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    can somebody recommend me some Non Egypt African indigenous deities that could work as servants ? i have noticed that i would atleast need three african Divine spirit servants ?
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    I mean, there is the obvious choices of Anansi and the various other characters in his stories.

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    Alternate Classes: Rider, Berserker, Assassin
    True Name: Linnormr (Moon Cell)
    Alignment: Chaotic Evil
    Origin: Norse Mythology
    Armament: Fangs, tail, poison

    Parameters:
    STR: E~A++
    END: D~EX
    AGI: A
    MANA: B
    LUCK: D
    NP: B

    Skills
    Class Skills

    Avenger - Rank A+: A Class Skill of the Avenger class, representing the state of an Avenger as one that gathers people's hatreds and grudges onto oneself. It is easier for one to accumulate hatred and resentment. The rate of mana generation becomes higher when receiving damage.
    In addition to increased mana regeneration, Avenger gains experience from receiving damage. Avenger is a resentful creature at heart, hating beyond reason those that cast him to the seas. By extension, this hatred extends to those they shepherded, who conversely hate and fear Avenger.

    Memory Correction - Rank B+: A Class Skill of the Avenger class. People are creatures that forget many things, but an Avenger never forgets. The critical effect of Avengers who attack from beyond one's memory is strengthened.
    Hatred that will never be forgotten. Lying in wait in the sea, the serpent plotted its vengeance. As long as Avenger’s True Name is unknown to the target, the critical effect is further increased.

    Self-Replenishment (Mana) - Rank C: A Class Skill of the Avenger class. One's magical energy endlessly surges until their revenge is accomplished. Recovers a minuscule amount of magical energy every turn.
    Survival by any means necessary until revenge is accomplished. That is Avenger’s way of life.

    Personal Skills

    Animal Communication - Rank D: Communication of intention with animals that do not speak a "language of words". Since it's not like the intellect of the animals improves, very complex nuances are not conveyed.
    As an animal, Avenger should be fully capable of communicating with and even commanding other animals. However, his early years of isolation have severely hampered this Skill’s effectiveness.

    God-Slayer - Rank A+: A Skill marking one as the slayer of divine beings. This Skill is super effective against Divine Spirits.
    A 'plus' modifier is gained when attacking Divine Spirits, wraiths, and Servants with the Divinity Skill. Avenger is the sole rival of the Barbarian Thunder God, mightiest of the Norse Gods. As such, there are few that are his equal.

    Experience Point Bonus - Rank –: A Skill that allows one to gain a bonus percentage of experience points after a battle in the system of the Moon Cell Holy Grail War.
    A corrupted version of the ordinary Skill. Though still granting bonus experience points, all data from experience is instead added directly to Avenger’s file size. As such, though he does not grow more skilled, his power increases constantly. Naturally, this increase is exponential in nature, owing to Avenger likely being able to take down tougher and tougher opponents while still remaining at ‘level 1’.

    Area Crushing - Rank EX: An attack from a giant Saint Graph fully operating, just by swinging, treats not "an individual enemy", but "the territory" as a target.
    Though Avenger’s size is normally compressed, he can momentarily reach his current full size, crushing the area around him. When used once he has grown in size, Area Crushing is literally able to crash the surrounding environment via momentary data overload.

    Noble Phantasm

    Girdle of the Moon
    Moon Cell Serpent

    Anti-World, Rank EX
    Avenger’s primary Noble Phantasm, which has been altered by his manifestation within Moon Cell. As a serpent that coils around the world, it is an expression of Avenger’s size and power. Just because the world which he has been summoned to is different from the one where he lived changes nothing. Moon Cell Serpent acts as a theoretical limit to Avenger’s growth, maxing out at being able to wind his body around the entirety of Moon Cell.
    However, as this is his ‘proper size’, Avenger can activate Moon Cell Serpent to make this potential into a reality. The data of the surrounding environment is slaved to Avenger’s control and moves to form a physical body. This achieves both the momentary destruction of surrounding areas as well as the formation of a simulation of Avenger’s true body. The larger Avenger’s current size, the greater the size of the simulation. Damage received by Moon Cell Serpent’s simulated body also has no impact on Avenger himself, giving this Noble Phantasm both offensive and defensive qualities. In theory, Avenger at his maximum size could subsume and destroy the Moon Cell’s simulation by activating Moon Cell Serpent. However, this is unlikely to actually occur.
    Due to compression of his size being a necessity for the sake of handling his data, Avenger has also been granted the ability to compress himself to a far more manageable size. Though this minimum size also increases over time, it usually amounts to the size of a natural serpent.

    Nine Steps the Hero Takes
    Níu Skref

    Anti-Army, Rank A++
    Though originally an Anti-Unit Noble Phantasm, Avenger’s current manifestation has changed its designation into an Anti-Army Noble Phantasm. It is the quality of a Dragon’s Breath, owing to Avenger’s nigh-forgotten status as a wingless dragon. As a member of Dragon kind, the attribute of Avenger’s breath is ‘Poison’. Simply through the act of breathing out, Avenger spreads a toxic miasma around himself.
    With a full activation, Avenger takes a deep breath, infusing the air within his lungs with magical energy. With a roar, Avenger then unleashes a cascade of poison at his targets. Those not slain in an instant by the poisonous storm of magical energy find their bodies failing them. Avenger’s poison corrupts targeted data on immediate contact, requiring it to be excised and destroyed in order for the affliction to be healed. In addition to heavy persistent poison damage, a target’s Skills are sealed for as long as the poison remains within them, under the principles of data poisoning.
    Worst of all, Avenger’s poison also corrupts data environments. This can cause entities seeking to purge the afflicted data to attack individual targets as well.

    Description
    Likes: Warmth, showing off his power
    Dislikes: The Norse gods, being handled
    Talents: Growth spurt, swimming
    Natural Enemy: Thor

    Avenger’s true identity is Linnormr, the King of Serpents, though this is merely a kenning. His True Name is Jörmungandr, the Midgard Serpent. He has been summoned under the workings of the Moon Cell Holy Grail War System.

    Though Jörmungandr is manifested as an Avenger, he does not exactly cut a threatening figure. The shape he is summoned in, being his most compressed size, is that of a small viper. Despite this harmless appearance, his ego is that of his prime, claiming himself to be the son and slayer of gods. This comes with a temper to match, and he is prone to sulking if disrespected. Jörmungandr appears to go out of his way to make seemingly unprovable claims of his mighty power. This seems to be due to a sense of mischief inherited from his father, as he loves the shock on the faces of others as he unleashes his true form.
    This is not to say that Jörmungandr is friendly, however. Jörmungandr is still an Avenger at his core, boiling with hatred towards the gods and all they care for. He views most others as either something to destroy or a meal to eat - as such, coming to a mutual understanding is difficult. His Master is the sole exception, as they sustain him with their magical energy. It is unknown, however, whether this simply means that Jörmungandr sees them as a long-time source of food or an actual ally.
    Jörmungandr despises those that have the qualities of a Divine Spirit, no matter how dwindling. He bears a particular enmity towards those that carry the blood of the Norse Gods. Outside of this, he acts with general malice toward his foes. Unlike certain other Avengers, Jörmungandr cannot gain respect towards those that stand against him, instead growing angered at their presumptuousness. As he was the rival of the strongest of gods, how could anyone lesser hope to withstand him? However, there may be some individuals among Heroic Spirits that could strike a favorable relationship with him, chief among them the members of his family.
    Other than the fact that Jörmungandr does not consider his Master an outright target, he should not possess any particular care for them. However, he greatly enjoys the warmth denied to him for the entirety of his life, and as such sticks close to his Master for their body heat. He insists this is only due to not having fresh corpses and blood to derive warmth from, and is prone to reacting violently if questioned on this. If left to his own devices and provided with magical energy and comfort, Jörmungandr can be trusted to act as one’s Servant, though one that is to be handled carefully.
    Jörmungandr’s wish, despite his being an Avenger, is to be allowed that which was robbed from him in the past: a home and a family.

    Lore
    In Norse mythology, the serpent Jörmungandr was the child of Loki, the God of Mischief, and the giantess Angrboda. Though born in the halls of the gods, he was cast out into the ocean by the hand of Odin, who foresaw the destruction the serpent would come to cause in the future. Surviving in the cold, unknown deeps made Jörmungandr a vicious beast. Thinking only of vengeance and survival, the serpent clung to life out of spite towards the gods. Growing even faster than his sibling Fenrir, Jörmungandr grew to an overwhelming size, being able to wind his body across the world and back again. As such, he became known as the Midgard Serpent.
    He would eventually become the rival of Thor, the god of thunder and strongest of the Aesir. This rivalry stemmed from Thor’s fishing trip with the giant Hymir. Ignoring Hymir’s warnings, Thor rowed out into the open sea and cast his line, using the head of an ox as bait. Taking the bait, Jörmungandr snapped on and was pulled above the surface. The pain of the hook was the first Jörmungandr had ever felt, and both parties developed an instant hatred for one another. The confrontation was stopped once Hymir cut Thor’s line. The two later met in Jötunheim, where Thor was given the task of lifting the giant king Utgarda-Loki’s cat from the floor. Unbeknownst to Thor, this was Jörmungandr in a magical disguise, having at Utgarda-Loki’s offer of humiliating the gods.
    Their final meeting came at Ragnarök, and ended with the deaths of both rivals. Jörmungandr died from the blows of Thor’s hammer, but the god died from the serpent’s poison, taking nine victorious steps before succumbing.

    Notes
    Though I did at one point say I wouldn't make other versions of Servants I'd already made, I felt I'd done the earlier Jörmungandr wrong. So there's this one instead. Besides, its the Moon Cell version, which is completely different, right? Also this one runs on nonsense and cyberbabble.
    This would technically be Jörmungandr Lily, though, as it is his young version.
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    ... could you seriously not find a better fc than what seems to be vore porn-tier art
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    Given that he's supposed to look relatively harmless in that picture, not really. I'm open to suggestions, of course.

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    "Man’s practice, repeating itself a thousand million times, becomes consolidated in man’s consciousness by figures of logic."

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    not snek

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    Assassin of Gevaudan

    "Grrr..."



    Class: Assassin
    Alignment: Chaotic/Evil
    Region: France
    Height: 200cm
    Weight: 150kg
    Likes: Meat, predating, moonlight
    Dislikes: sunlight, people, the sound of gunshot
    Talent: predating
    Armaments: Claws, fangs
    Natural Enemy: Hunters

    stats

    Str: C
    End: C
    Agi: B
    Mna: C
    Lck: C
    NP: B

    Skills


    class skills

    Presence Concealment(C): The capacity to hide one's presence as a Servant. It is a common Class Skill of the Assassin class. Suitable for spying. The rank of Presence Concealment drops considerably when preparing to attack.

    personal skills

    Innocent Monster(A): An attribute possessed by Servants whose history and existence have been distorted by the monstrous reputations they accrued across the course of their life and thereafter. Once a regular animal, the legends surrounding Assasin have elevated his existence to that of a Phantasmal beast.

    Animal Dialogue(A): Because the Assassin is an animal, it is possible for him to command life forms of lower rank than him, excluding humans.

    Aptitude for Slaughter(C): As a natural predator of humanity, Assassin gains a plus modifier to attacks made against humans.

    Monstrous Strength(B): A Skill possessed by monsters and beasts, it temporarily grants a rank-up to one's Strength parameter for a time limit determined by the ranking of this Skill.



    Noble phantasm


    The Beast of Gevaudan
    La Bête du Gévaudan

    rank: Anti-Unit(self), Anti-Unit, B

    Assassin's nature as a Phantasmal beast and his mysterious legend has manifested into this continuously active Noble Phantasm. It takes the form of a shadowy mist that surrounds Assassin at all times.
    Its major effect is completely blocking all damage from weapon attacks made against Assassin, with the exception of those rank B or above or those carrying some form of Divinity. it also makes it hard to distinguish his shape and movements, which helps to hide his identity and may lead to openings against easily confused enemies.
    The Noble Phantasm also has a Name activation effect, where Assassin disperses the most around him, having it form dark silhouettes of Beasts similar to himself advance the enemy. This is a coordinated attack with very few flaws and can be unleashed to finish off cornered enemies, but must be used carefully since Assassin is unprotected during its duration.



    Background


    Assassin is known as The Beast of Gevaudan, a man-eating animal or animals which terrorized the former province of Gévaudan (consisting of the modern-day département of Lozère and part of Haute-Loire), in the Margeride Mountains of south-central France between 1764 and 1767. The attacks, which covered an area spanning 90 by 80 kilometers (56 by 50 mi), were said to have been committed by one or more beasts with formidable teeth and immense tails, according to contemporary eyewitnesses. Most descriptions from the period identify the beast like a wolf, dog, or wolf-dog hybrid.
    Victims were often killed by having their throats torn out. The Kingdom of France used a considerable amount of money and manpower to hunt the animals responsible, including the resources of several nobles, soldiers, royal huntsmen, and civilians. The number of victims differs according to the source. A 1987 study estimated there had been 210 attacks, resulting in 113 deaths and 49 injuries; 98 of the victims killed were partly eaten. Other sources claim the animal or animals killed between 60 and 100 adults and children and injured more than 30. Assassin was reported killed several times before the attacks finally stopped.
    Legends of the beast as a werewolf became very popular, and it's purported immunity to gunshots is one of the origins of the myth that Werewolves can only be killed by silver bullets. However, Assassin was simply a slightly more clever, but otherwise normal animal just doing what it had to survive.



    personality


    As an animal, Assassin will act mostly by instinct. His priorities will be finding sustenance and dealing with potential competition. He will be naturally drawn to other Servants, having them as primary targets, but will also attack normal humans as he sees fit.
    However, since he does have a degree of intelligence and knows that exaggerated and unnecessary slaughter will attract attention and most likely lead to persecution. Because of that, Assassin will most likely lay low and only appear sporadically when he feels the situation is favorable. He also is capable of feeling and understanding his bond with his Master, meaning he most likely will not attack unless provoked, but one should not expect any sort of actual cooperation.



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    Beast of Gevaudan: Given his legend, shouldn't that NP have an exception for silver-based attacks? Other than that the sheet is fine, though a little generic.

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    Silver is a natural evil repellent, which means it is counted as a "sort of divinity" in my mind.
    I wonder what could I do to spice this sheet up, there is not much else to his legend left unused.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Kabalisto Koga View Post
    can somebody recommend me some Non Egypt African indigenous deities that could work as servants ? i have noticed that i would atleast need three african Divine spirit servants ?
    Heitsi-eibib is an African trickster, folk hero and god who could be an interesting choice. He's most well known for defeating the monstrous giant Ga-gorib by throwing a rock at the side of its head while it was distracted. Based on that he could have an NP that's an "imperceptible attack" that can't be perceived by any of the five senses and only evaded by instinct or a "sixth sense".

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    Gevaudan: Well there was the whole deal that the total deaths might've been caused by several wolves rather than a single one. Not sure how something like that would work as a Skill, though (I used it as the NP).

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shiki-pon View Post
    Gevaudan: Well there was the whole deal that the total deaths might've been caused by several wolves rather than a single one. Not sure how something like that would work as a Skill, though (I used it as the NP).
    Presumably something like that inspired how he can split off the mist into copies of himself?

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    Oh, right. Probably should've read the description more closely. Was more focused on the Skills.
    ... I guess his range of movement (Gevaudan being a big place and all) could result in some kinda teleportation or fast movement in woodland, but that feels like stretching it.

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    Hmm, I'm trying to work on Lancelot as a Shielder-class servant, since he is technically qualified for the class due to the incident at Dolores Gard. However, I find myself stumped when it comes to figuring out his NPs. Anyone got any tips for it?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Valfodr View Post
    Hmm, I'm trying to work on Lancelot as a Shielder-class servant, since he is technically qualified for the class due to the incident at Dolores Gard. However, I find myself stumped when it comes to figuring out his NPs. Anyone got any tips for it?
    The only thing I can think of is a shield NP with dual effects based on which name of the castle is invoked. As "Joyous Gard" it'd be a shining shield that gives off an aura of good cheer, raising morale of allies and purging mental interference. Invoked as "Dolorous Gard" it'd become a cursed shield emanating an ominous aura that weakens enemies.

    I'm not that familiar with the mythical incident in question though, so apologies if this isn't what you're looking for.

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    Caster of the Shifting Sands

    "Answering the call of destiny, I descend upon you
    with tidings of good fortune! Be confident, dear Master.
    Though my wicked eye reveals great danger on the road ahead,
    with my great and powerful magic, everything you can imagine shall be at our call!"

    Class: Archer
    True Name:
    Alignment: Lawful Good


    Parameters:
    Strength: E
    Endurance: E
    Agility: D
    Mana: EX
    Luck: E
    Noble Phantasm: C+

    Personality:
    Spoiler:
    Verbose and boisterous, Caster is energetic, proud, and eager to stand out from the crowd and entertain others with references to fairy tales and declarations of hidden esoteric knowledge and secret power, all of which is delivered with dramatic and theatrical poses and without a hint of embarrassment or self-reflection. Basically the kind of person whose dreams and hobbies never grew out of middle school, no matter how long they were out of adolescence.

    Caster is without a doubt proud of being a witch and is quick to remind others of that at every turn, until the constant reassurance becomes quite suspect. Really, it’s hard to spend much time together without becoming at least a little suspicious of the veracity of any of these claims...

    Having been in love with theater from an early age, Caster gives the impression of always being in front of an audience or on a stage, and even in a serious situation, it is difficult for this Servant to resist trying to lighten the mood or redirect one’s attention to more fanciful subjects.


    Biography:
    Spoiler:


    “Congratulations, dear Master... You’ve summoned the greatest and most
    powerful witch in the world. Because what else can a Caster be?”

    In reality, to no one’s surprise, Caster is not a true witch of history or legend. Instead, the true identity of this Servant is the author who reinvented witches at the turn of the 20th century, Lyman Frank Baum.

    Born in New York in 1856, L. Frank Baum was the son of a businessman, but he was a dreamy child, starting writing early in life and falling in love with theater in his teens. Attempts to “straighten him out” with military academy failed, with an early discharge due to stress and many instances of severe discipline for daydreaming. As he grew up, he never ceased his adolescent dreams, jumping from various flights of fancy to another, whether it was playwriting or breeding fancy poultry.

    For most of his life, though, Baum struggled with financial success. Though he loved the theater, he experienced only wavering financial success, with a tour of one of his few successful musicals, the Maid of Arran, ending when one of his other dramas caused a fire that destroyed the theater in which it was performed and torching the only known copies of most of his scripts and costumes. The newspaper he edited for went under after a few years. Even when he tried to run a bazaar, it failed and went bankrupt due to his habit of giving out wares on credit to likable but unreliable patrons.

    It wasn’t until his late thirties, when he began to write and publish adaptations of fairy tales, that his career took off. First, a recollection of rewritten Mother Goose prose achieved financial success, and shortly after, he hit it big with the Wizard of Oz.

    Oz was Baum’s attempt to adapt and abridge the stories of Lewis Carroll and European fairy tales of Hans Christian Andersen and the Grimm Brothers, rendering them into an “American” version that lacked what he perceived as boring, heavy-handed moral lessons. Indeed, Baum deliberately cribbed their work, relying on a large library of their books which he devoured and loved to the point he successfully petitioned for them to be legally declared as necessary to his work when they were nearly seized by creditors in bankruptcy.

    Lovingly recreating stories of witches, both good and ill, Baum is one of the fathers of the modern American fairy tale and indelibly painted his mark on witchcraft for generations of children, removing their horror and keeping only the wonder.

    Is it any surprise then that when summoned as a Caster, he sought to present himself not as a besuited man, but as the ideal and cute good witch, worthy of Glinda or Ozma herself? After all, in the stories of Oz, Ozma spent the first two books magically transformed into a boy named Tip, completely unaware of her true identity as the mystical and eternally young princess of the magical kingdom of Oz.

    “It’s just a bit of literary magic reversing the narrative, dear Master!”





    While unquestionably a man in life and when summoned, Baum immediately paints over his Saint Graph to recreate the image of Ozma, portraying himself as an adorable and wise young witch. It is these associations with witchcraft, his dreams of magic, and his association as a member of Miss Helena Blavatsky’s Theosophical Society, that allow him to qualify for the Caster class despite being an “ordinary” author all his life. In fact, some view the Wizard of Oz as a theosophical allegory, drawing on many of the same imagery and symbols.

    But then, Baum drew upon and reinvented so many things that its status as a secret work of theosophy is certainly questionable, no matter what he claims… Right?



    Class Skills:
    Item Creation
    Rank: C
    The Skill to manufacture magical items, from implements of war to items for daily use. Due to the circumstances allowing him to qualify for Caster, the man himself is only able to create items associated with witches and the land of Oz, such as potions, brooms, enchanted footwear, and magical roadways.


    Territory Creation
    Rank: A
    The skill to build a special terrain that is advantageous to oneself as a magus, such as for the purpose of collecting mana. With the help of his Noble Phantasm, Caster can create an Emerald Palace, which is superior to a workshop. In this territory, his Noble Phantasm is in full effect, allowing him a greatly expanded range of conceptual skills - and weaknesses.


    Personal Skills:
    Witchcraft (False)
    Rank: B
    A Skill that signifies one as a practitioner of Witchcraft. This magecraft has roots in both the eastern and western worlds. In the case of Caster, he practices a modern variation of western Witchcraft, relying on both the foundation of traditional witchcraft and the belief of generations of children in the good witches he wrote about.

    In life, although he was a follower of Miss Blavatsky, Caster had no circuits and was never a practicing magus. Thus, this is not a skill derived from life, but a false appropriation of the cultural foundation of western witchcraft for use in spells and as a source of power. As a result, when it comes to witchcraft and blessings, Caster can approximate potent and believable imitations by tapping into this cultural image of the archetypal “good witch.”

    Illusionism (False)
    Rank: D
    A skill that denotes prowess in the art of illusion. However, rather than being based in beguiling magecraft and projection of illusions into reality, this ability is derived from Caster’s theatrical experience and knowledge. Through judicious application of acting, smoke and mirrors, and certain potions and tricks, Caster can manage to create a variety of illusionary effects, including disguising his actual gender.

    Reinvention
    Rank: B
    A skill denoting not the ability to create or improve, but to rearrange or adapt an existing item or idea into something wholly new and different.

    In total, Caster wrote 41 novels besides the Oz series, 83 short stories, many poems, and over 40 play scripts, but it was his work adapting and recombining tropes from Andersen and Grimm to an American audience that won him fame and success unmatched by any of his other stories. The works of Oz were heavily inspired by fairytales and Baum’s goal was to adapt those works and make an American fairytale without the heavy moral lessons of his predecessors.

    As a result, while his ability to innovate spells is meager or average at best, he can take existing spells, foundations, or items and drastically alter them on both a structural and conceptual level. At this level, Caster can adapt almost anything outside of Divine Constructs or higher-ranked Noble Phantasms, creating his own fanciful remakes.

    This skill can also be used on others, allowing him to greatly expand a magus’ foundation and repertoire - albeit through a hellish and galling mishmash of nonsense worthy of Chaos Magic.

    Noble Phantasm:
    The Road to Oz - Wonderful, Marvelous Land of Mystery
    Type: Anti-Army
    Rank: C+
    A Noble Phantasm representing the Emerald Castle of Oz, given form and reproduced through magical energy in a method extremely similar to that used by Reality Marbles, but built atop the current world instead. Rather than a materialization of Caster’s inner world, it is an advanced magecraft that layers the logic of L. Frank Baum’s daydreams over the existing world.

    Borrowing an artificial imitation of the thaumaturgical system of ploys, this Noble Phantasm takes effect in the area Caster designates as his territory, slowly growing in power and potency as it covers the territory with a bounded field representing the “American Fairytale of Oz.” In this space, Caster’s witchcraft is at its zenith, bolstering his fame and increasing the rank of his Witchcraft to A+, rivaling that of the greatest actual witches in legend.

    Furthermore, as the rules of the bounded field are converted to the world of fairy tales, a rule of “Tradition Protection” is gradually instituted, overwriting the normal laws of physics and advancement of technology and denying any sharing of order. In order to harm Caster in this space, magical energy with the same mystery or compliance with the conventions of fairy tales is needed. If it is not a recognized means of defeating a witch, strong power and strong magic will have little effect. Of course, pure water and houses are accepted and documented methods of death.

    The greatest weakness of this Noble Phantasm is that Caster only gains its benefits while within Oz, and should his identity be confirmed, the weaknesses of witches in his narratives can be easily exploited. However, Caster can expand the reach of this Noble Phantasm by building golden roads of enchanted brick that act as branches and corridors extending his power.


    ...Of course, he’ll do his best to paint them another color that’s only gold in the right light, lest he give himself away.

    General Information:
    Height: 148 cm
    Weight: 48kg
    Gender: Male
    Blood Type: Unknown

    Likes: Children, theater, mystery
    Dislikes: The realities of business and finance
    Talents: Adapting others’ work, daydreaming

    Natural Enemy: Hans Christian Andersen
    Image Color: Gold
    Voice: Tamura Yukari

    “...Any similarities to the work of others are coincidental, and please don’t look at my shelves, Mister Andersen.”


    A collection of silly little Saint Graph fragments

    心に抱くその物語
    何を知れば満たされるのだろう?

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    Behold master, for what you see in front of you is not alchemy, but chemistry at its work, electrons ripped from their quantum orbits, giving rise to different elements, to create both poison and medicine from Elements and Minerals alike! To Create Both Acid And Base from harmless chemicals.
    Faceclaim


    Identity: Antoine Laurent de Lavoisier

    Class: Caster

    Alignment, Neutral Good / Neutral Mad

    H/W: 183cm/65kg

    Armament: Jet engine-like Flamethrowers.

    STR: E~A
    END: E~A
    AGI: D~A
    MNA: A
    LCK: C
    NP: A

    Lore
    Revolutionary france.

    Not a good place to find yourself should you happen to have great wealth, however, even though Caster was well-off money wise, he could not care less for politics, for him, politics were just a tool to achieve scientific triumph.
    From his childhood, he was fascinated by the interactions of physical world, noticing that two different elements mixed together in just the right way would give rise to a third element completely different from the previous two.

    to say that he studied chemistry would be a misnomer, he invented the very concept of chemistry, separating it from the semi-magical notions of alchemy. Such is the scale of his achievement that today we would have many forms of medicine and other useful substances were it not for this eccentric french scientist, furthermore he was the first to define the concept of combustion using oxygen, disproving the theory of Phlogistons. But as for himself, history had different plans.

    As he was the owner of a large and wealthy company, he was the target for the revolutionaries. he was found guilty of tax fraud and was sentenced to guillotine, rather than weep and cry at this fate, he requested that the ammount of times he blinked be recorded after decapitation, all in the name of science.


    class skills
    Territory Creation: C+
    Creation of the Laboratory becomes possible, in it, Caster has access to Chemical equipment and Materials needed for creating complex substances, From Flasks, Beakers, to ampules filled with dangerous substances.

    Item Construction: -
    In caster's case, his Item Construction skill has been replaced by a personal Skill


    Personal Skills
    Unparalleled knowledge of Chemical Processes: A+
    Incarnation of Caster's sublime knowledge of Chemistry, as well as the skill that replaces his Item Construction skill, Through activating this skill, Caster receives access to a form of magecraft that allows him to scan surfaces and surrounding, learning their exact chemical composition at a Molecular and Atomic Levels, and also allowing him to command them at will, he can split molecules into individual atoms as well as recombine them, he can even render poison gas type attacks useless by completely restructuring the Molecules into a less dangerous form, or by outright stripping them apart, This skill requires extreme concentration, and he can be caught off-guard at times.

    Mad Enhancement (Scientific): E~A
    A skill representing Caster's natural drive towards experimentation and research, the more something catches his curiosity, the more will this skill drive caster towards attempting anything to find it out, increasing in rank.
    The More it increases, the more his stats, with the exception of luck stat, will rise, Maxing out at A Rank, and his personality will start becoming more ruthless and cold in search of that thing. Caster considers this skill to be a nuisance to others, and thus tries his best to keep it under control.

    Mana Burst (Combustion): A
    A skill similar to Mana Burst (Flame), though the difference is that it does not refer to fire, but the very concept of Combustion itself. His Personal armament works on a basis of a jet engine, Driving massive amount of air, initiating combustion using hydrogen pulled from the environment, and releasing it allows him to send massive heat waves and flames at the opponent, through the use of this skill, the mixture is saturated with large amounts of magical energy, it is possible to turn these heat wave radiation and flames into blasts of superheated plasma capable of melting through anything that stands in its path.


    Noble Phantasm
    The Fire of ultimate scientific triumph
    The Candle of False Phlogiston
    (A+) (Anti-Army)

    Humanity had from its inception known about fire. those who harnessed fire are still unknown to us, yet Caster is the one known for revolutionizing humanity understanding of it, of the glow it gives of and of the fuel it consumes.

    The Candle of False Phlogiston is Exactly that, the purest form of fire to be harnessed by Caster. Extremely Hot, Extremely Pure, Extremely Deadly. but most of all, It's secrets uncovered and understood, ready to be utilized and harnessed by mankind a candle that lights the way for progress of humanity, as energy in its purest form, heat.
    A massive spike of heat around Caster heats up the surrounding and evaporates any moisture, then, all that dry air is sucked into the flamethrower, and upon Caster's incantation of this Noble Phantasm's name, An absolutely humongous surge of magical energy enters his flamethrower units, heating up the air to such a temperature that caster's physical form starts disintegrate slightly, when it reaches its apex, the energy is released as a Massive beam of Pure Flame and Heat, With a temperature equal to the Center of the sun, The flame itself is like a Guided missile that searches and Incinerates anything that can be described as "Corruption" Destroying it both Physically and Conceptually.

    The Downside, as mentioned, is that the Caster himself is not immune to the flame and heat produced by this Noble Phantasm, as it stands, he can barely survive this Noble Phantasm being fired, and upon completion, it is not uncommon to see parts of his body melting, using this noble phantasm is thus, a strictly last ditch effort to obliterate an enemy, It also requires an enormous mana cost to fire it, usually its in a form of a leyline, as no master can physically supply such enormous amounts of Mana.


    CE/Personality/Interactions
    CE: The severed head that still moves:
    A famous story says that in effort to let humanity learn more, that this eccentric scientist asked on the day of his execution that his decapitated head be held up and for it to be recorded how many times it can blink, such was the eccentricity and dedication to science of this man, that even in the hour of his head, he pursued research.

    Master, it is only natural that a scientist use even his own dead body to further science itself. otherwise i would not be able to call myself a scientist.


    Eccentric. There is no better word to describe this man's personality.
    Much like a certain foreigner, there is nothing to his personality but science, though he does not force this knowledge upon others. Instead, he seeks to further his own knowledge on the matter, and through papers and journals, it will naturally spread to all mankind.
    There is an ego present to his personality, he can be condescending at times, even outright egoistical and maniacal in such case where one of his personal skills gets the better of him, though that is rare. he holds a bit of a grudge against alchemist servants, seeing their work as nebulous and illogical, though there are some he respects. He also has a slight tendency to be nonchalant about things, especially in the presence of danger.


    Reactions:
    Galileo Galilei (Alter): Great astronomer of Italy who pursued science even when it clashed against the oppressive practices of the church at the time... Hoo, i can safely say that i passed through a similar thing, having my head chopped of was not a great experience, wait, what do you mean "An Alien god"?

    Karna: A wielder of holy flames of the Indian gods... Unfortunately, Your flame comes not from a deity, but from Oxygen and Heat, admittedly your magical energy makes them a thousand times deadlier than mine, still, they are no match for the brilliant glow of my fire.

    Oda Nobunaga: Another wielder of flames, but this time, they strictly incinerate deities and gods? i admit warlord of the east, you usage of heat might be even more superior than mine, might...

    Marie Antoniette: You majesty, lady Marie, in life, i was distraught to hear about your execution by those foolish revolutionaries, a fate i shared as well. but lets not get caught up in the past, as i did in life, i am ready to serve the royal family with any of my scientific expertise!


    Notes.
    A quick and Dirty sheet i done in order to get rid of the creative impulses thanks to this fucking quarantine for a time, anyways i think Lavoisier here might be a bit... Wanked? then again so are all of my servants, feedback is appreciated but not mandatory.
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    Caster of the Shifting Sands: He's really fun and the chunni stuff seems like a perfect fit for this Servant, but his NP is a bit disappointing. I get that it's not as flashy, but Reinvention B is a more interesting ability that seems to tie with who he is better than just reproducing the castle, even if the NP is an extension of the chunni stuff.

    Lavoisier: I like him but his sheet seems kinda all over the place (mostly because of wording I think).
    - He seem to be all for science in place of magecraft from his quotes, but his first skill uses magecraft.
    - He did away with the theory of the phlogiston but the name of his NP makes it seem like he's using an imitation of it instead of real chemistry.
    - His dedication towards science seem noble and focused on his lore section, but Madness Enhancement paints it as insanity (way more extreme than eccentricity).
    I also don't like the idea of using a variation of the iconic Berserker skill as a Personal Skill, specially since it seems to be completely different. It's not taking away reason but rather, just accentuating his tendency to focus on a certain thing. Seems to me like it's just Single-Mindedness/Concentration but you changed it to also raise his stats so he wouldn't be as weak.
    Hopefully I'm not coming off as too harsh here, I'm only giving feedback because I did like him.

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    Lancer of Springtime

    "Deep Breath, relaxed shoulders, focused mind. I am ready to deal with Master's enemies"



    Class: Lancer
    Alignment: Neutral/Good
    Region: China
    Height: 152cm
    Weight: 45kg
    Likes: Tofu, learning, shy boys
    Dislikes: bullies, unnecessary violence, hard-headed men
    Talent: Fighting
    Armaments: Hands, knives, staff
    Natural Enemy: Li Shuwen

    stats

    Str: C
    End: C
    Agi: A
    Mna: C
    Lck: B
    NP: N/A

    Skills


    class skills

    Magic Resistance(D): Cancels Single-Action spells. Magic Resistance of the same degree of an amulet that rejects magical energy.

    personal skills

    Softness(A) The performance of techniques in a relaxed manner, and by training the physical, mental, breathing, energy and force in a relaxed manner to develop a "soft wholesome force". It protects the user from mental interference and prevents the reduction of the effectiveness of techniques used by Lancer.

    Sensitivity(A): The development of automatic reflexes upon contact and the idea of "sticking" to the opponent. In reality, the intention is not to "stick" to your opponent at all costs, but rather to protect your centerline while simultaneously attacking your opponent's centerline. Basically, it reduces the damage received from physical blows while allowing Lancer to release an unlockable counterattack.

    Chinese Martial Arts(Wing Chun)(A+++): A Chinese rationality. A count of how much one has mastered the martial arts that made becoming one with the universe its objective. The degree of difficulty for learning this is of the highest level and, unlike other Skills, A-Rank is finally at a level one can say to have "learned it". Upon reaching +++, one is an expert among experts.



    Noble phantasm


    Beautiful Springtime Fist
    Wing Chun Kuen

    rank: Anti-unit, N/A

    This is not a true Noble Phantasm, as Lancer lacks one, but is instead the quintessence of her Martial arts style sublimated into a single technique that can be used with her bare hands or with her staff.
    To start, Lancer takes a defensive stance to intercept a movement of the enemy, then she rapidly delivers several blows to the vital striking points down the center of the body; neck, chest, belly and groin. These hits will, beyond dealing great amounts of damage, interfere with the circulation of mana in the target, disabling the use of Skills or Noble Phantasms that are dependent on the body and even causing long term paralysis on the target.
    It is primarily a technique to disable the opponent and as such, doesn't have a high kill potential, unless the enemy is already weak. In a way, one can say that it is the complete antithesis of a "one-hit attack that certainly kills".



    Background


    Lancer is Yim Wing Chun. She is a Chinese legendary character, often cited in Wing Chun legends as the first master of the martial art bearing her name. Wing Chun, though a person's name in the Chinese language, translates literally to "spring chant", or maybe substituted with the character for "eternal spring".
    During the Qing Dynasty, a Shaolin Buddhist nun and abbess, Ng Mui, reportedly fled the destruction of the Shaolin temple at the hands of the government; the temple was believed to be harboring revolutionaries. According to one legend, after being inspired by witnessing a crane and a snake fighting, Ng Mui incorporated their movements into her style of Chinese kung fu to form a new, yet-unnamed martial art system.
    Ng Mui later took on a disciple, that being Lancer, and passed the art on to her. Lancer was well known for her beauty and sold tofu for a living. A local bully tried to force her to marry him, but she used the art to defeat him. Some accounts claim that Ng Mui taught Lancer the art specifically for the purpose of defending herself against the man's unwanted advances.



    personality


    Following the teaching of her former Master, Lancer approaches life with level-headedness and tranquility. It is basically impossible to get her to show anger, although that may just be superficial.
    Along with Martial arts, Lancer situations adopted the beliefs of her teacher that violence should be reserved for dire situations where the remaining options have been extinguished. Her main reason for learning to fight was self-defense after all, and she considers herself a pacifist outside of that.
    Because of her life experiences, Lancer has quite a lot of trouble when dealing with violent or stubborn men. When dealing with young and shy boys however, she finds herself having quite the trouble managing her emotions.

    Last edited by the god of world-0; April 7th, 2020 at 07:37 PM.


    here is a list of my servant sheets(new and improved format for my servant sheets)

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