indeed. an impressive first sheet. good job
indeed. an impressive first sheet. good job
"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
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Source: Bohdana Hryzhiuk on ArtStation
Class: Assassin
Other Classes: N/A
True Name: Luella Miller
Alignment: Neutral Evil
Place of Origin: America (20th Century)
Parameters:
STR: C
END: E
AGI: D
MGI: A+
LCK: C
NP: A
Height: 171cm
Weight: 80 lbs
Likes: People taking care of her
Dislikes: The death of her caretakers
Talent: Convincing people to take care of her, leeching their life
Natural Enemy: Baobhan Sidh
Attribute: Earth
Traits: Fae, Female, Humanoid, Demonic, Weak to Enuma Elish
Armament: No weapons
Catalyst: A copy of the eponymous short story
Class Skills:
Presence Concealment E: She is nigh-incapable of concealing her presence, unfitting for a member of the Assassin class. In life, she never attempted to pretend she wasn't there or hide herself, so this has a miniscule rank.
Personal Skills:
Glamour A: A passive glamour spell surrounds her, causing her to appear to be the most beautiful person anyone has ever seen. This also makes anyone who is affected by the glamour far more susceptible to her first Noble Phantasm. This is a constant thing she has had for a very long time, though she never created it.
Powerless Shell A+: She gives off no impression of actually being a servant, appearing to be merely an extremely frail and ill girl who needs your help. No matter what she does, the impression is maintained.
Information Erasure B-: In battles that she's in, her true name, appearance, characteristics, and abilities will be forgotten after she leaves, making her return to seeming like a frail person. At her rank, this maintains even if her events happen in broad daylight. However, if there is a camera or other video evidence, that will not be altered. The sublimation of her seemingly nonexistent past.
Noble Phantasm(s):
Obsessive Devotion
Working to Death
Type: Anti-Unit
Rank: B
Range: 10 meters
Max Targets: 1
The sublimation of her causing people around her to work themselves to death. A special effect spreading in a field around her. If no one does anything to help her, her mana will rapidly drain. However, if anyone does anything for her, even something as simple as picking up something she dropped or opening a door for her, she will immediately fully revitalize. In addition, the person who did something for her will have a spell placed upon them, constantly leeching their mana away to give to her while forcing tem to do more things for her. If they die while under this curse, their soul will become stored in her saint graph.
Specters in the Moonlight
Return, One Last Time, To Aid My Rest
Type: Anti-Unit
Rank: B~A
Range: 100 meters
Max Targets: 1
The sublimation of the spirits returning to guide her to death at the end of her life. This noble phantasm is automatically activated upon her death. The spirits stored within her saint graph, those of the people who died due to her first noble phantasm, are released and perform one more deed for her. This can restore her for a time, but the most used one is for them to attack those beings that she believes are responsible for killing her. Notably, there are always six spirits stored in this saint graph, causing it to always at least have the rank of B. It can achieve the rank of A.
Lore: Luella Miller was known as the fictional villainess of the eponymous short story. A young woman who entered a town as a schoolteacher, but it soon turned out that she wasn't able to do anything by herself, instead pushing others to do it all for her. She appeafed to waste away whenever anyone didn't help her, but anyone who helped her worked themselves to death. However, the truth is... Luella Miller was a modern and young Faerie, bearing the shell of an "Ideal noblewoman". However, in her, this exaggerated, causing the events in that town. Once she realized what she was doing, she tried to stop, but she wasted away. Then, more people aided her, and died. She finally died after a month without anyone who wasn't resistant aiding her. The spirits of those who died due to overwork when taking care of her returned at the end of her life to help guide her to the afterlife.
Personality: She is taciturn, rarely willing to share anything to anyone, as she has been summoned from the end of her life, after she realized what she did. She will try anything to seal her first noble phantasm, so she doesn't drain people, and doesn't have to do that. That is also her wish. She admires other fae, especially those who don't need to feed off of people.
Relationships:
Baobhan Sith: "Why are you complimenting me for... the death of my caretakers? I don't want it to happen..."
Anastasia: "Oh.... so there were fae even after me.... I guess I really was that forgettable..."
Barghest: "So brave...and strong.....I hope... you find your happiness..."
Habetrot: "....no....I do not wish to be paired...."
Melusine: "...Impressive....a dragon...."
Yu Mei-Ren: "...you were...still around....even with so low mystery....that's impressive..."
Oberon: "...you're stuck....aren't you.....you have to.....that's why you lie....poor thing."
Last edited by jishara; June 26th, 2022 at 02:43 PM.
This time around… I WILL BE THE ONE TO TAKE HENRY’S HEAD! HENRY! HENRY!!!!!!
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True name: Anne Boleyn
Class: Avenger
Alignment: Chaotic Evil
H/W: 170cm/65kg
Armament: Executioner’s axe
Wish: To destroy the kingdom of Britain
Natural Enemy: King Henry VIII, all servants originating from the island of Britain
STR: B+
END: B+
AGI: A
MNA: A++
LCK: E
NP: B+
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Last edited by massive_jojo_reference; July 11th, 2022 at 04:58 PM.
Class: Archer (Additionally qualifies for Rider, Caster, Berserker)
True Name: Vampire Killer
Aliases: Johnathan Harker, Abraham van Helsing, Quincey Morris, John Seward, Arthur Holmwood
Alignment: Lawful Good
Parameters:
Strength: D
Endurance: D
Agility: C
Magic: D
Luck: C
Noble Phantasm: D
Skills
Noble Phantasm
Background
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Interactions
Last edited by Bloble; June 27th, 2022 at 12:24 AM.
Anne Boleyn: The lore and concept is pretty cool and interesting, and I like how you make her a magus and the involvement of the Clock Tower in her lore. That said, the execution (no pun intended) is a bit all over the placeI think you took a few steps too far with the evil Avenger shenanigans, which don't really have much positive impact to her personality and motivation. Now that I think about it, I wonder if the Demon Familiar that her Boleyn family has could be integrated into my Demon God Pillar host project.
Dracula Vampire Killer: Damn that's a pretty clever Phantom Fusion Servant. Pretty great and entertaining sheet overall. In particular, I really like the concept of somewhat regular dudes being able to overcome things such as a Dead Apostle. That said, while the sheet itself is perfectly well balanced, personally I think it lacks something that can highlight their conceptual strength. It doesn't need to be a ridiculously powerful Skill or NP, just an ability that can capture their what these four men represent.
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Let it not burden your soul, nor numb your strides.
Avenger: Damn she is edgy. Thats a unique take on her for sure.
Archer: neat, been a while you posted something here. this is a good sheet and the character is done well.
"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
University of Formatting | Gallery of Potential | Memorandum of the Extra Class Kings
Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
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i haven't gone wild with a sheet since my avenger galileo, so yeah, i did go a bit overboard. Avengers are pretty fun to write. I'll take the note and be a bit more subtle the next time i write a servant.
Having one of Henry's wives as avenger was such a obvious and cool concept tho, i don't see why i was the first to do it.
Last edited by massive_jojo_reference; June 26th, 2022 at 04:05 PM.
Thank ye, I couldn't really think of any zany conceptual stuff that would fit, so in the end I decided to just release it as-is. The component souls' experience from different walks of life is reflected in their myriad of flexible skills, sort of like Hundred-Face Hassan in reverse. Then again, isn't it fine for a third-rate Servant to lack a conceptual ability?
As for the NP, it's halfway a justification of their fusion into one person via pure gentlemanly devotion to justice, and half a reference to how all five of the characters are written very similarly in the book; it's actually incredibly hard to tell Arthur and Johnathan apart without mentioning who they're married to or what their jobs are.
Thank ye, I reread Dracula on a plane flight last week and got a burst of inspiration.
Haven't posted here much for lack of good ideas; you guys have done all the cool historical figures already! A wikipedia reader like me can't keep up with the CaS meta anymore.
ey, if nothing holding you back to do your own take an any character you want. Especially if its from a legacy creator like you. You are still one of the big names in the creation scene, even if a new generation took over.
I heard you are in the roleplay scene now, correct. Have you posted all your submitted sheets for them here already? And you can show off your old sheets for the new people here in the revision contest that starts in a few days.
"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
University of Formatting | Gallery of Potential | Memorandum of the Extra Class Kings
Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
Create-a-Servant 4 soon.
Vampire Killer. Really cool sheet. I never would've gotten the idea to throw the entire Vampire hunter crew into one person. I'm kinda disappointed that Quincy doesn't take over more often, just out of nowhere. Because going from sophisticated English man to "I have never spoken to an American in my life"-Texan that is Quincy, would have been funny I think. I really like the NP they have too. I'd think it'd be easy to make it a more generic one maybe tied to hunting, or something something about being super effective against monsters, but this is really cool.
Also... was I just "You kids"`d?
Was I ever a big name? I'm flattered, but it feels like that's a title reserved for the folks like you, Daneel, and Sunny, who have blog posts full of Servants and provide feedback on other sheets regularly. I'm just a rando who occasionally drops by and leaves a sheet or two behind.
I was considering the revision contest actually, just not sure what sheet to revise. The old Mina Harker sheet could use a touch-up, but it would hardly be anything close to a rewrite. I'm generally happy with how my previous eligible sheets have aged... mostly. There are three old RP sheets I haven't shown here because they either use RP-specific classes, have already been done by other creators, or were rendered noncanon by FGO. Not sure they'd be worth posting. Otherwise I'm mostly playing DnD nowadays, and for newer roleplays I generally prefer making non-Servant sheets.
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Alas I'm not good enough to express just how great Quincey is. You'll have to settle for an accent switch whenever a suitably American servant pops up.
27 is ancient enough to start acting like an old man, right?
Source: Larry on Fanpop
Class: Archer
Other Classes: Caster
True Name: Marie-Anne Lenormand
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Place of Origin: France (19th Century)
Parameters:
STR: D
END: C
AGI: D
MGI: B
LCK: A
NP: B
Height: 181cm
Weight: 140lbs
Likes: Her fortune telling
Dislikes: Disbelief
Talent: Cartomancy
Natural Enemy: Napoleon, Marie Antoinette
Attribute: Man
Traits: Female, Weak to Enuma Elish, Humanoid
Armament: Das Spiel der Hoffnung
Catalyst: A deck of Lenormand cards
Class Skills:
Independent Action C: It is possible for her to stay in the world for one day without a master. She was fairly independent in life, and thus managed to achieve this rank.
Magic Resistance C: She lived in an age with little magic. However, due to her own fortune-telling, she has achieved a C rank of this skill. This allows her to cancel spells with a chant below two verses.
Personal Skills:
Fortune-Teller A+: The ability to tell someone's fate. Her preferred technique is using a deck of cards. At this rank, anything that she sees in her visions is guaranteed to be true, though the time tends to be more vague.
Coupez B: The conceptual ability to "shuffle" the deck. This causes more random things to constantly happen around her, conceptually reshuffling the deck so that things that "will happen" become things that "might happen". Naturally, this also makes her nigh-impervious to reversed causality attacks such as Gae Bolg.
Malignant Hecate B: An ominous visage that constantly frightens anyone around, combined with an aura that "her fortune-telling truly works". The sublimation of her supposedly dreadful visage and the parapherinalia that she proudly displayed of assorted magic-associated items.
Expert of Many Specializations (Magecraft) B: Although in her time magecraft had dwindled, she learned many types of magecraft, including Kabbalah, pythagorean, druidic, astrological, and Greco-Roman. This allows her to utilize any of those styles of magecraft which she learned at an adequate proficiency, though none well enough to defeat a master.
Noble Phantasm(s):
Das Spiel der Hoffnung
Your Life Was Written In The Cards
Type: Anti-Unit
Rank: B
Range: 20 meters
Max Targets: 1 target
The sublimation of her entire legend as a fortune teller. This manifests as a deck of Lenormand cards. Naturally, she is easily capable of predicting the future. But when this Noble Phantasm is activated, it goes beyond merely seeing the future and becomes changing it herself. Anyone who she targets, she can alter the fate of to place an "event", such as gaining a very high position, or being violently killed. However, she is not able to know when the event is placed, relying on the luck of the draw to have it land where she wants it to. Good thing that she's always been quite lucky.
Lore: Marie-Anne Lenormand was a fortune teller known for her immensely accurate predictions. At age seven, she correctly predicted the removal of the Mother Superior at her convent school and who would replace her. At age 14, she began studying magecraft, learning many different styles before professionally setting out at the age of 17. Her most famous predictions were to Josephine Bonaparte, and to the leaders in the French Revolution, Saint-Just, Marat, and Robespierre.
Personality: Calm, elegant, and dignified. She knows that what she sees in the cards is the "truth", but often wishes to compete with the "lies" of others to see which wins. She adores her afternoon tea, and whenever she gets a chance will take the time to sip it. However, she does have one great regret. The death of her dearest friend, Josephine. She believes it was her fault, because she didn't predict it, so her wish is to have predicted it and then to be able to make the most of the remaining time with her.
Relationships:
Napoleon: "Ah, Monsieur Napoleon. Enchante, lovely to meet you. Perchance, have you happened to see your wife around?"
Marie Antoinette: "Madame Antoinette. Would you like your fate told to you?"
Louis Antoine de Saint-Just: "Monsieur Saint-Just, perhaps next time you wil listen to my predictions, hm?"
Cu Chulainn: "It appears that the 'truth' has won against your 'lies'. What a pity."
Avicebron: "A pleasure to meet one of the greatest Kabbalah practitioners. I dabble in it myself."
Medea: "A magus from the Age Of Gods? Say, would you like to sit and have me tell your fortune? What do I want in exchange? Oh, nothing at all, madame. Merely a few lessons in your magecraft style."
The Caster of Andalusia
Source: やけん on pixiv.
“Caster, Santiago, at your service. Surprised? Haha, you’ve no need to worry! I’ve foretold this interaction years past, so it was only a matter of time. Ah, before I forget, I’ve got a little gift for you. Urim and Thummim, holy divination stones. In case my skills aren’t available, use these. We never know what the future holds in store, right Master?”
True Name: Santiago
Origin: Literature
Alignment: Lawful Good
Gender: Male
Background
Parameters
Class Skills
Personal Skills
Relationships
Noble Phantasm
Creator's Notes: Debut servant! Thought I'd try my hand at servant creation with a character I'm familiar with and it became something I couldn't stop writing. Hope you enjoyed.
without sucking your wiener too much, but you made your name with your consistently great sheets. You probably didnt notice, but your sheets are still quoted in relationship sections today. I checked and this one here is your 20th sheet I think. To still be mentioned in talks about the previous generation of CaS shows that you are remembered fondly. Same goes for Sunny of course, who is still a favorite among some creators here.
People forget that the revision contest can simply be a repost to show off your old gems. We have thousands of sheets on this site. Who knows if some ever took a peek inside the CaS2 days or the older contests. I made the contest with the wish to get creators like you at least kinda back in the game.
the old wise man role is reserved for King Royd the Golden.27 is ancient enough to start acting like an old man, right?
"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
University of Formatting | Gallery of Potential | Memorandum of the Extra Class Kings
Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
Create-a-Servant 4 soon.
Archer: Expert skill seems like a standard low-ranked magecraft skill. it is not unusual for mages to dabble in various fields. Fate alteration is a bold effect for someone like her, but it is decently balanced. Coupez skill is really good.
Caster: what a nice coincidence considering the sheet prior. TC seems odd, because rather than making a territory, you imply a sort of blessing from the desert. NP is also a bit vague in what it does. Does he sweep the enemy with his divinity or does he do other stuff? One can see the interest in this person, it comes across. Nice job.
"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
University of Formatting | Gallery of Potential | Memorandum of the Extra Class Kings
Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
Create-a-Servant 4 soon.
Santiago-Man does it feel weird not being the newest creator anymore (despite it being so for weeks now) but welcome! For a first servant, this is pretty good, the descriptions are not too long but still conveys your intended message. The TC seems iffy to me, are you going for he doesn't need a territory because he is the territory? And yes the NP's effects when the target is destined to lose is vague.
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Class: Assassin
True Name: Hassan-i-Sabbah
Aliases: Hassan of Fevered Faith
Alignment: Lawful Evil
Parameters:
Strength: C
Endurance: B
Agility: A
Magic: C
Luck: E
Noble Phantasm: A
SkillsNoble PhantasmAuthor Note
Last edited by Bloble; June 27th, 2022 at 11:31 PM.
Hassan of Fevered Faith: I think I've seen this exact concept of Hassan-i-Sabbah before, down to the Crystal Valley connection; have you already posted it somewhere? I still think the Crystal Valley connection feels somewhat forced and a bit of a reach in terms of suspension of disbelief. Personally I would connect the Crystal theme with local Persian or Middle-Eastern legends and deities. That said, still a pretty fun Servant with interesting original lore, and the NP visuals are really cool.
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It was one of the Reclamation Servants I came up with alongside Jan Zizka as a Rider back in the day. I posted them both in the Graveyard in the RP section but only Rider made it over to CaS because I thought Assassin wasn't quite up to snuff. If I did post it here it's probably lost somewhere in CaS 2 and didn't get added to the OP. You can tell that it's an RP sheet; the backstory can fit entirely on a single page in a google doc because I have an obsession with making RP sheets compact. I also have zero knowledge of Persian or Middle-Eastern myth, alas.
I've also never read Land of the Lustrous; the crystal thing was just a cool coincidence.