Ah, I see, that's a good one, thanks.
Ah, I see, that's a good one, thanks.
Hey guys, I’m currently working an a sheet for Dobrynya Nikitich and I’m having some trouble coming up with some skill effects for him. So far I have hero creation (C) due to him famously being known as the mentor to Vladimir the Great, A battle Coninuation Skill (might change up the name bc it’s more fun) and lastly the troublesome skill “Conversion(Trial?) by Fire”. The lore for this skill is that Dobrynya’s legend says that he was a proponent of early Russia switching from paganism to Christianity and would force others to convert “through fire” ultimately receiving the same treatment by those who didn’t want to convert killing him and his family in the process. I don’t want to do a simple mana burst for this but I’m having trouble thinking of what else it could be. Any help is appreciated!
Since Magecraft is often associated with heresy maybe you have him create a flame that burns the target's Magic Circuits, dealing more damage the greater they have and temporarily crippling their ability to cast Magecraft. If you want to reflect how he later suffered the same fate you could even have it so if the opponent passes some sort of check the fire is redirected back at him, albeit that might make the Skill too unreliable.
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lets see if i can keep the Quality
Georg Wilhelm Steller
(Rider)
"My Name is Georg Steller ,my class is Ca.. wait is Rider ...interesting .So let us both enjoy and succed this journey Master"
Height: 181 cm
Weight: 83~ kg
Origin:German-Russia
Alignment: True Neutral ~Lawful Good
Attributes: Man, Earth
Weapons: a sabre and Russian musket (though he dislikes to use them)
Other Qualifying Classes: Caster,Assassin, Avenger
Likes: healthy nature, the grounding of the nature cultures, to travel
Dislikes: disturbed nature, the subjugation of Indigenous People, oppressors and poachers
Talents/Hobbies: to study life and read documentary books especially Zoological and Ethnological ones, survival and campfire cooking (to a certain degree also normal cooking)
Parameter:
Strength: C
Endurance: C
Agility: C
Luck : B++
Mana: B
NP: A+
Appearance
Personality
Skills
Noble Phantasms
Notes
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okay now to the other newest servants here ß/
Autolycus: an really well done charackter his secondnoblephantasm does repressent his state as Master of Thieves really good i would say the Phrase he is so good that even your abbillities Arent safe from him!" also is the Adaption of Hades cape a interesting idea i must say ,especially as i made self a Hades with a Version of the cape alogside his Helmet were both are possessing a better Camouflage abbillity aswell that the Helmet has a mental interference abbillity . and also your Cadmus is a well made idea !
Hödir: A quite interesting Concept must i say it ,a very interesting Concept and thats remind me on that i made a Loki servant series with Mistiltein as Assassin respectively Lancer class noblephantasm .
Pramodhawardhani: A very intersting Queen i must say ist here a to bad that you dont have a actual peronality section like what her opinion is to certain servant types like other Queens or her oppinion towards Schholar or philospher type servants would i be interested to know like how she would think of my Thales would i be curious ?
Olaf Trygvason:I must say a very good profile i made also a while ago a profile of Olaf but my were far more modest as i didnt found much out . though ist good to know now the Sources and ist also nice that an Veteran from the create a servant 1 time is here !
Jonathan: Best Hero Sidekick i can say ,reliable and well thought out .
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Hassan of the Demonic Eye :a very good and interesting Assassin can it be that you had Inspiration gotten from Erice Utsumni as she also houses and uses Spirits ?
also des her noblephantasm reminds me on False Asssassins Zabaniya Zabaniya: Unfeeling Patrolling Spirits
About the first Hassan am i personal the oppinion that he may be possesing a Connection to Maalik the Agel that administrate the Hellfire and is the leader of the Zabanyia Angels .
and the Picture of her magic circcles isnt sshowing up . and im curious hat would she think of this particular Shamaness ?and what do she think of People of other religious believes ?
and because i forgot it your Ariadne /Arachne is not bad i must say you have spend a great effort with her but im must admit that you spend a great deal of effort there though if you do something like this another time try to only Chose on class or side like Ariadne or Arachne like your could treat Arachne as form of Ariadne which manifest as "Ariadne Alter " example wise .
also your servant list is not accesible as it says invalid blog so look aftert hat perhaps have you the same Problem as BnEi15 .
please tell me what do you think of my Steller profile ?
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Menwearpink's Archer Esau is missing, from the Christianity and Judaism section.
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At first your Servant list is now accesable Curse ! and im glad that you like Steller About his Parameter at first his Mana rank is bosted by the Ghosts of the other Crew members and Abit also due to Sirenias influence and his Luck state is so high bcause he returned alive as you must think that a bit of luck is neccesary to survive These hardships so you can call it "plot armor" in some sense .
and i must admit that your Hassan is really good as there are some other Hassans made by the others like on which were the original Zabaniya: Ichor of Reverie user and i self have thought on to make one or two Hassan servants so can i see the difficulty it can have to make one.
I do really think that Ada (that is beside her nickname she gave herself as she gave her self the Name "Ada Muso" which Comes from Adanasti and Musume as Adanasti means "go away" in the Cherokee language and it was also a form of protective chant which in the legends of the Tsul Kalu was the only way to free oneself from his grasp and influence. and she took the Ada =go and Musume which she learned means Girl in the same manner so that her Name means the going Girl in that sshe try to continue to life ) would get along with your Hassan and between both of them are some similarities like that your Hassan uses Ghosts and my Shamanes the Assistence of Spirits ,also are both dutifull in their religious practises and are ironclad in their view of defending Innocents and punish evildoeers .
and correct me if im wrong but i get the Feeling that she may get along with Steller ? and just out of curiousity hav e you other servants in planning ?
Also im now curious what do she think of kings actually like my Jimmu or how she would think if she Encounters other Religion Gods like my Hades or HermeTris am i curious ?
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I'm blown away there's so much good new content that it'll take some time for me to gather the right words to review them all. For now, how about we do with a little incentive... Hassan? Amazingly well-constructed. Steeler? This dude slaps. Jonathan? If David doesn't wanna marry this guy I do PLEASE I DO. Autolycus? "Whoa!" doesn't even cover it. Saint-Exupery? I want to live inside this sheet this is how much I loved it. Hodr? OH MY GOD???
Anyway, as you can see, I don't find a single bad thing about our latest entries and this is amazing. Ya'll on a roll.
ASSASSINTrue Name: Sir Daniel
Alignment: Neutral Good
Place of Origins: Germany (Arthurian lore)
Alternate Classes: Lancer, Berserker, Assassin
Parameters:
STR - C
END - B
AGI - A
MGI - D
LUK - B
NP - A
Info:
Height/Weight: 5’10 ”/ 150lbs
Likes: Solo adventuring, sour food
Dislikes: Waiting of any kind, iniquity, clingy women
Talents: Subsistence, deductive reasoning, swordplay
Natural Enemy: King Matur
Attribute: Man
Traits: Servant, Human, King, Male
Armaments:
Several swords or varying length and size suitable for close-quarters combat or throwing, in addition to his “main” sword. His attire has been expertly crafted in regards to his fighting style preferences, and is so littered with traps and Mystic Codes that his body itself can be considered a distinct weapon.
Class Skills:
Presence Concealment: A
Hides one's presence as a Servant. Suitable for spying. It is possible to disappear completely and become nearly impossible to be detected. The rank of Presence Concealment drops considerably when preparing to attack.
Daniel wears the skinned flesh of a mermaid soaked in the blood of a dragon, which Daniel removed from an enemy knight and now wears beneath his armor as a sort of compression suit. This suit and his own careful planning allowed him to successfully hide in plain sight from an ogre. Notably, Daniel was also able to sneak up and behead the ogre and its entire entourage without ever being discovered.
Personal Skills:
Eye of the Mind (False): B
A natural talent to foresee/sense and avoid danger on the basis of an innate 6th sense, intuition, or prescience. The accuracy of this instinct can be augmented by experience. The ability also grants an effect of offering resistance against penalties caused by visual obstructions.
Danger avoidance by means of intuition. High-speed calculation of potential outcomes is performed prior to any dangerous event arising, allowing for snap judgment calls seemingly made several steps into the future, even should there be several dozen independent points of stimulus. Deduction is made competently despite omitting the verification process entirely. A blade cast by a master, and refined even further by ordeals and adventures.
From fighting Gawain, Yvain, and Percival all at once to a standstill, to immediately deciding upon an appropriate method to defeat the dwarf of the Dark Mountain, to surviving war through seven full armies while suffering nary a scratch. DanielÂ’s mind is constantly active; pursuing logical courses of action into the future has had a large impact on his personality and way of life.
Subversive Activities: C++
The talent to reduce the enemy forces in the preliminary stages before going into battle. An expert of traps. However, the higher the ranking of this Skill, the more one's spiritual status as a hero declines.
Though he is undoubtedly a hero, the actions he took to achieve victory were somewhat questionable. Within the framework of Arthurian narrative, success is usually decided by oneÂ’s physical prowess and commitment to the ethos of chivalry. While possessing such qualities, Daniel, however, also exhibits list (German: cunning) in order to defeat his enemies.
Because he has several instances of employing his cunning to destabilize enemy forces of varying sizes--from a single individual to several thousand--this Skill scales according to the size of the enemy force, size of friendly forces, and time allotted beforehand. An average of 30% enemy force reduction.
Beast Slayer: B
Beast-Slayer is the ability to unleash a special attack towards Magical Beasts and wild animals.
An eradicator of multiple different types of Phantasmal Species. However, his methods have nothing to do with the nature of exploiting any one opponent's individual Mystery, but rather an understanding of the mindset of Magical Beasts. By interpreting the decision-making process of his enemies, Daniel is able to prepare a suitable attack.
Knight of the Blossoming Valley: A
Daniel’s unique Personal Skill, derived from his existence as the quintessential “scout” among King Arthur’s many knights. A forward-operating unit that conducts wetwork on his lonesome, only coming across acquaintances by pure chance. And yet, the lives of these individuals who meet the strange knight are forever changed for the better. Conditionally grants a composite load of Independent Action and a boost in fighting spirit for his companions, so long as Daniel can believe himself to be “moving towards his goal”. Given his personality and mindset, however, it’s a crapshoot whether Daniel’s and his Master’s goals will ever align.
The name of the Skill is derived from DanielÂ’s full title as Daniel of the Blossoming Valley. The fact that both the name and effects resemble a Skill belonging to (a version) of his King is all complete coincidence. Still, it gives him a warm feeling to think about.
Noble Phantasm:
Juran ~ Demonic Sword of the Dark Mountain
Anti-Unit
Rank: B
Range: 1~3
Max Target: 1
A nameless sword, it is the Noble Phantasm of Daniel. It is a longsword of German design with a slightly extended hilt that allows for wielding it with both hands. Daniel has named it after its creator for ease of use.
He received it from the evil dwarf, Juran. After King MaturÂ’s giant delegate came to ArthurÂ’s court and threatened the king with subjugation, Daniel struck off on his own to eliminate the threat before it became an issue for his king. Becoming lost, he eventually discovered the giantÂ’s brother, and meant to kill him, before the Lady of the Dark Mountain ambushed him with pleas of help.
This was the task of eliminating Juran, who meant to have the Lady as his wife. Wielding a demonic sword of his own craft, Juran was said to be invincible against anyone who stood in his way. Manipulating the code of chivalry, Daniel convinced Juran to duel “fairly” with two normal swords. When these shattered, Daniel recovered the magic sword first and immediately smote the dwarf. Nor was Juran the last of Daniel’s targets, as he went on to slay the giant and many more Phantasmal Species.
A bleedingly simple Noble Phantasm, Juran is a blade of Phantasmal make that temporarily enforces the Principle of the wielder, reflected back onto the opponent. Something of a conceptual "child" of the dagger belonging to a Colchian witch, and the sword belonging to the Angel of Death. Death is not actualized, nor are magical contracts negates. Instead, Juran simply allows for a temporary depletion of magical value until it approaches the negatives: tricking magecraft into thinking of it as "background noise" after which it is able to easily pierce the target's heart.
Bonus NPs
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Personality and Relationships
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“I won’t lose!”
Saber of Troy
True Name: Troilus
Title: Beloved Prince of Troy
Gender: Male
Alignment: Neutral Good
Source: Classical Mythology
Attribute: Sky
Likes: Horses, Family
Dislikes: Carrots, Restriction
Talents: Optimism
Natural Enemy: Achilles
Personality and History
Parameters and Skills
Noble Phantasms
Notes
That's a pretty good Troilus sheet. Similar to mine in some ways. I have to say though that his NPs are probably more representative of the character than my version. Giving him Hector's sword as an inherited Phantasm was a really cool thematic choice. For his second NP I'm a little surprised there's no true-name release where he can project the walls outward as a barrier or something (maybe at the expense of leaving his physical body vulnerable).
Why not SSW? Go ahead and post them when you get the chance.
(T)roy truly is our boy