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Alternate Classes: Lancer, Assassin
True Name: Issun-boshi
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Origin: Japanese Folklore
Armament: Sword, mallet
Parameters:
STR: C
END: C
AGI: B+
MANA: B
LUCK: A
NP: B
Skills
Noble Phantasms
Description
Lore
So...as I was browsing my files I stumbled across an errant Sheet that I originally created for a RP that never got off the ground and since the Sheet was done I figured why not post it anyways. Even if it's from a long time ago and thus not up to my current standards, I can't be bothered to rewrite it and so here it is warts and all.
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"Do not fret my dear Master, you will be safe if you follow my command. I can say without a doubt that I have never betrayed a single person in my life..."
True Name: Cnut Sweynsson
Epithet: "Ruler of the North Sea Empire"
Source: Historical
Place of Origin: Scandinavia (11th Century)
Hidden Attribute: Human
Catalyst: His Bones in Winchester Cathedral
Alignment: True Neutral
Likes: England, God
Dislikes: Family, Opposition
Talents: Economics, Social Manipulation
Natural Enemy: Edmund Ironside
Parameters:
STR: (B) END: (C) AGI: (B) MGI: (B) LCK: (C) NP: (B)
Character:
Skills:
Noble Phantasm:
Lore:
Relationships:
Creator's Notes:
All comments and criticisms are of course welcome~
Last edited by Skull; May 27th, 2020 at 11:19 AM.
oh yeah i never posted the april servant contest entry i didn't have done in time wild
Class: Assassin
Subclass: Practitioner
Alternate Classes: N/A
True Name: Christiaan Barnard
Epithet: Master of the Heart
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Source: True History
Origin: South Africa
Armaments: Surgical instruments
Parameters:
STR: E
END: E
AGI: D
MGI: E
LCK: A
NP: ☆
Biography
Skills
Noble Phantasm
Last edited by kiwi; September 4th, 2020 at 07:41 PM.
What's up with this sudden influx of great Sabers? Praise the lord for that.
Issun-Boshi: UHMM EXCUSE ME? I THOUGHT HE WAS A GOOD BOY BUT HE’S ACTUALLY A THIEF WHO STOLE MY HEART?? THERE'S SOMETHING CLEARLY WRONG WITH THIS YOUNG MAN??? But oh boy, can you imagine having a skill that grants you advantage against all giant lifeforms and then having the size of a chihuahua? I can relate to half of this sentence at least. I loved that slight “Ant-Man touch” that his first Noble Phantasm had, too. I can imagine a lot of messy fights using it.
Cnut: My grandmother used to say, “nothing that has Char Aznable somewhere in its composition can go wrong” and I believe in that 100%... Fine, maybe she didn’t said THAT specifically, but it’s still the truth. I still think that, for something you’ve done so long ago, it still holds up quite nicely. Sure the personality is one-note and hellbent in this tunnel-vision goal, but it’s very much the logical approach considering who we’re talking about. His abilities are everything you expect a slimy warmonger to have and I love it. His hypocrisy (oh how fitting considering Christianism’s history) is a very good touch too.
Ye. Because it was created for the purposes of a RP, I didn't put my usual effort into describing the finer nuances of his personality since it would've shown through gameplay instead. Reading back he is awfully one note character wise but oh well~ here's hoping if he ever makes it into canon then TM will do a better job.
I was surprised given his fame that no one else seems to have done a Sheet of him though. :/
I was kinda hoping Cnut would have a personality similar to some comedy sketch's interpretation of him.
Pushed on to the whole tide incident by his flattering courtiers, but kinda going "almost certainly can't do it, but if by some chance I can, that will show up Edmund Ironside won't it". Then, to save some face when it failed, he turned it into a lesson for his court.
Though anyways, a good sheet, but I'm wondering if that NP isn't drawing a bit too heavily on the legend actually working in Cnut's favor...
OH! Cnut! I severely misread his name initially, whoops!
Good sheet! Char as a Viking is an interesting take!
I won't even mention what that word got auto corrected for.
Also I'M SO SORRY KIWI, you've posted your servant like a minute before I could post my own saber reviews so your boy got left out. Lemme correct this mistake: Christiaan is amazing. A shame you couldn't had placed him in the monthly contest, he'd surely get a lot of votes. He's so cool. (I loved his "benevolently racist granpa" vibe, it reminded me of that movie, Run I guess it's the name?) His abilities and entire kit is what you'd expect from a healer, and that's good.That star stat tho.
Rider of the Storm
Class: Rider
Other Classes: Lancer, Saber
Alignment: Lawful Good
Place of Origin: Iceland
Parameters:
STR: C
END: C
AGI: B
MGI: C
LCK: A
NP: B
Height: 5'4
Weight: 160 lb
Likes: Grapes, Salmon
Dislikes: Being blown off course
Talent: Seafaring
Natural Enemy: Her father, Chrisopher Columbus
Attribute: Man
Armament: Runic Sword, Runic Spear
Catalyst: A bronze cloak pin excavated from L'anse aux Meadows
Class Skills:
Personal Skills:
Noble Phantasm(s):
Lore:
Personality:
Creator Notes:
That sounded like creative criticism to me, you know. Basically "pay attention to the details of your sheet to not contradict yourself". There is a lot of good with the sheet. The NP's are very cool and the way her Voyager of the storm and Riding function is creative (although it bothers me that she has both since they should be mutually exclusive IIRC). However, some other things just don't work. Her personality feels largely disconnected from the image you seemed tried to pass and, honestly, the genderbending felt token and unnecessary (and that is coming from someone who genderbends a lot).
In short, its a good set of powers that feels like they belong to someone else.
here is a list of my servant sheets(new and improved format for my servant sheets)
Come explore the White Library, and reach the bottom of this Abyss
Fate / White Memoria
hinga dinga durgen
nice sheet, even if the primary noble phantasm is aaaaah uhhh a bit of a stretch
and thank you for the kind words, frenzy!
Thank you Comun ! good to know that my thought Train was with that he possess mind related abbillities are Right !
with These Infos i can work. though i have Envisioned his personality not overly dramatic more Cold but in some cases also short tempered ,as in my Lostbelt Story he does have a similar role like Ashiya and Rasputin. Also do i plan that he also has to Katou Danzou a Special relation which he sees as daughter and is pissed at Ritsuka to have "used" her.
Your verified Chikara-production Studios !
Dont ship me with anyone unless i say so !
When you wake a Dragon in his Lair...
My understanding is that Riding deals with riding/driving single occupant mounts or terrestrial vehicles. Voyager of the Storm is more about captaining a ship as it includes both Military Tactics and Charisma. They are two different skills sets. Plus as a Rider she's required to have a Riding skill.
The face claim was because I am limited by what the internet has provide since I am not an artist. As for the genderbending, honestly if Nasu doesn't feel the need to justify it every time then neither do I. I understand some people here have opinions on it but it's not something that bothers me.
Kiwi: Thank you so much! I like to stretch things when I can. There was a gap in her story that I decided to fill it with some artistic license. I feel it's important to remember that Servants are being summoned in a world where magic exists so adding more fantastical elements to otherwise down to earth stories can be quite flavourful.
As for why she isn't called Eriksdottir, it's in the lore.
Albeit are Sea related Rider servants normaly strictly limited at the operating of ships can i see why you are gave her also Riding due to Akhlut which is a quite good idea though i have one Question has he some Special abbillities or in how powerfull Akhlut is in comparison to the strenght of servants ,and besides that poor Thing meet an sad ending i must admit .
i have nothng against the genderbending as sometimes they are quite good like Nero where the result where quite satisfying . Also About that with the faceclaim can i understand that especially if you have very specific idea how the charackter will look is it sifficult like when i searched for my Thales for one that meet my Imagination About two days , and About the fantastical Elements are you Right as i made my owm Nasu verse Explanation why the Titanic went down in her sheet where the reason where a Dead Apostle.
Though for me is her personality section a bit to short like it would be good to know how she interact with her Master .
Your verified Chikara-production Studios !
Dont ship me with anyone unless i say so !
When you wake a Dragon in his Lair...
Also of note vis-à-vis the Skill debate is that Drake has both Riding and Voyager of the Storm, rendering the argument in NittyGritty's favor. There's also Mary and Anne's Voyage Skill to be considered, which is more of a direct analogue to Riding, only with ships (well technically steering a ship, but same difference).