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Usually NPs are based around the Servant's greatest claim to fame in life. For example, my Gunnar's most famous feat was dying in battle to protect his home, and no invader managed to get past him. Therefore, I made that event into an NP with some extra effects instead of, say, slapping Battle Continuation as one of his Skills. Skills are some of the more minor feats or something that just shows up generally throughout the Servant's life (with some exceptions). Gunnar was a viking, so he'd have Berserk as a Skill. Kafka was an author who drew inspiration from the human psyche (without some incredible feat specifically tied to the ability), so he'd have Human Observation as a Skill, while his NP is the Metamorphosis, one of his most famous literature works.
There can be some gray areas every now and then, but in general, that's how I go about it.
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On a more meta level, just as Koga said, NPs tend to have more effects compared to Skills, so if I don't have enough ideas to transform the Servant's greatest feat into an NP, I turn them into a Skill instead. Like Hooke was famous for proposing the titular Hooke's Law, but I couldn't think of any other effects for it beyond a "countering barrier", and I don't think that's big enough to warrant an NP. So I made that into a Skill and made Micrographia, her other claim to fame, as her NP instead. Sometimes it can be a case-per-case basis.
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Creator's note
"The greatest Gift I could possibly ever give to Humanity is my own presence, they needed someone to serve, someone to worship. I gave them that someone."
Face Claim
"Kneel, mortal, for you stand in the presence of God. [...] Very well, your worship proves you are worthy of my presence, let it be known that I, Apsethus, shall aid you in your quest."
Class: Caster
Other Classes: -
True Name: Apsethus the Libyan
Alignment: Neutral Evil
Origin: Libya, 2nd century AD.
Parameters:
STR: E
END: E
AGI: E
MGI: B-
LCK: B-
NP: C
Likes: Being praised, recieving gifts, birds and bird-watching.
Dislikes: Being called a Servant, Greek Heroes, Saints.
Talent: Training Birds, lying.
Natural Enemy: Heroes with the Divinity Skill, Saints.
Armament: A small wand, with a ruby on top of it.
Catalyst: A live Parrot, books where the main character is considered a heretic, a page of his lost manuscript.
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Noble Phantasm(s)
Description
Lore
Relationships
Last edited by Vilen; August 6th, 2021 at 01:42 AM.
Apsethus: Interesting sheet for a pretty obscure historical figure. His first NP is a fitting representation of his delusional style of rule and feels like it could be used for some clever bluffs in a fight. The second NP is amusing that his greatest feat is summoning a bunch of cute parrots, but I don't get why it's EX-rank. Unless it's a joke on how much he hypes himself up (which I don't think should affect NP rankings) I'd say all the effects could easily fall under a C or even D-ranked NP. I'm also not sure if Animal Control (Parrot) (and personally I'd name it Familiar (Parrots) for consistency with existing Skills) is really necessary given said NP, when you could just mention under the latter he has a degree of control over the parrots he summons, but I guess it adds some flavor.
Hmm, a small note. When i searched him, i found he lived during 2nd century AD. Where did you get 630 BC?
First of all, thank you, appreciate the compliment.
The second NP should not have been an EX rank, I guess that's the price of posting it when I was tired, thank you for actually making me notice, I'll go ahead and change that right now.
The skill was mostly for flavor, yeah, because I wanted this guy to feel like a very bad Servant, one you don't really want to summon if winning the Grail War is your objective, and giving him mostly useless skills felt appropriate.
I will say, though, that Animal Control is an actual skill. I also found the idea of this guy's Master needing to adopt a Parrot for him because he did not want to summon one himself to be pretty amusing and giving it a lesser rank makes it possible to somewhat repeat his legend, the parrots he trains are not completely loyal, those that he summons are.
I went back through my notes and it turns out I was just straight up wrong. You are correct, so thanks for making me notice that too.
Hope you found the sheet to be at least partially entertaining, though.
"Hahaha! Finally, I'm free from that damned treasury! Servant Berserker here, ready to run wild!"
True Name: Enchanted Moura
Class: Berserker
Alt. Class: Gatekeeper
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Region: Portugal
Source: Portuguese/Galician Mythology
Armament: Fist (Gold)
Parameters:
Strength: A+
Endurance: C+
Agility: D
Mana: C
Luck: B
Class Skills:
Madness Enhancement D+
The Class Skill that characterizes a Berserker, raises basic parameters and strengthens one's physical abilities in exchange for hindering mental capacities and/or in exchange for their sense of reason. Usually her madness is quite low, allowing for stable communication but when her "trigger" is touched upon too many times, it ranks up.
Personal Skills:
Golden Rule (Wealth and Body) C+
A unique skill that combines two kinds of Golden Rule. While she holds a body that befits an existence similar to that of a goddess, the favor of the skill is skewed heavily towards the amount of wealth she holds under her thumb. Mountains upon mountains of precious gold, silver, and gems are under protection.
Enchanted Guardian C
A skill that denotes the suggestion that is put on one's mind to incite them into eternal guardianship. Originally A rank, due to being in the Berserker class, one known to be hard to control, it has weakened significantly. However, the core suggestion of protecting a treasure still plagues her mind and will activate her madness enhancement.
Shapeshifting C
a Skill that refers to both borrowing bodies and appearance change. It is a method used by the millenary spirits of foxes and badgers of China that are put on par with Tamamo-no-Mae. It is also one of the powers of a vampire. In legend, Berserker was commonly associated with serpents and was known to be able to transform into them.
Noble Phantasm
Personality
Creator's Note: Here's another simple sheet from me. I imagine her to be a native resident of that one Brazilian? Lostbelt....the one with Carnival King Momo. A neutral figure that you'd meet, and fight with or against, multiple with her bouncing around different masters so her fight vary between being hard or easy depending on which master is currently under. Seriously, does anyone know what page Momo is in?
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@Vance: I will forever be grateful when someone remembers of Portugal. Gotta be honest, I have searched for many portuguese people to write about, specifically as a Berserker, and while I have stumbled upon the Enchanted Moura, i never ever had the idea to make her a servant, so bravo for your idea.
Moving on to the servant itself, the class is okay, fitting her since she is not a human and her connection with the role of protecting her treasure through the skill of enchanted guardian being the focus of her madness is a nice touch. Golden Rule and Shapeshift fit her lore, but I am curious, aside from making gold constructs, what does the NP do? It seems a little bit high without being really clear of its power. Are the gold constructs powerful, can she do it endlessly, etc... I guess my question is, the rank B is for what exactly?
In the end, the sheet seems a bit short and incomplete but i enjoyed seeing Portugal appearing again, nonetheless.
Here is Momo
Last edited by Master_Therion; August 6th, 2021 at 06:27 AM.
allright folks, compilation is done, ready to post, spam some messages so I can get it out
"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
University of Formatting | Gallery of Potential | Memorandum of the Extra Class Kings
Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
Create-a-Servant 4 soon.
I'm putting a message here to get me closer to post 400, my shitpost is almost ready.
Last edited by BnEl15; August 6th, 2021 at 08:50 AM.
Uh okay... So like, as I mentioned yesterday, I felt like writing up a sheet for the Pict King Óengus mac Fergusa, and it bemuses me that while trying to fill in the "Relationships" section, the only friend this giant Hulk-like man has is the tiny twig-like Astolfo. Not to mention I am trying my hardest to not just turn him into Django and have him drag a coffin around everywhere to put his enemies in.
"Here's a bangin lil' tune about takin' on The Man!"
(Check out my Super Special Awesome Servant Compendium here)
Message to help with the posting of the compilation.
I'll take the chance to also give some feedback on...
Enchanted Moura: I had never heard of the figure before your sheet, so I had to do some minor research to fully understand the concept, I feel like a small tab with lore would have helped with that.
I can't really comment on statistics and ranks as I will fully admit I myself don't have the best understanding of them, but they seem pretty fair to me. I also don't fully get her Noble Phantasm, is it just the ability to create and mold gold into whatever form she wants? You mention her making constructs out of it, so is it something similar to Avicebron's Item Construction, just not limited to Golems? If it is like that would it not make more sense to just give her Item Construction as a skill? Hope I don't sound too harsh with this, I'm just curious about your thought process.
What I do like is her personality and especially the idea of her hair changing colour to match her current state of mind, I find that to be quite cool.
"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
University of Formatting | Gallery of Potential | Memorandum of the Extra Class Kings
Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
Create-a-Servant 4 soon.
Like BnEl15 said, you can also put people who resemble people he know of or even have dialogue lines with people who share his idiologies.
Enchanted Moura:Now this is a new feeling for me. Outside of Therion and the Portuguese Royal family I've never had someone make a servants with my Lostbelt specifically in mind. Even more so fitting because its name is 'El Dorado'. You know, the 'city of gold'. So imagine my surprise when I saw this sheet and realized I had completely missed this legendary figure who fits my setting so well.
Really, nice work! Though as mentioned above, a small lore section might help people understand better the origins of the servant.
That also reminds me I have to go update my Managerie again. Momo probable slipped through the cracks. Thank you for catching that too!
Edit: King Momo was added to the Managerie.
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Servant Sheet Compilation
'Winner' of the Legendary Jack-Off
Top-level creator's note
Watcher of Las Vegas
-- The King Lives On --
First Shadow
Second Shadow
Third Shadow
Fourth Shadow
Class: Watcher
Other Classes: Faker
True Name: Elvis Presley(s)
Alignment: Lawful Good, Chaotic Neutral, Lawful Nobbu, Lawful Neutral
Origin: United States of America (20th century)
Parameters:
STR: -
END: -
AGI: -
MGI: -
LCK: -
NP: C
Likes: Rock n' roll, finding a 'worthy' successor, fame and fortune, forging his own legacy(?), country music
Dislikes: Copyright, those who 'waste' talent, overly serious people, a certain atsumori performer, hijinks perpetrated by the other three
Talent: Singing and songwriting, voice and accent impersonation, being a cute mascot, dramatic posing
Natural Enemy: The Elvis Presley Enterprises, Inc.
Armament: -
Catalyst: Summoning performed in Graceland or Las Vegas, a powerful desire to succeed in showbiz
Class Skills
Personal Skills
Noble Phantasm(s)
Description
Lore
Relationships
Bond CE
Creator's Notes
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