If it's not wanked so hard that its power level has become utterly meaningless, can you really call it God?
(i am not endorsing jack shit, even myself)
If it's not wanked so hard that its power level has become utterly meaningless, can you really call it God?
(i am not endorsing jack shit, even myself)
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Man i really chose to come back to the thread at just the right time.
gonna try and put one sheet out tonight, hopefully not that wanked, even if technically it's appropiate? I'm just trying to imagine summoning capital "G" God into any possible situation and not getting immediately raptured
Class(es): Saber/Assassin
True Name: Hereward the Wake
Attribute: Earth
Traits: Female, Human
Alignment: Neutral Evil
Likes: Money?
Dislikes: Heroes, villains, fairy tales, probably puppies and kittens too
Natural Enemy: William the Conqueror
Stats
Strength: B
Endurance: C
Agility: B
Mana: D
Luck: A
Noble Phantasm: A
Class SkillsA/N: Wow, she's kind of a jerk ain't she.
Magic Resistance: C
A Class Skill of the Saber class that grants protection against magical effects. Cancel spells with a chant below two verses. Cannot defend against magecraft on the level of greater magecraft and Greater Rituals.
A rank barely suitable for a Saber class Servant.
Riding: B
A Class Skill of the Saber Class, it grants the ability to ride mounts and vehicles. At this rank most vehicles and animals can be handled with above-average skill, even vehicles that did not exist in the time period one was alive in, for they are no exception. However, cannot ride the likes of Phantasmal Species such as Monstrous Beasts.
Personal Skills
Nature of a Rebellious Spirit: B
The temperament to never remain at one location and never embrace a lord. A wandering star that does not have the capacity to be king nor is capable of finding their own king. Negates the effects of Charisma with the same rank.
Guilty Saint: A
The warping of one's mythology to be more heroic or change one to be good rather than evil; the opposite of Innocent Monster. As a result of this skill, Saber is more heroic and regal in appearance, and possesses stats far higher than he should in order to fit as a proper Saber. However her personality seems oddly unaffected, even rebelling against the changes made to her Spirit Graph.
"You could argue that I was heroic, fighting William the Bastard as the scrappy rebel. But that stupid bastard kept on leaving all his loot in his stolen cities.
And the Danes wanted it. Heroes don't sack cities, and if yours did… Well, if you're not an idiot you can put two and two together."
Eyes of Wake: A++
A skill granted by her title and claims from the 19th century novel, Saber has an incredibly potent "sixth sense" and combat mastery, best explained as a hybrid of Eye of Mind and Instinct merged together with a weaker variant of Unlimited Arms Mastery. Saber can fight almost entirely unimpeded by negative effects and can feel the flow of battle to guide it to a favorable outcome.
Noble Phantasm
Isle of ElyWhere Heroes March To Die
Fortress
A
A Reality Marble of the infamous Isle of Ely, used as a near impenetrable fortress on a small island inside a swamp, thick with mist. In this Reality Marble, enemies will manifest on the opposing bank to the castle at dusk. Occupied by phantoms of William the Conqueror's knights who tried and failed to take the island, the phantoms will pelt approaching enemies with arrows and will begin attacking with swords and axes if they cross the river.
However, Saber will not be residing in the castle, instead also appearing on the same bank but hidden in dense fog. At that moment he completes his Noble Phantasm, Saber loses his Magic Resistance and Riding, gaining a B rank in Presence Concealment as she turns into Hereward the Outlaw, a skulking thief and Saxon pillager. of the defenseless.
Rather than targeting enemy Servants while trapped inside the castle or stuck taking cover or taking on the biggest foe first, Saber will instead try and attack Masters or the weakest Servants, before retreating back into the mist.
HerSpirit Graph can't take the strain of both this Noble Phantasm being activated altering her abilities in such a way, so too long with Isle of Ely active can cause fatal damage to her Spirit Graph that will begin to unravel Saber’s very existence as a Servant.
"A square peg suddenly changing itself into a sphere, even if only slightly bigger or out of place, will find the walls bearing down. They will crush the sphere for rebelling against its confinement."
Iron SoreDominating Giant Blade
Anti-Unit
D
A massive overwhelming blade Saber claimed from Ulcus Ferreus, it is a blade clearly meant for giants. It's far too large, far too heavy to be a practical weapon of a knight. Yet, Saber can swing it around like it's weightless, the sound of it crashing onto his opponents is reminiscent of a cannonball clanging against steel.
Lore
"I am Hereward the Wake, son of Lady Godiva. I was cast from England by Edward the Confessor at 17, exiled until my homeland was taken by William the Conqueror."
"So I returned to England, and set about on many heroic quests to free my homeland. I slayed great bears, deceived giants, killed 15 men only with my plucky sidekick's aid, all to liberate my home and stick it to the Norman invaders."
"Of course, if you actually listen to my words rather than toning me out, you know that it is fiction. Lies."
"I was an Outlaw, an Exile who returned with the goal of stealing as much money as I could. My father was Danish, and they called my aid to steal as much as I could from the useless bastard of a king."
"So I did at first, and I won't lie, eventually screwing over William was my goal not too long into my career, but you wanna know how to screw over a king the hardest? Here's a hint, a few dead farmers and burnt fields do more harm than a dead knight, and you spend far less effort."
"I used the Isle of Ely as an impenetrable paradise, no number of men could even dream of taking it I had thought."
"But then they did, and I died. Or William bribed me into retirement. Or I died in the swamps continuing my rebellion for years and years."
"But 300 years after I did my song and dance, the Outlaw was suddenly renamed to be the Wake, claimed by that family, all so they could have a "true" claim to the lands I owned."
"But being just a Wake wasn't good enough, so I became a hero. I became a legend, a powerful and beautiful warrior who fought against the tragic fate of a Norman controlled England."
"But when I look at my "treasured homeland", I see a place who's soil is soaked in the blood of the stupid and the damned. I see a place where fools cling to ideals before clinging to even their fellow man."
"I see a land of injustice, a land of suffering, a land where people dress up those fools and preach their heroism."
"I see a place where the she, Hereward the Outlaw died, and they dug up her bones and proclaimed him to be the hero Hereward the Wake."
"..."
"..."
"What a joke."
Personality
A pure moral nihilist who sees only the wrongs of the world, and even in the face of blinding optimism would scoff in its face. A true "anti-hero" to the point of being nauseating. She will still fight for their Master with all of her might, seemingly out of a strangely placed duty to finish her contract despite believing it to be pointless. A person who sees no reason or purpose in life, but continues to live despite hating it.
Maybe somewhere deep inside is a person clinging to the hope someone can actually inspire a sense of honor or desire for good in her heart, but that person is overwhelmingly drowned out by a toxic mindset.
"Master, don't try that cutesy trickery you've pulled on the rest of your harem or whatever, I do not, will not, shall not-"
"Give."
"A."
"Shit."
Just, the worst to be around...
Relationships
Robin Hood
"Aww, did someone believe in the delusions of heroism only to get screwed over in the end anyways?"
Artoria Pendragon
"Camelot was all your fault, blah blah, Guinevere had shit taste in men but still found a guy better than you pretended to be, blah blah, you porked your sister, blah to the blah, feel bad."
Henry V (RoydGolden)
"Hah! As if some songs and the face of a youth can hide what you are, monster. I see through your mask, and I find it hilarious how hard you commit."
Sir Thomas Malory (BnEl15)
*audible gagging*
"Keep your hero-loving miserable ass far, and I mean FAR, away!"
<~>
What a neat little jerk
"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold the vault of Heroes.
The King made the community prosper. Enjoy for free. Paid by your taxes.
University of Formatting | Museum of Legends | Memorandum of Kings
We had a sheet much like that for Jerusalem Syndrome once. It was actually very funny.
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“Such a pleasure to meet you. So you like cruelty? No? Good.”
Class: Assassin
Other Classes: N/A
True Name: Princess Pingyang Zhao
Alignment: Lawful Good
Place of Origin: China (Sui Dynasty)
Stars: 5/5
Parameters:
STR: B
END: C
AGI: C
MGI: D
LCK: D
NP: B
Height: 174cm
Weight: 176lbs
Likes: Positive things, food
Dislikes: Cruelty, unnecessary hatred
Talent: Organizing armies
Natural Enemy: Yang of Sui
Attribute: Man
Traits: Humanoid, Female, Weak to Enuma Elish
Armament: Chinese sword
Catalyst: Summoning with dirt from the hill
Class Skills:
Presence Concealment B: Assassin stated in life that, when they had to decide who would go and who would stay, she should stay, as “she is more capable of hiding herself”, and indeed she did, successfully disguising her presence. She is capable of doing that once again here.
“People think of you as weak? Let them. Then crush them.”
Personal Skills:
Opening the Granary B: Assassin’s opening of her family’s storehouses to those around her during a famine, which helped her recruit soldiers for her army against Emperor Yangdi. Small injections of her mana enter those around her, bolstering them somewhat while giving them a more positive image of her as one who they wish to support.
“Eat! Eat your fill!”
Military Tactics B: The impressive military tactics of Assassin who commanded massive amounts of soldiers in her area and successfully was a major contributor in the demise of Emperor Yangdi and the Sui Dynasty, bolsters her power defensively against non-targeted Noble phantasms and bolsters her own noble phantasms as well.
“Strategy is more required then knowledge.”
Unknown Death B: Assassin’s very young death, dying at the age of 23, is hotly debated by historians, with suggested causes ranging from assassins to infection to death during childbirth to self-caused death. Since the death is unknown, assassin is more capable of faking her death. As long as the situation set up is believable, a large amount of people will be compulsed to think that she died there.
“I’m not dead yet. You are, though.”
Noble Phantasm(s):
Niushan Zhuo
Generosity of the Princess
Type: A
Rank: Anti-Army
Range: 30 meters
Max Targets: 100 targets
The manifestation of her rules and regulations and the fact she spread food to starving villagers in the villages she liberated from the army of the emperor Yangdi. When the true name is called, the area around her becomes an active healing zone for all around, before their power channels into her sword somewhat, the damage they took transmitted out as another strike on enemies.
Lore: Princess Pingyang Zhao was a princess of China. In her early life she was a daughter of a general and the husband of the chief of the guard. But the emperor’s failings led her father and husband to rebel. She volunteered to stay behind, saying that she was more innocuous than the others. Then she wound up recruiting soldiers and played a major role in the victory.
Personality: A serious and powerful person. She deeply cares about everyone near her and wants to keep them all happy and healthy. She is willing to rebel to get that as much as possible for those around. She doesn’t believe herself to be worthy of the title of princess or that of marshal. Her wish is to have lived longer and seen the dynasty grow.
Relationships:
Yangdi: “listen to the will of the people, not just your own.”
Wu Zetian; “Hello, niece. Impressive success”
Hui of Han: “Horrible situation?”
Kyivan poisoner
I'm Assassin, I think we'll work together... by the way, how much does this Grail cost?
Class: Assassin
True Name: Tamara Ivanyutina
Alignment: Chaotic Evil
Place of Origin: USSR
Armament: food
STR — E
END — E
AGL — D
MGI — D
LCK — C
NP — C
Class skills:
Conceal Presence (none)
Replaced by her personal skill
Personal skills:
Spying(B+)
This Skill does not conceal one’s presence, but rather makes one's presence fail to register as hostile. This Skill causes others to misunderstand one's status, including mistaking one for a kind neighbor, a harmless pebble, or as the most beloved person. Assassin did not attract too much attention for some time. She was a typical Soviet catering cook, which is why she, becoming a servant, actively uses this image.
As my sister said:
To achieve what you want, you need not write complaints, but be friends with everyone, treat them. But it is especially harmful to add poison to food.
Cooking(C)
Assassin's ability to cook deliciously. Assassin's recipes are simple but incredibly delicious. This skill allows her to mix poison into food so that its smell and taste are hidden. In addition, she can use kitchen appliances in combat.
I think our enemies will like these meatballs, according to my family recipe
Golden Rule D -
A skill pertaining to measuring wealth in order to acquire wealth. Assassin can accumulate wealth through poisoning, but she cannot store it for a long time. In addition, due to life under the socialist system, when many goods were in short supply, she can be blown away by the variety and availability of goods in the modern world.
Mine... all this will be mine... to hell with the Volga, I'll have a Mercedes... no, Bentley! No, a chauffeur-driven limousine... yes...
Noble Phantasm:
Жидкость Клеричи
Poisoned Family
C
An aqueous solution containing equal proportions of thallium formate Tl and thallium malonate. Assassin and her family members repeatedly received Clerici's liquid from a friend who worked at the Geological Institute, explaining to her that they needed the substance to kill rats. It is possible that during the first four years they really poisoned only rats, but, as was established by the investigation, during the next eleven years they used the Clerici liquid to commit poisoning of people and domestic animals; poisonings were committed both for selfish purposes, and simply out of a sense of personal hostility.
This allows the Assassin to produce Clerici fluid with any part of her body. She likes to use this ability when cooking, but she can also poison weapons, clothes, and even some spells. When fully activated, Assassin will summon her family: sisters, brothers, mother, and father. They are like poison elementals, they are made of Clerici liquid and can control it.
Description:
Likes: Rich life
Dislikes: poverty, annoying people
Assassin’s True name is Tamara Ivanyutina, Soviet serial killer poisoner. She used Clerici's liquid, mixing it into food and poisoning people, for self-interest or out of personal animosity. Her entire family did the same.
Tamara Ivanyutina (nee Maslenko) was born into a large family, in which parents always inspired their children that the main thing in life is material security. It went through her whole life. The limit of her dreams was the Volga car, and for this she fattened the pigs with the remnants of food that she took out of the school cafeteria. When the children asked her to give the remains of cutlets to feed a stray dog, Ivanyutina did not think of anything better than mixing the Clerici liquid into the table soup, which poisoned 40 people and 13 of them died in the hospital. Before that, she poisoned her first husband, father-in-law and mother-in-law for living space, she also killed those who prevented her from stealing the remains of food.
She is unable to see the world differently. For her, the main thing is money, even the holy grail for him is just a very expensive item that will give her wealth. Because of this, she will kill anyone who gets in her way, even the Master should be careful with her. Ivanyutina may be cute, but this is a mask. She is extremely vengeful and touchy.
Relations
Vladimir Ionesyan — Wow, what a Volga you have ... I always dreamed of such. Won't you ride me? And I'll make you meatballs, with rice and grav(I'll get this car and this arrogant chump won't stop me!)
Emiya Shiro — This little bastard really does cook better than me. No, I won't leave it like that!
Gilgamesh — How much gold... Your Majesty, please take me to be your cook. I will prepare such treats that you will not be ashamed to serve (Oh, bourgeois! Because of people like him, I have to vegetate in poverty. I won’t leave it like that)
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"Hello. Be warned, I hold claws."
Class: Assassin
Other Classes: Caster
True Name: Sarraounia Mangou
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Place of Origin: Niger (19th Century)
Stars: 3/5
Parameters:
STR: C
END: C
AGI: B
MGI: B
LCK: E
NP: B
Height: 167cm
Weight: 138lbs
Likes: Liberty, friendship, magic
Dislikes: Colonists, atrocities
Talent: Magic, guerrilla warfare
Natural Enemy: Louis XIV, Marie Antoinette
Attribute: Man
Traits: Humanoid, Female, Weak to Enuma Elish
Armament: Magic, fire
Catalyst: Records of her
Class Skills:
Presence Concealment B: She stalked the night along with her forces in vast degrees, attacking and then disappearing into the night. Grants her a high rank of presence concealment, capable of hiding herself for a long while.
"I move as silently as a panther."
Personal Skills:
Troops of No Footprints C: Assassin's magic nullified even her soldier's footprints, cloaking their entrance and exit and leaving no traces behind. A combination of Guerrilla Warfare and Information Erasure. The ability to unleash attacks that weaken enemies prior to combat, leaving no traces behind in the attacks.
"No mere warriors can beat me."
Mystic Eyes of Terror B: Assassin's fabled yellow glowing eyes were said to be a major force in sowing discord in the French forces, causing desertions to skyrocket and both leaders to be assassinated by their own forces. Her eyes are capable of causing the feeling of "terror", leaving residual nightmares and destabilizing the personalities of those who look at them.
"You wish to destroy me? Tear yourself apart instead."
Inferno-Hearted Panther B: Assassin's magical capacity, her wielding of fireballs being her primary focus. Magecraft with an elemental affinity of Fire, using the ash and smoke to obscure her presence. Her main method of attack, empowered by the fog and shrouds around her. Also, the capacity to ignite territory possessed by her when vacating it, or mend that territory belonging to her when stepping back into it.
"I shall never falter."
Noble Phantasm(s):
Hazo Damisa
The Roar Of My Heart
Type: Anti-Army
Rank: B
Range: 30 meters
Max Targets: 100 targets
The combination of Assassin's specialty in creating waves of fog and ash that obscured her presence, as well as her association with panthers. This can minimally be used to create a fog bank that amplifies her Presence Concealment and first skill. But the full activation has it coalesce into a titanic panther, crackling with lightning and ash, still formed out of the fog.
"You shouldn't have crossed me. Now beware the storm."
Lore: Sarraounia Mangou, the Shaman Queen of the Hausa, was a powerful magus who ruled over Lougou, a section in the Hausa controlled area that is now known as Niger. She was noted for her efforts that succeeded to drive out the French who attempted to invade.
Personality: A secretive and stealthy person. She prefers to be at peace with others, but still prefers to keep an escape route in case something else winds up happening. She hates those who try to claim territory as theirs that isn't, which puts her at odds with most colonial servants. Her wish is to have fully driven out the French.
Relationships:
Columbus: "May your pancreas be eaten by angry panthers! Oh, how about I make that happen right now."
Malinche: "...I understand. But I don't agree."
Louis XIV: "The sun, are you? I am the cloud that blocks you out."
So this was going to be my second entry for the biology contest some months back. I'm working on something else inspired by my recent contest entries but in the meantime I figured I'd get this and something else done. so enjoy darwin and I'll release something else soon enough.
He sat in bed, staring at the rolling green hills of London. A grey overcast gave way to a wave of blue tears scientifically called 'Rain'. Smiling softly, he sipped his earl grey tea prepared by his wife. He appreciated its dulcet tones and modest taste. He did so because he was certain of something as he drank.
He was going to die.
Rather than weep or mourn he smiled.
Not because he was fine with dying, not because he had nothing to lose, nor even because he didn't have regrets. After all, there was the tragic falling out he had with Richard Owen that he wished hadn't occurred. No. He smiled for none of those reasons as they'd be false. Instead, he smiled because he looked at his life and could only see blessings. He had regrets but he recognized that his blessings far outweighed them and he was content with that.
He had a father who allowed his foolishness. A brother who pushed him to chase his dreams. Colleagues who were just as foolish and opinionated as him. A rival who kept him on his toes and ensured that he worked his thoughts and theories to near perfection... and most of all his wife. The one who he exchanged vows with and had upheld. Who, even now, was loyal and wonderful to him in his final moments.
As his family gathered, since any day could have been his last with them, he looked at his wife as he set his cup down for the final time. He could feel his heart slow as he left them with a last remark.
I am not the least afraid of death—Remember what a good wife you have been to me—Tell all my children to remember how good they have been to me
Then his family laid him down to sleep.
and sleep he did.
Rookie Lorekeeper, Amateur Extraordinaire, and all around nasunoob.
Saber of Succession
"I answered your summons. I'm not much of a Servant or a fighter, but even so, I will not lose to anyone, Master.
Why?
Because you will not, either. It is fine if you win in fighting through strength, but it is still a loss if you lose in character.
So, I will hone both into the finest weapon.
In other words...
✨ (smile) ✨
As long as you don't break, I am sure you will thank me later."
Class: Saber
True Name: “Gorō Nyūdō Masamune”
Alignment: Lawful Good
Statistics
Source: Historical Fact
Region: Japan
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Height: 154 cm
Weight: 43kg
Likes: Quiet, cold water, swords, meat, daifuku
Dislikes: Complacency, idle days
Forte: Teaching, craftsmanship
Weakness: Getting along with others
Voice: Kayano Ai
Parameters:
STR: C
END: B
AGI: B
MGI: E
LCK: A
NP: A+
Background:
Gorō Nyūdō Masamune was a medieval Japanese blacksmith, widely acclaimed as the greatest in all of Japanese history. He created many tachi and tanto in the Sōshū schoo, and his life is shrouded in a number of mysteries. No exact dares are known of his life and even his original family name is unclear, with at least one believed to be a fabrication to enhance the standing of the Tokugawa family. Even his exact province is unclear, though he is believed to have worked in the Sagami province, trained by swordsmiths of Bizen and Yamashiro.
In an age known for impure steel, his creations had a reputation for superior beauty and quality, having honed to perfection the art of blacksmithing. Indeed, in catalogues of excellent and famous swords of the era, there exist more blades for Masamune than the next two swordsmiths combined.
In addition to his own work, he also trained a great number of students, and he is known for sure to have trained 15 in total, but among those ten are those considered to be the "Juttetsu”, or "Ten Famous Students.”
Between those ten students, Masamune is connected by tutelage to most of the great works of Japanese swordsmith that came after his death, including the Soden Bizen swordsmiths, the famously sharp blades of Kanemitsu, the Echizen swords of Kaneshige, and others. Collectively, the Ten Great Disciples of Masamune established the very foundation of a thousand years of Japanese swordsmithing.
Hikoshirō Sadamune was... not one of those ten.
Generally believed to be the adopted child of Masamune, Sadamune is said to have sought out Masamune in the Kanagawa province to study swordsmithing, but if little is known for sure of Masamune's life, less is known for his child's. It is not even certain if Sadamune was his child by blood or adoption, nor what their birth name was.
And yet, Sadamune was his adopted child, the only one to inherit the -mune from his name, and the only one whose work was explicitly said to be on the same level as their master's. Nevertheless, Sadamune was never counted as one of the Juttetsu, even though they are believed to have trained a number of other students who went on to found their own school.
Only a single signed copy of Sadamune’s work exists: a tantō blade, formerly owned by Toyotomi Hideyoshi. The work signed Gōshū Takagiju Sadamune is said to have been made when Sōshū Sadamune returned home to Takagi in Gōshū province. It is held up as equal to Masamune’s work in quality, yet Sadamune’s legend sits in the shadow of their esteemed father.
In this work, Sadamune was not only the adopted daughter of the legendary swordsmith, but his greatest apprentice and the inheritor of the Masamune name and craftsmanship.
As in life, she is the closest to her beloved master, and treats everything she creates as an extension of the Sōshū tradition he passed on to her.
...And as such, given she is also part of the pair who taught the Juttetsu along with her father, it is only natural she couldn't count among them.
She represents her father in everything she does, holding up his esteemed name above her own, and that is also why she is the only one who will call when he is sought as a Heroic Spirit.
Because the dearest wish of Gorō Nyūdō Masamune - to pass on his skill and title - was satisfied without regrets. The first Masamune has no wish to call his own, nothing to justify answering the call of any summoner.
But the second Masamune does. She never found a proper heir, no matter how many students she taught. Her simple wish is to give her name to someone, without reservation, and retire as her father’s daughter. But precisely because it's so distinguished, she can't pass it down to anyone who doesn't equal its worth.
In short, her incarnation as a Saber answers with the artistic equivalent of "I won't marry anyone until they beat me in combat.”
This is a digression, but Masamune and Muramasa are often linked as rivals, due to a famous anecdote where Muramasa challenged Masamune to a contest to see which esteemed smith could create the finer sword.
It is said the two smiths both worked tirelessly, and when they finished their work, the two tested the result. The contest was for each to suspend the blades in a small creek with the cutting edge facing against the current. Muramasa's sword, the Juuchi Yosamu ("10,000 Cold Nights") cut everything without exception: be it fish, leaves floating downstream, or the very air, all were sliced in two.
Highly impressed with Muramasa's work, Masamune nevertheless lowered his sword, the Yawarakai-Te ("Tender Hands"), into the current and waited quietly. Legend has it that only leaves were cut, with fish swimming right up to the blade, and air hissing as if gently blowing by the blade unharmed. After a while, Muramasa began to scoff at Masamune for his apparent lack of skill in the making of his sword.
The legend says that Masamune smiled, pulling up their sword, drying it, and sheathing it, ignoring Muramasa’s boisterous heckling for the sword’s inability to cut anything.
A monk, who had been watching the whole ordeal, walked over and bowed low to the two swordmasters. He then began to explain what he had seen:
“The first of the swords was by all accounts a fine sword, however, it is a blood-thirsty, evil blade, as it does not discriminate as to who or what it will cut. It may just as well be cutting down butterflies as severing heads. The second was by far the finer of the two, as it does not needlessly cut that which is innocent and undeserving.”
Famously, Masamune wins that exchange, and the two were forever known as rivals.
But... it is historically impossible for the two of them to have ever competed, as Senji Muramasa belonged to a later generation of swordsmiths than Gorō Nyūdō Masamune.
No matter how old the master Masamune was, that Masamune could not have competed with Muramasa.
..That being said, it is best not to put these particular two in the same room, lest old competitions be revived.
Personality:
The first impression Saber gives is a gentle, kind soul - a true Yamato Nadeshiko, refined and calm and always ready with a warm smile. Then, she opens her mouth and the illusion is broken.
While Saber conducts herself at all times in a way to never bring shame to her title, her actual personality underneath her soft voice and kind smile is eccentric and utterly uncompromising. If her rival’s personality is a blazing-hot forge underneath a rough exterior, her own is a taut wire hidden under silk.
She cares little for nobility or rank, and while her expression and tone gives the appearance of caring, her words have not the slightest consideration for other people. In a soft, sweet voice, she will cut to the bone and lacks anything resembling common sense outside of swordsmithing.
She has no qualms about pointing out mediocrity and considers mere competence barely worth more than breathing.
"Do not worry. I promise you, I will not once think you will fail more than you already have, Master.
✨ (smile) ✨
I will just re-evaluate how much training you need before I can grant you my name."
Sadamune is sweet, soft-spoken, and supportive... but in her innocent devotion to her craft, she can be exacting and savage to the point of cruelty. And yet, she can be said to be idealistic in her own way - she will always try to help and improve others, including herself and her master, but her methods are demonic and she is a genius that fundamentally does not understand the heart of normal folk.
But while she knows is a genius, trained by an even greater genius, she honestly does believe in the potential of others, even while reminding them of how far away their goal is.
If paired with a Master, no matter how far they fall short of her strict standards, she will truly never give up on them, staying their teacher to the bitter end.
"I am indeed Hikoshirō Sadamune, also known as Sōshū Sadamune, the humble daughter of the Sōshū
school's Gorō Nyūdō Masamune and the only student permitted to inherit a portion of my distinguished father's name.
Together, we shall inscribe it upon all of your achievements.
I tell you - Master, you are now one of my Great Students."
Class Abilities:
Magic Resistance
Rank: C+
Protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether. Even if targeted by greater magecraft and Greater Rituals, it is difficult for her to be affected. A modest rank is to be expected, given her mundane life, but she has a remarkable resistance to Curses as a swordsmith whose blades challenged violence and fate.
Riding
Rank: E
A Skill that denotes a Servant’s ability to ride mounts and vehicles. Rider-class Servants typically possess Riding at a high rank. As there are no anecdotes of Sadamune horse-riding, her rank in this skill is low, and she is given this skill only because she is a Saber. In other words, it is an adopted child’s humble rank E, but that’s not important to her in any way, which she will insist loudly if pressed.
Personal Skills:
Appreciation of Swords
Rank: A+
This skill is similar to Aesthetic Appreciation and represents understanding of armaments. A skill that allows Saber to instantly discern how to fight against normal weapons (i.e., not Noble Phantasms). The user gains an understanding of armaments other than swords if the skill is ranked above A. For allies, the skill allows her to give sound advice and provide insight into the enemy's weakness.
She has a plus modifier above her famous opponent, but whether that’s natural or merely the result of their contest… Neither smith seems satisfied yet. In Saber’s case, this skill is used both in combat and to train her allies and Master, as she is very talented at locating and poking weak points, cheerfully and relentlessly.
Tameshi-Mono
Rank: B+
An exercise meant to test the sharpness and sturdiness of a sword. Sadamune is able to draw out the power within a weapon she touches, and if she is willing to do so, she can release the weapon's full strength, though this destroys it in a single swing.
Wrought-Iron Will
Rank: A+
Like her rival, Saber’s soul is akin to wrought-iron and highly resistant to fatigue. With each strike of her tools, her way of life is further tempered. While her surface demeanor is a calm, gentle river’s flow, at the riverbed is a vein of iron that will never break... for better and for worse.
In the Hands of Karma
Rank: A
A skill derived from Masamune’s legendary swordsmithing and the ultimate blade, a blade meant to not cut at all.
A variant of the Territory Defense skill of the Shielder class, where the user can establish a field to protect allies and territory. In this case, Saber is able to provide damage reduction beyond defensive limits through her swords, and as long as she is there, her body and her work will protect the master from harm without fail, no matter what must be parried or diverted to do so.
Unlike her rival, who set his eye on the karma within the flames, Sadamune seeks not to cut destiny, but to flow around it, and her most trustworthy blade is one with the ability not to end life, but to weigh the user’s heart.
Noble Phantasm(s):
Juttetsu - The Great Students of Masamune
Type: Anti-Unit
Rank: A+
A crystallization of Masamune’s legendary skill and of Saber’s very way of life. The legendary students who were taught by the master, giving rise to a legend above all others.
If her rival's Noble Phantasm is shattering and scattering a wasteland of countless swords to reveal one ultimate blade, Saber's Noble Phantasm is the opposite. From the title of Masamune flows many tributaries, a river whose paths covered an entire country, leading to an unlimited variety of blades.
Indeed, between Saber and her esteemed father, "Masamune" had a hand in almost every school of Japanese swordsmithing that came after them, as the Juttetsu in turn influenced other styles and other legends, adding to the prestige of Saber’s own master.
Chogi. Kanemitsu. Kaneuji. Kinju. Kunishige.
Kunitsugu. Saemonzaburo. Norishige. Yoshiro. Naotsuna.
The school of Masamune stands at the zenith of Japanese swordsmiths, accepting all that came before and passing on all that came after, giving to all for the purpose of finding one who could return to the river’s origin.
As a Noble Phantasm, this takes the effect of an ability to craft swords on the level of Noble Phantasms, and the number of abilities Saber is able to bestow in a weapon are limited only by her talent and the history of the entire nation of Japan. Even if her target is outside of her cultural sphere, she can likely reproduce it in some form, by mixing elements of her many masterpieces.
"Every path, every burden, every gift... All of that shall one day return to the source. This I pray."
No matter what the legend, it is part of hers, and she merely must follow the river’s pathways to find and reproduce it.
Of course, this is not a simple matter. She is no faker, projecting what she wishes. Saber must take time to create a new sword, and while her speed of production is frightful, it is still not instant. She regrets to inform her Master that with the resources available to her, she can make only, oh, perhaps 100 in a single night, if she tries.
Whether it is the Onikiri Yasutsuna, the Mikazuki Munechika, or her father's own Honjo Masamune, any Noble Phantasm in the form of a sword that can be grasped through Japanese culture, history, or folklore is at her call.
As expected of a ridiculous Item Shop of a Noble Phantasm, there are a few restrictions beyond this:
First, she refuses to make two of the same weapon, as each work is its own masterpiece.
Second, for both practicality and aesthetics, she does not approve of cramming many abilities into a single blade. She refuses to make an all-purpose ultimate secret tool - not only would it be brittle and unreliable, it would be unspeakably ugly and she may cut you to pieces (verbally) for even suggesting it. One ability for one sword is beautiful and proper.
Third, though she can make a multitude of blades, the ability to use any of them is another matter. She can teach her master to wield one with time and effort, but in her words, giving a masterpiece to a novice is nothing more fruitful than feeding gold to a fish. She cannot simply arm an army with convenient tools, if they lack the skill or reserves to use them, so gifting them to anything shy of another Servant is largely ineffective except as a training tool. Only she is guaranteed to be able to use their mysteries and abilities.
And finally, though she considers it a trifle, there is one other matter - in order to reproduce Noble Phantasms, she imparts a shard of her own Saint Graph into each creation, limiting the number of blades she can make at once. One hundred is not a limit of her ability, but of her body, as more than that number would reduce her very being to naught.
She is reluctant to broach that limit, given her wish, but if necessary, if she deems it proper for her Master, she will do so without hesitation. In that case, in her last moments, she may well illuminate a moonlit night with swords as her ultimate attack, leaving nothing behind but the glint of steel.
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Admiral of Japan sea
I can smell the sea... ah Japan. A dangerous enemy, a serious test for my country. Don't be afraid, Master. That war is long gone.
Class: Rider
True Name: Stepan Makarov
Alignment: Lawful Good
Place of Origin: Russian empire
Armament: his body
STR — B
END — A
AGL — C+
MGI — D
LCK — C
NP — B
Class skills:
Riding(None)
Replaced by Voyager of Storm
Magic Resistance(D)
Provides protection from magical effects. Unlike the resistance effect, which simply rejects magical energy, this ability completely cancels spells. Rider lived in the modern era, he has a low rank in this skill
Personal skills:
Voyager of Storm A
This is the talent to sail vessels recognized as ships. Because the ability as a group leader is also necessary, this unique Skill also has the effects of both Charisma and Tactics. Rider was one of Russia's most competent admirals, who could well have led her to victory, if not for his death from a mine. He is distinguished by a flexible mind, ability to work with the crew and initiative.
Pioneer of Stars B
This is the unique Skill given to heroes that became turning points in human history. All difficult voyages and challenges which are considered "impossible" turn into "events that can be realized". In addition to naval science, Rider also became famous as a good inventor and explorer. He made a significant contribution to the development of Russian oceanography, including instrumental studies of the World Ocean, he designed one of the first reliable bathometers. No less, but rather more important, his development was the theory of the unsinkability of the ship. Rider insisted on making unsinkability a separate scientific discipline. He also invented new tips for armor-piercing shells, which, however, were introduced into the practice of the Russian fleet only after his death. They were a soft, unalloyed steel tip that flattened on impact, simultaneously causing the hard top layer of armor to crack. He also contributed to the creation of icebreaker ships.
Small achievements. I didn't do it for fame.
Cold Mind A
Rider ability to keep a cool head in any situation, be it the chaos of war, mass panic or incompetent colleagues. No matter what happens, Rider will always be calm. He can neither be scared nor charmed, his mind is solid as a rock
In wars, it is not brute force that wins, not an appeal to God, but the human mind. This is what I realized with my first battle.
Noble Phantasm:
Петропавловск
Man-ship
B
The last ship on which Rider went to the seas. This battleship died with him, blown up by a mine.
Unlike the other Sea Riders, he does not summon a ship. He himself is a ship. His heart is the ship's engine, his hands are the ship's weapons, he can fire them. Although the rider is slow on land, he can walk on water and accelerate to very high speeds. For this reason, Rider’s body is quite durable as it is ship armor. In addition, Rider is able to improve himself, whether it be an echo sounder, improved torpedoes with greater penetrating power, boosters, and so on.
By activating this NP, Rider's lower body will grow in size and become a huge armadillo, while the upper part will be on the captain's bridge. From now on, Rider will not be able to leave the ship, he is part of it. Soldiers and officers will appear on the ship, serving Rider not out of fear, but out of conscience.
Description:
Likes: Sea, shipbuilding, Russia, worthy opponents
Dislikes: The current state of Russia, incompetent colleagues
Rider’s true name is Stepan Makarov, Russian naval figure, hero of the Russo-Japanese War, oceanographer, polar explorer, shipbuilder, vice admiral and inventor of mine transport, developer of the theory of unsinkability, pioneer of the use of icebreakers. In 1895 he developed the Russian semaphore alphabet. Killed during the Russo-Japanese War.
Makarov is a proud sea wolf, but in the state of a servant, he looks more like a kind grandfather who retired from the fleet. He may well treat the child master in this way, telling him stories about how he plied the seas.
Makarov is calm, kind and relatively peaceful. He will never attack first, in battle he is adamant and firm, he fights with honor if the enemy also fights a fair fight. Despite the fact that he died from a Japanese mine, Makarov does not hold a grudge against modern Japanese.
“They did their duty to the Fatherland and fought with dignity,” he can say.
Despite the fact that Makarov is open to a foreign culture, he will still talk about the achievements and beauties of Russia and Russian culture. He loves his country without fanaticism and its current state upsets him. Corruption, incompetent managers seeking to curry favor with their superiors, prayers instead of exercises, ignoble behavior of soldiers and one more small victorious war, for which Russia was not ready. His desire is to preserve the Russian Empire, to make it a developed country, in which there is no poverty and oppression.
Notes: On the death of Makarov, the Japanese poet Ishikawa Takuboku wrote the poem "In Memory of Admiral Makarov." Unfortunately, I did not find it in English, only in Russian and Japanese. And yes, the modern conflict in Ukraine is similar to the Russo-Japanese War. The difference is that then warriors fought, and now - butchers
We were blessed by a Sunny sheet. Mentioning you in my contest entry brought you back, lol.
Sword girl is cute. The aspect of actually having a wish as a servant is utilized nicely, an often forgotten aspect for sheets. Her character shines through in her quotes. From your setup, i expected her NP to be a mirror of muramasa by turning one sword into many and create and literal river of swords that just cuts the deserving ones of the enemies. But the sword production np has its own charm and restrictions that brim with her personality.
Sweet sheet.
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C A S T E R
of the Heretical Desire
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Hello, Master! The Great Beast of Six-hundred Sixty Six, the Harbinger of the New Æon, Master Therion, the Wickedest Man in the World, Little Sunshine and the Silver Star himself. In the end, Aleister Crowley. For you to have summoned me, you're surely special. Would you like to know your True Will?
Notes
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Boa
Class: Assasin
True Name: Sergey Golovkin
Alignment: Chaotic Evil
Place of Origin: USSR
Armament: various
STR — C
END — C
AGL — C
MGI — C
LCK — B
NP — A
Class skills:
Conceal Presence (B)
Suitable for espionage. You can completely disappear and become almost invisible, even contrary to the perception of the Servant. However, the effectiveness will decrease as soon as preparations for the attack are made.
Assassin is quiet, uncommon in appearance, he is one of the faces that flickers in the crowd. It is difficult to expect from such a little man that he is capable of brutal murder.
Personal skills:
Corruptor of Innocent Souls(C)
A special variant of Charisma available to those who have used children and teenagers in their atrocities. Allows you to influence young minds, subordinating them to your will.
The Assassin had the following method of killing - he offered children and teenagers to steal any valuable items, if the victim agreed, then she fell into his paws. This skill allows him to deceive children more than control them.
Sadistic Constitution(A)
This Skill augments one's aggression in battle.The longer its owner stays in battle, the more their abusive disposition will grow, causing them to lose their usual composure. The more Servant attacks, the stronger one becomes, but on the other hand, one's defensive abilities drop. Weak and quiet, Assassin was full of malice towards the whole world. It is not surprising that when he killed children and teenagers, he felt an emotional release. He strangled and cut his victims, sometimes cutting off pieces of skin from them.
Fisher (A)
Assassin's nickname, a composite skill from Information Erasure and Innocent Monster. During the investigation, at one of the interrogations, an acquaintance told how he met a man who introduced himself as Fisher and had a tattoo on his right hand in the form of a dagger entwined with a snake and the inscription "Fisher". Although this story was not true and Assassin never got tattoos, he liked this nickname. This skill allows him not only to change his appearance, but also to generate false information about his appearance. Photos of him will be changed, witnesses will be confused in the testimony, and articles about him on the Internet will be full of false information, preventing anyone from knowing the truth about Fischer.
Noble Phantasm:
Черный гараж
Devil's abode
A
Assassin's murder scene, a simple Soviet garage combined with the urban legend of the Black Garage. This noble phantasm makes the Assassin extremely hard to catch.
Firstly, the Garage actively changes its appearance, adjusting to the environment. Secondly, the Garage is able to move even if the Assassin and his victims are inside it. He can even move to someone else's garage, and without the will of the Assassin, who can still call him closer to him.
You can't get out of the garage without the will of the Assassin - opening the front door, you will return to the garage again. Magic does not work there either, but combat skills remain. The assassin in this garage is able to create various torture devices, be it chains, blades, barbed wire, a giant meat grinder, and so on.
Description:
Likes: Horses, walk in the woods, kill boys
Dislikes: Wash
Assassin’s True name is Sergey Golovkin, Soviet and Russian serial and mass killer, pedophile, cannibal, torturer, kidnapper and zoosadist, whose victims, according to court records, were 11 boys and youths in the period from 1986 to 1992. All murders, with the exception of the first, were committed on the territory of the Odintsovo district of the Moscow region. Before he was caught, he received wide anonymous fame under the nickname "Fischer". He committed most of the crimes in the cellar of his personal garage, where he brutally tortured, raped, killed his victims and dismembered their corpses. He was sentenced to death by the court and shot in 1996.
Golovkin is a pitiful, notorious person, not distinguished by either intelligence or courage. He avoids fighting and is generally a coward. In this quiet and slovenly man, it is difficult to suspect a cruel killer, which he turns into when he is in his garage. He prefers boys more, because because of his complexes he is not able to communicate with the opposite sex. Nevertheless, he may well torture the girl to death, although not with such enthusiasm. Despite a dangerous NP, Golovkin remains a coward and when faced with a dangerous opponent, he will only beg for mercy.
So, does anyone have any thoughts on my Crowley?
structure becomes more solid, writing too
its just that the content is, really just for me personally, uuggghhhh. Joker as FC, Crowley as a Servant, (i think there were even sheets with joker as crowley), anything related to the emerald tablet, it is so overused by now. They are to me what others think of Hou Yi or Simo Häyha sheets.
Dont let that discourage you, it is the curse of someone who read hundreds of sheets several multiple years. Crowley is a popular figure who I once considered a candidate during my starting days as well.
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I'll give my thoughts. Let's start with the compliment. I like him. Good job.
How ever, as much as Delrey uggghed at the servant, I have a different reaction.
'Interesting'.
Its a very, very bold decision to not only make him a magus but a master and not only a master but one who injected himself into the throne while usurping the saint graph of his own servant via a greater ritual and using his command spells to ensure the deed was done. Legitimately, that is a very bold decision that, if executed poorly, can ruin the servant. I don't think you did though. I think you did it pretty damn well.
I'll admit when I saw he had multiple NPs I thought he was gonna be wanked to hell.
Pleased to see he really, really isn't. Honestly he's a mite weak. Sure there are good matchups he'd have but with his skill set any good saber is mowing him down. Especially if they knew who he is and how they function.
Overall you just did a solid job with the servant.
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