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    Class: Assassin
    Other Classes: N/A
    True Name: Osan Gitsune
    Alignment: Chaotic Evil
    Place of Origin: Japanese Folklore
    Stars: 2/5

    Parameters:

    STR: D
    END: D
    AGI: B
    MGI: B
    LCK: C
    NP: C

    Height: 182cm
    Weight: 160lbs
    Likes: Tricking people
    Dislikes: People who stop her from tricking them, overly kind people
    Talent: Shapeshifting and tricks
    Natural Enemy: Zhou of Shang
    Attribute: Earth
    Traits: Kitsune, Female, Weak to Enuma Elish
    Armament: A kusarigama
    Catalyst: The banner of any daimyo, with a lion painted on it

    Class Skills:

    Presence Concealment D+: Assassin's focus was not disguising her presence, but in shapeshifting into someone else, and as such this skill is relatively weak, although her illusion art talent still supplements it.

    Personal Skills:

    Roar of the Lion-type Kitsune B: Assassin tended to pretend to be a ferocious lion, scaring and frightening the passersby who appeared there. Fitting this, whenever Assassin enters battle, usually through suprise, the aura of a lion appears around her. This aura is on fire, wraps around her kusarigama as well, and ranks down the enemy's Strength due to their terror.

    Illusionary Arts B: Assassin's skill in illusionary arts, a natural skill for a kitsune. In her case, she created beautiful and complicated illusions to confuse and daze those around. Naturally, in skill form, she can utilize these illusionary arts. Her specialty with this is utlizing them to create a powerful charm spell.

    Shapeshift C: Assassin was naturally capable of shapeshifting into numerous things, as such this skill allows her to shapeshift into many different types of things. However, she cannot shift into Phantasmal Beasts or other Servants, and if she tries to shift into an entity she has to have seen them. In addition, she cannot grow smaller than her hand.

    Noble Phantasm(s):

    Daimyo Goretsu
    You Thought I Was The Procession?

    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: C
    Range: 1 meter
    Max Targets: 1 target

    A noble phantasm that can only be invoked when Assassin has learned a goal or wish of any of her enemies, by her own choice to make it more fun. The manifestation of the incident where Assassin, instead of transforming into a daimyo's procession, summoned a procession which immediately executed the man who asked her to become it or he'd kill her. If she learns any goal or wish of her enemies that has a physical form, she can manifest something appearing to be it. However, it will lose any properties that are above C rank and only one can be out at a time. Its true use is as a weapon: whenever someone Assassin views as an enemy gets near it, it will attack ferociously, even if it appears to be an inanimate object. For example, a falsely made Holy Grail might absorb the target's mana or release mana missiles. Assassin favors utilizing this as a trap for enemy Masters while hiding in the background to finish the job.

    Lore: Osan Gitsune was a famous folkloric kitsune spirit and one of the Inaba 5 Kitsune. She had a great fondness for charm spells and utilized them on any men that she came upon and found attractive. She tended to set her tail on fire, pretend to be a lion, and terrorised the townsfolk. A merchant caught her and threatened to burn her alive unless she transformed into a daimyo's procession. However, the clever Osan Gitsune instead summoned a daimyo's procession. The merchant approached the procession to praise the kitsune's transformation skill, but shocked at the impudence, the daimyo had the merchant executed.

    Personality: A cheery and energetic person prone to whims. She loves manipulating others, though she isn't capable of doing it well with words and as such she primarily just uses her shapeshifting and charms/illusions to aid her. She tends to live in the moment a lot, and doesn't really understand people's dreams well. As such, she will usually, if hearing one, punish it with her Noble Phantasm to "attempt to break humanity of their dreaming". Her wish for the holy grail is just to remanifest.

    Relationships:

    Tamano no Mae: "Too serious. Come on, relax."

    Tamano Cat: "Did someone steal my copyright?"

    Koyanskaya: "...Just chill. Your goal is to get thse fantastical creatures, right? Well, here! Daimyo Goretsu."

    Zhou of Shang: "Da Ji? No, I am not her. She took way too much time doing things."

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    Rider of Submersibles

    True Name: Cornelis Jacobszoon Drebbel
    Titles: Father of Submarines, Genius of England's Court
    Alignment: True Neutral
    Gender: Male
    Height: 169 cm
    Weight: 70 kg
    Other Qualifiable Classes: Caster
    Wish: To be given all the resources needed to make the Drebbel capable of going and exploring anywhere.
    Likes: Advancements, discovery, science fiction
    Dislikes: Stagnation, lack of funding, imprisonment, Prague
    Place of Origins/Source: The Netherlands
    Talents: Engineering and discovery
    Armaments: Missiles, mines, other explosives
    Parameters:
    Strength: E
    Endurance: E
    Agility: D
    Mana: B
    Luck: C
    Noble Phantasm: B
    Class Skill(s):
    Riding: D (A)
    The ability to skillfully ride mounts and vehicles except for dragon-type mounts as it is said that it requires a different ability other than Riding. At D-Rank, Cornelis can manage beasts and vehicles if he has received the proper training and adjustments with average skill. However, he cannot ride Phantasmal Species.

    However, the Rank jumps to A-Rank if he is piloting a submersible like his
    Come Forth, First of the Traversers of the Watery Abyss
    Drebbel
    as he is their origin and thus within his rights.

    Magic Resistance: D
    Protection against magecraft through canceling out the spells. At this Rank, it could cancel out Single-Action Spells akin to a magical-energy-rejecting amulet. For Cornelis, despite him knowing magecraft in life, he has never faced another mage hence the low Rank.

    Personal Skills:
    Item Construction: B-
    The Skill to manufacture magical items, from implements of war to items for daily use. Also, this Skill requires time to gather components and manufacture items.

    Normally the Class Skill of the Caster Class, Cornelis possesses this Skill even as a Rider simply because as a famed engineer and inventor, the creation of wonderous items is engraved upon his Saint Graph. From a chicken incubator and oven that self-regulates its own temperature, air conditioning, solar energy system, scarlet dyes, torpedos, and more recently, his prosthetics. The list even includes a clock that never needs winding and of course the first navigable submarine. Now as a Servant, he could make items equally as wonderful if not more when he possesses enough resources. He could even modify existing items to greater heights. Unfortunately, the quality wouldn't be as high as it could be due to the Rank-down given because of being summoned in the Rider Class instead of a Caster.

    Inherent Wisdom: B
    A Skill that shows one who has unparalleled natural knowledge. Allows the use of most Skills, excluding those inherent to the body (such as Divinity) or ones unique to particular heroes, at the proficiency of B~C Rank.

    Cornelis Drebbel was a genius in his era. That is a certifiable fact as can be proven by his various inventions, the ones known to the public and the ones that don't. From a young age, he has repeatedly demonstrated his intellectual brilliance again and again to his family and there was no hesitation in the decision of choosing him as the inheritor of the family's Magic Crest. This continued after he decided to enter the mundane world to learn magecraft's opposite. Unlike two other users of this Skill, he has no qualms about using the Skill often as: "Why wouldn't you with how useful this is?"

    Synthetic Limbs (Cybernetic): C
    Refers to the change of one's flesh into a man-made mechanism - specifically metal prosthetics. Bonus modifiers are added to action checks related to combat and success checks. For Cornelis, only his four limbs and eyes are modified hence the moderate Rank but that's not to say the quality of the modifications is bad as the eyes are a combination of a telescope and a microscope that gives Cornelis a form of Clairvoyance. Also, the limbs all contain explosives like amphibious mines and torpedos/missiles, bombs that contain Fulminating gold, and grenades that shoot out Batavian tears in all directions.

    These prosthetics are the last addition to the list of Cornelis's creations before he was imprisoned post-Battle of the White Mountain and the loss of his fortune, created out of curiosity and to replace his aging body to maintain his efficiency.

    Self-Regulation (Temperature): B
    The ability to emit heat or cold when faced with extreme temperatures, based on the combination of his creation of the chicken incubator and oven that can maintain a stable temperature, thermometers, and one of the first AC systems. The Skill passively creates an aura that protects Cornelis from any extreme environments akin to the Protection from X Skills by releasing either heat to counter cold-based attacks or cold to cancel out heat-based attacks. At this Rank, the maximum and minimum temperature that Cornelis can release is -190 degrees Celsius to 1500 degrees Celsius meaning that this temperature range is also the limit of what the Skill can defend against.

    Noble Phantasm(s):
    Eternal Running Clock
    Perpetuum Mobile

    Rank: C
    Type: Ant-Unit (Self)
    Range: -
    Maximum Number of Targets: 1 device

    It is said that among Cornelis' inventions, the one which he is the most proud of is a clock which he has described as a perpetual motion machine. The audacious claim aside, this contraption has certainly proven that it can at least run forever without a need for winding like the other clocks. Built with science for the foundation as it's an astronomical clock showing both the date and the current phase of the moon that draws power from the changes in atmospheric pressures and temperatures and enhanced with magecraft to truly make it eternal, the clock was a marvel of its times.

    A passive Noble Phantasm that once plugged into a device like the
    Come Forth, First of the Traversers of the Watery Abyss
    Drebbel
    , can act as a power source for it as it could endlessly generate magical energy for it and is no longer limited to drawing power from changes in the air pressure and temperature, now it can draw power from any and all changes to the air like the direction of the air and even the quality. And as Cornelis himself is part machine, he has modified his left shoulder to be able to have the clock serve as a power source, granting himself an extra source of magical energy. This effectively gives him the equivalent of the Avenger Class' Self-Replenishment (Mana) Skill and through that can lessen the burden his master has sustaining him. It also would come in handy should he lose his master too as with this, he could mimic the Archers' Independent Action although a master would still be needed should Cornelis need to expend massive amounts of magical energy like long-term usage of his other Noble Phantasm.

    However, as the clock relies upon changes in the air to generate energy, naturally it would become useless in a vacuum but what's the chance of that happening? As such, Cornelis more fears a space in which the air within is completely stagnant which could severely limit the energy production of the clock. And yes, Cornelis can use the clock to do its original function of telling and keeping time which it can do remarkably well, accurately down to the millisecond.

    Come Forth, First of the Traversers of the Watery Abyss
    Drebbel

    Rank: A
    Type: Anti-Army
    Range: 1-40
    Maximum Number of Targets: 200 people
    The first functional and navigatable submersible vehicle in history, born out of a fusion of science and magecraft in 1620. Working for the English Royal Navy, Drebbel managed to create a wooden boat covered in leather borrowing from an earlier design of William Bourne's. After the success of the submarine, he created two larger and superior subs between 1620-1624, the last one can carry up to 16 people which included King James I (making him the first monarch to travel underwater) for three hours underwater and traveled from Westminster to Greenwich and back. It is here that it is supposedly said that Drebbel revealed that he can create oxygen for the crew to breathe. While evidently, Cornelis isn't the first one to come up with the idea of an underwater vehicle, he is the first one to create a fully functional one.


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    It is due to this status of the first successful submarine that it can absorb all the mysteries that have been derived from it. From this and further modifications, it has grown to a massive leviathan that's even bigger than the modern day's biggest submarine at a dimension of 190 meters long by 35 meters for the beam. Forged of steel instead of wood and further reinforced with Cornelis' alchemy, it can withstand even the strongest of impacts and the most crushing of depths with torpedos, naval mines, missiles, and a thickly armored ram serving as its offensive capabilities, it is no wonder that it is classified as Anti-Army. And despite what one would think, it is not constrained to the waters as it's capable of floating through the air just as fast as it does underwater at 92.6 km/h or 50 knots. While not impressive by Servant standards, it's more than fast enough for its role as a mobile base and long-range artillery.

    However, as one might expect, the Drebbel has a large magical energy cost for both using it and especially maintaining it for long that both Cornelis and his master would have trouble doing but thankfully that could be somewhat mitigated by using the Perpetuum Mobile as a power source.

    Lore & Background:
    Cornelis Jacobszoon Drebbel was born in 1572, in the city of Alkmaar in the modern-day Netherlands to a magus family that specializes in alchemy. His parents would be delightfully surprised by the genius displayed by Cornelis as he learned how to speak and walk much earlier than the average age and continued to prove that those instances were not a fluke when he was a child, absorbing and quickly remembering any lessons bestowed upon him with great passion. This made his father unhesitantly select him as his successor for the Magic Crest. It's after this that, through his genius, managed to convince his parents to send him to an Academy in Haarlem where a friend and fellow alchemist is as he seeks to learn both mundane knowledge and magecraft, sees wondrous possibilities to be made when he possesses both.

    There, he picked several skills like engineering, architecture, engraving, painting, cartography, and further alchemy of both mundane and magical from the aforementioned family friend Hendrik Goltzius. When he was 21, he wedded Hendrick's sister Sophia Jansdochter Goltzius in a political marriage of whom they had 6 kids. However, her prodigal lifestyle would force Cornelis to turn to constant inventing and creating in the mundane world to obtain enough money to support his research and to appease his wife's demands. This would eventually lead to him moving to England where he displayed one of his greatest inventions, a supposedly perpetual motion machine. he would serve at the court of the crown prince Henry Frederick for a few years with the prince's patronage.

    He would then travel to Prague and display his inventions there, even striking up a friendship with the Holy Roman Emperor Rudolf II whose love for the arts and alchemy led to him inviting Cornelis there. However, Rudolf was stripped of his power by his younger brother Matthias in 1611, he was imprisoned for a year before finally being set freed after Rudolf's death and went back to London in 1613. Unfortunately, as Henry has died a year earlier, he was plunged into financial trouble, having to sell optical instruments and twin convex lensed compound microscopes for money.

    Six years later, he would be invited to Prague again to tutor the sons of the Holy Roman Emperor, Ferdinand II, but this eventually led to him being captured again for a time. After that, he went back to London and stayed there for the rest of his life. There, he would design the most famous creations of his life: his submarines all named after him. For 3 years, he designed and created 3 submarines, each bigger and superior to the last one until the third one had 6 oars and could carry 16 passengers, one of whom includes King James I himself for the Royal Navy. However, despite this success, it was never further developed for combat. Eventually, Cornelis died on November 7, 1633, from overworking his body that has already been weakened by diseases and age.

    Personality:
    At first glance, Cornelis seems like the typical mad scientist with his unkempt aged hair and bionics but this is only somewhat true. Aside from being a genius that has a love for science, he shares little resemblance to the mad scientist idea or even the typical magus in fact. For one, he is surprisingly moral for someone who has grown up in the cutthroat world of magecraft most likely due to him never experiencing the cruelty that world has to offer and his participation in the mundane world. This likely made his view of seeing mundane humans as test subjects lessen if only for practicality when interacting with them if he had such view, to begin with. As such, while he isn't a saint, it would take a lot for him to start considering doing any human experiments on anyone but himself.

    As mentioned before, Cornelis has an unsatiable fascination with learning new facts and applying them to create new wonderous things. This unexplainable desire is what led him to science, seeing it not as magecraft's mortal enemy but rather as a potential boost, that when combined together properly can lead to greater results than what just one of them can achieve. So should he be summoned to Chaldea or by someone from Atlas, expect him to be in euphoria and would gladly add in his ideas. In the end, his love for research in both science and magecraft is all out of his desire to see the world advance further which itself came from his Origin of Furtherance. His wish for the grail is an extension of this, wanting to explore and research all foreign lands until everything is known. Ironic for a magus. Even more so as unlike other magus, he hates how he can't share his discoveries of magecraft with the rest of the world and was forced to hide away his inventions' schematics.

    This love for advancements is why he's such a fan of science fiction, the harder the science the better. He'll often be found reading sci-fi books and watching shows whenever he's not researching and inventing. This is also why he has modified himself to be a cyborg. If he has the chance, he would upload his mind to a machine.

    Naturally, Cornelis despises stagnancy in all forms, the very idea of living in an unchanging place is his equivalent of going to hell so should he ever be summoned in a Lostbelt, he'll gladly destroy the Fantasy Tree and prune the futureless world. Aside from that, he also hates any situation where he doesn't have the necessary resources to do what he desires from his frequent struggle against poverty and being imprisoned like his two imprisonments both in Prague. Just try to imprison him and one would find a submarine dropped on them.

    Relationship:
    To Master:
    Cornelis would treat his master like an apprentice, gladly teaching them about both science and magecraft so that they may eventually pass the knowledge on in the hopes of new advancements in both fields. And a glorious underwater sight in the Drebbel should be within your expectations. However, threaten him with imprisonment at your own risk.

    To Leonardo da Vinci (All versions):
    "The legendary da Vinci... Appearances aside... Your intellect is as impressive as I have expected. Mind sharing notes?"

    To Nikola Tesla:
    "Your achievements are most impressive, and truly deserving of the Star attribute. It's such a shame how your life ended."

    To those of the Mechanical attribute:
    "(Stars in eyes) Yessssss. May I analyze any of you? Please, I'll be gentle. Although, it's also sad in a way, looking at you guys. Knowing that our civilizations can create ones like you back in the days but now, it's implausible if not outright impossible to recreate you."

    To those from the Servant Universe:
    "Such advanced technologies, I must see them! How do they work? What powers them? Can I have a piece to study?"

    To Friedrich Fröbel:
    "Ah, Mr. Fröbel, we meet again. I didn't say this last time but I must thank you for your creation of the concept of kindergartens. With it, you have opened many doors for science for so many people and from them, advancements for human civilization."

    To Nemo:
    "The famed Nauticulus. What a beautiful creation. Say, if you ever want to help maintain or update it, you can call me anytime."

    Author's Note:
    Not much to say surprisingly. Cornelis is a pretty straightforward servant to write, his most unique thing is his perpetual clock and his self-regulation (temperature) skill. If this feels rushed, it's because I'm going to be busy so I decided to just release it now when I can. I can always just come back to edit/rework it if it's really bad.

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    Interesting take. Personally, I would have put him in a much different light (eg a gag character who thinks his inventions (and himself) are amazing, but are actually pretty useless), but this is fun too. Though, it does seem like your framing him as being “a little too smart” IMO

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    Huh, when I read his bio, his achievements doesn't seem gag like but okay. Also he's too smart? I tried to deliberately reign him in to make him not op intelligence wise.

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    Wow, five sheets relatively back to back and all by different creators.

    Is CaS making a comeback?
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    Quote Originally Posted by TQG Imaginatorious View Post
    Huh, when I read his bio, his achievements doesn't seem gag like but okay. Also he's too smart? I tried to deliberately reign him in to make him not op intelligence wise.
    A lot of his stuff was impractical, and he also had a tendency to over exaggerate certain aspects of his inventions (particularly his submarine; there’s a reason he only showed it off in the Thames). Yes, he’s smart, but I personally wouldn’t have put him on the same level as the other inventor servants.
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    I think both takes make sense in their own way. After all, Tesla is written as an unquestionable genius in Fate too.

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    Wait, you're saying that Tesla isn't a unquestionable genius in real life?! Oh the horrors! Oh how have fate have lied to me

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    Quote Originally Posted by Random View Post
    I think both takes make sense in their own way. After all, Tesla is written as an unquestionable genius in Fate too.
    True.

    Don’t get me wrong, I like TQG’s interpretation too, but it’s not how I would’ve interpreted them

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    Quote Originally Posted by Skull View Post
    Wow, five sheets relatively back to back and all by different creators.

    Is CaS making a comeback?
    we just need Bird of Hermes to return and all will be well again. i was actually making an Uther sheet to act as a catalyst

    anyone have any CC on my Henry the VII sheets and St. Benedict? I wanna know if my rust is wearing off finally
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    Class: Caster
    Other Classes: N/A
    True Name: Rudolf II
    Alignment: True Neutral
    Place of Origin: Austria (16th Century)
    Stars: 3/5

    Parameters:

    STR: D
    END: D
    AGI: D
    MGI: A
    LCK: B
    NP: A

    Height: 167cm
    Weight: 180lbs
    Likes: Magic and the occult
    Dislikes: Factional disputes between religions
    Talent: Collecting magical items
    Natural Enemy: Hetty Green
    Attribute: Man
    Traits: Humanoid, Male, Weak to Enuma Elish
    Armament: The items from his collection
    Catalyst: The painting of him as Verdanus

    Class Skills:

    Item Construction (Monarchal) A: He is capable of manifesting minor items, but this would normally only be D rank. This is supplemented by his first Noble Phantasm and his status as a king who amassed items up to A.

    Territory Creation B: Caster can create an average-ranked workshop. Fueled by his royal domains and Noble Phantasm, as normally he has little magecraft potential.

    Personal Skills:

    Patron of the Arts (Rudolfine) A: Caster was an extremely well-known patron of the arts who amasssed a titanic collection of artworks and brought most well-known artists of the era to his court. This allows him to bestow his "patronage" on anyone, empowering artistic-based Skills, Noble Phantasms, as well as magecraft. This also includes Eye for Art, allowing him to nigh-instantly know the true name of any Servant with Artistic anecdotes in a Noble Phantasm.

    Age of Reason C: Caster's collection and patronage was one of the factors that heralded in the age of reason, along with the scientific revolution. In essence, a skill akin to a much weaker Pioneer of the Stars, caster can bestow on allies the "capability to change something that's improbable to something that's doable", though not completely impossible as it has to be logically theoretically doable.

    The Long War D: The greatest failure of Caster's reign, the Long War with the Ottoman Empire that lead Caster to lose much of his power. In the form of a skill, it would allow Caster to claim territory through offensive means, but due to Caster's hatred of this deed, viewing it as the worst failure of his career, it has mostly been sealed, allowing caster to "block opponent's territory building".

    Noble Phantasm(s):

    Rudolfine Castle of Prague: Northern Wing
    My Endless Collection Of Art and Occult

    Type: Bounded Field
    Rank: E~B
    Range: 100 meters
    Max Targets: N/A

    Caster's massive collection of all sorts of items is his first noble phantasm. He has the capability to pull numerous items out of his collection, with preferred items including exotic animals such as lions or tigers and titanic venus flytraps or sundew. He also possesses countless paintings, telescopes, astrolabes, jewels, occult and low-ranked magical items, and scientific devices within, along with swords which he uses for combat if he must enter it himself. This collection is carefully sorted so Caster never has to take much time to find anything. The most powerful items he holds within are the Codex Gigas and the Voynich Manuscript, both powerful Grimoires.

    Golem of the Northern Wing
    The Tales of Entities

    Type: Summon
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Max Targets: 100

    This noble phantasm is based on tales of the Golem of Prague, which were based on hearsay about Caster's artifact collection and tolerance of Judaism. In the form of a Noble Phantasm, Caster can create golems utilizing the artifacts in his first Noble Phantasms as catalysts akin to the traditional paper slip, each artifact producing a golem which is one rank higher than it. However, the artifact cannot be used by Caster in this state and becomes vulnerable, so Caster will usually refuse to use this, especially on his Grimoires, despite the extremely powerful golems they would conjure.

    Lore: Rudolf II, the Emperor of the Occult, was the Holy Roman Emperor from 1576 to 1612. He also held the titles of King of Bohemia, King of Hungary, King of Croatia, and Archduke of Austria. He was noted for his massive collection of art and occult items, and he was known for his interest in the occult.

    Personality: An austere and serene king primarily focused on his research into Magecraft and science. He doesn't tend to enjoy being bothered about other surrounding things, especially religious conflicts, which he had to deal with frequently during life. His wish for the Holy Grail is to be able to access the Root.

    Relationships:

    Hetty Green: "Money magic? How interesting. That would have been much easier. ..I'm overspending?"

    William Thornton: "I know my limitations."

    Giovanni Aldini: "That was magnificent. Mind joining my court?"

    Erik Satie: "How has magecraft changed since my death?"

    Olympia Maidalchini: "What's your collection like? Holy items? Interesting."

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    Rider of Submersibles

    True Name: Cornelis Jacobszoon Drebbel
    Titles: Father of Submarines, Genius of England's Court
    Alignment: True Neutral
    Gender: Male
    Height: 169 cm
    Weight: 70 kg
    Other Qualifiable Classes: Caster
    Wish: To be given all the resources needed to make the Drebbel capable of going and exploring anywhere.
    Likes: Advancements, discovery, science fiction
    Dislikes: Stagnation, lack of funding, imprisonment, Prague
    Place of Origins/Source: The Netherlands
    Talents: Engineering and discovery
    Armaments: Missiles, mines, other explosives
    Parameters:
    Strength: E
    Endurance: E
    Agility: D
    Mana: B
    Luck: C
    Noble Phantasm: B
    Class Skill(s):
    Riding: D (A)
    The ability to skillfully ride mounts and vehicles except for dragon-type mounts as it is said that it requires a different ability other than Riding. At D-Rank, Cornelis can manage beasts and vehicles if he has received the proper training and adjustments with average skill. However, he cannot ride Phantasmal Species.

    However, the Rank jumps to A-Rank if he is piloting a submersible like his
    Come Forth, First of the Traversers of the Watery Abyss
    Drebbel
    as he is their origin and thus within his rights.

    Magic Resistance: D
    Protection against magecraft through canceling out the spells. At this Rank, it could cancel out Single-Action Spells akin to a magical-energy-rejecting amulet. For Cornelis, despite him knowing magecraft in life, he has never faced another mage hence the low Rank.

    Personal Skills:
    Item Construction: B-
    The Skill to manufacture magical items, from implements of war to items for daily use. Also, this Skill requires time to gather components and manufacture items.

    Normally the Class Skill of the Caster Class, Cornelis possesses this Skill even as a Rider simply because as a famed engineer and inventor, the creation of wonderous items is engraved upon his Saint Graph. From a chicken incubator and oven that self-regulates its own temperature, air conditioning, solar energy system, scarlet dyes, torpedos, and more recently, his prosthetics. The list even includes a clock that never needs winding and of course the first navigable submarine. Now as a Servant, he could make items equally as wonderful if not more when he possesses enough resources. He could even modify existing items to greater heights. Unfortunately, the quality wouldn't be as high as it could be due to the Rank-down given because of being summoned in the Rider Class instead of a Caster.

    Inherent Wisdom: B
    A Skill that shows one who has unparalleled natural knowledge. Allows the use of most Skills, excluding those inherent to the body (such as Divinity) or ones unique to particular heroes, at the proficiency of B~C Rank.

    Cornelis Drebbel was a genius in his era. That is a certifiable fact as can be proven by his various inventions, the ones known to the public and the ones that don't. From a young age, he has repeatedly demonstrated his intellectual brilliance again and again to his family and there was no hesitation in the decision of choosing him as the inheritor of the family's Magic Crest. This continued after he decided to enter the mundane world to learn magecraft's opposite. Unlike two other users of this Skill, he has no qualms about using the Skill often as: "Why wouldn't you with how useful this is?"

    Synthetic Limbs (Cybernetic): C
    Refers to the change of one's flesh into a man-made mechanism - specifically metal prosthetics. Bonus modifiers are added to action checks related to combat and success checks. For Cornelis, only his four limbs and eyes are modified hence the moderate Rank but that's not to say the quality of the modifications is bad as the eyes are a combination of a telescope and a microscope that gives Cornelis a form of Clairvoyance. Also, the limbs all contain explosives like amphibious mines and torpedos/missiles, bombs that contain Fulminating gold, and grenades that shoot out Batavian tears in all directions.

    These prosthetics are the last addition to the list of Cornelis's creations before he was imprisoned post-Battle of the White Mountain and the loss of his fortune, created out of curiosity and to replace his aging body to maintain his efficiency.

    Self-Regulation (Temperature): B
    The ability to emit heat or cold when faced with extreme temperatures, based on the combination of his creation of the chicken incubator and oven that can maintain a stable temperature, thermometers, and one of the first AC systems. The Skill passively creates an aura that protects Cornelis from any extreme environments akin to the Protection from X Skills by releasing either heat to counter cold-based attacks or cold to cancel out heat-based attacks. At this Rank, the maximum and minimum temperature that Cornelis can release is -190 degrees Celsius to 1500 degrees Celsius meaning that this temperature range is also the limit of what the Skill can defend against.

    Noble Phantasm(s):
    Eternal Running Clock
    Perpetuum Mobile

    Rank: C
    Type: Ant-Unit (Self)
    Range: -
    Maximum Number of Targets: 1 device

    It is said that among Cornelis' inventions, the one which he is the most proud of is a clock which he has described as a perpetual motion machine. The audacious claim aside, this contraption has certainly proven that it can at least run forever without a need for winding like the other clocks. Built with science for the foundation as it's an astronomical clock showing both the date and the current phase of the moon that draws power from the changes in atmospheric pressures and temperatures and enhanced with magecraft to truly make it eternal, the clock was a marvel of its times.

    A passive Noble Phantasm that once plugged into a device like the
    Come Forth, First of the Traversers of the Watery Abyss
    Drebbel
    , can act as a power source for it as it could endlessly generate magical energy for it and is no longer limited to drawing power from changes in the air pressure and temperature, now it can draw power from any and all changes to the air like the direction of the air and even the quality. And as Cornelis himself is part machine, he has modified his left shoulder to be able to have the clock serve as a power source, granting himself an extra source of magical energy. This effectively gives him the equivalent of the Avenger Class' Self-Replenishment (Mana) Skill and through that can lessen the burden his master has sustaining him. It also would come in handy should he lose his master too as with this, he could mimic the Archers' Independent Action although a master would still be needed should Cornelis need to expend massive amounts of magical energy like long-term usage of his other Noble Phantasm.

    However, as the clock relies upon changes in the air to generate energy, naturally it would become useless in a vacuum but what's the chance of that happening? As such, Cornelis more fears a space in which the air within is completely stagnant which could severely limit the energy production of the clock. And yes, Cornelis can use the clock to do its original function of telling and keeping time which it can do remarkably well, accurately down to the millisecond.

    Come Forth, First of the Traversers of the Watery Abyss
    Drebbel

    Rank: A
    Type: Anti-Army
    Range: 1-40
    Maximum Number of Targets: 200 people
    The first functional and navigatable submersible vehicle in history, born out of a fusion of science and magecraft in 1620. Working for the English Royal Navy, Drebbel managed to create a wooden boat covered in leather borrowing from an earlier design of William Bourne's. After the success of the submarine, he created two larger and superior subs between 1620-1624, the last one can carry up to 16 people which included King James I (making him the first monarch to travel underwater) for three hours underwater and traveled from Westminster to Greenwich and back. It is here that it is supposedly said that Drebbel revealed that he can create oxygen for the crew to breathe. While evidently, Cornelis isn't the first one to come up with the idea of an underwater vehicle, he is the first one to create a fully functional one.


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    It is due to this status of the first successful submarine that it can absorb all the mysteries that have been derived from it. From this and further modifications, it has grown to a massive leviathan that's even bigger than the modern day's biggest submarine at a dimension of 190 meters long by 35 meters for the beam. Forged of steel instead of wood and further reinforced with Cornelis' alchemy, it can withstand even the strongest of impacts and the most crushing of depths with torpedos, naval mines, missiles, and a thickly armored ram serving as its offensive capabilities, it is no wonder that it is classified as Anti-Army. And despite what one would think, it is not constrained to the waters as it's capable of floating through the air just as fast as it does underwater at 92.6 km/h or 50 knots. While not impressive by Servant standards, it's more than fast enough for its role as a mobile base and long-range artillery.

    However, as one might expect, the Drebbel has a large magical energy cost for both using it and especially maintaining it for long that both Cornelis and his master would have trouble doing but thankfully that could be somewhat mitigated by using the Perpetuum Mobile as a power source.

    Lore & Background:
    Cornelis Jacobszoon Drebbel was born in 1572, in the city of Alkmaar in the modern-day Netherlands to a magus family that specializes in alchemy. His parents would be delightfully surprised by the genius displayed by Cornelis as he learned how to speak and walk much earlier than the average age and continued to prove that those instances were not a fluke when he was a child, absorbing and quickly remembering any lessons bestowed upon him with great passion. This made his father unhesitantly select him as his successor for the Magic Crest. It's after this that, through his genius, managed to convince his parents to send him to an Academy in Haarlem where a friend and fellow alchemist is as he seeks to learn both mundane knowledge and magecraft, sees wondrous possibilities to be made when he possesses both.

    There, he picked several skills like engineering, architecture, engraving, painting, cartography, and further alchemy of both mundane and magical from the aforementioned family friend Hendrik Goltzius. When he was 21, he wedded Hendrick's sister Sophia Jansdochter Goltzius in a political marriage of whom they had 6 kids. However, her prodigal lifestyle would force Cornelis to turn to constant inventing and creating in the mundane world to obtain enough money to support his research and to appease his wife's demands. This would eventually lead to him moving to England where he displayed one of his greatest inventions, a supposedly perpetual motion machine. he would serve at the court of the crown prince Henry Frederick for a few years with the prince's patronage.

    He would then travel to Prague and display his inventions there, even striking up a friendship with the Holy Roman Emperor Rudolf II whose love for the arts and alchemy led to him inviting Cornelis there. However, Rudolf was stripped of his power by his younger brother Matthias in 1611, he was imprisoned for a year before finally being set freed after Rudolf's death and went back to London in 1613. Unfortunately, as Henry has died a year earlier, he was plunged into financial trouble, having to sell optical instruments and twin convex lensed compound microscopes for money.

    Six years later, he would be invited to Prague again to tutor the sons of the Holy Roman Emperor, Ferdinand II, but this eventually led to him being captured again for a time. After that, he went back to London and stayed there for the rest of his life. There, he would design the most famous creations of his life: his submarines all named after him. For 3 years, he designed and created 3 submarines, each bigger and superior to the last one until the third one had 6 oars and could carry 16 passengers, one of whom includes King James I himself for the Royal Navy. However, despite this success, it was never further developed for combat. Eventually, Cornelis died on November 7, 1633, from overworking his body that has already been weakened by diseases and age.

    Personality:
    At first glance, Cornelis seems like the typical mad scientist with his unkempt aged hair and bionics but this is only somewhat true. Aside from being a genius that has a love for science, he shares little resemblance to the mad scientist idea or even the typical magus in fact. For one, he is surprisingly moral for someone who has grown up in the cutthroat world of magecraft most likely due to him never experiencing the cruelty that world has to offer and his participation in the mundane world. This likely made his view of seeing mundane humans as test subjects lessen if only for practicality when interacting with them if he had such view, to begin with. As such, while he isn't a saint, it would take a lot for him to start considering doing any human experiments on anyone but himself.

    As mentioned before, Cornelis has an unsatiable fascination with learning new facts and applying them to create new wonderous things. This unexplainable desire is what led him to science, seeing it not as magecraft's mortal enemy but rather as a potential boost, that when combined together properly can lead to greater results than what just one of them can achieve. So should he be summoned to Chaldea or by someone from Atlas, expect him to be in euphoria and would gladly add in his ideas. In the end, his love for research in both science and magecraft is all out of his desire to see the world advance further which itself came from his Origin of Furtherance. His wish for the grail is an extension of this, wanting to explore and research all foreign lands until everything is known. Ironic for a magus. Even more so as unlike other magus, he hates how he can't share his discoveries of magecraft with the rest of the world and was forced to hide away his inventions' schematics.

    This love for advancements is why he's such a fan of science fiction, the harder the science the better. He'll often be found reading sci-fi books and watching shows whenever he's not researching and inventing. This is also why he has modified himself to be a cyborg. If he has the chance, he would upload his mind to a machine.

    Naturally, Cornelis despises stagnancy in all forms, the very idea of living in an unchanging place is his equivalent of going to hell so should he ever be summoned in a Lostbelt, he'll gladly destroy the Fantasy Tree and prune the futureless world. Aside from that, he also hates any situation where he doesn't have the necessary resources to do what he desires from his frequent struggle against poverty and being imprisoned like his two imprisonments both in Prague. Just try to imprison him and one would find a submarine dropped on them.

    Relationship:
    To Master:
    Cornelis would treat his master like an apprentice, gladly teaching them about both science and magecraft so that they may eventually pass the knowledge on in the hopes of new advancements in both fields. And a glorious underwater sight in the Drebbel should be within your expectations. However, threaten him with imprisonment at your own risk.

    To Leonardo da Vinci (All versions):
    "The legendary da Vinci... Appearances aside... Your intellect is as impressive as I have expected. Mind sharing notes?"

    To Nikola Tesla:
    "Your achievements are most impressive, and truly deserving of the Star attribute. It's such a shame how your life ended."

    To those of the Mechanical attribute:
    "(Stars in eyes) Yessssss. May I analyze any of you? Please, I'll be gentle. Although, it's also sad in a way, looking at you guys. Knowing that our civilizations can create ones like you back in the days but now, it's implausible if not outright impossible to recreate you."

    To those from the Servant Universe:
    "Such advanced technologies, I must see them! How do they work? What powers them? Can I have a piece to study?"

    To Friedrich Fröbel:
    "Ah, Mr. Fröbel, we meet again. I didn't say this last time but I must thank you for your creation of the concept of kindergartens. With it, you have opened many doors for science for so many people and from them, advancements for human civilization."

    To Nemo:
    "The famed Nauticulus. What a beautiful creation. Say, if you ever want to help maintain or update it, you can call me anytime."

    Author's Note:
    Not much to say surprisingly. Cornelis is a pretty straightforward servant to write, his most unique thing is his perpetual clock and his self-regulation (temperature) skill. If this feels rushed, it's because I'm going to be busy so I decided to just release it now when I can. I can always just come back to edit/rework it if it's really bad.
    remind me to get an interaction with this guy in my yi sheet.

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    Also a Rudolf after my Cornelis? What a coincidence.

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    Avenger of Fear

    "Well, aren't you a cutie? Look into my eyes, Master, and ask me some questions. Let's see if you can guess my intentions before I realize them."


    Class: Avenger
    Alignment: Chaotic/Evil
    Region: Greece
    Height: 175 cm
    Weight: 59 kg
    Likes: Nighttime, being respected, young boys
    Dislikes: Daylight, jealousy, women
    Talents: Seduction, murder
    Armaments: Claws, fangs
    Natural Enemy: Hera

    Stats

    Str: B
    End: B
    Agi: A
    Mna: A
    Lck: E
    NP: A


    Skills


    Class Skills

    Avenger (B): A Class Skill of the Avenger class, representing the state of an Avenger as one that gathers people's hatreds and grudges onto oneself. It is easier for one to accumulate hatred and resentment. The rate of mana generation becomes higher when receiving damage.

    Oblivion Correction (A): A Class Skill of the Avenger class. People are creatures that forget many things, but an Avenger never forgets. The critical effect of Avengers who attack from beyond one's memory is strengthened

    Self-replenishment (Mana) (B): A Class Skill of the Avenger class. One's Magical Energy endlessly surges until their revenge is accomplished. Recovers a minuscule amount of magical energy every turn.

    Personal Skills

    Self-Modification (A): The aptitude to remold one's own body or merge one's own flesh with body parts of others. The higher the ranking in this Skill, the further away one is from being a proper hero. In Avenger's case, the cursed nature of her body allows her to detach and replace her flesh as easily as a snake changing skin.

    Mystic Eyes (B): A Skill signifying that one has possession of Mystic Eyes capable of imparting magical effects upon a subject and interfering with the outside world. In Avenger's case, she is capable of both casting a powerful charm spell on individuals, as well as demonstrating levels of clairvoyance that grant Avenger's brief glimpses at the near future.

    Aptitude for Slaughter (Infant) (B): A Skill representing Avenger's nature as something like a monster that preys on the young, a creature which has been labeled by society as a boogeyman. It grants Avenger bonuses to her Strength and Agility stats when attacking any opponent with the "Child" trait.



    Noble Phantasm


    Frightful Night Spirits
    Mormos Lykeios


    Rank: Anti-Unit (self), B

    "Go, my children! Go and take whatever you feel like, for this is the role we were cast into! Mormos Lykeios!"

    A Noble Phantasm that represents Avenger's status as the Queen of all Lamias, the mother of an entire Phantasmal Species. Even as a Monster, her deep grudges and desires pushed Avenger into continuing to be a ruler and Mother, not of men but of horrible creatures that slither and stalk in the dark of night.

    Through the use of her Shapeshifting Skill, Avenger is capable of splitting pieces of her body off, which she can then fashion into Humanoid Phantasmal Species classified as "Lesser Lamias". These creatures are essentially shards of Avenger's own container, animated by Avenger's own consciousness, and as such are capable of demonstrating similar abilities to Avenger herself, albeit in a much weaker degree of power.

    There is no fixed limit to the number of "Lesser Lamias" Avenger can generate, although since they are made from fragments of her own body, overuse of this Noble Phantasm may damage her Saint Graph, causing it to crumble into pieces. This can be prevented, however, by simply replacing the mass used with new, fresh meat.





    Background


    Avenger's true identity is that of Queen Lamia, a child devouring monster and night haunting demon in Greek mythology. Originally a Libyan queen of immense beauty, she caught the eye of the King of the Gods, Zeus. However, when his jealous wife Hera learned of their affair, she horrifically murdered all of Avenger's children in front of her very eyes, cursing the Queen to be unable to close then so she would be forced into witnessing the massacre.

    Driven mad with grief, Avenger started to take away from other women the same thing that was taken from her. She would kidnap and devour the sons and daughters of those who lived in her kingdom, slowly transforming from a beautiful queen into a monstrous creature who was forced into retreating to the shadows of the night. Out of pity, Zeus granted Avenger the ability to take off her eyes so she could rest, along with giving her the gift of prophecy, but that did little to placate Avenger's madness.

    With time, her name and myth would give birth to a new species of Humanoid Phantasmal Creatures. These new children of Avenger were the physical form of her curse on humanity, fearsome daimones with serpent tails in place of legs, which assumed the forms of beautiful women to lure young men to their beds to feed on their flesh and blood.



    Personality


    Avenger is someone who is fully capable of recognizing a situation and changing her attitude to what will give her the best results. She also has a tendency to play with her prey a lot, making sure to give them hope or making them comfortable before gobbling them up. She will usually refrain from harming her Master since they are someone of more use while intact, but she may change her mind if they happen to significantly catch her interest.

    She is a natural predator, whose aura of pure killing intent is so strong even a regular human would be able to feel. Because of this monstrous nature that is outside normal understanding, people often instinctively fear her, but there is also a high likelihood that attraction and fascination is born, a fact that Avenger is very aware of and unapologetically uses in her favor.

    Despite her monstrous nature and inclination towards cruelty, Avenger does not seem to hate humanity, at least not entirely. In fact, it can be said that her awful acts towards humans come from a place of distorted affection, which would also explain how she can claim to love children while still mercilessly slaughtering them. This corrupt kind of love does not extend towards those with divine blood in their veins, and Avenger truly despises the gods that turned her into what she is.




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    "Let me make one thing clear, you did not summon an Archer, you summoned the best Archer. Recognize that, and half the battle is already won."
    Faceclaim





    Class(es): Archer/Rider/Berserker/Avenger/▅ ▅ ▅ ▅ ▅ ▅ ▅ ▅ ▅
    True Name: Orvar-Oddr Lily; The Prince of Prophecy

    Source: The Saga of Örvar-Oddr, The Saga of Hervör and Heidrek; Iceland
    Attribute: Earth
    Traits: Male, Human, Brynhildr's Beloved
    Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
    Likes: Adventure, fighting
    Dislikes: Horses, "old hags"
    Natural Enemy: Völva
    Stats
    Strength: C
    Endurance: C
    Agility: C
    Mana: D
    Noble Phantasm: A

    Class Skills
    Independent Action: EX
    The ability to survive without a direct Mana supply from a Master. At higher ranks, it allows for the survival of fatal wound for a short amount of time. Archer can operate without a Master for an immensely long time. However, to use Noble Phantasms of great magical energy consumption, backup from the Master is necessary. This skill's rank is bizarre and abnormal, as if Archer himself can't truly be chained down to a time or place at all...

    Magic Resistance: C

    The ability to cancel the effect of spells. Cancel spells with a chant below two verses. Cannot defend against magecraft on the level of greater magecraft and Greater Rituals. Archer is a version hailing from before Orvar-Oddr explored and fought great mystery, reducing it to the minimum possible rank for an Archer.

    Personal Skills
    Prophesied Death: B
    A Skill representing that a Servant's death was prophesied, providing both strengths and weaknesses. Archer was told by a seer as a young man that he would die from his own horse, which gives him both an unaging body and resistance to injury. While still capable of being injured and killed by conventional means, Archer is incredibly susceptible to curses and poisons, and is very weak to attacks from horses.

    Fool's Confidence: C+
    A variant of Bravery where instead of feeling fear but continuing to push past it, one's arrogance is so high that they are unable to feel fear. Archer, after believing he beat his prophecy, believes himself to be unstoppable, but doesn't have nearly enough the experience to justify said arrogance. Grants resistance to mental effects, but can temporarily overcome stronger attacks if he is able to believe in himself.

    Journey's Beginning: EX
    A skill showing that a Servant has yet to fully begin their ascent to being a hero.
    This allows Archer to, if given sufficient difficulty in fights and encounters and trains hard enough, to gradually gain ranks up to his stats and even potentially acquire new skills.

    Noble Phantasm

    Gusisnautar
    The 13 Arrows of Arrow-Odd

    Anti-Army
    B


    Archer had found 13 magical arrows and an accompanying bow on his travels through the world, enchanted to never miss and always return to his quiver. This manifests as his Noble Phantasm.

    Archer can use the arrows in place of regular ones, imposing a Law that the arrow must always hit its target. While dodging becomes impossible, it is still entirely possible to block said arrows as it still follows the Law. This also allows Archer to fire multiple arrows at once, either on one target or multiple without diminishing his accuracy.

    Archer can overcharge an arrow with Mana, launching it as a mission of pure energy that will explode as a Broken Phantasm, but this will permanently reduce the number of arrows he is able to employ at once.

    Lore
    Archer is Orvar-Oddr, a legendary Icelandic heroic figure, noted for living for over 300 years, his journey across the world, and his overwhelming might in combat. Born the son of the king of Halogaland, Grimr Lođinkinni, Archer spent his childhood as a spoiled brat. Playing around with his incredibly dangerous arrows and stating his opinions, no matter the time and place and especially if it was in an inappropriate setting.

    And so when the Völva, the incredibly powerful shaman that consulted Odin himself, had stopped at his home, the seventeen year old Archer acted as he always had. He was rude, and on a horse so high he couldn't see just who he was messing with.

    So the Völva cursed the teen, that he would be killed by his horse Faxi at his birthplace. Archer seemed to take this grim prophecy on the chin, as he simply had his horse killed and buried, then promptly took his step-brother on a voyage across the world, pillaging as he went.

    This version of Orvar-Oddr is clearly the young foolish man and hothead who had just set foot on his journey.

    Personality
    Lacking his invulnerable shirt nor his later tenacity and intellect, Archer is incredibly foolhardy and full of himself to the point of being practically nauseous.
    He thinks the world owes him everything and will not shut up about how powerful and amazing he is, despite being the weakest possible version of himself.
    Pointing this out will only make him make him even more annoying as he will pout and whine like the spoiled brat he is.

    He also fashions himself a romantic, and attempts to charm women, but he will fail miserably given how much of a pain he is to be around.

    The one saving grace for this egomaniac is that he has the ability to change and grow, hopefully to being a better person.

    ~
    Creator Notes
    So finding an English translation of his myth was an absolute nightmare, but some things in his incredibly long story have given me some rather nutty ideas on how hard I can both:



    • Make an interesting sheet of a cool mythological figure



    • Wank.Him.To.Hell.And.Back


    His lore is a bit barren by design, as I plan to add to the story of Orvar-Oddr as he ages, so to speak.
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    Quote Originally Posted by TQG Imaginatorious View Post
    Huh, surprisingly no collapses... I hope
    dont worry that comes later
    My thirst for Antonio grows by the second.

    Man...

    I Make Servants, Some Of Which Are Tragedies

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    Class: Lancer
    Other Classes: N/A
    True Name: Amina of Zazzau
    Alignment: Neutral Good
    Place of Origin: Zazzau (17th Century)
    Stars: 3/5

    Parameters:

    STR: B
    END: C
    AGI: C
    MGI: E
    LCK: D
    NP: B

    Height: 174cm
    Weight: 140lbs
    Likes: Strength, holding dominion over surrounding lands
    Dislikes: Marriage
    Talent: Conquering
    Natural Enemy: Malik Ambar
    Attribute: Man
    Traits: Female, Humanoid, Weak to Enuma Elish
    Armament: Traditional african spear
    Catalyst: One of the earthen walls she built, a banner of her used for the Amina festivities

    Class Skills:

    Magic Resistance C: She has an average magic resistance due to her era and her constant wars, in which she faced down numerous mages.

    Personal Skills:

    Ganuwar Amina B: The walls and trading paths that Lancer famously built all around her kingdom. The capacity to direct the earth with her spear, raising it up to form walls or smoothing it down to form paths that enhance Agility while on them. She can also "tax" the walls and paths, forcing people around to pay small prices in mana.

    Expansionism B: Lancer created much more territory for the city-state of Zazzau, conquering wide swathes of land. This has manifested into a skill allowing her to claim territory as she fights her way through it, naturally fitting for one who did exactly that fairly frequently in life.

    Death of the Bridegroom D-: Lancer was claimed to have a bridegroom in every new city she conquered, then kill him the day after the wedding as he was a loose end. Although this was never truly something Lancer did, the idea that she did it creates this low-ranked skill that somewhat powers up her offense against enemies who are in love with Lancer, primarily Eros or Ludus types.


    Tactics of the Emira B: Lancer's quite effective military tactics manifested in the form of a skill. The capacity to boost the offense of those who follow Lancer's commands. However, breaking from their orders will strip this boon unless Lancer chooses it to not. Fitting for a queen who was also a master strategist.

    Noble Phantasm(s):

    Eti Awon Abefele
    My People, Sharpen Your Weapons

    Type: Anti-Army
    Rank: B
    Range: 50 meters
    Max Targets: 100 targets

    Lancer's famous declaration to her people upon obtaining the throne, stating that her people should sharpen their weapons. As such, this Noble Phantasm manifests through her spear, normally a fairly average traditional spear. However, when the true name is called, Lancer enhances it massively before throwing it in a great throw that desolates the surrounding and reshapes the earth. Any Allies under Tactics of the Queen will also have their armaments join Lancer.

    Lore: Amina (1533-1610), the Emira of Zazzau, was the queen of the city-state known as Zazzau, a Hausa city-state in what is now Nigeria. She was noted for her expansionistic foreign policy and conquering wars, expanding her city-state's reach massively. She was also noted for the roads and walls she devised.

    Personality: A warlike and ferocious ruler. She has a deep passion for conquest. In particular, her favorite is when someone underestimates her and then she utterly destroys them in the battle. She has a deep hatred for those who wreak unnecessary cruelty for no reason other than they can. Her wish for the Holy Grail is to clear the smears on her reputation and enhance her fame.

    Relationships:

    Tamar of Georgia: "Your foreign policy was interesting. Care to make an alliance?"

    Sayyida Al Hurra: "Ships? I can't say that's something I much thought of."

    Malik Ambar: "I must say, I was impressed by your success when the Grailtold me of you."

    Nebuchanezzar II: "Ooh! Lapis. Fancy. I can beat you with this spear, though."

    Aethylthryth: "Is that really a... spear? Isn't it just a staff?"

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