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    There is so many collapseables I feel like I missed a few.

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    Well... that was certainly something.
    I can't tell if this is a shitpost that turned serious or a serious sheet that turned into shitpost.

    I wish I can turn my burnouts into something like this. Maybe I'm just not burned out enough...

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    Quote Originally Posted by BnEl15 View Post
    Well... that was certainly something.
    I can't tell if this is a shitpost that turned serious or a serious sheet that turned into shitpost.

    I wish I can turn my burnouts into something like this. Maybe I'm just not burned out enough...
    Do you need help?

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    what did i just read
    nevermind
    just...tell me how i should compile this
    because idk
    "Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."



    Behold my vault of Heroes.
    Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.


    The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
    University of Formatting | Gallery of Potential | Memorandum of the Extra Class Kings

    Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
    Create-a-Servant 4 soon.

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    Quote Originally Posted by BnEl15 View Post
    Well... that was certainly something.
    I can't tell if this is a shitpost that turned serious or a serious sheet that turned into shitpost.

    I wish I can turn my burnouts into something like this. Maybe I'm just not burned out enough...
    Just pull an all nighter like me. If I don't pull a sheet in the next 24 hours assume I am dead.

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    I'm finishing one sheet. Will be published soon

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    This, and I say it with the greatest amount of respect as a fellow sheet-writer, looks simultaneously like something very half-assed and something that was a long time coming.

    Can't even gather my thoughts after finishing it.
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    This barely even feels like a sheet. Like there's 20% sheet there.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ThreadNomad View Post
    Just pull an all nighter like me. If I don't pull a sheet in the next 24 hours assume I am dead.
    Hey, I do tend to post sheets at like 2-3am local time if I'm really passionate about them, only to lose sleep afterwards cuz' I'm anxious about the reception.

    Ahem, back to Tom... love him or hate him, he was... definitely one of the sheets of all time. That is all I can say on the sheet.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Alexcoene View Post
    This barely even feels like a sheet. Like there's 20% sheet there.
    It really doesn't, but I also commited this mistake once so I can understand the intentions behind this experimentation, if only in parts. Sheet making is harder than it looks.
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    its a sheet that, despite the wacky shit it tries to do, does not feel like a sheet inside a Type Moon setting
    the outer god is treated almost human
    the god feels bigger than any god in TM
    the concepts around the protagonist are all over the place
    the structure of skills feels almost nonexistent
    as NINE said, it feels like an SCP, but an SCP that tries its hardest to count as a servant
    "Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."



    Behold my vault of Heroes.
    Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.


    The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
    University of Formatting | Gallery of Potential | Memorandum of the Extra Class Kings

    Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
    Create-a-Servant 4 soon.

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    Isn't this a joke-sheet made for trolling?

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    In Fate, the definition of a joke sheet blurs around the edges.

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    Well, yes, if remember the same Carnival Phantasm.

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    I felt like I just read a Tome of Madness and I genuinely can't tell if I mean that as a compliment or insult.

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    This sheet specifically reminds me of scp 3999 in the fourth wall breaking and dream logic parts.

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    Anyway, I'd rather talk about something nice while we're at it instead of dunking their sheet even more, so: EEEEELL YOUR VOYAGER IS PERFECT WHAT AN AMAZING CHARACTER I'LL PROTECC HIM FOREVER. I just wanted to tell you that.
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    This is more experience than Servant. Mad ramblings trying to take form. Not a good Servant, but a relatable mood.
    Do you like jazz short stories? Do you want something to distract from making Servants? Do you wish the idea of Shirou Kotomine didn't immediately bring edgelords to mind? Well, I can't promise it's good, but some would disagree with me.
    Fate/Without Justice

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    Quote Originally Posted by WhiteFrenzy View Post
    Anyway, I'd rather talk about something nice while we're at it instead of dunking their sheet even more, so: EEEEELL YOUR VOYAGER IS PERFECT WHAT AN AMAZING CHARACTER I'LL PROTECC HIM FOREVER. I just wanted to tell you that.
    Aww, thanks WF! Honestly he was written in the middle of one of my worst creative slumps in a while, so I felt kind of iffy on some parts, but I'm glad there are still people who like him.

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    Quote Originally Posted by BnEl15 View Post
    Well... that was certainly something.
    I can't tell if this is a shitpost that turned serious or a serious sheet that turned into shitpost.

    I wish I can turn my burnouts into something like this. Maybe I'm just not burned out enough...
    I know.

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    Quote Originally Posted by DelRey View Post
    what did i just read
    nevermind
    just...tell me how i should compile this
    because idk
    Don't.



    Well if you really want to file it under either Pretender or Unclassified. I prefer Unclassified.
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    To be perfectly frank, I've explained my rationale inside the sheet itself.
    I thought of it->I wanted to write it->I wrote a huge chuck and sacrificed a lot of time->My passion for it slowly died out->I didn't want to finish it but I knew I had to->Something half-assed came out.
    I've even had Tom explain it for me. I've even mentioned it multiple times in the sheet(?). This story must be ended at all costs
    In the sheet, Tom wouldn't let me die. but in reality, it was I who wouldn't let Tom die.
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    In short, it's a serious post and a shitpost at the same time. The possibilities are endless. Once I helped my friend write an essay about Tom spiraling into a drug addiction and got arrested for drug abuse and domestic violence. This Tom is part of the infinite Toms mentioned in the story.
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    Also, click:
    1. I don't know, man. Maybe you can decide?
    2. Like I said, you can decide!
    3. Pretender in N's and J's sheet
    4. None. in Aliases in N's and J's sheet
    5. All four ???s in the second table in N's and J's and T(c)'s sheet
    6. the dash on the next line on "Your job is-"
    7."why you have decided to use me as a vessel to anchor the Blind Idiot God to these dimensions."
    8. Thou shalt bear witness
    That's all the collapsibles.
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    Actually, please dunk on my sheet even more.

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