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    Voyager of Unlikely Friendships
    -- Humanity Amidst the Shadows of Imperialism --

    "Oh my, have I been called to service once again? Ah, where are my manners? I am Servant Voyager, True Name Mohammed Abdul Karim, the Munshi, personal secretary- and dare I say friend- to Her Majesty Queen Victoria of the United Kingdom. Oh, but I suppose these titles mean little. Right now, I am simply another Servant to command. Now, if I may be so blunt... I'm afraid I'm not much of a fighter. I'm more of a... butler. Yes, I suppose that's close enough. Feel free to rely on me if you're ever in the mood for snacks, tea, or simple companionship."
    ~ ♬ ~


    Source

    Full Body
    "Apparently I have manifested as a... Voyager? An unusual case, but nothing too surprising. I did spend most of my life in a foreign land, far away from home. Still... I think that's just half of the story. Metaphorically speaking, I brought my home to England. I opened the people's eyes to the reality of the British Raj. I wanted them to know that we're not so different; that race and ethnicity aside, we're all humans deep down. I... can't say I was very successful despite my best efforts, but... I suppose it's still something I should be proud of regardless."


    Class: Voyager
    Other Classes: -
    True Name: Mohammed Abdul Karim
    Alignment: Neutral Good
    Origin: India (19th century)

    Parameters:

    STR: D
    END: C
    AGI: B
    MGI: D
    LCK: C
    NP: C

    Likes: Teaching, learning about different cultures, telling stories of his homeland
    Dislikes: Prejudice, false accusations, burning letters
    Talent: Teaching and mastering new languages, storytelling, various tasks befitting of a "butler"
    Natural Enemy: Edward VII of England
    Armament: Traditional Indian kukri, ceremonial British cane sword
    Catalyst: A pair of golden bracelets, buried in a secret chamber in Buckingham Palace

    Class Skills
    Independent Navigation (C+)



    A Skill somewhat comparable to Independent Action, allowing Voyager to generate mana for himself periodically. The mana generation rate slightly increases in territories he normally deem "unfamiliar". Physically speaking, Voyager only traveled routinely between his homeland of India and Great Britain. His journey takes the form of a more metaphysical one, navigating through Victorian England's societal norms and political intrigue. While he generally treated the customs of the era with respect, he was also unafraid to voice his own concerns, demanding wealth and influence from the queen when necessary, an act that drew much ire and controversy towards himself. Despite being a close aide of the queen, he maintained his "independence", granting him a decent rank in this Skill. Ultimately, what other Class could be better suited to a man who traversed the massive cultural and sociopolitical chasm between Britain and India, and sought to bridge the gap between the two?

    "Some would consider my actions reckless or disrespectful, but... the queen has no need for more yes-men who's only there to nod and fawn every whim. There's already enough of those in the parliament. If I may be so bold, a wise ruler should be unafraid to open their eyes to things they do not want to see; suffering, prejudice, the trials faced by 'lesser' men... I am grateful that Her Majesty shared these sentiments, but everyone else... less so. Not that I ever stopped trying, despite everything that's happened."


    Personal Skills
    Munshi (A++)



    "[The Queen's] discussions with the Munshi were wide-ranging—philosophical, political, and practical. Both head and heart were engaged. There is no doubt that the Queen found in Abdul Karim a connection with a world that was fascinatingly alien, and a confidant who would not feed her the official line."

    - Sushila Anand, Indian Sahib: Queen Victoria's Dear Abdul (1996)
    The "Munshi", a title bestowed upon Voyager from Queen Victoria, Queen of the United Kingdom and Empress of India. The title is best translated to "writer" or "secretary", but in truth, Voyager's scope of work was considerably larger than that. Voyager was especially close with the Queen, teaching her about the Quran and the Urdu language spoken in his homeland. The two were frequently engaged in enlightening discussions about their respective cultures, and it can be said that Voyager learned as much from the Queen as the Queen learned from him.

    A composite Skill defined as "a set of abilities that allowed Voyager to stand as equals before the Queen", which consists of Mentorship, Proof of Friendship, Silver Tongue, and Storytelling. None of these provide any combat potential. Rather, they are optimized for the sake of "opening dialogue". These abilities are especially effective on rulers, almost comparable to Counter Hero (King). That said, Voyager would never consider this Skill as a means to subjugate them. Even if society condemned his actions back then, to him, the word "Munshi" means "friend". Nothing more, nothing less.

    "Me and the Queen... from our discussions, we learned that both of us loved tea- different blends, mind you; my favorite was hardly found anywhere in Britain, while hers just tasted like plain boiled water to me. She was fond of mangoes and treated it like the best thing on earth, in part due to its scarcity in the country. Meanwhile I was practically sick of the taste. It grew almost everywhere where I'm from, and I'd tried almost every mango-based dish there was. I think this is what many people tend to miss; their eyes are too clouded by biases and prejudice to consider that the person on the other side is... just as human as they are. Dialogue fosters understanding. So long as people can acknowledge that, I believe a brighter future is always possible for humanity."

    Great Multicultural Exchange (B)



    "The rapid advancement and personal arrogance of the Munshi would inevitably have led to his unpopularity, but the fact of his race made all emotions run hotter against him. Racialism was a scourge of the age; it went hand in hand with belief in the appropriateness of Britain's global dominion. For a dark-skinned Indian to be put very nearly on a level with the queen's white servants was all but intolerable, for him to eat at the same table as them, to share in their daily lives was viewed as an outrage. Yet the queen was determined to impose harmony on her household. Race hatred was intolerable to her, and the "dear good Munshi" deserving of nothing but respect."

    Carolly Erickson, Her Little Majesty (2002)
    A Skill granted to those who metaphorically "unified" the world by facilitating an exchange of culture. A unique variation of Human Observation and Aesthetic Appreciation, there is a chance that the user might be able to deduce an enemy Servant's True Name, Skills, and Noble Phantasm(s) by observing traces of their "culture", consisting of their clothing, accent, speech patterns, and armaments. In Voyager's case, he only traveled between India and Great Britain, but his knowledge in both cultures is impeccable. It was said that the talented Munshi easily adapted to the sensibilities of Victorian England, while educating the Queen on various matters native to his homeland ranging from language to spirituality. His knowledge and character earned the Queen's affections, to the point she regarded him higher than many other members of the Royal Household, much to their envy.

    "Heh, some of my own countrymen called me a traitor for making friends with the British, while the Brits called me a fool for insinuating that we could be anywhere near equal. It's not that I don't sympathize with my homeland's struggle for independence. It's just that... their methods could only go so far. Wars, revolts, sabotage... in the long run, such methods will only perpetuate this dreadful cycle even further. Hatred only begets hatred. Afterwards, it's just a question of when. When will it ever stop? When one side is completely drained of all resources? When one invents some terrible superweapon powerful enough to wipe the other off the map? I believe in humanity. Mutual understanding is possible- one way or another- before things take a turn for the worst. That's why I'll continue to stick to my methods, come what may."

    All Correspondence Must Be Burned (A)



    "Charlotte Knollys told me that the Munshi bogie which had frightened all the household at Windsor for many years had proved a ridiculous farce, as the poor man had not only given up all his letters but even the photos signed by Queen and had returned to India like a whipped hound. All the Indian servants have gone back so now there is no Oriental picture & queerness at Court."

    - Diary of Lady Mary Victoria Curzon, Baroness Curzon of Kedleston (1901)
    The unfortunate end to the Munshi's tale. Following Queen Victoria's passing, Voyager lost his only friend and protector in the royal household. Under the orders of Victoria's successor Edward VII, Voyager was sent home and every proof of his correspondence with the late queen (including but not limited to letters, gifts, and photographs) were confiscated and burned, or kept sealed in the deepest corners of the kingdom archives. This character erasure attempt was so thorough, to the point that historians were only able to ascertain his existence roughly five decades after his passing, by piecing together bits and pieces of (unsurprisingly biased) accounts from his contemporaries. While his reputation slowly improved as interest in his life increased, it wasn't until 2010 that his diary was recovered, allowing historians to truly piece together a relatively comprehensive biography of his life.

    This Skill manifests in a manner similar yet different from Information Erasure. Evidence of engagement is not removed. Rather, they are temporarily concealed in plain sight, to the point only those with certain high-ranking detection abilities can discern their existence. The more "vital" he perceives these actions to be, the harder it becomes to detect evidence of said action ever happening, and the longer these evidence would remain concealed, before naturally reappearing after a week at most.

    "It appears my ideals of friendship and equality were far too radical for the time. To think I would still be saddled with this curse even now... oh well. I'd rather not use this Skill if I can help it. Back then, if I were given the choice... I would never take anything back. I will not paint myself as a saint; during my time as Munshi, I did a number of things I am not proud of, which might have earned their scorn. Even so, these letters... they are proof that I lived. That I fought against the threat of imperialism, in my own way. Most importantly, despite all my flaws and regrets... they are proof that no matter how unlikely, how brief it may seem, it is always possible to tear down the walls that separate us, and reach our hands out towards one another in friendship."


    Noble Phantasm(s)
    Everlasting Vow of Friendship, Untarnished by the Ages
    Munshi Kangan

    "Oh? These bracelets? They were supposed to be gifts for the Jubilee back then. To think I would be the one wearing them now... Well, I don't think there's much of a point for me to wear both of these. How would you like to have one, my friend?"

    Type:  Anti-Unit, "Anti-Victoria"
    Rank: D
    Range: -
    Max Targets: 2

    The catalyst and crystallization of Voyager's journey; a pair of golden bracelets presented to the queen for the Golden Jubilee of 1886. It was personally crafted by Voyager, and it was these pair of bracelets that led to him being chosen to join the Royal Household, giving birth to an unlikely friendship that lasted fourteen years until the queen's death. Due to his personal attachment, Voyager normally prefers to wear one bracelet himself while using only the other one for the purpose of this Noble Phantasm, though he could bestow the other to those he deems "worthy" enough.

    Voyager's journey was more than a journey of distance. It was a journey to bring vastly different cultures and societies together, and to prove that ultimately, "The other side is just as human as you are". It was an attempt at tearing down ingrained prejudices for the sake of equality. In the grand scheme of things, this journey was neither successful nor long-lasting. Even so, for a moment, it proved that such friendship was possible. Thus, it is only natural that Voyager's Noble Phantasm takes the form of this metaphorical "bridge" he constructed.

    A multipurpose Noble Phantasm embodying Voyager's ideals of equality and friendship. It has three distinct applications depending on who is wearing the bracelet(s). If shared between mutual "friends", it enforces "equality" by constantly synchronizing their status to fit the "healthiest" one. If one party is afflicted by poison and the other isn't, said poison is nullified. If one has 5% hp left while the other has 80%, the former would gradually recover health until they match the latter. If one receives a buff, the other would receive the same, and so on. This effectively divides the enemy's attention and forces them to fight two opponents at once, as focusing too much on one would accomplish nothing so long as the other remains unharmed.

    When forced upon an unwilling party, the bracelets enforce "friendship" by suppressing a portion of a Heroic Spirit's legend that is born of prejudice. So long as the target wears this bracelet, the world will effectively treat that part of their legend as "something that never happened". It causes certain memory problems and temporarily seals away any Skill or Noble Phantasm acquired through this "prejudice" (Anti-X, X-Slayer, other abilities that grant advantages against a certain specific trait). This effect is especially potent on Heroic Spirits whose entire legends are defined by this prejudice (and perhaps unintentionally, those best known for slaying one particular species throughout their entire legends such as dragons, oni, or other beasts). To a lesser extent, "any action done out of hatred" will also have their effectiveness reduced. That said, since Voyager's own attempts at friendship can hardly be considered "successful" in the long run, individuals whose prejudice runs deep enough may override these effects entirely. In such cases, the gold bracelet forced upon their wrist would crack and lose its glow, before returning to Voyager.

    A third effect can only be activated when one bracelet is worn by Voyager himself, and the other is worn by none other than Queen Victoria. Upon detecting this action, the world will seemingly bend over backwards to reinforce the reality that "Queen Victoria and Mohammed Abdul Karim are friends". Should they find themselves fighting on opposite sides, the world will attempt everything in its power to "rectify" their circumstances. Mind-control spells, mystic codes, and even Command Spells would stop working the moment they are used to pit the two against each other. Should the two find themselves on opposite sides through their own genuine convictions, the world would instead create opportunities for dialogue, as well as "coincidences" to minimize any damage received by either of them. Of course, this is a highly situational Noble Phantasm that would not see much use outside of very specific circumstances.

    Ultimately, as a Noble Phantasm belonging to a man known for extolling the ideas of "friendship", it has little offensive potential. When used offensively, its main purpose seems to be weakening enemies long enough for peaceful negotiations to take place, and even that effect isn't entirely reliable. Thus, unsurprisingly, these bracelets are best worn by those seeking connections and alliances, rather than those who prioritize brute-forcing their way through conflict.



    Lore
    Oh? My story? You are wondering how the most powerful woman in the world at the time could be friends with a humble boy from the outskirts of Lalitpur? Well, what if I told you that at some point... I simply stopped seeing her as Queen? Throughout those fourteen years I spent as Munshi, I came to learn many things, including the fact that deep down, there's little difference separating any of us. So long as we're all human... oh, apologies, it seems I've gotten ahead of myself there. Allow me to start from the beginning.

    Act 1
    There was nothing especially special about my youth. 1863, I was born as the son of a hospital assistant in Lalitpur, near the besieged city of Jhansi when British rule over India was at its peak. I was fortunate enough to receive education in Urdu, Persian, and religious affairs at a young age, and I spent most of my teenage years travelling across both India and Afghanistan. For a boy raised amidst the oppressive circumstances of the British Raj, it was admittedly a miracle that I could receive so much education and traveled so far. Still, career options at the time were... limited, to say the least. Even with the skills and knowledge I've acquired over the years, I never expected my life to be anything remotely close to extraordinary.

    1886. I was working as a vernacular clerk in prison at the time. Most of my work involved translating foreign documents and filing paperwork. Aside from my desk job, I also took up carpet-weaving and jewelry-crafting as part of a program devised by the prison superintendent to keep both inmates and prison staff productive. As much as I liked my job, there were times where I wondered if I would be spending my entire life in that prison. Fortunately, that was also the year my life forever changed. Apparently the superintendent, Sir John Tyler, took interest in a pair of gold bracelets I crafted and displayed them at a colonial art exhibition in Kensington. Then by some miracle, the Queen took notice of the very same bracelets and demanded to meet their creator.

    Everything afterwards was a blur. I remember Sir Tyler barging into my office with the biggest grin on his face, demanding me to quickly pack my belongings for a long trip to the heart of the British Empire. From Agra, we took a train to Bombay, then left by steamship, arriving at Windsor in June 1887. Throughout the journey, I was hastily coached in British culture, language, and mannerisms to ensure that I would be on my best behavior throughout my visit. In truth, I had... mixed feelings about this journey. On one hand, this is an opportunity that hardly ever comes to anyone, much less an Indian. On the other, I would be meeting with the Queen of the Empire. The person who forcibly declared herself as Empress of India and inflicted so much suffering upon my homeland, all while having the gall to frame imperialism as a good thing. I felt like I was nothing more than another caged exhibition before the person responsible for the miserable state my nation was in. And yet...


    Act 2
    As if my visit to Windsor wasn't miraculous enough in and of itself, the Queen wished to employ me as one of her attendants during her Golden Jubilee. Can you believe that? A grand feast to celebrate fifty years of her reign, while the people in her colonies were starving!? As much as I wanted to voice my grievances then and there, I did not want to see myself dragged into the gallows anytime soon, so I held my tongue. In any case, the Jubilee went off smoothly, and the guests went home satisfied. A few days later, I was packing my belongings, ready to return home, when the Queen personally summoned me to her throne room. Impressed by my competence and work ethic during the Jubilee, she wished to appoint me as her personal aide. I was... flabbergasted, to say the least. Still, I did not have it in me to refuse that day, so I accepted her offer.

    Thus began our unlikely friendship... well, truth be told, I doubt you could call it that back then. I served her as best as I could as a personal butler of sorts, though deep down, my personal resentment towards the Queen, and everything she stood for, continued to build up silently. The old woman was greedy, borderline senile, unreasonably attached to power, and foolishly out-of-touch with the common folk, to say the least. There were many times I almost lost my temper, though I always managed to calm myself down before I did anything I would regret. And yet, the more time I spent tending to the Queen, the more I uncovered a different side to her. It would have been easy to blame all of my homeland's suffering on her, and there was no denying that she was responsible for a considerable portion of said suffering. Even so, well... gradually, I learned to see past the all-powerful monarch of the world-spanning empire.

    Make no mistake, not once have I ever compromised my own beliefs throughout my years in England. Even after learning of Victoria's circumstances, I am still strictly of the belief that imperialism is a terrible thing that should be abolished, and that my people suffered under the empire's rule. My friendship with her did nothing to dissuade me from that belief. Our friendship did not cancel out centuries of imperialism, and the atrocities committed under the name of imperialism did not cancel out the possibility of dialogue and understanding transpiring between two willing parties. Some time later, I was promoted, and Victoria granted me the personal title of "Munshi", commonly translated to "teacher". From there, I grew more involved in both her personal and public life alike. I taught her about my homeland; our history, culture, and language, as well as the wisdom contained in the Quran. We held many discussions about various topics, from politics to philosophy, and I believe that both of our minds grew richer from such exchanges.

    It's worth noting that I am no saint either amidst all this. While it would have been nice for society to see me as an indisputable force of good who singlehandedly "opened" the Queen's eyes to the horrors of British imperialism, it's easy to overlook the fact that I made my fair share of questionable decisions. I certainly did try my best to stay true to my principles, of course, but in hindsight, I had several regrets of my own. Ashamed as I am to say it, there were times where I allowed pride and arrogance to cloud my judgment. Several times, I demanded certain titles, land, and other privileges to Victoria. Seeing me as both her friend and her own son, she was all too happy too oblige, and I continued to demand more of her. Unfortunately, my demands only served to further draw ire directed towards myself from the Royal Household. Many of Victoria's family members and ministers already felt outraged at the prospect of a dark-skinned Indian serving as one of her closest confidants. They engineered and exaggerated several scandals to get me deported, and it seemed as though my every action- justified or not- only served to add further fuel to the fire. I was fortunate that Victoria continued to believe in me despite my many allegations... although I am afraid that I had not always repaid her with the best of intentions.


    Act 3
    In any case, from then on, my life largely revolved around the British Isles and my own hometown of Lalitpur. I accompanied Victoria on several visits to Scotland and Wales, and in turn she went on a few tours across India with myself as her guide, visiting my hometown and meeting my family in the process. I remembered the anxiety and excitement I felt back when I first embarked on my long journey, but eventually, whenever I left Windsor to go home for several weeks or months before going back, these travels started to feel... normal. I always looked forward to meeting my family whenever I was granted leave. On the other hand, I've also looked forward to meeting my friend again whenever my leave comes to a close.

    ...Of course, such memories weren't fated to last. Not in my time, at least.

    In her old age, Victoria's health grew worse. I could no longer accompany her on walks in the palace gardens, and she could no longer enjoy the tea and authentic Indian cuisine she used to love so much. There was... nothing I could have done. As Munshi- no, as her friend, I continued to tend to her every need, until her final moments. In those final days, I saw neither the queen of the world's most powerful empire, nor the monster responsible for the British Raj. I saw my friend, a lonely old woman on her deathbed.

    Vic- ahem, Her Majesty Queen Alexandrina Victoria of the United Kingdom passed away on the 22nd of January 1901, at the age of 81. The entire kingdom mourned, and I participated in her funeral proceedings. Even her son Edward- who was one of the most vocal individuals advocating for my deportation- granted me a private moment of silence in the room with her body before the casket was closed. Not long afterwards, he confiscated every proof of correspondence between myself and the late queen and burned them, before immediately sending me packing to a ship bound for my homeland. I would be lying to say I wasn't hurt; the money Edward offered as "compensation" could not possibly make up for fourteen years' worth of memories I shared with my friend. When I arrived home, I also received some backlash from my own neighbors and countrymen, who accused me of being an imperialist sympathizer, among other things. I spent my final years back home accomplishing nothing in particular, before fading into obscurity.

    Yet despite it all... I continued to believe.
    Even if my visions of friendship and understanding could not come to pass in my time, I continued to hope for a brighter future.
    If my experience had taught me anything, it's that I refuse to ever succumb to hatred.
    Hatred only breeds more hatred, and it is from hatred that prejudice and discrimination would manifest and tear the world apart.
    Regardless of the era or the sensibilities, it falls to us to look past that hatred and reach out our hands as we continue to pave the way to a tomorrow better than today, one day at a time.


    Description
    Likes:
    "Apparently the public only acknowledged my existence almost an entire decade after my passing. Ever since I was summoned here, I've read and watched several media depicting my life, and while not all of them are entirely accurate, I did notice a common point shared between many of these works. According to them, one of the reasons why Victoria took such a shine to me was... because I treated her as a human being, rather than as Queen of England. Can you imagine that!? The answer was that simple! Ahem, well... I am not sure if that was the result of their subjective observations, or if they simply wanted to craft a feel-good story to tell the masses, but they're not wrong. People are more than their titles, and treating them as individuals with their own unique perspectives and stories to tell could go a long way. Ah, not that I actually need to tell you this, of course! As a Master, the fact that you've bonded with so many Heroic Spirits from various backgrounds has proven to me that the vision I sought back then is possible after all. Truly, I could not be happier."

    Dislikes:
    "The world is not black and white. I know it's easy to justify your own actions as righteous while painting your opposition as the source of everything wrong with the world, but more often than not, the 'easy' way is hardly ever the 'right' way. We declare war on our enemies, and our enemies declare war on us in turn. Without any attempt at dialogue and understanding, how could this senseless cycle of violence and oppression ever stop? I am aware that there are certain dangerous groups and ideologies that are better off not existing, but rushing headfirst into that mindset will only end in more bloodshed. Do not ever simplify the world. Rather, we should embrace its complexities, and allow them to enrich ourselves in the process."

    Wish:
    "A... wish-granting artifact? Haha, I believe it would be a poor choice to entrust such a thing to me. After the mistakes I've made as Munshi, I no longer have any desire for recognition, power, or influence. If I were to make a wish... perhaps I would wish for the world to become an even kinder place in the future? Ah, but I have no intention to use the Grail for such a thing. I want to see humanity accomplish that through their own merits. It certainly did not happen in my time, and while things are getting better in yours, humans are still a long distance away from accomplishing the vision I have in mind. Still, so long as humanity is capable of dreaming for a better future... I think they'll make it there, someday."

    The ideal (hypercompetent) butler; polite and reserved, but skilled in all manner of domestic tasks, from cooking and brewing tea to cleaning. Voyager is silently obedient, refusing to speak unless given permission, preferring to accomplish his assigned tasks in silence.

    ...At least, that is the impression one would get upon meeting Voyager for the first. He is acutely aware of how most monarchs think, and thus knows exactly what to say and how to speak as to placate them. Most of the time, this simply means staying silent rather than saying anything potentially offensive. To him, that is how a "Munshi" should operate before a ruling monarch. Voyager's true personality can only be discerned once one decides to follow his footsteps back then, and treat him not as the all-capable Munshi he was known for in life, and simply as Mohammed Abdul Karim. Upon doing so, one would finally be allowed a glimpse to the man's wisdom.

    Voyager is a pacifist who generally prioritizes dialogue over violence. At higher bond levels, he frequently challenges the Master's worldviews through thought-provoking questions and stories of his past experiences. Despite his prior failings, he still genuinely believes that it's possible to overcome hatred and prejudice not through violence, but understanding. He understands that the world may not always be so kind, and not all conflict can be resolved through words alone. Nonetheless, he remains optimistic and urges the Master to do the same whenever possible. After all, "It is better to try and fail than not try at all".

    As a Servant, Voyager is perfectly aware of his overall powerlessness in facing world-ending threats. Even so, he continues to do his best, offering counsel or simply lending an ear whenever required. He is especially adept at diplomatic negotiations and conflict deescalation. After all, no matter the title, background, and circumstances, "We are all human in the end". So long as he is capable of looking past such things, he is confident in his ability to bring peace across different cultures. That is the nature of his "voyage".


    Relationships
    To the Master, regarding Queen Victoria (bond 5):
    "This is a little something about myself that I believe you would be interested in knowing. Should I ever come across Victoria again in this life... outside of very special circumstances, I will never address her as Queen. There is nothing surprising about that, my friend. Simply put, for me, she was my friend before she was Queen of the United Kingdom, and I'm afraid that using such titles would only serve to put up walls between us."
    ...
    "Would that be... disrespectful, you ask? Hahaha, worry not, I did the same thing back then. My respect for her is not contained in those titles or honorifics. If you allow mere titles and bureaucracy to invalidate years of friendship and memories, were you ever truly friends to begin with? There are many ways to express respect and admiration, and titles are but one. Of course, I will continue to the other Heroic Spirits here with their respective titles, unless they allow me to say otherwise."

    Lakshmibai:
    "I-Is that the legendary Rani of Jhansi!? I heard many stories about her as a child! Um... even if our methods differed, I like to think that I too fought for the independence of my homeland, in my own way... even if some would refuse to see it that way."

    Robert Dudley:
    "It would be presumptuous of me to suggest we could be anywhere remotely similar, but... I respect your dedication, Sir Dudley. I pray all would go well between you and your... friend."

    Yamaoka Tesshu:
    "A bloodless surrender, huh... so such a thing was really possible in your homeland. No, I doubt it would come to pass without your involvement in the matter, as well as the many other minds who came together to make it possible. Ah, it's awe-inspiring tales like these that keeps me going, even in the most harrowing of circumstances. Thank you for regaling me with your life story, Sir."

    Okita Rintaro:
    "I see, so you spent some time tending to your sister in her final days. Even if you weren't able to be by her side during her final moments... I understand that feeling well. It may not be my place to say this, but... please don't torture yourself endlessly over it. I despise partings as much as you do, but there are times where it was simply... inevitable, despite your best efforts. No one is at fault here, that is simply the nature of life itself."

    Roberta Hooke:
    "Eh? You're telling me you had most of your works burned as well, madame!? And... it was part of a long-term plan to immortalize yourself in the Throne!? I can't say I understand that roundabout logic, but... I'm glad things seem to have worked out for you."

    Pope Alexander VI:
    "You and I have... very different definitions of friendship, to say the least."

    Child Servants:
    "Friendship bracelets? Haha, you're not wrong! When you think about it, my Noble Phantasm is exactly that! Of course, I'd be happy teach you to make your own if you're interested. Oh, it's been quite some time since I last did any crafting of my own, though. My skills might be a bit rusty on that front..."

    Edward VII:
    "Ah, Y-Your Majesty..! Um... ugh, I can't bring myself to do it. I know I should, but... I simply cannot bring myself to begrudge you. I understand that you had your own complicated relationship with your mother, even if it does not justify burning those correspondences. I should hate you for everything you did, but... I won't. Succumbing into hatred now would only restart that cycle which our two nations had put to rest long ago. Therefore, even if I cannot bring myself to forget the hurt caused by your actions... I forgive you."

    Prince Albert of Saxe-Coburg and Gotha:
    "Your Majesty... I see, so you must be Victoria's husband. She told me a lot about you. I heard you were quite the revolutionary thinker yourself for a man of your time. I am especially curious to hear about the reforms you had planned before your untimely passing. Truly, it is an honor to make your acquaintance at last."

    Queen Victoria:
    "You are... fufu, I have seen a great many miracles ever since I was summoned here, but even I find myself stunned silent at the prospect of this reunion. Ahem, now where to begin... it is wonderful to see you again, my friend. I have been quite well, thank you, and-"
    ...
    "Ugh, even with your current appearance, you won't ever stop addressing me as your son, won't you? Don't you think I might be a little too old for this? I... sheesh, embarrassing as it may be, I grew to miss it a little following your passing, so... I-I suppose I'll allow it, for now!"
    ...
    "Eh!? Romantic advice!? O-Oh right, I suppose your dear 'Bertie' had been summoned here recently... ahem, apologies, but I don't think this is quite my forte. It is wonderful to see you wearing something beside that dreary mourning gown, but... um, would you grant me a moment to collect myself? I promise to familiarize myself on the topic and come back with the finest relationship advice there is!"


    Bond CE
    Of Unfading Memories and Faraway Futures
    ~ ♬ ~


    January 1902, Bombay.

    An entire year had passed in the blink of an eye.
    The man gazed before the vast ocean in silent contemplation.
    The memories he shared with the late Queen of England, his time as Munshi, his swift deportation following the Queen's passing...
    They all felt like they happened an entire lifetime ago.
    There was no longer any trace of the unlikely friendship that shook the very foundations of the empire less than a decade ago.

    The man was afraid.
    With no letter and no photograph to remember her by, he was afraid that he would eventually forget about his closest friend.
    He continued to write in his diary, and ordered his wife to hide them somewhere safe following his passing, but it simply wasn't the same.
    Words are just that; words.
    What if he forgets her face? Her voice? The discussions they shared together?
    With nothing else to remember their friendship, would the world believe in such an outrageous tale to begin with?
    What if-

    "Abdul?"
    A voice brought the man back into reality.
    It belonged to a woman in a burqa, the man's wife.
    "I remembered when the Queen visited our humble home that one time. I did not know her as well as you did, but after everything that transpired... did you have any regrets?"

    Regrets..?
    It would be a lie to say he did not face his fair share of grievances ever since he returned from abroad.

    He mourned the loss of the correspondence he shared with his friend.
    He lamented the new king's eagerness to shut out all dialogue and deport him without hesitation.
    He felt hurt hearing the townspeople's accusations painting him as a traitor to the nation.

    But regrets..?

    "No. I have... no regrets."
    "Really? After everything that happened? After the way they treated you? I know better than anyone just how much you genuinely believed that peace could be attained between our two nations, and just how far you went to realize that. To see your efforts reduced to nothing like this... was it worth it?"

    The man finally turned away from the sea.
    Facing his wife, he smiled.

    "My love, we are born to this world naked and screaming, with nothing to our names save for the ability to dream of a better future. If we were to give up on that ability to dream, to imagine of a future much kinder than today... how else would this life get any better?"


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    Maaaan, this is finally done at last. This was supposed to be a simple sheet, until I got burnt out halfway through and hit several creative dead-ends along the way.

    - There's a pretty good movie about this guy released in 2017 which I recommend watching. It's not entirely accurate, and I'm not usually a fan of the genre, but I enjoyed it. On that note, apparently his diary was only revealed in 2010, which reignited interest in his life. Now imagine dying in 1909 and only officially recognized by the Throne about a century later (or however it is the Throne works, since they do exist outside time and all that). Talk about unique circumstances. I wonder if there should have been a Skill to represent that...

    - I imagine he'd be a 1* Voyager who was summoned in a very specific Singularity/LB with Victoria as the Grail Holder/LB-King. He also serves as a very niche Victoria support (Nobukatsu equivalent, with 100% less simping).

    - His Munshi Skill basically buffs King-trait Servants, though also grants a few extra buffs to Victoria in particular. On that note, considering the Skill icon, I now imagine her to be a straightforward Buster DPS.

    - Whew, I think this guy is my all-time second-weakest Servant after Mathurine de Valois. He's useful as support, but all of his NP effects are very situational, and he has little to no offensive capability as a Servant. He might work best on a HGW where the main focus involves drama, diplomacy, and political intrigue rather than action.

    - I think I'm gonna write a more conventional hero for my next sheet. "Normal but significant people" are fine and all, but they do have their fair share of difficulties to write. For this guy, it's his character. He is a textbook pacifist wise man and overall "good" character, but hopefully his personality doesn't come off as too boring or one-note.
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    ah, a nice feel good story that actually feels real. of course that dude would be a friend, but not a simp
    voyagers of this kind just get me all the time
    and the NP, this line at the end makes him a Binder support, ey?
    "Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."



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    Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.


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    Del, your chronic Binderitis is showing.
    You are noticing Binder teasers that aren't there.

    Jk, it was unintentional, but I can see how you can interpret it that way. Still, I'm definitely considering jumping on the Binder train myself eventually, whenever I find a good enough candidate. Anyways, glad you like him.
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    Im not imagining things!
    Your secret santa pope sheet was a reference to my Binder too! heheheHAHAHA
    MEDUSA WAS A HINT TO MY CLASS TOO!
    IM NOT CRAZY, YOU ARE
    "Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."



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    Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.


    Indulge with me in the accomplishments of our abode.
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    Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
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    Fun sheet for a pacifistic Voyager who believes in humanity and wants to be a good friend. Munshi the Skill as a composite of several nonviolent Skills is definitely interesting, and Great Multicultural Exchange is something I expected here but that's perfectly fitting. All Correspondence Must Be Burned could make for some good scenarios, and his dislike towards it makes sense. The NP is neat, and I like how well its Victoria niche would fit in the singularity/lostbelt you're outlining

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    Here it is, Crowley Aleister

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    Source: Ameerah Maysoon

    Class: Ruler
    Other Classes: N/A
    True Name: Saint Joan of Valois
    Alignment: Lawful Good
    Place of Origin: France (15th Century)
    Stars: 3/5

    Parameters:

    STR: D
    END: D
    AGI: D
    MGI: C
    LCK: C
    NP: C

    Height: 198cm
    Weight: 100lbs
    Likes: Solitude, prayer
    Dislikes: Arachnophobia
    Talent: Founding religious orders
    Natural Enemy: Lola Montez
    Attribute: Man
    Traits: Female, Weak to Enuma Elish
    Armament: N/A
    Catalyst: the founding paper of the order

    Class Skills:

    True Name Discernment C: Her borrowed information networks allow her to easily discern true names.

    Magic Resistance E+: Although a saint, she never came across magecraft. She gains minimal magic resistance, rising against judeochristian magecraft.

    God's Command C: Grants her up to three command seals which can be used during the Grail War.

    Personal Skills:

    Saint B: A relatively famous saint, she gains this skill bestowing upon her "Automatic HP regen", her favorite of the possibilities which she could collect.

    Web-Spinning (Sacred) C: Her status of "Daughter of the Spider" sublimated in a skill, enabling her to manifest two long spinneret-legs which she utilizes to create and spin spiderwebs. This would normally allow her to use them as ttraps, but due to her status as a "Saint", instead they are akin to weaker Holy Shrouds.

    Annulment Argument C: Her argument to have her marriage not anulled, that was filled with the actual facts, but still judged not enough. This grants her a skill which allows her to "recall facts", purging the false information with the shining light of truth, although this doesn't always work.

    Noble Phantasm(s):

    Ave Maria Order
    Order for the Annunciation


    Type: Support
    Rank: C
    Range: 0 meters
    Max Targets: 0 targets

    The sublimation of the ten vows of her Order for the Annunciation of the Blessed Virgin. This passively acts on herself and grants her the status of Order Leader, guiding her to those "Virtues". When the true name is activated, she can induct other willing individuals into the order, granting them the ability to control shining light and follow the virtues. In addition, the communication between them can become something closer to that of a master to a servant.

    Court of the Spider-King
    Web of Serenity

    Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
    Rank: C
    Range: 0 meters
    Max Targets: 0 targets

    The sublimation of her father's endless web of lies, a mantle which she was prepared for and which she took up at several points. When the true name is called, akin to her Father's noble phantasm, she morphs into a half-spider entity, with higher speed and powers, although significantly less effective then him. Its true power comes in the status of a "Spider Saint" which grants her wings, as well as a purity of action which purges evil before her in a flurry of glowing fangs.

    Lore: Saint Joan of Valois was the daughter of King Louis XI, the King of France. From a young age, she felt a call to the status of nun, but she instead for a long time aided her father, helping him and her brother cause control. She was married to Louis XII so that Louis XI could hold control of him, but immediately, Louis XII annulled their marriage. Ruler protested, but after that was completed, she felt free and retired to a monastery, where she founded her own religious order.

    Personality: A fairly serene and calm person, who tends to keep up. She loves her spider mode, feeling it to be the "complete sublimation of her true self" and thus will activate that noble phantasm as much as possible. She holds no wish for the Holy Grail as Ruler, feeling it to have no major point.

    Relationships:

    Louis XI: "Father! Such a pleasure to see you here. How have you been? Oh, your spider transformation is permanant! I do so wish mine was too."

    Therese of Lisieux: "You are... truly worthy, no matter how little you think you are."

    Anne of Cleves: "Impressive political ingenuity."

    Namazu: "Oh, I so wish I was able to let you free fully."

    Argos: "Your loyalty is truly inspiring."

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    Good servant, imo its a bit generic but I like it

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    Quote Originally Posted by ThompsonContender View Post
    Here it is, Crowley Aleister
    Where

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    struggling with this fricking forum formatting

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    tmrow its late rn

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    Quote Originally Posted by ThompsonContender View Post
    Good servant, imo its a bit generic but I like it
    Glad u like her

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    AHHHHHHHHHHH' HOW DO I POST THIS THING

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    We can't help if you don't explain what the issue is bro

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    >Go advanced
    >Ctrl C+Ctrl V
    >Submit reply

    Done.

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    Could someone post it for me?

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    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1...it?usp=sharing this looks goofy af in this format but enjoy

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    (PS: I'm not happy with how I did)

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    Here's a formatting guide:
    https://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthrea...n-Beast-s-Lair
    And an advanced one:
    https://blogs.nrvnqsr.com/entry.php/...heet-Creations

    You can do it, I believe in you.

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    Hows the servant though

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    nvm dont read it I'll post it in a actually readable format

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    COLLAPSE="Parameters(Click)"]Parameters:

    STR: D
    END: E
    AGI: D
    MGI: A+
    LCK: E
    NP: EX

    [/RUBY][/COLLAPSE]

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    AHHHHHHH

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    My stupidity shocks myself

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    I think you can just copy the contents of the docs and paste it in the reply box here? If you're on the laptop, you don't have to manually adjust most of the tags.

    As for the sheet itself, I'm not the Foreigner guy here, but I will say that it's not bad for a first attempt. The skills sorta make sense, and the NP is a simple one that works. Not sure if the whole "he's actually from the future" bit is necessary (doesn't feel like there was much payoff or elaboration to that point), and idk if giving him Star attribute is warranted (I don't think most people really took his teachings seriously, and a cult leader preaching about the future doesn't feel significant enough in terms of human progress), but aside from that, it's fine, imo.

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