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    you have almost double the amount
    the dark number is certainly higher since you mentioned there are several unreleased sheets
    "Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."



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    Create-a-Servant 4 soon.

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    Berserker of Drowned Love:

    Appearance:

    Source

    True Name: Ophelia

    Alignment: Neutral Mad

    Strength- C+
    Agility- B
    Endurance- D
    Mana- C
    Luck- E
    NP- C+

    Personality
    An innocent yet unstable person. Berserker mainly sings to herself in babbling couplets, evincing little awareness of her surroundings. Occasionally she shows a more lucid side, grieving the loss of her father and love.

    Berserker comes to regard any man she falls for as "Hamlet". She's driven to recreate her fate of drowning after falling in love yet through the influence of water spirits like Rusalka on her Saint Graph this has shifted into wishing to drag down the one she loves with her, seeing it as the consummation of her passion and a way to be together with them forever. It's likely her summoner would have to expend a Command Seal just to keep Berserker from invoking her Noble Phantasm to commit lover's suicide with the first man she fancies. An innocent monster cursed to act out her victimization on others.

    Berserker enjoys the company of nature and flowers, frequently weaving them into crowns for herself and her Master, a task she seems to find soothing and carries out with delicacy undulled by her Mad Enhancement. She's drawn to water despite its poor effects on her psyche, often staring longingly at the surface as if she can see the faces of those she's lost within.

    Berserker's wish on the Holy Grail is naturally to reunite with her father and Hamlet.

    Likes: flowers, water, Hamlet
    Dislikes: unrequited love, water, Hamlet
    Talents: singing, weaving flower-crowns
    Natural Enemy: Hamlet, Tamamo No Mae


    Class Skills:

    Mad Enhancement- C
    A Skill that characterizes the Berserker Class, sacrificing sanity in return for raw power. At this rank, physical parameters are ranked up but one has difficulty thinking and speaking properly. While able to converse unlike many of her Class, Berserker mainly expresses herself in childish song and seemingly nonsensical poetic verse. Furthermore her distorted mentality on love makes this Servant difficult to reach equivalent understanding with. Occasionally her lucidity returns and Berserker shows the side of a grieving young woman crushed beneath the depths of loss, yet these moments are quickly drowned in the delusion immersing her being.


    Personal Skills:


    Child Of Nature (False)- C-
    Due to her innocence and manner of death, Berserker attained an existence exceedingly close to a Nature Spirit- specifically, a Water Nymph. This allows Berserker to draw Mana from the World itself while near bodies of water. However it is a double-edged sword as she also hears voices of her loved ones from within, enticing her to drown herself beneath the waves. A mental interference that grows more irresistible as Berserker's sanity slips, potentially requiring a Command Seal to keep her from succumbing.

    Resonant Madness- B
    A Skill born from the anecdote where an actress Susan Mountfort who played Berserker herself was stricken with madness and collapsed dead onstage after the performance. An "insanity that blurs character and performer", this Skill allows Berserker to mirror her own Mad Enhancement rank upon the target. This increases in effectiveness the more similarity they have with Berserker, such as being a woman or struggling with lost love.

    Symbolism (Flowers)- C
    A Skill reflecting Berserker's famous use of flower-language in the play. Allows her to cast Magecraft evoking the symbolic meanings of various flowers, such as a healing spell cast with Rue as a catalyst drawing on its association with treating injuries.


    Noble Phantasm
    Ophelia Ondine
    Tragic Climax Of The Drowned Maiden


    Rank: C+

    Type: Anti-Unit, Suicide-Attack

    A Noble Phantasm recreating the climax of Berserker's part, her tragic death by drowning. Normally this would only kill Berserker but due to her fusion with the Phantom Rusalka, a water spirit who would lure young men to drown them in the riverside, she's able to pull the opponent down into it as well. Upon invoking the true name a surge of flower petal strewn water swirls around Berserker and her target, enveloping them both. Within the caging torrent Berserker embraces the opponent, holding them in place as the breath rips from their lungs.

    Through her Resonant Madness Skill this attack is more unavoidable the higher the target's own fate synchronizes with Berserker. If they're a woman who suffered heartbreak in love or a Servant who actually died that way in life the temptation to drown with her grows nearly irresistible, requiring a severe mental resistance check to tear free of Berserker's embrace even aside from whether one is physically capable of such. However as Berserker is prone to using this Noble Phantasm on those that resemble Hamlet, rather than herself, this aspect won't be fully met most of the time. On the other hand, as she and Hamlet are already somewhat similar (both having been driven to madness by the deaths of loved ones) it's not entirely ineffective either.

    Regardless of whether the opponent breaks free Berserker herself will unavoidably die after invoking this Noble Phantasm, being unable to escape the fate she already succumbed to in legend, unless a Command Seal is expended to call it off preemptively.





    So here's another Shakespearean Servant to compliment my Lady Macbeth. As usual comments and critiques would be appreciated. Thanks for reading y'all!

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    Source: Villain Deku

    Class: Assassin
    Other Classes: N/A
    True Name: Sidney Gottlieb
    Alignment: Neutral Evil
    Place of Origin: America (20th Century)
    Stars: 2/5

    Parameters:

    STR: E
    END: D
    AGI: D
    MGI: B
    LCK: C
    NP: C

    Height: 171cm
    Weight: 130lbs
    Likes: Biowarfare
    Dislikes: Morality
    Talent: Experimenting on the human mind
    Natural Enemy: Catherine Monvoisin
    Attribute: Man
    Traits: Male, Weak to Enuma Elish, Humanoid
    Armament: A poisoned fountain pen
    Catalyst: Documentation of Project MKUltra

    Class Skills:

    Presence Concealment C: His manipulation was felt but he was not seen. This enables him to partially hide his presence, cloaking before heading on the attack.

    Personal Skills:

    Project Artichoke A: The sublimation of Project Artichoke, one of the first projects Assassin lead. Its main goal was to try to figure out how to make someone commit an act of attempted assassination involuntarily, utilizing hypnosis. As a skill, it manifests as the capability for him to utilize mind control to force anyone he meets to commit these deeds for him. However, people with Magic Resistance above B or who pass an Endurance check will not be affected.

    Information Erasure C: He destroyed the records of most of the projects that he operated on, hiding the evidence of what actually ocurred. A skill which, after the battle, removes all evidence of his abilities from the scene, though things such as cameras will not have this evidence removed.

    The Cuban Project B: The sublimation of the Cuban project, a project which he headed up focused on assassinating Fidel Castro, through poisoning primarily. This enables him to lace items with poisons of his choice. He normally uses a fairly standard poison, but can use many others such as hallucinogenics or strong acids.

    Noble Phantasm(s):

    Project MKUltra
    Extract The Information

    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: C
    Range: 20 meters
    Max Targets: 1 Target

    The sublimation of the most famous project he headed, MKUltra, a horrific project that experimented on brainwashing and psychological torture for extracting confessions. This enables him to manifest the many methods he tested, hypnotizing, launching electricity from his fingers, removing parts of senses, and causing hallucinations, onto his targets.

    Lore: Sidney Gottlieb was an American chemist and spymaster who headed many of the CIA's most notable programs in the 50s and 60s, including the plots to poison Fidel Castro, and most notably, the horrific, cruel, and wildly illegal MKUltra. He burned the records of most of his projects, however.

    Personality: A cruel and manipulative person, he loves testing his experiments. However, they always tend to involve attacking others in hopes of finally achieving the brainwashing he is looking to do. He hates those who dislike that, as well as those who don't have similar ideals. His wish is to become capable of effortlessly brainwashing people.

    Relationships:

    Catherine Monvoisin: "Killing for... money? How unimaginative."

    Empress Wei: "You will always be known for emulation. You will only be known for that failed attempt at emulation."

    Pachacuti: "Your strategies were... honestly impressive. I might borrow them soon."

    Marozia: "No matter how much you try to hide behind that shining facade, your shadow pokes out."

    Louis Wain: "Hmm, remind me to commission some paintings. Why? No particular reason."

    Baba Anujka: "Water of Life? Hmm, interesting proposition. I'd love to work with you on that. What do you mean, no?"

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    Berserker - Claude Frollo

    So I was hoping to post this after Ophelia (pretty decent sheet btw, the combo with Rusalka makes sense) so we'd have two Berserkers in a row again, but then Gottlieb was posted. Ah well, them's the breaks~
    Anyway, here's a Servant I'd been thinking of writing myself ever since I wrote Ayesha's sheet, balancing a female yandere with a male yandere:

    Berserker of Notre Dame


    (by kei (seona2020). Source, obviously before his first NP comes into play)

    “I trust you are well, Master? Me, I am but one of God’s many servants, but you may call me… *sigh* Berserker.”

    True Name:
    Claude Frollo
    Alt. Classes: Caster, Avenger, Lancer, Ruler
    Source: Fiction, (The Hunchback of) Notre Dame de Paris
    Region: France
    Catalyst: Rubble from Notre Dame lost in repairs.
    Armament: Dagger, Black Keys, alchemic fire

    Character: “Satan was made greater than mere men, for how could God challenge men if the Adversary was weaker than he?”

    Immortalised in a story of the Notre Dame de Paris at its height, written when the cathedral was feared to be at its nadir.

    Claude Frollo was the Archdeacon in charge of the cathedral back then, having to support both his alcoholic brother Jehan and Quasimodo, his adopted hunchback son (having been an orphan himself). Frollo was otherwise a recluse, whose numerous studies even lead him to alchemy, at that time tiptoeing the line between being seen as magecraft or standard science. With his reclusiveness and other strange habits, Frollo would become shunned and feared by the people of Paris, before he had actual reason to be.

    Frollo assuaged his hardships by adopting the view that they were just Job-like trials from God, all a natural and unalterable part of His plan. However, his lack of contact with most people and repression of desires imposed on him by the Church only resulted in an obsessive lust for a Romani girl named Esmeralda. If she too was another ‘trial from God’ in his mind, then the temptation was a trial he quickly failed. While his pursuance of started off restrained, with each rejection he grew more and more obsessive until he ultimately murdered Esmeralda when it became undeniable that she would never be his.

    In return, Frollo was killed by being thrown from his own cathedral, by none other than his adopted son Quasimodo, who himself died from deprivation cradling Esmeralda’s corpse. Yet throughout all this death, the Notre Dame cathedral remained, surviving even to this day (if with its own ordeals) while so many human lives once linked with it have now been lost.

    Or lost and ‘revived’ in this case, with Claude Frollo now summoned as Servant Berserker. Perhaps in another class he may have the opportunity and reflect and repent, but such is not a possibility as Berserker. In response to how his life ended, Berserker has only come up with yet more excuses linking everything back to ‘God’s will’, insisting that somehow being resurrected (not fully true as a Servant) is all the proof one needs that his ‘trial’ is still ongoing.

    With the world having moved even further away from when architecture was the nexus of social life, with even the printing press that surpassed architecture’s range now itself surpassed by other media, Berserker’s assuredness in how the damned the world is and how much people have strayed from God’s light has only become stronger than ever. He will insist to anyone, friend, foe, or friend-turned-foe, that to deny him is to deny any chance of salvation, that all he does should be appreciated and reciprocated as its all for others’ good.

    Attribute:
    Sky?
    Alignment: Lawful Neutral → Neutral Mad
    Likes: Adoptive children, architecture, holy outcasts, religious rationalisations
    Dislikes: The printing press, Romani, women, scorn from the common folk

    Relationships


    • Baudelaire: “I understand the yearning for a Paris long lost, but I fail to see how any good man would want anything to do with as filthy a Paris as you yearn for. Saver Class? Bah, how insulting.”
    • David Ngunaitponi: “I’d appreciate your harmonising of science, magic, and religion, but would you cease that ‘perpetual motion’ blather?”
    • Christina: “It is harlots like you that give alchemy a tarnished name. To think you’d betray France’s trust after our country so generously helped yours.”
    • Harold Holt: “That even one as faithless as yourself would still see the power fat holds over us all, how telling. Just… get those abominations away from me!”
    • Jafar: “The world saw you as a villain simply for being what God made you? Why does that not surprise me?”
    • Milady: “I have no idea how a cardinal could possibly a wretch like you into his service, unless the French Church has truly declined since.”
    • Captain Hook: “People keep on mentioning you and that Jafar in the same breath as me, I have absolutely no idea why.”
    • Ayesha: “‘Kallikrates’? What in God’s name has gotten hold of you? What, you say I act the same by calling people ‘trails from God’? Blasphemy, that’s entirely different!”
    • Igor: “A poor replacement for Quasimodo you are. You want to be of service, stick to ringing bells.”
    • Colette: “It’s like the filth you write is a trial from God for all of Paris’ morality.”
    • Marinette: "You claim you hate France? Feh, the feeling is mutual."
    • Orlando: “You failed to adjust to the [Romani] lifestyle? I was going to say that’s proof you are sanely civilised, but then I was informed of your gender deviance…”

    Master: Preferably someone as scorned as himself, and hopefully not too against the Church. Any Master with even slight similarities to Esmeralda though is going to be trouble.
    Natural Enemy: Ayesha, likely because certain aspects of her remind him too much of himself, Johannes Gutenberg

    Wish:
    He’ll tell you he doesn’t have one, that he’s entered the Grail War because that’s what God wants of him, and like the Overseer to secure said Grail for the Church. However, even before developing any lustful desires, he can be heard muttering about how glorious a world without the printing press would be, where architecture remains the supreme form of communication.
    Keywords: Notre Dame, Trial from God, Obsession
    Rarity: 3/5

    Parameters
    • Strength: ***** D C
    • Endurance: ***** C A+
    • Agility: ***** E D
    • Magic: ***** B
    • Luck: ***** E
    • Noble Phantasm: ***** A


    Class Skills


    Mad Enhancement


    Increased power in exchange for loss of sanity.

    • Rank D C: Berserker at first appears relatively normal, but even then his extreme piousness and irrational gynophobia stand out. However, upon encountering anyone as tempting to his repressed self as Esmeralda was, this Skill truly activates, reducing him to obsession and making his speech a bizarre Latin chanting hybrid, ranking physical stats up by one.


    Personal Skills


    All Kinds of Specialisations


    The access and use of many professional skills.

    • Rank C-: Along with theology, Berserker has also studied law, medicine and other sciences, multiple languages, and alchemy. Mad Enhancement though makes his approach to law absolute and tyrannical, his medicine extremely suspect and only acceptably by his time’s standards, and any speech can become a garbled mess of French, English, and Latin.

    Double Summon (Imposition)

    The ability to grant, if not enforce, a second Class onto a targeted Servant. Can even replace their Class entirely at higher Ranks.

    • Rank C: While Berserker has been summoned solely as Berserker, his unshakable belief that anyone who tempts him is a ‘trial from God’ allows him to add the Gatekeeper Class onto said ‘trial-giver’. This Trial becomes what reinforces his Protection of the Faith skill.

    Fatalism

    A philosophy that doubts, if not denies, the existence of free will.

    • Rank A: Each time a Servant encounters Berserker, their Luck Rank is automatically lowered by one, with a saving throw needed to keep it from being further reduced the longer spent in his presence. Already a strong believer in fate, being summoned as Berserker has made that view inflexible and all-encompassing.

    Magecraft (Volatile)

    Proficiency in modern magic, still usable but prone to instability and destruction due to madness.

    • Rank B: Proficient in both Alchemy and Sacraments, even if he’d deny the latter was any form of magic. However, standard alchemy flames can now grow into blazing wildfires with little provocation, metals can melt into a corrosive sludge, and any Sacraments are now geared towards divine wrath and punishment than any healing.

    Protection of the Faith

    A holy protection born not from any divinity but from one’s own faith. Becomes increasingly fanatical and understandable at higher ranks.

    • Rank A: Berserker rationalises away any possible desire or temptation, really anything that would contradict his moral compass, by viewing them as a ‘Trial from God’. With Berserker also associating being wounded with love, his own Endurance is maximised as long as he does not fall to temptation… with which him is easier said than done. Unusually, this Skill seems to act in contrast with Mad Enhancement rather than complimenting it, since both Skills embody different sides of his extreme mindset.



    Noble Phantasms

    Notre Dame de Paris
    Holy War on the Demolishers

    Rank: A
    Type: Anti-Army

    A Noble Phantasm that doesn’t only represent the great cathedral Berserker held jurisdiction over, but the very book detailing his life that was dedicated to the cathedral above any ‘human’. Born from Victor Hugo’s intent that the Notre Dame was the true main character, and that architecture would, or at least should, outlive individuals, this Phantasm manifests differently depending on the Class.

    As Lancer, it could unleash attacks with its spires, as Caster it could be summoned with Territory Creation, as Ruler it would replace and upgrade the overseer’s church (if the War wasn’t somehow held in Paris). But with Frollo summoned as Berserker, the Notre-Dame asserts its role as the true ‘main character’ by grafting itself onto the Saint Graph of its owner, transforming Berserker into a painful hybrid of human being and cathedral.

    Looking like stone growths that cannot be removed, Berserker’s limbs turn into spires, gargoyles nest on his shoulders, his lungs become an organ, his veins and arteries become corridors, his eyes and nails become stained glass, and a bell constantly rings inside his skull. With his author’s belief in how architecture superseded the spoken word, Berserker also gains a resistance to any spell or Noble Phantasm that requires a spoken word activation, lowering its Rank by one against him.


    Ceci Tuera Cela
    Printing Press killed the Architect Star

    Rank: E-A
    Type: Anti-Fortress

    ‘This will kill that’. The great chain of communication across human history, in which one form of expressing ideas is reduced in relevance, if not made entirely obsolescent, by the next. For Berserker, this was how great architecture could be noticed by all, dwarfing the required closeness of spoken word, but how architecture in turn was dwarfed in range by the printing press. And on it went, the printing press superseded by radio and cinema, which were both threatened by television and video, which in turn met its match and was incorporated into the Internet.

    Whenever faced with one form of media, this Phantasm will summon the next stage of media able to ‘kill’ the old. As a Berserker though, this is activated automatically regardless of the Servant’s intent, with constantly newer media past to architecture increasingly to his distaste, even beyond his comprehension despite the Grail filling in.

    While Berserker resists spells and Phantasms activated through speech, he then gains a weakness to Spells and Phantasms born from the written word. However, the written word can then be countered by the sonic blasts and hypnotic waves of radio, which then are countered by the illusionary realms created through filming (a medium which Frollo has been regularly depicted in), which then are distorted by the maddening information overload from the summoned Internet (a medium Frollo wants nothing to do with yet is weirdly popular on).


    For Comparison: NittyGritty's Caster

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    I love the way you used Frollo's madness, as well as This Will Kill That as the NP. I'm sorry about breaking your planned chain.

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    Quote Originally Posted by jishara View Post
    I'm sorry about breaking your planned chain.
    Eh, that's okay, these things happen

    I also realise that Frollo would now be the third Servant I've done who's also a Disney Villain (after Jafar and Hook)

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    @Ophelia: That's a pretty good sheet centered around sharing her madness and fate, though your mention of that actress can't help but make me wonder if it would have been more interesting to make her summoned as her in some kind of pseudo-servant thing.

    @Frollo: Fun personality and I really like the concept of his skills and the NP centered around the Cathedral being the real main character. But I think he got too many personal skills, especially with Fatalism and Protection Of The Faith kinda feeling redundant because they both represent his mindset. I also figure you could have put more details on the abilities given to the target Servant by Double Summon (Imposition) (Maybe seduction stuff to represent them being thrust in Esmeralda's role?)

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    Source: Wei Ying

    Class: Caster
    Other Classes: N/A
    True Name: Lucy Maud Montgomery
    Alignment: Chaotic Good
    Place of Origin: Canada (20th Century)
    Stars: 1/5

    Parameters:

    STR: D
    END: D
    AGI: D
    MGI: C
    LCK: C
    NP: C

    Height: 191cm
    Weight: 100lbs
    Likes: Writing, "the spark", idyllic landscapes
    Dislikes: Being thought of as "only a children's writer"
    Talent: Writing
    Natural Enemy: Roland Barthes
    Attribute: Man
    Traits: Female, Humanoid, Weak to Enuma Elish
    Armament: Hot, dry winds
    Catalyst: One of her books

    Class Skills:

    Item Construction C: Although not a magus, she can materialize items out of her books.

    Territory Construction EX: She can construct "Green Gables Farm", manifesting as a territory of lower rank then a Workshop. However, this is closer to a limited version of her Noble Phantasm.

    Personal Skills:

    Flash of Beauty B: A skill that's the sublimation of the "flashes of beautiful, enchanting realms" that show up most prominently in her Emily of New Moon book series, but that she also had herself. This allows her to manifest, for split seconds, ethereal music, visions, imagery, and so on to evoke this flash of beauty.

    Vow of Silence D: A skill coming from one of her protagonists, Kilmeny, who had muteness due to (it was hypothesised) her mother's vow to never talk to the father causing a psychosomatic condition. This enables her to create a vow of silence, binding others to it and removing all of their speaking for some time.

    Left for the Prairies C: An oft-repeated phrase in her work is that a character "Left to the Prairies", enabling her to easily justify their disappearance while making it possible for them to reappear again as soon as she wants them. A skill that enables her to "write out characters", causing their existence to fade for a short time while they're hit with hot, dry winds.

    Noble Phantasm(s):

    Prince Edward Island
    The Ideal of the Island


    Type: Bounded Field
    Rank: C
    Range: 50 meters
    Max Targets: 1000 targets

    The sublimation of her idealized view of Prince Edward Island in all of her novels: a lush landscape filled with beautiful hills, the sound of the sea, and beautiful environments. This constantly spreads from her territory, transforming the surrounding lands to fit their own "idealized" version, as magic is sapped from within it, and technology is slowly broken down.

    Lore: Lucy Maud Montgomery (1874-1942) was a Canadian author, most noted for her essays, poems, and especially novels, notably her three large series: Anne of Green Gables, Emily of New Moon, and Pat of Silver Bush. Green Gables Farm, which featured in Anne of Green Gables, became a heritage site due to that, which became the genesis of Prince Edward Island National Park.

    Personality: A serene and elegant person who loves writing and nature, and writing in or about nature. She hates the cluttered and busy life of the cities, preferring to wipe it over with her Prince Edward Island noble phantasm, creating the ideal natural environment instead. Her wish is to be able to write endlessly.

    Relationships:

    F. Scott Fitzgerald: "All ages must fall? No, they must not. They will not."

    Ambrose Bierce: "What on earth is this distorted landscape? Unlike my perfect paradise."

    Ronald Knox: "Commandments for Detective Stories? Hmm, maybe I'll try writing one one of these days."

    Yosano Akiko: "I am truly impressed by your poems, although I do wonder if it is necessary to swallow people with your hair."

    Roland Barthes: "The will of the people you use is merely a fake. How dare you?"
    Last edited by jishara; November 8th, 2022 at 01:03 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Alexcoene View Post
    @Ophelia: That's a pretty good sheet centered around sharing her madness and fate, though your mention of that actress can't help but make me wonder if it would have been more interesting to make her summoned as her in some kind of pseudo-servant thing.
    I did consider making a Faker Servant for the actress instead, but figured there wasn't enough on her for a sheet.

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    Montgomery: Bungou Stray Dogs is a godsend for these writer FCs huh? That aside the Skills are fitting (I particularly like Left for the Prairies) and the NP makes sense given her mentality. I wonder if her Territory Creation should really be EX-rank like Semiramis given that NP, with the farm just a partial release of Prince Edward Island as a whole.

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    Hi Royd: I'm so glad you like her! And hmm that makes a lot of sense it's edited

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    Bungou Stray Dogs is a godsend for these writer FCs huh?
    I admittedly try to avoid BSD faceclaims when writing author Servants (then again I don't think Colette or Cavendish are even in it), but I've used Koei Warriors FCs for both Sun Shang Xiang and Ginchiyo, so it's not like I'm above that sort of thing

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    Source: Cushart

    Class: Rider
    Other Classes: N/A
    True Name: Violet Jessop
    Alignment: Neutral Good
    Place of Origin: Argentina (20th Century)
    Stars: 1/5

    Parameters:

    STR: D
    END: B
    AGI: C
    MGI: D
    LCK: B
    NP: B

    Height: 187cm
    Weight: 123lbs
    Likes: Healing people
    Dislikes: Ships, water
    Talent: Not sinking
    Natural Enemy: Berenice II
    Attribute: Man
    Traits: Female, Humanoid, Weak to Enuma Elish
    Armament: Bare hands
    Catalyst: A wrecked ship

    Class Skills:

    Riding C: Not particularly good at riding any mounts, capable of handling standard mounts.

    Magic Resistance E: Never faced magic thus gains a minimal rank in the skill.

    Personal Skills:

    Nursing Techiques C: She was part of the VAD, civillians who were heading in to help the armed forces during that time. This enables her to provide healing to allies, although she is not particularly effective at it and wasn't famed for it in particular and thus she doesn't obtain a high rank.

    Wear Your Life Jacket C: She was asked to put on her lifejacket and demonstrate the instructions for the passengers who could not speak english on the Titanic. This grants her this skill, enabling her to constantly "float" mildly to avoid attacks, as well as manifest some safety gear for the use of aiding her allies.

    Refusal To Die B: She sunk again and again, yet she lived, describing the feeling as a "refusal to die". A burst of energy that Ranks Up all of her stats when she is in a critical condition, as well as enhancing her focus and giving her some Mental Resistance, the sheer force of being unwilling to die and fall.

    Noble Phantasm(s):

    Miss Unsinkable
    Every Boat Sinks

    Type: Anti-Fortress
    Rank: B
    Range: 20 meters
    Max Targets: 1000 targets

    The sublimation of her title of Miss Unsinkable, as she was on two different major shipwrecks and on another ship when it almost got shipwrecked. Passively, this manifests as a curse causing any non-sentient "Mount" she uses to become primed for destruction, almost acting as false Broken Phantasms, as she hops off with little wear. When the true name is called, she "sinks" the entire surroundings, creating great chasms, earthquakes, ripping down boats, causing flash floods, and so on.

    Lore: Violet Jessop was a stewardess and volunteer nurse who was on the RMS Olympic when it collided with the Hawke, which caused great damage to the ship, was on the Titanic when it sunk, making it out on lifeboat 16, and was on the Britannic, their sister ship which was converted into a hospital ship for the Red Cross, when it sunk.

    Personality: She is quiet, often trying to stay away from anything she can theoretically conceptualize as anything like a "ship". However, she is very energetic and helpful whenever she is kept far away from them. She has a severe phobia of water, and will try to stay away from it as much as she can. Her wish is to be able to face water without being scared.

    Relationships:

    Berenice II: "No! No. I will not stay on while you try to shipwreck that ship."

    Baba Anujka: "I do not want water!"

    Grace Hopper: "What sort of computer is that? Hmm... just be careful in the water, then, I suppose."

    Sayyida al-Hurra: "How are you forming... that? Also, please keep it away!"

    Jemmy Hirst: "Your innovations are quite creative, I must say."

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    Source: Yerim Lee

    Class: Caster
    Other Classes: N/A
    True Name: Heo Jun
    Alignment: Lawful Good
    Place of Origin: Korea (16th Century)
    Stars: 3/5

    Parameters:

    STR: D
    END: B
    AGI: C
    MGI: B
    LCK: C
    NP: C

    Height: 192cm
    Weight: 101lbs
    Likes: Medicine
    Dislikes: Cruelty
    Talent: Creating medicine
    Natural Enemy: Jane Toppan
    Attribute: Man
    Traits: Humanoid, Weak to Enuma Elish, Male
    Armament: Dongui Bogam
    Catalyst: A copy of Donguibogam

    Class Skills:

    Item Creation C: Capable of creating some medicinal items, though nonmagical.

    Territory Creation B: He is capable of creating a Medical Space on par with a Workshop, enhancing his medicine.

    Personal Skills:

    Eastern Medicine A+: Traditional Eastern styles of medicine, including the traditional medicinal herbs, as well as the use of acupuncture, and healing magic. This skill denotes proficiency in this style of medicine. As the person who compiled it into one book, the Dongui Bogam, he naturally gains an extremely high rank.

    Human Anatomy Understanding B: Denotes a subject's understanding of all of human anatomy. As a very famous physician who utilized a lot of acupuncture and pressure points, he gains a fairly high rank, allowing him to understand targets' weak points as long as they can be counted as "Human".

    Loyalty C: He was noted for his extreme loyalty, being one of the very few officials to stick with King Seonjo during the Korean-Japanese war, as opposed to most other officials who fled to try to save themselves. This causes him to become singlemindedly focused on protecting those he trusts, bypassing Mental Interference.

    Noble Phantasm(s):

    Dongui Bogam
    Mirror of Medicine


    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: C
    Range: 15 meters
    Max Targets: 1 target

    The sublimation of his Dongui Bogam, his most famous creation, a book which collects as much knowledge as he could find on Eastern healing techniques. As it was named the Mirror of Eastern Medicine, it manifests as a literal mirror which displays knowledge on illnesses. When its true name is called, any target he identifies will have all "ailments" diagnosed and tools to heal them will be ejected out of the mirror. This is also how he obtains his main weapon, needles which he throws with precision. However, its true use comes in its accessibility. As it was compiled to be able to be used by any common person, and written in such a way that it could be, this can be activated by anyone who was willingly given it by Caster, with the same effects.

    Lore: Heo Jun (1539-1615) was a famous physician during the Joseon dynasty under the reign of King Seonjo. He rapidly rose up the ranks to become one of Seonjo's most trusted officials, and was commissioned to produce the Dongui Bogam. However, due to the long time it took, he was banished by Seonjo's successor before he finished, only to be reinstated just before he completed it.

    Personality: An elegant and calm person. As the mirror constantly floats around him, he endlessly dispenses cures almost before they're asked for, soaking in the praise. The one thing which will cause his calmness to break is someone who intentionally and for no serious reason murdered, especially those known as Angels of Death.

    Relationships:

    Jane Toppan: "How? HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO THOSE POOR PEOPLE?"

    Catherine Monvoisin: "Just... I'm honestly in shock. How did you even manage to do that?"

    Baba Anujka: "Water? That is not water."

    Violet Jessop: "A phobia of water? Unfortunately, I don't think I have a cure for that."

    Yosano Akiko: "Your poetry is truly interesting."

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    Source: Nik

    Class: Assassin
    Other Classes: N/A
    True Name: Colley Cibber
    Alignment: True Neutral
    Place of Origin: England (17th Century)
    Stars: 2/5

    Parameters:

    STR: D
    END: B
    AGI: C
    MGI: C
    LCK: C
    NP: C

    Height: 181cm
    Weight: 98lbs
    Likes: Acting, writing
    Dislikes: Being mocked
    Talent: acting comic roles
    Natural Enemy: Paula Maxa
    Attribute: Man
    Traits: Humanoid, Male, Weak to Enuma Elish
    Armament: A gold-handled cane
    Catalyst: Apology for the life of Colley Cibber

    Class Skills:

    Presence Concealment E: He doesn't want to hide his presence so gains a minimal rank of the skill.

    Personal Skills:

    Miserable Mutilation B: Many of his plays were adapted from playwrights like Moliere and Shakespeare, leading writers like Alexander Pope to call his writing a "miserable mutilation" of "Crucified Moliere and hapless Shakespeare", enhancing his attack and power against writer or artist servants.

    Acting C-: He was a fairly famous actor-manager, who was extremely well-known for his comedic dunce roles, which allows him to easily "slot himself" into any comedic role, gaining Espionage. However, tragic roles, which he tends to prefer acting in, he tends to utterly fail at, being utterly obviously a bad actor. In addition, however, as actor-manager, he becomes able to bestow the actor status on others.

    Poet Laureate C: He was granted the status of Poet Laureate, holding it for 27 years, during the time of such great poets as Alexander Pope and John Gay. This enhances his writing and poetry, which can act as a tool to enhance his blows. As the decision was also partially politics-driven, he also reduces the rank of others' writing.

    Noble Phantasm(s):

    Apologia For Colley Cibber
    My Life, With All Its Sorrows And Joys


    Type: Anti-Army
    Rank: C
    Range: 30 meters
    Max Targets: 1000 targets

    The sublimation of his autobiography, Apology for the Life of Colley Cibber, where he faced down all of his critics and gave a deep insight into the world of theater in his day. When the true name is called, the curtain rises, the mockery fades, and his performance begins as a patchwork of what he's seen, combined with his own, rather impressive writing, appears, pulling all viewers without Mental Resistance into the role of actors. But as he said, actors must fade, and as such one by one they fade away as the curtains close.

    Lore: Colley Cibber was a fairly famous writer, actor, and poet during the end of the 17th century and early 18th century, managing the Drury Lane theater, one of the most influential, for almost 25 years, and serving as Poet Laureate for 27 years. Naturally, he gained many enemies in the form of poets or dramatists who he didn't put on their works or who didnt get Poet Laureate, and went down in history primarily through one of those grudges, held by Alexander Pope.

    Personality: A cheerful and elegant person. He loves writing, constantly getting ideas from anything around him, from nature, or from people speaking, so constantly carries a quill and parchment to note his ideas down. He hates those who mocked him so severely. His wish is for his mockery to be removed.

    Relationships:

    Paula Maxa: "Horror? I can't say I particularly enjoy that."

    Eleonora Duse: "I must say, you've gone far more into your role then I've ever seen."

    Isadora Duncan: "Hmm, if you leap like that then perhaps a monologue about..."

    John Bentinck: "Seclusion? Fair enough. Mind if I note down a bit though?"

    Jemmy Hirst: "Huh, you lived at the same time as me and I never met you. I very much should have though."

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    Source: Gak Xep Nao

    Class: Lancer
    Other Classes: N/A
    True Name: Fukuda Chiyo-ni
    Alignment: Neutral Good
    Place of Origin: Japan (18th Century)
    Stars: 3/5

    Parameters:

    STR: C
    END: C
    AGI: C
    MGI: B
    LCK: C
    NP: B

    Height: 198cm
    Weight: 100lbs
    Likes: Serenity, poetry
    Dislikes: Chaos
    Talent: Writing Haiku
    Natural Enemy: Huascar
    Attribute: Man
    Traits: Female, Humanoid, Weak to Enuma Elish
    Armament: Morning Glory
    Catalyst: A morning-glory vine entangling a bucket of clear water

    Class Skills:

    Magic Resistance C: She rarely came across magic in life, but her poems enhance this to a rank a bit above an amulet.

    Personal Skills:

    Unity of Nature C: She wrote in a style to unite nature and the mundane, with the ephemeral and eternal. A skill that enables her to unite the ephemeral, living as one and in peace with nature, leaving no trace as she moves of her own existence, merely being one with the nature that she wrote about.

    Haiku Poet A: One of the most famous Haiku poets of all time, she gains this skill at an incredibly high rank, allowing her poems to manifest effects relating to their words: For example "parents older then I are now my own children, the same cicadas" could manifest a swarm of cicadas which causes a looping effect.

    Like The Clear Water B: She decided to retire to a temple and become a nun to teach her heart to flow like the clear water that flows night and day. This enables her to flow like the crystal water, transforming parts of herself into a crystalline and chilly water as she flows past all and carries on.

    Noble Phantasm(s):

    Morning Glory
    The Flower Crowns Me


    Type: Anti-Army
    Rank: B
    Range: 15 meters
    Max Targets: 100 targets

    The Morning Glory flower, which she wrote a lot of poems about and as such became a nigh-sacred flower to the people of her town. This enables her to manifest the long, snaking vines from her fingers, growing outwards from her and blooming into flowers as they trap and entangle, sapping away the Mana like how they sap away nutrients from other plants. This is the reason she has manifested as Lancer, with the vines being treated as a "long range weapon".

    Lore: Fukuda Chiyo-ni (1703-1775) was one of the most famous Haiku poets during the Edo period, noted for her many different haiku, especially the ones on the Morning Glory, a flower she particularly liked and which became a favorite flower for those of her hometown due to her many poems on them.

    Personality: An elegant person who loves plants, practically floating through the gardens as she grows vines. She loves writing poetry, constantly holding a brush and utilizing a particularly elegant vine, which by the end of each day is filled up with poems which she copies out in the night. Her wish is to merely see more of the beauty of nature.

    Relationships:

    Colley Cibber: "What is a Poet Laureate? But indeed, your works are intriguing."

    F. Scott Fitzgerald: "The 'Jazz Age', you say?"

    Huascar: "Tearing up those lands filled with flowers and using them for war? How awful."

    Wallada Bint Al-Mustakfi: "I must say, your poems are impressive, although I.. dislike the subjects."

    Ronald Knox: "Detective novels? Interesting."

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    It hasn’t even been an hour since your last sheet.

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    I’m honestly fucking tired of jishara spamming posts.

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    Easy fix. Just post stuff of your own to round it out.

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    On today's news, guy who never posts Servant tired of guy who posts Servants.

    Spam or not, posting Servants is kind of the point of this whole thread, actually. Surprising, I know.
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