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    “Annie Oakley”: finally some good fucking sheets.

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    "How wonderful, if you've summoned me then that surely means there's someone in this world who still recognizes me as the brilliant king I truly am rather than the repulsive mockery those traitorous dogs smeared me with. Be greeted Mage, the greatest king of England has deigned to answer your call. Now, get down on your knees and prostrate before me. That is the most suitable way for me to express my 'love'..."

    Servant Berserker:

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    True Name: George III

    Alignment: Lawful Evil

    Alternate Classes: Rider, Caster

    Strength- C+
    Agility- D
    Endurance- C
    Mana- C
    Luck- D
    NP- C++

    Personality
    An obsessive, manic and unstable man. Under this Class the disposition of a troubled yet intellectual king who strove to maintain his country's integrity in a tumultuous era has been warped into an insane egotist who believes everything exists to serve and worship him. Berserker preaches constantly of "love" for his subjects yet the "love" he speaks of is merely domination. "I love everything, and so I shall rule over everything" is merely a statement of fact for Berserker. And naturally to those who reject the passion that smolders within him the only suitable punishment is to be broken and subjugated until they have no choice but to submit to his "love".

    Despite his twisted nature Berserker still retains some vestiges of his original self, such as a genuine love for his youngest daughter Amelia whose death by tuberculosis plunged him into a renewed bout of madness in life. He periodically hallucinates Amelia wrapping her arms around him and is determined to be a strong king who will make her proud. He also had a great curiosity and love of science in life though as a Berserker this mainly manifests in him idly tinkering with mechanisms when alone and looking longingly at science magazine articles.

    Incidentally, he holds a deep and burning hatred for a certain musical and will undoubtedly fly into a rage if it's played anywhere in his presence.

    His wish on the Holy Grail is to rule eternally over a reborn British Empire that's conquered the whole world.

    Likes: the whole world (self-proclaimed), himself, Amelia
    Dislikes: the foolish and irascible rebels who deny his love, history tarring him as a mad king, a certain musical
    Talents: absolute authoritarian rule, scientific study (former)
    Natural Enemy: George Washington, Spartacus


    Class Skills:

    Mad Enhancement- D
    A Skill that characterizes the Berserker Class, raising parameters in return for a loss of sanity and/or hindering mental capacities. At this rank, Strength and Endurance are ranked up, but one has difficulty thinking or speaking properly. While able to speak lucidly, Berserker is prone to bouts of mania and near-totally focused on the task of "subjugating rebellion" making him difficult to reach mutual understanding with.


    Personal Skills:

    Authoritarian- B+
    A Skill held by absolute rulers famed for attempting to subjugate any and all independence amongst their subjects. Since many monarchs could in more cynical eyes qualify as such, it's one's perception as a tyrant and anecdotes of suppressing rebellion in the popular consciousness that shapes their basis for possessing this Skill. Berserker's infamy as the king who strove to quash the American Revolution, resorting to increasingly desperate efforts to maintain grip over the colonies has equated to a high rank. Greatly inflates the damage dealt by his attacks against foes with a Chaotic or Neutral Alignment, and those known for opposing authority in life.

    Innocent Monster- E
    An attribute possessed by Servants whose true history and existence were distorted by the monstrous reputations and gossips accumulated over the course of their life and thereafter, without regard for the actual person's will or appearance. As consequence the Servant's abilities and appearance have been rendered to conform to the specifications of their legend.

    Historians still debate Berserker's true characterization to this day. Whether a mad tyrant clawing at the borders of a fraying empire, or a troubled figure simply trying to fulfill the responsibilities assigned to him, history whispers a thousand alternate truths. In his case this Skill manifests as exaggerating his mental instability, which existed in life but was embellished as better propaganda to tar "the mad king". Rendering him a raving megalomaniac who believes his kingdom is his own wayward children and murder and torture are justifiable to "teach them to renounce their petulant defiance and return to my loving arms".

    Origin Of Science (King)- D-
    A Skill Berserker rightfully possesses as the first king to study science as part of his royal education, having founded his own astronomical observatory as well as amassed a collection of scientific instruments preserved in museum to this day. Allows him to make use of Skills stemming from a variety of scientific fields such as chemistry, astronomy and mechanics. However the dulling of his mind through Mad Enhancement renders it little more than a vague intuition.


    Noble Phantasms
    Tenggiling Waja
    Divine Carapace Regalia


    Rank: D+

    Type: Support

    The sublimated pangolin-scale coat of armor Berserker received as a gift from the governor-general of Bengal. As pangolins were exotic beasts from far India revered to have several spiritual properties an armor made from them naturally possesses a fair amount of innate mystery. Donning it lends Berserker Magic Resistance at rank C in addition to the sharp scales of the coat repelling attacks while dealing slicing damage if the enemy were foolish enough to strike it barehanded. Incidentally, pangolins are said to possess the strongest defense in the natural world with their scaly pelt capable of withstanding hammers and shotgun blasts in the modern age. However, that isn't this Noble Phantasm's true power.

    By invoking its true name Berserker can merge with the pangolin spirit inside the armor, transforming into a monstrous human-pangolin hybrid. In this form as well as a rank-up to all stats he can draw on the legends in ancient Javanese mythology where pangolins were divine beasts devouring their enemies who were represented as demonic insects. The imagery of swarming ants falling headlong into a fire was used to represent the futile charge of a warrior whose
    śakti
    spiritual energy
    was consumed by the śakti of their opponent. Thus pangolins can be seen as the ideal warrior who literally digest the śakti of their opponents.

    Reflecting this, Berserker eats up a small but significant portion of the opponent's
    śakti
    life-energy
    with every attack landed or blocked, severely advantaging him in any battle of endurance. This also symbolizes Berserker's desire to exhaust the revolutionaries to surrender by drawing out the war past the point where it was feasible. The pangolin's sacred status synergizes with his Authoritarian Skill to empower the Mana-drain if the opponent was known for opposing authority or possesses demonic aspects. In this state Berserker literally sees all of his enemies as demonic insects, spiking his Mad Enhancement and making him single-mindedly focused on the task of eradication.

    Once invoked the armor fuses with Berserker's body and can only be forcibly disengaged with a Command Seal, returning him to normal. Berserker's vestiges as a dignified king resent the idea of turning into a monster so he dislikes using this trump-card except as a last-resort, in which case he'll furiously blame his opponents for "making me show such an unsightly side of myself" and "deserving to be annihilated for rejecting my love".

    Transformed appearance



    Liberty To Death
    Demonic Sovereign's Ultimatum


    Rank: C++

    Type: Anti-Army/Anti-Rebel

    "That moron said 'give me liberty or give me death' but the truth is that self-centered stubbornness just leads directly to death! Now I'll show you, this is the true punishment for those who insist on defying me. Become ashes, Liberty To Death!"

    A crystallization of Berserker's efforts in crushing the colonists during the Revolutionary War. Upon preparing this Noble Phantasm Berserker offers his opponents a simple choice; surrender or die. An overwhelming aura of mental intimidation pressures them to choose the former option, in which case he gains a Command Seal pertaining to each penitent rebel for the rest of the Grail War. Should they refuse to bend the knee however as most heroes likely will even in the face of crushing odds then Berserker simply responds by bringing the full force of Britain's military might upon them. Cannons and artillery batteries appear extending from space itself to bombard the opponent in a fusillade of shellfire.

    While the offer of surrender isn't strictly necessary to deploy this Noble Phantasm, it rises in power the more they were affected by the mental intimidation. Further deals more damage when the targets fulfill the conditions of his Authoritarian Skill. Against an American Heroic Spirit this easily reaches the level of an A-rank Noble Phantasm.


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    So here's a new sheet from me. Rather proud of his first NP even if it's a pretty wild reach from his legend. Personality-wise I was a bit inspired by his characterization in the musical Hamilton, which I even included some nods to. As usual comments and critiques would be welcome. Thanks for reading y'all!

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    George III: He'll be back, soon you'll see, you'll remember you belong to him.

    Yeah, I can see the Hamilton inspiration here. I do like both Origin of Science and that first NP, since it adds more to his character beyond the generic "crush the colonists" mad king.
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    There should really be a thread where we can redo old sheets in our new styles in my opinion. Mainly to keep up with changes in lore and writing style and many sheets suffering from what I like to call “early thread weirdness”

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    Quote Originally Posted by NINE-lives View Post
    There should really be a thread where we can redo old sheets in our new styles in my opinion. Mainly to keep up with changes in lore and writing style and many sheets suffering from what I like to call “early thread weirdness”
    I've remade a bunch of my old sheets over the years. As long as the remake is different enough than the original to be its own thing there's no reason not to post it up here. There's also the option of making a new version in another Class if you different ideas for them, like my Tydeus Berserker and Lancer versions.

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    George III:
    George: "Trust me, I'm giving you all these unfair laws and tariffs and general brutality because I love you"
    Americans: "You may have been our father but you aren't our daddy"
    George: "Ungrateful little shits, I should have taxed you more"
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    George III: And yet another "gosh I wish I had this idea first!" sheet coming from you, eh Royd. You're such a master of your craft. As previously commented, one can truly see the Hamilton ghost hovering over this dude - which just makes the whole thing even more amazing, if you ask me. Also, this FC? Not me loving whenever Quattro goes full Lelouch. Mwah. I was already done for from the very beggining, it couldn't be helped. And those NPs too? You just wanted me dead today, got it. Amazing work as always.

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    Quote Originally Posted by NINE-lives View Post
    There should really be a thread where we can redo old sheets in our new styles in my opinion. Mainly to keep up with changes in lore and writing style and many sheets suffering from what I like to call “early thread weirdness”
    Wyvern and I plan to do a whole contest around this idea. But then we got busy. Perhaps we can start in November


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    Maybe you can have contestants redo sheets from the first create a servant thread but updated to keep up with the new fgo lore.

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    Quote Originally Posted by DelRey View Post
    Wyvern and I plan to do a whole contest around this idea. But then we got busy. Perhaps we can start in November
    Hoho, November, huh? Looking forward to it if that's the case. Got a few sheets I'd like to remaster.
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    Maybe we can also put our own unique twist on canon servants that we weren’t really satisfied with.

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    Quote Originally Posted by NINE-lives View Post
    Maybe we can also put our own unique twist on canon servants that we weren’t really satisfied with.
    This was actually one of my contest prompt ideas to rework canon servants, but chose against it
    Who knows if i ever win a contest again


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    You could still use that prompt for this new contest of yours

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    Anyway, I'm sure not only there's issues in Rey's and Wyvern's schedules and in the schedules of other people involved in the whole creation of such thread too, because we do have lives outside of this forum, but there's also the obvious issue of not everyone having the energy or the drive to pick older works and re-do them. It's truly a niche hobby, as much as it seems it isn't.

    Let's not put pressure on anyone or anything for now.
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    The new rework contest will have broad themes to hit as many possible sheets to remake as possible. Like Knight/Cavalry/Extra Class or region, stuff like that.
    It is really for the creators who have sheets. Tho perhaps the option to remake canon ones is a decent additiin if one has no servants in the category


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    almost forgot to read royds sheet!
    i somehow get Big Mom from OP vibes and Naruto vs. Jigen fight vibes from the sheet in terms of abilities, even if just nudges.
    One of your trademarks are to take just sidenotes of history and make them such creative NPs like this armor here or the skeleton of that one roman a while ago (i am so not good with names). I wonder if IM is perhaps a little too low for someone like him
    cool work as always royd


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    Quote Originally Posted by DelRey View Post
    The new rework contest will have broad themes to hit as many possible sheets to remake as possible. Like Knight/Cavalry/Extra Class or region, stuff like that.
    It is really for the creators who have sheets. Tho perhaps the option to remake canon ones is a decent additiin if one has no servants in the category
    well thats usefull in that may servants are multi class qualifying servants and that i also take each class into account so could i example wise make a Shappur II as Gatekeeper .
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    Quote Originally Posted by DelRey View Post
    almost forgot to read royds sheet!
    i somehow get Big Mom from OP vibes and Naruto vs. Jigen fight vibes from the sheet in terms of abilities, even if just nudges.
    One of your trademarks are to take just sidenotes of history and make them such creative NPs like this armor here or the skeleton of that one roman a while ago (i am so not good with names). I wonder if IM is perhaps a little too low for someone like him
    cool work as always royd
    I figured IM's rank would be low since it only warps his mind and not the body. And thanks for the feedback!

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    Servant Lancer:

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    True Name: Abel

    Alignment: Lawful Good

    Alternate Classes: Rider, Caster, Ruler, Avenger

    Strength- B
    Agility- B
    Endurance- C
    Mana- B
    Luck- D
    NP- B+

    Personality
    A tomboy little sister who adores animals and the outdoors. An airheaded prodigy who excels at every task put before her while remaining oblivious that her own talents are anything extraordinary. Those are the two sides of Lancer. The first of two humans born in the fallen world, a golden child showered in every blessing by God while her brother Cain quietly groaned in envy.

    There is no condescension in her, she approaches everyone with an equal attitude and a radiant smile. Yet that lack of "self-awareness as a prodigy" is exactly what allowed the situation between herself and Cain to spiral into tragedy. If she were to recognize the depth of her brother's twisted feelings, perhaps a mutual understanding could've been reached--- that is her deepest wish and regret.

    As such, while she wears a cheerful face and does her best to approach people equally, deep down Lancer wonders whether her own abilities alienate her from the people she loves.

    As mentioned she has a great love for animals, capable of seeing even giant legendary beasts as adorable. Though that isn't to say Lancer is soft on them. She's perfectly willing to give any beast a bop over the head with her shepherd's crook and firm scolding if she catches them threatening her flock or acting out of line. In this way Lancer is almost like a strict but caring mother to her flock. She is willing to kill them for food and to honor God, as Lancer believes that life and death are part of a single cycle and death isn't evil in itself. She abhors killing that lacks any sentiment or meaning in the act, finding it an insult to the animal and oneself.

    In the modern age Lancer also takes up a fondness for animal plush toys, particularly sheep and goat ones and can often be found snuggling with one.

    Lancer's wish on the Holy Grail is for a chance to reconcile with her brother Cain.

    Likes: pastoral scenery, animals (including stuffed ones), her brother
    Dislikes: being unable to stand on the same level with those she loves, senseless killing
    Talents: shepherding, sacrifice
    Natural Enemy: Cain, her Avenger self


    Class Skills:

    Magic Resistance- B
    Confers protection against magical effects. At this rank spells with a chant below three verses are nullified. Even if targeted by the likes of High Thaumaturgy or Greater Rituals it is difficult for the Servant to be affected. Blessed by God and born in an age when the World itself was thick with magic, Lancer naturally qualifies for a high rank.


    Personal Skills:

    Talented In Every Field- B
    Gifted in everything by God, a natural prodigy (Golden Child). Animal husbandry, piety, rituals, beauty, she displays excellence in all manner of subject. The only drawback of this Skill is that Lancer's overwhelming talent can easily draw jealousy from those around her, not that she's aware of such things...

    Animal Dialogue- A+
    The ability to communicate with animals that don't speak a "language of words". A shepherd in the age where Man and Beast spoke the same primeval language, Lancer was naturally able to reach a mutual understanding with the animals under her care. Even Phantasmal and Divine Beasts can be understood by her, since they would've freely roamed the earth in ancient times. A bonus modifier is applied to conversing with animals of the Sheep-Kind.

    Innocent Monster (Sacrifice)- C
    Called on to perform a sacrifice to God, Lancer butchered her fattest goat and offered it up on the altar without hesitation. Later, she met her end by the very same ritual dagger used in the act at the hands of her jealous brother Cain, becoming a twisted sacrifice of sorts herself. This syncretization results in Lancer ascribing the traits of a goat upon her manifestation as a Servant. Curved goat's horns extend up from the sides of her head, along with an extra pair of fluffy white ears. Lends Monstrous Strength at rank C and usage of her Noble Phantasm
    Azazel
    Sacrifice To Remove The People's Sins
    is only possible on the basis of this connection.

    Natural Body- A
    Possession of a perfect human body from birth. Strength is ranked up, while the body retains its shape regardless of calories ingested. A tomboy used to wrangling many formidable beasts into submission, Lancer boasts an idealized lean and athletic body suitable for one who had to labor off the earth to survive. Further strengthened by the fact she lived in the earliest days of creation and was directly descended from the original Adam and Eve, granting an immaculate constitution devoid of defects.

    This is a digression but--- Cain severely idealized the image of Lancer in his memory after her death, regarding her as a delicate flower too pure for the sinful earth and forgetting her tomboyish streak. If they were to reunite in a Grail War Cain would likely be shocked to see his gentle and innocent-looking little sister wrestle a giant beast into submission barehanded. Turns out a rank-up to Strength isn't just for show.


    Noble Phantasms
    Azazel
    Sacrifice To Remove The People's Sins


    Rank: C+

    Type: Support/Anti-Army

    A Noble Phantasm crystallizing Lancer's act of sacrificing her finest goat to God. Due to the manner of her death it's been conflated with the "Azazel" ritual where a goat was symbolically designated as the vessel for all the people's sins and sacrificed to purify them. Lancer herself was a scapegoat to appease the jealousy of her brother Cain.

    Subsuming her role as a scapegoat this Noble Phantasm allows Lancer to absorb "sins" (evil thoughts/intentions) from humans in her vicinity and convert them into magical power. Those affected feel temporarily calm and at peace as their sins are lifted. Conversely this process is painful for Lancer as she takes on the strain of the accumulated sins in her body. Visually reddish-black runic markings spread jaggedly across Lancer's skin during the act.

    By invoking this Noble Phantasm's true name, Lancer expels the collected sin in the form of a black beam of energy from her shepherd's crook. Being the condensation of humanity's base and fallen nature this beam is the antithesis of Servants with the Divinity Skill, searing them with the sins of man. It deals greater damage and is capable of temporarily stripping the Divinity from those who possess it. Landscapes hit by the beam are left blighted and barren, so Lancer usually makes sure to fire it off into the air to mitigate collateral damage.

    This Noble Phantasm also means that other attacks utilizing "sin" like certain curses are unable to properly damage Lancer, as they're merely absorbed and converted into power.


    Behemah Radah She'vet
    Rod Of Beast Dominion


    Rank: B+

    Type: Anti-Unit/Anti-Animal

    The humble shepherd's crook Lancer carries, carved from the wood of an ancient tree in an age when the World itself was young. Belying its rustic appearance the crook's superior construction allows her to repurpose it as a spear to defend herself in a pinch. In Lancer's words most enemies she faces aren't as dangerous as the wild beasts she had to tame as part of her everyday life as a shepherd. But this Noble Phantasm's true power lies in its purpose as a symbol of man's custodianship over the animal kingdom.

    Carrying her own role as humanity's first shepherd and her father Adam's original authority over all the beasts of the world, a single hit from it boasts the power to pacify even the most ferocious monsters. Simply bopping the misbehaving beast on the head evokes a powerful mental interference effect that suppresses hostility. From there Lancer can usually go the rest of the way to reach a rough mutual understanding with her Animal Dialogue Skill. Even Phantasmal and Divine Beasts can be affected, though it may take multiple hits for more powerful ones. This Noble Phantasm can even sever and hijack the connection between other Heroic Spirits and their mounts, though in that case the effects usually only last for a short time.

    As a tool for pacification rather than violence, the shepherd's crook is also conceptually unable to deal lethal blows against non-human targets.

    Towards human opponents this Noble Phantasm has no effect beyond being an ordinary shepherd's crook that's exceptionally well-made and durable. However for those with bestial attributes (including ironically Lancer herself) each strike does impart a minor mental interference making them more liable to hear out what Lancer has to say.


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    This'll probably be the last sheet I post up here in a while. Figured that after making five different write-ups of Cain (counting remake) I might as well try another version of his sister so she's not stuck as a perpetual edgelady. At first I struggled with the idea of writing a non-corrupted Abel as a Servant since I figured she'd be too much of a one-dimensional "perfect person" whose mainly interesting in how those around react to her (like Cain's both admiration and jealousy). But I feel I managed to flesh her out enough to be interesting in her own right. This is another case where the FC kinda' shaped my image of her character.

    As usual comments and critiques would be welcome. Thanks for reading y'all!

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    Great sheet Royd! It's got a good set of skills that make sense, the faceclaim is great, and the noble phantasms are quite good. Overall I like it.
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