The only weird part is the tidbit about Paimon being more loyal to Lúcifer than Goetia. The pillars didn't have any individuality before the Final Singularity and this fact doesn't seem to affect the sheet too much so I don't see any reason to add the contradiction to canon in there.
Well, it's a bit of a spoiler, but the general idea is that the four of what I'm writing up are kind of the rebellious pillars that might explain why Goetia in other timelines other than GO suddenly doesn't want to burn the world.
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Also the first characteristic of Paimon noted in the book Goetia is that he is "very obedient towards Luficer than other Kings are", whatever that means.
While I cannot comment in particular about if you should do interactions or craft essences, what I can say is that I find interactions to be a good way to showcase the servants particular personality. So depending on what you want, both, one, or none may be applicable. Of course, at the end of the day, do what you want to do. After all, isn't the point of all this to make servants because we want to?
Rookie Lorekeeper, Amateur Extraordinaire, and all around nasunoob.
Well, it's a bit of a spoiler, but the general idea is that the four of what I'm writing up are kind of the rebellious pillars that might explain why Goetia in other timelines other than GO suddenly doesn't want to burn the world.
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Also the first characteristic of Paimon noted in the book Goetia is that he is "very obedient towards Luficer than other Kings are", whatever that means.
Spoiler:
The trigger that pushed Goetia into action is the vague need to not let the Animusphere take the lead with are doing with Olga, and Shimousa has the whole deal with Douman calling Olga "Lucifero, Satan himself" as a joke, so intentional or not, it's a really cheeky reference and I like it.
Mowis : really well made servant and interesting i must say as there are not many native american heroic figures well made at first were i wondering why he is not a archer but after reading it as a whole i understand why .
i would be curious what he would think of my Shamaness and also what do you think of my Ada ?
Also i am intersted in what the other mentioned servant will be .
We already know who Beast VII is and it's a Nasu OC, but it is a character openly associated with Lucifer and her time on the spotlight might indeed say things about him. I think Kamera's approach here is playing too safe (and I'm more on the mentality that the best time to write a sheet is before the canon take is unveiled), but I can definitely respect it.
On one hand I don't really have an incentive to write a Lucifer right now, and also I still have lots of literally whos in my backlog to take priorities, so at this point we might as well see Beast VII/True Demon lore reveal first before I do one.
Well, maybe if I can find a FC so perfect for Satan that can change my mind...
"Hey yooo! Lancer Class servant Maeda Matsu here to kick ass and take names!"
True Name: Maeda Matsu
Class: Lancer
Alignment: True Neutral
Region: Japan
Source: Historical Fact
Armament: Limbs, Fire, Spear
Parameters:
Strength: C
Endurance: C
Agility: B
Mana: D+
Luck: A
Class Skills:
Magic Resistance D
Grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether. Cancels Single-Action spells. Magic Resistance of the same degree of an amulet that rejects magical energy.
Personal Skills:
Eye of The Mind (True) C+
A heightened capacity for observation, refined through training, discipline and experience. A danger-avoidance ability that utilizes the intelligence collected up to the current time as the basis in order to predict the opponent’s activity and change the current situation. This is not a result of talent, but an overwhelming amount of combat experience. Being both a shrewd politician and experienced martial artist, Lancer has a decent rank. However, what's more is that due to her lifetime of taking risky action, the rank jumps to A when she takes an action that is essentially "high risk, high reward".
… "I may seem like a brat but that's part of the plan, ya know? You have Chacha and Nobu, right?"
Derisive Encouragement C
A charisma-like skill that increases morale but comes with the chance of bestowing Madness Enhancement. As a naturally sassy person, the skill fits her well. What's more is that such a nature encouraged her husband into battle.
… "Hey, get up. Act like a loser later!"
Self-Preservation B
The Skill to preserve one's health so that the user can escape. Gained from an anecdote used as an example of her loyalty to her clan where she had advanced straight into a battlefield to ask Toyotomi Hideyoshi to spare her clan.
... "Ah. No, no. I was just protecting my future, not my clan. Oh come on, you're making me blush!"
Noble Phantasm
Omatsu Burnout: My Flames Grow As Defeat Draws Near
Rank: D~B+
Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
The first Noble Phantasm of Lancer. The crystallisation of the words said to Maeda Toshiie before he headed off to battle. A threat that if fortune turned against Toshiie, Lancer would burn down their castle and families. A threat that continues to this day. Manifesting as jets of flame that emerge at Lancer's bidding, at their basic level, they supplement Lancer's melee actions. However, a trait that exists within the flames is what Lancer calls a "
dread
passion
that grows with the increasing chance of death". The higher chance that Lancer is becoming closer to death, the hotter flames burn and the more encroaching they become, appearing now within the surroundings until everything is consumed in fire. In the case, Lancer dies while the Noble Phantasm is active, her body will explode in a conflagration that will cremate most servants. This aspect of the Noble Phantasm cannot be used while Gin-Kin is active.
Gin-Kin: Spear of Silver-Gold
Rank: C+
Type: Anti-Unit
The second Noble Phantasm of Lancer. An alternate telling of the words said to Maeda Toshiie. A goad to bring his riches with him to battle by piercing them onto his spear. Manifested as a spear made of gold and silver, the Noble Phantasm works well as a weapon; however, she fights with it as a tertiary weapon. Not out of distaste for it but out of the awareness of its purpose. It is meant to be a Master's Noble Phantasm, enhancing their physical prowess to near servant level, allowing triumph in terms of physical confrontation against other Masters. Nonetheless, in the event that the spear is rejected out of lack of desire rather than incompatibility, the blade will shatter revealing a second stronger blade underneath it. The spear of Maeda Toshiie is allowed access for the Master, empowering them even further. This aspect of the Noble Phantasm cannot be used while Omatsu Burnout is active.
Personality
A genki girl type servant. Cheerful and crazy in equal measure, Lancer is someone who frequently does what she wants without concern for the opinions of others. That isn't to say she isn't aware, being a very accomplished politician in her time, it's just that manifest as a Lancer brought out the more proactive side of herself. She assures that her "shrewd, nerdy self" is in the Assassin class. A core part of herself, or rather Maeda Matsu as a whole, is her loyalty. Earn it and while she may mock you, act sassy, or generally ignore, she will follow you into the most dangerous battlefield if she deems it necessary.
Craft Essence
An Inner Flame "Ah geez. It's really annoying this time. I almost fell unconscious in front of the Master that time."
There is a particular quirk that comes with this Noble Phantasm. It's that I'm not exactly exempt from it. That inner flame. The fire of
dread
passion
that grows with defeat. It may not harm but it sure does hurt. Maybe that's why I encourage people. So that defeat seems like a far off possibility. So that victory becomes a certainty. So that pain stops becoming inconvenient at times! I...wonder how Yodo-dono can easily handle it without some complaint.
Creator's Note: Still working on the Christmas sheet to go with Bakkerhexe. Here's this for the meantime. I got inspired by the Faceclaim.
Last edited by Vance; November 24th, 2021 at 03:12 PM.
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