Rider of Topkapı Palace
-- A Brief Tour Upon the Skies of Istanbul --
Class: Rider
Other Classes: Archer, Caster
True Name: Lagâri Hasan Çelebi
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Origin: The Ottoman Empire (17th century)
Parameters:
STR: D
END: C
AGI: B+
MGI: E
LCK: A+
NP: C-
Likes: Competing with his brother, holding explosive public shows (with highlight on explosive)
Dislikes: Health and safety regulations, those who give up too easily
Talent: Engineering, improving on existing concepts
Natural Enemy: His brother, Leonardo da Vinci, Sultan Murad IV
Armament: Rockets, gunpowder, small objects turned into high-speed projectiles
Catalyst: The original draft to his flying machine
Class Skills
Personal Skills
Noble Phantasm(s)
Lore
Description
Relationships
Bond CE
Creator's Notes
I’m loving the recent influx of ottoman servants. I wonder if anyone is going to do Suleiman the magnificent as a servant.
Akiva Ben Yosef: So he's basically the Merlin to Bar Kokhba's Arhur. It's pretty cool, honestly really like the Star Messiah Sword NP, even if it totally feels like a stretch. Well, him being Saber in general feels like a stretch, but I wonder if you'll be doing a proper Caster version of him?
While on the topic of Jewish Religious Leader, I'm kinda curious; what do you think about my Jahaziel a few pages back, Royd?
Red Rider: Ooh, well done adaptation based on the canon Pale Rider sheet. Combined with my own Black Rider, now there only White Rider is left to complete the Four Horsemen set. Also, yeah its kinda fitting that these things are basically an empty shell without a Master.
Now it’s up to someone to do a white rider sheet.
Lagâri Hasan Çelebi: Oooh, another Ottoman Servant, nice. A real fun character with interesting history, basically a real life Baron Munchausen lol. My only nitpick is that... add reaction with my two Ottoman Servants plz, thx.
Guys just a thought experiment is you fall into Mash shoes and become a demi servant which servant that you made would you chose. You be following along the FGO Storyline. The catch is that you have the same progression as her. So, you be unlocking and personal skills and NP through out the story and start with only the first ability that you type in the top of your personal skill tag.
Creator Notes
"So, as I understand it, an impossibly powerful Avenger owns this territory, and we must rise up to liberate the people who they trample upon?"
"Right. I know this is a lot, given we just summoned you, but is there anything you can do?"
"Fwa- haha- ha! Look upon my form, Master. I am clearly not fit for the role of combat."
"Are you saying you're of no use?"
"Don't put words in my mouth. No, I know tyranny better than any man. If it is a revolution you desire, than I am quite possibly the spirit most suited for this occasion."
"So, you are..!"
"I believe you are correct, Master! Allow me to formally introduce myself. My class is Assassin, and my true name is..."
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Bottom Notes
All necromancers are good characters, no exceptions.
Still getting my bearings here--- Feel free to call me whatever you want.
This is an excellent sheet that you have there I really like the formatting that you done. So, it's worth it alright. This one hell of bang to go on for creating your first sheet.
Last edited by Ismail2002; January 22nd, 2022 at 12:04 PM.
Holy shit. You sure this is your first sheet?
jeez, 4 sheets in half a day, still need to read them all
"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
University of Formatting | Gallery of Potential | Memorandum of the Extra Class Kings
Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
Create-a-Servant 4 soon.
Damn, that Thomas Paine was wonderful. The sophisticated yet simple formatting, the f7d faceclaim choice, the revolutionary writer character, the distinctive skill set and NP; I love it all. Pretty awesome for your first sheet.
I'd pick... either Isaac Newton or Bran the Blessed. The latter is cracked like crazy while the former... yeah. The former is absolutely hilarious to me. The insane amounts of bickering with Da Vinci would be worth it.
Rookie Lorekeeper, Amateur Extraordinaire, and all around nasunoob.
I probably won't make a Caster version of him, as I think I covered just about what I wanted to already. For your Jahaziel, pretty good sheet. A simple and sweet concept, though her NP is honestly pretty terrifying when you think of what it'd be like being on the wrong end of that.
jeez storm, i had to read it because praise from Kamera is something rare. It is truly a wonderful sheet. i can just echo kamera. please stay here and continue your work. You have a great style of making servants. I even overlook you took a potential FC mine. If you ever need help formatting say so.
Rest comes later, sry folks i dont have that much time today.
"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
University of Formatting | Gallery of Potential | Memorandum of the Extra Class Kings
Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
Create-a-Servant 4 soon.
Ah, thank y'all! I really appreciate the kind words. Admittedly, I've already got whole documents on two or three other servants that are waiting to go through revisions and formatting. There's definitely more coming. I'm really excited to really start working on them now that I have a foothold. Kind of addicting tbh.
All necromancers are good characters, no exceptions.
Still getting my bearings here--- Feel free to call me whatever you want.
Can’t wait to see more from you. I want to see if you can take on some more “high profile” servants.
Am I the only one who finds it weird how wyvern and fortuna haven’t posted in a while? I guess they’re both taking a pretty long hiatus.
People have lives outside this site. Not to mention most people take a while to write and finish sheets. Give it time.
Yeah you’re right but it’s just kind of weird that they haven’t posted in something like 16 days each
(Yes I have been counting the days since I was on vacation. Yes I am extremely lonely)