I'm genuinely impressed that wasn't the joke.
I'm genuinely impressed that wasn't the joke.
Holy shit that wasn't the bit? Goddamn
I really like Gyges.
I think that mechanically, the ring is a little underpowered for what it's supposed to do, but it's an awesome narrative tool and it would make for a great story, either for a protagonist or an ensemble cast.
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Do you likejazzshort stories? Do you want something to distract from making Servants? Do you wish the idea of Shirou Kotomine didn't immediately bring edgelords to mind? Well, I can't promise it's good, but some would disagree with me.
Fate/Without Justice
I mean, I once actually gave a Servant of mine (Franziska Kafka) King Crimson's power, though at least it was without any Epitaph counterpart
“Have you ever go to my realm? I'm sure you'll like it, It's a Paradise!”
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This pristine land is everexisting, everlasting
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Here we are, Arcas, King of Arcadia
I actually enjoyed making this sheet due to how popular Venti really is so it's easy to find a specific FC of him
Aaand I'm still full of vigor, I'll make another busted Archer on near future
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Holy shit that’s a lot of collapse text.
Once again, onore macbook for not showing the image.
Wow, what can I say? This batch has been exceptionally amazing. Andros' Arcas is immaculate (and having a Venti FC is always good) and Nails is the MVP of this month with her collection of whimsical, incredible characters. I can't wait to see more of you here please never leave again pls.
Unfortunately I'm still reading past entries and can't comment on others but holy moly.
Assassin of JazzAlt. Faceclaim
“You’ve just booked the ‘greatest singer of the century’. Yeah, frankly I don’t believe it neither.”
(by raikoart)
True Name: Billie Holiday
Alt. Classes: Caster (which would take more from 'Strange Fruit')
Aliases: Lady Day, Eleanora Fagan
Source: History
Region: USA
Catalyst: A box of gardenias.
Armament: Microphone, burning cigarette
Character: One of the most celebrated jazz vocalists and singer of some of the most acclaimed and influential songs of the 20th century, 'Strange Fruit' having even been rated as the song of the 20th century.
“Odd that folks would think so highly of little ol' me, but ain’t I earned the right to be proud of myself by now?”
She is perhaps equally known for her tragic life, being a black woman who grew up in poverty long before the Civil Rights Era, having been sent to court at age nine, and had to take up sex work for payment. Upon finally rising to fame as a jazz singer, she was exploited by a series of abusive men, and took heavily to opium and heroin out of the combined pressures of both stardom and peers. The latter got her hounded by the Bureau of Narcotics and even arrested, with it questionable if the Bureau’s reasons for pursuing were just due to drug use. She would die broke and due to heart failure.
She is quite the gloomy soul, understandably so due to all the misfortunes she suffered, and has difficulty trusting people given her previous relationships. That said, she does somewhat resent the image of her being nothing but doom and gloom, and indeed it should be noted there are still just as many positive songs in her discography as gloomier ones, despite or perhaps in defiance of her harsh life. Even if it can take a little getting to know her, she’s quite the kind person.
She’s also surprised at her being remembered as an anti-authority figure, as in her mind she never went out of her way to oppose authority (with her initial fears of how people would react to ‘Strange Fruit’), that was something that just naturally happened. While skeptical towards the whole idea of a Holy Grail War and feeling out of place among more ‘traditional’ Servants, she’d also say in ways it’s not that different to the gang or mob wars from back in her day.
Attribute: Star
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Likes: Dogs, Flowers, Honesty
Dislikes: Cops, Dependence, Superstitions
Relationships:
- Black Dahlia: “Finally figure yerself out, eh kid? Hard for me ta think about, bein’ hounded even after death.”
- Zaroff: “Treatin’ people like animals, must be a new experience for white folks.”
- Christina: “Yeah, nothin’ like Garbo, no surprise. You didn’t get along with mommy neither, huh?”
- Patrick Hamilton: “I don’t need no play to get the lowdown on abuse.”
- Berlioz: “Draggin’ yer ‘lover’ to Hell, sounds like Heaven ta me.”
- Margaret Garner: “My, finally another sister. Ain’t surprised to hear how your life was like.”
- Luo Guanzhong: “Well, can’t make fun of ya, my interpretations are mostly how folks remember me too.”
- Bolivar: “Even from the US of A, I’ll say you seem a step up from Washington.”
- Sax: “Now don’t be so hung up on yer instrument, I’ve heard folks do things with your sax that you can’t never have dreamed of.”
- Cesare: “They’re lettin’ movie characters be Heroic Spirits? Well, never imagined myself bein’ one I guess.”
Master: Her initial instinct is immense caution around any Master, especially white and/or male, given the series of abusive relationships she went through in life. On the other hand, she’ll have much more sympathy for any Master who seems to have suffered as much as she did in life, which could be likely without a catalyst summoning.
Natural Enemy: Harry J. Ansliger
Wish: That people who don’t deserve it won’t suffer like she did.
Rarity: 1/5
Parameters
- Strength: ***** E
- Endurance: ***** E
- Agility: ***** D
- Magic: ***** D
- Luck: ***** E
- Noble Phantasm: ***** C
Class Skills
Presence Concealment
The ability to mask one's presence and remain undetected.
- Rank C: While stealth is not Assassin’s forte, having gotten quite a lot of attention in her lifetime, her associations with dark and smoky nightclubs and back alleys, along with having to evade the law, give her some ability in concealing her presence. Becomes hard to detect till she makes herself noticeable.
Personal Skills
Alluring Euphony
Possession of a naturally beautiful voice that can a strong fascination effect in listeners.
- Rank C: Assassin’s distinctive voice makes any listener feel as if they are intimately there with her inside of a smoky nightclub. In another Class like Caster, this skill would increase to Rank A, as if she were singing in front of an entire nation.
Improvisation
More than an ability to adapt, this is a way of thinking that sees opportunity for creativity where others would see a mistake.
- Rank A: One of the most renowned artists in a music genre founded on improvisation. It is difficult to stop Assassin from singing as she can easily make any interruption ‘part of the song’, and her rough and tumble life has given her experience in uncomfortable and treacherous situations.
Item Construction (Revision)
Skill to alter and rework items.
- Rank C: Assassin’s ability to revise is limited to written songs. She was acclaimed an exceptional cover artist and populariser of songs.
Rebellious Spirit
A restlessness that brings about a defiance of leadership, yet also an inability to truly lead.
- Rank C: Assassin has an ingrained skepticism towards authority and was in frequent trouble with the law throughout her life. Can cancel out the influence of government officials less than the head of state.
(I also considered Pioneer of the Stars, since people have credited Strange Fruit with being the first step towards the Civil Rights movement.)
Noble Phantasm
Gloomy Sunday
Hungarian Suicide Song
Rank: C
Type: Anti-Army
A haunting tune written by the Hungarian composer Rezso Seress, but which rose to its greatest popularity with Assassin’s version of it. Already a gloomy melody appropriate for a singer with a gloomy reputation, Gloomy Sunday would subsequently be associated with a sinister urban legend. After several suicides were reported as having this very song playing in the background, this song’s nature became warped by people believing that it held the power to drive its listeners to death.
When an enemy hears Assassin perform this song, their vitality and mana begin to gradually whither down, until they finally die upon hearing the song all the way through. There are obvious ways to avoid this, such as to stay out of range of the song or clamp one’s ears, however they would then have to overcome the compulsion effect of Assassin’s Alluring Euphony skill. There’s also of course attacking Assassin as she begins the song, but she has her Improvisation skill to handle such disturbances.
But there’s also the issue that Assassin is not exactly comfortable with the superstition surrounding this song, given nobody would want to have a rumoured association with a string of suicides, even if they were some people she knew in life who she wouldn’t mind inflicting this Phantasm on. On the other hand, she also has to acknowledge she doesn’t really have much of a weapon in this War otherwise, beyond maybe leaving cigarette burns or whacking people with a mic stand.
(I did have something in mind for Strange Fruit as a Noble Phantasm, which'd show listeners a vision of the greatest atrocity their nation committed, but I thought to play it safe by sticking to a single NP for a 20th century Servant.)
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Rider of Oz
(by jessilvania. Source)
“I want to be excited, being off on a journey again. But I’m afraid it already feels like this will be an unfortunate one…”
True Name: Ozma of Oz
Alt. Classes: Caster, Ruler, Watcher, Foreigner?
Aliases: Queen, Princess, or Supreme Ruler of OzTip, Tippetarius
Source: Fiction, Land of Oz
Region: USA, Oz, Fairytales
Catalyst: A pair of Ozian poppies.
Armament: OZ Sceptre
Character: “To think if we met somewhere else, the other Servants, even the other Masters, could’ve been my friends…”
Ozma is the rightful ruler of the Land of Oz, a land whose existence is paradoxical to outsiders yet exists anyway, having been classified as either country-wide Marble Phantasm, very powerful Bounded Field, land on the Reverse Side of the World, or even a Wandering Sea-like pocket dimension depending on who you ask.
When younger, or rather ‘in her past’ given how aging works or rather doesn’t in Oz, Ozma didn’t even know she was a girl, let alone a princess. She was raised as Tippetarius or ‘Tip’ by the witch Mombi, who’d trapped her in male form to keep her from being found, assisting the Wizard Oscar Diggs in his coup. Later escaping from Mombi, Tip would encounter Glinda the Sorceress of the South, who told her of her true identity and, after some trepidation, changed her back into a princess. While it has been debated whther she can be called a trans-woman, Rider herself has no issue identifying as such, even if it wasn't a term she knew of in life.
Rider is naturally cheerful and fun-loving, but often feels pressured to adopt a more serious and proper persona as queen of Oz. Her restlessness and adventure-seeking, ingrained in her as a reaction to her childhood in captivity, means she’s frequently away from her Emerald City capital, though diplomatic missions make this adventuring easier to combine with her queenly duties. She is cautious about abusing her power though, worried about the potential for abuse her royal objects like a magic picture that sees anywhere could hold.
However, she also has an insistence on non-violent solutions, if a not always consistent one. While she can accept fighting other Servants given they’ve already died before, no less than a Command Seal would be needed to have her directly attack a Master. Rider’s Mana and magical knowledge at least means that stalling out other Servants while their mana supply could be a worthwhile strategy for her. Given the low mortality rate within Oz, Rider has little experience with death in general, even if she entered this War knowing death would be a factor.
Rider does not particularly like the mages of the outside world much, their isolation and coldness reminding her too much of her stepmother Mombi. When annoyed, she may even exclaim she’ll challenge the Clock Tower itself and take it over in Oz’s name. She feels much more positively about the non-magical Earth though, being excited to get to know any place outside Oz and establish good relations with it, as much as this world may’ve changed from Dorothy’s time. Not that she likes everything about it though, being uncomfortable with money which was something she abolished in the post-scarcity Oz, though fortunately interacting with banks and shopkeepers aren’t things most Servants do anyway.
Attribute: Earth, debatably Sky
Alignment: Lawful Good
Likes: Adventuring, diplomatic solutions, Dorothy Gale, birthdays (even if she doesn't need them)
Dislikes: Money, marble statues, grasshopper ornaments, being called by her deadname
Relationships:
- Arcas: "Your own country does seem beautiful and wondrous too. Er, ahem, though I do have a few reservations about these Spartans."
- Kafka: “You remind me I was attacked by jackdaws I once, and my dear friends have also had rough run-ins with crows? Huh, you also seem interested in my ban on money.”
- Catherine Morland: “You do seem quite nice, but… would you honestly prefer a world of Wicked Witches over the rule of princesses? No, you’re looking for excitement, your priorities can’t be that bad…”
- Heinlein: “Ahem, you seem to have some… unorthodox ideas about my land. Still, you say you were able to change yourself into a girl without magical aid?”
- Christina: “You may have lost your kingdom, but I’ll still acknowledge you as Queen. After all, you still have a Queen’s spirit.”
- Ataturk: “Hmm, some of our policies sound similar. Like the ban on magic, though it seems like you went further and banned it for yourself too. Though I also banned money.”
- Omegarus: “Oh my, I never could’ve known things would get that bad in the outside world. New people rarely ever need to be born in Oz, but you haven’t really adjusted to that Outside.”
- Bolivar: “I have sat in with rebellions before, but yours seems… much more tightly run. I suppose you won’t listen to me though, since I am indeed a Queen.”
- John Bauer: “I-I’m sorry. I’ll get in contact with Fairy Scandinavia, send you and your family home, have everything sorted out!”
- Grainne: “Don’t feel bad, I started my own journey by running away too. Er, except Fionn didn’t try to turn you to stone, and I didn’t meet the same fate- Ah, you get what I’m saying.”
- Elagabalus: “You also like pranks, huh? Only… when it was revealed I was really a girl, everyone accepted me. I, I’m sorry, I guess you weren’t so lucky.”
- Goya: “I’ve seen how magic hurts people, but… does that mean taking it out on all mages?"
Master: Rider is easy to get along with in general, but she’ll especially take to any girl close to her in age if they remind her of Dorothy, or someone older if they remind her of Glinda. However, being summoned by a more typical mage could pose a problem for her, as they’ll be likely to remind her of Mombi and other such Wicked Witches.
Natural Enemy: Mombi, Nome King
Wish: For the people of Earth to enjoy the same privileges as those in Oz, everlasting life, communication with animals, and post-scarcity
Rarity: 3/5
Parameters
Strength: ***** E
Endurance: ***** C
Agility: ***** D
Magic: ***** A
Luck: ***** C
Noble Phantasm: ***** B
Class Skills
Magic Resistance
A built-up immunity to magic.
- Rank A+: Rider, due to constant exposure to powerful magic her whole life, is virtually untouchable by the civilised world’s Magecraft. Granted a Plus due to Ozian law forbidding anyone not in authority from using magic.
“With what Outside Mages are like, I can’t help but be reminded why I put a ban on magic…”
Riding
Handling of mounts and vehicles
- Rank A: Mounts up to Phantasmal Beasts can be ridden. Rider is known for skilfully handling several magical and unusual mounts not originally meant to be mounts, such as her super-speedy Sawhorse or flying Gump chimera.
“Hah, these are no ‘unusual’ mounts by Oz standards.”
Personal Skills
Charisma of Triumphant Return
The charm and leadership qualities needed to rise again as a hero.
- Rank B+: Suitable for a returning monarch of monarchs. Born as the Princess of Oz before the usurpation of The Wizard Oscar Diggs and disguised as a boy by Mombi, years later Rider was restored to her throne and met with celebration by her people. Allows her Charisma to increase after a successful comeback.
“Not just a royal return, but a return to the true self I never knew…”
Clairvoyance (Art)
Exceptional eyesight that at higher Ranks can turn into precognition and other supernatural forms of perception.
- Rank EX → C: In Rider’s case, this was gained due to her owning an enchanted picture able to show her any place or person in the world, even those outside of Oz, essentially letting her see anywhere in the present. Has been reduced in Rank as it is dependent on an item and not any inborn ability, and due to Rider herself having limited her use of it. However, it would qualify as a full Noble Phantasm in the Watcher class.
“Even I’m scared of what I could do with this power unrestricted.”
Fairy Monarch
The mystical authority necessary to lead and rule over the Fairy Folk. Like a specialised Imperial Privilege, this allows temporary access to any Fairy Skill regardless of whether the Servant would otherwise possess it.
- Rank A: Though not officially being called that, Rider in essence is a Fairy Empress, with Oz encompassing several other Fairy Kingdoms beneath it, and additionally is half-fairy herself. Any Fairy Skill, such as Fairy Eyes, Fairy Knight, Fairy Knight, even Universal Language, can be used at Rank B when in need.
“Fairies seem to like the title ‘Princess’ over ‘Queen’, even if the latter’s what I technically am.”
Mana Burst (Pumpkin)
Ability to channel and infuse Pumpkin Spirits into weapons and attacks.
- Rank C: Rider gains a moderate Rank in this Skill due to her creation and loyalty of the character Jack Pumpkinhead. With her having conceived of Jack as a prank, not knowing about the Powder of Life at the time, this Skill comes into its element when used in launching surprise attacks.
“I couldn’t get this trick to work on Mombi, but maybe other mages will be less prepared.”
Noble Phantasms
Powder of Life
From Dust You Were Made
Rank: B
Type: Anti-Unit/Anti-Inanimation
“This is the magic that gave me my first friends. I, I don’t want to have to think of it as a weapon…”
A sculpted vial containing an enchanted powder able to bestow life upon the lifeless, or to grant sentience and mobility to inanimate objects. Originally owned by her wicked stepmother Mombi, Rider stole it and used the powder to bring to two powerful mounts to life: the Sawhorse, whose wooden body allowed him to achieve extreme speeds due to never tiring, and the flying chimera known as the Gump. Rider also takes credit for the creation of her companion Jack Pumpkinhead due to having assembled him, even if it was Mombi who used the Powder on him.
This Noble Phantasm makes Rider capable of bringing any inanimate object to life, including recreating any being brought forth by the powder in her life. Of course, she only has a limited supply of powder, further limited by the fact that the powder must be sprinkled over the entirety of an object to work. A single batch of powder contains enough to bring approximately three large objects to life, so granting sentience to an entire building would be difficult to pull off. Were she in Oz or had the Item Construction skill she could resupply herself, but in the Rider Class, she’ll have to make do.
The powder requires an incantation to finalise, being the phrase “Weaugh! Peaugh! Teaugh!” with a hand gesture for each ‘word’. A comparison can be made with Japan’s Tsukumogami, household objects come to life after usually a century, with the powder then being a way of creating Tsukumogami instantaneously. The powder can also be used to create lifeforms of one's own invention by combining animal and object parts together, though given the sheer discomfort one of Rider’s creations, the Gump, felt when she tried exactly this, Rider can be hesitant to use this function.
Rota Panthera
Royal Road across the Deadly Desert
Rank: B
Type: Anti-Army/Anti-Terrain
“Lion, Tiger, full speed over the sands! The outside world shall behold the Promenade of Oz.”
Her personal chariot, pulled by two big cat Phantasmal Beasts. One of which is the famous King of Beasts and famed Oz resident the Cowardly Lion, the other being known as the Hungry Tiger, a creature always driven to eat people but who restrains himself because of his conscience. Either cat is more willing to attack enemies than her, though they may still need some prodding. While she can converse with them, to onlookers the lion and tiger’s voices will sound like nothing but growls. It is possible the chariot of Freya may be a Prototype of this Phantasm.
The true effect of this vehicle Noble Phantasm comes with the green carpet that rolls out from underneath. The chariot can travel over anything this carpet covers unhindered, be it over water or uneven ground, through Bounded Fields, or over hazardous terrain like desert. Crossing over the Deadly Desert that separates Oz from outside was in fact her first ever use of this carpet, with a scorching line of desert sand being left behind after this carpet unrolls.
Underworld Driver
Magic Belt of the Nome King
Rank: A
Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
“Sorry Glinda, I know you don’t like shapeshifters, but desperate times. TRANSFORM!”
A memento from her first journey outside of Oz, where she, her attendants, and her friends rescued the royal family of neighbouring Ev from the Nome King, ruler of the underground. It was he who this Phantasm originally belonged to, before being taken by Dorothy Gale, then gifted to Ozma for safekeeping.
While this jewelled belt’s powers are varied, its main use appears to be to grant its wearer shapeshifting powers for the purposes of making them invincible to the current attack aimed at them. It could turn one its wearer to rubber to block electrical damage, turn them to stone to block slashing damage, give them gills to handle a water attack, give them wings to escape the crumbling earth, and so on. As its true function is invincibility, with shapeshifting being used as means to an end for that, the transformations the belt allows are situational.
This Noble Phantasm could be compared to Avalon, even if it uses different means to accomplish a similar goal. However, it is also like Avalon in that it can be taken from its wearer and deny them its power, much like it was originally taken from the Nome King.
Notes: I may have gotten a little carried away with this sheet, guess I can get a little zealous about book-only Oz knowledge. I was considering leaving out her belt NP altogether, but I couldn't resist having a Rider with a transforming belt. Having compared word counts, this has also been my longest Servant sheet so far
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...ah shit. And I was just retooling my sheet too. Hope you don't mind me also using that "lord of the wild" stuff.
Guardian of humanity, we answer your call. O' Northern Star, Guide us to our Fate.
King Arcas
Guardian Beasts of the Misty Mountain Kingdom
Callisto and Arcas
AKA: Ursa Major and Ursa Minor
Class: Rider
Alternate Classes: Archer, (Both) Berserker, (Callisto) Lancer (Arcas)
Alignment: Neutral Good
Source: Greek Mythology
Region: Greece
Attribute: Heaven
Parameters
Callisto/Arcas
Strength: D+/B
Endurance: D/B+
Agility: A/C
Mana: C/C+
Luck: E/C
Background
Skills
Noble Phantasms
Lore
The Essence of our Bonds
Final Notes
I should probably tell you that the contest just started. Prompt is historical fact. Mind joining us?
That's hilarious how we had the same idea concurrently. Yours are more focused on him as the Ursae Majoris/Ursae Minoris part, whilst mine focused on him as the King of Arcadia, the land where God Pan once resided
Anyways, I've read your sheet from start to finish and I think your sheet is well-made and integrated to the myth, I'm actually impressed you could made a servant Arcas from a totally different perspective than mine but we still ended up with cohesive servant and in line to the original story, and even expanded the idea
My advice though, you could flesh out more of Callisto-Arcas relationship and their dynamics, because them turning into bears are essentially the most devastating moment of their life
You don't have to feel pressured by my advice, just take that as a recommendation
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Bear moms are great.
The NPs feel a little under tuned, but the sheer personality of the sheet more than makes up for it.
It’s alright my dear, let me handle this.
You don’t have to be such a brute, such a thing will only diminish your grace.
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Born as Mehr-un-Nissa in Kandahar, present day Afghanistan, she was the daughter of Mirza Ghiyas Beg, an exiled Persian aristocrat that later became the Grand Vizier of the Mughal Empire. Living under the careful auspices of her father, she was arranged to marry Sher Afgan, a renowned Persian knight whose service brought many victories for the Mughals.
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However, Sher Afgan was killed in a plot by the Lord of Bengal, and the widowed Mehr-un-Nissa and her daughter were brought to the Imperial Court in Agra, entering the Mughal Harem and serving as lady-in-waiting for the current Empress Dowager. It was here that she won the affection of Jahangir, the Mughal Emperor himself. Some legends rumoured that both of them had developed a relationship since their childhood, but whatever the case, they ended up married, and Jahangir would award her with the title of Nur Jahan, the Light of the World.
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Having inherited the shrewdness of her father, Nur Jahan rapidly consolidated her position in the Mughal court, culminating in her conflict over succession against Prince Khurram, the future Mughal Emperor Shah Jahan. She also foiled a coup attempt on her husband, where she managed to rescue Jahangir and raise an army against the rebels all on her own. In both campaigns, she proved to be a formidable commander, having personally led the Mughal army atop her battle elephant.
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A fierce huntress, an clever poet, an accomplished fashion designer, an ingenious architect, a capable ruler, a passionate wife, and a devoted daughter, Nur Jahan is the quintessential Indian soap opera heroine who lived a life full of drama, romance and intrigue.
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Class: Rider
True Name: Nur Jahan
Gender: Female
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Origin: Historical Facts and Rumours
Attribute: Man
The Empress of the Mughal Empire, who wielded unprecedented political power for a woman, having de facto authority over the entire Indian Subcontinent. Nur Jahan is known to have commissioned a majestic tomb in honour of her father, Itimad-ud-Daulah. It is said that this mausoleum, the Bachcha Taj, was the direct prototype and inspiration for the illustrious Taj Mahal.
Parameters:
STR: B
END: D
AGI: A
MGI: B
LCK: C
NP: B
Class Skills:
Riding: A
Be it a fierce tiger, a menacing elephant, or an arrogant emperor, Rider is capable of handling all kinds of mount and vehicles up to the level of Phantasmal Species and Divine Beasts.
Magic Resistance: C
Can only nullify simple magecraft below two verses, cannot really defend herself against advanced Rituals and Thaumaturgy.
Personal Skills:
Sun of Illuminating Beauty: A+
A legacy that Rider inherited from her parents. A Skill that encapsulates both her birth name (Mehr-un-Nisa, Sun Among Women) and the title she received from Jahangir (Nur Jahan, Light of the World). In essence, it allows her to store, transfer, and weaponize the “concept of visual beauty” through certain mediums.
This skill enables Rider to transform objects that can be considered to be “capable of possessing beauty”, such as jewels, clothes, structures, or even the human body, into temporary Mystic Codes capable of exercising beneficial charming effects to oneself and allies. In the case of applying this Skill to her own Saint Graph, the effects are significantly magnified.
Tiger-Slayer: C
A vestige she learned from her first husband, Sher Afgan Khan, the Tiger Grappler. It is a combat and hunting technique that is especially effective against wild beasts, as well as enemies that rely on primal instinct and brute force. In Rider’s case, it is mostly applied to her marksmanship ability.
Throughout the Mughal Empire, Rider’s skill as a ferocious hunter is well known, and it is said she often went out on her own to villages and forests where tiger attacks were reported.
Imperial Privilege: B
An authority she obtained through her second husband, the Mughal Emperor Jahangir. It allows Rider to temporarily obtain skills and abilities she normally wouldn’t have. The prerogative of an Empress who possesses everything as a matter of course.
Due to Jahangir’s quirks and incapability as a ruler, he often relegated to Rider much of the administration and governance of the Mughal Empire, going as far as granting her the Imperial Seal, which allows Rider to issue Imperial Mandates.
Noble Phantasms:
Jahangir Howdah
Rumble, My Regal and Fierce Imperial Beast
Type: Anti-Army
Rank: C
Among the ranks of men, she is a tiger-slayer.
Among the ranks of women, she is a radiant sun.
A half-mechanical beast in the shape and size of an elephant, but possessing the speed and ferocity of a tiger. It is a Noble Phantasm that reproduces the beloved elephant that Rider often rides in her hunting trips and military campaigns. In this form however, it seems that the elephant somehow possesses an eccentric personality similar to Rider’s second husband Jahangir, and an exceptional combat ability resembling her first husband Sher Afgan.
Itimad-ud-Daulah
Jewelled Pillar that Entombs the Realm of Devotion
Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
Rank: A+
On the grave of this poor stranger, let there be neither lamp nor rose.
Let neither butterfly’s wing burn nor nightingale sing
Bachcha Taj, a resplendent mausoleum which Rider built for her father, Mirza Ghiyas, the Lord Treasurer of the Mughal Empire. It is the prototype of the world famous Taj Mahal, built for Mumtaz Mahal, which is Mirza Ghiyas’ granddaughter as well as Rider’s own niece, daughter-in-law, and political rival.
It is a jewel box that enshrines passion, a tomb that commemorates devotion. Those that found themselves within the enclosure of this Noble Phantasm are invited to a peaceful paradise that forever repeats their most cherished memories, forcing them to remember their true self, and cleansing them of any corruption or alteration that might have been inflicted on them.
The territory within this Noble Phantasm also functions as a pseudo-Netherworld, where a one time miracle of resurrection is made possible as long as one’s devotion remains.
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Blindfold your eyes, so that the approaching night may strike no fear in you.
Let it not burden your soul, nor numb your strides.
You probably could have posted this for this contest ya know?
I am aware. This is an old sheet sitting in my drafts since forever, and I kind of want to make something new for the contest.
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Blindfold your eyes, so that the approaching night may strike no fear in you.
Let it not burden your soul, nor numb your strides.
It is said that there is little difference between a happy ending and a tragic one.< - ⪻ - ⋘ - ⪡ - ⫷ -- �� -- ⫸ - ⪢ - ⋙ - ⪼ - >
It all depends on where you close the book.
The man had everything.
Fame, recognition, fans... nothing was beyond his reach.
Not satisfied, he sought more.
He continued to search for that sound.
That one masterpiece that would surpass all others before it.
A composition that would save Europe itself.
And yet, as any human would come to know, life is fleeting.
The curtains would fall, and the stage lights would dim.
At the very end of that performance, the man stood alone.
"Plaudite, amici, comoedia finita est""Applaud, friends, the comedy is over."
Last edited by BnEl15; October 3rd, 2022 at 03:21 PM.