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Alter-Ego of Kumamoto:
Appearance:
True Name: Jizo-Kumamon
Alignment: Neutral Good
Alternate Classes: Lancer, Rider, Caster, Saver, Voyager
Strength- C
Agility- B
Endurance- EX
Mana- C
Luck- A
NP- EX
Personality
Class Skills:
Bodhisattva's Divine Core- B
The Divine Core of a Bodhisattva, heavenly sage on the way to transcendence whose prayed for to guide others along the same path. Jizo is a passionately worshipped deity across the East Asian World, particularly in Japan where he was appealed to for healing and protection during travel. However because he turned away from full Enlightenment to lend succor to those still on earth his rank is unable to reach higher than A. Taking the vessel of a "mascot" has further lowered it, although Alter-Ego gladly accepts this indignity to continue ministering to those in need.
Independent Navigation- C
A variant of Independent Action normally held by the Voyager Class. Given to those famed for travelling through distant lands, whether to reach a destination or simply savoring the scenery along the way. Provides the Servant a bonus to Endurance and constant supply of magical energy per turn so long as they continue on their expedition. Jizo is known for journeying, both in physical distance and the transfiguration his legend underwent. As Kumamon he mainly stays in his namesake Kumamoto Prefecture but would tour outside it to comfort people in times of disaster. These aspects combine to impart Alter-Ego this Skill, although it's not as high as it would be in the proper Voyager Class.
Personal Skills:
Savior's Shell (Mascot)- A
Denotes the Servant's existence as Divine Spirit housed in a manmade vessel. In his Saver and Voyager personages this encompasses the commonplace statues erected for Jizo across Japan, all of which enshrine a portion of his. As "the face of the god" in popular culture this manifests Jizo with the physique of a "living statue". However as Alter-Ego it has been adjusted to represent his freshest incarnation, the bear-mascot Kumamon. In the modern age where humans no longer put their faith in spirits and deities to ease their ills, Jizo has taken a new form to continue what he does best; bringing happiness to the people.KamiSpirit
Grants Alter-Ego the body of the mascot-character, Kumamon. A rotund black bear with stubby limbs, white mouth and blushing red cheeks. Despite bears being normally threatening he is devoid of any such thing; an existence that radiates charmingly innocent joy and wonder. Those around Alter-Ego have their spirits refreshed and are imbued with, washing away mental interferences such as pressure, worry and demoralization. Furthermore "hopes" and "wishes" entrusted to Alter-Ego are converted into magical energy in his hollow mascot-suit, empowering Alter-Ego's parameters proportional to the people invested in him.genkipositivity
As mentioned Alter-Ego's "body" is a baggy mascot-suit. This imparts a peculiar semblance of Battle Continuation. His "arms" are separable and can be freely reattached like sleeves, and seemingly critical blows can just cut harmlessly through his fabric frame. While Alter-Ego still reacts to damage he takes, he does so in a comical and exaggerated fashion that makes it unclear if he was really hurt at all, unnerving foes. Destroying Alter-Ego's entire body or targeting his Spiritual Core inside the suit are the only ways to truly kill him, although the latter is difficult since he can freely shift it around. Inheriting the concept of Alter-Ego'swhich in legend expanded to cover an entire mountain, the inside of his suit is an Imaginary Number Space and he can even envelop his Master inside to protect them.kasayamonk-robes
Monstrous Strength- D
An ability inherent to monsters and beasts; conferring a temporary augmentation to one's Strength parameter for a time determined by the Skill's own ranking. Due to taking the form of a bear Alter-Ego naturally receives this Skill. However since he's a friendly bear, as well as rumors over his poor shape (although Alter-Ego himself would insistently deny that) who'd never threaten humans he only has it at a low rank. Would be higher if summoned in his Kumamon Mask persona where he awakens his ursine fury to pulverize evildoers with flurries of fiery fists.
Wandering God- A+
A Skill comprising the effects of Territory Infringement, Presence Concealment, and Espionage, it marks Alter-Ego's status as a deity belonging to multiple pantheons, and his ability to seamlessly situate himself within different cultures. As Jizo Alter-Ego spread across the entire East Asian World, taking on aspects of local folk beliefs and divinities. However it was in Japan where his veneration reached its peak. The countless statues of a round-faced child monk scattering the country testify to his vast journey. Rather than a god sequestered in temples Jizo's icons are visible in everyday settings where people from all walks of life can visit entrusting their cares and worries to him. Now as Kumamon Alter-Ego's likeness further proliferates, continuing with the same goal of bringing happiness to humans. In this role it represents his unassuming nature as mascot and ability to appear in a variety of places.
Unascending Vow- EX
A Skill ascribed from Jizo's original Saint Graph. As a sage who had the potential to reach transcendence he vowed to remain bound to the human world until all souls were released from suffering. This would normally donate EX-ranked Battle Continuation signifying refusal to pass on until his duty is accomplished, however that is made redundant in his current body. Even so Alter-Ego still benefits from powerful mental resistance and immunity to instant-death effects that would preemptively end his crusade. Furthermore he can sense suffering nearby akin to a "Salvation Counter" that notifies him of everyone needing help in the area.
Noble Phantasms
So I got inspired to write up tsugumi's Alter-Ego Jizo/Kumamon idea. Tried to work in the various aspects. As usual comments and critique would be welcome. Thanks for reading y'all!
Last edited by RoydGolden; May 15th, 2023 at 01:00 AM.
Berserker of Kyivan Rus
Without further ado, Master. Tell me, where are our enemies?
Class: Berserker
True Name: Svyatoslav
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Place of Origin: Kyivan Rus
Armament: Twin swords
STRENGE — B
ENDURANCE — B
AGILITY — C
MANA — D
LUCK — C
NP — C
Class skills:
Mad Enhancement C
The Class Skill that characterizes a Berserker, raising basic parameters and strengthens one's physical abilities in exchange of hindering mental capacities and/or in exchange for their sense of reason. Rank up for all parameters, but most of one's reason is robbed. Berserker is always eager to fight. He is obsessed with seeking battle and at times only a command seal from the Master can calm him down.
Personal skills:
Charisma C –
This is a composite Skill consisting of a person's charm as well as the natural talent to command or unify an army or country. Increases the ability of allies during group battles. Being a Rus duke and a talented military leader, Berserker had an army devoted to him, ready to follow his orders. However, his charisma only extends to military people.
Forward, my glorious friends! The booty will be ours!
Military Tactics
This is tactical knowledge used not for one-on-one combat situations, but for battles where many are mobilized. Bonus modifiers are provided during use of one's own Anti-Army Noble Phantasm or when dealing against an enemy Anti-Army Noble Phantasm. Berserker has been a warrior since childhood. He began his first battle at the age of four, when he threw a spear at a Drevlyan horseman. He spent his whole life in battles and he met his death in an unequal battle
I love bloody combat! I love it when my blades ring and drink blood! I love rich loot, I love hiking, training, and when the enemy city is on fire! Because struggle is life! In this war, I want to meet a truly worthy opponent, like the Pecheneg Kurya. Do you know what I would say to that bowl? My desire is simple - I want to be in all the conflicts that have happened and will happen in history! Including the Holy Grail Wars
Druzhina B
Personal royal army. It was the same necessary element in ancient Russian society as the duke. The duke needed military force, both to ensure internal order and to defend against external enemies. The combatants were a real military force, always ready for battle, as well as advisers to the duke. In addition to the military, they carried managerial and judicial functions. This skill allows the Berserker to create his own duplicates. Each of them has different weapons - swords, bows, spears, clubs, axes, javelins and so on. This ability comes from the fact that Berserker himself was difficult to distinguish from an ordinary warrior
Ha! Why did I need boilers and tents? There is still no sense in the battle from them.
Noble Phantasm:
[Иду на вы!
Battle Warning Conqueror
C
Berserker's practice and his standard warning to his enemies. This Noble Phantasm is a mark. A berserker can mark an enemy if they know or can imagine their appearance. The enemy, wherever he is, will hear the loud voice of Berserker, who shouts to him - Idu na Vy!
After that, the Berserker will always know where the target is, even if he hides in the Reality Marble. Berserker and his counterparts will chase the enemy until they finally catch up. It's useless to run. He will find you
Description:
Likes: Bloody battles, worthy opponents,
Dislikes: intrigue, modern ways of warfare, pacifists
Natural enemy: Kurya
Berserker’s True name is Svyatoslav, Prince of Novgorod and Grand Duke of Kyiv, became famous as a commander.
Under Svyatoslav, Kyivan Rus was largely ruled by his mother, Princess Olga, first because of Svyatoslav's infancy, then because of his constant presence in military campaigns. When returning from a campaign against Bulgaria, Svyatoslav was killed by the Pechenegs on the Dnieper rapids
Svyatoslav is a knight of the blood, who immediately after the call will immediately look for a fight. He revels in battles, seeing in them the meaning of life. For him, this is something like a game, and death, injury and unnecessary violence - what to do, these are its rules.
At the same time, Svyatoslav despises modern methods of warfare. He recognizes only close combat, with the exception of bows. Likewise, he cannot stand those who fight for victory and those who use any, even dirty tricks for the sake of this very victory. In his madness, Svyatoslav comes to the point that he does not hold a grudge against Kurya, the Pecheneg, who beheaded him - in the end he defeated him in a fair fight.
Regarding faith, Svyatoslav is a pagan, and respects exclusively Perun, the god of thunder and the patron saint of warriors. The master pacifist will not be able to find a common language with Svyatoslav.
Despite all this, Svyatoslav will never attack the unarmed and treats children well, except for the fact that he does not always understand that edged weapons are not the best gift in the modern era.
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And what is the best way to write - Kievan Rus or Kyivan Rus?
Last edited by Shezum3; March 21st, 2023 at 11:35 PM.
There's no point saying "oh I'm the king of what I'm the king of what"
Dude you're either a king(or queen) or a dick on this forum.
I didn't say I was king or queen of something
Oh, king, eh, very nice. How'd you get that, eh? By exploiting Servant classes! By hanging on to outdated imperialist dogma which perpetuates the social and formatting differences in this thread! If there's ever going to be any progress...
I didn't vote for any of you! Strange women lying in ponds distributing Noble Phantasms is no basis for a system of government!
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god I did not mean it that way, geez.
rephrasing time
You're either a chad for making sound and reasonable comments and posts here, or a dick for not thinking through how you phrase yourself before saying weird and commonly (as well as socially) unacceptable things. That's that.
(That comment was made solely because I saw that one little discussion between Dreamerless and Rey on Player. Wanted to give my two cents on that matter, nothing more. I may have been overreacting if it was a simple discussion.)
On a separate note, I said last October that Boyi is coming. Hopefully I can finish him up before March ends.
edit: This post was made before I realised Dreamerless was joking. I apologise for overreacting.
Last edited by Spelror; March 22nd, 2023 at 11:26 AM.
Royds Alter Ego: What a wacky and cute concept. Hed be a joy as a freebie in the game
whats missing for me tho is the reason why you made him the vessel. you said you read an article? Either its not clear or im too tired to pick it up after work. Outside of that, not sure about the divine core. Saver Buddha got none either. which is strange to not even have divinity...i blame it on him being an enemy there.
still a wholesome sheet i enjoyed
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They're both patrons of Kumamoto known for healing people mentally/spiritually. Something something modernity turns people away from gods and to mascots and the "Kami" concept in Japan (where deities can be dispersed and inherent to even small objects) makes it easy to accept mascots as gods. I'm not sure on all the details but the connection seemed compelling enough. And thanks for the feedback!
This one has been in development hell for a lo~ng time. This was back when Cursed was around, and I even workshopped parts with him. The only thing that held me back was the companion Servant, which I finally stopped dragging my feet on.
Prostrate yourself, magus. Before you stands Priamus, son of Alexander, son of Joshua and Scamandrius, the daughter of Hector, son of Priam. You may be my master in name, but my true king commands your kind like common soldiers. You have my blade, but only Lucius Dominus Caesar Augustus Tiberius will have my allegiance.
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Class: Rider
Other Classes: Saber
True Name: Priamus
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Place of Origin: Britain/Rome
Height: 152 cm.
Weight: 62 kilo.
Likes: Lucius. Fighting. Hunting. Being seen as herself.
Dislikes: Judgmental people. Being seen as a woman.
Natural Enemy: Gawain
Parameters:
STR: C
END: C
AGI: C
MGI: E
LCK: C
NP: B
Class Skills:
Magic Resistance (C):
Cancel spells with a chant below two verses. Cannot defend against magecraft on the level of High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals.
Riding (D):
Is able to manage beasts and vehicles with a modicum of skill. While there is no anecdotes of her riding a horse, it was one of the many things she learned during her time under the emperor, barely qualifying her for this rank.
Personal Skills:
Grisandoles (D):
Before marrying Lucius, she spent several years disguised as a man named Grisandoles and then several others as a knight named Priamus. While it loses its effect when heavily damaged, this Skill allows her to manifest a suit of armor that conceals her identity and appearance the same way as Secret of Pedigree, though that is all it does.
Sunslayer (C):
While not someone whose legend is actually related to killing the sun, Riders skill was great enough to almost overcome Gawain even near the height of his power. This Skill is manifested due to the circumstance that Rider, a knight never noted before, was able to match the legendary Gawain.
The greater her foes legend and reputation is compared to her own, the more her luck stat rises, capping out at A+.
Noble Phantasm
The White Stag: Pure Prophetic(C)StagMagus
When Rider sought the wild man foretold by the stag, the creature appeared to guide her to her goal. This creature, who was Merlin in disguise, has become linked to her, appearing as her mount when in the Rider Class.
The mount itself is seems somewhat useless. It listens to her commands, but it seems to go against them on whims. It communicates to her in meaningless comments that occasionally have prophetic significance, and it seems intent on leading her into dangerous situations instead of away from them.
In many ways, the Stag has taken on several traits from the mage that took its appearance, often being more hinderance than aid to the one it serves. Rider seems to tolerate mostly due to the advantages it does bring, but more often than not annoyed by the Stags behavior.
Priamus: Wounded Redemption (B)
Anti-Unit
A golden blade of Irish origin that was an heirloom of Luciuss family, given to Rider as a gift. She was never told its name, and the sword is instead bestowed the name of her persona while wielding it. It's likely only Lucius remembers its True Name.
A passive Noble Phantasm, this sword inflicts wounds that cannot be healed naturally or with magecraft. A powerful curse without any known solution other than the destruction of the weapon, this weapon is extremely useful in the long term. Should one fight the same opponent multiple times or over the course of a long battle, the effects debilitate the enemy, allowing victory to become an eventuality.
Though her skill certainly had a hand in it, it was this weapon that contributed greatly to Riders duel with Gawain.
Lore
Personality
Relationships
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[Ender Lilies-Bloom Intro]Creator Notes
Last edited by Morg van Destro; March 23rd, 2023 at 04:14 PM.
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I'm not waiting a whole year to post this idea
Well, here I am, mjį. Where are they? What do you mean, what do I mean? If youve summoned me, you have some kids you want me to eat, right?
Source
Class: Assassin
Other Qualifying Classes: Rider, Berserker, Monster
True Name: Jólakötturinn, the Yule Cat
Source: Norse Mythology, Icelandic Christmas Folklore
Region: Iceland
Alignment: Lawful Evil
Attribute: Heaven
Height: 144 cm / 4'9''
Weight: 68kg / 150 lbs
Traits: Servant, Female, Demonic Beast, Humanoid, Kemono, Weak to Enuma Elish
Catalyst: Remains of a certain ancient chariot, performing summoning in Iceland during Christmas festivities
Talent: Frightening children, extensive complaining
Natural Enemy: Grżla, Odin
Likes: Her previous owner, How the Grinch Stole Christmas (2000 film), Modern music (rock, punk, emo, other adjacent genres), Lazy bastards getting what they deserve, Children
Dislikes: Her current owner, How the Grinch Stole Christmas (all other versions), Hallmark, most modern Christmas traditions, Furry subculture, Children
Parameters:
STR: A+
END: A+
AGI: D+
MGI: D
LCK: B
NP: A
BOND 0
BOND 1
BOND 2
BOND 3
BOND 4
BOND 5
BOND 6
BOND 7
BOND 8
BOND 9
BOND 10Author's Notes
Oh don't worry, it's fine. Honestly I'm a little flattered you thought to use my style. I mean, my format is based on WhiteFrenzy's, modified to have less BB code and images because I write my stuff on my phone so minimal BB code is preferred for me. And...I'm gonna end up rambling. Basically, it's fine. I'm glad you think the format was what you wanted for this sheet. As for the sheet itself...
I'm probably the last person you want to comment on it because of how biased I am, even more so with you using my formatting style, but since I'm here, I might as well.
I like it! You say it's conceptually messy, but it didn't feel like it to me. Maybe it's because it reminded me of some of my own sheets (notably, and perhaps fittingly, Frau Holle and Loki=Rod), but it felt easy enough to understand and follow. Of course, with you using my format, which I do because it just fits my preferences, I also happen to like the story you told. How much of that bias, or my bias towards your sheets in general, is causing me to like it, I can't tell, but I enjoyed it. A grumpy cat in every sense of the word. I felt bad she doesn't like Christmas...but I can hardly blame her. Out of the skills and NPs, the Stalking skill stood out the most to me. It feels like, you know, the kind of thing "horror monsters" would have, where they could appear "anywhere" and you can feel them nearby but you can't see them. And...yeah. That's it.
Okay not actually it, because why not...
Loki=Rod
Dialogue 1:
"Well well, the Yule Cat. Or rather...Freyja's trusty stead. I don't think she liked me then and she certainly wouldn't like me now. I mean, I'm a protector of the home, which includes children, so I'm supposed to be against her. But well...I can't really dislike her, you know? Her heart's in the right place, and I'm not one to talk when it comes to what I do to get a point across, especially in my past as Loki."
In response to Jólakötturinn:
"... I know my words mean nothing to you, but I hope you find peace."
(Contrary to Yule Cat's perception of the Trickster, Loki=Rod understands why she's doing it. He doesn't like it, obviously, but it is more pity than anything, and try as he might, he can't hide it when he knows that she's right about his behavior as Loki as opposed to Rod: he is probably the last being you'd want to protect children. But protect him he shall, no matter what others think, just as she punishes them, no matter what others think)
Frau Holle:
Dialogue 1:
"Oh, her, Jólakötturinn. Ha... She just reminds how I was like before. I almost regret what I did, along with many other things. So I get why she does it...but because I stopped, I still want her to stop."
In response to Jólakötturinn:
"...yes, I am aware it's just as bad, but unlike you, I used to do that. Meanwhile you're now still eating children."
(Unsurprisingly, she is glaring at the Yule Cat)
(Of course, Frau Holle doesn't like her and tries to get her to stop eating children, if at least while she's summoned as a Servant, but not because she hates the cat. It's more because she sees her past self in her and wishes to help her to move on just as she did)
Author of:
Persona 5: Refraction (SV link; FF.net link)
"You didn't have to fight for me, you know." "And you didn't have to curl your hair so we'll look even more alike." Ren stared before he softly chuckled, Akira joining him not long after. With one simple decision as a child, Ren Amamiya goes to Tokyo alongside his little sister, Akira. (P5R Sibling AU) (Ren/Ann, Akechi/Fem!Akira)
Chapter 46 on: May 31, 2023
Velvet Throne
My list of my Servants! Still small for now.
Welp. Was originally gonna do Binder Sigyn (and Narfi and Nari) first. But then I was in the mood for ANGST and it took a while to actually write it out...but here is the result.
and hopefully it's good because i love these two and really wanna do 'em justice
also yes the most recent holy schlock war round inspired me to finish this"Ha... Ha... You... You called for us? A kinslayer who was forced into the act?"
"And a feeble spouse who could do nothing but watch her family suffer?"
"ha ha.
"Ha ha.
"Ha Ha...
"HAHAHAHA.
"Ha..."
"Well then, I hope you need Odin or his kin to be killed, as otherwise we..."
"...are not particularly the most...useful for you, 'Master'. But then again...
"You probably already knew that, didn't you?
"Why else would you summon me, Sigyn, the wife who has been forgetten..."
"...and me, Vali, the son who has been deemed an error."
Mother and Son
Class: Avenger
Other Eligible Classes: Lover, Binder, Ruler (Sigyn)
True Name: Sigyn and Vali
Alignment: True Neutral (both)
Origin: Norse Mythology
Attribute: Heaven
Height: 205 cm / 6'9'' (Sigyn); 190 cm / 6'3'' (Vali)
Weight: 77kg / 170 lbs (Sigyn); 83 kg / 183 lbs (Vali)
Traits: Servant, Female, Male, Divine, Humanoid, Weak to Enuma Elish, Trickster
Catalyst: Summoning an Avenger class Loki Servant; a rune bearing the title "Incantation-Fetter" paired with a wolf skin and spilled blood from one's kin
Talent: Dealing with Tricksters (both); gardening (Vali)
Natural Enemy: Odin, Vįli Odinson, anyone who hurts children, oathbreakers
Likes: Loki, his children, children, mischief (Sigyn); his family, flowers, mischief (Vali)
Dislikes: Boredom, Skadi, Odin, earthquakes anyone who hurts children (Sigyn); Odin, Vįli Odinson, history erasure (Vali)
Parameters:
STR: E - D+
END: A - B+
AGI: E - C+
MGI: A - C+
LCK: E - E+
NP: A+
BOND 0
BOND 1
BOND 2
BOND 3
BOND 4
BOND 5
BOND 6
BOND 7
BOND 8
BOND 9
BOND 10
(long) Author's Notes
Last edited by DracoScribe; March 23rd, 2023 at 09:51 PM. Reason: Merged two skills at a suggestion
Author of:
Persona 5: Refraction (SV link; FF.net link)
"You didn't have to fight for me, you know." "And you didn't have to curl your hair so we'll look even more alike." Ren stared before he softly chuckled, Akira joining him not long after. With one simple decision as a child, Ren Amamiya goes to Tokyo alongside his little sister, Akira. (P5R Sibling AU) (Ren/Ann, Akechi/Fem!Akira)
Chapter 46 on: May 31, 2023
Velvet Throne
My list of my Servants! Still small for now.
Priamus: I suppose as our resident Arthur-Otaku, I should chime in with some thoughts. Hmm...interesting choice to merge Priamus with Avenable, though I am certainly not opposed to merging very minor characters, especially when TM itself does it with major characters (looking at you Morgan-Morgause). It was probably a good shout to change Julius Caesar to Lucius Tiberius to have a more consistent timeline. The Noble Phantasm being just "sword that inflicts wounds that do not heal" is unfortunately rather mundane when NPs are supposed to be one of the centerpieces of their sheets.
Overall, not bad. A rather entertaining read.
Last edited by Skull; March 23rd, 2023 at 10:43 AM.
"Here's a bangin lil' tune about takin' on The Man!"
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The Nordic Duo: Neat sheet. 10 skills are bit much tho. Consider merging the two slayer skills because...duh. Godslayer (Kin) does it too and perhaps slims down the sheet a bit. I was kinda expecting that Valis FC would be Nils that uses Shapeshift to look like that, but then you come with Lyon. As someone that wants to use him as an FC because...he is one of my favorite characters in the franchise and in FEH (I know you play it too, gimme your code, girl), i was upset you used him first. but i wanna use all of his art if i find a fitting character.
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Priamus's very small role after his fight with Gawain made it easy to just end his life there, meaning the merging worked out in that regard. Same with her story basically ending after getting married. As for Lucius, it's generally thought that the emperor she marries was either him or the guy before him, so it was really a no-brainer to me, and, with the image of him I have in my mind, it also aided in her transition to Priamus. As for the sword, it probably would've been more interesting to make her a Rider with the White Stag as her mount. Just Merlin being a deer that makes Merlin comments while she rides him into battle. Hell, maybe I should just make that change. Would put another Rider on my comp.
Also, I feel you on Morgan.
Done.
Last edited by Morg van Destro; March 23rd, 2023 at 04:15 PM.
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...tfw hindsight is 20/20. aaahhhh
But seriously, thanks for the suggestion. It feels so obvious in hindsight. I'mma edit that in as soon as I can. I'm glad you found it neat despite the bloated amount of skills. ;>_>
Nils...never occured to me, and not just because of me mainly wanting "purple" and "fire emblem" for the human FC (traits I decided on because I already got the FCs I'm gonna use for Narfi and Nari and it's to parallel with them as well as "reference" Sigyn and Loki's color schemes). Idk, he doesn't give the vibes I wanted as opposed to Lyon, who I felt better matched it while also fitting the other criteria (and also i like him too but probably not as much as you soo...). ...i feel like saying sorry because that sucks but i already did it and am gonna stick with my choice of fc since i like it so muchand spent hours looking for just the art i wantedsooo...idk. i just feel like apologizing. Though for using him as an FC...maybe you could use Lyon for another Foreigner consideringyou're the king of foreignersyou-know-who-King's ties with Lyon could be a good used for that Foreigner's Other Presence/Elder God? ...yeah not much but just a thought and an attempt to help even a little bit.
But anyways, again, thanks for the feedba--
...wait
For real? ...the part of me in disbelief can't help but wonder if you're joking. But well, since you asked...imma send it over pm.
because i cant help myself.
Edit: Aaaand done.
Last edited by DracoScribe; March 23rd, 2023 at 09:47 PM.
Author of:
Persona 5: Refraction (SV link; FF.net link)
"You didn't have to fight for me, you know." "And you didn't have to curl your hair so we'll look even more alike." Ren stared before he softly chuckled, Akira joining him not long after. With one simple decision as a child, Ren Amamiya goes to Tokyo alongside his little sister, Akira. (P5R Sibling AU) (Ren/Ann, Akechi/Fem!Akira)
Chapter 46 on: May 31, 2023
Velvet Throne
My list of my Servants! Still small for now.
Source: Muztnafi
Class: Saber
Other Classes: N/A
True Name: Fernando Alvarez de Toledo, 3rd Duke of Alba
Alignment: True Neutral
Place of Origin: Spain (16th Century)
Stars: 3/5
Parameters:
STR: C
END: B
AGI: C
MGI: D
LCK: C
NP: C
Height: 192cm
Weight: 100lbs
Likes: Battles, harsh punishment
Dislikes: Perceived weakness, diplomacy
Talent: Commanding armies
Natural Enemy: Louis Antoine de Saint Juste
Attribute: Man
Traits: Humanoid, Weak to Enuma Elish
Armament: Alba
Catalyst: A coin with his face on it
Class Skills:
Magic Resistance D: He rarely came across magic so has a close to minimal rank in this Skill.
Riding C: He rode in to several battles, however, he did not have extreme proficiency in riding, so gains this average rank in this skill.
Personal Skills:
Bloody Court of Troubles B: The sublimation of the "Council of Trouble", otherwise known as the Council of Blood, that Saber created. It was built in order to harshly prosecute those who Saber believed would get let off too easily through the standard court. As a skill, it manifests in the capability to "amplify punishments", enhancing pain and harm from all of his blows, as well as those of his army.
Order of the Golden Rose B: The sublimation of his status as a recipient of the Golden Rose and the Golden Sword from the Papal States, as well as his status as a member of the Order of the Golden Fleece. This manifests into a golden aura which he channels into his gloves or his sword that enhances durability and strength.
My Gentlemen Soldiers A: The sublimation of his extremely effective military commanding capability. A compilation of Military Tactics, Command of the Strategist, and Charisma that together causes his commanding tactics to be extremely effective, well trusted, and grant bonuses when properly followed.
Noble Phantasm(s):
Alba
The Iron Duke
Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
Rank: C
Range: 0 meters
Max Targets: Self
The sublimation of his title of the "Iron Duke". This manifests as his sword, passively reinforced to gain more strength. When the true name is covered, an aura of iron surrounds him and his sword, causing his blows to be much more powerful while his skin becomes more resilient to blows and iron-like.
Pro Lege, Rege, Et Grege
March Forth, Oh Soldiers of Iron
Type: Anti-Army
Rank: C
Range: 20 meters
Max Targets: 100
The sublimation of his army, which marched under the banner, Pro Lege, Rege, Et Grege, which means for the law, the king, and the people. When the true name is called, he raises his sword to call forth his soldiers. They manifest surrounding him, as he commands for a devastating military charge. Following this charge, the soldiers fade away.
Lore: Fernando Alvarez de Toledo, 3rd Duke of Alba (1507-1582) was a Spanish general and noble. He was known as the Iron Duke. He was one of the most effective generals of all time, and the most effective in his era. His most noted deeds were during his brutal work against the Netherlands Revolt.
Personality: A war-loving and fierce person. He dislikes diplomacy usually, feeling that the consessions it requires are not truly necessary. He far prefers battle. He utterly adores working with an army, and loves to lead charges. He will occasionally work with other generals. However, he will demand that he lead every battle and every command.
Relationships:
Louis Antoine de Saint-Juste: "Why do you pick up the pen when you wield a sword?"
Han Xin: "It is as I said, isn't it? Royals squeeze everything out of you and then throw you away."
Antipope Clement VII: "Bloodbaths? Perhaps, that would be an interesting choice."
Pope Julius II: "You had interesting ideas. However, I have surpassed you."
Tamar of Georgia: "I suppose that your rule was intriguing."
The Deathless
This state is disgusting... I shouldn't be dead! How could this weak-minded fool defeat me?!
It's all right, Master. I am calm. Let's make an agreement. You will help me achieve true immortality. And I will reward you generously.
Class: Caster
True Name: Koschei the Deathless(?)
Alignment: Neutral Evil
Place of Origin: Kyivan Rus, Scandinavia(?)
Armament: Big Sword
STRENGE — A
ENDURANCE— EX
AGILITY —B
MANA — A
LUCK — C
NP — A
Class skills:
Territory Creation(none) — This skill was replaced by his Noble Phantasm
Item Creation A –
Caster cannot create magical items, but is able to enchant ordinary items, and at a high level. His two-handed sword, called the Asp, his weapon of choice, is an example of this. It cannot be broken, not dulled, and the blade of this sword is saturated with paralyzing poison
Personal skills:
Lich A
Caster's feature, the secret of his immortality. A lich is a lost ritual from necromancy. An opportunity to establish yourself in the world. All damage will heal in seconds. The only weakness will be only one item with which you can kill the lich. However, Caster was unable to perform the perfect ritual. He was thwarted, and because of this outside interference, he developed a morbid craving for gold. In addition, Caster feels almost nothing - not taste, not smell, not touch. His magic is unusual - in fact it is a mixture of Slavic volkhovstvo and Scandinavian runes
In my country, a warrior did not have to fear death. When you die on the battlefield, the Valkyries take you to Valhalla. But I didn't want Valhalla! I didn't need endless fights and feasts. The meaning of wars is not in battles, but in production. The victorious feast is adorned with riches and captive girls who kindle the heat with bodily beauty. And all this was not in Valhalla! That's why I was looking for immortality. I already had everything in my life and not a single life after death could give me even a drop of what I had!
Golden Rule EX
A skill that allows you to accumulate wealth. Caster has an almost inexhaustible supply of money ... but he is very stingy and you need to try so that he parted with at least one coin.
This is my gold... don't touch it, Master.
Familiars(Ravens) B
Caster is able to use iron-feathered ravens as familiars. This is both an observation, and these birds can also be used to attack.
Somewhat clueless birds... Hugin and Mugin would be enough for me
Father of Nation(?) A
A skill that is available to those individuals from whom the history of the nation has gone. Caster is able to identify the identity of any servant born in the territory of Ukraine, Russia or Belarus
Noble Phantasm:
Костяной дворец
Resident of Darkness
B
The majestic palace rebuilt by Caster from the ruins where he was buried. This NP replaces Caster's Create Territory skill. Because the Bone Palace is too big, Caster can hide it in the Reality Marble.
This palace is guarded by dead servants - ghouls, velets, ghouls and vurdalaks. They obey only Caster and may well attack the Master.
Игла Смерти
Death of the dead
A
Caster's phylactery, an item he cherishes like the apple of his eye.
This is the antique needle that Caster used to kill his brothers. It is completely black and very strong - it cannot be melted even in acid. However, breaking the needle is useless and stupid - Caster does not die because the needle is broken, he dies from the needle. In other words, his heart must be pierced with this weapon.
After summoning Caster in the territory where the Grail War will take place, a tree will appear with a chest hidden in the roots of the tree. This plant can only be found by the Master, or the Heroic Spirit, ordinary people and non Masters mages will not be able to find the tree. Also, this tree will not be able to find or somehow track Caster himself.
Removing the chest from the tree is not easy. The tree will come to life and attack with its roots. If you get a chest, then you should not rush to open it - a hare is hidden in the chest, a very dangerous creature, a relative of the creature that King Arthur once had to face. After the death of the hare, a duck will fly out of it, which will try to fly away. In the event of her death, an egg will fall out of her, which must be opened or broken. It contains the needle that can kill Caster.
Description:
Likes: Gold, past self, normal immortality, Oleg the Prophet
Dislikes: His current state, posthumous worlds, especially Valhalla
Natural enemy: Oleg the Prophet
Caster’s True name is Rurik, first Russian duke of Ladoga and Novgorod, founder of the Rurik dynasty. However, one cannot recognize a proud Varangian in him. This is a living dead that feels almost nothing - neither pain, nor the taste of food, nor the warmth of intimacy.
Rurik grew up in the Varangian lands, absorbing the spirit of this people. The life of a Varangian is simple - rob, fight and feast. Rurik was not against all this. After all, he was far from being an obscure warrior, he had his own army that brought him prey. Rurik was content with life... but over time he became gloomier and gloomier. He knew what awaits all warriors after death - Valhalla, the abode of warriors. But Rurik did not want to be in Valhalla. There he will be just an ordinary warrior, a shadow against the background of such legends as Siegfried or Sigurd. Besides, what is the point in endless fighting against each other and the subsequent feast, when you can take and plunder cities, burn Christian churches and take beautiful girls with whom it is so pleasant to spend nights as servants?
So because of these thoughts, Rurik began to fear death. He wished to be immortal... but he shared this desire only with Helg, his most devoted warrior. But Helg was not happy with this idea.
“Life is good because it is fleeting,” Helg said then, “but what’s the point of being immortal if the squad cannot be with you forever and goes to Valhalla?”
But Rurik did not leave the search for immortality, even when he became the Duke of the Slavic tribe.
There he found a way to become immortal, without any
side effects if performed correctly. But in return, three people had to be sacrificed. And Rurik decided on it.
Once he, together with his brothers in arms - Truvor, Sineus and Oleg, aka Helg, went to some ruins. There, according to Rurik, some kind of magical weapon that belonged to the heroes of antiquity was hidden. But there was a trap. Rurik, with the help of an iron spike, was able to kill Truvor and Sineus, but Oleg managed to escape, moreover, because of his old comrade, Rurik was buried alive in a makeshift mound in these ruins among the treasures. The ritual was already in effect - and Rurik became what he is now, having received a painful craving for wealth. He was able to free himself, but... he could never be the same again. He gained immortality, but in return he lost almost everything he had. So Rurik perished... and Kashchei the Deathless was born. His desire for the Grail is strange at first glance. He yearns for immortality again. But true, so that he would be alive again and could feel the joys of life.
Notes: Well, the history of this Koshchei is too extensive. Its continuation will be when I make a sheet of Oleg the Prophet. As for the idea that Koshchei is killed by his own phylactery, I was inspired by the 1954 Soviet cartoon The Frog Princess. There Koshchei is just being killed with a needle