̕͘͝ȑ̵̛̲͍͖͔̺͌͆̀͒̉̊̇̂e̶̢̛̊̅̓̈̈̽̿̽̀̅c ̴̦̗̙͇̝͍̠̖̏̀́o̵̧̻̥͉͔̠̻̜͔͑͆̿̈́̀̕͝r̸̨̨̼̙̜̖̘̫̬͕̥͚̈̆͋d̴̅ ̧̫̱͉̀̇̅̓͋̓̃̎̋͛͗͜

    It is said that at one point of his life he sailed to Britain to subdue a rebellion and restore the Roman Order. There’s three things he faced on the Island, it was: Rebelling Britons, Imperial usurper, and invading Saxon pirates. As such he needs a symbol to unite the Island. He noticed that the Celts are somehow waiting for a messianic figure named Arthur. Thus, he goes on under false name of Artorius and created himself a legend of him able to wield the Caladfwech (Excalibur) as a propaganda campaign to garner the loyalty of the Celts against Invading Saxon, thus made sure the stability of the Island.

    No such report of Saber went to Britain exist, he ordered every report of him doing so to be destroyed. For there's two front war he's facing. One, the Celts must be left unsuspecting, and two, the Senate must never know that he left the continent, all they know is that he went to Gaul, oblivious that he went beyond just Gaul. He goes on under a false name, Artorius Castus in subterfuge attempt to deceive both the Celts and the Senate. The former believe their messiah just arrived, the latter believe it wasn't the general that went to sail to the island.

    The sword is simple in design, instead of the excessively ornamented sword that widely popular, Stilicho’s Excalibur design is similar to Roman Gladius, albeit longer and heavier. Upon unleashing the power, the sword will be engulfed in deep blue light charge of energy to be shot at the target in one magnanimous blast.

    Aren't it suspicious the Sword's name is in Latin?




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    LORE
    OVERVIEW AND EARLY LIFE

    Saber's true name is Flavius Stilicho, a Roman general living on the latter stage of Roman Empire. He lived the twilight chapter of Rome with him being someone akin to a tragic hero. He was born somewhere on the upper Rhine on the year 359 AD to a Vandal father whose job was a Roman Foederati as a Cavalier, and his mother was a Roman.

    Of his father's influence, Stilicho grows to be a deeply militaristic mindset from early age, he lived in camps and participate in campaigns even before he was officially accepted as a soldier. No other career path for him beside being a soldier, thus when he come of age, his father immediately sent him into training camp and serve the Eastern Roman Empire. There is not much other information exist about his early life.

    RISE TO PROMINENCE

    Unlike his German kin who still proud of their ancestral heritage, Stilicho considers himself no other than a Roman. The fact that he was able to rose high on the rank of military over Constantinople means that he's not an Arian Christian like other Converted Germans, but a Nicene Christian just like his patron, Emperor Theodosius I, who himself declared Nicene Christian as the official religion of the Eastern Roman Empire.

    He was sent to a diplomacy with Persian King, Shapur III to the King's court in Ctesiphon. An important talk about the partition of Armenia, in which he successfully met an agreement where Rome's interest is still in accordance with the treaty. Thus, when he returned to Constantinople, he was immediately given the office of Comes Sacri Stabuli an office where he's in total charge of stables, horses, and other beasts all around the Empire. Soon after, he's also promoted the office of Comes Domesticorum, a high-ranking individual in military circle of Rome

    Then soon after in 393 AD he was promoted into Magister Militum, where he's in charge of the highest chain of command of the whole army, means he had supreme power over the all soldier of Rome. The Emperor had given him such responsibilites as a means to make sure the German foederati keep their loyalty to Rome. Soon after, he finally show his true potential, the very thing where he'll be known with, his military career.

    The Emperor married him with his niece, Serena. She's a beautiful and gentle woman for him, but also a sharp and bold figure fitting for a noblewoman. Stilicho fell for her, she do too, they were made for each other. Soon after, the couple blessed with beautiful and handsome offsprings. They had a son, Eucherius, and two daughters, Maria and Thermantia.

    BATTLE OF FRIGIDUS AND DEATH OF THEODOSIUS I

    After the death of the Western emperor Valentinian II in 392, Stilicho helped raise the Eastern Roman army that Theodosius led to victory over the Western army at the Battle of the Frigidus against Arbogast, and was one of the Eastern leaders in that battle. One of his comrades during the campaign was the Visigothic warlord Alaric, who commanded a substantial number of Gothic auxiliaries.

    Stilicho distinguished himself at the Frigidus, and Theodosius, exhausted by the campaign, saw him as a man worthy of responsibility for the future safety of the empire. The last emperor of a united Rome appointed Stilicho guardian of his son Honorius, with the rank of Comes et Magister Utriusque Militiae Praesentalis (supreme commander), shortly before his death in 395. At the time of Theodosius's death, the field armies that had clashed at the Frigidus were still in disarray and fighting was still continuing.

    THE EMPIRE BROKE ONCE AGAIN

    After Theodosius' death, the Western throne was given to his son, Honorius, and the Eastern throne to his another son, Arcadius. Both were still underage, and thus the former Emperor granted Stilicho guardianship over both of them. In the court, he and his wife pleading for their profess. Alas, they were mocked, laughed, and ridiculed. Serena didn't give up and immediately rushed for the prince to negotiate with him. Of which, Arcadius refused. Another figure named Rufinus already gained the favor of the Eastern court of the Empire, and he won't give Stilicho a place to rule over.

    Stilicho had no time to contemplate this because his former colleague, Alaric, was sacking the region of Lower Moesia with bulk of his Gothic army, thus made Alaric effectively broke treaty with Rome. Stilicho immediately brought his veteran of Frigidus numbering well over 20.000 men along with him to stop Alaric from his further devastation. He was able to cornered Alaric somewhere in Thessaly, but was immediately stopped by Rufinus whom ordered Stilicho to return the veterans of Frigidus into the Eastern Roman Empire. Stilicho obliged and with his depleted army, he trekked back to Italy.

    Soon after the army reached Constantinople, Rufinus immediately hail the army upon a podium, which not long after, a group of men from among the army come to strike and hack him. Rufinus was dead, many pointed that Stilicho might orchestrated this asssassination, but some other suggest that it was Rufinus' rival, Eutropius, that actually organized the army to murder Rufinus. Stilicho still dreams the unified Roman Empire, but Eutropius, just like Rufinus, stands in the way of that.

    GALLIAN CAMPAIGN TO NORTH AFRICAN INCURSION

    Soon after Stilicho arrived at Italy, a messenger hurried all the way from the Rhine border to inform him that
    a huge German horde of Franks and Goths numbering 50.000 men strong just crossed the Rhine. Stilicho waste no time and brought along 30.000 men to fight the incursion, most of which are former Arbogast's army that he inherited and disciplined. By late 396 AD he crossed the Alps, fought in battle against the Invading Germans in three different battles, all of which he won. Thus the region stabilizes, and he placed large number of soldiers along the Rhine in preparation of possible another invasion.

    At the time Stilicho finally returned to Italy, Alaric sacked Balkan and Greece once again. Stilicho immediately mobilizes the Navy and sailed to Corinth, on which upon him and his army a horror beyond recognition. Goods had been stolen, buildings burned, people slaughtered, and temples desecrated. Alaric is near, so Stilicho chase forth and he was able to knock Alaric and his force, surrounded him atop a mountain. The news of the battle reached Constantinople upon which Eutropius persuade Arcadius to command Stilicho to leave Balkan at once of which Stilicho purposefully delayed this time.

    Eutropius won't have it and he declared Stilicho as Public enemy number one of the Eastern Roman Empire. Stilicho's properties and fortunes was confiscated, he had no holding at all on the East, betrayed by the very people he tried to save. Amidst this Chaos, Alaric bribed his way of Stilicho's mercenaries, and thus him along with the Gothic army he had and successfully escape down the mountain. Stilicho returned to the West, humiliated.

    Even before he reached Italy, news came that a usurper named Gildo amassed more than 20.000 men in North Africa, and defect to Arcadius of the Eastern Roman Empire. Africa is Rome's vital food source of which without it, the Eternal city will starve. Stilicho acts in violent haste, he sent Gildo's rival brother, Mascezel to oppose his treacherous brother. Marched with him 5.000 veterans, all loyal to Stilicho and the Western Roman Empire.

    Gildo then captured, thrown into dungeon, and executed. Mascezel now undisputed Western Roman Commander of North Africa. At the time he returned to Rome triumphantly and began to close himself with Stilicho's rivals, he was thrown off a bridge upon which he was drowned. Stilicho just had a formidable ally but he decided Mascezel wasn't suited for the role, threats to power can not be tolerated.

    N̵̬̞̥͎̒̅̑͜͝Ǫ̶̼̯̩̦̇̀̎̀͘͠ͅ ̸̛̪̙͕̤̰͈͑̿͋̇͝ͅS̵̢̢̖̺̼̙̙̓͒̆Ụ̵̙͖̼́̎̊̕͝͝C̷̤̠͖͗̓̏͋H̵̩͕͂̓̂̎̾ ̵̠̹̥̗̙̺̖̀̊̾̊̐̚R̶̡̩͈͖͚̙͒͊͐̒͂̚Ȩ̶̛͔͓͒͋̾̾̀̔͜C̷̢̞̼̪͈̗̄̈̕͠͠O̴̺͗͘R̵̯̲̃D̸̰̩͖̮͑̿̌͠ ̴͍̻̥̳͕̞̩͌͛̄̋̾̕͠Ę̸̡͍͇͍̥̝̈́Ẍ̴̪̟̜̭̬̦͋̚I̶̦͛̍͝S̷͎̥̥͎͖̘̳̀́͠T̵̙̫̤̲͇͉̬͛͒̈͛́Ę̶̡̹̞̹̜̹̆̽̈́̓̄̂͊D̵̹͙̭̝̱̻̹͛̑̌̉͝BRITAIN CAMPAIGN

    By the year 398 AD, he once again returned to Gaul per acceptance by the Senate to raise a new army. He went beyond just Gaul, he goes on under a pseudonym of Artorius, just after he heard that the Celts of the Island are waiting for a messianic figure named Arthur. He landed in Britain to nullify an imperial usurper, warded off invading Saxons, fighting against Pictish incursion, and unite the whole Island. He noticed that the land is ravaged and devastated, rotten and many palace are abandoned. But he still have one trick left up his sleeve, he then declared himself as the prophecized messiah of the Celts, the rightful King Arthur, under the name of Artorius Castus with the legendary sword Excalibur (Caladfwech)

    The Celts immediately unites under Rome's banner just after he finally able to defeat a Saxon King somewhere on the eastern part of the Island, sent him back to continental Europe. Many tribes sent their strongest warrior to serve under Stilicho, among those are Langelannus, Angrivarius, Drustanus, Walwanus, Gaius, Persivus, Medraut, Cadorius, Caractacus, and many more.

    With the region stabilizes, he returned to Europe, left some 5.000 of his loyal men to unite with the Celts and make sure no more invasion from Saxons of the east (sea) and the Picts from the north (beyond the Hadrian's Wall). Upon landing in Gaul, he ordered all documents and reports to be destroyed and burned, nothing left of the trail of his short three months journey off of the coast of Gaul into Britain. As history goes, everyone agrees Stilicho never went into Britain and he only went to Gaul.

    He confessed of this operation to his wife soon after. As such, only his trusted men, his wife, and him knows of this subterfuge.

    ALARIC RETURNS

    The development of the Balkan along the year of which Stilicho left was turbulent. Eutropius was exiled by the order of emperor Arcadius, and called back to be tried of treason and executed. With this Alaric grew paranoid of the growing anti-barbarian sentiment on the East. So he joins correspondence with Stilicho and asks for position in his Western Roman Army. Stilicho turns him down.

    By fall of 401 AD, Stilicho left Italy with some 20.000 men beyond the Alps to fight off an invasion of huge coalition force of the Vandals and the Alans. He left Italy vulnerable and Alaric takes notice. Some 30.000 barbarian army scoured the land and laid waste the region. Ravaging cities and destroying countrysides. Stilicho is stuck, all path of the Alps are blocked with snow.

    By the following month, Alaric advanced forward to Mediolanum where the Emperor Honorius resides. Honorius flee the city as Alaric comes close, some small detachment was sent to chase the feeble Emperor. Honorius resides on nearby town and the defender won't last long.

    In the most desperate moment with Alaric's huge Germanic force pounding at the gate. Something appears on the horizon, from the mountaintop from every roads and along every rivers, Stilicho and his force emerged from beyond the Alps, hastened their pace to save the city. In subsequent battle, Stilicho was able to broke Alaric's siege, thus the Germanic force flee.

    Alaric has no choice but to stale off the Romans, and then unexpectedly by Easter Sunday of 402, Stilicho bested him at Pollentia, capturing most of his officers, took his treasures and even his wife. Alaric was able to flee once again with most of his force, but not for long. At Verona, Stilicho surrounded his force and killed most of his men. A truce was made between the humbled Alaric of which he agrees to support Stilicho's conquest of Illyricum, otherwise he'll be killed should he refused. Alaric left Italy with tenth of his force and silently settled somewhere on the Balkan.

    Thus, for the following years, Stilicho has now become the strongest men without contender of the Mediterranean. Everyone knows who he is, Romans cheered as they heard his name, Barbarians shrivel in fears as they heard his name.

    GOTH-KING RADAGAISUS

    By the following years news arrived by 405 AD the Goths, some more than 70.000 of them crossed the Danube and looming over with massive force to the Empire under their king, Radagaisus. They plundered and burned everything on their path, Radagaisus had no other wish, but to burn Rome to the ground and slaughter her people. Stilicho is vastly outnumbered.

    He quickly joined in alliance with the tribal Alans and the Huns against Radagaisus, called off some ten thousand men from the Rhine border, and raised a new army to ward off the fiendish invader. With all his force, he tracked down the Goth King and engage him on Ticinum. Radagaisus was sieging the city and plundering the countryside. Stilicho knows he can't take on the whole force of the Goths, so he take on Julius Casear's playbook and built a large fortified walls around the barbarians and their King. The balance of power is now shifted in advantage of the Romans.

    In the heat of battle, Radagaisus tried a diplomacy with Stilicho and arrived on his camp. He along with his contingent was captured and executed. The Romans used a catapult to propel back the head of Radagaisus to his Goth army, of which all of them are deeply horrified. Stilicho then able to crush the huge Gothic barbarians, many of them was sold into slavery, and some 12.000 of them were merged to his Western Roman force.

    MANY DIRE NEWS ALL AT ONCE

    After such glorious victory Stilicho realized something dire, his army can't hold the huge dominion which the Western Roman Empire holds, but the senate refused his request to raise another army. He had depleted the resource of Rome and there's not much men left because of Alaric invasion (401-402) and Radagaisus' (405-406). Not only because of that, the senate tried to justified their pavilions, of which many healthy young men are being put as laborers there. The golden age of Rome has now long passed, the senators now put profit above patriotism.

    So now with only veterans without fresh conscript, Stilicho plans to conquer Illyricum, a vast region which are disputed between the East and the West and it's a fresh soil to raise a new army of the populace. There is no other chance but now because Alaric hasn't yet recovered from his previous defeat at Verona. However just before Stilicho leave, the Emperor called him off and accused him he already overstepped his boundary. A rival court Olympius took notice and he immediately plant doubts on the Emperor's mind and gave him paranoia by falsely accusing Stilicho wanted to dethrone him.

    Not only this, his wife, Serena, also sternly disapprove of the war between the Romans. In her thought, how dire the situation could've been turns out, the end never justifies the means. Her beloved husband musn't succumb to the tempting thought of conquering Illyricum, Stilicho must not shot the hail first, it was not a justified campaign.

    He had no time to mend this for his focus shifted once again, by the same time a dire news came that by 31st of December 406 AD the Rhine suddenly froze, and thus a huge coalition of Vandals and Alans crossed the river into Gaul, a looming threat numbering tens of thousands, with nothing of Rome left to defend it. At the same time in Britain an Imperial usurper named Constantine III declared himself the new Western Roman Emperor along with his legion captured and executed many of Stilicho's loyal men, Romans and Celts alike.

    This put a deep wound on Stilicho's reputation, of which Serena tried her best in the Senate to protect her husband. Alas, the feeble-minded senators couldn't comprehend the rationale of Stilicho.

    With nothing in the way, Constantine sailed the English Channel and joined force with invading barbarians there, invading Gaul and Spain together. Stilicho sent his trusted general, Sarus to went campaign beyond the Alps. He wins some major battles and killed two of Constantine's Magister Militum, but was knocked back to Italy as a huge enemy reinforcement arrived. Thus him and Stilicho sealed all path of the Alps to prevent any invaders from coming in.

    With this chaos a news arrived from the East that their emperor, Arcadius, died. His heir only 7 years old and in need of a guardian. He contemplates that if there's any chance to unite both the East and the West to raise a force strong enough to fight off Constantine III and his coalition of Barbarian, it would be now. But it's a risky journey to the hostile East and he couldn't left Honorius alone with Olympius. But it's already too late, Olympius already poisoned the Emperor's mind as he grew more and more paranoid of Stilicho. Thus under the order of the Emperor, Imperial Army starting to purge Stilicho's supporter.

    DOWNFALL & DEATH

    Early in 408, whilst Sarus was commanding a force of barbarians at Ravenna, Stilicho induced him to mutiny in an attempt to prevent Honorius from travelling there. Then, when Stilicho was recalled by the Emperor under suspicion of treachery, Sarus, apparently incensed that Stilicho continued to obey orders and refused to use the barbarian troops on hand to defend himself, fought his way through Stilicho's Hun bodyguard to protest. He can't have it that Stilicho never rise up for himself, he can't just sit idly and watch his superior in such humiliating state.

    With all bad news all at once, Stilicho knows what's coming, he along with some of his loyal troops took refuge in a small church somewhere near Ravenna. He commanded his men to write letters and messages to encourage all Romans to never open their gates to enemy. And at the last moment, Emperor's force scoured the door, Stilicho's men draw their sword to protect their leader. Stilicho told them not to, and abide with the decree told to him by the Emperor.

    In front of the church, by 22nd of August 408 AD, Stilicho was beheaded. His supporters were put into prison, tortured to confessed into anything that Stilicho's execution was justified. His men, just like him, endured and swore Stilicho's innocence to the very end. Many of whom are executed soon after.

    Honorius under the guide of Olympius had the Germanic allies purged, their wives and children slaughtered. As such, many avenging foederati flocked en masse to the strongest figure of the Goths, Alaric. Alaric immediately crossed the border all the way to Italy, stampede all on their path, plunder and pillage everything on its way. By September 408 AD, for the first time in eight hundred year, the Eternal City is fall to the knees to a foreign enemy. Serena was accused of collusion with the Goth, thus she shortly met her end along with her children, and other Stilicho's loyalist.

    Thus is the tragic tale of Flavius Stilicho, the shrewd general watchdog of Rome. His death marked the closing stage of the Roman Empire. Many glorious figures would emerge from then on on their unwavering faith, believe in idea, and idea called Rome.


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    PERSONALITY AND BACKGROUND
    "Unwavering Will, for Rome."
    Cynical, nihilistic, and pessimistic man Saber actually is. He already saw many worst version of a man could be. In his mind, there exist no justice, only unending struggle that God imposed over men. In his view, there is nothing higher but the command of his patron. This is why he was able to endure the leadership of the incompetent and complacent Honorius. He's a stoic, in fact, it seems like he's detached from emotions altogether. He can't feel any joy, happiness, and laughter. His only emotion is that of constant pain that numbed him, and anger to anything that violate Rome. This constant pain he felt, left his moral compass into disarray. He doesn't believe in right or wrong, he simply believe that his Patron's interest must not be hindered by anything.

    If there's anything that would keep his grey morality in check, it would be his Wife, whom he love the most. Even with his constant sarcastic comments on anything and his constant cynicism, there's one thing that gives him strength and hope, his beloved wife, Serena.
    "I have no wish upon the Grail. There is nothing of me for the Grail could able to fix. This world is already full of injustices, such Cup existence only accelerate the greediness of men and turn them into rabid animal, nothing more."
    Saber believe that the War he's participate is not a second chance in life for him to fix things. In fact, he himself doesn't care of the Grail. All he cares the most is whether or not his Master is satisfied. That's all what he cares, he'll do anything necessary to accomplishes it. He has no remorse if in the process, some innocent life was in danger, nor he's elated when the evil of men was destroyed. For what he did is simply his role as a Servant, and nothing more.

    "Tragic Hero.”
    Saber's saint graph is that of a tall, muscular man. In line with him being a Vandal in origin. The Germanic people were increasingly employed as foederati by the Romans, not only because of their prowess, but also of their supreme build. It is said that many of Germans had their fathers, sons, uncles, brothers, grandfathers, grandsons, etc. to be able to wield sword and participate in battle at least once. This Saint Graph embodies that legend, that Saber is a towering man, and able to intimidate anyone that tries to oppose him.



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    RELATIONSHIP
    CANON SERVANTS

    Arthur Pendragon
    “Is that how pathetic the Rome of your life actually is? That even a primitive tribe living on isolated and desolated backwater province was able to raise a monarch and heed you as their messiah? Your very existence insult me.”

    Artoria Pendragon (Saber)
    “You're...Arthur? What...this can't be right.”

    Artoria Pendragon (Saber Alter), Artoria Pendragon (Lancer), Artoria Pendragon (Lancer Alter), Goddess Rhongomyniad, Artoria Pendragon (Caster), Artoria Pendragon (Saber Lily), Artoria Pendragon (Santa Alter), and many other variations of Artoria
    “What...”

    Knights of the Round Table
    “What a pathetic bunch of impersonator. Your King don't even exist, none of you actually do. Camelot is nothing but a rotting castle above the hill on Britannia Secunda.”

    Romulus and Romulus-Quirinus
    “All hail the Emperor! It's undoubtedly a pleasure to meet you here, never in my thousands of dreams I ever thought to meet you. But...I'm deeply ashamed that because of me, the Eternal city is scaked by that demon.

    IskandarIskandar
    “What a sight it was to witness you, Alexander. You inspired many men to push themselves to the limit and never settle on mediocrity, I acknowledge your achievements. But please...But please stop on this folly, you're only giving them a vain hope, it was all a comedy to see all those desperate men try themselves to imitate you, for you yourself is unworthy.”

    Caligula
    “Look at you, you might be a Roman Emperor, but you're nothing different than those treacherous and hedonistic pricks on the senate at my time.”

    Nero Claudius Germanicus
    “Your grandfather, Germanicus was such a worthy man. Why is it even you that took the throne?”

    NON-CANON SERVANTS

    Stilicho-Ronove
    "Who are you... No, what even are you? You're NOT ME! I AM STILICHO!"

    Alaric
    "The past is the past, but it seems you're still a demon just like what you were, Alaric. What a pathetic state of being you actually is, you won't left this place alive while I'm still here."

    Gildo
    "Bootlicker of Eutropius, that's what you are, that's how low you are! Don't you make it sounds like it's a heavenly duty for you to rebel against Rome, you're merely a treacherous bastard that we were able to humiliated."

    Aurelian
    "Restitutor Orbis! A fine name that really do suit you well, Emperor! Restorer of the World will always be remembered as the shining inspiration of Rome and her people... But, I don't think that I'll be worthy to stand alongside you, for because of me, the Eternal City was sacked."

    Flavius Aetius
    "Aetius, I really hope that in life, we were actually able to meet each other. Alas, in my death you were still a little kid trained by the Huns. I thank you for you was able to achieve more than I did, you were able to punish the Scourge of God."

    Sunan Gunung Jati
    “Ruler... Tell me, why are you thought of me as pitiful?”

    Honorius
    “Emperor Honorius, your father would be delighted to see you to be under my guardianship. The past is the past, I have no qualms over you and I never suspect you. In fact, I believe that you are serving Rome's interest with all of your commands and decrees. But, my Emperor...But, my Emperor, are there anything you have to prove me of my betrayal?"


    Serena
    “My dear Serena, you always give me strength and you always be the first to correct me if I do wrong. The world is beautiful because of you.”


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    PICTURES
    Full Body


    Dramatic Shot


    BONUS PIC
    An Incredible Woman Behind the Valiant Soldier
    Serena


    "The hope you give, the strength you inspire, the happiness you promise. I thank you for everything, my beloved husband."



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    Ultra Bottom Creator Note

    This sheet took longer than I anticipated, but here we are. This is my iteration of Flavius Stilicho, a formidable figure that simply fight forward even on the direst of situation, that his unwavering will against unstoppable odds crystalize itself into his Noble Phantasm.

    I really like the idea of a Servant that's not invincible, but simply so hard to kill, that no lethal attack could stop him, it's badass to see a Servant whose even badly injured, still keep on fighting

    Anyways, thank you for reading

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    The world was full of tyranny. So, I gave them what they wanted. So, to you, Master of Chaldeas, I’ll tell you the same thing I told the rest of the world…



    Rex mortuum est, vivat rex!
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    ◂Ruler▸
    of Fanatic Logic
    Maximilien de Robespierre(Lostbelt)



    Class: Ruler
    Other Classes: -
    Alignment: Chaotic Mad
    Origin: French Lostbelt
    Height/Weight: 210cm/112kg
    Attribute: Beast
    Aliases: “The God Defiler”, “Le Roi Suprême
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    Strength: A+
    Endurance: B
    Agility: D+
    Mana: A++
    Luck: A
    NP: A+
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    Class Skills

    God’s Resolution -

    A Skill of the Ruler Class. Has been replaced by Liberté, Égalité, Fraternité(False).

    Magic Resistance A+

    A Skill common to many Classes. At this Rank it nullifies spells that are A ranked and below. Since Ruler has become his ideal, the Supreme Being, he can easily nullify most magecraft. The only exception to that statement are magecraft made to be used specifically against Ruler and Divine Spirits.

    True Name Discernment C

    A Class skill of the Ruler class. Allows Ruler to discern a Servant’s True Name after two direct encounters, with a higher chance if the Servant is French in origin.


    Divine Core of Revolutionaries B+
    A Skill which is formed from two skills fused together: Divine Core of Freedom and the Divine Core of Terror[/b]. Normally contradictory, these skills were able to fuse together thanks to Ruler’s Origin of「Dethroning」. This skill allows Ruler to radiate a Bounded Field, that when entered in, creatures are inflicted with a maddening terror(C ranked Mad Enhancement) that forces them to try and “free” themselves in anyway possible, the more violent the better. A secondary effect is what Ruler calls ”I’m showing their true emotions!”, but in reality, is closer to making people’s emotions go haywire.
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    Personal SkillsLiberté, Égalité, Fraternité(False) A


    Liberty, Egality, Fraternity. The supposed motto of Ruler. For Ruler’s Proper Human History version, this Skill would be something on the lines of mental debuff and persuasion resistance. But, in the French Lostbelt, this Skill is Ruler’s method of mind-control, turning his subjects into familiars by bestowing upon them his ideals: Liberté(Gains Independent Action B), Égalité(Removes Class effectivity and resistance) and Fraternité(When a familiar fights with one or more of its comrades, their damage is increased). It is also easy to tell whether someone is controlled by Ruler since the affected wears the Phrygian cap.


    Aptitude for Slaughter(Tools) B+

    A Skill normally possessed by those befitting the Assassin or Berserker classes. Ruler possesses this skill for not only what he did in Proper Human History, but also for one of his titles “The God Defiler”. In the timeline of the French Lostbelt, after absorbing three Divine Spirits, Ruler massacred the remains of the Germanic pantheon, along with some of the Greco-Roman pantheon which were in France. Thus, this Skill gives Ruler not only proficiency against humans when using his guillotine blades, but also against Divine Spirits and monarchs.


    Coup d’État C+

    A Skill named after a method of seizing power, but this Skill is not that. It is Ruler’s chosen name for his Magecraft. It allows him, by using his Origin of 「Dethroning」, to “dethrone” an enemy’s Skill, or Authority, snatching it and using it as his own. This Skill has a few downsides, though; 1: By having a Mental Resistance of B or higher at the time, Ruler cannot steal a skill. 2: The enemy must be inside Ruler’s Bounded Field, and 3: If Ruler is damaged enough, the Skill is given back to its original owner.

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    Noble Phantasm(s)
    ”HA! You dare challenge the Supreme Being?! Then, witness your annihilation! Not even dust will be left───Vivre La Révolution!”

    Vivre La Révolution
    True Corpus of the Supreme Deity

    Rank:A++

    Type:Anti-Country


    After Ruler had assimilated two of his main Divine Spirit Authorities, he found something interesting, something which would become his Noble Phantasm: The remains of their Aletheias. Using his knowledge on Magecraft, Ruler fused them together with some other materials and made what he declared as the Large-Scale Logic-Imposing Flagship Robespierre. One could say that this summoned Noble Phantasm is Ruler’s true form, and Ruler’s normal form is his terminal. Passively, this Noble Phantasm manifests as Ruler’s main armaments, which are futuristic guillotine-bladed cleavers. On release of the Noble Phantasm’s True Name, a massive robotic entity descends from the skies and unleashes its full wrath in a range the size of France.

    Sealed Form
    Released Form

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    Lore
    Ruler is Maximilien de Robespierre. One of the greatest known faces of the French Revolution and one of the most controversial. He is best known for La Terreur and for creating The Cult of the Supreme Deity. Not too much is known about his personal life though, and for a reason. The same reason why Robespierre could ever become a Lostbelt King. That reason is simple: Robespierre was a mage. But, in order to know more, let’s go back a couple centuries or so, to be specific, three centuries from the French Revolution

    Ah yes, 15th century France. Home of a specific famous alchemist. One of the most famous alchemists of all time: Nicholas Flamel. Flamel was famous for creating a high-quality philosopher’s stone. Supposedly, it was so high-quality that he eventually reached the Swirl of the Root and became immortal. Though, there was one issue. His wife, Perenelle was infertile. Thus, they adopted a son. One Gillaume de Robespierre to be specific. That son became their heir to their Magic Crest, and was Maximilien de Robespierre’s ancestor. Robespierre was a mage practising alchemy with the Origin of 「Dethroning」. Still, Robespierre died by the Guillotine after what he did during La Terreur. Or, at least that’s what happened to him in Panhuman History.

    The divergence point arose when Robespierre was at his peak political power, before he created The Cult of the Supreme Deity. During the time when he was part of the Revolutionary Tribunal, he found a hidden relic in one of the churches which had been converted into a Temple of Reason. There, he found a tome, labelled in Old French as “The Magnum Opus.” Astonished that the mumblings of his grandfather were true, Robespierre began to study. He studied so hard that he didn’t realise the truth about the Magecraft he was practising: the Magecraft was labelled forbidden since it had severe side-effects on the user’s ego. It twisted Robespierre’s personality into an arrogant fanatic, but a powerful fanatic. He had fully made his own Magecraft, imbued with his Origin. So, when he reached his limit, creating the Cult of the Supreme Being, something nigh-impossible normally happened. Robespierre used his Magecraft to summon three remnants of Divine Spirits and absorb their Authorities into himself, turning him into his ideal: The Supreme Being, God of Intelligence and Liberty. It was at a cost though, warping his mind beyond belief, turning him into the paragon of arrogance and insanity. He then absorbed the remnants of the Divine Spirits in France, and became France’s one true deity.

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    Personality

    A man who is the zenith of arrogance and contradiction. Someone who both loves himself grandly, but says he loves his people. Regal, yet quick to wrath. The best way to describe Robespierre is a Ruler with the mindset of a Berserker. One who claims that he will remove evil by becoming it. Above all, that which he loves the most is….my country, of course! What else?(Hm? What collapse tag?)Revolution! I love seeing citizens run around like pigs from a gun, defying the feeble, disgusting worthless pig-sow tyrants and their associates! Sometimes I like to rouse them up myself, just for shits and giggles! Hm? What do you mean, I’m a tyrant? Of course not! I liberate people, let their true feelings go wild! What anyone really wants!


    Likes: Revolution, himself, being a god, FranceFrance, but only because the people are so fun to watch like little hamsters~
    Dislikes: Monarchs, dictatorships, people who want to rebel against him in particular
    Natural Enemy: Louis XVI, Napoléon Bonaparte, Charles-Henri Sanson

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    Author’s NotesWell, this is part 2 of the French Lostbelt Series so far! This is the Lostbelt King, if you haven’t figured that out already. Also, Robespierre’s Divine Spirit components are Marianne(Goddess of Liberty, and personification of France aka. Libertas/Eleutheria), Deimos(Greco-Roman Personification of Terror)and Menrva(Etruscan goddess of reason, wisdom, art and war). By the way, "rex mortuum est, vivat rex!" means "The king is dead! Long live the king!" in Latin if you didn't know.
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    Ruler Robespierre: the formatting around COLLAPSE function might need to be fixed there bro, it's duplicated. The reason for this is that the COLLAPSE function is mixed with CENTER function, or any function that shouldn't be there



    For example, it might be because there's another code between the first COLLAPSE and the last COLLAPSE function that made them tangled
    Example: the order might be CENTER, COLLAPSE (your first collapse that reveals the sheet), /CENTER

    (the rest of the sheet)

    /COLLAPSE (your last collapse that closes the sheet)
    If your code looks like this, there will be some errors on the sheet, because I wrote like this too when I wrote my Sunan Gunung Jati sheet (I already fixed it)



    Where it should've been something like this
    CENTER, COLLAPSE (your first collapse that reveals the sheet)

    (the rest of the sheet)

    /COLLAPSE (your last collapse that closes the sheet), /CENTER
    This way, is how I code my Flavius Stilicho sheet



    Hope this helps
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    Fixed it. Thanks. It was the darned Font coding. It was because I wanted the 1st quote on top to be a specific font, and the rest to be Arial. I probably tangled it because of that.
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    Foreigner - Luo Guanzhong

    Notice the Stilicho faceclaim kinda looks like Lancelot, which if intentional is actually a fitting touch. Never knew about that oneBritish campaign of his. First NP feels very Shielder-y too

    Anyway, kinda funny how my new sheet ended up a fair bit like a cross between Gilles and Dumas, despite living nowhere near France. I'm also concerned his first NP may be a bit redundant what with his Skills:

    Foreigner of Divided Unity



    (by Pixiv ID 39045788)

    "Best you hand your history over to me. Do not worry, it will be in the best of hands."

    True Name: Luo Guanzhong
    Alternate Class: Caster
    Aliases: Luo Ben, Huhai Sanren (Leisure Man of Lakes and Seas)
    Source: History
    Region: China
    Catalyst: A Sichuan peach.
    Armament: Brush, paper scrolls

    Character: "The united are destined to divide, yet the divided to unite. And how better to unite than through a foundation of myth?"

    Luo Guanzhong is the attributed writer of Romance of the Three Kingdoms and editor and finisher of The Water Margin (or even its author too, depending on who you ask), two of China’s Four Great Classic Novels (Journey to the West and Dream of the Red Chamber being the other two). Beyond that, little is known of his life.

    Though he worked mainly with existing material, the additions made and gaps filled in by him became just as essential to his subjects’ legends as anything else about them. He had difficulty staying true to history, if that was even a concern, believing that inaccuracy was a risk worth taking for narrative flow, reader identification, and a sense of resolution. However, said inaccuracy could often be due to his or his era’s own biases, two main examples being the glorification of the Shu Kingdom and vilification of Wei, but he would tell you that readers want clear heroes and villains, and they’d still view his characters in black-and-white terms anyway even if he tried to add nuance.

    What he wouldn’t say, at least not out loud, was that if he didn’t put his inaccurate touches on either work, he’d simply be remembered as a historian or compiler, not as an Author. Infusing his personality onto stories people already recognised was his only way of ensuring that the name ‘Luo Guanzhong’ would be as remembered as any hero or event he wrote about.

    But being behind Two of the Four Classics, Guanzhong then flew too close to the sun when he tried to add his authorial touch on another book: a Chinese translation of the Necronomicon, never finished due to the original translator naturally going mad. Hence, the more Guanzhong tried to add his own personality to the Necronomicon, the more the opposite happened: the Gods of the Necronomicon started writing him. Guanzhong’s personality was warped to become completely obsessed with filling in any narrative gaps, to insert his control over any legend he came across, and to be unable to tell his own additions from actual history.
    The Necronomicon’s Gods do seem to have an odd respect for him, or find him amusing at least, given him being one of very few people to treat the Necronomicon as an actual book and not a tool for power.

    Attribute: Beast
    Alignment: Lawful Mad
    Likes: Shu, clear heroes and villains, his own touches
    Dislikes: Wei, loose ends, ambiguity
    Relationships:

    • Sun Shang Xiang: “What could you ever have against me? I elevated your story for mere politics to grand romance. So what if I wrote that you committed suicide? You should be grateful I wrote an actual end for you at all.”
    • Kafka: “You were right to be ashamed of your writing, your stories are nothing but loose ends and non-explanations.”
    • Black Dahlia: “Ask and ye shall receive. I’ll write in a grander killer than you likely actually had.”
    • Omegarus: “Those who are told your legend die? Hah, is that a challenge I hear?”
    • Estella: “Between your two endings, better certainty than ambiguity.”
    • Baudelaire: “Time is a circle, not an arrow. What you call modernity I call a passing phase.”
    • Carlos Gardel: “If you don’t hurry up and decide your homeland, I will.”
    • Rosencrantz & Guildenstern: “Respect your creator’s wishes, he would’ve written you with more importance if you deserved it.”

    Master: It’s likely any summoner of his, given his catalyst, would’ve been expecting Liu Bei, Guan Yu, or at least Zhang Fei. His own ideas of Unity and Division do bear similarities to Kiritsugu’s Twin Origins of Severing and Binding though.
    Natural Enemy: Cao Cao
    Wish: The tying of all narrative and historical loose ends.
    Rarity: 3/5

    Parameters

    • Strength: ***** E
    • Endurance: ***** D
    • Agility: ***** D
    • Magic: ***** B
    • Luck: ***** E
    • Noble Phantasm: ***** B


    Class Skills


    Existence Outside the Domain

    Denotes a being from the world beyond, and the pact therewith.

    • Rank A: Foreigner’s hubris led to him being attempting to do with the Necronomicon what he did with the Three Kingdoms and Water Margin. Trying to write the Outer gods like he would Shu, Wei, Wu, or the 108 Stars unsurprisingly backfired, with the book and its horrors instead ‘writing’ him.


    Item Construction (Revision)

    Skill to alter and rework items.

    • Rank E-A: Dependent on the potential of the item in question. Among Foreigners Enchantments include turning peaches into symbols of eternal brotherhood, infusing the Factor of the Dragon into weapons, and given horses blinding speed.


    Personal Skills


    Era Observation

    The ability to observe the flow of eras, a technique linked with writers of history.

    • Rank A: That which long divided must unite, and long united must divideThat is not dead which can eternal lie. And with strange aeons even death may die. Foreigner is closely acquainted with Chinese history a thousand years before his time and is particularly attuned to the cycles of war and peace. Allows him to clearly sense potential allies and social instability.


    Hero Creation (Revision)

    The techniques and arts to birth and raise the likes of Kings. In this case, applied retroactively through influential writing.

    • Rank A: Having written and edited two of the greatest Chinese novels, both of which populated with numerous larger-than-life characters, Foreigner can enchant Heroic Spirits to become even greater than they were, whether making them far nobler than they were (the originally questionable Liu Bei) or, drawing on the older meaning of the term ‘hero’, amplifying their villainy till they become synonymous with evil (e.g., Cao Cao, written as much less caring towards his allies than he was). Looked at another way, this Skill could also be called ‘Nuance Erasure’.


    Information Erasure

    The removal of any info gained on this Servant by opposing forces.

    • Rank B: Very little can be certain about Foreigner’s life, with even basic facts about him like if he even wrote Romance of the Three Kingdoms or existed at all under question. Any memory of Foreigner’s name, abilities, and appearance will vanish from onlookers, but physical evidence of them having been in the area remains.


    Skilful Star (Fake)

    Denotes the 108 Stars of Destiny, the reincarnated heroes of The Water Margin.

    • Rank A: Foreigner gains this Skill due to his crucial involvement in The Water Margin’s completion, not for having been one of the Stars himself. Acts as an extension of his Hero Creation skill where he can designate people as a reincarnation of a Heavenly or Demonic Spirit… exception due to the Necronomicon, the truth of this skill is it makes into vessels for Outer Gods, Foreigner no longer able to tell them apart.




    Noble Phantasms

    Story of the Blanks
    Romance into Records

    Rank:
    C
    Type: Anti-Unit

    "The people want closure, they want certainty. Those who legends act coy invite my intervention."

    Through the possession of the Necronomicon, which can be read either way, Luo Guanzhong is granted Authority as an Author over any Mystery left unsolved in his Target’s Legend. An undocumented childhood or later years, whether the target may have been a murderer, or how someone with an ambiguous death died (especially effective against other Foreigners, damaging their ties with the Eldritch), which contradictory interpretation was true, the answer Foreigner writes to any of these will be considered definitive, ‘canonical’ even, changing his target’s memory and identity. The remaining Mystery is then offered up to the Necronomicon in exchange.

    This Phantasm is limited by Foreigner needing to know what the Servant’s Legend even is in the first place, before he can identify what’s been left unconfirmed about it. Therefore, it works better against Servants, usually further back in time, whose legends are more shrouded in myth, and likewise is much less effective on Servants whose lives are better documented.

    Many unsolved mysteries about the Three Kingdoms Era, such as how Liu Bei met Guan Yu and Zhang Fei, how Sun Shang Xiang died, whether Zhuge Liang really was a mage, and many others, were given ‘definitive’ answers by Guanzhong that became legendary in themselves. In essence, this Phantasm is Foreigner’s ability to make any Legend he can his own.


    Strange Aeons: Unity & Division

    Time is a Flat Circle

    Rank: A
    Type: Anti-Era

    "No great Legends ever transcend the cycle of ages. In fact, they are more bound to its whims than anyone else..."

    The opening line of Romance of the Three Kingdoms and the statement by which Luo Guanzhong is most known, that which long divided must unite, and long united must divide. That the ages are cycle where the broken is repaired only for the repaired to be broken. Of course, the Necronomicon has a very… ‘unique’ idea of what constitutes unity and division.

    The effect of this Noble Phantasm changes depending on whether the scenario Foreigner has been summoned in and be considered ‘united’, such as a Grand Order or 7 vs 7 Great Grail War, or ‘divided’, such as a standard Grail War of seven against each other. Using the Necronomicon, Foreigner can declare either a Divided Age ‘United’ or a United Age ‘Divided’.

    The former induces a mass loss of willpower that gradually spreads over the whole vicinity of the Grail War, forcing the populace and any Servants of insufficient mental fortitude or divine protection to lose their wills to the Outer Gods, becoming a mass of devoted followers. The latter gradually spreads a reason-defying madness over the Grail War akin to the madness induced from reading the Necronomicon, where the populace and vulnerable Servants are driven to paranoia and seeing everything as an enemy. Either effect is not the true nature of this Noble Phantasm, but rather the shift between the two states.
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    In-universe, we know how and where Gilles died, but not Guanzhong. Out-of-universe, eh, Foreigner Class wasn't thought up yet in Fate/Zero

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    This has been a long time coming. Bn. I have finally decided to fulfill the prophecy.
    Also, I missed your really good Faker, and I'm sorry. Rintaro is great.



    Reports reached the king’s ears of a monster residing on Anglesey that killed any who approached the island, and various settlements across the Menai Strait were calling for the king to act.

    And so, the Beast of Gaia faced off against the king, Merlin watching on as they battled. Hours passed as they fought, the king finding the monster far beyond anything she had expected.

    With the weight of her people on her shoulders, and a firm resolve etched into her very soul, she fought with every ounce of strength her inhuman body could afford her, the Sword of Promised Victory leading her forward.

    And then she died.
    However, the beast had come to admire the king during their arduous battle. In honor of his opponent, the beast took it upon himself to return her remains to her kingdom, draping her over his back.

    Strangely, he was greeted warmly when he arrived, people cheering in the streets for his approach. He was confused, but decided it was probably custom to celebrate the return of remains. He continued through the throngs of praising people until finally entering the castle.

    The knights within also seemed joyful at his arrival, but he was confused how they were praising him as a conquering hero. They bowed before him as he made his way to the throne room, intent on presenting the body and sword to the queen.

    The queen seemed distant at his arrival, and the knights continued asking him odd questions. Eventually, he came to realize the questions weren’t actually directed at him. They were directed at the king. Who was dead. And on his back.
    Well, this was an awkward situation.

    He thought about it for some time. Like, at least an hour. And he came to the only logical conclusion.
    Long live the Once and Future King!


    First

    Second

    Third

    Fourth


    Class: Faker
    Other Classes: Monster, Beast
    True Name: Fou Pendragon
    Alignment: Lawful Good
    Place of Origin: Britain
    Height: 27 cm.
    Weight: 6 kilo.
    Likes: Appearing 'kingly'. Ruling justly. That he hasn't been found out.
    Dislikes: Appearing beastlike. Slaughter. The truly observant.
    Natural Enemy: King Arthur. Merlin


    Parameters:
    STR: A
    END: B
    AGI: B
    MGI: A
    LCK: C
    NP: A


    Class Skills:
    Camouflage (B):
    It is possible to fool an opponent by appearing as another Class or with different parameters.

    Personal Skills:
    The Return of King Arthur (A+):
    Skill that allows Faker to imitate Artoria Pendragon’s Noble Phantasms and Skills. Copied Skills are dropped by one rank, but it is possible to transfigure them.

    It also has the strong mental effect of "This is King Arthur" imposed onto Faker, giving anyone without an equal defense against it the undeniable impression that they are, in fact, in the presence of the King of Knights.

    Monstrous Strength (C):
    Would normally be higher but has been reduced due to denying his nature as a monster to become more ‘kinglike’.

    Kingslayer (B):
    Having been the one to kill the King of Knights, Faker has gained a high rank in this Skill, giving him advantage against royalty.

    Breed of Calamity (-):
    A special variant of Natural Demon unique to beings born as Breeds of Calamity.

    Breeds of Calamity only serve the purpose of destroying Humanity. Having surrendered that nature to become the King of Knights, this Skill has been sealed.

    Noble Phantasm
    Excalibur: Sword of Promised Defeat (A)
    Anti-Fortress

    What was once known as the Sword of Promised Victory has been tainted by defeat. A sword that once told of triumph now calls forth failure.

    In essence, Excalibur itself has not changed in any meaningful way. Its power remains the same, and the way it releases it has not changed either. What it represents, however, and how that affects its wielder, has warped greatly.

    Inherently, Excalibur wants to lose. Excalibur wants its wielder to fight till their last breathe, using everything they have and putting it all on the line only to fail. Now, this does not inherently mean that its wielder will fail, especially not powerful ones. Only that it will push them into situations that would normally lead to failure. Enemies far stronger than them, riskier situations, and general recklessness. So long as one wields it, it promises that it will eventually lead to defeat.

    Personality

    Fou is constantly scared of being found out. He can't speak actual words, his size has shrunken to the point he can comfortably rest on other people's shoulders for reasons he doesn't understand, and everyone comes ingrained with knowledge of world history. All he can do is play the part as well as possible as he had for years and hope for the best. Of course, a ton of people in Chaldea know the truth, but no one says anything because of how hard he's clearly trying.

    While Fou can't actually speak, the Charisma copied from Artoria as well as his The Return of King Arthur Skill do a great deal of heavy lifting to bridge the gap, people somehow translating his intent as a result of the combined effects. It's similar to the old D&D joke of a bear pretending to be a human, and it works for the most part.

    As for Fou himself, he's just trying not to disappoint those around him. The more time he spent as King Arthur, the more he came to respect and admire him, and the deeper he became ingrained in portraying him. He did everything he could to be the King Arthur everyone expected him to be, partially out of his growing admiration, and partially out of fear for what would happen if he failed.

    In the end, this has made a very well-intentioned yet extremely fearful False King of Knights.



    Relationships

    Knights of the Roundtable: All hail King Arthur!
    *Fou is doing his best to look regal*

    Artoria Pendragon: Yet another Saberface has joined the group. ...Right?

    Dagonet: My King. A pleasure to see you, as always. Have you gotten taller?

    Merlin: Fou can't banish him, but he dearly wishes to. There is no doubt in his mind Merlin knows the truth, especially when he starts randomly giggling.

    Glatisant: Glatisant is much more at peace around this Fou than his other forms.

    Cath Palug: Fou is scared he might have to fight himself. This is not a welcome feeling.

    The Fou-ndtable



    Craft Essence

    What Could Have Been
    There were times when Cath sat upon the throne built for another and wondered how he got there.

    He wondered why it was he did the things he did. What drove him into that intense rage? Did things have to end the way they did?

    Cath wondered what it could've been like if everything hadn't changed. Hadn't spiraled so thoroughly that one night. Or even in that battle, had Arthur come out on top.

    And he wondered how in the world everyone in Camelot was so clapped in the head.





    Creator Notes

    The post that started it all.

    I vaguely remember Bn making a joke post Servant some time ago, but I couldn't find it again. Either way, I've had him on my list forever, and I just randomly got the urge to finish him. Barely took any time at all. Was interesting to find actual pictures for Fou with Artoria type stuff. Also found strangely evocative Fou-kun pics that reminded me humanity is perpetually horny.

    What has been can never be unseen.

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    0/10 for using shitty photoshop fc instead of my artistic masterpiece.


    EDIT: LOL NVM, DIDN'T CLICK THE ASCENSIONS 100/10 sheet for sure

    But seriously, the legend is here at last. Even if not by my own hands, I'm glad someone actually managed to bring that blursed idea to life. Especially our local Arthurian expert. Kudos to you, man.

    Now there is a second part to this idea which hasn't gone anywhere in my head. An alternative Lostbelt 6 called...
    Wait for it...
    Faux Round Table Domain
    ​Avalon le Fou
    where the joke went even further and our LB King Arfouria Pendragon single-handedly solved every problem in Camelot and the Round Table, but that will be a story for another time.

    Feel free to hit me up if Morg or anyone else wants to develop that idea further tho
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    Okay, this is incredibly good. This is the kind of meme Servant I'm here for. 10/10, actually laughed
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    Quote Originally Posted by BnEl15 View Post
    Now there is a second part to this idea which hasn't gone anywhere in my head. An alternative Lostbelt 6 called...
    Wait for it...
    Faux Round Table Domain
    ​Avalon le Fou
    where the joke went even further and our LB King Arfouria Pendragon single-handedly solved every problem in Camelot and the Round Table, but that will be a story for another time.

    Feel free to hit me up if Morg or anyone else wants to develop that idea further tho
    what sort of [REDACTED] did Fou do to keep guienevere faithful i wonder............................................ ...............................

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    Rider - Simon Bolivar

    Huh, haven't had a Bolivar sheet since the first CaS thread (unless there was one I missed)

    So, unlike my previous genderbent Servants where there was some basis in their life (or in Kafka's case, the lack of an explanation is the explanation), I don't really have much of a reason with Bolivar, other than his costume looking very Takarazuka-like, and for one big Utena reference of course. I guess you could say it's due to the five female-presenting angels having fused with their Saint Graph.

    Also, Knight of Owner has been a Personal Skill before, and weapon improvisation certainly isn't unique to Lancelot when it comes to legendary figures. However, I can replace it with Incitement or Independent Action if anyone thinks it's too much:

    Rider of Liberation

    “All kings, your chance at the Grail is now forfeit! You face history’s greatest liberator, she who brings the world revolution!”



    (by Yayata)

    True Name:
    Simone Bolivar
    Aliases: El/La Libertador
    Alt. Classes: Saber, Berserker, Assassin
    Source: History
    Region: Venezuela and most of South America
    Catalyst: Her (repeatedly) exhumed bones.
    Armament: Liberator’s Sword (would count as a Noble Phantasm if summoned as Saber)

    Character: The Liberator of the Americas, one who freed six whole countries, Panama, Colombia, Ecuador, Peru, Bolivia, and her native Venezuela, from Spanish rule, holding the record for most countries liberated. All despite having no prior military training, and often fighting with outdated weaponry and on unforgiving terrain.

    Harsh and unrelenting in war, their glory days did not transition over into peacetime. Believing an iron grip was needed to rule a land as vast as the then-nation of Gran Colombia, they became the very thing they claimed to despise most: a king-like dictator. This got them banished from their own homeland of Venezuela and forced to leave for Europe, only to die from tuberculosis at the northern reach of Colombia.

    One might expect a quite severe personality from Rider, and one then be surprised to find she’s quite the personable type. She’s a massive reader, having studied Enlightenment philosophy and past revolutions like the French and American obsessively. Yet she’s just as adept in social situations like speaking, dancing, and even flirting, still carrying a gentlemanly charm and swagger while appearing as a woman. Her quick temper though gives her little patience for the tomfoolery of others, and she can flip her switch to strict and authoritative whenever things have been disturbed.

    That scarier side of her emerges fully in battle, with her ruthless in her refusal to spare enemies and take prisoners, executing the defeated instead. She sees non-allied Masters as her enemy like any other and will not hesitate to target them as much as their Servants. She says she’s aware how harsh she may seem but will insist that the revolution would have never been won had she been any more merciful. However, it is dawning on her that while she won the war, that same ruthless mindset only made her a much less of a peacetime ruler, and she must acknowledge that a Grail War can be a different case entirely to the Wars of Independence (smaller numbers for one). She can still find some sympathy for a Servant mistreated by their Master.

    Attribute:
    Star
    Alignment: Lawful Neutral in peace, Chaotic in war
    Likes: Past revolutions, reading, dancing, flirting, ‘Liberator’s Liberator’ Manuela Saenz
    Dislikes: Kings, mercy, her later life, former allies, mazes
    Relationships:
    • Arturia: “How dare you suggest we are anything alike, I won’t let any royal compare themselves to me!”
    • Goethe: “Good to see a fellow follower of the Enlightenment. Although… you do seem much prouder of your latter years.”
    • Michael Collins: “Spain had to sail across oceans to reach me, yet you beat your tyrants on their doorstep, I’m impressed. Ah, so you’re not mad about me using British mercs then?”
    • Egdon Heath: “I unite my people through inspiration and leadership. You… whatever you are, you unite them through swallowing their souls!”
    • Kafka, Heinlein, & Berlioz: “History still shackles us to male identities, huh? Though even as I am, my masculinity still exceeds quite a few male specimens!”
    • Christina: “I assure you, you are more than beautiful in mind, regardless of your… body. Also, I can respect an abdicant royal.”
    • Marie Curie: “Interested in progress and romance, I see?”
    • Alfonso X: “Sadly, you weren’t the only Spanish king to play games with their subjects…”
    • Ataturk: “We fought for the same ideals, yet both our homelands floundered without us.”
    • Sun Shang Xiang: “A beautiful yet fiery lady, striving for freedom against the odds? My my, we seem to make quite a pair, don’t we?”
    • Carlos Gardel: “A draft dodger become a more famous Argentine than San Martin? Hmhm, you’re prettier than him at least.”
    • Margaret Garner: “My… apologies. You would’ve made a fine soldier in my army, since you, er, certainly understand the meaning of ‘no quarter’.”

    Master: Obviously no royals, or anyone who carries a royal-like aura. Much more sympathetic to anyone trying to escape confinement.
    Natural Enemy: Ferdinand VII, Daedalus
    Wish: That her winning streak did not end after wartime.
    Rarity: 3/5

    Parameters


    • Strength: ***** B
    • Endurance: ***** B
    • Agility: ***** B
    • Mana: ***** E
    • Luck: ***** D
    • Noble Phantasm: ***** A


    Class Skills


    Magic Resistance

    Built-up immunity to magic.

    • Rank E: Rider fought mostly against other human armies. Magic isn’t nullified but is somewhat diminished.

    “I’m from the Era of Enlightenment after all, why should I have had to deal with the occult? I’d bet my fictional self is likely to have encountered magic than I have.”

    Riding

    Handling of animals and vehicles.

    • Rank A+: Mounts up to Divine and Phantasmal Beasts can be ridden. Rider’s Noble Phantasm Cinque Angeles is what particularly qualifies here for this Rank, but they were a more than accomplished rider in history, spending most of the revolutionary wars in the saddle and vast distances and terrain.

    “Most of my campaign was spent on horseback, but you’ll find I’m no less fierce in a duel on foot!”

    Personal Skills


    Disengage

    Ability to withdraw from battle.

    • Rank B: Bonus effect of reverting conditions to the beginning of the battle, without this Skill degrading. Rider was forced to flee multiple times in life only to dramatically rise again.

    “It is a foolish warrior who does not know the value of strategic withdrawal, you see.”

    Knight of Owner

    The ability to conceive of anything as a weapon, turning anything into a Noble Phantasm at A Rank.

    • Rank D: Rider was famed as a master improviser who led her armies to victory despite being supplied with much worse weapons than their enemies. Non-weapons cannot be wielded as weapons, let alone become Phantasms, but poor-quality weapons can be wielded with the same power and efficiency as high-quality ones.

    “It’s the warrior who makes the weapon, something that flew over Spanish heads.”

    Spark of Rebellion

    The ability of a rebel leader, able to wield Charisma oneself and negate it in others.

    • Rank A: Rider’s name is all but synonymous with rebel leadership, holding the record for countries liberated at six. Her army encompassed numerous peoples and nations, both within and beyond South America.

    “Rise up, people of South America! I shall cut your chains personally.”

    Strategy

    The ability to employ wider-ranging means beyond tactics to conduct decisive battles, as if they’re over before the fighting’s begun.

    • Rank B: The Battles of Boyacá and Carabobo were two of Rider’s greatest victories, which saw dramatically lower losses on her side compared to the enemy forces.

    “Certain victory I can’t completely guarantee, but certain liberation I can!”



    Noble Phantasms

    Palomo & Nevado
    White Winds of the Mountains

    Rank: B
    Type: Anti-Army

    The two animals that were inseparably side by side with Rider at the height of her campaigns, her white steed Palomo beneath her and hound Nevado running alongside. Palomo was told in legend as being destined for Rider, dying upon being given to another warrior, while Nevado earned Rider’s respect through his own bravery that he was brought on campaign. Both are acclimated to dashing through the mountainous terrain of the Andes and Coastal Ranges.

    Charging forth atop Palomo, the icy winds of the Andes begin to swirl around Rider’s steed and hound, gaining in intensity with Palomo’s charge picking up speed and cold with Nevado’s. Approaching the enemy, Rider barrels right into them with the shock of the mountain gale, while Nevado leaps to tackle any enemy dodging to the side.

    This Noble Phantasm is exclusive to Bolivar in the Rider class. Summoned as Saber, her sword World Revolution would rise from armament to full Noble Phantasm status, where it’d be able to disappear and reappear in her hands. As Berserker, she’d have the Decree of War to the Death as a Noble Phantasm.


    Cinca Angeles

    Principalities of the Liberation

    Rank:
    A
    Type: Anti-Army

    At the site of one of Rider’s greatest victories, the Puente de Boyacá, stands a monument with them surrounded by five angels, each representative of the Bolivarian countries of South America: Venezuela, Colombia, Ecuador, Peru, and Bolivia. Each of them would be a Principality, the third tier in the Angelic Hierarchy tasked with watching over nations.

    In this Noble Phantasm’s partially activated form, a set of wings appear on her temples (Venezuela), two sets for four wings behind her shoulders (Colombia and Ecuador), and a set each around her ankles (Peru and Bolivia), with Panama represented by a halo. This makes her capable of flight and instils a Holy element into each of her attacks. By expending extra mana, she can also materialise four of these wings on Palomo around each hoof, and the last set around Nevado.

    The fully activated Noble Phantasm sees that halo expand into a full Bounded Field, four of the Angels at the directional edges, the fifth (Venezuela) flying above, and with Rider in the centre. Each angel wields power over a force of nature found in their nation, Venezuela over lightning (Lake Maracaibo), Colombia over liquid gold (El Dorado), Ecuador over lava, Peru over solid rock, and Bolivia over sunlight (Isla del Sol), with them specialising in creating minions or ‘soldiers’ and mounts out of these elements with Bolivar in the Rider class. Close combat with Rider also gets exceptionally risky, as stepping into the Bounded Field lets the angels quickly encircle the opponent.


    (by kknoe. Source)

    For Comparison: Schattenbach's, Amaranth's, and Duncan Idaho's Sabers, Kaiza's Rider (second profile)
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    Quote Originally Posted by Nuclear View Post
    what sort of [REDACTED] did Fou do to keep guienevere faithful i wonder............................................ ...............................
    Obviously he !REDACTED, DO NOT CLICK IF YOU'RE BELOW 18 YEARS OF AGE!allowed Guin to stay true to herself and get hitched with Lancelot, while also dealing with Agravain's internalized misogyny, Morgan's... complicated relationship with her sibling, Lancelot's deep-seated guilt for what he perceived to be treachery towards his king, Mordred(uh... Fou-dred, assuming he exists at all in this timeline with all the other issues resolved?)'s daddy issues, and the people's concerns about the king's humanity. He didn't do anything special. Like that linked bear joke, he just keeps rolling nat 20's through sheer luck in every charisma/bluffing/persuasion check to the point that everyone just interprets his random animal sounds as the best possible advice in any given situation, which led to every factor that would have led to the Fall of Camelot instead just... unceremoniously resolving itself.
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    I own the rights to the first ascension and the word "Fou-nd Table". I hereby give morg a cease and desist order.
    else i reveal information about you
    the pic is actually much older. my imgur said its 9 months old now. So we had this talk even earlier.
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    Disgusting. All of you.

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    Quote Originally Posted by BnEl15 View Post
    Faux Round Table Domain
    ​Avalon le Fou
    This is something I will be unable to fulfill. I still need to get back to my Avestan LB. However, I did immediately get a scenario off the top of my head for how it would go...
    The King does not understand the hearts of Fou

    With those chilling words, Tristan began to walk away from the ones he called friends, his steeled eyes placed firmly ahead.

    "Fou~!"

    Tristan stops in his tracks, fist slowly clenching into a quaking fist.

    "Fou! Fou fou fooouuuu fou! Fou foou!"

    The knights were shocked at the king's words as he descended from his throne, approaching his soon to be wayward knight.

    "Fou? Fou fou fffffoooou Fouuuuu? Fou Fou foouuu~"

    Tristan's hand fully unclenches as he faces his king, his eyes losing their cold edge.

    "But, My King"

    "Fou! Fou fou fou."

    Tears begin to gently roll down Tristans eyes, the words piercing to the very heart of his soul. He slowly sinks to the ground before his king, barely able to contain the emotion rising within him.

    "Thank you, My King."

    Agravaine watches on, disapproval meeting a strange sense of further admiration for his king. Lancelot begins to feel his guilt weigh heavy on his shoulders. Mordred reaffirms her dedication and pride in her ability to serve her king. Even Kay would later acknowledge that speech was something even his silver tongue couldn't possibly match.

    Also, Mordred would definitely still be as she is. Cath Palug happens late enough in the timeline it wouldn't make a ton of sense for her to be Fou'd
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    Quote Originally Posted by Morg van Destro View Post
    This is something I will be unable to fulfill. I still need to get back to my Avestan LB. However, I did immediately get a scenario off the top of my head for how it would go...
    The King does not understand the hearts of Fou

    With those chilling words, Tristan began to walk away from the ones he called friends, his steeled eyes placed firmly ahead.

    "Fou~!"

    Tristan stops in his tracks, fist slowly clenching into a quaking fist.

    "Fou! Fou fou fooouuuu fou! Fou foou!"

    The knights were shocked at the king's words as he descended from his throne, approaching his soon to be wayward knight.

    "Fou? Fou fou fffffoooou Fouuuuu? Fou Fou foouuu~"

    Tristan's hand fully unclenches as he faces his king, his eyes losing their cold edge.

    "But, My King"

    "Fou! Fou fou fou."

    Tears begin to gently roll down Tristans eyes, the words piercing to the very heart of his soul. He slowly sinks to the ground before his king, barely able to contain the emotion rising within him.

    "Thank you, My King."

    Agravaine watches on, disapproval meeting a strange sense of further admiration for his king. Lancelot begins to feel his guilt weigh heavy on his shoulders. Mordred reaffirms her dedication and pride in her ability to serve her king. Even Kay would later acknowledge that speech was something even his silver tongue couldn't possibly match.

    Also, Mordred would definitely still be as she is. Cath Palug happens late enough in the timeline it wouldn't make a ton of sense for her to be Fou'd
    Now das some good shit right there

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    Quote Originally Posted by ThreadNomad View Post
    Disgusting. All of you.
    Is this the controversy? Fou Pendragon? I haven't even released my magnum opus of guaranteed controversy.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Morg van Destro View Post
    Is this the controversy? Fou Pendragon? I haven't even released my magnum opus of guaranteed controversy.
    Don't.
    Everyone, say it with me.
    Don't.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Morg van Destro View Post
    Is this the controversy? Fou Pendragon? I haven't even released my magnum opus of guaranteed controversy.
    This kind of shitpost destroys my integrity of a TM fan. Your Magnum Opus would obliterate the rest of it. At worst, I could end up liking Fate Zero.

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