thats a ridiculous servant
fighting with fire extinguishers? Thats a battle i wanna see. Throwing ships? thats new
Reading her quotes is annoying. No points. she most likely speaks in capslock, her posh character. If you wanted to accomplish that, good job
another annoyance is Spoils of the Phoenix, the description is unnecessarily long
It is not "much like Golden Rule", it is a low ranked Golden Rule, same with BC, she has a heightened mana regeneration period. Without core and without master, a berserker is toast. its like saying "i am always breathing, except when i am dead. Then i am not."
and the last effect is basically a high ranked Beast-Slayer, I guess.
pointing out a skill has 5 effects, makes it feel inherently loaded, so describing it differently, in a way that connects them directly to the feat, makes it more natural than a cold list.
Edit:
sheesh, okay queen elisabeth was still warm when a sheet from her popped up, so i give you at least credit you let him rest for 1.5 years, but still. Really?