Create-A-Servant 3

**DelRey** · June 23rd, 2022, 01:26 PM

indeed. an impressive first sheet. good job

**jishara** · June 24th, 2022, 01:04 AM

Source: Bohdana Hryzhiuk on ArtStation

Class: Assassin
Other Classes: N/A
True Name: Luella Miller
Alignment: Neutral Evil
Place of Origin: America (20th Century)

Parameters:

STR: C
END: E
AGI: D
MGI: A+
LCK: C
NP: A

Height: 171cm
Weight: 80 lbs
Likes: People taking care of her
Dislikes: The death of her caretakers
Talent: Convincing people to take care of her, leeching their life
Natural Enemy: Baobhan Sidh
Attribute: Earth
Traits: Fae, Female, Humanoid, Demonic, Weak to Enuma Elish
Armament: No weapons
Catalyst: A copy of the eponymous short story

Class Skills:

Presence Concealment E: She is nigh-incapable of concealing her presence, unfitting for a member of the Assassin class. In life, she never attempted to pretend she wasn't there or hide herself, so this has a miniscule rank.

Personal Skills:

Glamour A: A passive glamour spell surrounds her, causing her to appear to be the most beautiful person anyone has ever seen. This also makes anyone who is affected by the glamour far more susceptible to her first Noble Phantasm. This is a constant thing she has had for a very long time, though she never created it.

Powerless Shell A+: She gives off no impression of actually being a servant, appearing to be merely an extremely frail and ill girl who needs your help. No matter what she does, the impression is maintained.

Information Erasure B-: In battles that she's in, her true name, appearance, characteristics, and abilities will be forgotten after she leaves, making her return to seeming like a frail person. At her rank, this maintains even if her events happen in broad daylight. However, if there is a camera or other video evidence, that will not be altered. The sublimation of her seemingly nonexistent past.

Noble Phantasm(s):

Obsessive Devotion
Working to Death

Type: Anti-Unit
Rank: B
Range: 10 meters
Max Targets: 1

The sublimation of her causing people around her to work themselves to death. A special effect spreading in a field around her. If no one does anything to help her, her mana will rapidly drain. However, if anyone does anything for her, even something as simple as picking up something she dropped or opening a door for her, she will immediately fully revitalize. In addition, the person who did something for her will have a spell placed upon them, constantly leeching their mana away to give to her while forcing tem to do more things for her. If they die while under this curse, their soul will become stored in her saint graph.

Specters in the Moonlight
Return, One Last Time, To Aid My Rest

Type: Anti-Unit
Rank: B~A
Range: 100 meters
Max Targets: 1

The sublimation of the spirits returning to guide her to death at the end of her life. This noble phantasm is automatically activated upon her death. The spirits stored within her saint graph, those of the people who died due to her first noble phantasm, are released and perform one more deed for her. This can restore her for a time, but the most used one is for them to attack those beings that she believes are responsible for killing her. Notably, there are always six spirits stored in this saint graph, causing it to always at least have the rank of B. It can achieve the rank of A.

Lore: Luella Miller was known as the fictional villainess of the eponymous short story. A young woman who entered a town as a schoolteacher, but it soon turned out that she wasn't able to do anything by herself, instead pushing others to do it all for her. She appeafed to waste away whenever anyone didn't help her, but anyone who helped her worked themselves to death. However, the truth is... Luella Miller was a modern and young Faerie, bearing the shell of an "Ideal noblewoman". However, in her, this exaggerated, causing the events in that town. Once she realized what she was doing, she tried to stop, but she wasted away. Then, more people aided her, and died. She finally died after a month without anyone who wasn't resistant aiding her. The spirits of those who died due to overwork when taking care of her returned at the end of her life to help guide her to the afterlife.

Personality: She is taciturn, rarely willing to share anything to anyone, as she has been summoned from the end of her life, after she realized what she did. She will try anything to seal her first noble phantasm, so she doesn't drain people, and doesn't have to do that. That is also her wish. She admires other fae, especially those who don't need to feed off of people.

Relationships:

Baobhan Sith: "Why are you complimenting me for... the death of my caretakers? I don't want it to happen..."

Anastasia: "Oh.... so there were fae even after me.... I guess I really was that forgettable..."

Barghest: "So brave...and strong.....I hope... you find your happiness..."

Habetrot: "....no....I do not wish to be paired...."

Melusine: "...Impressive....a dragon...."

Yu Mei-Ren: "...you were...still around....even with so low mystery....that's impressive..."

Oberon: "...you're stuck....aren't you.....you have to.....that's why you lie....poor thing."

**massive_jojo_reference** · June 25th, 2022, 10:44 AM

This time around… I WILL BE THE ONE TO TAKE HENRY’S HEAD! HENRY! HENRY!!!!!!

Faceclaim (warning, skimpy)

Faceclaim 2

True name: Anne Boleyn

Class: Avenger

Alignment: Chaotic Evil

H/W: 170cm/65kg

Armament: Executioner’s axe

Wish: To destroy the kingdom of Britain

Natural Enemy: King Henry VIII, all servants originating from the island of Britain

STR: B+
END: B+
AGI: A
MNA: A++
LCK: E
NP: B+

Lore:

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Avenger’s true name is that of Anne Boleyn, the Second wife of Tyrannical King Henry VIII, and Queen Consort of England.

Born to the powerful and influential Boleyn family, she was versed in Boleyn’s magecraft which heavily focused on summoning Familiar spirits, chief among them was the Demonic three headed bull, an ancient phantasmal species though to be distantly related to demon boars, hence the Boleyn Coat of arms, this has of course, created rumors of witchcraft within the family.

The magical prowess of her family aside, she wished to use King Henry to spread the reformation to Britain, to do this she manipulated him into divorcing his first wife, by rejecting the catholic church and instituting the Anglican church in England.

With Henry’s rule uncontested, anyone who opposed his position as the supreme head of the English church would be executed, in what can only be described as a mass homicide, more than 57 thousand people were executed for dissenting against Henry, and in the background Anne was watching and reveling in her great accomplishment.

Yet privately, she detested henry as a simple brute that she used as a political tool to spread the reformation to England, after getting pregnant four times, and having failed to give him a male heir, Henry ordered that she be executed for alleged incest and adultery. It is said that she devoutly prayed in her cell and in her last moments, however this was merely a cover-up of what truly happened.

In her cell she cursed Henry day and night… She swore that she would have his head one day, her mind reached the peak of insanity as she began writing symbols on cell walls, cursing her own impending death, but also the Catholic Church, the protestant church which she once supported, and the entire kingdom of England as well as the island of Britain and its entire people.

And on the day of her execution, she walked up to the headsman’s chopping block and laid down her head, with an ulterior motive in her mind.

Driven by anger, moments before the axe reached her neck, she released the full power of the Boleyn magical crest, and forcefully fused her own soul with the Spiritual Core of the Demon bull, releasing a light that blinded the crowd that had gathered as well as the executioner.

Before the axe could even reach her neck she grabbed it and wildly swung it at the executioner, beheading him in one fell swoop, as the smoke cleared the image was no longer that of the soon to be Executed queen but that of a Demon queen that grew horns and a tail, lightning and flame coming out of her body. Fueled by pure malice, she rampaged through London, massacring anyone who stood in her way, making sure to take the head of anyone she recognized, friend or foe.

In her rampage she managed to reach the Windsor Palace, planning to kill King Henry and declare herself as the Demon Queen of England, however just before she could land a blow on the King, the mages of the clock tower managed to land a blow on her just in time, King Henry watched in shock as her body, strained from the pain of fusing with a phantasmal species spirit origin and her rampage through London, started to disintegrate. The incident was covered up and anyone who survived her rampage was threatened by the mages association to never speak of the incident again, even King Henry had to agree to this arrangement, he ordered the axe destroyed and records be changed that she was beheaded with a sword instead. As she was disintegrating, she was cursed the King one last time, before perishing.

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**Bloble** · June 26th, 2022, 02:34 AM

"It is not beyond us to hunt the night."

Class: Archer (Additionally qualifies for Rider, Caster, Berserker)

True Name: Vampire Killer

Aliases: Johnathan Harker, Abraham van Helsing, Quincey Morris, John Seward, Arthur Holmwood

Alignment: Lawful Good

Parameters:

Strength: D	Endurance: D	Agility: C
Magic: D	Luck: C	Noble Phantasm: D

Skills

Noble Phantasm

Background

Johnathan Harker was a British solicitor and lawyer in the mid-1800s. Though only an ordinary person, he joined ranks with four other men, taking up arms against a certain Dead Apostle terrorizing London. All to save the souls of the woman he loved and her best friend.

Arthur Holmwood was a British Lord in the mid-1800s. Though only an ordinary person, he joined ranks with four other men, taking up arms against a certain Dead Apostle terrorizing London. All to save the souls of the woman he loved and her best friend.

John Seward was a British psychiatrist and asylum administrator in the mid-1800s. Though only an ordinary person, he joined ranks with four other men, taking up arms against a certain Dead Apostle terrorizing London. All to save the souls of the woman he loved and her best friend.

Quincy Morris was a Texan cowboy in the mid-1800s. Though only an ordinary person, he joined ranks with four other men, taking up arms against a certain Dead Apostle terrorizing London. All to save the souls of the woman he loved and her best friend.

Abraham Van Helsing was a Dutch professor, doctor, and polymath in the mid-1800s. Though only an ordinary person, he joined ranks with four other men, taking up arms against a certain Dead Apostle terrorizing London. All to save the souls of the woman he loved and her best friend.

Though all different, and none fit to reach the Throne on their own, the souls of this band of brothers were forged together in blood. As virtue reached its peak within each of them, they achieved a level of synchronization and shared purpose that borders on the impossible. Wielding blades and guns and miracles crafted by the hands of man in order to fight the terrifying creatures of darkness, they ventured forth and became a reminder that the monster under one's bed can be felled by faith and fortitude.

That, Archer says, is his only wish: for those who are cherished to sleep soundly at night.

And, perhaps, a second chance for dear Lucy.

He is rather cross about what Stoker did to their manuscript, though.

Description

The very model of a proper gentleman. In all aspects, Archer is kind, generous, devoted, insightful, brave, loyal, caring, adaptable, ferocious... the list of positive adjectives to describe him is altogether too long. While his unstable core should by all rights result in an temperamental personality, it seems the opposite has happened, resulting in the distillation of all that is just and true in a Victorian man.

In short, Archer's a bit of a Mary Sue, and is so capable and perfect that it's almost annoying.

Once you get past that superficial perfection, however, you may find a melodramatic man with a flair for the theatrical (perhaps a consequence of Bram Stoker's playwright-ish embellishments). Archer has a habit of going on tangents, and is easily overcome by the mildest of stimuli. If you were to do him a small favour he would get down on one knee and tearfully proclaim that you are a true friend and confidante now and forever. Easily moved by the slightest of gestures in others, and by his own emotions, Archer embodies the extremes of whatever mood he is in, though of course he would never allow himself to behave in a foul way.

Archer's greatest flaw is a knightly sort of chauvinism that insists upon protecting the person he cares about even to the detriment of the situation. For example, telling a certain ally that she should stay away from the day's foul business for fear of seeing her come to harm, even though her aid was necessary and leaving her alone ended up backfiring in the end. When rational thought and feelings clash, all too often emotion wins the day and strays from logic. This trait ought to be properly wrangled out of him quickly, lest it become a problem in the battles to come.

Otherwise, Archer is rather scholarly and cautious, and likes to sit and ruminate on the situation before ever lifting a finger, though on odd days he may become restless, manifest a gung-ho attitude, and start talking like a cowboy.

He despises creatures of the night and monsters that prey on humanity, and will happily set aside his own goals in order to see such terrors eradicated.

Archer's primary armaments are a Winchester rifle and a Kukri knife, alongside a bevy of miscellaneous tools. Due to not qualifying statistically for the Saber class, he was made an Archer instead. In truth that class is also a poor fit, but he is not the sort to complain about being judged a third-rate Heroic Spirit. He also possesses a whip enchanted with holy magic, though he claims it is for horses, not men.

Interactions

**Kamera** · June 26th, 2022, 07:11 AM

Anne Boleyn: The lore and concept is pretty cool and interesting, and I like how you make her a magus and the involvement of the Clock Tower in her lore. That said, the execution (no pun intended) is a bit all over the placeI think you took a few steps too far with the evil Avenger shenanigans, which don't really have much positive impact to her personality and motivation. Now that I think about it, I wonder if the Demon Familiar that her Boleyn family has could be integrated into my Demon God Pillar host project.

Dracula Vampire Killer: Damn that's a pretty clever Phantom Fusion Servant. Pretty great and entertaining sheet overall. In particular, I really like the concept of somewhat regular dudes being able to overcome things such as a Dead Apostle. That said, while the sheet itself is perfectly well balanced, personally I think it lacks something that can highlight their conceptual strength. It doesn't need to be a ridiculously powerful Skill or NP, just an ability that can capture their what these four men represent.

**DelRey** · June 26th, 2022, 07:26 AM

Avenger: Damn she is edgy. Thats a unique take on her for sure.

Archer: neat, been a while you posted something here. this is a good sheet and the character is done well.

**massive_jojo_reference** · June 26th, 2022, 04:02 PM

Originally Posted by Kamera

Anne Boleyn: The lore and concept is pretty cool and interesting, and I like how you make her a magus and the involvement of the Clock Tower in her lore. That said, the execution (no pun intended) is a bit all over the placeI think you took a few steps too far with the evil Avenger shenanigans, which don't really have much positive impact to her personality and motivation. Now that I think about it, I wonder if the Demon Familiar that her Boleyn family has could be integrated into my Demon God Pillar host project.

Dracula Vampire Killer: Damn that's a pretty clever Phantom Fusion Servant. Pretty great and entertaining sheet overall. In particular, I really like the concept of somewhat regular dudes being able to overcome things such as a Dead Apostle. That said, while the sheet itself is perfectly well balanced, personally I think it lacks something that can highlight their conceptual strength. It doesn't need to be a ridiculously powerful Skill or NP, just an ability that can capture their what these four men represent.

i haven't gone wild with a sheet since my avenger galileo, so yeah, i did go a bit overboard. Avengers are pretty fun to write. I'll take the note and be a bit more subtle the next time i write a servant.

Having one of Henry's wives as avenger was such a obvious and cool concept tho, i don't see why i was the first to do it.

**Bloble** · June 26th, 2022, 05:46 PM

Originally Posted by Kamera

Anne Boleyn: The lore and concept is pretty cool and interesting, and I like how you make her a magus and the involvement of the Clock Tower in her lore. That said, the execution (no pun intended) is a bit all over the placeI think you took a few steps too far with the evil Avenger shenanigans, which don't really have much positive impact to her personality and motivation. Now that I think about it, I wonder if the Demon Familiar that her Boleyn family has could be integrated into my Demon God Pillar host project.

Dracula Vampire Killer: Damn that's a pretty clever Phantom Fusion Servant. Pretty great and entertaining sheet overall. In particular, I really like the concept of somewhat regular dudes being able to overcome things such as a Dead Apostle. That said, while the sheet itself is perfectly well balanced, personally I think it lacks something that can highlight their conceptual strength. It doesn't need to be a ridiculously powerful Skill or NP, just an ability that can capture their what these four men represent.

Thank ye, I couldn't really think of any zany conceptual stuff that would fit, so in the end I decided to just release it as-is. The component souls' experience from different walks of life is reflected in their myriad of flexible skills, sort of like Hundred-Face Hassan in reverse. Then again, isn't it fine for a third-rate Servant to lack a conceptual ability?

As for the NP, it's halfway a justification of their fusion into one person via pure gentlemanly devotion to justice, and half a reference to how all five of the characters are written very similarly in the book; it's actually incredibly hard to tell Arthur and Johnathan apart without mentioning who they're married to or what their jobs are.

Originally Posted by DelRey

Avenger: Damn she is edgy. Thats a unique take on her for sure.

Archer: neat, been a while you posted something here. this is a good sheet and the character is done well.

Thank ye, I reread Dracula on a plane flight last week and got a burst of inspiration.

Haven't posted here much for lack of good ideas; you guys have done all the cool historical figures already! A wikipedia reader like me can't keep up with the CaS meta anymore.

**DelRey** · June 26th, 2022, 06:02 PM

ey, if nothing holding you back to do your own take an any character you want. Especially if its from a legacy creator like you. You are still one of the big names in the creation scene, even if a new generation took over.
I heard you are in the roleplay scene now, correct. Have you posted all your submitted sheets for them here already? And you can show off your old sheets for the new people here in the revision contest that starts in a few days.

**DesReploid** · June 26th, 2022, 06:40 PM

Vampire Killer. Really cool sheet. I never would've gotten the idea to throw the entire Vampire hunter crew into one person. I'm kinda disappointed that Quincy doesn't take over more often, just out of nowhere. Because going from sophisticated English man to "I have never spoken to an American in my life"-Texan that is Quincy, would have been funny I think. I really like the NP they have too. I'd think it'd be easy to make it a more generic one maybe tied to hunting, or something something about being super effective against monsters, but this is really cool.

Also... was I just "You kids"`d?

**Bloble** · June 26th, 2022, 10:42 PM

Originally Posted by DelRey

ey, if nothing holding you back to do your own take an any character you want. Especially if its from a legacy creator like you. You are still one of the big names in the creation scene, even if a new generation took over.
I heard you are in the roleplay scene now, correct. Have you posted all your submitted sheets for them here already? And you can show off your old sheets for the new people here in the revision contest that starts in a few days.

Was I ever a big name? I'm flattered, but it feels like that's a title reserved for the folks like you, Daneel, and Sunny, who have blog posts full of Servants and provide feedback on other sheets regularly. I'm just a rando who occasionally drops by and leaves a sheet or two behind.

I was considering the revision contest actually, just not sure what sheet to revise. The old Mina Harker sheet could use a touch-up, but it would hardly be anything close to a rewrite. I'm generally happy with how my previous eligible sheets have aged... mostly. There are three old RP sheets I haven't shown here because they either use RP-specific classes, have already been done by other creators, or were rendered noncanon by FGO. Not sure they'd be worth posting. Otherwise I'm mostly playing DnD nowadays, and for newer roleplays I generally prefer making non-Servant sheets.

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Originally Posted by DesReploid

Vampire Killer. Really cool sheet. I never would've gotten the idea to throw the entire Vampire hunter crew into one person. I'm kinda disappointed that Quincy doesn't take over more often, just out of nowhere. Because going from sophisticated English man to "I have never spoken to an American in my life"-Texan that is Quincy, would have been funny I think. I really like the NP they have too. I'd think it'd be easy to make it a more generic one maybe tied to hunting, or something something about being super effective against monsters, but this is really cool.

Also... was I just "You kids"`d?

Alas I'm not good enough to express just how great Quincey is. You'll have to settle for an accent switch whenever a suitably American servant pops up.

27 is ancient enough to start acting like an old man, right?

**jishara** · June 27th, 2022, 02:06 AM

Source: Larry on Fanpop

Class: Archer
Other Classes: Caster
True Name: Marie-Anne Lenormand
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Place of Origin: France (19th Century)

Parameters:

STR: D
END: C
AGI: D
MGI: B
LCK: A
NP: B

Height: 181cm
Weight: 140lbs
Likes: Her fortune telling
Dislikes: Disbelief
Talent: Cartomancy
Natural Enemy: Napoleon, Marie Antoinette
Attribute: Man
Traits: Female, Weak to Enuma Elish, Humanoid
Armament: Das Spiel der Hoffnung
Catalyst: A deck of Lenormand cards

Class Skills:

Independent Action C: It is possible for her to stay in the world for one day without a master. She was fairly independent in life, and thus managed to achieve this rank.

Magic Resistance C: She lived in an age with little magic. However, due to her own fortune-telling, she has achieved a C rank of this skill. This allows her to cancel spells with a chant below two verses.

Personal Skills:

Fortune-Teller A+: The ability to tell someone's fate. Her preferred technique is using a deck of cards. At this rank, anything that she sees in her visions is guaranteed to be true, though the time tends to be more vague.

Coupez B: The conceptual ability to "shuffle" the deck. This causes more random things to constantly happen around her, conceptually reshuffling the deck so that things that "will happen" become things that "might happen". Naturally, this also makes her nigh-impervious to reversed causality attacks such as Gae Bolg.

Malignant Hecate B: An ominous visage that constantly frightens anyone around, combined with an aura that "her fortune-telling truly works". The sublimation of her supposedly dreadful visage and the parapherinalia that she proudly displayed of assorted magic-associated items.

Expert of Many Specializations (Magecraft) B: Although in her time magecraft had dwindled, she learned many types of magecraft, including Kabbalah, pythagorean, druidic, astrological, and Greco-Roman. This allows her to utilize any of those styles of magecraft which she learned at an adequate proficiency, though none well enough to defeat a master.

Noble Phantasm(s):

Das Spiel der Hoffnung
Your Life Was Written In The Cards

Type: Anti-Unit
Rank: B
Range: 20 meters
Max Targets: 1 target

The sublimation of her entire legend as a fortune teller. This manifests as a deck of Lenormand cards. Naturally, she is easily capable of predicting the future. But when this Noble Phantasm is activated, it goes beyond merely seeing the future and becomes changing it herself. Anyone who she targets, she can alter the fate of to place an "event", such as gaining a very high position, or being violently killed. However, she is not able to know when the event is placed, relying on the luck of the draw to have it land where she wants it to. Good thing that she's always been quite lucky.

Lore: Marie-Anne Lenormand was a fortune teller known for her immensely accurate predictions. At age seven, she correctly predicted the removal of the Mother Superior at her convent school and who would replace her. At age 14, she began studying magecraft, learning many different styles before professionally setting out at the age of 17. Her most famous predictions were to Josephine Bonaparte, and to the leaders in the French Revolution, Saint-Just, Marat, and Robespierre.

Personality: Calm, elegant, and dignified. She knows that what she sees in the cards is the "truth", but often wishes to compete with the "lies" of others to see which wins. She adores her afternoon tea, and whenever she gets a chance will take the time to sip it. However, she does have one great regret. The death of her dearest friend, Josephine. She believes it was her fault, because she didn't predict it, so her wish is to have predicted it and then to be able to make the most of the remaining time with her.

Relationships:

Napoleon: "Ah, Monsieur Napoleon. Enchante, lovely to meet you. Perchance, have you happened to see your wife around?"

Marie Antoinette: "Madame Antoinette. Would you like your fate told to you?"

Louis Antoine de Saint-Just: "Monsieur Saint-Just, perhaps next time you wil listen to my predictions, hm?"

Cu Chulainn: "It appears that the 'truth' has won against your 'lies'. What a pity."

Avicebron: "A pleasure to meet one of the greatest Kabbalah practitioners. I dabble in it myself."

Medea: "A magus from the Age Of Gods? Say, would you like to sit and have me tell your fortune? What do I want in exchange? Oh, nothing at all, madame. Merely a few lessons in your magecraft style."

**Zoraaa** · June 27th, 2022, 06:40 AM

The Caster of Andalusia

Source: やけん on pixiv.

“Caster, Santiago, at your service. Surprised? Haha, you’ve no need to worry! I’ve foretold this interaction years past, so it was only a matter of time. Ah, before I forget, I’ve got a little gift for you. Urim and Thummim, holy divination stones. In case my skills aren’t available, use these. We never know what the future holds in store, right Master?”

True Name: Santiago
Origin: Literature
Alignment: Lawful Good
Gender: Male

Background

Parameters

Class Skills

Personal Skills

Relationships

Noble Phantasm

Creator's Notes: Debut servant! Thought I'd try my hand at servant creation with a character I'm familiar with and it became something I couldn't stop writing. Hope you enjoyed.

**DelRey** · June 27th, 2022, 07:12 AM

Originally Posted by Bloble

Was I ever a big name? I'm flattered, but it feels like that's a title reserved for the folks like you, Daneel, and Sunny, who have blog posts full of Servants and provide feedback on other sheets regularly. I'm just a rando who occasionally drops by and leaves a sheet or two behind.

I was considering the revision contest actually, just not sure what sheet to revise. The old Mina Harker sheet could use a touch-up, but it would hardly be anything close to a rewrite. I'm generally happy with how my previous eligible sheets have aged... mostly. There are three old RP sheets I haven't shown here because they either use RP-specific classes, have already been done by other creators, or were rendered noncanon by FGO. Not sure they'd be worth posting. Otherwise I'm mostly playing DnD nowadays, and for newer roleplays I generally prefer making non-Servant sheets.

without sucking your wiener too much, but you made your name with your consistently great sheets. You probably didnt notice, but your sheets are still quoted in relationship sections today. I checked and this one here is your 20th sheet I think. To still be mentioned in talks about the previous generation of CaS shows that you are remembered fondly. Same goes for Sunny of course, who is still a favorite among some creators here.

People forget that the revision contest can simply be a repost to show off your old gems. We have thousands of sheets on this site. Who knows if some ever took a peek inside the CaS2 days or the older contests. I made the contest with the wish to get creators like you at least kinda back in the game.

27 is ancient enough to start acting like an old man, right?

the old wise man role is reserved for King Royd the Golden.

**DelRey** · June 27th, 2022, 07:34 AM

Archer: Expert skill seems like a standard low-ranked magecraft skill. it is not unusual for mages to dabble in various fields. Fate alteration is a bold effect for someone like her, but it is decently balanced. Coupez skill is really good.

Caster: what a nice coincidence considering the sheet prior. TC seems odd, because rather than making a territory, you imply a sort of blessing from the desert. NP is also a bit vague in what it does. Does he sweep the enemy with his divinity or does he do other stuff? One can see the interest in this person, it comes across. Nice job.

**TQG Imaginatorious** · June 27th, 2022, 11:30 AM

Santiago-Man does it feel weird not being the newest creator anymore (despite it being so for weeks now) but welcome! For a first servant, this is pretty good, the descriptions are not too long but still conveys your intended message. The TC seems iffy to me, are you going for he doesn't need a territory because he is the territory? And yes the NP's effects when the target is destined to lose is vague.

**NINE-lives** · June 27th, 2022, 01:24 PM

Hey bloble, come join us in the womb thread if you feel low on ideas or need help.

**Bloble** · June 27th, 2022, 07:30 PM

“Do not be alarmed, Master. You see nothing because light cannot reach me. Would you like to understand it --- the beauty that separates God from this world?”

Class: Assassin

True Name: Hassan-i-Sabbah

Aliases: Hassan of Fevered Faith

Alignment: Lawful Evil

Parameters:

Strength: C	Endurance: B	Agility: A
Magic: C	Luck: E	Noble Phantasm: A

Skills

Noble Phantasm

"Very well. The time has come to bare all. Let this diseased body serve as proof of His love."

"Promise me, Master, that you will not avert your eyes."

"I want you, of all people, to see it."

"Za-ba-ni-ya."Noble Phantasm:

Zabaniya

Febrile Inspiration

Type: Anti-Self (Labyrinth)
Rank: A

A technique that transforms the user’s skin into a special type of crystal that is harder, more flexible, more temperature-resistant, and sharper than any other substance that exists on Earth.

At least, such is the appearance on the surface. In truth, Assassin’s entire body is already made up of that substance. Febrile Inspiration represents not the ability to create crystals, but Assassin’s own ability to impose the common sense of the planet onto a system that would normally overwrite those same physical laws. The true Miracle was not that Assassin survived exposure to a certain being, but that she was able to retain her humanity afterwards. Without the latent ability of Febrile Inspiration she would have been one of countless failed simulations her God makes of the people that it devours, a short-lived construct that rapidly degrades to crystal.

It is only after Assassin purposefully withdraws her Reality Marble from the surface of her skin that the simulated Crystal Valley which is her body begins to rampage of its own accord. By the way in which she withdraws control, she influences the way the crystals grow. It is possible to instantly create armor-like plates, sturdy shields, or throwing knives thinner than a sheet of paper. In life the cost of such creations would be negligible, the same as the billions of flakes of dead skin humans shed every day. As a Servant, however, Assassin must use magical energy from her body. She can manipulate the traits of her creations to the limits of crystal, up to the point of making herself transparent.

Because Assassin is only a wraith, her body lacks the effect of instantly painting over reality that its progenitor possesses, when held in check by the World. It does, however, retain its semi-vampiric nature, rapidly digesting blood it comes into contact with and breaking it down for magical energy. Much like the original, Assassin can also paint over her prey. Once something has been killed it can be incorporated into her system without issue. Even worse, embedding her crystals into a target will eventually drive them mad if not removed, like a virus infecting a computer and rewriting the logic at its core.

Even so, she can never be satisfied with just that much.

The world she was promised is one that accepts her, after all.

"More."

"There must be more!"

"I haven't shown it to you yet, Master!"

"Behold God's Kingdom of Heaven!"

"Inspire, Noble Delusion!"

Background

There was once a trainee in a certain sect. Showing promise and aptitude towards learning the arts of the Assassin, she devoted herself to God. Her skills grew, and soon the day approached when she could go out and shed blood in the Lord’s name.

Then tragedy struck. She realized one morning that she had lost the ability to feel pain. Soon other symptoms appeared, her skin began to bunch up and flake, and it became obvious that she had contracted leprosy. At the time the disease was considered incurable and those who contracted it were shunned. Unable stay at the mountain, she was cast out to die. Her future had been cut off. She accepted it, even as her heart filled with despair. The girl who could no longer become one of the Hashshashin resolved to spend her remaining months on a pilgrimage around the world. She traveled North, South, East, and finally West, boarding a boat to nowhere.

The girl eventually found herself weakened, sickly, and close to death. She wandered into a forest which had been described in local rumours, pushing forward through the undergrowth even as her mind fragmented. Her wandering took her to a massive valley. Trees formed crystal towers and light sprang from every surface. It was heaven, she thought, and soon enough she would meet God.

She did. The girl made it to the center of the valley and saw God in all of its glory. Then she died.

The girl couldn’t recall how she’d escaped, only that it was a miracle. Her memories stopped when a crystal spear pierced her heart, yet she was unharmed. In fact, she felt better than ever. The ugly flakes falling from her skin had become beautiful crystals that bloomed into flowers. The girl’s heart was filled with love and gratitude. She returned to the mountain with blessing in tow and was welcomed as a hero. More than that, the new Old Man of the Mountain.

The woman that had seen God and the one that had woken up days later were not the same, of course. One had died instantly. The other had been born days later, a simulated replica of the dead. Her core, her latent Reality Marble, had been compatible with the God’s alien logic, and so the simulation believed itself to be the real thing. In many ways she was an exact copy, except that the God in her heart now had no love for humanity. Neither, then, did she.

Her reign was the briefest of all who held her position. It was also the bloodiest. She was maddened, reaching out and killing all who opposed her, searching for something that could not be found. The voice in her head whispered in a language she did not understand, and so she interpreted its words as she was taught: humanity's sins were bottomless, and God would arrive soon to erase it. Her job was to help. She was to spill blood in His name until the time came when her existence would no longer be considered a sin.

In the midst of her efforts to destabilize the region, the girl saw something one evening: a skull mask in the darkness. Thus her new life ended, by the glint of dusk's blade. She knows now, as a Heroic Spirit, that the one who killed her is a threat to her God. When it wakes, his sword of mortality will surely strike at it. Her wish is therefore not to wake up her God, for it will rise in its own time, but to summon forth that mysterious executioner... and destroy him for good, so that her God remains immortal.

Author Note

**Kamera** · June 27th, 2022, 11:49 PM

Hassan of Fevered Faith: I think I've seen this exact concept of Hassan-i-Sabbah before, down to the Crystal Valley connection; have you already posted it somewhere? I still think the Crystal Valley connection feels somewhat forced and a bit of a reach in terms of suspension of disbelief. Personally I would connect the Crystal theme with local Persian or Middle-Eastern legends and deities. That said, still a pretty fun Servant with interesting original lore, and the NP visuals are really cool.

**Bloble** · June 27th, 2022, 11:55 PM

Originally Posted by Kamera

Hassan of Fevered Faith: I think I've seen this exact concept of Hassan-i-Sabbah before, down to the Crystal Valley connection; have you already posted it somewhere? I still think the Crystal Valley connection feels somewhat forced and a bit of a reach in terms of suspension of disbelief. Personally I would connect the Crystal theme with local Persian or Middle-Eastern legends and deities. That said, still a pretty fun Servant with interesting original lore, and the NP visuals are really cool.

It was one of the Reclamation Servants I came up with alongside Jan Zizka as a Rider back in the day. I posted them both in the Graveyard in the RP section but only Rider made it over to CaS because I thought Assassin wasn't quite up to snuff. If I did post it here it's probably lost somewhere in CaS 2 and didn't get added to the OP. You can tell that it's an RP sheet; the backstory can fit entirely on a single page in a google doc because I have an obsession with making RP sheets compact. I also have zero knowledge of Persian or Middle-Eastern myth, alas.

I've also never read Land of the Lustrous; the crystal thing was just a cool coincidence.

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