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    My favorites this time around were SimpleScribe's NAS Astra, Kamera's Dihya, WhiteFrenzy's Viking and Random's Völundr and my own Yibb-Tstll

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    I'm laughing at my own joke again. I wish I could see the face of someone seeing that name in the list for the first time lmao

    Also, you should probably change Gorokizu to Ishikawa Goemon for the sake of archiving.

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    Damn, already at the milestone and I haven't done a sheet since my The Turk sheet back in April. I guess I'll do something for this thread on the monthly contest
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    Not much I can say about favorites this time around. I do love Tresser's Lot, most of Reploid's WW pilot series, Nuclear's early Kirishitan series, and Pine's Goemon, among others.

    Anyway, for Charles the Fat, he was born in Germany but spent most of his time in France. Going by the canon Lancelot (born in France but spent most of his time in Britain, listed as British), France seems the way to go.

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    I'm feeling surprisingly underwhelmed by my activity. Probably because I haven't post in a while and the thread was moving forward surprisingly fast recently.

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    Source: Siminiblocker Tumblr

    Class: Archer
    Other Classes: Assassin
    True Name: Xtabay
    Alignment: Chaotic Good
    Place of Origin: Mayan folklore

    Parameters:

    STR: C
    END: C
    AGI: B
    MGI: C
    LCK: D
    NP: A

    Height: 198cm
    Weight: 188lbs
    Likes: Beautiful flowers, kindness
    Dislikes: Her old self, criminals
    Talent: Destroying criminals
    Natural Enemy: Baohban Sith
    Attribute: Earth
    Traits: Female, Weak to Enuma Elish, Demonic
    Armament: Xaache
    Catalyst: A Tzacam cactus

    Class Skills:
    Independent Action A: The
    Curse
    blessing
    granted to her allows her to nigh-constantly exist, causing her use of mana to be very low. She is capable of staying in the world for almost a week after losing her master, though her second noble phantasm cannot be used without her master or a sufficiently large source of mana.
    Magic Resistance A: As a powerful non-human being from the Age of Gods, she gains this skill at a fairly high rank. This means that facing her will be fairly dangerous to any magus of the modern day, for she nullifies almost anything castable by them.

    Personal Skills:

    Morph (Wyrm) A+: The capability to morph into a serpent with capabilities that begin to approach true Dragon Kind. Despite not being anywhere near as powerful, Xtabay's serpent form, granted to her with her transformation, has fairly large rank-ups and is able to produce something like a proto-Dragon Breath, though not nearly as powerful, of the poison attribute.
    Espionage A: For her, this manifests as the capability to appear as merely a beautiful and friendly woman, as opposed to a Servant. However, if her true name is revealed, then it will no longer work on anyone who knows it.
    Flower's Curse B: The
    Curse
    blessing
    which placed her in this state. Sublimated into a skill, it manifests as the ability to control cacti, and Battle Continuation of the same rank. In addition, every sense of human empathy she had has been lost, making her an existence that is fundamentally not understandable as "human".

    Noble Phantasm(s):

    Xaache
    Comb of Sniping



    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: B
    Range: 20 meters
    Max Targets: 1 target

    Her
    Comb
    Bow
    manifested into a noble phantasm. A short, green bow that constantly regrows cactus thorns and utilizes them as projectiles. Each thorn bears the property of sticking. In other words, damage dealt by this noble phantasm reduces maximum HP. In addition, as each of the thorns lands, the enemy hit's Agility parameter drops slowly but surely.

    Espinas
    Bloom Into Spines



    Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
    Rank: A
    Range: 0m
    Max Targets: Self

    Her
    Comb
    Bow
    's true use. When it is placed into her hair and its true name is declared, she blooms. Her entire body becomes covered in layer after layer of cactus thorns, acting as a powerful defensive tool akin to the armor of a hedgehog. In addition, her hair blooms into a flower, constantly spitting out wave upon wave of noxious mist bearing the attribute of poison.

    Lore: Xtabay was once a beautiful and chaste, but haughty woman, Utz-Cotel, who was rivals with a beautiful and kind, but not chaste, woman, Xkeban. People shunned Xkeban for not being chaste and ignored her kindness and charity, but worshipped Utz-Cotel for being chaste, despite her cruelty and haughtiness. When Xkeban died, she transformed into a beautiful vine flower. So Utz-cotel haughtily declared that she would be even more beautiful. However, she wasn't when she died. Instead, she transformed into a horrific-smelling cactus flower. So she made a deal with a being, to bring her back as a beautiful woman so that she could become a beautiful flower. However, she didn't come back properly, instead losing her remaining morals and transforming into the cactus demon Xtabay. She originally merely seduced people, any people, to come by, before eating them. However, she eventually was forced and later grew to enjoy only destroying criminals.

    Personality: A haughty, sadistic, and utterly merciless being. Anyone that she sees who has commited a crime that she sees as "enough" will be immediately marked for death by her. She absolutely adores utilizing Espinas to torture people, racing up to them and hugging them while covered in thorns. Her wish for the grail, though, is that she is able to reincarnate. Then, she believes, she could properly become a beautiful flower.

    Relationships:
    Baohban Sith: "A kindred spirit. We are almost the same, you and I. It's a shame that I have to kill you."
    Okada Izo: "Manslayer? You believe yourself worthy of that title? I am happy to prove you wrong as you scream in agony."
    James Moriarty: "Calculations? Intriguing method of villainy. Maybe I will use that in my techniques once I kill you. But better than you, of course."
    Amakuza Shirou: "I don't care what the grail says, you are not Good! And to prove it, I shall wipe you from the face of this earth and relish in it."
    Barghest: "You have commited crimes, indeed. Cannibal, it is time for me to destroy you and feast apon you."
    Skadi: "Your perfect world is merely sadism disguised as care, Skadi. How wonderful to meet a kindred spirit."
    Arjuna (Alter): "You wish to destroy all evil, and yet do not notice your own evil? I suppose you will finally notice it as I rip your heart out."
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    I guess ancient mesopotamia works for a location for PTGYH. Either that or uncategorized others.

    Deep Blue should be in North America.

    It's very nice seeing my name back on that list after so long. Can't post anything this week cause I'm on vacation but I'll be continuing with the Beast/Grand line next Monday.

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    Servant: Rider
    True Name: Maximilian I
    Aliases: 2nd Founder of the House of Habsburg, The First Gunner/Cannoneer (Of the Nation), The Last Knight, Maximilian the Moneyless, Mayor of Augsburg, Emperor of Dynasties, Emperor of Media

    Parameters:
    Strength: B
    Endurance: B
    Agility: A+
    Mana: B
    Luck: B
    Noble Phantasm: B+

    Class Skills:
    Class Skills:
    Magic Resistance B :
    Class skill of the Saber, Archer, Lancer, and Rider Classes, though generally stronger in the Saber Class. Grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether. At B Rank, this Skill cancels spells with a chant below three verses. Even if targeted by High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals, it is difficult for them to be affected.

    While a youth, Maximilian sought out experts in the occult in order to learn of their craft, but in the end piously refused to use it. Rather than be tempted by the “powers of occult”, he "righteously stayed true to the truth of the Lord”.


    Riding A :
    Class Skill of Rider and Saber class Servants, denoting the ability to ride mounts and vehicles. Rider-class Servants will typically possess a high rank. It is said that dragon type mounts are an exception, requiring a different ability other than Riding. At A Rank, all vehicles and all creatures but those of Phantasmal Beast and Divine Beast-rank can be used as mounts. This rank is high enough to have an aptitude for the Rider Class. Renowned for his chivalrous skills, he was a champion of knightly combat.

    As it turns out, horseback jousting duels are his favorite pastime.


    Personal Skills:
    Personal Skills:
    Aesthetic Appreciation A+ :
    Infatuation with works of art. If one happens to see a Noble Phantasm that possesses artistic anecdotes, there is a high chance that he might be able to figure out its true name. In addition, there is a small chance he may be able to identify Heroic Spirits by the designs of their weapons or armor.

    As a patron of the arts, Maximilian commissioned hundreds of works of art made through woodblock prints, painting, literature, music, weapons, and even gave armor the succor of artistic passion, raising the mostly pragmatic practice into the limelight of true decadence; bringing the Renaissance to Germany. An artistic passion that drove an Empire into debt. In the Ruler Class, this fact would instead bolster the True Name Discernment Skill.


    Cœur d’Acier B :
    A Composite Skill of Determination of Steel and Tactics.

    This sobriquet is the price for his warlike ruling style. His ambition for a globalized monarchy resulted in a rule that was a continuous succession of war. It is the weight of lives he has taken for his ambitions, hardening his heart against the horrors of warring and yet also burning to accomplish the then-unprecedented, though his success is variable. It is both a burning stain and scar etched onto his Saint Graph. It is worth noting that while his will might not compare to a certain man, he was capable of “herculean feats of bureaucracy” every day of his adult life. Creator of the Landsknechte, “impresario” of the battlefield, Machiavelli lauded his capacity as a warlord as second-to-none.

    Horrors do not cow him, acts of terribleness are not foreign to him, feats of cruelty are not beyond him. Though kind, generous, and light-hearted, he has the glamor of a killer.


    Holy Knight King B :
    A composite Skill of Holy King and Eternal Arms Mastery.

    Provides a kingly Charisma, improved attacks against the demonic, improved defenses against non-Saint Divinities, aptitude for weapons of the holy attribute, and guarantees his skills will be unblemished by mental interference.

    Holy Roman Emperor, the so-called head of Christendom though yet not the pope himself. Maximilian would have taken that seat, too, if he had the chance. Restoring the Order of Saint George, and preparing for crusade against the Ottomans, his dreams of holy greatness would be curtailed by financial difficulties as much as his other campaigns were. Though he was never crowned by the Pope, he still gave his assent to Maximilian’s rule.

    As detailed in Freydal, he is unquestioned champion and victor of innumerable duels, a master of weapons. His way of battlefield movement was applicable to dance, innovative and ahead of his time, propelling him forward in the status of chivalric virtue. There are others who may claim to be the ‘Last Knight’, but none are so final as him. Not only is the title more popularly attached to his name, and not just because he is the last to be regarded as so chivalrous, but because he is the reason they are no more.


    Noble Phantasms:
    You know who I am...
    Gedechtnus: So I Declare, My Memory Known For All Time
    Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
    Rank: E~EX
    Range: -
    Maximum Targets: 1 Person.
    An ability that belongs to the very first exploiter of media. A Noble Phantasm that has the potential to make the concept of “fame boost” irrelevant. In life, Maximilian I utilized every means at his disposal in order to establish himself and his dynasty as the premier and most prestigious family in all Europe. So thorough was his exploitation of propaganda that it is truly impossible to determine what German history leading up to the period of his rule is real or exaggerated. Monumental works of art dedicated to glory both his and familial, his greatness is the height of falsehoods. A pinnacle existing only on parchment.

    Where other Servants keep their True Names a most coveted secret, Maximilian has the luxury to carelessly divulge it. This is because the more information that is known about Maximilian, the stronger he becomes. However, it is not simply a matter of providing rank ups to his stats. Of the Emperor of Media who used every asset at his disposal to cement his legend in human history, it can be said that “cementing oneself in history” is part of that legend. That is the true identity of this Noble Phantasm. The more people that are aware of his existence, the more he is cemented in human history, and the greater heights he achieves. This includes fabricated stories, falsehoods, even boldfaced lies. If there is enough local awareness and especially belief in “information” about him, then the criteria of being “cementable” is fulfilled, and he gains the benefits of that anecdote in a way not too unlike a spontaneously acquired Skill. He can pressure the process a little bit with a bit of magical energy, and insist some benefits be temporarily acquired even if they’re not “cementable”. Due to the nature of this Noble Phantasm “cementing that which is not cemented”, its effects require a constant stream of magical energy to maintain that gets more demanding over the accumulation of abilities.

    At first glance, this Noble Phantasm is easily mistaken for the All Kinds of Talents or Imperial Privilege Skills. In a way, it can be called a compounding Imperial Privilege.

    Although, strangely enough, the Golden Rule never really sticks.


    You know how devoted I am...
    Currum Matrimoniale: O’ My Love, Forever I Shall Chase Thee
    Type: Anti-Army Anti-Obstruction
    Rank: B+
    Range: 50
    Maximum Targets: 200 people.
    A lavisiously decorated carriage designed by the renowned artist: Albrecht Dürer. Crafted for the purpose of celebrating long after the occasion of his marriage to Mary of Burgundy, it is pulled by four horses who are driven by an angel of victory, and adorned with accouterments of love and grandeur. On its sides are depicted the ancestors of both Maximilian and Mary, coming together in the joining of houses Habsburg and Valois-Burgundy.

    The day Maximilian knew he was to be wed to Mary of Burgundy was a day of clandestine fate. A landless King, his only title marked him as successor to his father the Holy Roman Emperor, and yet the most eligible bachelorette in all of Europe chose to marry him. He resolved himself in the moment of reading the letter that he would love her utterly, and departed with all haste. It was a match destined to be made, as the two fell deeply in love. Even so depicted in the story of Theuerdank, a love that he would fight wars over.

    That legendary love, that delicate promise unbroken, the great conviction to even go to crusade if it meant its consecration. No barrier shall keep Maximilian from his target. For his love, for his treasured person, he would reach them through any obstacle. A carriage of love that penetrates any barrier, army, or attack. A ride that brings Maximilian to his enemy, all for his beloved.

    Originally typed as Anti-Army, but through some method he's given it a more unique typing. "This makes more sense, doesn't it?" Or so he says.


    All know my splendor...
    Ehrenpforte Maximilians I: Glorious Testament Upon a Fleeting Monument
    Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
    Rank: A+
    Range: ???
    Maximum Targets: 1 Person.

    Thus, Maximilian underscores his authority.

    This Noble Phantasm lies not in a single arch, but in their proliferation. Duplicate arches can be placed on any surface as long as there is enough space for the whole product to be displayed. Upon invocation of its True Name, these arches are activated, and link together to establish Maximilian’s territory. A territory that he rules with absolute authority as the greatest of Emperors like he so desires. This territory acts as a proof of connection to the distant past, to link Maximilian to the legendary bloodlines of yore, to in him inherit the legacy of long-passed greatness. Effectively, this means that his personal mystery skyrockets to match that of the most ancient glories. An absolute ascendance which enforces his ambitions and existence in a manner to make that which may have once been impossible, possible. His Noble Phantasms are maximized within this territory. Designed to be spread amongst his subjects, its architecturally impossible splendor so invokes in the beholder the feeling that within any moment that the Emperor himself might arrive in triumph. So it is that within his territory, Maximilian is resplendent in the glimmer of triumph.

    The arch is missing a particular detail: the tomb of Maximilian I. A feature added after his death in later printed editions of the arch, originally it lacked that cemented event. Within this territory, it becomes so once again. In other words, Maximilian gains resistance to instant death effects and a boost to his stats. All that is needed to, as his motto dictates, go “through so many dangers”.

    The territory is anchored in the duplicate arches that formed it. Thus, it can be destroyed if enough of them are as well. However, it is not defenseless. There is one last feature of these prints that give them one last peculiarity: towards the lower right of the arch is a line of three shields showing the coats of arms of Stabius, Kölderer, and Dürer; the creators of this print. Without these three, this arch would never exist. Thus it is eternally marked with their signature. It can be said that these three in some way reside within the artistry. Thus there is a triple-layered barrier that protects it. For their King whom they loved, this monument was devised. Therefore, depending on various factors, these arches are as fleeting as their devotion.


    And now, it is time to keep my promise!
    Magna Currus Triumphi: Illusion of Eternity Carried Forth by a Dream
    Type: Anti-Oblivion
    Rank: EX
    Range: 80
    Maximum Targets: 1,000 people.

    Maximilian’s triumphal procession, for which this carriage was the centerpiece, was "not an ordinary triumph, but one also of philosophy and morality".

    It is an invincible carriage, the manifestation of his ambition and splendor, his dream of a global empire given shape. His dreams of patron-hood and status as Apollo Musagetes to Germany. Uplifter of the German people into the renaissance, investor of culture and science. A herald of progress, championing for the endless march into the future rather than lamenting the cycles which declared the past. With this carriage, Maximilian will break all from the shackles of pastward gaze, freeing humanity from the vicious cycles with the very embodiment of progress. A chariot that represents the ascension inherent with the end of worldly glory and the beginning of eternal fame, denying the end and the degradation in the face of renounced acceptance. Acquiring the absolute splendor of being the inheritor of Rome, carrying the torch of civilization forward, he gains access to the Imperial Regalia. Or at least, notably faithful replicas. Thus he ascends to the heights and status of the immortal gods.

    But, most importantly, this chariot is a promise. A promise made to a dear friend that was plagued by paranoia and impending doom. "I still have the gift you left me. The world will not end, this I swear."

    In a typical Holy Grail War, this Noble Phantasm would be far too costly to truly consider using outside of his territory. This epitome of the defiance of endings carries far too much weight for any normal Master to handle.

    Is the Anti-Oblivion type real? "It is the last gift of my oldest and dearest friend. Thus, there cannot be anything wrong with it!" Perhaps he had a hand in this one as well.


    Creator's Notes
    I made this before the release of Traum, so obviously a particular Skill may seem a little off.

    Holy Roman Emperor Maximilian I is insane. Like, seriously insane. There is SO MUCH to him, that it was very hard to settle on a particular class. So I chose this one. It's grand and wondrous, and everything that I enjoy about making larger-than-themselves characters. Truly, his greatness is true in it's descent from false legacy, but legendarily so.

    For those wondering about the specifics for his last NP, it has to do with Albrecht Durer, whom a friend of mine has made a Foreigner of. As the two were really close friends, we had a lot of fun making a little bit of a synergistic "extra meaning" to his Great Triumphal Carriage.

    I hope you all enjoyed!

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    I sure am happy that people like Ernst Udet. I spent way too long stressing about how to write him properly, seems like that time paid off. I probably won't be able to top that with the eventual Red Baron, but I'll try.

    As for my favourites from the past Milestone, I really enjoyed Random's recent F/lc sheets and my two absolute favourites in the past fifty is definitely Pinetree's Watcher Yibb-Tstill, that one was weird. But the best kind of weird and I love it. The other is DelRey's Gatekeeper Elisabetha Hevelius. Just a really great sheet that was very well written. The small bit of interactivity, I thought, was really cool as well.
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    I will update with all your corrections asap.
    And no one mentioned my grand assassin as favorite yet, perhaps i should post them again...on brand for them
    "Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."



    Behold my vault of Heroes.
    Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.


    The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
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    Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
    Create-a-Servant 4 soon.

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    No, Del, I think your Grand Assassin is just so... Assassin-y that we all just collectively fail to register his presence. Yeah.

    Also pls don't hit us with that NP again.

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    Quote Originally Posted by DelRey View Post
    139 Servants, 39 of which are jisharas. 19 Foreigners this round, dominating all other classes. 2nd. most common class is caster with 18, zerker with 17.
    your persia section's wrong i think

    god i gotta start getting more than one servant out per update...

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    Quote Originally Posted by kiwi View Post
    god i gotta start getting more than one servant out per update...
    I've been telling myself the same thing for like, 2 compilations. Still nothing. ;_;
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    Quote Originally Posted by DelRey View Post
    okay fellas, its time for what you all have not been waiting for. Im here to once again tell you the Kings of Extra Classes.

    Royd remains the Bulvark here. He bolstered his claim as Shielder King with 7 Servants on his back.

    BnEl15 better watch out because he now shares his Watcher King seat with Vance and Kamera, each with 3 Servants.

    Me, DelRey, still gatekeeps the Gatekeeper Crown with 4 Servants and 1 Redux. But I call out pinetree and Royd to challenge me! gimme more of your badass GKs.

    A mysterious man named Morg van Destro wears the Mask of the Fakers with 4 Servants. But Royd pumped out 3 Fakers in a short period of time. Someone is going for it and stands with me beside the throne.

    I still pretend that it matters because I hold the Pretender Crown! Do not fight me, Morg!

    Wtf, there has been a lot of movement! I now share the Seat of Voyagers with Nuclear and Royd!

    Somehow I still retain my Foreigner Kingdom but once again Royd marches forward 9 Servants against my 10 with 4 Reduxes!

    Rey-Coin to the Moon! I gained the MoonCancer Title now that I have 2 sheets under my belt. But its more like 1.X because my first one is a bit weird.

    No altercations yet, Wyvern retains the AlterEgo and Lover position with 5 and 6 Servants each.

    Royd saves his Saver position and adds one more Servant to his lead. 5 Servants. He also holds a position on the Table of Beasts.
    Barely any changes for this Milestone. BnEl and Kamera kicked Vance from the Watcher Throne while Kamera is plotting his regicide against BnEl15 who is plotting the regicide against Faker King Morg. RIP Notorious B.N.L
    Else, I gained a slight edge in the war for Voyager Crown and I cemented my place as the rightful King of Foreigners.

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    Quote Originally Posted by kiwi View Post
    your persia section's wrong i think

    god i gotta start getting more than one servant out per update...
    Quote Originally Posted by WhiteFrenzy View Post
    I've been telling myself the same thing for like, 2 compilations. Still nothing. ;_;
    quality over quantity, friends
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    Create-a-Servant 4 soon.

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    Oh my god, all of this seems so intense.

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    Quote Originally Posted by DesReploid View Post
    The other is DelRey's Gatekeeper Elisabetha Hevelius. Just a really great sheet that was very well written. The small bit of interactivity, I thought, was really cool as well.
    I gotta mention this one too, I didn't realize she was in the last 50.
    My favorite DelRey sheet for sure.

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    Quote Originally Posted by DelRey View Post
    Wait what. How did I miss this?

    Okay I read it. I can safely say that it is a masterpiece. Would read again.
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    Class: Rider
    Other Classes: N/A
    True Name: Sayyida al-Hurra
    Alignment: Neutral Evil
    Place of Origin: Morocco (16th century)

    Parameters:

    STR: D
    END: C
    AGI: C
    MGI: D
    LCK: B
    NP: B

    Height: 180cm
    Weight: 160lbs
    Likes: Water, Fellow Pirates
    Dislikes: Misogynists
    Talent: Being a Privateer
    Natural Enemy: Blackbeard, Christopher Columbus
    Attribute: Man
    Traits: Female, Humanoid, Weak to Enuma Elish
    Armament: A long ribbon
    Catalyst: Part of her ship

    Class Skills:

    Magic Resistance B: She encountered several magi from her era in her time as pirate queen, and destroyed them. This grants her a fairly high rank of magic resistance, negating many of the spells that a modern magus can do.

    Riding N/A: Replaced with Voyager of the Storm.

    Personal Skills:

    Voyager of the Storm A: She was the captain of a powerful group of pirates. This skill allows her to ride ships extremely well. It also encompasses Charisma and Tactics at the same rank.

    Queen of the Pirates B: She was well known as the undisputed leader of the pirates from the western Mediterranean. This skill manifests in her as a commanding aura, which grows in effectiveness against thieves or criminals.

    I Will Not Move B: The sublimation of the fact that her marriage was the first wedding of a Moroccan king which was outside of the capital, said to be Sayyida showing that she would still govern her subjects despite marrying the king. This manifests as an aura around her that makes her weight appear to be far heavier then it truly is whenever anyone is trying to forcibly move them.


    Noble Phantasm(s):

    Al Hurra
    Rage, Oh Queen Of The Sea



    Type: Anti-Army
    Rank: C
    Range: 100 Meters
    Max Targets: 1000

    This noble phantasm is the manifestation of her title of queen and her skills as a Privateer. When activated, it allows her to create a mount, a pirate ship, manifesting out of water and made out of water. Naturally, she needs a source of water to activate this, though it does not matter how much she has, even a single drop of it would be enough to activate a miniature version of this. It is capable of melding into water and reshaping itself as Sayyida wills.


    Janiban Min Almadiq
    Between the Pirate Rulers

    Type: Anti-Army
    Rank: B
    Range: 100 Meters
    Max Targets: 1000

    This noble phantasm is the sublimation of her alliance with Barbarossa. When its true name is called, her ship dissolves into a whirlpool, sucking in any being that comes close. In addition, around her appears the aura of eight heads, each of which will rear at any enemies that approach her, reminiscent of the myth of Scylla and Charybdis.


    Lore: Sayyida al-Hurra was the child of a pair of Andalusian nobles, who fled Spain when Ferdinand and Isabella conquered Granada. She was taught by several extremely famous teachers, and gained an excellent education. She married Sidri Al-Madri II, the governer of Tetouan and a family friend. When he died, she took over as ruler of Tetouan. Meanwhile, she had turned to piracy as part of her wish to avenge herself against the enemy. She was well-respected by the European royalty, especially in Spain and Portugal. She also made a deal with Hayreddin Barbarossa, the famed admiral, where they split the Mediterranean as their territory.

    Personality: She is brave and highly dangerous, giving off the feeling that she is constantly in control of every conversation. She abhors anyone who doesn't follow her rule. She especially dislikes other rulers who think that their rule is greater then hers. Her wish is that she captured Granada back in life, so her family and friends were able to truly return to their home.

    Relationships:

    Francis Drake: "Intriguing. Truly intriguing. Even I can admit that you are a competent admiral. It would be interesting to have you join my army."

    Blackbeard: "The famous pirate... is so... no. I know this trick. I know what you're doing, and I would be impressed if I wasn't so... disappointed."

    Barthomelew Roberts: "Impressive. You are fairly competent. Unfortunately, I will have to destroy you. Unless you join my army."

    Jason: "A famed strategist. But you only release it... when you are extremely in danger? Curious. But also pathetic."

    Oda Nobunaga: "You and I are fairly alike. It would be intriguing to join forces, hm?"

    Christopher Columbus: "You are pathetic. You are truly pathetic and I'll be laughing as I wipe you from existence."

    Penthesilea: "Oh, a Berserker? Interesting. You seem quite strong. How would you like to work for me?"
    Last edited by jishara; June 9th, 2022 at 08:57 PM.

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    Sayyida: Not a fan of how much her Skills and first NP are "generic pirate". The second NP is a cool idea though.

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    Thank you for your feedback, Royd! I have removed Gale's Plunder and replaced it with I Will Not Move. I have also changed her first noble phantasm to be more "Ship that constantly reshapes" as opposed to a more generic ship.

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