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    George III: He'll be back, soon you'll see, you'll remember you belong to him.

    Yeah, I can see the Hamilton inspiration here. I do like both Origin of Science and that first NP, since it adds more to his character beyond the generic "crush the colonists" mad king.

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    There should really be a thread where we can redo old sheets in our new styles in my opinion. Mainly to keep up with changes in lore and writing style and many sheets suffering from what I like to call “early thread weirdness”

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    Quote Originally Posted by NINE-lives View Post
    There should really be a thread where we can redo old sheets in our new styles in my opinion. Mainly to keep up with changes in lore and writing style and many sheets suffering from what I like to call “early thread weirdness”
    I've remade a bunch of my old sheets over the years. As long as the remake is different enough than the original to be its own thing there's no reason not to post it up here. There's also the option of making a new version in another Class if you different ideas for them, like my Tydeus Berserker and Lancer versions.

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    George III:
    George: "Trust me, I'm giving you all these unfair laws and tariffs and general brutality because I love you"
    Americans: "You may have been our father but you aren't our daddy"
    George: "Ungrateful little shits, I should have taxed you more"
    Current FGO setup

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    George III: And yet another "gosh I wish I had this idea first!" sheet coming from you, eh Royd. You're such a master of your craft. As previously commented, one can truly see the Hamilton ghost hovering over this dude - which just makes the whole thing even more amazing, if you ask me. Also, this FC? Not me loving whenever Quattro goes full Lelouch. Mwah. I was already done for from the very beggining, it couldn't be helped. And those NPs too? You just wanted me dead today, got it. Amazing work as always.
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    Quote Originally Posted by NINE-lives View Post
    There should really be a thread where we can redo old sheets in our new styles in my opinion. Mainly to keep up with changes in lore and writing style and many sheets suffering from what I like to call “early thread weirdness”
    Wyvern and I plan to do a whole contest around this idea. But then we got busy. Perhaps we can start in November
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    Maybe you can have contestants redo sheets from the first create a servant thread but updated to keep up with the new fgo lore.

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    Quote Originally Posted by DelRey View Post
    Wyvern and I plan to do a whole contest around this idea. But then we got busy. Perhaps we can start in November
    Hoho, November, huh? Looking forward to it if that's the case. Got a few sheets I'd like to remaster.

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    Maybe we can also put our own unique twist on canon servants that we weren’t really satisfied with.

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    Quote Originally Posted by NINE-lives View Post
    Maybe we can also put our own unique twist on canon servants that we weren’t really satisfied with.
    This was actually one of my contest prompt ideas to rework canon servants, but chose against it
    Who knows if i ever win a contest again
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    You could still use that prompt for this new contest of yours

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    Anyway, I'm sure not only there's issues in Rey's and Wyvern's schedules and in the schedules of other people involved in the whole creation of such thread too, because we do have lives outside of this forum, but there's also the obvious issue of not everyone having the energy or the drive to pick older works and re-do them. It's truly a niche hobby, as much as it seems it isn't.

    Let's not put pressure on anyone or anything for now.
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    The new rework contest will have broad themes to hit as many possible sheets to remake as possible. Like Knight/Cavalry/Extra Class or region, stuff like that.
    It is really for the creators who have sheets. Tho perhaps the option to remake canon ones is a decent additiin if one has no servants in the category
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    almost forgot to read royds sheet!
    i somehow get Big Mom from OP vibes and Naruto vs. Jigen fight vibes from the sheet in terms of abilities, even if just nudges.
    One of your trademarks are to take just sidenotes of history and make them such creative NPs like this armor here or the skeleton of that one roman a while ago (i am so not good with names). I wonder if IM is perhaps a little too low for someone like him
    cool work as always royd
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    Quote Originally Posted by DelRey View Post
    The new rework contest will have broad themes to hit as many possible sheets to remake as possible. Like Knight/Cavalry/Extra Class or region, stuff like that.
    It is really for the creators who have sheets. Tho perhaps the option to remake canon ones is a decent additiin if one has no servants in the category
    well thats usefull in that may servants are multi class qualifying servants and that i also take each class into account so could i example wise make a Shappur II as Gatekeeper .
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    Quote Originally Posted by DelRey View Post
    almost forgot to read royds sheet!
    i somehow get Big Mom from OP vibes and Naruto vs. Jigen fight vibes from the sheet in terms of abilities, even if just nudges.
    One of your trademarks are to take just sidenotes of history and make them such creative NPs like this armor here or the skeleton of that one roman a while ago (i am so not good with names). I wonder if IM is perhaps a little too low for someone like him
    cool work as always royd
    I figured IM's rank would be low since it only warps his mind and not the body. And thanks for the feedback!

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    Servant Lancer:

    Appearance:

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    True Name: Abel

    Alignment: Lawful Good

    Alternate Classes: Rider, Caster, Ruler, Avenger

    Strength- B
    Agility- B
    Endurance- C
    Mana- B
    Luck- D
    NP- B+

    Personality
    A tomboy little sister who adores animals and the outdoors. An airheaded prodigy who excels at every task put before her while remaining oblivious that her own talents are anything extraordinary. Those are the two sides of Lancer. The first of two humans born in the fallen world, a golden child showered in every blessing by God while her brother Cain quietly groaned in envy.

    There is no condescension in her, she approaches everyone with an equal attitude and a radiant smile. Yet that lack of "self-awareness as a prodigy" is exactly what allowed the situation between herself and Cain to spiral into tragedy. If she were to recognize the depth of her brother's twisted feelings, perhaps a mutual understanding could've been reached--- that is her deepest wish and regret.

    As such, while she wears a cheerful face and does her best to approach people equally, deep down Lancer wonders whether her own abilities alienate her from the people she loves.

    As mentioned she has a great love for animals, capable of seeing even giant legendary beasts as adorable. Though that isn't to say Lancer is soft on them. She's perfectly willing to give any beast a bop over the head with her shepherd's crook and firm scolding if she catches them threatening her flock or acting out of line. In this way Lancer is almost like a strict but caring mother to her flock. She is willing to kill them for food and to honor God, as Lancer believes that life and death are part of a single cycle and death isn't evil in itself. She abhors killing that lacks any sentiment or meaning in the act, finding it an insult to the animal and oneself.

    In the modern age Lancer also takes up a fondness for animal plush toys, particularly sheep and goat ones and can often be found snuggling with one.

    Lancer's wish on the Holy Grail is for a chance to reconcile with her brother Cain.

    Likes: pastoral scenery, animals (including stuffed ones), her brother
    Dislikes: being unable to stand on the same level with those she loves, senseless killing
    Talents: shepherding, sacrifice
    Natural Enemy: Cain, her Avenger self


    Class Skills:

    Magic Resistance- B
    Confers protection against magical effects. At this rank spells with a chant below three verses are nullified. Even if targeted by the likes of High Thaumaturgy or Greater Rituals it is difficult for the Servant to be affected. Blessed by God and born in an age when the World itself was thick with magic, Lancer naturally qualifies for a high rank.


    Personal Skills:

    Talented In Every Field- B
    Gifted in everything by God, a natural prodigy (Golden Child). Animal husbandry, piety, rituals, beauty, she displays excellence in all manner of subject. The only drawback of this Skill is that Lancer's overwhelming talent can easily draw jealousy from those around her, not that she's aware of such things...

    Animal Dialogue- A+
    The ability to communicate with animals that don't speak a "language of words". A shepherd in the age where Man and Beast spoke the same primeval language, Lancer was naturally able to reach a mutual understanding with the animals under her care. Even Phantasmal and Divine Beasts can be understood by her, since they would've freely roamed the earth in ancient times. A bonus modifier is applied to conversing with animals of the Sheep-Kind.

    Innocent Monster (Sacrifice)- C
    Called on to perform a sacrifice to God, Lancer butchered her fattest goat and offered it up on the altar without hesitation. Later, she met her end by the very same ritual dagger used in the act at the hands of her jealous brother Cain, becoming a twisted sacrifice of sorts herself. This syncretization results in Lancer ascribing the traits of a goat upon her manifestation as a Servant. Curved goat's horns extend up from the sides of her head, along with an extra pair of fluffy white ears. Lends Monstrous Strength at rank C and usage of her Noble Phantasm
    Azazel
    Sacrifice To Remove The People's Sins
    is only possible on the basis of this connection.

    Natural Body- A
    Possession of a perfect human body from birth. Strength is ranked up, while the body retains its shape regardless of calories ingested. A tomboy used to wrangling many formidable beasts into submission, Lancer boasts an idealized lean and athletic body suitable for one who had to labor off the earth to survive. Further strengthened by the fact she lived in the earliest days of creation and was directly descended from the original Adam and Eve, granting an immaculate constitution devoid of defects.

    This is a digression but--- Cain severely idealized the image of Lancer in his memory after her death, regarding her as a delicate flower too pure for the sinful earth and forgetting her tomboyish streak. If they were to reunite in a Grail War Cain would likely be shocked to see his gentle and innocent-looking little sister wrestle a giant beast into submission barehanded. Turns out a rank-up to Strength isn't just for show.


    Noble Phantasms
    Azazel
    Sacrifice To Remove The People's Sins


    Rank: C+

    Type: Support/Anti-Army

    A Noble Phantasm crystallizing Lancer's act of sacrificing her finest goat to God. Due to the manner of her death it's been conflated with the "Azazel" ritual where a goat was symbolically designated as the vessel for all the people's sins and sacrificed to purify them. Lancer herself was a scapegoat to appease the jealousy of her brother Cain.

    Subsuming her role as a scapegoat this Noble Phantasm allows Lancer to absorb "sins" (evil thoughts/intentions) from humans in her vicinity and convert them into magical power. Those affected feel temporarily calm and at peace as their sins are lifted. Conversely this process is painful for Lancer as she takes on the strain of the accumulated sins in her body. Visually reddish-black runic markings spread jaggedly across Lancer's skin during the act.

    By invoking this Noble Phantasm's true name, Lancer expels the collected sin in the form of a black beam of energy from her shepherd's crook. Being the condensation of humanity's base and fallen nature this beam is the antithesis of Servants with the Divinity Skill, searing them with the sins of man. It deals greater damage and is capable of temporarily stripping the Divinity from those who possess it. Landscapes hit by the beam are left blighted and barren, so Lancer usually makes sure to fire it off into the air to mitigate collateral damage.

    This Noble Phantasm also means that other attacks utilizing "sin" like certain curses are unable to properly damage Lancer, as they're merely absorbed and converted into power.


    Behemah Radah She'vet
    Rod Of Beast Dominion


    Rank: B+

    Type: Anti-Unit/Anti-Animal

    The humble shepherd's crook Lancer carries, carved from the wood of an ancient tree in an age when the World itself was young. Belying its rustic appearance the crook's superior construction allows her to repurpose it as a spear to defend herself in a pinch. In Lancer's words most enemies she faces aren't as dangerous as the wild beasts she had to tame as part of her everyday life as a shepherd. But this Noble Phantasm's true power lies in its purpose as a symbol of man's custodianship over the animal kingdom.

    Carrying her own role as humanity's first shepherd and her father Adam's original authority over all the beasts of the world, a single hit from it boasts the power to pacify even the most ferocious monsters. Simply bopping the misbehaving beast on the head evokes a powerful mental interference effect that suppresses hostility. From there Lancer can usually go the rest of the way to reach a rough mutual understanding with her Animal Dialogue Skill. Even Phantasmal and Divine Beasts can be affected, though it may take multiple hits for more powerful ones. This Noble Phantasm can even sever and hijack the connection between other Heroic Spirits and their mounts, though in that case the effects usually only last for a short time.

    As a tool for pacification rather than violence, the shepherd's crook is also conceptually unable to deal lethal blows against non-human targets.

    Towards human opponents this Noble Phantasm has no effect beyond being an ordinary shepherd's crook that's exceptionally well-made and durable. However for those with bestial attributes (including ironically Lancer herself) each strike does impart a minor mental interference making them more liable to hear out what Lancer has to say.





    This'll probably be the last sheet I post up here in a while. Figured that after making five different write-ups of Cain (counting remake) I might as well try another version of his sister so she's not stuck as a perpetual edgelady. At first I struggled with the idea of writing a non-corrupted Abel as a Servant since I figured she'd be too much of a one-dimensional "perfect person" whose mainly interesting in how those around react to her (like Cain's both admiration and jealousy). But I feel I managed to flesh her out enough to be interesting in her own right. This is another case where the FC kinda' shaped my image of her character.

    As usual comments and critiques would be welcome. Thanks for reading y'all!

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    Great sheet Royd! It's got a good set of skills that make sense, the faceclaim is great, and the noble phantasms are quite good. Overall I like it.
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    Ascension 1
    The world’s greatest con artist and his apprentice have arrived!
    Hm? Mr. Satan, you’re here aren’t you? Come out~ don’t be sh—YYYAAA IT HURTS!!!
    ...Huff…hah... Ahem. Please excuse my rude companion.
    Now, now, without further ado, let the fun begin!



    Jack bought a magic bean from the devil.
    He planted it, and it grew so high it reached Heaven.
    Jack, hoping to go to Heaven, climbed the beanstalk.
    But what he found in Heaven were not angels, but demons.
    Jack tricked the demons with the promise of his soul.
    In return, he took all the treasures of Heaven all for himself.
    Jack, as he returned to Earth, burned the beanstalk.
    The fire spreads to Heaven, and it turns into Hell.
    Jack laughs as the demons fell down to Earth and died.



    —And that’s how this Jack the Great became what he is today!
    The modern Robin Hood, robbing the rich, powerful and evil.
    And taking all their stuff for the needy, that is—myself!
    Fearless, smart, virtuous, and more importantly, handsome! What a lad, eh?
    Now, now, the devilish fellow over here got jealous you see, by my brilliance, that is.
    So he came all the way from hell, to see me! Aww~ How sweet of him.
    Naturally, as his former business partner I greeted him as old friends do.
    We went to grab a few ale, talking about the old days and stuff.
    But alas, because I was so eager to drink with him, I forgot to bring a single penny!
    Fortunately for me, my buddy Satan is a kind person, so he turned himself into a coin!
    Most amusing incident I’ve ever witnessed. But I just couldn’t help it, you know.
    Ouch! Ow! Lucifer, it was just a prank, don’t be so angr—yyYAAAAaa



    Class: Assassin
    True Name: Stingy Jack
    Gender: Male
    Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
    Origin: Irish Folklore, British Folklore
    Attribute: Man

    A trickster operating in the British Isles whose legendary deeds gave birth to a series of legends and fairy tales and nursery rhymes called the “Jack tales”. His real identity...?

    Parameters:
    STR: C
    END: D
    AGI: A
    MGI: C
    LCK: EX
    NP: B

    Class Skills:
    Presence Concealment: A
    The ability to hide one’s presence as a Servant. Can remain undetected, all the while he robs you of all valuables faster than you can say Jack Robisnon.

    Personal Skills:
    Jack of All Trades: A+
    A jumble of various superficial knowledge that grants access to a wide range of low-ranking mundane skills. It’s mostly useless in combat, but this Skill shines the most when Assassin is conning people into thinking that he’s some sort of genius.

    He’s not quite a Master of None, however. For some reason, though he lives off deceiving people, his official job is a blacksmith and artisan. In this particular trade, Assassin can be considered top-class, so his Item Creation is quite high.

    Devil’s Gambit (False): A++
    The ability to trick people, so that every action they take will bring about a desired result. The confidence artist’s bread and butter, accomplished through sharp precognition, refined seventh sense, and sheer awesomeness, so Assassin claims. But his apparent pride in this skill is without testament, as Assassin is perfectly capable of outwitting even the devil himself.

    Scapegoat: E
    A set of skills to escape the battlefield alive. However, because Assassin absolutely hates putting blame meant for himself onto others, its effectiveness is severely limited. Perhaps this skill serves some other purpose.

    Noble Phantasms:
    Devil Coin
    Morning Star, Abide The World’s Greed
    Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
    Rank: B
    The Devil himself, in his all too convenient coin form.
    The reenactment of the most devious trick of all time (according to Assassin himself), the feat of deceiving the Great Deceiver Satan. A Noble Phantasm that utilizes the poor Lucifer as a super limited and devilishly stingy wish-granting device, a Holy Grail of sorts. In short, it is a one-time-use infinite money generator. Well, it’s not exactly infinite, but it’s enough to make a one-time purchase of anything on Heaven and Earth regardless of price.

    Surely enough, it comes with a price after all. After using this Noble Phantasm, the Devil being the universe’s biggest jerk he is, will activate the curse put upon Assassin’s Saint Graph since his summoning, forcibly and completely transforming him into an Avenger-class Servant—



    Ascension 2
    Ah… It’s that time of the year again --Trick or Treat, eh?
    Come, lost souls, gather under the light of hellfire.
    Once again, let’s show the world a bloody trick they’ll never forget.





    At the gate of Hell, an Angel was posted to oversee the entry of men.
    He asks the same question to the people arriving there: “For what sin you’re here for?”
    Everytime, he also got the same answer: “To carry the sins of others.”
    These are the souls blamed for crimes they didn’t commit, and nonetheless, enter hell.
    The Angel at first sympathizes with them, he pitied them. His heart cries for them.
    But still, he thought, this is the will of God, he trusts that God is just. There must be a reason.
    So he continued to let innocent souls enter hell and be punished for eternity.



    One day, secretly, the Angel began to cleanse the damned souls of their sins.
    At the very least, their punishments will be less, so the Angel thought.
    However, nothing has changed. The damned souls still receive the same amount of punishment.
    But the Angel did not give up, he continued to wash away the sins of men, even if meaningless.
    Eventually, something broke within the Angel. And for the first time in eternity he stood up.
    “—Even if it’s just a few individuals, let me save those innocent souls from hellfire.”
    The Angel already knew; he had no right or ability to wash away sins of humanity.
    All he did all this time was just transferring the sins of those people into himself.
    Thus, the Angel descends into Earth, seeking retribution for the sake of the accused souls.



    Ah, you misunderstood, this story doesn’t have anything to do with this me.
    I am not Angel, nor am I anything that can be called a Hero. I’m just a murderer.
    The women I killed, you see, they are not my victims.
    Though I directly killed them, I did not cause their death.
    They are the damned souls that are forced to carry the sins of the city.
    The sorry wenches that are so conveniently blamed for the ills of London.
    That’s why I killed them. So that I can take those sins, those curses away.
    So that at least, their souls can be at ease.
    Just like them, you see, I am also a damned soul.
    Unfit for Heaven and denied from Hell, I am left to wander the Earth for eternity—



    Class: Avenger
    True Name: Jack the Ripper
    Gender: Male
    Alignment: Chaotic Evil
    Origin: Irish Folklore, British Folklore
    Attribute: Earth

    A composite Servant, formed of two Wraiths; Jack the Ripper, the world infamous Whitechapel murderer, and Jack-o’Lantern, the spirit of Halloween, formerly the Stingy Jack. At least, that’s what he claimed to be.

    Parameters:
    STR: A
    END: C
    AGI: B
    MGI: B
    LCK: EX
    NP: A

    Class Skills:
    Avenger: A
    The seven deadly sins converge as if a whirlwind, and all negative emotions are turned into strength.

    Oblivion Correction: C
    The restless soul has nowhere to go, but he also carries with him a profound hatred that will not be forgotten as long as he still wanders the Earth.

    Mana Replenishment: C
    Until retribution is served, magical energy will continue to pour forth from the cauldron of malice like sweet sugar.

    Personal Skills:
    Aptitude for Slaughter (Tricks): A+
    A natural talent to kill, a skill where tricks and deceits employed will deal bonus damage against humans. Even what seems to be harmless pranks will have a high chance of killing people. Very unsuitable for a Halloween party, extra caution is advised.

    Perhaps it is a vestige of his past life as a craftsmen, but the tools and weapons Avenger creates also receives similar effects that makes all things he makes become fitting instruments of murder.

    Devil’s Temptation: A++
    A side effect of the hellfire lantern Avenger carries. The cold light of the netherworld will inevitably attract lost souls, stray spirits, mischievous demons, and curious humans, like moths to a flame. In essence, it’s a bright magical lighthouse that makes Avenger’s presence both harder and easier to detect. It’s easier because, well, it’s a giant “I’m here” sign, but it’s also harder because all the gathering entities somewhat obscures Avenger’s own presence.

    In addition, the lantern can also produce pumpkin candies. From where? Who made them? Perhaps it’s just Satan’s Halloween gifts. Dispose immediately. Do not accept if possible. Do not consume under any circumstances.

    Scapegoat: C
    A set of skills to escape the battlefield alive... or is it? For Avenger it has a somewhat opposite effect. The Whitechapel murderer who got away undetected from murders by pinning the blame to the world itself surely should be able to exercise this skill to perfection but—

    Noble Phantasms:
    From Hell
    Hellfire, Burn The World’s Desire
    Type: Anti-Army, Anti-Unit
    Rank: C ~ A+
    A heartwarming gift from the generous Satan himself.
    An ember of hellfire, burning hotter than the sun, encased in a pumpkin shell. In other words, a Jack-o’-Lantern. A Noble Phantasm bearing a sliver of Lucifer’s Authority over Hell. In particular, it is a Noble Phantasm that recreates Hell’s purpose as “something that burns away sinners”.

    In its original form as a Lantern, it can be used as an Anti-Army Noble Phantasm capable of burning anything exposed to its light. However, its damage and rank is also greatly diminished. To maximize its potential, Avenger can customize the form of this Noble Phantasm through the vestiges of his life as a blacksmith, the Hellfire Lantern can be transformed into various weapons. One of the most effective ways to use this Noble Phantasm is the handgun form. By firing the hellfire ember directly into the heart of sinners, their sin will act as gunpowder, and it creates an explosion whose size is determined by the weight of the target’s sin.

    Of course, there’s no one in the world that bears more sin than Avenger himself, and so, using this Noble Phantasm on himself will—



    Ascension 3
    Sorry to keep you waiting. Now~ let’s not waste any time and get to business, shall we?
    As I have promised, I shall grant any of your wishes. I shall fulfill your every desire.
    In return? No, no, I don’t need your soul. Give that wretched thing to Satan instead.
    The only thing I need of you is, yes—your dark sins, hand it over.





    Long, long time ago, Archangel Azazel was known as the most beautiful of the angels.
    His glorious wings covered the heaven as if jeweled ornaments.
    The Archangel loathed the ugly desires that lurk within humanity from the bottom of his heart.
    From desire begets sin, and from sin begets evil.
    The proud Archangel could not accept such a glaring defect in the supposedly perfect world God has created.
    The Archangel swore to eradicate humans of their desire, their sin, and so he declared war upon all humanity.
    Gathering other angels who shared his belief under his cause, Azazel departed from Heaven and descended upon Earth.



    What was my former self like I wonder?
    I cannot even remember it anymore.
    The naive and prideful Archangel has been long dead.
    What remains is this greedy and lustful thing, writhing at the shadow of the world.
    You know, it turns out sin is such a wonderful thing.
    It drowns even the purest spirit into a bottomless spiral.
    It turns all faith and perseverance into foam bubbles, vulnerable to a single blow.
    So, I formally invite you, Master—
    Let us all fall into depravity, let us exile ourselves from heaven, let us revel in sin.

    Pfft. Look at you, all dumbfounded.
    Don’t worry~ I was just testing you. Hehe~



    Be as it may, not all humans are proud of their desire.
    Some may seek atonement and repentance from their sins.
    But sin is not something that humans can just wash away and absolve as they please.
    The foul mud called sin is a curse that will remain in the human soul until the Day of Judgement.
    So in order to purify this curse, to take away this sin from humanity, a sacrifice is needed.
    Thus humanity has designated among themselves a sacrifice to carry all their sins—a Scapegoat.
    Azazel smiles as the scapegoats offered to him arrive, carrying with them all the world’s sin.



    Even now, he still hates the dreadful sin humanity produces from the bottom of his heart.
    Not even the weight of all the world’s sin makes him tremble one bit.
    As he witnessed the strength and resolve and faith of this human, he fondly reminisced.
    “Such a nostalgic memory. I resisted for quite some time too.”
    As the human finally succumbs to sin, for a moment the fallen angel sheds a tear.
    “This is why I absolutely loathe humanity.
    Just you wait, damned Satanael, coward Raphael!
    I will purge all humanity before they even reach Heaven or Hell!”

    ...Just kidding.
    Maybe...



    Class: Pretender
    True Name: Azazel
    Alias: Jack Azazel
    Gender: Male
    Alignment: Lawful Evil
    Origin: Old Testament, Book of Enoch
    Attribute: Heaven

    In the end, is this Azazel merely a ruthless devil or is there still a glimpse of that pure angel within his soul? Again, not even he himself can tell. Exiled from heaven and barred from Hell, Azazel was left to wander between good and evil—and he had yet to find his own answer.

    Thus, the angel/devil put on a role, not as Servants of God, not as Accomplice of Satan, but as a Scapegoat. Bearing sin and committing evil against humanity, but also absolving humans of their evils and sins. Such is this Pretender.

    Parameters:
    STR: A
    END: B
    AGI: A
    MGI: A
    LCK: E
    NP: A+

    Class Skills:
    Anti-Human Order: A
    A skill originally possessed by the Evils of Humanity. An ability that puts everything humans created as well as the laws that support their continued existence to a grinding halt. An imposing demand that directs the human mind to stop reflecting on themselves, and put blame of their evils to a single entity, Azazel himself.

    Humans produce filth they cannot wash away on their own. Like maggots they defile God’s masterpiece, this Earth. So Azazel has taken it to himself to cleanse it, to collect all those impurities and drown humanity in a Great Flood made of their own sins.

    In a way, he had already accomplished this once, but it seems that humans have once again accumulated too much impurities. This time, Azazel will make sure that there will be no more Noah’s Ark to save humanity. Or so he hopes.

    Personal Skills:
    Teacher of the Forbidden Arts: A+
    Ruinous knowledge the rebellious Angels brought down to Earth and taught to humans. Azazel, being the most knowledgeable among them, bestowed the knowledge of “weapon creation” to men, and “ornament creation'' to women. Azazel is capable of creating any and all weaponry human forges for their self-destruction, and can make any and all ornaments and tools human crafts in their self-deception.

    Fallen Angel: A++
    The mark of Satanael, the privilege given to the Fallen Angels to deceive and corrupt any and all creatures just as the Great Deceiver himself can. The regiment of Angels Azazel led that descended upon Earth were not originally corrupt nor rebellious. It was Satan’s scheme that caused their downfall and ruin. One by one, the angels succumbed to desire. One by one, the Angel’s pure white feathers are dyed with the crimson of sin.

    Azazel resisted his corruption for the longest time among the Fallen Angels. But as they say, the higher they rise, the more painful their fall, and as Azazel inevitably succumbs to Satan’s whispers, the degree of corruption and the deceiving power that comes with it can be said to rival Satanael himself.

    Scapegoat: EX
    A sacrificial lamb that is made to bear all the filth and impurities of the world. A skill that allows Azazel to freely transfer and accumulate curses into himself and transform these curses into grail mud, that is, the thing humans call “sin”. This skill allows Azazel to freely manipulate these sins, these vile muds, as weapons to acquire even more sins. Collecting filth, after all, such is the true purpose of his existence, one that God has assigned him after his Fall.

    Noble Phantasms:
    Dudael
    To Him Ascribe All Sin
    Type: Anti-Sin
    Rank: EX
    The Cauldron of God. In other words, the Holy Grail.
    The prison that even now contains the Angel/Devil Azazel. A vessel that collects sins, that collects the vile excess of humanity. Put crudely, it is the World’s sewage system. A place even Satan would find distasteful. For Azazel the Archangel who values beauty and upholds cleanliness, it is an absolute horror, a nightmare, his own personalized Hell. For Azazel the Devil who revels in desire and sin, it can be called Heaven.

    As Dudael continues to accumulate All the World’s Sin, there will be a time that it will exceed its capacity. This Noble Phantasm’s true purpose is to convert all these sins, to purify all these filth, into cleansing holy water that will flood the whole World and cleanse it of all remaining filth and sins.

    At the depth of this prison of endless darkness, the sleeping Azazel dreams.
    Of walking the Earth as a benevolent devil, deceiving wicked humans and committing evil in the name of justice.
    Of wandering the Earth as a merciless angel, relieving humans of their suffering and committing good in the guise of evil.
    The Holy Grail hears of this dream, this quiet prayer, and it silently grants his wish.
    So Azazel pretends—


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    My original submission to the contest. But not actually sure if it fits the prompt, or if it's even allowed to have a 3-in-1 Servant that's actually just one Servant. I'm quite proud of this one so please leave your comments, thoughts, etc.
    Last edited by Kamera; October 21st, 2021 at 09:41 AM.

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    Kamerad, i didnt read it yet, but i saw the structure and the last class
    Having basically two sheets in one is nowadays pretty common here, before with Faker, now with the Pretender surge. Having three is rare, but nothing which would disqualify when it is clear they are one.
    As long as that guy is focussing in some form of art, be in mind or Action, it is a valid entry and i give my blessing to post it in the contest
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