jishara, what is the moonray walking mentioned under the high priestess of Nanna of your Ennigaldi?
jishara, what is the moonray walking mentioned under the high priestess of Nanna of your Ennigaldi?
As a skill, it gives her a rank-up to agility under the light of the moonOriginally Posted by TQG Imaginatorious
Mother-Fokker: nice sheet. My personal nitpick is the use of arrows in skill ranks. Settle for a + or -, or specify in the description that it is limited to a specific area. See it like a rank in their specific branch of Item Construction, for example.
But my major opinion is: you had such a great intro, and you made yourself the challenge
why not make him a Saber under this concept and restructure the NP and add the line that he is the one that forged the blades of the battles in the sky. The propellers are his swords. Like Masamune, a caster-y Saber. This wouldve elevated (heh) it further
Donner Party: My Sir Franklin approves. Neat idea to make this story a Servant. Your style of making short quotes shines here.
You made my wholesome Voyager Class into something creepy and Foreigner-y. Damn you, I like it,
Last edited by DelRey; July 21st, 2022 at 03:55 PM.
"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
University of Formatting | Gallery of Potential | Memorandum of the Extra Class Kings
Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
Create-a-Servant 4 soon.
Source: Dhangieu on Deviantart
Class: Caster
Other Classes: N/A
True Name: Amaridevi
Alignment: Neutral Good
Place of Origin: Cambodian Folklore
Parameters:
STR: D
END: C
AGI: C
MGI: B
LCK: D
NP: C
Height: 181cm
Weight: 123lbs
Likes: Engineering
Dislikes: Manipulators
Talent: Civil engineering
Natural Enemy: Angra Mainyu
Attribute: Man
Traits: Female, Humanoid, Weak to Enuma Elish
Armament: A shovel
Catalyst: An ancient, worn, crown
Class Skills:
Territory Creation C: By virtue of careful digging she can create a Bounded Field, though it is inferior to a standard Workshop.
Item Creation C: This skill manifests as the ability to "create jewels" by easily focusing the mana to create more and more beautiful jewelery.
Personal Skills:
Expert of Many Specialisations C: She was trained in many different fields incredibly effectively. This grants her an assortment of different skills all at rank C, including Eye for Art, Legal Knowledge, Scientific Method, Charisma, and more.
Golden Rule B-: She was known as fairly incredibly wealthy, granting her this rank of this skill. She will never have any money troubles, as she constantly has a titanic amount of it. But this also has a negative, causing people who meet her to begin to germinate an obsession over the wealth.
Master of Civil Engineering B: Her favorite skill she learned was civil engineering. Manifesting as a skill, this allows her to easily understand how to perform civil engineering feats that she can perform, although high-powered mysteries cannot be done by her. In addition, it allows her to call spirits to perform the feats for her.
Noble Phantasm(s):
Anteak Angkor
Trap Of Sticky Rice
Type: Anti-Army
Rank: C
Range: 5 meters
Max Targets: 40
Her famous feat of civil engineering, manifesting into a Noble Phantasm. A trap which takes a short time to set up, it appears just like the surrounding ground. Around it are four pieces of beautiful golden jewelery, which exert a fascination effect. But if they are touched by anyone, whomever touches it gets trapped inside the trap, which is extremely hard to get out of as a result of its stickiness, and get denounced, losing power, wealth, and fame.
Lore: Amaridevi was a Cambodian princess, trained in philosophy, art, music, law, governance, and many other things, though her favorite was civil engineering. She was also incredibly wealthy, so some unscrupulous ministers, wanting her money, decided to frame her fiancee of being a traitor, causing the king to exile him. They waited two weeks, then tried to court her. So she vowed revenge. She decided to build a pit trap, fill it with a mixture of sticky rice and mud that traps them, surround it with jewels, make it soundproof... and she did it all in one day. She invited the ministers there, and one by one they pocketed a jewel and got caught in the trap. She then presented the king with the evidence, and he allowed her fiancee back.
Personality: A responsible and calm person. She deeply cares about everyone around her, and makes it a point to do whatever she can to help. She deeply dislikes greedy people, and people who would make false accusations. Her wish for the Grail is that she can help everyone do whatever they need.
Relationships:
Edmond Dantes: "The Count of Monte Cristo? Oh my. Would you like me to build you a palace of some kind?"
Jeanne Alter: "A fragile existence, only created to take revenge. How awful that must be. Here, would you like anything?"
Angra Mainyu: "You most certainly are not evil. No, don't give me that, you aren't."
Hessian Lobo: "Oh, would you like me to make you something? A den for you to sleep, maybe?"
Gorgon: "...Your sisters still care about you. They are right there, just waiting for you to be ready to talk to them.... Keep that in mind."
Ishtar: "Ooh, I love your jewels. Would you like to trade?"
Astraea: "Using the stars? Interesting."
Xiang Yu: "Please don't reshape the world on a whim."
Last edited by jishara; July 22nd, 2022 at 11:52 PM.
Another Cambodian servant who loves construction related things, huh. Aside from that though, she doesn't really seem all that avenger-y to me, seems better as a caster.
Thanks for your feedback. I've switched her to a caster, I think you're right that the justification for being Avenger is a bit odd.
out of interest I counted how many servants jishara already made. In only a few weeks, he should reach the magic 100 servants.
Then I wondered if he got close to our venerated Royd and his massive amount of Servants.
I underestimated him.
while jishara scratches the 100, Royd reaches for the 400.
incredible.
"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
University of Formatting | Gallery of Potential | Memorandum of the Extra Class Kings
Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
Create-a-Servant 4 soon.
Dang, already? I expect great things for your 100th sheet, Jishara. A minimum of 50k word essay and at least 4 layers of collapse tags.
Thanks BnElDang, already? I expect great things for your 100th sheet, Jishara. A minimum of 50k word essay and at least 4 layers of collapse tags.I'm excited for it too
Only 3 left of my Fighting Game servants after this
Berserker of the Obscene Craving
Identity: Hamilton Howard "Albert" Fish
Alternative Names: the Gray Man, the Werewolf of Wysteria, the Brooklyn Vampire, the Moon Maniac, The Boogey Man
Class:Berserker
Alignment: Chaotic evil
Armament(s): Implements of hell in his first stage, his body afterwards
Summoning Catalyst: A butcher's knife with human blood on it
History:
Hamilton Howard "Albert" Fish (May 19, 1870 – January 16, 1936) was an American serial killer, rapist, child molester, and cannibal who committed a minimum of three child murders from July 1924 to June 1928. He was also known as the Gray Man, the Werewolf of Wysteria, the Brooklyn Vampire, the Moon Maniac, and The Boogey Man. Fish once boasted that he "had children in every state", and at one time stated his number of victims was about 100. However, it is not known whether he was referring to rapes or cannibalization, nor is it known if the statement was truthful.
Fish was a suspect in at least five murders during his lifetime. He confessed to three murders that police were able to trace to a known homicide, and he confessed to stabbing at least two other people. Fish was apprehended on December 13, 1934, and put on trial for the kidnapping and murder of Grace Budd. He was convicted and executed by electric chair on January 16, 1936, at the age of 65.
Personality:
Fish exists in two extremes- fervent obsession, or an almost hazy silence. Most likely his madness enhancement skill at play, his obsession with murder, torture, mutilation, cannibalism, and various other atrocities, something he took pleasure in discussing and threatening within his lifetime. When asked about topics along the lines of these, he will eagerly and happily discuss all his knowledge, giving advice in proceeding with them whether the asker wants to know or not. Otherwise, he is entirely silent, unless he feels someone is a "kindred spirit", somewhat opening the notion of small talk. However, if that was the case, it would likely not happen, as they would likely be too obsessed with the former topics to engage in it.
At stage 2, the elated excitement becomes a mumbling, rambling obsession, barely coherent, silent no longer, coming from the upper mouth.
At stage 3, regardless of form, speech is lost, only guttural noises remain.
Height: Variable, starting at 168 cm. 2nd stage is roughly double this
Weight: Variable, starting at 143 lbs 2nd stage is roughly triple this
Appearance: Fish also possesses a third degree of mutation, though this mutation is dictated by whom/what he has consumed, as well as the environment he is summoned in. In order to progress to his second stage, he must consume the flesh equating to roughly 5 children or adolescents, a servant's counting as twice as potent. To ascend to his third, he must intake three times the initial amount.
Servant Parameters:
Str: D -> C -> ?
End: C+ -> B+ -> ?
Agi: D -> C+ -> ?
Mana: D -> C+ -> ?
Luck: D -> C -> ?
Class Skills:
Madness Enhancement B-: The Class Skill that characterizes a Berserker, raising basic parameters and strengthens one's physical abilities in exchange of hindering mental capacities and/or in exchange for their sense of reason. Fish possesses a negative modifier to this skill, on account of being declared "legally sane" in court, so he could receive the death penalty.
Personal Skills:
Self-Modification (Mutation) B: The aptitude to remold one's own body or merge one's own flesh with body parts of others. The higher the ranking in this Skill, the further away one is from being a proper hero. This skill is born of fish's extensive history of mutilation inflicted upon himself and others, as well as the natural negative responses the human body has against consuming human flesh. For this reason, Fish cannot actively choose to use this skill, and it will naturally occur upon consuming excess flesh.
Shapeshift D ->E: A Skill that refers to both borrowing bodies and appearance change, one of the abilities of the vampire. Fish gains a low rank of this skill due to his usage of false identities in life to secure targets, as well as his given monikers. This skill will lose a rank starting at Stage 2, allowing him to just barely be brushed off as human in the minds of those see him fleetingly. It is lost entirely if he progresses to Stage 3
Bloodsucking (Cannibalism) B: The act of absorbing another's blood to replenish their own health and physical and/or magical strength. It is one of the powers of a vampire. As the Rank raises, the power of absorption increases. Albert receives this skill both due to his habits in life, as well as his monikers- his variation also allows the same effect via the consumption of flesh, not just blood.
Mana Burst (Blood) D: The increase in performance caused by infusing one's weapons and body with Magical Energy and instantly expelling it. Simply put, recreating the effect of a jet burst by expending large amounts of Magical Energy. Fish's particular version manifests EXCLUSIVELY from his body when struck (though can be utilized purposefully at the Higher end of Stage 2, and Stage 3), as he will gush amounts of magically-charged blood that would not normally be possible from a being his size. It should be noted that the best way to deal with cleanup, if in an area where it cannot be soaked into the earth and dissipate, is with fire, as it will burn easily, but slowly. Additionally, it seems to conduct electricity extremely well, making him vulnerable to it.
(Pulled from Bugs' sheet of assassin Fish- all credit goes to him. D'Med him for permission, but he hasn't responded, fully willing to take it out if need be.)
Sadomasochistic Constitution C+:
A skill comprising both Sadistic Constitution as well as Masochistic Constitution. Berserker is neither the singular giver nor the receiver of pain, having reached a state in his paraphily that can be called an equilibrium. In addition to the general effects of the composited skills, Sadomasochistic Constitution allows Berserker to forcibly activate the skill by setting his own body as the target.
Berserker’s complex relationship with pain and pleasure began as a boy, when he realized he enjoyed being whipped by the nuns at the orphanage in which he grew up. The pleasure he felt at the pain was given a religious sanction by God in his warped mind, justifying his unending cruelty to others and himself. Young boys were tortured mercilessly at his hands, but Berserker also invited young boys to torture him in turn; beating his rear raw with a studded paddle. Berserker also infamously inserted over two dozen steel needles into his lower body to ensure he was constantly aroused and in pain.
Noble Phantasm(s):
Implements of Hell D: A Noble phantasm only available in his first form, they are a set of tools consisting of a meat cleaver, a butcher knife, and a small handsaw, which he utilizes in preparation and acquisition of his victims. While they are notably dulled and rusted, they seem to be enchanted with the ability to cut through flesh like butter
The Spread of Degeneracy B: A passive noble phantasm, contained as a magical pathogen within his blood. While it has no effect on servants, if consumed by humans, they will begin to exhibit the same cravings and feelings he does, cannibalism and insanity included. Upon beginning to partake in the consumption of flesh, after about a child's worth, they will begin to mutate into forms reminiscent of his second stage, culminating in the strength of a servant with E rank parameters, and the singular skill of Madness Enhancement, ranked D. Upon the death and demanifestation of Fish, the blood and its effects will also do so, mutations included. The mutated individuals cannot spread the NP from their own blood, it should be noted.
A noble phantasm born from his given status as a vampire and lycanthrope, with their stories oft being ones of disease and otherness, and the overwhelming desire to see him vanquished, despite logical cause in madness and technical innocence. The thought that the evil he wrought upon the innocents would continue to persist in the land of the living? The idea that it would continue living, even SPREAD? It was too much for the humans who sentenced a monster to death.
And thus, this Noble phantasm is a crystallization of the fear in possibility that it did continue, and did spread.
Design Notes:
- Once again, one of my Fighting Game servants. He serves as the midboss in story mode, and his gameplay archetype is of a heavy, albeit with gimmick elements of setplay and stance.
- His moveset is the one that's the least realized in my mind other than Foreigner, but he would likely be playable in his second stage, with the midboss proper being his unplayable third
- This one is admittedly a bit of a mess, I might combine some skills, but I think they're also unique enough that they deserve separation. I'm conflicted, so any advice is appreciated
- I imagine he's quite picky when it comes to the preparation of his food in his first form, as he stated in a letter to the parents of a child he stole and ate, that it took him about 9 days to do so in his entirety. He's much faster now, due to being a servant.
- I initially had the idea that he'd be a gestalt servant along with skinwalkers or wendigos, but I want to save that concept for some future servants
- The Stage 1 headshot actually comes from when I was first thinking of my FG servants, he, Mulan, Armstrong (And possibly Jalter, but I'm thinking of a rework to make her design more fun) being the only ones remaining unchanged- everyone else is pretty similar, but they're definitely not without noticeable differences.
- The dangling part on his back in the stage 2 pic isn't a tail, but rather the skin from his legs hanging, as he has outgrown them.
- With Fish, I just really wanted to make something malignant, that could serve as a monster and be something truly unnatural, without making a Beast class servant, since I think that takes away from the sudden, almost inexplicable manifestation of King Hassan to characters who don't know about Simo. Plus, I think it takes away from the horror of him by giving him the specific "evil" servant class. I'd rather people think along the lines of "How the hell did he manifest as a heroic spirit" as opposed to "oh he's a beast, that makes sense".
Last edited by Vididii; July 23rd, 2022 at 11:18 AM. Reason: bazaka, 2nd NP explanation
Fish: Cool sheet, you definitely did a good job giving a grotesque vibe. Though you still refer to him as Assassin in the fifth Personal Skill. Might want to correct that.
Knew I forgot something, thanks man
Alright, I think I might have something fresh now.
When He broke the third seal, I heard the third living creature saying, "Come." I looked, and behold, a black horse; and he who sat on it had a pair of scales in his hand. And I heard something like a voice in the center of the four living creatures saying, "A quart of wheat for a denarius, and three quarts of barley for a denarius; but do not damage the oil and the wine."
The Gnawing Hunger in the Heart of Man
The Black Rider
Aliases: The Third Horseman, the Horseman of Famine, the Sin of Greed
Class: Rider
Alternate Classes: None
Alignment: Lawful Evil
Source: The Book of Revelations, the Book of Ezekiel
Region: Israel
Attribute: Earth
Parameters
Strength: -
Endurance: A+++
Agility: C
Mana: EX
Luck: A
Background
Skills
Noble Phantasm
Lore
Final notes
The Donner Party: My heart! Why do you have to make this cute, heartbreaking little Servant?! It really is a lovely sheet, that truly pulls you in, and whilst the horror twist of the NP is expected to all who know the story, it doesn't make it any less sad that a Servant like this has to be burdened with a NP like that. Great job, ya broke ma heart.
Amaridevi: The caster class definitely works better for her. Everything seems to be on point with her, and that Item Creation... Rin and Luvia desire ranks just increased by a factor of 10. The only thing I'd say is that perhaps a few relationships to other servants with construction/creation history may be good now that she isn't an Avenger, as the all Avenger relationships kinda stops making sense. Even if they are great. As for coming so close to 100... Congratulations! That is some damn impressive work ethic. Can't wait to see what the big 100 is.
Hamilton Howard "Albert" Fish: This man always divides me. I want to praise the person who creates him, cause they do a great job, but I really can't bring myself to ever truly like the servant. Eh, ignoring the little argument, I think the sheet is a nice way of approaching the servant. The mutagenic side works well with the many monstrous titles he was given, and the ever reducing connection to the façade of humanity just works so well. The only question I have is the second NP, as I'm not completely sure what you're basing his ability to spread degeneracy on? It's a great concept, just one that feels a bit random. Overall, a good sheet.
The Black Rider: A very good job on this guy. I think you hit it strong with the conceptual aspects, and going for greed over the more mundane famine for the rider works very well with the overall concept. I really don't have a lot to say, cause I think the sheet does a perfect job selling and explaining itself. Whilst the NP is ridiculously strong, for the concept of Greed and a Horseman, it is perfectly in line with what I would imagine. Really great job
Source: SubaruSumeragi
Class: Rider
Other Classes: N/A
True Name: Grace Hopper
Alignment: Lawful Good
Place of Origin: America (20th Century)
Parameters:
STR: D
END: D
AGI: C
MGI: C
LCK: C
NP: C
Height: 167cm
Weight: 105lbs
Likes: Programming
Dislikes: Exclusivity
Talent: Spreading computer programming to everyone
Natural Enemy: BB
Attribute: Man
Traits: Female, Weak to Enuma Elish, Humanoid
Armament: No weapons
Catalyst: Her Presidential Medal of Freedom, her Naval uniform
Class Skills:
Magic Resistance C: She would normally not have a high rank of magic resistance due to her young age as a Heroic Spirit, but her ability in coding has been reshaped into a Magic Resistance skill.
Riding D+: She never rode many things, but as a result of her status as Admiral, she gains an enhanced rank when riding ships.
Personal Skills:
Grandma COBOL A: The sublimation of her inventing of the first programming language utilizing English, to make computer programming more accessible, as well as her work on COBOL and her speaking style that got her the nickname Grandma COBOL. This allows her speaking to mildly alter the world around her, as well as incorperates a Charisma effect of rank C, though this doesn't last very long after she stops.
Linker B: The ability to "compile" data into larger objects, the sublimation of her creating the first compiler. As a skill, she can compile any and all data she finds, fusing objects together into larger ones. However, this takes a lot longer for more complex objects, and cannot be done on living things or Noble Phantasms.
Debugging B: The first case of debugging in a computer, a literal bug flying into it and causing the systems to glitch. As a skill, this allows her to figuratively "debug" things, removing all forms of poisons, corruptions, and alterations that are there that are below A rank, although this cannot be used on things such as the Grail.
Noble Phantasm(s):
USS Hopper
The Ocean of Programming
Type: Anti-Army
Rank: C
Range: 30 meters
Max Targets: 1000 targets
The sublimation of two famous things named after her: The USS Hopper, a missile-destroyer, and the super-computer Hopper. These two fused in her Noble Phantasm to manifest as a ship that is closer to a "floating super-computer", allowing hsr to recode the world as she flows through, creating and calculating almost anything. It can also launch guided missiles involved with the concept of mystery destruction, dealing more damage to older enemies.
Lore: Admiral Grace Hopper was an American computer scientist and a Rear Admiral of the United States Navy. She was known for inventing one of the first linkers, and for devising the idea of creating a programming language that was usable with merely equations and words, as opposed to the complex code that needed to be used at the time, to make it easier for people to pick up doing it.
Personality: A friendly and joking kind of person. Her lively speech maintains throughout her summoning, making her almost constantly start picking up friends and allies as she continues. She doesn't really have any major regrets, thinking her life went wonderfully as it did, so her wish is for computer programming to keep going, keep growing as it has been.
Relationships:
Charles Babbage: "Mr. Babbage, very nice to meet you. The Father of the Computer? Interesting."
Ada Lovelace: "Countess Lovelace. It's absolutely amazing to meet the first computer programmer. I have so many questions."
Francis Drake: "And then they just refused to touch it.. no one believed it worked. Of course, the egg's on their face now. Anyway, what's your favorite bit of your life?"
Barthomelew Roberts: "Oh. You are truly intriguing. What's your favorite naval story?"
Y2K: "Wait, so you're... the embodiment of the idea of a computer glitch that caused a panic? Huh. What was it like?"
BB: "Begone, virus, and stop trying to distort my code."
Source: Ozumii
Class: Lancer
Other Classes: N/A
True Name: Harland Sanders
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Place of Origin: America (20th Century)
Parameters:
STR: D
END: D
AGI: D
MGI: C
LCK: C
NP: C
Height: 191cm
Weight: 141lbs
Likes: Well-prepared food
Dislikes: Cutting corners
Talent: Cooking chicken
Natural Enemy: Jack C. Massey
Attribute: Man
Traits: Male, Weak to Enuma Elish, Humanoid
Armament: Eleven Herbs And Spices
Catalyst: A KFC-marked product, summoning at Claudia Sanders Diner House
Class Skills:
Magic Resistance E: He never encountered much magic in life, so this has a low rank.
Personal Skills:
The Kentucky Colonel B: He was granted the status of Kentucky Colonel by the Commonwealth of Kentucky, granting him this skill. This means that any heroic spirit from North America, and from Kentucky specifically, will have an automatic feeling to trust him. In addition, this allows him to constantly seem like a kindly person who merely wants to help, even if he is actively attacking you at that very moment.
KFC A+: Kentucky Fried Chicken, the restaurant he founded, which became a titanic chain. This grants him the ability to mass-produce chicken, though he has to take a bit of time on each one. In addition, each piece of chicken made by this is imbued with a powerful charm spell, making you constantly want more. Lastly, this also serves as Business Tactics at the same rank.
Curse Of The Colonel B: In Japan, it is believed that Lancer's ghost cursed a baseball team because celebrating fans of that team threw a statue of him into the water. This has manifested as a skill, allowing him to place curses reducing the target's luck for a fairly long time. In addition, as he fades away from the grail war, he becomes able to place a single curse that drops a target's luck parameter to E for 18 turns.
Noble Phantasm(s):
Eleven Herbs and Spices
Mystery of the Spices
Type: Anti-Unit
Rank: C
Range: 10 meters
Max Targets: 1
The sublimation of his famous secret recipe for chicken, his Eleven Herbs And Spices, which have never been revealed. This manifests as a large chicken bone shaped like a spear and coated in the Eleven Herbs And Spices. This mystery of the unknown herbs allows the position of the spear to constantly be hard to detect, for the herbs block detection. When the true name is invoked, the herbs shift, transforming into a poison at the tip of the spear. This poison has no known antidote, as a result of the unknownness of the ingredients, but it can be resisted by people with Magic Resistance of at or above C rank.
Lore: Colonel Harland David Sanders was a businessman most well known for founding the fast food restaurant known as KFC. He was granted the title of Kentucky Colonel at the age of 45, when he was well known for his work in town. At KFC, he utilized a secret recipe known as the Eleven Herbs And Spices, which has not been found yet.
Personality: Friendly and personable. He adores cooking and food, and loves to meet other chefs. He feels that cooking should be taught to everyone. He is also remarkably good at promoting things, being able to bring in a large crowd whenever he begins to market the place. His wish for the grail is that he never sold KFC. Then, he believes, the cooking would have remained good and not have slipped to finally get back up in the 1980s.
Relationships:
Beni-Enma: "Teaching the other servants about cooking? What an incredible goal."
Jack C. Massey: "You! How dare you appear like this. How dare you appear like this after you Cheated me out of my wealth? Out of my business?"
Osabekahime: "Oh... this is decent, but I'd say you need another cooking lesson or two. Would you like me to help you?
Elizabeth Bathory: "Uh.... maybe you should turn the heat on a bit less for that pasta? It's currently ashes. No matter, let's try again, shall we?"
Tamano-no-Mae: "Your cooking is quite good, though I would personally go a bit less on the salt in this chicken."
Emiya: "You truly are an amazing chef, kid. Great job."
Tamano Cat: "I love this preparation of chicken, it tastes amazing. By the way, sorry if this seems blunt, but what exactly are you?"
Last edited by jishara; July 26th, 2022 at 05:34 PM.
Sanders: Too bad there's no mention of the anecdotes where he was a lawyer who got disbarred after fistfighting one of his clients or got into a shootout with a rival restaurant owner over the latter painting a road-sign to draw customers away from him. I mean I don't know how they'd fit into the sheet but those are some awesome Colonel Sanders anecdotes I'd read. On the other hand his third Skill is based off an amazing anecdote I'd never heard about before. The NP is also a clever justification for fitting him into the Lancer Class.
Source: Ekita_Kuro
Class: Caster
Other Classes: N/A
True Name: Nadia Boulanger
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Place of Origin: France (20th Century)
Parameters:
STR: E
END: C
AGI: D
MGI: B
LCK: C
NP: B
Height: 191cm
Weight: 140lbs
Likes: Piano, teaching
Dislikes: Music-haters
Talent: Teaching music
Natural Enemy: Phantom of the Opera
Attribute: Man
Traits: Female, Weak to Enuma Elish, Humanoid
Armament: A floating keyboard
Catalyst: A Boulanger record
Class Skills:
Item Creation E: She isn't very competent at creating items, only being able to create singular piano keys, as she never learned how to create items.
Territory Creation C: The ability to create a "Music Studio" slightly less effective then a Workshop. She utilizes this studio to have a pre-set keyboard to use more of her spells, and to have a more convenient way to teach her students.
Personal Skills:
Music Pedagogy A++: As one of the greatest music teachers of all time, she gains this skill at a very high rank. At this rank, she is easily capable of teaching anyone how to perform music at a high level, and even utilize it to gain ranks of skills such as Protection of the Music God and to teach them to perform musical magecraft.
Knowledge Of All Music A: She was known to learn almost every single musical style it was possible for her to learn. Indeed, it was on those quests where she learned how to perform musical magecraft herself. A composite skill involving Musical Magecraft at rank B, as well as Eye for Art (Music) at rank A and Protection of the Music God (False) B.
Conducting B: She was, in addition to being noted as a pedagogue, noted for her conducting, having been the first woman to conduct many major orchestras throughout North America and Europe. This allows her to "conduct" people, allowing her to vaguely control their actions for a time. However, she needs to actively focus on it, Magic Resistance and Mental Pollution at or above B rank nullify it, and she can't precisely control their actions.
Noble Phantasm(s):
Mes Chers Etudiants
The Greatest Musicians
Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
Rank: B
Range: 0m
Max Targets: Self
The sublimation of her greatest treasure, her students, including some of the greatest composers of the 20th centuries, such as Astor Piazzola, Phillip Glass, Elliot Carter, Aaron Copland, Grażyna Bacewicz, Virgil Thomson, and others. As a Noble Phantasm, this allows her to channel her students' assorted different and varied styles, causing different effects, such as Piazzola's tangos allowing her music to "evolve", much like Piazzola evolved the tango, Glass's minimalism allowing her to gain the equivalent of High-Speed Incantation, Carter allowing her to create music that throws off the metric sense of the targets....
Lore: Nadia Boulanger was a French composer, conductor, and pedagogue known for teaching some of the greatest composers of the 20th century. She started out with a large amount of honors from the Paris Conservatory, but because she doubted her composing had potential, she decided to teach. She was also the first woman to conduct many North American and European orchestras.
Personality: Strict and stern about music, she loves meeting people who worked equally well with music as she did, and also loves seeing her students once again. She dislikes meeting people who didn't care about music and especially people who tried to cull it. She has no major regrets, so her wish would be merely for her to be able to continue to teach.
Relationships:
Phantom of the Opera: "No, no, no! That is not music, that is not a song. That is just ominous speaking. And why is your organ made of corpses?"
Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart: "Mozart! Such a pleasure to meet you. I have a few interpretation questions, if you don't mind."
Antonio Salieri: "Oh... I thought your music was marvelous."
Carlo Gesualdo: "...Your music is intriguing, but you are vile. Get out of my sight."
Arturo Toscanini: "Perfectionism's all well and good, but you can't expect it immediately. You need to give them time to learn."
Teresa Teng: "Your music is certainly not my style, but... I admire the effort you've put in to it."
Joseph Bologne: "That was an absolutely excellent performance."
Bedrich Smetana: "....You are a phenomenal composer, but far too egotistical."
Creator Notes: Thanks for your comments RoydI might incorporate that in Sanders (Lily) if I do that.
Last edited by jishara; July 24th, 2022 at 12:37 AM.
Source: Fandubloids
Class: Assassin
Other Classes: N/A
True Name: Claude Cahun
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Place of Origin: France (20th Century)
Parameters:
STR: D
END: C
AGI: C
MGI: C
LCK: C
NP: C
Height: 181cm
Weight: 131 pounds
Likes: Dark comedy, throwing off expectations
Dislikes: Prejudice
Talent: Creating self-portrait photographs
Natural Enemy: Da Vinci
Attribute: Man
Traits: Weak to Enuma Elish, Humanoid
Armament: A camera
Catalyst: A copy of her pictures
Class Skills:
Presence Concealment C: Allows them to blend their existence into the background, suitable for spying. The rank drops severely when entering battle. They were able to disguise herself to plant the letters they created.
Personal Skills:
A Soldier With No Name A: The sublimation of the letters they wrote during WW2 under the name of "A Soldier With No Name" and planted in german territories to sow distrust. As a skill, this allows them to spread distrust through their enemies, causing a feeling of "That other person is plotting against me".
Surrealistic Self B: The sublimation of their many self-portraits utilizing surrealistic techniques. This manifests as a skill causing them to constantly seem "Surrealistic", slightly off, and very hard to read in terms of body language.
Heroines C: The sublimation of their book discussing heroines throughout history and mythology. This manifests as an ability to "Glorify heroines", buffing their statistics as they see the heroine's actions. They don't even need to see heroic or grand actions of the heroine, merely everyday ones.
Noble Phantasm(s):
My Self-Portraits
Every Different Guise
Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
Rank: C
Range: 0 meters
Max Targets: Self
The sublimation of their many self-portraits. This manifests as a noble phantasm which allows them to "take on guises" like the ones that they used in the photos. Depending on the costume, they gain different powers: EG in the Aviator costume they will instinctively be able to fly a plane, in the Angel they can throw blasts of light, as puppet they create a fear aura, as vampire they gain Bloodsucking....
Lore: Claude Cahun was a French photographer and activist. They were known for their surrealistic photography, as well as their book discussing famous women throughout history called "Heroines", and their activism during World War 2, sowing confusion and chaos among the German forces.
Personality: Claude is friendly and helpful. They have a taste for dark humor. They also love to meet people they wrote about in their stuff. However, if they come across someone who they deem "disappointing", they will immediately do whatever they can to avoid them and stir up chaos. Their wish is that society in general was more accepting of everyone.
Relationships:
Saint Georgios: "Your photographs are quite nice. Would you like to have a competition?"
William Shakespeare: "Your plays are absolutely wonderful. Would you like to see some of my writings?"
Hans Christian Anderson: "You have such amazing stories. I'd love to hear another."
BB: "Ooh, your channel is quite fun. Do you have any more?"
Salome: "Interesting, I wrote about you, so I'd love to know the real you."
Van Gogh: "How utterly sad. Such a brilliant artist going mad because of meddling of other beings. And then fusing with an equally unstable being."
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